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Halozy - Kanshou no Matenrou [OsuMania]

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 2. Mai 2015 at 17:02:30

Artist: Halozy
Title: Kanshou no Matenrou
Source: 東方Project
Tags: aqua trytone cosmic mind emotional Sentimental Skyscraper byakuren hijiri marathon touhou
BPM: 183
Filesize: 11644kb
Play Time: 05:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. World's End - 4Key (4,51 stars, 3580 notes)
Download: Halozy - Kanshou no Matenrou
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1st Approval and #1st Ranked Map!

Round of 16 Tiebreaker Map for the Osu!Mania 4k World Cup 2015


CTB by Razor Sharp
Taiko by Stefan
Standard by captin1


Kuo Kyoka #1st
Ichigaki #2nd
Starry-

Special Thanks to Hollow Wings who allows me to use his Hitsounds <3


THANKS DUALSHOCK FOR THE LYRICS, I LOVE YOU

Romanized Lyrics

Romanized Lyrics:

nagai nagai eien no toki
watashi hitori tatazundeta
kurai sekai nukedashitara
me no mae ni hirogaru minamo ga mabushisugiru wa

inochi tsuie ukikusa no you ni ukabu dake no hibi
watashi wa hitori de anata wa mou inai sore dake ga subete

anata to hanareta no wa mou haruka mae

kuroi sekai houmatsu no yume natsu wo tsugete kigi wa sawagu
tonari ni mou anata inai haruka mukashi tooi kanata

ikuseisou sugite ano nukumori ga
kiete shimaisou de kowakute
te wo nobasu keredo shiroi kumo sae nani mo nakatta awai kagerou

watashi hitori nokosareta dakara zutto anata wo matsu no
aa omoidetachi ga umi ni toketeyuku kasumi kieteyuku

kaeranu hibi itaranu hito itsumademo

kuroi sekai houmatsu no yume natsu wo tsugete nami wa odoru
tonari ni mada anata inai kaze ga namida saratteiku

machitsuzukeru watashi kawaranaiyo
sugu ni mitsukete kureru you ni
tada sugoshitai no hateshinai yume wo natsu no tsuzuki wo anata to tomo ni

hasu no hana ga hiraku koro madoromu watashi ni fureta
nami ga anata no nukumori wo tsutaete kureta no sugu ni

osoru osoru furikaeru mabushikute sugata mienai
demo anata da to wakatte ita kara koe wo hitotsu tsumuida

“okaeri”
English Lyrics

English Lyrics

Long long, for an eternal time,
I've been standing alone for this long
If I'd escape from this dark world
Then I'd reach right away for the water surface, crossing the radiance

A broken life is like floating weed, drifting day by day
I'm lonely because you're not here anymore, that's all

You've already gone far away a long time ago

In a dark world, ephemeral dreams, the many trees rustle and announce the summer
You are not next to me anymore, the old days are so far away

Many years have passed away, as well as your warmth
I'm so scared of you disappearing in the end
However I'm stretching my hands, even if only to the white cloud and there was nothing
but a pale haze

I am the only one left behind, so I'll wait for you forever
Ah, these memories are dissolving in the sea, disappearing in a mist

You don't return, day after day, no one arrives, forever

In a dark world, ephemeral dreams, the waves' dance announce the summer
Yet you are not next to me and the wind sweeps away my tears

I'll keep waiting for you all the time
So that I'll see you right away
I just want to go through the endless dream, through the sequel of the summer, together with you

When the lotus flowers bloom, you've touched me when
I dozed off And the waves convey your warmth at once

Timidly I'm turning around, I couldn't recognize this dazzling shape
But I knew that this single voice belongs only to you

