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Kawada Mami - Prophecy

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Topic Starter
Nyukai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 8 de enero de 2015 at 15:32:29

Artist: Kawada Mami
Title: Prophecy
Source: Shakugan no SHANA S
Tags: 灼眼のシャナ OVA Burning-Eyed Opening TV Size Sonnyc
BPM: 119
Filesize: 16205kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,35 stars, 59 notes)
  2. Insane (3,08 stars, 283 notes)
  3. Normal (1,79 stars, 110 notes)
  4. Sonnyc's Hard (2,56 stars, 175 notes)
Download: Kawada Mami - Prophecy
Download: Kawada Mami - Prophecy (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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More Shana <3
Mint

i'll give you an invisible one instead ;_;

yes moar shana o3o/
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Don't worry dear, I appreciate your support :3

Anyway, this is pending and ready for mods! ><

Also, if someone could find a better video quality I'd be really thankful ;w;
Shushan
hi there i am ohad1881
easy
first of all try make it 1/2 it is much easier in ez diffs
00:31:715- it is a little bit of overlapping there with 1-move it
00:32:723-u made a slider with red dots in it-this is not recommended in ez and normal diffs- this is for the rest of the map also
00:40:791 until 00:54:404-u should put more circles and not just sliders
01:22:639-over lapped with 1
normal-
00:55:317-don't do it a new combo
01:32:014-don't do it a new combo
sonnyc's hard-
i didnt find anything wrong
insane
i couldnt find either gj
gl!
Topic Starter
Nyukai

ohad1881 wrote:

hi there i am ohad1881
easy
first of all try make it 1/2 it is much easier in ez diffs
00:31:715- it is a little bit of overlapping there with 1-move it Changed.
00:32:723-u made a slider with red dots in it-this is not recommended in ez and normal diffs- this is for the rest of the map also As long as it's an slider and there's no need to click, it's fine
00:40:791 until 00:54:404-u should put more circles and not just sliders For this part is fine, imo.
01:22:639-over lapped with 1 Looks good for me here.
normal-
00:55:317-don't do it a new combo
01:32:014-don't do it a new combo

Both cases are stanzas, so it's fine.
sonnyc's hard-
i didnt find anything wrong
insane
i couldnt find either gj
gl!
Thanks ^^
CSLM
dejame hacer un gd plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
yo estaba planeando mapear esta cancion... me arrebataste la idea ;w;
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Lo siento, no acepto más GDs, el mapset está listo. :(
CSLM

Inyuschan wrote:

Lo siento, no acepto más GDs, el mapset está listo. :(
;wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww;
mod incoming
GamerCL
Requested via PM (I've been busy to make a mod to other difficulties)

[Insane]

00:15:455 (3,7) - Hace mas circular eso, quedaría bien :D

00:48:858 - RS

01:12:807 - RS

Y eso :l

Comentario: me gusto bastante que en un upload no tengas tantos errores (por lo que vi yo o-o)

Suerte!
peggaso
MOD
Bueno aqui vamos, buen mapa me gusta buen bpm tu gustos son buenos pero segun yo te aconsejo que cambies el primer color no se, simplemente lo digo
Easy: mmm me parece un buen lugar para comensar a jugar 00:08:522 pero quedaria mejor esta forma https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2379363
creo que quedaria mejor cambiarlos de lugar 00:16:589, este tambien 00:24:656 ponelo en otra parte, el segundo luego del break,
quedaria mejor un poco mas abajo supongo que deberias moverlos un poco mejor con el Distance Snap :P https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2379395
este si que me gusto te quedo bastante bien \:D/ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2379402, creo que quedaria mejor esta forma no? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2379410
http://puu.sh/dGwF8/1286b270ff.jpg o3o 00:54:782
01:09:026 eh me gustaria que lo pusieras un poco mas abajo :P
esto queda feo :/ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2379425
exelente Mapset y eso es todo

Normal Mod:
cambiale la forma 00:18:606
no so lo te pido que lo cambies de lugar, tambien la forma 00:30:707
cambialo de forma y de lugar 00:41:547
de forma y lo acomodas 00:53:648
01:04:488 creo que quedaria mejor asi http://puu.sh/dGxcz/885b8ab169.jpg
lugar y forma 01:04:992, 01:28:186 lugar y forma
Finish


Hard Mod:
00:22:639 acomodalo un poco
creo que deberias cambiarle la forma acá 00:29:698
cambiale la forma 00:37:009
00:39:530 cambiale la forma
cambiale la forma 00:43:564
lugar y forma 00:47:093
00:50:370 lugar y forma
00:53:396 WHAT https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2379487
eso queda feo 01:04:992
01:22:891 forma
Lugar 01:25:917
Finish

Bueno esto es todo solo Mod hasta la Hard por que no modeo Insane y buena suerte! Nota: Algunas notas no las escuche concuerdo a la cancion quisas el bpm u Offset :P
Topic Starter
Nyukai
@GamerCL: No changes but thanks for your time.

@peggaso: Los colores encajan para mi gusto xD Por mi parte ningún cambio, además de que deberías haberte organizado mejor, simplemente no entendí algunas cosas porque ni me las explicas ni mencionas las notas concretas :/ Y aunque aprecio tus sugerencias, prefiero lo que hice yo.

Voy a traducir lo que dijiste del Hard ya que el mapper no habla español.

  1. 00:22:639 - Adjust it a bit.
  2. 00:29:698 - You should change the form here.
  3. 00:37:009 - Change form.
  4. 00:39:530 - Same.
  5. 00:43:564 - Same.
  6. 00:47:093 - Change form and place.
  7. 00:50:370 - Same.
  8. 00:53:396 - Well the same he said
  9. 01:04:992 - That looks ugly.
  10. 01:22:891 - Change form.
  11. 01:25:917 - Change place.
mods without any explanations ftw

Now waiting for CSLM's mod.
Kazuya
Hello \o It's only ideas!

[Insane]

Use: AR 8, OD: 7 half values = makes no sense. :/

00:11:043 (3) - 00:12:051 (7) - I think, use two 1/4 slider, because it's 1/4 part! Timeline example: http://puu.sh/dGFNL/85bcc2c3a3.jpg Follow the Guitar.

