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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 07 Februari 2015 at 17:49:36

Artist: July
Title: I remember you
Tags: Piano Hip hop Niva Nivalis Hinsvar 이동훈 Digitalrecord New Age Valentine
BPM: 73
Filesize: 2861kb
Play Time: 01:21
Difficulties Available:

Download: July - I remember you
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❤️Happy Valentine❤️

Special thanks to:
1. July for beautiful work (another July's beatmaps click here!)
2. Niva and Hinsvar for their Galau-ness, pishifat for timing, eINess and Ringating for extra help
3. People who play and help this map to get ranked

Here a chocolate from me 🍫
Last edited by Shiranai on , edited 49 times in total.
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Did some assistance regarding timing earlier :

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Heyoo o/, from #modreqs

Nice beatmap in general, very relaxing :3


General


You have custom combo colors in the second difficulty but in the first you kept the default colors.

Suggestion for combo colors: Use orange or any warm colors during kiai and keep blue and green for the rest, could look neat.

I also suggest renaming the second difficulty to "Niva in Galau-ness (Hard)"


Normal


00:56:831 (1) - I suggest extending this slider so it's like this:

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01:04:951 (1) - Could make it curve the other way (flip it horizontally) and/or have the previous circle not overlapping (for the looks, nothing major)


Niva in Galau-ness


00:03:632 (1) - Either align it better with the end of previous slider or move it further so we clearly see it

00:09:386 (1,2) - Don't overlap them, it makes it harder to read the pattern

00:39:104 (5) - Avoid overlap here, for the looks

00:40:468 (1) - Please don't :_:, very bad overlap here, dont put this slider under the previous slider. Might even be an unrankable slider (although im not certain about that)

00:49:331 (3) - Again, a bad overlap. Try moving the slider or curving it differently so it doesn't over lap this circle (or move the circle)

01:15:519 (3,4,1) - Those are big jumps for this speed. Consider making the gap smaller

01:18:587 (2) - Aww kawaii :3! Nice touch!

Good luck with your map :D
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zerfuth wrote:
Heyoo o/, from #modreqs

Nice beatmap in general, very relaxing :3


General


You have custom combo colors in the second difficulty but in the first you kept the default colors. Suggestion for combo colors: Use orange or any warm colors during kiai and keep blue and green for the rest, could look neat. Yes, you're right. Fixed

I also suggest renaming the second difficulty to "Niva in Galau-ness (Hard)"


Normal


00:56:831 (1) - I suggest extending this slider so it's like this: Your sugestion is good, but I prefer to have that kind of rhythm that emphize the drum backsound very well, so I guess no need to change

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01:04:951 (1) - Could make it curve the other way (flip it horizontally) and/or have the previous circle not overlapping (for the looks, nothing major) I like the curent one I don't like to Ctrl+J that, a bit overlapping not really that bad imo


Niva in Galau-ness


00:03:632 (1) - Either align it better with the end of previous slider or move it further so we clearly see it

00:09:386 (1,2) - Don't overlap them, it makes it harder to read the pattern

00:39:104 (5) - Avoid overlap here, for the looks

00:40:468 (1) - Please don't :_:, very bad overlap here, dont put this slider under the previous slider. Might even be an unrankable slider (although im not certain about that)

00:49:331 (3) - Again, a bad overlap. Try moving the slider or curving it differently so it doesn't over lap this circle (or move the circle)

01:15:519 (3,4,1) - Those are big jumps for this speed. Consider making the gap smaller

01:18:587 (2) - Aww kawaii :3! Nice touch! Should I insert this kind of slider as well in my diff? hahaha :p

Good luck with your map :D

Thanks for checking zerfuth, that was fast :)
Probably add an Easy diff later to complete the mapset~

Niva combo colors nya aku tambah warna orange gpp yah, supaya ngefeel sama sunset di backgroundnya
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at first I thought July is Indonesian composer... :^(

anyway, good luck and star!
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Maaaciiw wendao, thanks for star😊😊
Will move to pending shortly

Edit: all diff done, move to pending~
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General
  • Hip hop??
  • Kayaknya bisa dikasih hitcircle dengan motif bubble ditengah deh, ngikutin backgroundnya gitu xD