"Welcome home"
Thanks to:
-Kamikaze- for 1st Mod & Testplay
Pharos21 for Mod
-Kousei- for Mod
Starry- for Mod
_S u w a k o_ for Mod
Hellgert forMod
Marirose for Mod and 2 Stars
Shikis for Mod
Kruzon for Mod
RuberusuScarlet for Mod
-Kamikaze- for Mod & 1 Star
_Xenophilius_ for Mod
stankill for Mod & Testplay's
Valentrixe for Mod
Blocko for Mod & 1 Star
LordRaika for Hitsound Mod!
- Bad Apple - for Hitsound Mod! & 1 Star
Ichigaki for Mod & STARRED!
playin14 for Mod, Testplay's & 7! Stars
Harbyter for Mod & BN Check
Lenfried- for Mod & 1 Star
RuberusuScarlet for Mod & Meta Data Check!
Outlaww for Mod
Thanks to all Testplayer:
Dualshock
IamBaum
renoxz
-Darnoc-
Chucksal
Phil
Reikokaz
Sala-
Syntx
Kamikaze
Testplay and major stuff IRC mod:
SPOILER
2015-01-01 20:29 Feerum: cant spectate, bancho kicks me everytime <.< but it would be nice if you play it and tell me whats good and whats not so good :)
2015-01-01 20:29 -Kamikaze-: damn I got A
2015-01-01 20:29 -Kamikaze-: I still feel effects of yesterday's/today's party
2015-01-01 20:29 -Kamikaze-: ;_;
2015-01-01 20:30 -Kamikaze-: It's not bad
2015-01-01 20:30 Feerum: haha, it's okay. And what you think about my map? I dont have many exp with mapping and i'm open for all feedback :D
2015-01-01 20:30 -Kamikaze-: I have VERY high standards towards maps, so I won't say it was good either
2015-01-01 20:30 -Kamikaze-: I'll point some stuff
2015-01-01 20:31 -Kamikaze-: firstly, start mapping the piano earlier
2015-01-01 20:31 -Kamikaze-: somewhere like 十十日月[7-STD]
2015-01-01 20:31 -Kamikaze-: FUCK
2015-01-01 20:31 -Kamikaze-: wrong paste
2015-01-01 20:31 -Kamikaze-: 00:09:169 -
2015-01-01 20:32 Feerum: okay
2015-01-01 20:32 -Kamikaze-: LN's like this one 00:15:563 (15563|2) - feel pretty random, better to leave a bit of space then to fill it with ranom holds
2015-01-01 20:32 -Kamikaze-: random*
2015-01-01 20:33 -Kamikaze-: 00:14:087 - no need to put doubles in places like these 00:14:087 -
2015-01-01 20:33 -Kamikaze-: 00:17:038 -
2015-01-01 20:33 -Kamikaze-: 00:19:661 -
2015-01-01 20:33 -Kamikaze-: and so on
2015-01-01 20:33 -Kamikaze-: 00:21:628 - You can add LN here for whoosh sound
2015-01-01 20:34 Feerum: Ok
2015-01-01 20:34 -Kamikaze-: 2/1 LN
2015-01-01 20:34 -Kamikaze-: next thing, start gradually increasing difficulty from here 00:35:399 -
2015-01-01 20:34 -Kamikaze-: it feels too empty
2015-01-01 20:35 -Kamikaze-: like, add some 1/1's at first, then increase to 1/2 after few seconds and so on, until final stream
2015-01-01 20:37 -Kamikaze-: 00:42:776 - I do believe it's 1/8, not 1/4, map it as stairs if you do so
2015-01-01 20:37 -Kamikaze-: not as reversing stairs, but as normal ones
2015-01-01 20:38 Feerum: Okay
2015-01-01 20:38 -Kamikaze-: 00:58:678 (58678|0,58678|1) - unneeded LN's
2015-01-01 20:38 -Kamikaze-: 01:00:481 - missing note
2015-01-01 20:38 -Kamikaze-: 01:01:055 - normal stair is more comfortable to hit, and you've missed a lot of notes there
2015-01-01 20:39 -Kamikaze-: I mean, you've stopped stream too early
2015-01-01 20:39 -Kamikaze-: 01:01:956 (61956|2,61956|1,62120|0,62120|3) - Both as 3-noters
2015-01-01 20:39 -Kamikaze-: 01:02:448 (62448|3,62448|1,62612|0,62612|3) - Replace with LN's maybe?
2015-01-01 20:40 -Kamikaze-: 01:02:940 - Too many LN's
2015-01-01 20:40 Feerum: ok
2015-01-01 20:40 -Kamikaze-: 01:10:686 (70686|3) - 1/8 earlier (it should be beside LN)
2015-01-01 20:41 -Kamikaze-: 01:14:005 (74005|3,74087|0,74169|2) - notes mapped to nothing
2015-01-01 20:41 -Kamikaze-: use 2 LN's instead
2015-01-01 20:41 -Kamikaze-: ^this is also why you should map at silent hitsounds before hitsounding
2015-01-01 20:41 -Kamikaze-: and check at 25% speed if there are really sounds for notes
2015-01-01 20:42 -Kamikaze-: 01:14:907 - Rearrange LN's to tha instrument, listen closely at 25%
2015-01-01 20:43 -Kamikaze-: 01:20:317 - From here on it's pretty much constant 1/4 going on
2015-01-01 20:43 -Kamikaze-: I'll just rain my suggestions onto you and you'll handle them at own pace okay?
2015-01-01 20:44 Feerum: okay
2015-01-01 20:45 -Kamikaze-: 01:22:448 (82448|1) - I know that there's a instrument for this LN, but it ruins the stream
2015-01-01 20:45 -Kamikaze-: from around there there's a 1/8 burst until 01:23:923 -
2015-01-01 20:46 -Kamikaze-: 01:39:251 (99251|3,99292|2,99333|1,99374|0,99415|1) - no 1/8 here
2015-01-01 20:46 Feerum: so i should remove the ln and make one 1/8 stream?
2015-01-01 20:46 -Kamikaze-: yeah
2015-01-01 20:47 -Kamikaze-: 1/8 burst with LN is total pain in the ass for players
2015-01-01 20:48 Feerum: hah okay, now i know it :D
2015-01-01 20:48 -Kamikaze-: general suggestion for note consistency: 01:40:153 - this should be 2 notes, 01:40:317 - 3, 01:40:481 - 3, 01:40:645 - 1
2015-01-01 20:48 -Kamikaze-: take a hint from it to whole map
2015-01-01 20:48 -Kamikaze-: when there are louder instruments or a lot of them put more notes
2015-01-01 20:49 -Kamikaze-: but when there are only quiet ones, put 1
2015-01-01 20:51 -Kamikaze-: 01:44:087 - something like [http://puu.sh/dW8C3/86332051d4.jpg this]
2015-01-01 20:52 -Kamikaze-: do you have this chat saved?
2015-01-01 20:52 Feerum: Yes
2015-01-01 20:52 -Kamikaze-: okay
2015-01-01 20:52 -Kamikaze-: so I can rain suggestions down without worrying xD
2015-01-01 20:53 Feerum: Yes
2015-01-01 20:53 -Kamikaze-: 01:44:907 - First note is not a 2-noter, and stream is 1/8
2015-01-01 20:53 -Kamikaze-: btw try to put diffrent patterns for each stream
2015-01-01 20:53 -Kamikaze-: or reverse of the last one
2015-01-01 20:53 Feerum: Yeah dont worry, bancho kicks me all few minutes but it dont delete's the chat :D
2015-01-01 20:53 Feerum: ok
2015-01-01 20:54 -Kamikaze-: 01:55:891 - LN for whoosh here
2015-01-01 20:54 -Kamikaze-: 02:26:792 - missing note
2015-01-01 20:55 -Kamikaze-: 02:28:145 - missing note
2015-01-01 20:55 -Kamikaze-: and rearrange patterns
2015-01-01 20:56 -Kamikaze-: 02:43:923 - for this section you could make it 4-2-2-4-2-2-4 (4 where you now have 3 and 2 where you now have 1, because it's a quite strong section)
2015-01-01 20:57 -Kamikaze-: keep this up until around 02:49:169 - (02:48:841 - also as 4-noter obviously)
2015-01-01 20:57 Feerum: okay
2015-01-01 20:57 -Kamikaze-: that'd be all the major stuff for now
2015-01-01 20:57 -Kamikaze-: hope it helps :D
2015-01-01 20:58 -Kamikaze-: I'll post log in the map's thread just in case
2015-01-01 20:58 Feerum: it helps so much, thanks a lot :D
2015-01-01 20:58 -Kamikaze-: no problem~
2015-01-01 20:58 -Kamikaze-: it's really not a bad map
2015-01-01 20:58 -Kamikaze-: I've seen a lot worse ones
2015-01-01 20:58 -Kamikaze-: so good luck with it
2015-01-01 20:58 -Kamikaze-: o/
2015-01-01 20:59 Feerum: Thanks :) o/
2015-01-01 20:59 -Kamikaze-: oh and change diff name to something fancier
2015-01-01 20:59 -Kamikaze-: since it'll be a marathon diff
2015-01-01 21:00 -Kamikaze-: MX is kinda boring diff name lol
2015-01-01 21:00 Feerum: yeah i will change the diff name to marathon when the map is finish :D
2015-01-01 21:00 -Kamikaze-: meh, marathon is not good enough >:(
2015-01-01 21:01 Feerum: yeah maybe you'r right... it's a too epic song :D
2015-01-01 21:01 -Kamikaze-: yeah xD
2015-01-01 21:01 -Kamikaze-: World's End maybe?
2015-01-01 21:02 -Kamikaze-: it's part of original song's title
Aste-
OK
HI HI Ho~... ^.^

Sorry for the delay.. ^.^

here the mod.. 1st time handeling marathon >.<

before applying my mod.

uncheck =
*Letterbox During Break (mania don't use this)

The mod
colom
1.2.3.4

MOD
00:32:776 (32776|1,32940|2) - Ctrl J
00:35:727 (35727|2) - move to 2

00:42:011 (42011|0,42066|1,42120|2,42175|3,42229|0,42284|1,42339|2,42393|3,42448|0,42503|1,42557|2,42612|3,42667|0,42721|1,42776|2,42831|3,42885|0,42940|1,42994|2,43049|3,43104|0,43158|1,43213|2,43268|3,43268|1,43268|0) - start at 00:41:956
00:43:213 (43213|1,43213|0) - move to whiteline above

no other problem found..

GL ^.^
Topic Starter
Feerum

Pharos21 wrote:

OK
HI HI Ho~... ^.^

Sorry for the delay.. ^.^

here the mod.. 1st time handeling marathon >.<

before applying my mod.

uncheck =
*Letterbox During Break (mania don't use this)

The mod
colom
1.2.3.4

MOD
00:32:776 (32776|1,32940|2) - Ctrl J Done
00:35:727 (35727|2) - move to 2 Done

00:42:011 (42011|0,42066|1,42120|2,42175|3,42229|0,42284|1,42339|2,42393|3,42448|0,42503|1,42557|2,42612|3,42667|0,42721|1,42776|2,42831|3,42885|0,42940|1,42994|2,43049|3,43104|0,43158|1,43213|2,43268|3,43268|1,43268|0) - start at 00:41:956
00:43:213 (43213|1,43213|0) - move to whiteline above Done :)

no other problem found..