00:13:060 (2) - Same as above ^
00:14:194 - 00:14:446 - Missing object. Here audible sound. Fill out! >_<
00:15:076 (2) - Hey. It's insane. Don't use long slider! It's 1/4 part! :3

00:21:631 (3) - I think, use 1/4 slider. This 1/2 slider is not fit here, because here is beat: 00:21:757 - ! >_< Map the drum!

00:28:186 (6,7) - It's Bit misleading, because this distance snap is similar than 1/2 distance snap. Please, use lower distance snap. Spacing examples (1/2

objects): 00:27:555 (4,5) - 00:29:194 (2,3) -

00:29:698 (3,4) - Okay. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGGcK/333635993b.jpg My suggestion is better fits the vocal! :3

00:32:723 (1,2) - Same as 00:28:186 (6,7) - Spacing.

00:47:976 - Missing circle. Put it here.

00:48:858 (1,2,3) - Misleading 1/4 spacing.

00:54:152 (6,7) - I think follow the vocal. Use 1/2 reverse slider here: 00:54:152 - . and delete 00:54:656 (7) - circle.

01:00:707 (1,2) - Huh. Please, follow the vocal, because stronger! Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGGMy/a6a146460b.jpg

01:02:723 (1,2) - Same as above. Currently conception is not good here. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGGQG/7395f1b79c.jpg

01:04:866 (2) - Please, delete circle, because there is no clearly audible beat.

01:06:127 (6) - Same as above ^

01:08:774 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please, follow the vocals and drums. :3 use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGH5h/a62b3c8729.jpg

01:12:807 (1,2) - Vocal, please. :3 The sliders don't fit here, don't follow anything. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGH9n/39cd9eff41.jpg

01:21:127 (3,4,5) - yay. Please, map/follow the vocal. Vocal is so strong!

[Hard]

00:25:665 (4) - This slider is weird here. I think, follow the vocal. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGIGS/bd9c34eb0f.jpg
01:00:455 - Huh. Put circle here. Please. :3
01:08:522 - ^

Okay.

[Normal]

00:32:849 (1) - 00:40:791 - Please, map the parts! This song is very short.
00:45:581 (2,3,4) - Please, follow the vocal: http://puu.sh/dGJ4b/640f59b438.jpg

[Easy]

yay. CS2 is not too big? :O


Same as Normal: 00:32:849 - 00:40:791 - Map the parts. :3

Ok. This map is fine. ;w; Good luck!
Yuii-
Hi, hi! (Spanish + English mod!!)
Easy

General: Te sugiero CS:3,0 (Como mucho 2,5 o algo así. 2,0 me parece muy poco)


00:36:883 - 00:40:665 - Tomarse un break está bien. Pero... ¿3 ~ 4 segunditos? Vaaaamos, toca completar esa parte!! :)

00:58:186 - ¿Puedo sugerirte una nota?



Normal

General: Puedo sugerir AR:4,0


00:09:278 (2) - No me gusta como suena, ¿soy el único?

00:36:883 - 00:40:665 - Igual que lo que te decía con el "Easy" :D

00:45:581 (2,3,4) - Si podés arreglar eso para que siga el ritmo de Kawada, mejor. Evalúalo. Sería con un slider más. En mi caso, hice que quedase:

01:31:211 (1) - Me rompes el corazón cuando usas un nuevo combo para la última nota. Queda solita :'(



Sonnyc's Hard:

General: I love this map. Amazing.


00:13:060 (3) - This slider is marvelous, can I take it?

00:32:471 (4,1,2) - This part does not convince me... or maybe I am deaf!

00:34:992 (2) - Same ^ ^

00:36:001 (4) - Same ^ ^

01:00:455 - Can I suggest a circle, here? You could place it

01:08:522 - Same ^ ^

01:10:917 - Same ^ ^ (it sounds great... I... think)

01:14:824 (1) - Oh, man. I'm loving this sliders... Batmaaan!!!

01:22:135 (3) - I think this note does not fit very good.

01:31:211 (1) - Do not leave this poor circle with a new combo!! He needs a partern!



Insane

General: Te sugiero AR: 8,0 // OD: 7,0 // HP: 6,0 // El CS no le veo problema como está, ahora se usa 4,0 en casi todos los mapas difíciles. Sin embargo, ¿probaste con 5,0?


00:08:396 - Le agregué una nota antes de que empiece la primera original. ¿No creés que suena mejor?

00:17:093 (3) - 00:17:597 (4) - Yo le agregaría una nota en el medio.

00:17:976 (6) - Como que no... no va. Debería ser más largo el slider, en todo caso. La nota 7 la dejaría igual.

00:19:488 (4) - Queda mejor sin este 4. Escuchalo y decime tu opinión.

00:32:723 (1) - Mucho espacio entre nota y nota.

00:58:816 - Le agregué una nota, ¿qué te parece?

01:04:866 (2) - Nope.

01:06:001 (5) - ¿Puedo sugerir mandar este circulo debajo del final del último slider?

01:06:127 (6) - Nope.

01:18:984 - ¿Me parece a mí o acá un 8° quedaría bien?

01:27:681 (3,4) - No me gusta cómo suena :(

01:31:211 (1) - ¿Un combo nuevo para la última nota?

Excelent map besides this ^^ :D
Good luck on Rank!
lolia
Hii, here's my poor modding!

  • General
  1. Easy,Normal,Hard : Remove the Widescreen plz
  2. How about checking the Letterbox for Easy and Normal?

  • Easy
  1. 00:08:522 - Delete this greenline and use the timingline to adjust the volume plz
  2. 00:28:690 (1) - Curve this? A bit better imo
  3. 00:30:202 (3,4) - Check the DS plz
  4. 00:58:438 (1) - I don't know the spin rule exactly, but there is 1 full recovery time in Easy diff. So you should delete this note (Rule is here)
  5. 01:04:992 (3,4) - I wonder why only these have different rhythm @3@ (others are all same rhythm - 3/2 reverse slider)
  6. 01:08:522 (2) - move to (76|192) for stack with 01:11:043 (1) - ?
  7. 01:15:076 (1) - Also DS error

  • Normal
  1. 00:17:093 (2,3) - Personally this is better with music
  2. 00:24:152 (3,4,1,2,3) - Maybe this is a bit hard to Normal player imo cuz (2,3) is sudden stack..
  3. 00:28:942 (1,2) - I don't know why, but this is better to hear for me ww
  4. 00:31:967 (2) - clap on tail
  5. 01:02:976 (1) - Bend this like 01:00:959 (1) - this?
  6. 01:06:253 (3,4) - with the vocal, note -> 1/2 slider is better imo!
  7. 01:27:177 (1,2) - if you bend these two slider, it become better flow I think!

