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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月5日,星期四 at 19:48:58

Artist: senya
Title: Kimi to Dareka no Yasashisa ni
Source: 艦隊これくしょん
Tags: setz kantai collection kancolle Yuuhei Catharsis 終焉の輝き kamase-tora かませ虎 Hizumi C87 Married ship girls image song yuri Kitakami Ooi
BPM: 160
Filesize: 6315kb
Play Time: 03:26
Difficulties Available:

Download: senya - Kimi to Dareka no Yasashisa ni
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#5 Happy Valentine's Day !
the day to stay at home alone playing osu

Image Normal - Setz
Image Advanced - Me
Image Hard - Me
Image Affection - Me

ImageAndrea // Imagecaptin1

Thanks Ringating for BG

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I see you have become a full-fledged sales person.



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Yo, no kd

just wanted to sayyou should avoid overlapping with the hp bar
00:34:034 (6,7,1) - 01:44:159 (4) - 02:10:784 (2) - 02:34:972 (4) -
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thanks @FlobuFlobs ;; fixed them all.. since i don't use the default skin (or skins with large health bars) it's hard to tell whether objects were overlapping ;w;''
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Hi, sorry for taking longer than expected


General
The clap hitsound isn't audible, consider increasing it's volume.


Insane
  • 00:41:722 (1) - You are skipping a beat with this slider here 00:41:909 - , i suggest splitting it into a circle and a slider or something
  • 00:46:222 (1,2,3) - I think some jumps would work better here instead of the sliders, to put more emphazis on those vocals. It would be more fun imo. :D
  • 01:08:722 (1) - I think you should make this a 3/4 repeat slider like you did with similar parts of the kiai, it follows better the voice
  • 01:20:722 (1) - Same as above, you can also try this:
    click me
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  • 01:52:222 (1) - You shouldn't skip this 01:52:409 - vocal, it sounds like something is missing on the map to me. Try shortening the slider and add a circle.
  • 02:25:222 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit too well here in my opinion, some streams/sliders would be more fun
  • 02:29:440 - Add circle for a triple?
  • 02:32:722 (1) - Same as 01:08:722 (1) - , it would sound better with a a 3/4 repeat slider or similar


Hard


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Good luck!
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Atsuro wrote:
Hi, sorry for taking longer than expected


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  • 02:34:222 (1) - Try this:
    http://puu.sh/ejXaH/3811c22a3a.jpg

    the blue tick where you have the first slider return has nothing on it.... so I will be leaving that as is, i did however change the rhythm here slightly.
    Nothing else, pretty good, but the kiais are a bit boring as they mostly consist of 1/1 sliders. Try giving it more variety :) When I mapped this, I was concerned about the star rating, because this is supposed to be the lowest diff of the set. I want it to be more accessible. I can easily add circles if needed later on though. .

Good luck!


ty for modding!

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Code:
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: senyatoyoump3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 120472
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 73601
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi to dareka no Yasashisa ni
TitleUnicode:君と誰かの優しさに
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:kakifly
Version:Setz's Normal
Source:Kantai Collection
Tags:kancolle Yuuhei Catharsis 終焉の輝き kamase-tora かませ虎  Hizumi C87 Married ship girls image song Kekkon kakkokari Yuri 艦隊これくしょん Kitakami Ooi
BeatmapID:589055
BeatmapSetID:250337

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"weddingg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo2 : 251,162,162
Combo3 : 250,165,192
Combo4 : 180,123,210

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Hi, sorry for taking longer than expected


General
The clap hitsound isn't audible, consider increasing it's volume. i think its fine, i also used the exact same hitsound in this map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/227847 which ranked without a problem


Insane
  • 00:41:722 (1) - You are skipping a beat with this slider here 00:41:909 - , i suggest splitting it into a circle and a slider or something then the rhythm would be repetitive as what ive put before, also i think the slider tick can emphasize this enough lol
  • 00:46:222 (1,2,3) - I think some jumps would work better here instead of the sliders, to put more emphazis on those vocals. It would be more fun imo. :D they have jumps alredady i think the strongest sound is at (4) where i included a big jump
  • 01:08:722 (1) - I think you should make this a 3/4 repeat slider like you did with similar parts of the kiai, it follows better the voice but theres no sound on the blue tick unlike stuff like 00:22:222 (1,2) - where the blue ticks are really emphasized in the music
  • 01:20:722 (1) - Same as above, you can also try this: similar to above^ i want to emphasize the red tick where there is a 'triplet' sound
  • 01:52:222 (1) - You shouldn't skip this 01:52:409 - vocal, it sounds like something is missing on the map to me. Try shortening the slider and add a circle. fixed
  • 02:25:222 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit too well here in my opinion, some streams/sliders would be more fun i tried before but i think having streams right after a measure of no notes would drain the hp easily
  • 02:29:440 - Add circle for a triple? ill think about this, i kind of like the jump i have atm
  • 02:32:722 (1) - Same as 01:08:722 (1) - , it would sound better with a a 3/4 repeat slider or similar you're right but theres also a strong sound on the red tick..