GL ^.^
Thanks for Mod ^_^
-Kousei-_old
Hi! From My Queue.

Layout
4k: |0|1|2|3|

Worlds End
You should add Kiai times, if you don't know what is this https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Kiai_Time
  1. 00:29:005 (29005|2) - Why a jackhammer here? Move this in 0 or 3, 3 is better
  2. 01:16:874 (76874|3) - You're following the sax? Split this LN into 2 to do this. see this
  3. 01:23:923 (83923|0) - This LN is incorrect because the note in the song starts at 01:23:923 (83923|0) - so I think you have to use only 3 columns for streams and one for this note
  4. 04:15:071 - Same as up see this
  5. 04:18:022 - ^ see this
  6. 04:23:268 (263268|3) - I think it sould start here 04:23:268 (263268|3) -
  7. 04:22:284 (262284|0,263268|3,263615|1,263615|2) - Equalize the end of these notes please
  8. 05:36:237 (336237|3) - Make this finish a bit after to make sense of delay see this
Topic Starter
Feerum

-Kousei- wrote:

Hi! From My Queue.

Layout
4k: |0|1|2|3|

Worlds End
You should add Kiai times, if you don't know what is this https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Kiai_Time Done
  1. 00:29:005 (29005|2) - Why a jackhammer here? Move this in 0 or 3, 3 is better Done
  2. 01:16:874 (76874|3) - You're following the sax? Split this LN into 2 to do this. see this Done
  3. 01:23:923 (83923|0) - This LN is incorrect because the note in the song starts at 01:23:923 (83923|0) - so I think you have to use only 3 columns for streams and one for this note Done, i think :D
  4. 04:15:071 - Same as up see this Done
  5. 04:18:022 - ^ see thisDone
  6. 04:23:268 (263268|3) - I think it sould start here 04:23:268 (263268|3) - Same Times, dont understand this mod :c
  7. 04:22:284 (262284|0,263268|3,263615|1,263615|2) - Equalize the end of these notes please Done
  8. 05:36:237 (336237|3) - Make this finish a bit after to make sense of delay see this
Done
Thanks for Mod ^_^
Starry-
hi feerum~

Hi! From Starry's MANIA Modding Queue!~

[General]

Timing:
  1. I don't see the point of a second red timing point. Delete that, and make the first offset slightly earlier. Can't give you exact values right now since no headphones :P.
Audio:
BG:
  1. Irregular aspect ratio for resolution. I suggest you make it 1024x768 or 1366x768.
Metadata:
  1. Add tags. 'Sentimental Skyscraper' is the translation, also add 'emotional' 'cosmic mind' 'aqua trytone' etc.
  2. Diff name Worlds End -> World's End
Preview Point:
AiMod:

 ___ ___ ___ ___
| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | (4K)

[Worlds End]

00:17:858 (17858|3) - Prefer if this little part was to follow pitch. Try:
00:17:858 (17858|3) - Move to 0
00:18:186 (18186|0) - Move to 3


00:21:464 (21464|0) - Quite surprising jackhammer as nothing suggests it in the music. Move to 1.

00:28:678 (28678|1) - Pitch - move this to 3. Then,
00:29:005 (29005|3,29169|2,29333|1) - Move this triple 1 left for playability.

00:30:481 (30481|1,30645|3,30809|1,30973|3) - Random repeat, try:
00:30:809 (30809|1) - Move to 2,
00:30:973 (30973|3) - Move to 0.
00:31:300 (31300|1) - Then I guess you can move this to 3 then, for pitch.

00:33:923 (33923|1) - Move to 2, balance.

00:38:022 (38022|3,38022|2,38022|0) - Keep in mind we're still only mapping to piano and drums, so three notes is unnecessary here.

00:41:874 (41874|0) - This 1/6 pattern starts really abruptly. I suggest doing a build up to it. To do that:
00:40:645 (40645|0) - Make this a 1/4 stream until 00:41:956 (41956) - . Then start using 1/6.
With really fast streams like this, you really need a good buildup. And make sure it always starts on that white tick, not the blue tick before.

00:43:678 (43678|1) - No noise, delete.
00:43:841 (43841|0) - ^
00:44:497 (44497|1) - ^

00:47:530 (47530|3) - Move to 0, plays nicer. Maybe you can rearrange pattern after, too.

00:51:464 (51464|1,51464|3) - Add a note at 0 for consistency.

01:00:317 (60317|0) - Much better example of a buildup into 1/6!

01:04:087 (64087|1) - Add note, noise, at 1.

01:04:989 (64989|3) - No noise, delete.

01:10:481 (70481|0,70645|0,70809|0,70973|0,71137|0) - Too cluttered in this column, maybe put a few notes elsewhere.

01:12:366 (72366|2) - No noise, delete.

01:12:694 (72694|2) - No noise, delete.

01:17:899 (77899|2) - You're mapping lots to the beat, then randomly map this instead. The beat then kinda suddenly stops because of it. If you wanna map an LN here, then sure, but snap it to the red tick and at notes at:
01:17:858 (77858|1) - Add 1
01:17:940 (77940|0) - Add 0
To carry on the beat.

01:19:415 (79415|3) - Add note 3, noise.

01:25:645 (85645|1) - No noise, delete.

01:26:464 (86464|2) - No noise, delete.

01:26:956 (86956|1,87120|1) - Noises are very inaudible here if anything, probably best to delete and make the other notes chords.

Etc.

I'm not going to pick out every single time there isn't a noise, thats just too long :P
You're going to have to do it yourself, just listen carefully in areas like this with lots of triples / streams.
To help, go View -> Volume, then adjust the hitsound volume fairly low. This'll help you listen to the parts without noise.

01:52:284 (112284|3) - Move to 2, then make a jack with the LN on 3. (since this is the style you're going for)

From the 2:07~ section, why randomly go into drum hitsounds? kinda pointless imo.

03:13:760 (193760|0) - Maybe make this a chord at 2-3 instead?

03:43:923 (223923|2,223923|1,223923|0,223923|3) - Defo no need for 4 notes here, remove one.

04:03:432 (243432|1) - Move to 0 for balance.

04:25:910 (265910|0) - Move to 1 or 3, hand balance.

04:27:221 (267221|0,267221|1,267221|2) - In this section I don't see why you use 3 note chords, very quiet/mellow sorta section. Tone it down a bit :P

05:07:713 (307713|0,307713|2,307795|1,307795|3,307877|1,307877|0,307877|2) - Things like these I can't even do. Big diff spike at the end of a 5 min map usually is bad ;w; try to make this a bit more playable. Eg. 05:07:795 (307795|1) - Delete this. Do it for the rest of these patterns too imo.