Easy



Normal



Niva


sorry sux mod by sux ppl
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Hi, m4m req from #modreqs https://osu.ppy.sh/s/255637

General

this music ;w; amazing
the Litle is "너를 기억하다", and "I remember you", you're right that this is the romaji and not the translation into english, agree?
00:15:445 - until 00:36:026 - you can think of more elaborate hitsounds, not only soft whistle, perhaps another very soft whistle stay with here sounds good to

Easy

00:32:189 (1,2) - 00:54:104 (1,2) - division in blue snap divisor not is recommend in Easy, unless are reverse arrow (that not is the case)
00:24:863 (2) - I do not think this circle cause a good rhythm, that part is a little slower than 00:25:212 (3,4,1,2,3) -, for example. Try to map without this circle and see if it is good or not
delete this circle to and test, 00:36:026 (2) - I think it was very good just deleting it :) :) :) is easiest
00:38:763 (2) - try to make the direction of the circle's position be exactly in front of the slider sense, like in 00:47:286 (3,4) -
00:41:491 (2) - /\
00:44:218 (2) - /\
00:53:763 (4) - /\
Test this, delete 00:56:831 (1,2,3) - and added a spin in 00:56:831 - until 00:58:164 -, is very better ;D

Normal

00:04:454 (2,3) - try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2510125
00:06:098 (5) - move this reverse slider in this position to improve the flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2510135
00:38:763 (2,3,4) - 00:41:491 (2,3,4) - 00:44:218 (2,3,4) - 00:46:945 (2,3,4) - 00:52:400 (2,3,4) - 00:55:127 (2,3,4) - 01:00:519 (2,3,4) - 01:03:247 (3,4,5) - 01:05:974 (2,3,4) - 01:08:701 (3,4,5) - 01:11:428 (2,3,4) - 01:14:156 (3,4,5) - all of this triples are a bit overmap the circle in the middle, and triple are not well seen in the normal diff, even though low bpm. I recommend you remove the circle in the middle :idea:
01:18:587 (1) - remove nc
01:09:042 (5) - let that form this slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2510171

Niva in Galau-ness

ar=8 is better
00:02:810 (2) - why slider 3/4? there is no sound in the blue divisor snap
00:11:851 (1) - why not put a spin as the other difficulties? get better
00:23:119 (1) - remove nc


great job on the map and amazing music, i like ;D
short mod because the map is already very well done, congrats and good luck :) :) :)
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zerfuth wrote:


Niva in Galau-ness


00:03:632 (1) - Either align it better with the end of previous slider or move it further so we clearly see it It's an intentional manual-stacking technique - made this closer to the previous object, though~

00:09:386 (1,2) - Don't overlap them, it makes it harder to read the pattern It should be intuitive enough already for players though... No abruptions should come out from this stack in play more (:

00:39:104 (5) - Avoid overlap here, for the looks It's intentional (I used this pattern often, really~) - fixed the distance inconsistency here anyway

00:40:468 (1) - Please don't :_:, very bad overlap here, dont put this slider under the previous slider. Might even be an unrankable slider (although im not certain about that) It's not unrankable though, and has been used in many ranked maps (this is the prime example I can think of at the moment) - as long as it's not completely overlapped and sightreadable easily at first glance, it should be fine (:

00:49:331 (3) - Again, a bad overlap. Try moving the slider or curving it differently so it doesn't over lap this circle (or move the circle) To be honest if I stacked this one under (1) it'll look weird in play mode >_<

01:15:519 (3,4,1) - Those are big jumps for this speed. Consider making the gap smaller Changed this part entirely, should be a lot easier to catch now!

