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Mona Mor - Yume o Kanaete Doraemon

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Avena
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, January 10, 2015 at 11:46:08 AM

Artist: Mona Mor
Title: Yume o Kanaete Doraemon
Source: ドラえもん
Tags: Hebrew Israel Anime Dub Cover Opening Tv Size Estellia- Doraemon Fujiko F. Fujio 藤子・F・不二雄 דורימון שיר פתיחה
BPM: 123
Filesize: 3359kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Estellia's Normal (1.53 stars, 89 notes)
  2. Hard (2.37 stars, 195 notes)
Download: Mona Mor - Yume o Kanaete Doraemon
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Doraemon Hebrew opening :3
Hard: Done by me
Normal: Done by Estellia-

@Modders: The first beat of this is cut in the hebrew dub because Israel is filled with unprofessional music editors, Don't bother pointing the negative offset because it's fine.
emilia
Not WIP anymore >w<
1.51 stars ~ Barely scraped it ~ 0 HS, awaiting for confirmation ~

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Jewbagle.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54334
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 7667,23277,38887,70106
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Yume wo Kanaete Doraemon
TitleUnicode:夢をかなえてドラえもん
Artist:Mona Mor
ArtistUnicode:מונה מור
Creator:Priti
Version:Estellia's Normal
Source:Doraemon
Tags:Hebrew Israel Anime Dub Cover ドラえもん Opening Tv Size Mao Estellia-
BeatmapID:568810
BeatmapSetID:246990

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"doraemon11.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
-137,487.80487804878,4,2,1,50,1,0


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Combo2 : 17,227,222
Combo3 : 111,188,251
Combo4 : 167,248,225

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Kyouren
I think your bg is ugly
Use this BG:


Add in source:ドラえもん (that original japanese tittle)
Add in tags: Doraemon Fujiko F. Fujio 藤子・F・不二雄
Why You add Mao in tags? He make a diff?, or what your reason?

NO KDS~
Topic Starter
Avena
Mao is the name of the original japanese singer lol
I'll fix the tags asap.
Avishay
Can I ask how did you find the metadata?
emilia
Priti searched really hard everywhere for it
Kyouren
Change again soucre, because i know this song (this song for doraemon the movie)

Source: 映画 ドラえもん : のび太と緑の巨人伝
Add in tags: Doraemon the Movie: Nobita and the Green Giant Legend Eiga Doraemon Nobita to Midori no Kyojinden

Sorry if this long~

EDIT:

Here the website:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Doraemon:_ ... %28film%29
Topic Starter
Avena
This isn't from the movie, it's from the anime, I heard the song when I watched it.
Hard
Mod because I want to


General:
  1. I guess the hitsounds are a bit too loud. It's more hitsounds than song for me and it's a bit irritating. Maybe quiet it down or find a louder mp3. (I saw it's already on 45% but it's still too loud)
Hard

  1. 00:06:692 (3) - I suggest you remove that whistle. Before you only used whistle for one certain note and suddenly you changed that and I guess it's a bit to much. You should only emphasize that higher flute, imo. The lower one is not strong enough. Also before you use
  2. 00:08:968 - I don't think this should be a sliderend. There's that dominant flute (lol that words together sound weird) and I think they should be circles. Otherwise it feels like something is missing, imo. Maybe change the rhythm into something like this:
  3. 00:14:334 - again that dominant note on a sliderend and it just doesn't fit
  4. 00:21:326 (1,2,3,4) - remove the whistle from every middle of those things. So there's only whistles on sliderstart and end. The emphasize is on the 1 and 3 and the 2 is a bit quieter you should show that.
  5. 00:24:253 (4) - same as 00:08:968
  6. 00:26:529 - ^ again that note on the sliderend
  7. 00:36:936 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:21:326 (1,2,3,4)
  8. 00:39:862 (2) - this should be 2 circles and not one slider, imo. it's two times the same sound. "ta" and "ta" so you shouldn't subordinate the second one
  9. guess that's all. nice map

Normal

  1. 00:45:716 - I don't think you should ignore that dominant note. The slider also starts a bit later than the singer and it plays weird enough to change it.
  2. i didn't find anything else in this normal. i'm sorry. i don't know what to say take a star or something just leave me alone...

hope it helped at least a bit? ^^
Topic Starter
Avena
Fixed everything, about the last suggestion, I did something completely different to match the way the words are separated on that part.
emilia
Priti help me apply the mods for my map, my computer isn't working as of late, am trying to get it fixed ASAP, sorry x,x
Topic Starter
Avena
About Normal, the vocals are wayyy more dominant on that part so no fixy.
Zetera
Hi, I came to equalize yet again because of the ~Puzzle~ .