[]

Overall just try to be consistent in some parts using 4 chords and 3 chords, and also try not to map triples to sections where there's no noise. Pretty good map otherwise though <3 goodluck~
Topic Starter
Feerum

Starry- wrote:

hi feerum~

Hi! From Starry's MANIA Modding Queue!~

[General]

Timing:
  1. I don't see the point of a second red timing point. Delete that, and make the first offset slightly earlier. Can't give you exact values right now since no headphones :P.
Audio:
BG:
  1. Irregular aspect ratio for resolution. I suggest you make it 1024x768 or 1366x768.
Metadata:
  1. Add tags. 'Sentimental Skyscraper' is the translation, also add 'emotional' 'cosmic mind' 'aqua trytone' etc.
  2. Diff name Worlds End -> World's End
Preview Point:
AiMod:

 ___ ___ ___ ___
| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | (4K)

[Worlds End]

00:17:858 (17858|3) - Prefer if this little part was to follow pitch. Try:
00:17:858 (17858|3) - Move to 0
00:18:186 (18186|0) - Move to 3 -Done


00:21:464 (21464|0) - Quite surprising jackhammer as nothing suggests it in the music. Move to 1.-Done

00:28:678 (28678|1) - Pitch - move this to 3. Then,
00:29:005 (29005|3,29169|2,29333|1) - Move this triple 1 left for playability. -Done

00:30:481 (30481|1,30645|3,30809|1,30973|3) - Random repeat, try:
00:30:809 (30809|1) - Move to 2,
00:30:973 (30973|3) - Move to 0.
00:31:300 (31300|1) - Then I guess you can move this to 3 then, for pitch. -Done

00:33:923 (33923|1) - Move to 2, balance.-Done

00:38:022 (38022|3,38022|2,38022|0) - Keep in mind we're still only mapping to piano and drums, so three notes is unnecessary here.

00:41:874 (41874|0) - This 1/6 pattern starts really abruptly. I suggest doing a build up to it. To do that:
00:40:645 (40645|0) - Make this a 1/4 stream until 00:41:956 (41956) - . Then start using 1/6.
With really fast streams like this, you really need a good buildup. And make sure it always starts on that white tick, not the blue tick before. Thanks, Danke

00:43:678 (43678|1) - No noise, delete.
00:43:841 (43841|0) - ^
00:44:497 (44497|1) - ^ - All Done

00:47:530 (47530|3) - Move to 0, plays nicer. Maybe you can rearrange pattern after, too. -Done

00:51:464 (51464|1,51464|3) - Add a note at 0 for consistency.-Done

01:00:317 (60317|0) - Much better example of a buildup into 1/6!- Done

01:04:087 (64087|1) - Add note, noise, at 1.-Done

01:04:989 (64989|3) - No noise, delete.-Done

01:10:481 (70481|0,70645|0,70809|0,70973|0,71137|0) - Too cluttered in this column, maybe put a few notes elsewhere.-Done

01:12:366 (72366|2) - No noise, delete.-Done

01:12:694 (72694|2) - No noise, delete.-Done

01:17:899 (77899|2) - You're mapping lots to the beat, then randomly map this instead. The beat then kinda suddenly stops because of it. If you wanna map an LN here, then sure, but snap it to the red tick and at notes at:
01:17:858 (77858|1) - Add 1
01:17:940 (77940|0) - Add 0
To carry on the beat.You'r right, done

01:19:415 (79415|3) - Add note 3, noise.-Done

01:25:645 (85645|1) - No noise, delete.-Done

01:26:464 (86464|2) - No noise, delete.-Done

01:26:956 (86956|1,87120|1) - Noises are very inaudible here if anything, probably best to delete and make the other notes chords.

Etc.

I'm not going to pick out every single time there isn't a noise, thats just too long :P
You're going to have to do it yourself, just listen carefully in areas like this with lots of triples / streams.
To help, go View -> Volume, then adjust the hitsound volume fairly low. This'll help you listen to the parts without noise.
Thanks, Done :)

01:52:284 (112284|3) - Move to 2, then make a jack with the LN on 3. (since this is the style you're going for) -Done

From the 2:07~ section, why randomly go into drum hitsounds? kinda pointless imo. -Done, i think

03:13:760 (193760|0) - Maybe make this a chord at 2-3 instead? -Done

03:43:923 (223923|2,223923|1,223923|0,223923|3) - Defo no need for 4 notes here, remove one.-Done

04:03:432 (243432|1) - Move to 0 for balance.-Done

04:25:910 (265910|0) - Move to 1 or 3, hand balance.-Done

04:27:221 (267221|0,267221|1,267221|2) - In this section I don't see why you use 3 note chords, very quiet/mellow sorta section. Tone it down a bit :P-Done :D

05:07:713 (307713|0,307713|2,307795|1,307795|3,307877|1,307877|0,307877|2) - Things like these I can't even do. Big diff spike at the end of a 5 min map usually is bad ;w; try to make this a bit more playable. Eg. 05:07:795 (307795|1) - Delete this. Do it for the rest of these patterns too imo.-Yeah i was very uncertain when i was mapping this Part, it realy was to hard. So it's done :D

[]

Overall just try to be consistent in some parts using 4 chords and 3 chords, and also try not to map triples to sections where there's no noise. Pretty good map otherwise though <3 goodluck~
Thank you so much for your great Mod! It helps me a lot ^_^
Nanatsu
Hi! Here is modding from forum!

first, i recommand to use 1024x768 or 1366x768 size as BG. your current BG is not reasonable for ranked.

second, you need to change song name. Kanshou no Matenrou is not correct.

since the song is doujin song, you need to follow doujin song title. It's Aqua Trytone.

third, the original song is not theme of reiuji utsuho. so i recommand to change bg something related to hijiri byakuran.

but.. hmm, please don't use original bg of this doujin album.. haha, it's 17+ perhaps..

and. you need to work hitsounding further. it's really important thing.

[World's End]

Click!


  • * 00:01:301 - Well, since you didn't use time break, i suggest to add some notes here. here has sound to emphasize.

    * 00:15:235 - 00:17:038 - Move some notes to 3 for pattern balance

    * 00:19:661 - down green line timing to here, the timing doesn't follow beatsnap.

    * 00:47:803 (47803|3) - move to 1/4 correct beatsnap

    * 00:59:005 - i suggest to start to use 1/4 stream from here. i guess it will be better to fit and represent song.

    * 00:59:579 (59579|2,59661|1) - Ctrl + H for pattern balance

    * 01:02:448 - http://puu.sh/eeMKZ/acd1af875e.jpg hmm nvm if you don't like

    * 01:02:940 - add notes here too

    * 01:10:645 (70645|1) - move to 1 01:10:809 (70809|0) - move to 2

    * 01:14:333 (74333|2,74415|1) - Ctrl + H

    * 01:17:038 (77038|2) - if you follow instrument, you should delete it and 01:16:874 (76874|3) - increase LN length to 01:17:202 - here

    * 01:23:869 - add on 3 and delete 01:23:923 (83923|2) - it

    * 01:23:923 - down yellow timing line here.

    * 01:25:235 - ^ green

    * 01:46:219 - ^

    * 01:50:645 - http://puu.sh/eeNND/9d9274b06c.jpg

    * 01:46:219 - 02:07:202 - i don't recommend to use hitnormal sound here.. it's not fit, and check green line

    * 02:07:202 - green line problem

    * 02:15:235 (135235|2) - move to 2 cuz u using 3 notes on 3 column

    * 02:25:563 - i think stream starting is here

    * 02:45:891 - 02:46:546 - here has good instrument sound to emphasize. don't leave notes here. i recommand to add more

    * 02:51:300 (171300|0,171464|2) - same reasona as above instrument sound suggestion.