  • Sonnyc's Hard
  1. 00:15:833 (5) - 여기는 드럼피니시가 더 어울릴꺼같아요
  2. 00:22:639 (4) - 여기랑 00:30:707 (1) - 여기가 같은자리인데 뉴콤이 다른거같네요..하나로 맞춰주는게 나을꺼같아요
  3. 00:25:665 (4) - 소프트휘슬이 빠진것같습니다
  4. 00:54:908 (5) - 리버스쪽에 소프트휘슬 넣는것도 어울릴꺼같은데 음..힛사쪽은 약해서 잘 모르겠네요 ㅋㅋ
  5. 01:07:891 (3) - 드럼피니시 00:59:824 (4) - 여기처럼 넣어주세요
  6. 01:25:160 (1,2) - 개인적으론 슬라-노트순으로 놓는게 보컬이랑 어울릴꺼같네요

  • Insane
  1. 00:37:135 (2) - clap on head is nice imo
  2. 00:48:102 (5) - Hmm..move at 00:47:976 is better
  3. 00:50:875 (1,2) - Try 3/4 slider and 1/2 slider for consistency
  4. 00:58:690 (3) - change to 1/4 slider?

QwQ Quite good map, I can't fine anythings..
If my modding is bad, you can ignore mine orz
Good luck!
Sonnyc
SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Prophecy (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56673
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 8522,16841,32723,40539,58186
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Prophecy
TitleUnicode:Prophecy
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Inyuschan
Version:Sonnyc's Hard
Source:Shakugan no Shana S
Tags:灼眼のシャナ Burning-Eyed Opening TV Size Sonnyc
BeatmapID:569527
BeatmapSetID:247069

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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276,332,40286,2,0,L|244:356,2,40,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
372,320,40791,5,0,0:0:0:0:
456,276,41043,2,0,P|456:236|468:196,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,112,41547,2,0,P|436:112|376:52,1,160
288,88,42303,2,0,L|212:120,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,156,42807,5,0,0:0:0:0:
88,244,43060,2,0,P|128:244|168:256,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,304,43564,2,0,P|292:256|384:256,1,160
436,176,44320,2,0,P|440:160|436:96,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,16,44824,5,0,0:0:0:0:
340,100,45076,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,148,45328,2,0,P|192:156|124:112,2,120,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,196,46337,2,0,L|340:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,348,46841,5,0,0:0:0:0:
312,364,47093,2,0,P|276:344|236:336,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,336,47597,2,0,P|156:268|100:204,1,160
4,188,48354,2,0,P|8:236|32:272,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,203,48858,5,0,0:0:0:0:
64,112,49110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,40,49362,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,128,49614,2,0,B|240:112|240:112|316:128,1,160
296,36,50370,2,0,L|374:52,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,140,50875,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,216,51127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,232,51379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,308,51631,2,0,P|320:308|256:236,1,160
176,293,52387,2,0,P|163:255|168:216,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,152,52891,6,0,P|196:124|88:160,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,212,53648,2,0,P|48:164|48:60,1,160
132,12,54404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,60,54656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,24,54908,2,0,P|352:24|420:48,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,120,55917,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,196,56169,2,0,L|392:196,2,40,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,272,56673,2,0,L|300:312,1,40,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,280,58186,5,0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,58438,1,2,2:0:0:0:
72,104,58690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,92,58816,1,2,2:0:0:0:
120,80,58942,6,0,P|168:76|204:88,1,80,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,160,59446,1,8,0:0:0:0:
313,84,59698,1,2,0:3:0:0:
313,84,59824,2,0,P|352:75|440:104,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
480,176,60455,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,272,60707,5,2,0:3:0:0:
416,344,60959,2,0,P|368:328|304:244,1,160,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,243,61715,2,0,P|167:311|96:344,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
32,272,62471,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,192,62723,1,2,0:3:0:0:
32,112,62976,6,0,L|68:40,1,80,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
160,56,63480,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,140,63732,1,2,0:3:0:0:
204,140,63858,2,0,P|268:164|308:140,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
352,56,64488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,40,64740,1,2,0:3:0:0:
508,112,64992,6,0,P|516:192|508:272,1,160,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,312,65749,2,0,P|412:232|420:152,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
328,184,66505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,148,66757,1,2,0:3:0:0:
216,140,66883,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,132,67009,6,0,P|144:132|96:160,1,80,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
115,239,67513,2,0,P|152:253|192:252,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
216,244,67891,2,0,P|275:241|331:262,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
416,212,68522,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,132,68774,5,2,0:3:0:0:
436,44,69026,2,0,B|356:24|356:24|316:40|304:78,1,160,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,78,69782,2,0,B|196:40|156:24|156:24|76:44,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
40,132,70539,2,0,P|36:176|44:216,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
92,292,71043,5,4,0:3:0:0:
140,208,71295,1,4,0:3:0:0:
232,232,71547,2,0,P|276:236|316:224,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
332,216,71925,2,0,P|389:201|449:208,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
440,304,72555,2,0,P|401:313|361:309,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
268,288,73060,6,0,P|189:293|134:348,1,160,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,220,73816,2,0,P|150:214|205:159,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
112,132,74572,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,72,74824,6,0,B|76:20|144:28|176:60|176:60|216:48|256:68|256:68|296:48|336:60|336:60|368:28|436:20|476:72,1,480,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
400,132,76589,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,220,76841,5,2,0:3:0:0:
440,220,77093,2,0,P|361:214|306:159,1,160,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,159,77849,2,0,P|150:214|72:220,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
8,292,78606,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,312,78858,6,0,B|160:316|212:284|212:284|256:292|300:284|300:284|352:316|412:312,2,320,4|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,219,81127,2,0,P|72:160|104:108,2,120,4|0|2,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
160,184,82135,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,100,82387,1,2,0:3:0:0:
304,100,82639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,184,82891,6,0,B|412:184|412:184|448:184|484:196|501:220,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
428,284,83648,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,284,83900,2,0,B|368:284|368:284|332:284|296:272|278:247,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
260,156,84656,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,192,84908,1,2,0:3:0:0:
84,156,85160,5,4,0:3:0:0:
84,156,85412,2,0,P|80:172|92:240,1,80,6|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,329,85917,2,0,B|144:324|168:288|168:288|216:288|240:261,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
332,228,86673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,251,86925,1,2,0:3:0:0:
495,189,87177,5,4,0:3:0:0:
403,166,87429,1,4,0:3:0:0:
331,103,87681,2,0,P|377:71|440:77,2,120,8|4|4,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,164,88690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,102,88942,2,0,P|111:68|41:102,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
109,166,89698,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,256,89950,5,2,0:3:0:0:
111,260,90076,2,0,L|193:274,1,80,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
217,279,90455,1,2,0:3:0:0:
296,228,90707,2,0,L|335:234,2,40,8|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
300,324,91211,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,91337,8,2,95244,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Nyukai
Kazuya

Kazuya wrote:

Hello \o It's only ideas!

