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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月3日 at 13:49:41

Artist: SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki
Title: &Z (TV size)
Source: Aldnoah.Zero
Tags: season 2 opening s2 op アルドノア・ゼロ rakuen
BPM: 158
Filesize: 24511kb
Play Time: 01:28
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Insane by Rakuen done

English ver. by xxdeathx
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不找个BG看着浑身难受
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Earth
01:03:649 (5) - http://puu.sh/ev1QV/c8f28b834c.jpg 我觉得这里可以这样试试,normal对蓝线感觉不太友善
01:06:118 - 这里空一个听着真难受ORZ加上吧
01:13:902 (2) - http://puu.sh/ev3wL/78a9cb14be.jpg 这里这样吧=W=挤着不好看
01:11:434 - 前后这种类似节奏你都跟了这里干吗空一个,01:10:105 (1,2,3) - 01:10:105 (1,2,3) - 你看都跟了,这里空很不协调的
Mars
00:25:295 - 来个短滑?这里空的感觉不太好
00:29:092 (6) - NC
00:32:130 (6) - NC
01:05:928 - 加个音NOTE然后NC
Aldnoah
00:53:396 (1) - 这滑条减速一下感觉来回更好啊=W=
嗯ORZ我觉得最后一个难度我还摸不出来什么太弱了
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Aldnoah
00:37:447 (3,4) - 拖到2下面
00:51:118 (3,4) - ctrl+g
01:22:826 (2,3,4) - 挪到305,160
01:24:345 (2,3,4) - ^
01:26:434 (1,2,1) - 连续三个这样的排列是不是有点鬼畜了,最后这三个换成一个折返滑条怎么样

Mars
00:14:282 (7,8,9) - 这个怎么一股脑冲上去了。。。建议做一个简单的弧度出来
00:19:219 (2,3) - 有点蠢
00:24:535 (1) - 这个滑条后面的四个二分拍填满

Earth
爷爷这normal难度也2.0SV也是够拼的
01:04:599 (2) - 加个白点做一点弧度

美丽
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Aldnoah
00:26:814 (6) - 建议0.75 节奏确实是这样的.但是滑条速度使我出了个红.

Mars
00:23:396 (6) - 这里是不是少点什么00:22:637 (4) - 这里都有啊..
00:25:295 (1) - 显然白线有音..不知道为什么没有加
01:27:573 (6) - 删掉折返 01:27:953 (7) - 从这里添加一个slider结尾01:28:333 (7) -
其实还有个1/8的折返我很在意.
晚上继续摸.
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zxhzxhz wrote:

Aldnoah
00:37:447 (3,4) - 拖到2下面
00:51:118 (3,4) - ctrl+g
01:22:826 (2,3,4) - 挪到305,160这个说的好 改了
01:24:345 (2,3,4) - ^
01:26:434 (1,2,1) - 连续三个这样的排列是不是有点鬼畜了,最后这三个换成一个折返滑条怎么样

Mars
00:14:282 (7,8,9) - 这个怎么一股脑冲上去了。。。建议做一个简单的弧度出来
00:19:219 (2,3) - 有点蠢
00:24:535 (1) - 这个滑条后面的四个二分拍填满

Earth
爷爷这normal难度也2.0SV也是够拼的
01:04:599 (2) - 加个白点做一点弧度

美丽

Abhor
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Earth
01:03:649 (5) - http://puu.sh/ev1QV/c8f28b834c.jpg 我觉得这里可以这样试试,normal对蓝线感觉不太友善
01:06:118 - 这里空一个听着真难受ORZ加上吧
01:13:902 (2) - http://puu.sh/ev3wL/78a9cb14be.jpg 这里这样吧=W=挤着不好看
01:11:434 - 前后这种类似节奏你都跟了这里干吗空一个,01:10:105 (1,2,3) - 01:10:105 (1,2,3) - 你看都跟了,这里空很不协调的
Mars
00:25:295 - 来个短滑?这里空的感觉不太好
00:29:092 (6) - NC
00:32:130 (6) - NC
01:05:928 - 加个音NOTE然后NC
Aldnoah
00:53:396 (1) - 这滑条减速一下感觉来回更好啊=W=
嗯ORZ我觉得最后一个难度我还摸不出来什么太弱了

Meconopsis
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Aldnoah
00:26:814 (6) - 建议0.75 节奏确实是这样的.但是滑条速度使我出了个红.