    * 03:01:137 (181137|1) - contract LN length to 03:01:300 - here cuz of short instrument sound

    * 03:03:923 (183923|0) - increase LN length to 03:04:251 - here

    * 03:49:333 (229333|2,229415|2) - i think there is no good sound to emphasize sound by putting jackhammer. re-arrange please

    * 03:57:858 - add notes

    * 04:00:153 - add note and it can follow vocal sound

    * 04:05:727 (245727|2) - move to 4

    * 04:07:038 (247038|2) - Ctrl + H

    * 04:13:596 - http://puu.sh/eePlr/8a5daa5766.jpg it should be like it to follow instrument sound or re-arrange. i just pointed out timing

    * 04:18:760 - add on 1

    * 04:23:615 - hmm, i don't know why u used red line here. delete please and consider about this 04:23:514 (263514|1,263615|1) - jackhammar

    * 04:54:762 - http://puu.sh/eePLj/4ff1c86208.jpg

    * 05:26:565 - i don't recommend to use normal hitsound sound here too

    * 05:36:237 (336237|3) - i prefer to contract LN length 05:37:057 - here

gl
Topic Starter
Feerum

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

Hi! Here is modding from forum!

first, i recommand to use 1024x768 or 1366x768 size as BG. your current BG is not reasonable for ranked.-Sone

second, you need to change song name. Kanshou no Matenrou is not correct.

since the song is doujin song, you need to follow doujin song title. It's Aqua Trytone.-Done

third, the original song is not theme of reiuji utsuho. so i recommand to change bg something related to hijiri byakuran.

but.. hmm, please don't use original bg of this doujin album.. haha, it's 17+ perhaps..-Done

and. you need to work hitsounding further. it's really important thing.

[World's End]

Click!


  • * 00:01:301 - Well, since you didn't use time break, i suggest to add some notes here. here has sound to emphasize.

    * 00:15:235 - 00:17:038 - Move some notes to 3 for pattern balance -Done

    * 00:19:661 - down green line timing to here, the timing doesn't follow beatsnap.-Done

    * 00:47:803 (47803|3) - move to 1/4 correct beatsnap -Done

    * 00:59:005 - i suggest to start to use 1/4 stream from here. i guess it will be better to fit and represent song. -Done

    * 00:59:579 (59579|2,59661|1) - Ctrl + H for pattern balance -Done

    * 01:02:448 - http://puu.sh/eeMKZ/acd1af875e.jpg hmm nvm if you don't like -Well, i think as is is now it's good, but thanks

    * 01:02:940 - add notes here too -Done

    * 01:10:645 (70645|1) - move to 1 01:10:809 (70809|0) - move to 2 -Done

    * 01:14:333 (74333|2,74415|1) - Ctrl + H -Done

    * 01:17:038 (77038|2) - if you follow instrument, you should delete it and 01:16:874 (76874|3) - increase LN length to 01:17:202 - here -Done

    * 01:23:869 - add on 3 and delete 01:23:923 (83923|2) - it -Done

    * 01:23:923 - down yellow timing line here. -There it was! But i change it 30min ago! Okay done

    * 01:25:235 - ^

    * 01:46:219 - ^ - both done

    * 01:50:645 - http://puu.sh/eeNND/9d9274b06c.jpg -Done

    * 01:46:219 - 02:07:202 - i don't recommend to use hitnormal sound here.. it's not fit, and check green line

    * 02:07:202 - green line problem -Done

    * 02:15:235 (135235|2) - move to 2 cuz u using 3 notes on 3 column -Done

    * 02:25:563 - i think stream starting is here -Your right, done

    * 02:45:891 - 02:46:546 - here has good instrument sound to emphasize. don't leave notes here. i recommand to add more -Done

    * 02:51:300 (171300|0,171464|2) - same reasona as above instrument sound suggestion. -Done

    * 03:01:137 (181137|1) - contract LN length to 03:01:300 - here cuz of short instrument sound -Done

    * 03:03:923 (183923|0) - increase LN length to 03:04:251 - here -Done

    * 03:49:333 (229333|2,229415|2) - i think there is no good sound to emphasize sound by putting jackhammer. re-arrange please-Done

    * 03:57:858 - add notes

    * 04:00:153 - add note and it can follow vocal sound -both done

    * 04:05:727 (245727|2) - move to 4 -Done

    * 04:07:038 (247038|2) - Ctrl + H -Done

    * 04:13:596 - http://puu.sh/eePlr/8a5daa5766.jpg it should be like it to follow instrument sound or re-arrange. i just pointed out timing

    * 04:18:760 - add on 1 -Done

    * 04:23:615 - hmm, i don't know why u used red line here. delete please and consider about this 04:23:514 (263514|1,263615|1) - jackhammar - Yeah.. while mapping it sounds like there was a diff offset, i delete it now it's fine

    * 04:54:762 - http://puu.sh/eePLj/4ff1c86208.jpg Done

    * 05:26:565 - i don't recommend to use normal hitsound sound here too

    * 05:36:237 (336237|3) - i prefer to contract LN length 05:37:057 - here -Done

gl
Thank you very much for the Mod!
To the Hitsounds, it's my first map and i realy don't know where do i get other hitsounds that would fit :c
Hellgert


from Queue

will not mention diff name becuase it was only 1

00:22:284 - add note on 2
00:32:612 (32612|3) - move to 1
00:35:891 (35891|1,36055|2) - ctrl+h
00:44:743 (44743|0) - move to 4
01:00:317 (60317|0,60372|1,60426|2,60481|3,60535|2,60590|1,60645|0,60699|1,60754|2,60809|3) - suggest to remap
01:22:503 (82503|1,82557|2,82612|3,82667|2,82721|1,82776|0,82831|1,82885|2,82940|3,82994|2,83049|1,83104|0,83158|1,83213|2,83268|3,83322|2,83377|1,83432|0,83486|1,83541|2,83596|3,83650|2,83705|1,83760|0,83814|1,83869|2) - and this too,really hard to read this thought
02:02:776 (122776|0,122940|1,123104|0,123268|1,123432|0) - reverse those
02:06:055 - you forget to put 1 note
02:25:563 - add note
03:12:940 - ^
03:16:874 - ^
03:20:809 - ^
03:22:120 - ^
03:27:366 - ^
04:07:858 - 04:12:776 - those section has no triple,so turn those quad to triple to make easy
05:17:366 - add triple
05:19:989 - ^
05:22:612 - ^
Hellgert
dont forget add byakuren hijirin on tag
Topic Starter
Feerum

Hellgert wrote:



from Queue

will not mention diff name becuase it was only 1

00:22:284 - add note on 2 -Done
00:32:612 (32612|3) - move to 1 -Done
00:35:891 (35891|1,36055|2) - ctrl+h -Done
00:44:743 (44743|0) - move to 4 -Done
01:00:317 (60317|0,60372|1,60426|2,60481|3,60535|2,60590|1,60645|0,60699|1,60754|2,60809|3) - suggest to remap -Done
01:22:503 (82503|1,82557|2,82612|3,82667|2,82721|1,82776|0,82831|1,82885|2,82940|3,82994|2,83049|1,83104|0,83158|1,83213|2,83268|3,83322|2,83377|1,83432|0,83486|1,83541|2,83596|3,83650|2,83705|1,83760|0,83814|1,83869|2) - and this too,really hard to read this thought -i think the stream is good, but thanks :)
02:02:776 (122776|0,122940|1,123104|0,123268|1,123432|0) - reverse those -Done
02:06:055 - you forget to put 1 note -Done
02:25:563 - add note -Done
03:12:940 - ^ -Done
03:16:874 - ^ -Done
03:20:809 - ^ -Done
03:22:120 - ^ -Done
03:27:366 - ^ -Done
04:07:858 - 04:12:776 - those section has no triple,so turn those quad to triple to make easy -Done
05:17:366 - add triple -Done
05:19:989 - ^ -Done
05:22:612 - ^ -Done
Thank you very much for the Mod it helps a lot ^_^
Marirose
Hey Feerum o/
from my queue
here's the mod :)

col=1,2,3,4
World's End
00:42:721 - the stream here,i think it should be 1/12 here lol
00:49:497 - sound here is similar as 00:48:841 - (actually a bit different,but its not really heavy sound,so i recommand to use double notes here
,remove 00:49:497 (49497|2) -
00:50:809 (50809|2) - same reason,remove
00:51:956 - according to ur idea,it must be double right?
00:52:120 (52120|1) - remove this
00:53:268 (53268|2,53268|1,53268|0,53432|0,53432|2,53432|3) - umm,all right this pattern is okay, 00:53:268 (53268|0) - remove this will better
then the strong beat start at 00:53:760 - ,i think you could use 3 notes for heavy hit from here
00:54:743 - if i were you, i ll use double here for better play experience
00:55:071 - advice w/ http://puu.sh/ermvV/6e74b70a7b.jpg
complain:

00:55:399 (55399|3,55399|2,55399|0) - 3notes for the strong beat,
00:55:071 - and 00:55:235 -each line double notes is okay

:D

00:56:792 (56792|2) - i think you follow the drum sound here,its correct but not comfortable,use 50% speed to here, you ll find it is clearly start at 00:58:022 -
but,it is also not very comfortable...so,i recommand you can try to catch this beat start 00:59:005 - ←really really strong beat and vocal start,better to play :D

01:00:372 (60372|3,60426|2,60535|0,60590|3,60699|1,60754|0,60863|2,60918|1,61027|3,61137|1) - you make the pattern as stream,but attention,these note are "ghost"notes,cuz no sound here,plz remove

01:01:300 - 1/6 started here is right


01:00:317 - until 01:01:628 - here's my advice http://puu.sh/erocz/0f08c3c474.jpg

01:02:612 - a LN starts here,try to change 01:02:612 (62612|2,62940|2) - them

01:04:087 - a bass(plz dont ignore this sound,just like 01:07:038 (67038|2) - ,

01:18:841 - a sax slap( :o (try short LN?

01:22:120 (82120|3,82284|2) - and 01:21:792 (81792|3,81956|2) - are different,make them different pattern :D

01:22:831 (82831|1,82885|2,82940|3,82994|2,83049|1,83104|0,83158|1,83213|2) - 1/4 STREAM BURST,NOT 1/6 AT ALL lol

01:24:579 (84579|3,84579|1) - sax slap ( >< ,make it as http://puu.sh/eroRV/a8ea4c62eb.jpg,the LN start at 01:24:661 -

01:35:399 (95399|3,95481|2,95563|1,95645|0) - i think here you can try alternate not stream stair,http://puu.sh/erp3P/600b8b7984.jpg

01:38:186 - you follow the main piano sound here,make it double

01:40:481 (100481|2) - remove

01:44:087 (104087|3) - remove ,soft sound compare with 01:44:251 (104251|3,104251|2) -

01:44:907 - fix some 1/6 to 1/4

01:51:464 - not really fits jack here, http://puu.sh/erppT/b7ef064fd9.jpg

02:26:765 (146765|1,146820|0) - unsnap,1/4 plz

02:26:710 - add to 3 not for the really strong beat


thats all ,great map XD
nice map for app
here's my star w/
Good Luck XD
Topic Starter
Feerum

Marirose wrote:

Hey Feerum o/
from my queue
here's the mod :)

col=1,2,3,4
World's End
00:42:721 - the stream here,i think it should be 1/12 here lol -I think i let the stream how it is ^_^
00:49:497 - sound here is similar as 00:48:841 - (actually a bit different,but its not really heavy sound,so i recommand to use double notes here
,remove 00:49:497 (49497|2) - Done
00:50:809 (50809|2) - same reason,remove -Done
00:51:956 - according to ur idea,it must be double right? -Done
00:52:120 (52120|1) - remove this -Done
00:53:268 (53268|2,53268|1,53268|0,53432|0,53432|2,53432|3) - umm,all right this pattern is okay, 00:53:268 (53268|0) - remove this will better
then the strong beat start at 00:53:760 - ,i think you could use 3 notes for heavy hit from here -Done
00:54:743 - if i were you, i ll use double here for better play experience -Done
00:55:071 - advice w/ http://puu.sh/ermvV/6e74b70a7b.jpg
complain:

00:55:399 (55399|3,55399|2,55399|0) - 3notes for the strong beat,
00:55:071 - and 00:55:235 -each line double notes is okay

:D -This is great! Thanks!!

00:56:792 (56792|2) - i think you follow the drum sound here,its correct but not comfortable,use 50% speed to here, you ll find it is clearly start at 00:58:022 -
but,it is also not very comfortable...so,i recommand you can try to catch this beat start 00:59:005 - ←really really strong beat and vocal start,better to play :D Yeah.. for now i let it how it is.. when a 2nd mod says the same i will change it!

01:00:372 (60372|3,60426|2,60535|0,60590|3,60699|1,60754|0,60863|2,60918|1,61027|3,61137|1) - you make the pattern as stream,but attention,these note are "ghost"notes,cuz no sound here,plz remove - Thanks! Done!

01:01:300 - 1/6 started here is right Yes!


01:00:317 - until 01:01:628 - here's my advice http://puu.sh/erocz/0f08c3c474.jpg Thanks *-*

01:02:612 - a LN starts here,try to change 01:02:612 (62612|2,62940|2) - them I try it, hope it's right xD

01:04:087 - a bass(plz dont ignore this sound,just like 01:07:038 (67038|2) - , -Done

01:18:841 - a sax slap( :o (try short LN? -Done for now.. hope its right

01:22:120 (82120|3,82284|2) - and 01:21:792 (81792|3,81956|2) - are different,make them different pattern :D Done!

01:22:831 (82831|1,82885|2,82940|3,82994|2,83049|1,83104|0,83158|1,83213|2) - 1/4 STREAM BURST,NOT 1/6 AT ALL lol -Done

01:24:579 (84579|3,84579|1) - sax slap ( >< ,make it as http://puu.sh/eroRV/a8ea4c62eb.jpg,the LN start at 01:24:661 - Done!

01:35:399 (95399|3,95481|2,95563|1,95645|0) - i think here you can try alternate not stream stair,http://puu.sh/erp3P/600b8b7984.jpg -Done :)

01:38:186 - you follow the main piano sound here,make it double -Done

01:40:481 (100481|2) - remove -Done

01:44:087 (104087|3) - remove ,soft sound compare with 01:44:251 (104251|3,104251|2) - Yes, sounds great!

01:44:907 - fix some 1/6 to 1/4 -Done!

01:51:464 - not really fits jack here, http://puu.sh/erppT/b7ef064fd9.jpg -Done :3

02:26:765 (146765|1,146820|0) - unsnap,1/4 plz -Done

02:26:710 - add to 3 not for the really strong beat -Done


thats all ,great map XD
nice map for app
here's my star w/
Good Luck XD
Thanks so much for this great Mod! And especially for the Stars ^_^
SReisen
(/>w<)/ From My Queue\(>w<\)

Column : 1 2 3 4

open it
[Comment]

sorry , i cant mod much on longer song , but ill try my best

[World's End]