01:18:587 (2) - Aww kawaii :3! Nice touch! Yay, thank you~

Good luck with your map :D


wendao wrote:

General
  • Hip hop?? It belongs to the genre some people classify as 'Chillhop / Chillout Hip-Hop' which is a derivation of Hip-Hop itself as far as I've concerned, yup


    notice[Niva]
    • 00:00:345 (1,2) - revert? Great idea, done!
    • 00:01:988 (1) - gimana kalo New Combonya pindahin ke 00:02:810 (2) ? biar konsisten sama NC di 00:05:276 (3,1) Done
    • 00:20:328 (2,3,1) - awal-awal maen kayaknya 'tricky' banget, soalnya ngikutin pattern 00:16:840 (1,2,3) - but nvm, I'm just sux The song should give a hint already, no? (:
    • 00:39:786 (6,7,1) - speed up plz? /hides/ Tried this one, it somehow ruins the flow with the next (2,3) imo as there's no spacing change there...
    • 01:09:724 (2,3,1) - somehow gw risih sama slider (1)nya, how about this? Good idea as well, done!~
    • 01:18:587 (2) - I wonder how you do this (nyoba di-rotate ~13°, seems like it's not flip-able ;_;) the power of galau nggak lah, bikinnya simetris dulu di tengah-tengah playscreen (pakai grid snap yang dinonaktifkan dan bantuan dari koordinat x dan y masing-masing anchor - yes, matematika berperan di sini), lalu kalau sudah jadi digeser dan di-rotate (:




Tarrasky wrote:

Niva in Galau-ness

ar=8 is better Personally I think 8 is too clustering while 9 is too overwhelming - keeping as is for now~
00:02:810 (2) - why slider 3/4? there is no sound in the blue divisor snap Just for the feels here (:
00:11:851 (1) - why not put a spin as the other difficulties? get better On closer inspection 00:10:208 (1,1,1,2,1) holds this unity, and an addition of a spinner would break this chain ._.
00:23:119 (1) - remove nc Whoops, removed~



Thanks for the mods all~ (I changed diff name into something more common also for now, yup)

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[General]
AudioFilename: July - I remember you (Cut. Ver).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 14748
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8

[Metadata]
Title:I remember you
TitleUnicode:너를 기억하다
Artist:July
ArtistUnicode:줄라이
Creator:Mako Sakata
Version:Niva's Galau
Source:
Tags:JulySFX Piano Hip hop Niva Nivalis
BeatmapID:590103
BeatmapSetID:257873

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7.5
CircleSize:4.5
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:2.75
SliderTickRate:2

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201,216,48309,1,6,2:0:0:0:
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427,329,49331,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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492,268,51036,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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389,248,53252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,160,54616,1,2,0:0:0:0:
279,94,54786,2,0,P|329:145|327:208,1,137.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,207,55297,1,0,1:2:0:0:
197,111,55468,2,0,P|216:41|271:11,1,137.5,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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279,94,56661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,72,56831,22,0,P|407:128|378:192,1,137.5,2|2,1:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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138,72,58497,5,10,0:2:0:0:
314,137,58664,1,0,1:2:0:0:
131,189,58831,1,10,0:0:0:0:
252,36,58997,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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111,63,60690,1,0,1:2:0:0:
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314,295,61372,2,0,B|356:287|375:245|375:245|381:190,1,137.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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121,299,66144,1,0,1:2:0:0:
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EDIT : On the title I checked '너를 기억하다' one through Google Translate and it spawned out 'You Remember' as the output - I don't know though, I'm just posting this finding as I thought it might be useful (:
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General
  • Hip hop?? Yes, there's hip hop tags on their single album if I am not wrong, and the rest like Niva's explaination
  • Kayaknya bisa dikasih hitcircle dengan motif bubble ditengah deh, ngikutin backgroundnya gitu xD Will consider this, mungkin hitcircle bentuk hati lebih cantik deh



Easy I stick with the DS there instead on sape and placing, no need to change atm



Normal
  • kebanyakan 1/4 notes, ga rekomen :( Tapi itu bisa buat mapsetnya balance apalagi gap antara Normal sama Hardnya lumayan, jadi aku insiatif ngikutin suara drumnya yang dub dub itu daripada suara pianonya, lagian cukup noticeable buat aku apalagi hampir semua triplet 1/4nya stack di atas slider yang cukup readable. Will ask bat later to make sure
  • 01:15:860 (1) - pindahin ke 184,116 biar flow dari 6-1 lebih enak || remove whistle Fixed
  • 01:18:587 (1) - de-NC terus stack sama 01:18:247 (1) Fixed


Tarrasky wrote:
Hi, m4m req from #modreqs https://osu.ppy.sh/s/255637 Will do that later on toninght perhaps