Hard
  • 00:33:659 (2,3) - This jump feels a bit overkill, it's a hard and it doesn't emphasize anything on the song fixed
  • 00:52:972 (3,4) - Two sliders would follow the vocals better ok
  • 01:07:972 (3) - Missing clap at the end? nice catch
  • 01:08:534 (4) - This doesn't flow that well, something more simple would be better like (228, 364) i think its fine
  • 01:09:097 (3,4,5) - I suggest a different rhythm to follow better the vocals: i think the current is just fine, the vocals arent very strong
  • 01:21:097 (2,3,4) - Same as above ^
  • 01:37:784 (3) - This slider is not following anything important, move it forward and add a circle in it's place, it would follow vocals better. yeah not sure what i was doing, fixed
  • 02:20:722 (1) - Try making it shorter (3/4) true it has emphasis on the blue tick but i think the white tick is stronger
  • 03:06:472 (3) - This would flow nicer if it was stacked on the beginning of 03:05:722 (1) - imo i prefer current orz
  • 03:08:347 (4) - Ctrl+g this then this 03:08:722 (1) - ? did something similar

Good luck!


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hey kakifly o/ m4m thingy

:idea: General


* Offset might need a -10, but check with more people.
* Your background has really weird dimensions. Use the recommended 1366x768 size?
* Weird use of capital letters in the title - check with a BAT/QAT?


Image Hitsounds


* I do agree with Atsuro that the clap sound is not audiable at some parts. You should note that your Savior of Cross' mp3 file is a little bit softer than this ones and combine that with frequent 1/4 beats in this song - the clap sound might not be audiable/noticeable at all the parts of the song.
* 00:16:222 (1) - Clap on the head really needed? Whistle only does the job already, like 00:14:722 (1) -
* 00:17:909 (2) - Remove this whistle here? You didn't put one at 00:15:284 (2) - 00:16:784 (2) - 00:19:784 (2) - etc.
* 00:19:972 (3) - No whistle/clap here? There's a very small bass sound + piano here.
* 00:25:972 (3) - ^
* 00:27:472 (3) - ^
* 00:33:097 (2) - ^
* 00:33:472 (3) - ^
* 00:33:847 (5) - ^
* 00:49:972 (3) - ^
* 00:51:472 (3) - ^
* 03:16:972 (3) - ^
* 00:46:222 (1) - Finish (or whistle+clap)? Really strong cymbal sound in the song.
* 00:46:597 (2) - Here on the repeat a finish?
* 00:47:347 (5) - Definitely here ;w;
* 00:55:222 (1) - lol maybe here as well o_o?
* 01:46:222 (1) - ^
* 01:46:597 (2) - On the repeat again here.
* 01:47:347 (4) - Here maybe? Same sound as 00:47:347 (5) -
* 01:23:722 (1) - 02:23:722 (1) - 03:23:722 (1) - 00:22:222 (1,2) - etc. Consider using finishes for these? I don't really have a good argument why, but it sounds cool.
* 00:59:722 (1) - and 02:59:722 (1) - and 02:35:722 (1) - Use finish like 01:59:722 (1) -

I'd add more whistles and finishes here and there, but usage is fine I guess. One thing that bothered me a bit is that you sometimes use whistle + clap instead of finishes at strong beats of the song, but I guess it's a personal preference :oops:


Image Hard


* 00:13:597 (2) - Since you were mainly following the piano - putting in the repeat might confuse some players. Consider splitting it up?
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* 00:29:722 (1) - Feels awkward having a 1/1 slider here. I see how it could emphasize the 1/4 beats in the song - but consider mapping the bass on the red tick instead.
* 00:41:722 (1) - ^
* 01:22:972 (2) - I'd flip this slider, to create a better flow with the next circle. Would also make the flow a bit similar to 02:22:222 (1,2,1) -
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* 01:46:128 (5) - Consider removing this note? You're not using any 1/4 in the Insane diff, and all the places where there is 1/8 present you tend to use 1/2 circle only.
* 02:49:222 (1,3,4) - Just wanted to say that this is pretty cool >//<
* 03:16:597 (2,3) - You have a jump at (1,2) anyway, so you could make these a blanket like most of your other patterns.
* 02:26:722 - Useless green line

Nice and clean Hard diff! Great flow overall ~


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* 00:04:972 (6) - Sounds a bit weird here. If you were following the vocals, in my point of view the repeat should be on the blue tick - like you used a lot in your KIAI times. The vocals are the only 'repeating' part in this section, so if you wanted to emphasize the piano here I'd go for two times 1/2 slider.
* 00:23:815 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/2 tick like the Hard diff? The sound from 00:24:472 - stops on the white tick.
* 00:30:190 - The stream continues here as well - map it out? You'll probably have to rework this pattern because of this because of the clap.
* 00:32:159 (2,3) - This stack doesn't really have a use here imo. The vocals are quite strong on (3), so I actually kinda thought that there'd be a jump here. Maybe it's just me >_>
* 00:46:597 (2) - I already mentioned in the hitsounds thingy that there's a cymbal (or at least a very strong sound) present here - so reworking the rhythm a bit could help with better emphasis of the vocals. I think with this kind of repeating rhythm I suggested you can make a really fun back and forth/mirror pattern c:
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* 01:46:597 (2) - ^
* 01:04:972 (3) - CTRL+G? The jump with (3,4) seems a bit big, and considering you kept a reasonable DS with 01:06:284 (2,3,4) - , I'd try that here as well.
* 01:09:097 (2) - Well, the clap sound gets interrupted by a new syllable on the red tick, making this 1/1 slider quite awkward here, especially when there's a strong sound on the end as well. Consider splitting it up into a 1/2 slider + circle or use a repeat slider like in the second KIAI at 02:08:909 (2,3,4) -
* 01:17:534 (5,6,1,3) - Bad blanket ;_;
* 01:41:347 (5,1) - Not a big problem or anything, but why do you have a small space here lol. You didn't have that at all at 00:29:347 (5,1) -
* 01:49:222 (1,2) - Distance is rather small when you compare it to the rest isn't it? I must say that even increasing it to 1.1 can make a real difference here. (if you do apply this, don't forget to stack with 01:50:347 (4) - )
* 01:56:722 (1,2) - No 1.1/1.2 DS here and a small jump with (3) like 02:02:722 (1,2,3) - ?
* 02:26:722 - Useless green line

I disagree with some jump parts like 02:28:972 (4,5,6) - 00:43:972 (4,5,6) - where the jump is not on the clap, but on rather weak beats of the song - but I guess it's your thing. The rest is fine - enjoyable diff!


it's midnight here so ill mod setz' diff tomorrow, pls forgive me x_x

Image Setz's Normal


* Ehhhh? Same OD as the Hard diff? Considering that this is the easiest diff of the set you could try OD3 (also for a 3/5/7 spread)
* 00:19:962 (2) - Consider flipping the slider for a smoother flow?
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* 00:31:212 (1,2,3) - Hmm.. no blankets - but also no symmetry? Not a problem, but it might not be visually attractive in lower diffs because of very low distance. Try symmetry?
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* 00:47:337 (3,4,5,6,1) - Placement here could use a bit of tweaking for a smooth movement.
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* 00:56:712 (1) - Remove NC here? Doesn't fit your NC after every 2 downbeat pattern.
* 00:58:212 (4) - NC this one instead if you apply the suggestion above.
* 01:56:712 (1) - and 01:58:212 (4) - ^
* 01:07:212 (1,2) - dunno if this is supposed to be blanketed, but if it is you can really improve it here ;w;
* 02:16:962 (2,3) - Two times a straight slider here is a bit too plain for the KIAI time imo, especially how they are placed. Try this?
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* 02:34:212 (1,2,3) - Use the same rhythm as 02:25:212 (1,2,3) - ? I have no idea what you're trying to follow now o_o
* 03:00:087 (4,5) - Consider removing these. In the previous KIAIs you didn't have anything. I might see why you'd place it here, because of the extra sounds, but the rhythm at 02:58:212 (1,2,3) - is quite harsh for beginners - and you should keep in mind that this is the easiest diff of the mapset. A break here would fit well here.
* 03:20:712 (1) - Remove NC, breaks your pattern.