00:35:399 - to - 00:40:481 - highly suggest you do LN + single note , follow the piano , and i think those double and triple note are unnecessary
00:41:300 (41300|2,41382|3,41464|2,41546|1,41628|0,41710|1,41792|2,41874|3) - this does not follow this - 00:40:645 (40645|0,40727|1,40809|2,40891|3,40973|2,41055|1,41137|0,41219|1) - and , 00:41:382 (41382|3,41464|2,41546|1,41628|0,41710|1,41792|2,41874|3) - remove - 00:41:300 (41300|2) - LN until - 00:41:956 -
00:42:557 (42557|3,42612|0,42667|1,42721|2,42776|3,42831|0,42885|1,42940|2,42994|3,43049|0,43104|1,43158|2,43213|3,43268|1,43268|0) - ctrl +h , change of phase
00:45:235 (45235|3) - move to - 00:45:317 -
00:46:219 (46219|2,46219|1) - you didnt add before on drum? remove 1
00:46:874 - add
00:43:596 - ^
00:44:251 - ^
00:44:907 - add to 1
00:48:022 (48022|3) - move to 3
00:48:514 (48514|3) - remove
00:49:661 (49661|0,49825|0) - remove
00:50:153 (50153|1) - remove
00:50:973 (50973|0,51137|0) - remove
00:52:120 - add
00:52:284 (52284|3,52448|2) - remove
00:54:743 - add 2 note , snare
00:55:727 (55727|1) - remove
00:56:055 - add
00:57:530 (57530|0,57530|3) - remove
00:57:694 - add , kick
00:57:858 - ^ kick
00:58:022 - add 2 note , rearrange , balance it
00:58:350 (58350|1) - remove , no kick
00:58:514 (58514|1) - remove
00:58:678 - add , rearrange
00:59:005 (59005|0) - move to - 00:59:333 -
00:59:825 - add , kick
01:00:153 (60153|3) - remove
01:00:809 (60809|0) - ^
01:00:973 (60973|0) - ^
01:01:519 (61519|1,61574|2,61628|1) - ctrl + h
that 1/8 start form here - 01:01:137 -

stop modding ,

[2nd Comment]

you better rethink you kick and snare what note density should you used
better remapped with more balancing pattern , but still ... is an awesome chart :D

sorry :/
Topic Starter
Feerum
Hi! ^_^

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

(/>w<)/ From My Queue\(>w<\)

Column : 1 2 3 4

open it
[Comment]

sorry , i cant mod much on longer song , but ill try my best Every Mod helps! :)

[World's End]

00:35:399 - to - 00:40:481 - highly suggest you do LN + single note , follow the piano , and i think those double and triple note are unnecessary
00:41:300 (41300|2,41382|3,41464|2,41546|1,41628|0,41710|1,41792|2,41874|3) - this does not follow this - 00:40:645 (40645|0,40727|1,40809|2,40891|3,40973|2,41055|1,41137|0,41219|1) - and , 00:41:382 (41382|3,41464|2,41546|1,41628|0,41710|1,41792|2,41874|3) - remove - 00:41:300 (41300|2) - LN until - 00:41:956 -
00:42:557 (42557|3,42612|0,42667|1,42721|2,42776|3,42831|0,42885|1,42940|2,42994|3,43049|0,43104|1,43158|2,43213|3,43268|1,43268|0) - ctrl +h , change of phase I have think about it.. and i think i let it how it is, when another Mod says something to this i will change it!
00:45:235 (45235|3) - move to - 00:45:317 - Done!
00:46:219 (46219|2,46219|1) - you didnt add before on drum? remove 1 Done!
00:46:874 - add Done
00:43:596 - ^ Done
00:44:251 - ^ Done
00:44:907 - add to 1 Done
00:48:022 (48022|3) - move to 3 Done
00:48:514 (48514|3) - remove Done
00:49:661 (49661|0,49825|0) - remove Done
00:50:153 (50153|1) - remove Done
00:50:973 (50973|0,51137|0) - remove Done
00:52:120 - add Done
00:52:284 (52284|3,52448|2) - remove Done
00:54:743 - add 2 note , snare Done
00:55:727 (55727|1) - remove Done
00:56:055 - add Done
00:57:530 (57530|0,57530|3) - remove Done
00:57:694 - add , kick Done
00:57:858 - ^ kick Done
00:58:022 - add 2 note , rearrange , balance it Done
00:58:350 (58350|1) - remove , no kick Done
00:58:514 (58514|1) - remove Done
00:58:678 - add , rearrange Done
00:59:005 (59005|0) - move to - 00:59:333 - Done
00:59:825 - add , kick Done
01:00:153 (60153|3) - remove Done
01:00:809 (60809|0) - ^ Done
01:00:973 (60973|0) - ^ Done
01:01:519 (61519|1,61574|2,61628|1) - ctrl + h Done
that 1/8 start form here - 01:01:137 - Yes, have change it, Done!

stop modding ,

[2nd Comment]

you better rethink you kick and snare what note density should you used
better remapped with more balancing pattern , but still ... is an awesome chart :D

sorry :/
Thanks so much for the Mod! It realy Helps! :)
Kruzon



-Hi, it's been 2 weeks i guess, and sorry i could not gather most of the team mates to mod along, since they hate marathon lol
-Before I begin, the following is my modding column format: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4
-Oh god, it's stretching so damn long thanks to the links, you might want to do some horizontal scrolling to see the rest of the statements >>>>

World's End

00:22:284 (22284|2) - I suggest move this to 2, for better flow
00:22:448 (22448|1,22612|2) - Press Ctrl + J
00:31:137 (31137|2) - move to 2, emphasize consistent patterns 00:29:989 (29989|0,30153|1,30973|0,31137|1,31792|0,31956|1) -
00:51:137 (51137|2) - move to 1, try to form a 3-jacks note instead of 2 00:51:137 (51137|0,51300|0,51464|0) - and consistent as this 00:52:284 (52284|2,52366|1,52448|0,52448|3,52612|0,52612|2,52776|1,52776|0,52776|3) -

00:53:104 (53104|0,53268|0,53432|0) - Nay, you may stop the 3 jacks now. spread one of them away. Perhaps 00:53:104 (53104|0) - move to 2
01:01:792 (61792|0,61792|2,61792|3,61956|2,61956|1,61956|3,62120|3,62120|0,62120|1) - messy, gives out obscure vibes on the current notes.
Since the rhythm felt ascending, perhaps Press Ctrl + H on 01:01:792 (61792|2,62120|1) -

01:01:956 (61956|3) - You might want to delete this, however this is optional

01:05:399 (65399|1,65399|3,65399|2) - Unnecessary pressure here, doesn't have to put 3 notes here, besides it break your notes consistency.
Just plot through following this pattern consistency 01:04:415 (64415|2,64579|3,64579|0,64579|1,64743|3,64743|1,64907|1,64907|0,64907|2) -
1 - 3 - 1 - 3, .. 1 Note is enough

01:14:333 (74333|1,74415|2) - awkward to press- How about Ctrl + J these notes? even neat flow
01:18:678 (78678|3) - has to be a long note, and chain along these long notes 01:18:841 (78841|1,79005|3,79169|2,79333|0) - The tension was rising high here and there's no abrupt stop or pause at the moment

01:20:973 (80973|3,80973|1,80973|0) - this ruined the pattern, i believe a stair notes should be in effect here. I suggest resume plotting these stairs 01:20:399 (80399|3,80481|2,80563|1,80645|0,80727|1,80809|2) -

01:23:186 (83186|3,83268|2,83322|1,83377|0,83432|1,83486|2,83541|3,83596|2,83650|1,83705|0,83760|1,83814|2,83869|3,83923|0,83923|1,83923|2) -
Very nice, the stair fit well with the high tension vibes, yes?

01:28:841 (88841|2,88841|0,89005|0,89005|2,89169|2,89169|0) - boring and rigid, you've been using jackhammers here and there, maybe it's time for
new pattern.