General

this music ;w; amazing Yeah <3
the Litle is "너를 기억하다", and "I remember you", you're right that this is the romaji and not the translation into english, agree? I already asked Sonnyc to check the metadata and stuffs
00:15:445 - until 00:36:026 - you can think of more elaborate hitsounds, not only soft whistle, perhaps another very soft whistle stay with here sounds good to Not interested to

Easy

00:32:189 (1,2) - 00:54:104 (1,2) - division in blue snap divisor not is recommend in Easy, unless are reverse arrow (that not is the case) It's ok, it fit the rhythm very well
00:24:863 (2) - I do not think this circle cause a good rhythm, that part is a little slower than 00:25:212 (3,4,1,2,3) -, for example. Try to map without this circle and see if it is good or not Why? that circle you point out is strong enough to be mapped
delete this circle to and test, 00:36:026 (2) - I think it was very good just deleting it :) :) :) is easiest No need to delete that, as far as I see that emphasize well with the piano sound
00:38:763 (2) - try to make the direction of the circle's position be exactly in front of the slider sense, like in 00:47:286 (3,4) - The curent flow is fluently enough imo no need to change that
00:41:491 (2) - /\ Same
00:44:218 (2) - /\
00:53:763 (4) - /\
Test this, delete 00:56:831 (1,2,3) - and added a spin in 00:56:831 - until 00:58:164 -, is very better ;D I follow the instrument there, like normal and to keep the gap between Easy and Normal

Normal

00:04:454 (2,3) - try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2510125 (3) is have stronger piano sound than (2) so I belive that is better to put (3) higher than (2)
00:06:098 (5) - move this reverse slider in this position to improve the flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2510135 I don't like that kind of angle tbh, keep the curent
00:38:763 (2,3,4) - 00:41:491 (2,3,4) - 00:44:218 (2,3,4) - 00:46:945 (2,3,4) - 00:52:400 (2,3,4) - 00:55:127 (2,3,4) - 01:00:519 (2,3,4) - 01:03:247 (3,4,5) - 01:05:974 (2,3,4) - 01:08:701 (3,4,5) - 01:11:428 (2,3,4) - 01:14:156 (3,4,5) - all of this triples are a bit overmap the circle in the middle, and triple are not well seen in the normal diff, even though low bpm. I recommend you remove the circle in the middle :idea: I don't overmap anything I follow drum set there and you can hear that clearly, and I put that on purpose to balance the gap between Normal and Hard, It's not that hard imo
01:18:587 (1) - remove nc Fixed
01:09:042 (5) - let that form this slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2510171 The flow between (4) and (5) is better when (5) placed downward like curent

great job on the map and amazing music, i like ;D Thankss
short mod because the map is already very well done, congrats and good luck :) :) :) Sorry so much reject your sugestion, I hope that's ok


Waiting Sonnyc to check the metadata and stuffs
Thanks wendao and Tarrasky for mod :)

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July - 너를 기억하다 (Short ver.)

This is the real name of song D:
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GamerCL wrote:
July - 너를 기억하다 (Short ver.)

This is the real name of song D:

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There's no such Short ver. for this song as far as I know, I cut the original version for mapping and if you find that on song folder then you probably wrong

What I found, and someone need to recheck that since I can't Korean

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Anyway thanks for cheking :)
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wah di-cut ya? mesti tambah [cut version] di tags *iirc
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General
  • what about to do all kiai the same?


Niva o3o


Normal
  • personally in this diff i can't feel like the soft feeling that the map should give like with soft curved sliders and not all so straight and strong as it is now,personally you should really think about how it mapped and if it fit to the song... i'm not talking about to re-map but to change some patterns to not have this feeling of straight flow in a soft song
  • 00:11:851 (1,1) - i'm not really ssure that you have enought time between th sppinner and the first object after
  • 00:15:445 (1) - ctrl+h
  • 00:24:863 (2) - curve this slider feels better
  • 00:25:910 (3) - same about this one:
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Easy
  • 00:11:851 (1,1) - nope sadly you'll have to chaange this for the new rules is not enought time between the spinner and next object
  • 00:26:607 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - same that i said in normal you can see it here aswell with the straight flow

gl o3o
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