[Ranger] wrote:

[General]
How about add finish at the song end? there is no finish in the music at the end so nah

[Easy]

00:18:461 ~ 00:19:450 - add a circle at 00:18:461 and add repeat slider 00:18:791 , it sounds be great to me . consistency with 00:13:516 (2) - thoImage
01:15:165 (1) - how about add clap here? at the end.
01:16:483 ~ 01:23:736 - ^ damn did stuff for all the hitsounds here in all diffs cuz it is good


[Normal]

00:18:132 ~ 00:18:791 - how about make pattern like this? would rather avoid a 3/2 gap in a normal diff tho
01:15:824 (2) - add clap the beginnering, it`s much better.
01:17:143 (4) - ^ and the ~01:23:736. yeyaeyaeyeaye
01:37:747 (5) - move up the repeat space a little, hmm...like this sure lol
01:57:362 (1,2) - make same angle like 01:56:703 (5,6). dont really get what you mean. if you want them parallel, then that's not happening tho :p

[Hard]

00:27:198 (4) - move down a little at repeat. yea
00:59:011 (4) - add finish here? that's the sound i usually cover with a drum whistle but clap is more prominent so went with clap instead. can't do both :c
01:15:824 (2) - same the normal. clap here at the beginning fsdsd
01:45:494 ~ 01:46:236 - How about make pattern like this? want to avoid streams in the hard tho :/ triples are as hard as i'd want it to get

[Insane]

00:07:912 (1) - how about make same the 00:08:571 (3) ? angle doesn't really work well when it's underlapping another angled slider so nah
00:43:351 (6) - i think it`s get crooked a little, make straight at the stream. lol barely
00:59:011 (5) - add finish here?

sorry, extra can`t found anything
nothing too much say, nice map thanks for the mod <3
☆

MoodyRPG wrote:

General

1. ~

Easy

1. 01:35:604 (3) - Why you don't try a curve slider, like [url=this]http://puu.sh/eHxmf/8b0b96c9af.jpg[/url] prefer it not curved because idunnoaesetheticchoices

Normal

1. 00:37:088 (4) - nazi* Move this to x:178, y:24 (only a suggestion) another aesthetic thing that i just prefer the current way i lol

Hard

1. 01:40:549 (2) - nazi* Move the second tick to x:212, y:132, looks like this i do like this

Insane

1. 01:39:560 (2) - Make this slider like the previous slider 01:38:901? dunno what you really mean. a 1/2 slider wouldn't really fit at all uh uh
2. 01:41:868 (2,3) - Crtl+G for this one, it breaks the flow in my opinion but you choose yea

Extra

1. Enable Widescreen Support like the others diffs? or disabled it on all the others cuz why is it enabled

That's all I got lol

deetz wrote:

ok

have a few suggestions because I'm bored first time someone has ever given me a random mod am i supposed to cry tears of joy

mapset is so good, I can't really find much at all

[Easy]
00:35:934 (2,3) - i think this is weird because the player might get confused by the head pointing at that slider, then they have to change their direction and play it as a 2/1 gap. idk, I think you can avoid problems by having the slider flow after the slider end made it less stupid

01:44:176 (1) - pls http://puu.sh/f0COn/b19193b380.jpg lolk

[Normal]
00:58:681 (6) - why not 1/2 slider into circle, the last repeat beat is kind of strong mmya

[Hard]
some 1/4 is weird to read here, maybe too hard to read for a hard, I won't point out all of it because it's throughout the map they are all good now

00:10:549 (1) - idk people might read this as 3 repeats decided to undermap instead cuz just works better
00:16:483 (3,4) - ctrl-g both then ctrl-g 4 back spacing gets screwed and i think current thing is hot
00:32:143 (3) - same thing, its hard for the player to tell that its not a triple slider undermapped again
00:36:099 (3,1,2) - ya i think this is weird, why don't you just do a bunch of sliders with 4 repeats undermappppped
01:48:461 (2,3,1) - i think the 2/1 gap with that spacing is weird, and something like this would be much cooler http://puu.sh/f0FCl/17969fa49f.jpg 656565656

[Insane]
00:48:022 (3,4) - - this happens a lot, I think you can space it further apart each time ex: 01:33:626 (1,2,3) - here too i love custom stacks tho ;-;
01:16:483 (1,2,3,4) - would be cool if some of these pointed in the same direction like you did before like 01:11:209 (1,2,3,4) - did a ctrlg
02:06:264 (5,6) - switch slider and circle? but same as 01:47:967 (6) - 01:53:242 (6) - 02:03:791 (5) -

[Extra]
01:34:286 (4,5,6) - same thing as insane, and I think you can afford to space it more in extra
02:06:264 (5,6) - ya same thing, switch the slider and the circle? you'd need to put the circle somewhere more reachable after ofc both of these same as insnae gg

good shit pls rank soon

Static Noise Bird wrote:

ok ok

[GENENRLAAL]
ok ok

[Easy]
00:02:637 (2,3) - Could form a straight line. tried it and it looks kind of weird ;-; i don't like things too perfect-looking i guess lol
00:34:615 (4) - Could have something at the tick, a sharp turn, a repeat, something. ok
01:07:253 (3) - Adjust the blanketti slightly. Moving endpoint to x384 y88 should do the trick. ok

[Normal]
00:36:428 (3,4,5) - A silly rhythm suggestion below. There's a stronger snare 3/4 after (3)'s end, that's why I made this. kind of too awkward for a normal lmao

01:11:209 (3,4) - I like this change, but the rest of this section is just 1/1 sliders only, considering putting similar changing patterns like this elsewhere, too. ok there are circles in places yay
02:04:615 (5) - Maybe use two 1/2 sliders due to the snare pattern here. ok

[Hard]
01:34:615 (4,5,1) - The spacing might make it hard to read especially as it is in the end of a 1/3 bar and since you already used similar spacing for 1/4 at 01:30:494 (3,4,5) at least. will try to find something that works but 1/3 is so awkward ;;
01:57:362 (1,2,3) - Well, not a big problem at all but the spacing would be prettier if it was consistent. but all jumps on snare hits so cant be consistentttttttt

[Insane]
ok ok

[Extrok]
ok ok

ok ok