[Insane]

Use: AR 8, OD: 7 half values = makes no sense. :/ Although BPM is slow, it has a lot of rhythm, but AR9 / AR8,5 was a bit high for me, so I think AR8,3 is fine. More or less the same for OD, since it's an Insane I feel OD7 a bit low.

00:11:043 (3) - 00:12:051 (7) - I think, use two 1/4 slider, because it's 1/4 part! Timeline example: http://puu.sh/dGFNL/85bcc2c3a3.jpg Follow the Guitar. Nah, is more important the music I'm following imo.

00:13:060 (2) - Same as above ^ Same.
00:14:194 - 00:14:446 - Missing object. Here audible sound. Fill out! >_< Same. There is no (at least important) music in those blue ticks o.o
00:15:076 (2) - Hey. It's insane. Don't use long slider! It's 1/4 part! :3 I've been using this kind of slider all the time and you didn't complain xD It's fine.

00:21:631 (3) - I think, use 1/4 slider. This 1/2 slider is not fit here, because here is beat: 00:21:757 - ! >_< Map the drum! Well, I'm following vocals here. For consistency with 00:20:875 (2) - :3u

00:28:186 (6,7) - It's Bit misleading, because this distance snap is similar than 1/2 distance snap. Please, use lower distance snap. Spacing examples (1/2 Should be fine due the slow rhythm, I feel here can be a very little jump.

objects): 00:27:555 (4,5) - 00:29:194 (2,3) -

00:29:698 (3,4) - Okay. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGGcK/333635993b.jpg My suggestion is better fits the vocal! :3 Did something similar.

00:32:723 (1,2) - Same as 00:28:186 (6,7) - Spacing.

00:47:976 - Missing circle. Put it here. Nah but I changed 00:47:597 (4) -

00:48:858 (1,2,3) - Misleading 1/4 spacing.

00:54:152 (6,7) - I think follow the vocal. Use 1/2 reverse slider here: 00:54:152 - . and delete 00:54:656 (7) - circle. Actual pattern follows vocal too >:

01:00:707 (1,2) - Huh. Please, follow the vocal, because stronger! Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGGMy/a6a146460b.jpg Same as before.

01:02:723 (1,2) - Same as above. Currently conception is not good here. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGGQG/7395f1b79c.jpg Same.

01:04:866 (2) - Please, delete circle, because there is no clearly audible beat. Not sure here, atm I think fits good o.o

01:06:127 (6) - Same as above ^ Same.

01:08:774 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please, follow the vocals and drums. :3 use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGH5h/a62b3c8729.jpg More important music is already followed imo~

01:12:807 (1,2) - Vocal, please. :3 The sliders don't fit here, don't follow anything. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGH9n/39cd9eff41.jpg They follow :c

01:21:127 (3,4,5) - yay. Please, map/follow the vocal. Vocal is so strong! Sliders and notes are not following ONLY vocals, keep that in mind.

[Normal]

00:32:849 (1) - 00:40:791 - Please, map the parts! This song is very short. But I want to add a little break in E and N.
00:45:581 (2,3,4) - Please, follow the vocal: http://puu.sh/dGJ4b/640f59b438.jpg Is more or less the same as I did. So it's not a problem xD

[Easy]

yay. CS2 is not too big? :O It's fine for an Easy.


Same as Normal: 00:32:849 - 00:40:791 - Map the parts. :3 Same.

Ok. This map is fine. ;w; Good luck!

Yuii-

Yuii- wrote:

Easy

General: Te sugiero CS:3,0 (Como mucho 2,5 o algo así. 2,0 me parece muy poco) Quizá, pero está bien para un Easy. Normal ya tiene CS:3.


00:36:883 - 00:40:665 - Tomarse un break está bien. Pero... ¿3 ~ 4 segunditos? Vaaaamos, toca completar esa parte!! :) Hay muchos mapas (incluso tv size) con algún pequeño break, depende de la música.

00:58:186 - ¿Puedo sugerirte una nota? No estaría mal pero meh, como es una línea roja no estoy segura.



Normal

General: Puedo sugerir AR:4,0 No me gusta CS:4 para un Normal.


00:09:278 (2) - No me gusta como suena, ¿soy el único? o.o está bien

00:36:883 - 00:40:665 - Igual que lo que te decía con el "Easy" :D Lo mismo.

00:45:581 (2,3,4) - Si podés arreglar eso para que siga el ritmo de Kawada, mejor. Evalúalo. Sería con un slider más. En mi caso, hice que quedase: No mapeo líneas azules en el Normal >< En este caso, quiero decir.

01:31:211 (1) - Me rompes el corazón cuando usas un nuevo combo para la última nota. Queda solita :'( Pero es por la stanza.

Insane

General: Te sugiero AR: 8,0 // OD: 7,0 // HP: 6,0 // El CS no le veo problema como está, ahora se usa 4,0 en casi todos los mapas difíciles. Sin embargo, ¿probaste con 5,0? Ya expliqué lo del AR aunque voy a modificar un poco el OD. El HP está bien. Y sobre el CS, al menos para esta canción no me gusta CS:5.


00:08:396 - Le agregué una nota antes de que empiece la primera original. ¿No creés que suena mejor? Puede ser, de todas formas prefiero empezar con la nota fuerte.

00:17:093 (3) - 00:17:597 (4) - Yo le agregaría una nota en el medio. Nah, no hay nada importante.