good luck o/
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:idea: General


* Offset might need a -10, but check with more people. fixed, will change again if i get new suggestions
* Your background has really weird dimensions. Use the recommended 1366x768 size? ah yes i was going to , thanks for reminding me. fixed this
* Weird use of capital letters in the title - check with a BAT/QAT?i'll confirm this later on too thanks for reminding again lol


Image Hitsounds


* I do agree with Atsuro that the clap sound is not audiable at some parts. You should note that your Savior of Cross' mp3 file is a little bit softer than this ones and combine that with frequent 1/4 beats in this song - the clap sound might not be audiable/noticeable at all the parts of the song. hmm.. i'm not sure where i can find a version/ another clap atm
no comment = fixed
* 00:16:222 (1) - Clap on the head really needed? Whistle only does the job already, like 00:14:722 (1) -
* 00:17:909 (2) - Remove this whistle here? You didn't put one at 00:15:284 (2) - 00:16:784 (2) - 00:19:784 (2) - etc.
* 00:19:972 (3) - No whistle/clap here? There's a very small bass sound + piano here.
* 00:25:972 (3) - ^
* 00:27:472 (3) - ^
* 00:33:097 (2) - ^
* 00:33:472 (3) - ^
* 00:33:847 (5) - ^
* 00:49:972 (3) - ^ dont think either suits here
* 00:51:472 (3) - ^ ^
* 03:16:972 (3) - ^
* 00:46:222 (1) - Finish (or whistle+clap)? Really strong cymbal sound in the song. not as strong as other cymbals i think the current works just fine
* 00:46:597 (2) - Here on the repeat a finish?
* 00:47:347 (5) - Definitely here ;w;
* 00:55:222 (1) - lol maybe here as well o_o? same as 00:46:222 (1)
* 01:46:222 (1) - ^
* 01:46:597 (2) - On the repeat again here.
* 01:47:347 (4) - Here maybe? Same sound as 00:47:347 (5) -
* 01:23:722 (1) - 02:23:722 (1) - 03:23:722 (1) - 00:22:222 (1,2) - etc. Consider using finishes for these? I don't really have a good argument why, but it sounds cool. they dont really have the finish sound for me, orz
* 00:59:722 (1) - and 02:59:722 (1) - and 02:35:722 (1) - Use finish like 01:59:722 (1) - they already do? lol

I'd add more whistles and finishes here and there, but usage is fine I guess. One thing that bothered me a bit is that you sometimes use whistle + clap instead of finishes at strong beats of the song, but I guess it's a personal preference :oops: probably just preference, i would only add finish if i hear cymbols in the music usually orz


Image Hard


* 00:13:597 (2) - Since you were mainly following the piano - putting in the repeat might confuse some players. Consider splitting it up?i think its fine as it is because the start of the slider theres a faint piano sound ;w;
* 00:29:722 (1) - Feels awkward having a 1/1 slider here. I see how it could emphasize the 1/4 beats in the song - but consider mapping the bass on the red tick instead. yeah i guess
* 00:41:722 (1) - ^ ^
* 01:22:972 (2) - I'd flip this slider, to create a better flow with the next circle. Would also make the flow a bit similar to 02:22:222 (1,2,1) - i think this is just a personal preference thing, i prefer the current :>
* 01:46:128 (5) - Consider removing this note? You're not using any 1/4 in the Insane diff, and all the places where there is 1/8 present you tend to use 1/2 circle only. fixed
* 02:49:222 (1,3,4) - Just wanted to say that this is pretty cool >//< thank you ^q^
* 03:16:597 (2,3) - You have a jump at (1,2) anyway, so you could make these a blanket like most of your other patterns. i like of like the current, blanket curves the note too much it looks a bit ugly imo >_>
* 02:26:722 - Useless green line deleted