Mars
00:23:396 (6) - 这里是不是少点什么00:22:637 (4) - 这里都有啊..
00:25:295 (1) - 显然白线有音..不知道为什么没有加加了
01:27:573 (6) - 删掉折返 01:27:953 (7) - 从这里添加一个slider结尾01:28:333 (7) -
其实还有个1/8的折返我很在意.
晚上继续摸.

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hi


Earth


Mars


Aldnoah

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hi


Earth
  • 01:03:270 (4) - 和5合成一个条怎么样中间没音啊 先这样了如果不适合这个难度到时候再改吧


Mars


Aldnoah

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General

  • bpm明明是158



Aldnoah




Mars




Earth



麻麻好阔怕,zzb又要rabk辣
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from my modding queue :D

First of all, only the hardest mode may have a custom name (ranking criteria)


Earth
00:08:586 (6,2) - Blanket?
00:33:649 (1) - Place more to the left
Change the colors to match the background

Very solid difficulty. Good hitsounds, combos, etc.


Mars
00:04:029 (3,4) - Blanket better
00:05:548 (7) - ^
00:07:067 (3,4) - ^
00:28:523 (4,7) - Stack perfectly
00:36:687 (1,2) - IDK if these are, but make sure they are parallel
01:25:295 (1) - Make straight to match last slider
HP drain, Approach Rate, and Overall Difficulty should all be increased by 1

Once again, a good difficulty. Excellent job.


Aldnoah
00:28:713 (6,1,2,3,4) - This part isn't fun. Don't just stop here.
00:31:751 (6,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:37:447 (3,4,1) - Change this up. It doesn't play very well or look very good.
00:50:358 (1,2) - Place the 2 somewhere else, maybe under the slider, but not right there, as your map is very symmetrical
00:55:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is hard to read and doesn't flow well.
01:03:649 - Don't skip these beats
HP drain up by 1

This is a decent difficulty. Pretty good mostly. However, I feel like the map is too repetitive. You use a lot of notes, then a few sliders, then a lot more notes. I just feel you could vary it up a bit. Also the sudden stops throughout the song aren't very fun/appealing. I suggest you change them.


Summary
Overall a very good map. It's clean and unique, and is pretty fun in general. However, the insane could be a bit less repetitive. But that doesn't take much away from this map. Excellent job. Good luck on getting your map ranked! :)
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Hi! There is Regraz's mod! :)
There is a few points of my mod:

  • Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Mod is just a kind of suggestion, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
  • I am still learning modding skills so I am sorry if I cannot provide much help.
  • Same issues won’t be repeated unless they are in a GD.


General


  • OK


Earth





Mars


    Rhythm:
  • About the blue tick sliders, see Earth diff.
  • 01:03:839 (7) – Better to place this at 01:03:649, covering the vocal better.
    Structure:
  • 01:15:421 (7,8) – Too far from each other, as to Hard diff.
    Hitsounds
    Same comment as Easy
    Others:
  • Raise AR to 7 or at least 6.5
  • Drop CS to 3.7


Aldnoah





Good luck!
My 700th post lol
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Regraz wrote:
Hi! There is Regraz's mod! :)
There is a few points of my mod:

  • Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Mod is just a kind of suggestion, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
  • I am still learning modding skills so I am sorry if I cannot provide much help.
  • Same issues won’t be repeated unless they are in a GD.