00:17:976 (6) - Como que no... no va. Debería ser más largo el slider, en todo caso. La nota 7 la dejaría igual. Mejor un triple que un slider largo siendo insane xD

00:19:488 (4) - Queda mejor sin este 4. Escuchalo y decime tu opinión. No estoy de acuerdo, la siguiente línea blanca también es importante.

00:32:723 (1) - Mucho espacio entre nota y nota. No lo veo mal y menos siendo BPM lento.

00:58:816 - Le agregué una nota, ¿qué te parece? No hay algo que necesite ser pulsado.

01:04:866 (2) - Nope. Creo que lo expliqué antes, el triple encaja.

01:06:001 (5) - ¿Puedo sugerir mandar este circulo debajo del final del último slider? Rompería la simetría xD Al menos por ahora no lo cambiaré.

01:06:127 (6) - Nope. Lo mismo.

01:18:984 - ¿Me parece a mí o acá un 8° quedaría bien? No xD Encaja mejor los triples de los que te quejas y ahora vienes y dices que eso quedaría bien, pues no (?)

01:27:681 (3,4) - No me gusta cómo suena :( Vocales.

01:31:211 (1) - ¿Un combo nuevo para la última nota? Stanza.

Excelent map besides this ^^ :D
Good luck on Rank!

Karia

Karia wrote:

Hii, here's my poor modding!

  • General
  1. Easy,Normal,Hard : Remove the Widescreen plz Done.
  2. How about checking the Letterbox for Easy and Normal? Nah, title appears at the beginning in all diffs o3o

  • Easy
  1. 00:08:522 - Delete this greenline and use the timingline to adjust the volume plz It's not necessary I think.
  2. 00:28:690 (1) - Curve this? A bit better imo Maybe, but it's part of my style :3 I'll keep it for now.
  3. 00:30:202 (3,4) - Check the DS plz Oh my, nice catch, fixed.
  4. 00:58:438 (1) - I don't know the spin rule exactly, but there is 1 full recovery time in Easy diff. So you should delete this note (Rule is here) If I'm not mistaken this is fine o.o There is time enough for recovering, but not sure.
  5. 01:04:992 (3,4) - I wonder why only these have different rhythm @3@ (others are all same rhythm - 3/2 reverse slider) Well, here exactly I think fits better this rhythm ><
  6. 01:08:522 (2) - move to (76|192) for stack with 01:11:043 (1) - ? Sure :3
  7. 01:15:076 (1) - Also DS error True uwu Fixed.

  • Normal
  1. 00:17:093 (2,3) - Personally this is better with music Well, it's more or less the same. Is better my pattern.
  2. 00:24:152 (3,4,1,2,3) - Maybe this is a bit hard to Normal player imo cuz (2,3) is sudden stack.. Did something different.
  3. 00:28:942 (1,2) - I don't know why, but this is better to hear for me ww Nah, I prefer mine >:
  4. 00:31:967 (2) - clap on tail No hitsounds there :3u
  5. 01:02:976 (1) - Bend this like 01:00:959 (1) - this? Not here ><
  6. 01:06:253 (3,4) - with the vocal, note -> 1/2 slider is better imo! It's following the vocals better, I'm sure.
  7. 01:27:177 (1,2) - if you bend these two slider, it become better flow I think! Maybe.

  • Insane
  1. 00:37:135 (2) - clap on head is nice imo It doesn't fit in this blue tick u.u
  2. 00:48:102 (5) - Hmm..move at 00:47:976 is better Nope, it would follow a wrong rhythm.
  3. 00:50:875 (1,2) - Try 3/4 slider and 1/2 slider for consistency I prefer this for now, because vocals x)
  4. 00:58:690 (3) - change to 1/4 slider? Nah, just notes there.

QwQ Quite good map, I can't fine anythings..
If my modding is bad, you can ignore mine orz
Good luck!

Big thanks for your mods guys <3 Anyway @Sonnyc could you reply mods properly? To know what you changed :c
Sonnyc
Sorry, because I don't actually enjoy replying mods lol
Giving a proper reply now anyways, and think I've forgot to say thanks for the modders :3
SPOILER
Kazuya:

00:25:665 (4) - This slider is weird here. I think, follow the vocal. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dGIGS/bd9c34eb0f.jpg // I don't want to use 1/4 rhythms at the first part of the map.
01:00:455 - Huh. Put circle here. Please. :3 // added both
01:08:522 - ^

Yuii-:

00:32:471 (4,1,2) - This part does not convince me... or maybe I am deaf! // Becuase I didn't wanted to use 1/4 at the first part of the map, and wanted to use symmetry here, I've kinda simplified the rhythm here. I can also feel that the rhythm here doesn't 100% suits, so I need more opinion, but currently I'm wiling to keep.
00:34:992 (2) - Same ^ ^
00:36:001 (4) - Same ^ ^
01:00:455 - Can I suggest a circle, here? You could place it // added circles via previous mod.
01:08:522 - Same ^ ^
01:10:917 - Same ^ ^ (it sounds great... I... think)
01:22:135 (3) - I think this note does not fit very good. // I'd like to keep symmetry here.
01:31:211 (1) - Do not leave this poor circle with a new combo!! He needs a partern! // I usually end the last note as a single comboed note if it ends as a new stanza. This was the case.

Karia:

00:15:833 (5) - Add drum-finish here // added
00:22:639 (4) - This is the same combo spot as 00:30:707 (1), but it feels different. Better make them consistently. // (4) is missing a combo because the rhyhtm is connected with the previous combo. If 00:30:707 (1) was a 3/4 rhythm, I'd happily remove the combo, but since it's a 1/1 and is constructing a new symmetric pattern, I've decided to add a combo there.
00:25:665 (4) - Missing a soft whistle // added
00:54:908 (5) - Maybe add a soft whistle at the reverse? // I'd like to make soft whistle sound only at 00:56:799 around here.
01:07:891 (3) - Add drum-finish as 00:59:824 (4) // Drum-finish sounds were added after the song's effect. Anyways something seemed to be wrong around here, and fixed.
01:25:160 (1,2) - Slider-note order feels to fit the vocals better. // Wasn't aiming after vocals here.
Mint
mod incoming ....

sorry again for forgetting it x_x

:idea: General


* Check your BG dimensions.
* Yeah, the video is a bit 'meh'. Dunno if you already asked someone to get the video, but I have one for you here. I hope it's fine enough, but if you do plan to use this video, you'll probably need a video offset of around -55. You can find out where it should be, because at 01:07:009 (1) -, Shana's eyes must be fully opened.