01:29:333 (89333|1,89333|2,89333|3,89497|0,89497|1,89497|2,89661|1,89661|3,89661|0) - Inconsistent, you could have just follow the 3 1 3 1 step.
Besides, some of them are not even that strong to have 3 notes

01:45:399 (105399|3,105454|2,105508|1,105563|0,105617|1,105672|2,105727|3,105781|2,105836|1,105891|0,105945|1,106000|2,106055|3,106109|2,106164|1) - splendid beat, nice one with this

Starting from here, 03:39:005 (219005|0) - until 03:43:268 (223268|2) - If you follow her voice, then you will noticed that applying several long notes, chained along is very fitting and nice to use here. I'll leave it to your imagination on how to plot them, but it should be at least like several long notes
surrounded with stair of single notes.

05:07:858 (307858|1,307858|0,307858|2,308022|2,308022|3,308022|0,308186|0,308186|2,308186|3,308186|1,308350|1,308350|2,308514|3,308514|2,308678|1,308678|2,308841|1,308841|0,308841|2,309005|1,309005|0,309169|2,309169|1,309169|3,309333|1,309333|2,309333|3,309333|0) -
rigid and boring + inconsistent- do something about it c:

05:12:940 (312940|3,312940|1,313022|0,313104|2,313104|1,313104|3,313268|2,313268|0,313432|2,313432|0,313432|1,313432|3,313596|3,313596|1,313760|2,313760|0,313760|1,313923|2,313923|3,314087|3,314087|1,314087|0,314251|0,314251|2,314415|3,314415|1,314415|2) -
these seems nice since there were less or close to none unnecessary density in notes

05:28:514 (328514|2,328678|2) - mm.. 05:28:514 (328514|2) - move to 4 perhaps
05:30:973 (330973|2) - move to 4, better flow

05:31:792 (331792|1) - move to 4
05:31:956 (331956|3) - move to 3
05:32:120 (332120|2) - move to 2

-world ended-

watch out for your notes density, avoid rigid pattern if possible-
good luck with your map C:
Topic Starter
Feerum

Kruzon wrote:




-Hi, it's been 2 weeks i guess, and sorry i could not gather most of the team mates to mod along, since they hate marathon lolIt's okay better late than never :D
-Before I begin, the following is my modding column format: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4
-Oh god, it's stretching so damn long thanks to the links, you might want to do some horizontal scrolling to see the rest of the statements >>>>

World's End

00:22:284 (22284|2) - I suggest move this to 2, for better flow Done
00:22:448 (22448|1,22612|2) - Press Ctrl + J Done
00:31:137 (31137|2) - move to 2, emphasize consistent patterns 00:29:989 (29989|0,30153|1,30973|0,31137|1,31792|0,31956|1) - Done
00:51:137 (51137|2) - move to 1, try to form a 3-jacks note instead of 2 00:51:137 (51137|0,51300|0,51464|0) - and consistent as this 00:52:284 (52284|2,52366|1,52448|0,52448|3,52612|0,52612|2,52776|1,52776|0,52776|3) - Done

00:53:104 (53104|0,53268|0,53432|0) - Nay, you may stop the 3 jacks now. spread one of them away. Perhaps 00:53:104 (53104|0) - move to 2 Done
01:01:792 (61792|0,61792|2,61792|3,61956|2,61956|1,61956|3,62120|3,62120|0,62120|1) - messy, gives out obscure vibes on the current notes.
Since the rhythm felt ascending, perhaps Press Ctrl + H on 01:01:792 (61792|2,62120|1) - Done

01:01:956 (61956|3) - You might want to delete this, however this is optional I'll leave it as it is but thanks :)

01:05:399 (65399|1,65399|3,65399|2) - Unnecessary pressure here, doesn't have to put 3 notes here, besides it break your notes consistency.
Just plot through following this pattern consistency 01:04:415 (64415|2,64579|3,64579|0,64579|1,64743|3,64743|1,64907|1,64907|0,64907|2) -
1 - 3 - 1 - 3, .. 1 Note is enough Yes, done

01:14:333 (74333|1,74415|2) - awkward to press- How about Ctrl + J these notes? even neat flow Done
01:18:678 (78678|3) - has to be a long note, and chain along these long notes 01:18:841 (78841|1,79005|3,79169|2,79333|0) - The tension was rising high here and there's no abrupt stop or pause at the moment Done, i think :D

01:20:973 (80973|3,80973|1,80973|0) - this ruined the pattern, i believe a stair notes should be in effect here. I suggest resume plotting these stairs 01:20:399 (80399|3,80481|2,80563|1,80645|0,80727|1,80809|2) - I hope i have do it right, Done

01:23:186 (83186|3,83268|2,83322|1,83377|0,83432|1,83486|2,83541|3,83596|2,83650|1,83705|0,83760|1,83814|2,83869|3,83923|0,83923|1,83923|2) -
Very nice, the stair fit well with the high tension vibes, yes? <3

01:28:841 (88841|2,88841|0,89005|0,89005|2,89169|2,89169|0) - boring and rigid, you've been using jackhammers here and there, maybe it's time for
new pattern. Yes, done

01:29:333 (89333|1,89333|2,89333|3,89497|0,89497|1,89497|2,89661|1,89661|3,89661|0) - Inconsistent, you could have just follow the 3 1 3 1 step.
Besides, some of them are not even that strong to have 3 notes Done

01:45:399 (105399|3,105454|2,105508|1,105563|0,105617|1,105672|2,105727|3,105781|2,105836|1,105891|0,105945|1,106000|2,106055|3,106109|2,106164|1) - splendid beat, nice one with this <3

Starting from here, 03:39:005 (219005|0) - until 03:43:268 (223268|2) - If you follow her voice, then you will noticed that applying several long notes, chained along is very fitting and nice to use here. I'll leave it to your imagination on how to plot them, but it should be at least like several long notes
surrounded with stair of single notes. Very Nice, i rly try it, thanks!!

05:07:858 (307858|1,307858|0,307858|2,308022|2,308022|3,308022|0,308186|0,308186|2,308186|3,308186|1,308350|1,308350|2,308514|3,308514|2,308678|1,308678|2,308841|1,308841|0,308841|2,309005|1,309005|0,309169|2,309169|1,309169|3,309333|1,309333|2,309333|3,309333|0) -
rigid and boring + inconsistent- do something about it c: Done ^_^

05:12:940 (312940|3,312940|1,313022|0,313104|2,313104|1,313104|3,313268|2,313268|0,313432|2,313432|0,313432|1,313432|3,313596|3,313596|1,313760|2,313760|0,313760|1,313923|2,313923|3,314087|3,314087|1,314087|0,314251|0,314251|2,314415|3,314415|1,314415|2) -
these seems nice since there were less or close to none unnecessary density in notes <3

05:28:514 (328514|2,328678|2) - mm.. 05:28:514 (328514|2) - move to 4 perhaps Done
05:30:973 (330973|2) - move to 4, better flow Done

05:31:792 (331792|1) - move to 4
05:31:956 (331956|3) - move to 3
05:32:120 (332120|2) - move to 2 All three Done!

-world ended-

watch out for your notes density, avoid rigid pattern if possible-
good luck with your map C:
Thank you sooooo much for the Mod Kruzon! <3
RuberusuScarlet
hi Feerum ~

little mod

|1|2|3|4|

[World's End]
01:15:563 (75563|3) - end to 01:15:727 -
01:16:055 (76055|2) - move to 4?

03:03:432 - add 4

04:18:186 (258186|2) - end to 04:18:514 -
04:18:350 (258350|0) - delete

05:26:710 - (SV)Audio 30%~40%

good luck >w</
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