1. Hard (2.9 stars, 364 notes)
2. Normal (1.65 stars, 228 notes)

I really love cake... even though it's a lie...

1. Name of Jonathan's album with the song is Artificial Heart. Add it, maybe?
2. The Orange Box and OST should be added to the tags. I think you know why. Also, Aperture Science is a nice tag, too.
3. Please, disable Countwon, Widescreen Support and Letterboxes. Non of these are needed here, I believe.

1. 00:03:184 (5,6,7) - I'd rather avoid stacks like this in the easiest diff. If you simply unstack them everything will be more readable and neat.
   Note: 00:19:184 (3,4,5) - same here. If you want to use such stacks, leave them for kiais, when players are more used to the way you map.
2. 00:10:934 (4) - the world "my" clearly lands on the red tick, so let's map the red tick. rough example
   Note: 01:03:934 (4,5) - 02:09:934 (2) - pretty similar thing happens here. Example
3. 00:30:184 - to keep the polarity and follow vocals you need a circle here. Please, do it.
4. 00:56:184 (6) - if you follow the vocals, swap NC from (1) to this circle, please. It'll match better.
5. 02:13:184 (1) - 01:21:184 (1) - there are only two sliders like these and they don't really fit in the diff. Players won't expect the second reverse. Try to use a slider with just one repeat and then a circle?
   
   Anyway this diff is great, it's so delicious and moist. o3o

1. 01:23:184 (3) - 02:15:184 (3) - just these two sliders feel really out of your style.
   
   It looks like those old-style maps and I rellly love it! Nice job!

Dariano wrote:

elian010's mod

elian010 wrote:

#ModReqs

[Hard]

General

*AR 8 is a bit harder, maybe AR 6,5?



Objects

00:15:934 (6,7,8,9) - Put them like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2917646
00:52:434 (3,4,5) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2917666
01:22:184 (6,1) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2917700
01:28:184 (5,6) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2917716 For me is more good that sliders
01:42:434 (4,5,6) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2917726 Do not make it easier.
02:22:934 (1,2,3) - ^ Why so many stacks of notes? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2917868
02:36:434 (8,9) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2917878 Try to not make it much like a line

Hola, lamentablemente no usé nada de lo que me recomendaste, y por lo tanto no te puedo dar kudosus, te recomiendo que cuando moddes un mapa le dediques más tiempo e indiques las cosas que piensas que pueden mejorar y el porqué de éstas. Gracias por tu tiempo de todos modos.

Leeme

Toma mi estrella bye ^^

-Bakari- wrote:

GLaDOS ♥

[General]

1. Name of Jonathan's album with the song is Artificial Heart. Add it, maybe? Yus
2. The Orange Box and OST should be added to the tags. I think you know why. Also, Aperture Science is a nice tag, too. I thought it was there already, ty for pointing out ^^
3. Please, disable Countwon, Widescreen Support and Letterboxes. Non of these are needed here, I believe.

Done

[Nortal]

1. 00:03:184 (5,6,7) - I'd rather avoid stacks like this in the easiest diff. If you simply unstack them everything will be more readable and neat.
   Note: 00:19:184 (3,4,5) - same here. If you want to use such stacks, leave them for kiais, when players are more used to the way you map.
2. 00:10:934 (4) - the world "my" clearly lands on the red tick, so let's map the red tick. rough example
   Note: 01:03:934 (4,5) - 02:09:934 (2) - pretty similar thing happens here. Example
3. 00:30:184 - to keep the polarity and follow vocals you need a circle here. Please, do it.
4. 00:56:184 (6) - if you follow the vocals, swap NC from (1) to this circle, please. It'll match better.
5. 02:13:184 (1) - 01:21:184 (1) - there are only two sliders like these and they don't really fit in the diff. Players won't expect the second reverse. Try to use a slider with just one repeat and then a circle?
   I changed pretty much everything except for the two sliders before the chrous because i really want to keep them, but i'll change them if it's absolutely necessary, aaand these "Note: 01:03:934 (4,5) - 02:09:934 (2)" since they sound good to me :S
   
   Anyway this diff is great, it's so delicious and moist. o3o

Look at me still talking when there's mapping to do

[Hard]

1. 01:23:184 (3) - 02:15:184 (3) - just these two sliders feel really out of your style. You're right
   
   It looks like those old-style maps and I rellly love it! Nice job!

And when you get a few more mods and SP let me or Gero know.

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Thanks a lot for the mod and the support ^^
Best of luck!

Albertol wrote:

Normal

1. 00:28:934 - Creo que deberías poner una nota ahi, sigue mas el ritmo.
   
2. 01:20:934 - ^
   
3. 02:34:184 (1) - Este slider lo encuentro un poco raro para estar en una Normal. ¿Que dices si lo haces desde aquí 02:33:934 - ?
   
4. 02:47:434 - Creo que también una nota aquí no estaría mal ya que la voz de la cantante hace un entone aquí.
   
   
   

   Hard

5. 02:29:184 - Pienso que este NC debería empezar aquí 02:28:934 (8) -
   
   Es lo máximo que puedo decir de esta dificultad xD
   
   

Me gusto mas de lo que pensé realmente

¡Buena suerte!