Easy


* Missing video in this diff.
* 00:12:051 (4) - Nazi, but could you move this just a bit up? Would improve the flow by a bit.
* 00:32:219 - Useless green line
* 00:40:791 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Well, it's an Easy diff so I guess it's supposed to be easy, but this is just the same rhythm all over again. Maybe you could try switching between two rhythms or something? (i personally dont have any good recommendation though ;w;)
* 00:58:438 (1) - Just wanted to say, that the spinner time should be fine. The player has 1639ms of recovery time, which is more than the minimum 1500ms.
* 01:07:009 (1) - I guess it's just me, but I feel that the red points are too squished in, try this?

Nothing really jumps out to me, these are all just (dumb) suggestions. I think that this diff is actually already good to go now owo

Normal


* 00:18:354 (4) - Move to (44,192) instead? Putting this to the other side of the slider would keep the flow going.
* 00:22:639 (1,2) - Yeah, this blanket is off - please try to fix it (just move 1's end to the right a bit)
* 00:32:219 - Useless green line ;_;
* 00:32:471 (2) - There's a clap sound in the song, why not add one?
* 01:06:757 (4) - Yeah, I think you missed one here as well >_>
* 01:08:522 (3) - Just a small thing that I noticed, not a problem or anything. But with all your other 1/2 slider you have a small curve in them. Would be nice here, or else you have 3 straight sliders right after each other :c
* 01:23:144 (1,2) - Where's your constant 1.3x distance?

Clean diff! Couldn't find a lot, I like your use of rhythm!

Sonnyc's Hard


* Missing video in this diff.
* Turn off 'Widescreen Support'. Map has no storyboard.
* 00:11:043 (3) - To me, the finish on the repeat give way too much emphasis on a note in the background. I must say the bass is quite strong, but this is actually more similar to 00:10:791 (2) - rather than 00:10:539 (1) - . A drum clap or even a drum whistle would give a nicer effect here.
* 00:13:060 (3) - I don't think the sound on the slider end is strong enough to have a finish. Try a drum whistle instead?
* 00:15:581 (4) - To me, a whistle sounds much better since it has a kind of a hi-hat sound to hit.
* 00:17:093 (2) - The soft whistle on this slider end is a bit weird to me. The vocals actually are lower here, and there's no (noticeable) instrument it can really go with. I'd actually place it on the head of (3), since the vocals are quite strong there.
* 00:18:858 (2) - I personally think that something from the drum-sampleset would fit better here, because of the bass.
* 00:19:362 (4) - If you are following the vocals/piano you could consider adding a whistle on the slider head as well.
* 00:20:118 (5) - Placing a 1/1 slider here might not be a good idea. I see why you might do this, but you are skipping a bass sound on the red tick, a clap sound on the blue tick, and the downbeat is also skipped. I recommend to have at least the downbeat clickable here after skipping those sounds. A 1/2 slider + circle fits OK here.
* 00:28:186 (4) - Using the drum sampleset on the slider end would work nicely here.
* 00:30:707 (1,2) - Nazi, but why 1.13x? Shouldn't it be 1.2 flat?
* 00:33:480 (3) - Hmm.. I don't really hear a bass here.. consider using a whistle instead?
* 00:35:749 (4) - ^
* 01:14:824 (1) - Gotta admit, this is pretty awesome o3o/
* 01:22:891 (1) - I don't recommend having a 1/1 slider here. There's a cymbal sound on the large white tick, which you don't really want to skip. I recommend having a circle here, and have a 1/2 slider that starts on the white tick.

I think it's more a mappers preference, but I disagree with your uses of the drum finish in the beginning of the song. For non-downbeats I suggest you to use drum claps instead, since for example 00:15:581 (4,5) - would sound weird on other skins / other game modes. I know it shouldn't influence the rankability/quality of the map, but it'd be nice if you changed it though. As far as rhythm and placement goes I must say that I really enjoyed this diff. Everything looks very clean and neat c:

Insane


* 00:16:085 (8) - I do hear a sound on the slider end here... quite strong actually. Add a clap?
* 00:11:799 (6,7) - Are the supposed to be a blanket? If they should be, I think you can do better than this :3
* 00:23:396 (4) - I'm a bit unsure about the clap on the slider end, because it's not an actual clap sound in the song. It's just the bass and you didn't hitsound the bass throughout the whole diff x_x
* 00:24:908 (2) - I'm wondering why you have an offbeat slider here. If you just CTRL+G (2,3) for rhythm only, it'd work the same way as 00:16:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - with absolutely no offbeat rhythms.
* 00:58:816 - I'd add a note here on the blue tick. There's no other instrument you can really follow here, because only the vocals are present here, and there's clearly a vocal note here. Otherwise other 1/4 rhythms like 00:59:698 (4,5) - wouldn't really make sense anymore.
* 00:30:707 (1) - Add a clap on the slider end?
* 00:31:589 (4) - Again, only bass sound here but there's a clap. I'd actually add a clap on 00:31:211 (3) - 's slider end where the actual clap is.
* 00:32:471 - I think you should add a clap here on the red tick as well o_o
* 00:36:757 (1,2,3) - You should get more opinions on these. I didn't have problems with it, but these 3/4 sliders are like almost spaced the same as a normal 1/2 rhythm, for example 00:35:749 (6,7) - , but I guess it's fine since you used a lot of rhythms like 00:28:564 (7,1) - However, you should consider spacing them normally like 00:40:791 (1,2) -
* 00:39:278 (3) - Missing clap here?
* 00:40:286 (7) - I hear a double-clap rhythm here, so I think you should also add one on the slider end.
* 00:44:698 (7) - Yeah, here as well. I think a clap fits here good with the extra sound that's present here.
* 00:52:639 (7) - Clap on the slider end here as well?
* 01:02:471 (8,1) - I'd have at least 1.0x DS here, dunno why it's so low here.
* 01:03:858 (4) - Uhmm, again clap on the slider end? There's a sound there (sounds weird with 25% playback rate, but if you listen it to 100% it actually makes sense)
* 01:04:992 (3,4) - This blanket is also off ;w; (sorry for mentioning these shit blanket things ;_;)
* 01:11:925 (4) - If you agreed with all those clap suggestions, add one here as well :3
* 01:16:841 (1) - I personally think that S:C1 whistles would fit this part (especially the slider end here) really well, but you'll have to add a lot more green lines etc dunno if you want to do that.., so you can ignore this owo
* 01:28:060 (4,5) - This really confused me, especially since you just spaced it normally with (3,4)... I highly recommend just to keep DS here.
* 01:29:446 (2) - What about splitting this slider up into two circles instead? Both the vocals and the clap would get a good emphasis, and it'd be consistent with 01:23:144 (1,2,3) -