General


  • OK


Earth





Mars


    Rhythm:
  • About the blue tick sliders, see Earth diff.
  • 01:03:839 (7) – Better to place this at 01:03:649, covering the vocal better.
    Structure:
  • 01:15:421 (7,8) – Too far from each other, as to Hard diff.滑条嘛=.=
    Hitsounds
    Same comment as Easy
    Others:
  • Raise AR to 7 or at least 6.5
  • Drop CS to 3.7


Aldnoah





Good luck!
My 700th post lol


XelastoXelasto
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from my modding queue :D

First of all, only the hardest mode may have a custom name (ranking criteria)


Earth
00:08:586 (6,2) - Blanket?
00:33:649 (1) - Place more to the left
Change the colors to match the background

Very solid difficulty. Good hitsounds, combos, etc.


Mars
00:04:029 (3,4) - Blanket better
00:05:548 (7) - ^
00:07:067 (3,4) - ^
00:28:523 (4,7) - Stack perfectly
00:36:687 (1,2) - IDK if these are, but make sure they are parallel
01:25:295 (1) - Make straight to match last slidernope, just make them be parallel with previous note
HP drain, Approach Rate, and Overall Difficulty should all be increased by 1no change on diff setting

Once again, a good difficulty. Excellent job.


Aldnoah
00:28:713 (6,1,2,3,4) - This part isn't fun. Don't just stop here.it's fit music imo
00:31:751 (6,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:37:447 (3,4,1) - Change this up. It doesn't play very well or look very good.
00:50:358 (1,2) - Place the 2 somewhere else, maybe under the slider, but not right there, as your map is very symmetricalyep
00:55:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is hard to read and doesn't flow well.
01:03:649 - Don't skip these beats
HP drain up by 1

This is a decent difficulty. Pretty good mostly. However, I feel like the map is too repetitive. You use a lot of notes, then a few sliders, then a lot more notes. I just feel you could vary it up a bit. Also the sudden stops throughout the song aren't very fun/appealing. I suggest you change them.


Summary
Overall a very good map. It's clean and unique, and is pretty fun in general. However, the insane could be a bit less repetitive. But that doesn't take much away from this map. Excellent job. Good luck on getting your map ranked! :)


liangv587
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General

  • bpm明明是158



Aldnoah




Mars




Earth

  • 减点三围吧,343?diff setting就没动了
  • 01:01:751 (2,3) - 这样?http://puu.sh/eyXJz.jpg


麻麻好阔怕,zzb又要rabk辣吃电视


no reply = fixed
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  • Fine


Aldnoah


Mars
  • AR有點低 建議設7.5
  • 00:42:004 (4) - 這個放在3的右下方 感覺上比較美觀點
  • 01:02:130 (5) - 分拆成兩個circle 這裡是這段音樂的結尾 換成circle比較爽吧
  • 01:28:143 - same


Earth

挺好
小柚子mod渣找不出東西
good luck
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General
  • Fine


Aldnoah
  • 00:05:168 - 這裡空了有點難受 建議加點東西之前有个1/2滑条估计手滑点没了
  • 00:14:662 (3) - 加個nc 這裡完全遮擋的話不好讀不乱加nc啦保持一致性
  • 00:26:624 - 這裡我覺得加個3連打會比較好 而且vocal也有这里不跟vocal啦
  • 00:36:687 (1,2,3) - 這裡經常以為是1/2 我覺得remove會好點 反正這裡跟前面都是1/1这里鼓声比较明显就跟惹=.=
  • 01:01:751 (1,2,3,4) - 如果是3角梗的話放好點这里是后来test的时候改的排列感觉这样我打起来比较舒服.-.
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  • 01:28:143 - 有個音 加note这里一律都没跟啦


Mars
  • AR有點低 建議設7.5diff setting暂时先不动等bat意见惹
  • 00:42:004 (4) - 這個放在3的右下方 感覺上比較美觀點
  • 01:02:130 (5) - 分拆成兩個circle 這裡是這段音樂的結尾 換成circle比較爽吧
  • 01:28:143 - same


Earth

挺好
小柚子mod渣找不出東西不渣啦qwq
good luck


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thx for mod
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