Inyuschan wrote:

"And when you get a few more mods and SP let me or Gero know." I guess I'm late

gosh I love Portal <3 I'll mod this asap.

Manuxz wrote:

Holi o/

Bueno acabo de ver todo el mapa y estoy seguro de que casi vi la perfección xD
Lamento no poder darte un mod la verdad es que no encuentro nada ;w; Y hace unos días también modie un mapa de standard y pude encontrar un par de cosas para corregir pero acá simplemente no Siento no poder ayudarte uwu

Te dejo una estrellita y suerte con este mapa :3

• SOME PERSONAL COMMENTS

1. I really liked the song. Still Alive is a song that marked my childhood since 2007. and Glados is completely nice. So, it means you have really good likes. o3o
2. It's nice that I can do my mod in spanish. However, I want to practice my english. xD
3. I wish you could make an insane diff of this song. Maybe. o3o
4. Well I wish this map will get ranked soon. So keep working on it! and never give up. Good luck. n.n7

✿ Difficulties avaliable ✿

✿ Hard ✿

1. I love the star patter you gave to the song at the end.
2. 00:14:184 (3,5) - These two sliders aren't symmetric each other. Fix it.
3. 00:15:184 (5) - Change X and Y to X=336 and Y= 96
4. 00:24:184 (5) - This slider looks weird according to the song. I'd suggest you make it like this. http://puu.sh/gSBhh/845d4abc8f.jpg
5. 01:00:184 (3,4) - These two slider doesn't look symmetric with previous slider 00:59:184 (1) Like this http://puu.sh/gSBvJ/5c6218a49e.jpg
6. 01:11:184 (5) - Make this slider more rounded. that blanket there doesn't look good. http://puu.sh/gSBBV/e558d95e43.jpg
7. http://puu.sh/gSBJi/ade071a1f7.jpg What about that space? Maybe you can add a little spinner or a long slider. The idea is that the break starts when 01:45:184 (5) finiches.
8. 02:52:434 (1) I think this slider doesn't fit with an epic end of a song. I'd suggest you a little spinner.

✿ Normal ✿[notice][list]
[*] GENERAL: It's well mapped. But with have to keep in mind about symmetric patterns that should be readable for players.
[*] 01:05:184 (1,2,3) Make these sliders more rounded.

Lanturn wrote:

Nice SB Bakari <3

1. 01:45:184 - El break puede empezar perfectamente aquí, ese momento de "vacío" que añadiste no encaja para nada imo.

1. Mismo CS que el Hard? Sólo hay dos dificultades, creo que podrías variar esto un poco, se siente algo difícil un Normal con CS:4.
2. 00:30:184 (5) - Realmente no oigo nada aquí, lo he testeado varias veces y suena mejor sin añadir nada aquí, ya me dirás qué opinas.
3. 00:44:684 (1) - No crees que sería mejor dos círculos en vez de un slider? Las notas más fuertes (incluso si hay un break después) no suenan muy bien con un slider al menos para mi gusto, siento que hay que clickear algo ahí.
4. 01:08:184 (5) - ¿Por consistencia y encaje con la música no deberías añadir normal sampleset donde la flecha? Personalmente creo que suena mejor.
5. 01:16:684 (6) - El finish no encaja muy bien con la música ahí, creo que estás de acuerdo en que no cambia mucho, el ritmo sigue igual por lo que ese hitsound está un poco fuera de lugar al menos para mi gusto.
6. 01:21:184 (1) - Quizá haces bien en poner NC porque debería haber (aunque no estoy segura) pero se ve un poco raro y quizá un poco solo, si lo quitas no rompes mucho la consistencia y se ve igual de bien, así que no sé
   Nota: 02:13:184 (1) - lo mismo aquí.
7. 02:50:184 (1) - Está claro que hay una inconsistencia de NCs algo grande en varias partes, no voy a ser muy nazi pero al menos te digo que veo que éste 02:49:684 (1) - directamente sobra pero para no romper la consistencia te sugiero quitar este NC 02:50:184 (1) - x_x
   Nota: 02:52:184 (1) - igual aquí.

1. Para equilibrar un poco la configuración del mapa te sugiero reducir el AR a 7 (principalmente porque actualmente está algo alto) y el HP a 5 o 5'5, también se siente algo alto ahora mismo.
2. 00:07:434 (3,4) - ¿Qué tal si añades Ctrl+G a éstos (respectivamente)? Fluyen un poco mejor a pesar de que se verían algunos jumps, pero los siento bien igual (siendo la dificultad máxima y con un bpm tan lento creo que está bien).
3. 00:45:184 (9) - En Normal añadiste un NC que encaja bien en esta parte, te sugiero hacer lo mismo aquí.
4. 01:08:434 (3) - Lo mismo que dije en Normal acerca del normal sampleset.
5. 01:17:184 (1) - En Normal dije lo mismo creo, el finish creo que sobra bastante.
6. 02:25:684 (4) - Pequeña sugerencia, ¿Ctrl+G? Se ve mejor al menos para mí xD
7. 02:41:184 (9,1) - Si intercambias los NC creo que encaja mejor con la música.
8. 02:44:684 (8,1) - Este cambio de spacing lo veo algo repentino y confuso, personalmente preferiría stackear (1) con 02:45:684 (2) - ><