Remind: I am not the best at standard modding, don't judge me.. :c
[General]

The main problem I see in this map are the hitsounds. The hitnormal is way too intense for such a song, furthermore it's a bass sound that does not even fit to this kind of song or genre.Lowering the volume could help. This was already suggested and fixed, but the problem is still unsolved. That's why I'd recommend to use different hitsounds.' I tested a couple and found out that the default hitsounds are not bad and there are a lot of alternative hitsounds to use.

[Normal]
|I don't really understand how the whistles in the beginning are used. I can't find any system there. If there is none, then use them on every 1st and 3rd beat. This only applies to the beginning since I can see kind of a system in the Kiai, however, that one also has some unfitting parts.
|00:21:326 (1) - This could flow better, I have a feeling as if the slider was a bit squished because of the circular form. What about making the curve a bit more open?
|01:15:960 (3,4) - This pattern cannot form a good blanket unless you completely deform one of the sliders. You could try to avoid a pattern that forms either a circle in the middle or a blanket or you could improve the pattern into a blanket. But it's not really a problem.

[Hard]

Hmm.. really solid. I hope I can find something at all..

|00:56:936 (2) - Might be a stylistic remark, but as the slider is, it doesn't provide any flow in connection with the previous one. I expected the slider to go to the right, not to the left. What about something like this?

Good luck with the mapset. Is someone still making an easy? (Somehow I feel like this set is incomplete, don't know if it was already rankable without it.)
Topic Starter
Avena

Sala- wrote:

Hi, I came to equalize yet again because of the ~Puzzle~ .

Remind: I am not the best at standard modding, don't judge me.. :c
[General]

The main problem I see in this map are the hitsounds. The hitnormal is way too intense for such a song, furthermore it's a bass sound that does not even fit to this kind of song or genre.Lowering the volume could help. This was already suggested and fixed, but the problem is still unsolved. That's why I'd recommend to use different hitsounds.' I tested a couple and found out that the default hitsounds are not bad and there are a lot of alternative hitsounds to use. I really like the way they add up to the song, unchanged

[Normal]
|I don't really understand how the whistles in the beginning are used. I can't find any system there. If there is none, then use them on every 1st and 3rd beat. This only applies to the beginning since I can see kind of a system in the Kiai, however, that one also has some unfitting parts. Fixed
|00:21:326 (1) - This could flow better, I have a feeling as if the slider was a bit squished because of the circular form. What about making the curve a bit more open? It flows just fine due to the SV being slow
|01:15:960 (3,4) - This pattern cannot form a good blanket unless you completely deform one of the sliders. You could try to avoid a pattern that forms either a circle in the middle or a blanket or you could improve the pattern into a blanket. But it's not really a problem. It's really cute as it is, unchanged

[Hard]

Hmm.. really solid. I hope I can find something at all..

|00:56:936 (2) - Might be a stylistic remark, but as the slider is, it doesn't provide any flow in connection with the previous one. I expected the slider to go to the right, not to the left. What about something like this? The change in music justifies the flow break imo

Good luck with the mapset. Is someone still making an easy? (Somehow I feel like this set is incomplete, don't know if it was already rankable without it.)
Thank you for modding~
Also, there won't be an Easy o3o
koreapenguin
mp3 use this http://puu.sh/ec5A1/d466828389.mp3

offset is... i don't know
Topic Starter
Avena
Thank you~
Also changed hitsound volume, offset and resnapped all objects properly.
Secretpipe
We started an IRC mod yesterday and continued today~

The mapset is really clean owo

We fixed :

  1. Blankets in normal
  2. NC errorz in normal
  3. Spinner gap in normal
  4. Some slider shapes


kd if u want lol
Sonnyc
[Normal]
01:03:349 (1,1) - This NC spam doesn't seems to work nice nor fits something to emphasize something. Remove NC please, also for consistency with 01:18:959 (2,3).
01:11:642 (2) - Fix spacing if you care.

[Hard]
00:46:113 (4) - This should be snapped with 1/8.
Topic Starter
Avena
Applied all.
Sonnyc


Rebubbled.
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