Almost Andrea map, especially with a Shana song. Good job mapping it, I'd only check the hitsounds a bit and then it should be ready owo

abuse contact me when you need me again, i love symmetry maps *_*

oh yea, here's the real thing

good luck ~
Momochikun
hi, as requested on my queue :3

I'd recommend adding silent normal-sliderslide here.. even if the sounds doesn't really bother in higher diff. But in Easy and Normal which has many long sliders, the sliderslide sound is really noticeable which sometimes it could bother players imo ><

[Insane]
hmm.. honestly i feel confused with the inconsistency of Ds in most of 1/4 rhythm part here, at the intro 00:11:547 (5,6) - something as far as this were seperated by 1/4. But later 00:27:555 (4,5) - it was closer yet different rhythm. And it was happen a lot on the map just like 00:28:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:36:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:09:908 (5,6,7) - 01:13:816 (3,4) -
00:38:774 (1,2,3) - to 00:39:530 (4,5,6) - which very close yet separated by 1/4 and 1/2 and many more.
The most easier way to avoid this issues is to make the 1/2 note rhythm on this map become more farther so it'll be easier to point it on gameplay especially at HD mode, i hope you understand what i mean xD.. i try to keep it as simple as possible ><

00:14:572 (1) - A clap here at slider end may fit perfectly according to the bgm imo
00:29:698 (3) - Pls move this farther from (2) or make it closer to (4) for readibility issue, since it was looks like same rhythm yet it's not
00:31:841 - The gap between (4) and (5) maybe a bit confusing, i'd add note here since you can hear a sound. Also it' be easier to follow
00:43:690 (3) - Delete note instead or make them closer just as same reason as i explained before
00:46:337 (5) - the flow would be more cool with this Ctrl g'ed imo
00:54:152 (6) - move them farther pls ;w; . this way very confusing after 00:51:883 (4,6,7) - orzzz

[Hard]
00:23:396 (5,6) - this blanket could be more better imo
00:40:791 (1) - i think you forget a finish here
00:47:093 (2) - as you were following vocal on the pattern before 00:45:328 (3) - , i'd like to see this as a triplet or duplet so you'd catch the vocal too
01:27:681 (3,5) - maybe you could make them symmetrical ? lol
also the last spinner is missing NC if you check aimod.

[Normal]
00:22:639 (1,2) - orzz sorry to be nazi but this blanket is really could be better
00:17:093 (2) - slider may work better here to emphasize the vocal, but its up to you
00:20:623 (1,2,3) - Hmm this is kind of boring, i'd recommend more following the vocal just like you did at 00:30:707 (1) -

00:58:942 (2) - shouldn;t this be NC ed just to fit your Insane ?
01:28:942 - how about adding a note ? the vocal pitch is pretty high here imo

[Easy]
00:21:127 (2,4) - I'd like to see them on same shape to create sweet contact on it. Try
00:58:942 (2) - same as normal
01:04:992 (3) - why dont you make it just like 01:00:959 (5) - ? i think it's more catchy that way


good luck :3
Topic Starter
Nyukai
appleeaterx

appleeaterx wrote:

:idea: General


* Check your BG dimensions. Hm, k o3o
* Yeah, the video is a bit 'meh'. Dunno if you already asked someone to get the video, but I have one for you here. I hope it's fine enough, but if you do plan to use this video, you'll probably need a video offset of around -55. You can find out where it should be, because at 01:07:009 (1) -, Shana's eyes must be fully opened. Thank you so much :3

Easy


* Missing video in this diff. Fixed
* 00:12:051 (4) - Nazi, but could you move this just a bit up? Would improve the flow by a bit. Sure.
* 00:32:219 - Useless green line True, lol.
* 00:40:791 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Well, it's an Easy diff so I guess it's supposed to be easy, but this is just the same rhythm all over again. Maybe you could try switching between two rhythms or something? (i personally dont have any good recommendation though ;w;) I think making this only here it's fine, more variety for me :3
* 00:58:438 (1) - Just wanted to say, that the spinner time should be fine. The player has 1639ms of recovery time, which is more than the minimum 1500ms. Yeah, I guess so :3
* 01:07:009 (1) - I guess it's just me, but I feel that the red points are too squished in, try this? It was intentional, anyways I've changed it a bit.

Nothing really jumps out to me, these are all just (dumb) suggestions. I think that this diff is actually already good to go now owo

Normal


* 00:18:354 (4) - Move to (44,192) instead? Putting this to the other side of the slider would keep the flow going. Nice~
* 00:22:639 (1,2) - Yeah, this blanket is off - please try to fix it (just move 1's end to the right a bit) Should be fine now.
* 00:32:219 - Useless green line ;_; Yep, my fault >:
* 00:32:471 (2) - There's a clap sound in the song, why not add one? It doesn't fit for me.
* 01:06:757 (4) - Yeah, I think you missed one here as well >_> I agree here.
* 01:08:522 (3) - Just a small thing that I noticed, not a problem or anything. But with all your other 1/2 slider you have a small curve in them. Would be nice here, or else you have 3 straight sliders right after each other :c 01:06:253 (3) - This slider is straight too. I don't see any problem here :3u
* 01:23:144 (1,2) - Where's your constant 1.3x distance? My fault, fixed.

Clean diff! Couldn't find a lot, I like your use of rhythm!

