00:26:630 (9) - Start a new combo.
00:51:830 (9) - Perhaps make it into a repeatable slider?
00:51:930 (10) - Delete the note. Something like this
http://puu.sh/dDQyh/de46ae118a.jpg . The random 1/4 doesn't go with your current theme and therefore feels weird.
01:04:430 - Add a note here.
01:24:230 - I think Kiai time would fit here (it's a little similar to the Kiai time at the end).
01:49:830 - End Kiai time.
02:41:030 - Start Kiai time.
02:54:230 (2) - Reverse the starting and ending point of the slider (press CTRL + H while the slider is selected, but don't move it too much after reversing).
02:55:030 (4) - ^
03:06:630 - End Kiai time.
03:06:630 (9) - Start a new combo.
03:09:430 - Add a note here.
03:15:830 - Add a note here.
03:18:580 (6) - Move it forward 1/8 beats (it feels really off).
03:19:830 (2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7) - and so on, make the notes a bit harder (perhaps make an interesting pattern or increase the distance between circles).
03:33:830 (2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9) - and so on, make the stream a little bit harder ( ^ ).
Match Overall Difficulty with Approach Rate (AR and OD should both be 9).
That's about it for me. Please do keep in mind that these are all what I think should be done. If you don't like these, keep yours.