Nice and clean Hard diff! Great flow overall ~ thank youuu o3o


Image Insane


* 00:04:972 (6) - Sounds a bit weird here. If you were following the vocals, in my point of view the repeat should be on the blue tick - like you used a lot in your KIAI times. The vocals are the only 'repeating' part in this section, so if you wanted to emphasize the piano here I'd go for two times 1/2 slider. theres a slight piano sound on the repeat
* 00:23:815 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/2 tick like the Hard diff? The sound from 00:24:472 - stops on the white tick. sure
* 00:30:190 - The stream continues here as well - map it out? You'll probably have to rework this pattern because of this because of the clap. the notes i mapped out were the strongest part of the stream, if i were to map the whole thing then i would have a 1 measure long stream i dont want my map to be a freedom dive intimidation lol
* 00:32:159 (2,3) - This stack doesn't really have a use here imo. The vocals are quite strong on (3), so I actually kinda thought that there'd be a jump here. Maybe it's just me >_> fixed
* 00:46:597 (2) - I already mentioned in the hitsounds thingy that there's a cymbal (or at least a very strong sound) present here - so reworking the rhythm a bit could help with better emphasis of the vocals. I think with this kind of repeating rhythm I suggested you can make a really fun back and forth/mirror pattern c: fixed~
* 01:46:597 (2) - ^ ^
* 01:04:972 (3) - CTRL+G? The jump with (3,4) seems a bit big, and considering you kept a reasonable DS with 01:06:284 (2,3,4) - , I'd try that here as well. i felt that without ctrl g it would be more fun to play, but i fixed the distance
* 01:09:097 (2) - Well, the clap sound gets interrupted by a new syllable on the red tick, making this 1/1 slider quite awkward here, especially when there's a strong sound on the end as well. Consider splitting it up into a 1/2 slider + circle or use a repeat slider like in the second KIAI at 02:08:909 (2,3,4) - ok
* 01:17:534 (5,6,1,3) - Bad blanket ;_; lol fixed
* 01:41:347 (5,1) - Not a big problem or anything, but why do you have a small space here lol. You didn't have that at all at 00:29:347 (5,1) - idk why i unstacked,, ill restack for consistency i guess
* 01:49:222 (1,2) - Distance is rather small when you compare it to the rest isn't it? I must say that even increasing it to 1.1 can make a real difference here. (if you do apply this, don't forget to stack with 01:50:347 (4) - ) yeah i took out distance for the blanket but ill try to increase it
* 01:56:722 (1,2) - No 1.1/1.2 DS here and a small jump with (3) like 02:02:722 (1,2,3) - ? not really sure what you mean orz
* 02:26:722 - Useless green line deleted

I disagree with some jump parts like 02:28:972 (4,5,6) - 00:43:972 (4,5,6) - where the jump is not on the clap, but on rather weak beats of the song - but I guess it's your thing. The rest is fine - enjoyable diff!


it's midnight here so ill mod setz' diff tomorrow, pls forgive me x_x


thanks apple ! again nice modding ^q^

- changed offset and BG , ill need new clap hs i guess and metadata confirmation
edit : got new clap its a lot louder so hopefully it works
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General
    Fine~


Setz's Normal

Hitsounds
    Nothing I can pick up :)

Arrangement & Design


Hard

Hitsounds
    Clear!

Arrangement & Design
    Ah, good diff! If you applied the suggestion about breaktime in Affection diff, please apply it in this diff too.


Affection

Hitsounds
    Well done!

Arrangement & Design
  • 00:21:837 (5) - I think this looks better. Just my own opinion, the place now you are doing is too close to the next object, which is not consistent with previous pattern you've done.
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  • 00:36:462 (3) - ummm, I'd change the direction of curve like this:
    this
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    for the following part is on the right side of this slider, not the left.
  • 00:49:212 (1) - Make it parallel to this: 00:49:962 (3) - . Here's my suggestion:
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    If you apply this, I can provide the code of this slider.
    CODE
    Code:
    284,260,49212,6,0,B|228:268|228:268|192:260|192:260|116:272,1,143.999995605469,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  • 00:59:712 - You can use 1/8 reverse slider here (extending to here: 01:00:462 - ). There's very strong beats. Furthermore, you can add green line adjusting the volume from low to high. :)
    green line example
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  • 01:10:962 (3) - You can do this better, or just copy the sample slider I posted above :3
  • 01:25:212 - How about adding a note here? I feel a bit not natural because a strong down beat is here though you dragged the breaktime. It feels empty.
  • 02:37:212 - Same as above :)
  • 01:44:149 (4) - Too close to 3. Consider move it some grids left.
  • 01:59:712 - Same suggestions as what I said about 00:59:712 - .
  • 02:04:212 (1,2) - This pattern has room to improve.
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  • 02:10:962 (3) - I'd suggest you do a Ctrl+G.


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