Insane


* 00:16:085 (8) - I do hear a sound on the slider end here... quite strong actually. Add a clap? Hm... It's fine I guess.
* 00:11:799 (6,7) - Are the supposed to be a blanket? If they should be, I think you can do better than this :3 Fixed a bit.
* 00:23:396 (4) - I'm a bit unsure about the clap on the slider end, because it's not an actual clap sound in the song. It's just the bass and you didn't hitsound the bass throughout the whole diff x_x It fits imo ;w;
* 00:24:908 (2) - I'm wondering why you have an offbeat slider here. If you just CTRL+G (2,3) for rhythm only, it'd work the same way as 00:16:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - with absolutely no offbeat rhythms. Because the vocals, the slider here is fine.
* 00:58:816 - I'd add a note here on the blue tick. There's no other instrument you can really follow here, because only the vocals are present here, and there's clearly a vocal note here. Otherwise other 1/4 rhythms like 00:59:698 (4,5) - wouldn't really make sense anymore. Maybe, but I want to keep all the pattern as it is. Just to make a ~calm~ part before kiai, since there are vocals and not music.
* 00:30:707 (1) - Add a clap on the slider end? Sounds good at least for me.
* 00:31:589 (4) - Again, only bass sound here but there's a clap. I'd actually add a clap on 00:31:211 (3) - 's slider end where the actual clap is. As I've said, it fits imo.
* 00:32:471 - I think you should add a clap here on the red tick as well o_o Doesn't fit here, I didn't want to add any hitsound there.
* 00:36:757 (1,2,3) - You should get more opinions on these. I didn't have problems with it, but these 3/4 sliders are like almost spaced the same as a normal 1/2 rhythm, for example 00:35:749 (6,7) - , but I guess it's fine since you used a lot of rhythms like 00:28:564 (7,1) - However, you should consider spacing them normally like 00:40:791 (1,2) - Hm, since it's slow BPM, should be fine. However, I'll think about it.
* 00:39:278 (3) - Missing clap here? It was intentional, but it fits I guess.
* 00:40:286 (7) - I hear a double-clap rhythm here, so I think you should also add one on the slider end. Sure, should be good.
* 00:44:698 (7) - Yeah, here as well. I think a clap fits here good with the extra sound that's present here. Sounds fine.
* 00:52:639 (7) - Clap on the slider end here as well? Not sure here.
* 01:02:471 (8,1) - I'd have at least 1.0x DS here, dunno why it's so low here. Moved (8), it was a mistake.
* 01:03:858 (4) - Uhmm, again clap on the slider end? There's a sound there (sounds weird with 25% playback rate, but if you listen it to 100% it actually makes sense) Yeah, maybe.
* 01:04:992 (3,4) - This blanket is also off ;w; (sorry for mentioning these shit blanket things ;_;) No problem, anyways it wasn't my intention here :3u It's not a blanket.
* 01:11:925 (4) - If you agreed with all those clap suggestions, add one here as well :3 Yep.
* 01:16:841 (1) - I personally think that S:C1 whistles would fit this part (especially the slider end here) really well, but you'll have to add a lot more green lines etc dunno if you want to do that.., so you can ignore this owo You are right but I'm not good with hitsounds indeed ;w;
* 01:28:060 (4,5) - This really confused me, especially since you just spaced it normally with (3,4)... I highly recommend just to keep DS here. B-But the blanket orz
* 01:29:446 (2) - What about splitting this slider up into two circles instead? Both the vocals and the clap would get a good emphasis, and it'd be consistent with 01:23:144 (1,2,3) - I prefer to use a slider for the vocals.

Almost Andrea map, especially with a Shana song. Good job mapping it, I'd only check the hitsounds a bit and then it should be ready owo

abuse contact me when you need me again, i love symmetry maps *_*

oh yea, here's the real thing

good luck ~

Momochikun

Momochikun wrote:

hi, as requested on my queue :3

I'd recommend adding silent normal-sliderslide here.. even if the sounds doesn't really bother in higher diff. But in Easy and Normal which has many long sliders, the sliderslide sound is really noticeable which sometimes it could bother players imo >< Yeah, maybe... I'll try.

[Insane]
hmm.. honestly i feel confused with the inconsistency of Ds in most of 1/4 rhythm part here, at the intro 00:11:547 (5,6) - something as far as this were seperated by 1/4. But later 00:27:555 (4,5) - it was closer yet different rhythm. And it was happen a lot on the map just like 00:28:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:36:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:09:908 (5,6,7) - 01:13:816 (3,4) -
00:38:774 (1,2,3) - to 00:39:530 (4,5,6) - which very close yet separated by 1/4 and 1/2 and many more.
The most easier way to avoid this issues is to make the 1/2 note rhythm on this map become more farther so it'll be easier to point it on gameplay especially at HD mode, i hope you understand what i mean xD.. i try to keep it as simple as possible >< Maybe, but being an insane and slow BPM, I don't see a big problem :3u At least for now.

00:14:572 (1) - A clap here at slider end may fit perfectly according to the bgm imo Sure.
00:29:698 (3) - Pls move this farther from (2) or make it closer to (4) for readibility issue, since it was looks like same rhythm yet it's not Did something different.
00:31:841 - The gap between (4) and (5) maybe a bit confusing, i'd add note here since you can hear a sound. Also it' be easier to follow Okay.
00:43:690 (3) - Delete note instead or make them closer just as same reason as i explained before Adding this sometimes it's fine o3o Due the slow BPM.
00:46:337 (5) - the flow would be more cool with this Ctrl g'ed imo True.
00:54:152 (6) - move them farther pls ;w; . this way very confusing after 00:51:883 (4,6,7) - orzzz Something similar as before.

[Normal]
00:22:639 (1,2) - orzz sorry to be nazi but this blanket is really could be better Already fixed with another mod.
00:17:093 (2) - slider may work better here to emphasize the vocal, but its up to you Slider fits better here 00:17:597 (3) - for me.
00:20:623 (1,2,3) - Hmm this is kind of boring, i'd recommend more following the vocal just like you did at 00:30:707 (1) - I'm trying to not follow blue ticks in this Normal ><

00:58:942 (2) - shouldn;t this be NC ed just to fit your Insane ? Maybe, but since I've started before kiai, I think it's fine due the vocals already started so I added NC previously.
01:28:942 - how about adding a note ? the vocal pitch is pretty high here imo Sure.

[Easy]
00:21:127 (2,4) - I'd like to see them on same shape to create sweet contact on it. Try Yep, done.
00:58:942 (2) - same as normal Same.
01:04:992 (3) - why dont you make it just like 01:00:959 (5) - ? i think it's more catchy that way I prefer 01:04:992 (3,4) - in this part, the others one is better catching vocal.


good luck :3

Thanks a lot guys, now waiting for Sonnyc :3
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