1. Prologue (6.85 stars, 1463 notes)

1. 無音のslider tickと無音のslider-slideを、同じパートで両方使用するのは原則Unrankableだったと思います。どちらか削除を検討してみては。
2. tagの'ゴールデンタイム'をSourseに持ってくると良いです

1. 02:23:700 (3) - unsnappedです。上のtimelineをちょっと動かせば直ります
2. 04:31:450 (2) - sliderの終点ですが、普通に赤線に置いた方が、drumと合ってる気がします。

P o M u T a wrote:

#modreqs

[General]

1. 無音のslider tickと無音のslider-slideを、同じパートで両方使用するのは原則Unrankableだったと思います。どちらか削除を検討してみては。
2. tagの'ゴールデンタイム'をSourseに持ってくると良いです

[EDITED]

1. 02:23:700 (3) - unsnappedです。上のtimelineをちょっと動かせば直ります
2. 04:31:450 (2) - sliderの終点ですが、普通に赤線に置いた方が、drumと合ってる気がします。

nice map
おしまい

Rilene wrote:

AESTHETIC MODDING QUEUE
____________________________________________

EDITED
Since you said "EDITED" is for ranked so I'll mod this.

00:08:711 (5) - It would look better if it is curved like this.
I like current pattern
00:28:950 (3) - Make it slightly curved downwards?
done
00:32:950 (3) - Make it curved more? It looks bit too straight.
I like current pattern
00:34:450 (5,6) - Bit too far.
done
00:35:700 (1,2) - Looks bit bad, maybe make it like this?
done
00:37:950 (2) - Make it more curve, in a same direction.
I like current pattern
00:38:450 (5,6) - Bit too near.
done

00:39:700 (1,2) - Make it like this?
I like current pattern
00:41:950 (2) - Make it more curved downward.
I like current pattern
00:42:887 (2,3) - Move them a bit away from 1.
done
00:47:200 (4,6) - Not a perfect blanket.
done
00:48:325 (4) - Move it to (x: 220 / y: 228) then move - 00:48:450 (5) - to (x: 446 / y: 255)
I put (5) to (463,274)
01:04:950 (3,4) - Slighty not a perfect blanket but not sure does this matter or not since it is spaced out.
I like current pattern
01:14:700 (1,3) - For some reason, they look quite weird but it is ok, maybe it is better to use this slider.
I like current pattern
01:18:700 (5) - Maybe a NC?
I like current pattern
01:50:200 (1) - Move them up? Just to prevent it touching the slider below.
This is on accord
02:09:200 (1) - Make it like this?
I like current pattern
02:14:575 (3) - Looks ok but can be better IMO by moving the points to more centered.
done
02:14:950 (4) - Almost a perfect triangle, try move to (x: 444 / y: 108).
done
02:40:700 (3) - Bit too straight, IMO.
I like current pattern
03:00:200 (3,5,1) - Why not just use the same slider, copy paste it and rotate it 120 degrees?
This digree is beautiful IMO.
03:06:200 (1) - Slider art looks pretty weird, on the crooked part.
done
03:09:200 (4) - The curve between the crooks looks strange, maybe move it to nearer the center of them?
done
03:31:700 (3,4,5,6,7) - You should have use this mini stream to blanket the 2.
I like current pattern
03:36:575 (2,3) - Make the mini jumps between these? It both looks and play bit strange. Even moving just not to let the circles touch each other is already good, IMO.
done
03:44:200 (1,3) - I love how you did this.
<3
03:56:200 (1) - Bit too straight, I guess.
I like current pattern
04:45:450 (2) - Move this down, just not to prevent slider overlaps with 1.
This is on accord
05:01:700 (3,4,5,6,7) - How about just make the 1/2 jumps? It feels better IMO, to emphasize the ending.
done

Good luck on getting ranked!

arnoldusj wrote:

honestly very difficult to find fault on this map, but I find some mistakes like 01:53:825 (2) - the distance is not in accordance with 01:54:075 (4)
and also please improved there is some distance off the line, example 05:01:700 (3)

1. 00:18:950 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 正六角形作ってもいいかも？見栄えは良くなると思います
   
   img

   
   code

   [HitObjects]
   435,109,18950,2,0,L|339:117,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   149,96,19200,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   306,26,19325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   190,187,19450,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   208,16,19575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   289,198,19700,6,0,P|329:214|441:206,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:29:450 (6) - 00:29:950 (2) - にblanketさせるなら↓
   
   code

   [HitObjects]
   207,321,29450,2,0,P|239:354|281:360,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:45:700 (1,2) - 配置の提案です 同じメロディが続く後半は意図的に流れに反したスライダーを置いているのはわかりますが、前半部分はここだけが外れたように見えます
   
   img

   
4. 01:07:200 (3,4,5) - 16分連打で流れを殺すくらいなら、末端2つをキックに変えた方がいいんじゃないかなとも思います、あくまで私の好みです！
5. 01:16:200 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - cool
6. 02:20:700 (3,4,5) - 直角二等辺三角形(響きが懐かしい)にすればより綺麗に見えます
   
   img

   
   code

   [HitObjects]
   81,232,140700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   240,89,140825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   232,240,140950,1,8,0:0:0:0:

7. 02:58:200 (1) - ギリギリ切れてます
   
   img

   

sionKotori wrote:

m4m

[Extra]

1. 00:18:950 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 正六角形作ってもいいかも？見栄えは良くなると思いますdone
   
   img

   
   code

   [HitObjects]
   435,109,18950,2,0,L|339:117,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   149,96,19200,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   306,26,19325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   190,187,19450,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   208,16,19575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   289,198,19700,6,0,P|329:214|441:206,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:29:450 (6) - 00:29:950 (2) - にblanketさせるなら↓00:29:950 (2) - を動かす形で解決しました
   
   code

   [HitObjects]
   207,321,29450,2,0,P|239:354|281:360,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:45:700 (1,2) - 配置の提案です 同じメロディが続く後半は意図的に流れに反したスライダーを置いているのはわかりますが、前半部分はここだけが外れたように見えます done
   
   img

   
4. 01:07:200 (3,4,5) - 16分連打で流れを殺すくらいなら、末端2つをキックに変えた方がいいんじゃないかなとも思います、あくまで私の好みです！01:06:700 (1,2) - あたりからの流れがすきなのでこのままで！
5. 01:16:200 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - cool
6. 02:20:700 (3,4,5) - 直角二等辺三角形(響きが懐かしい)にすればより綺麗に見えますdone
   
   img

   
   code

   [HitObjects]
   81,232,140700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   240,89,140825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   232,240,140950,1,8,0:0:0:0:

7. 02:58:200 (1) - ギリギリ切れてますdone
   
   img

   

ひたすら難しそう！グッドラック！

xDarxen wrote:

Hullo, here is my (late) mod

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  General

1. The current BG file is 1081x768, please change it to 1024x768.
   done
2. Increase the Audio LeadIn to 2000ms. To fix this you go to the osu. file and look for audio leadin and write it down 2000 and that's it.
   We already have 1700+ms before first note, so don't need more IMO.

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  EDITED

1. The stack leniency is set to 0.2, which is below the recommended of 0.3. Please make it 0.3, the effect will be the same though.
   No. The difference between 0.2 and 0.3 is serious for the beautiful.
2. 00:58:200 (3,6) - This overlap seems unintentional. Either stack them or move 00:58:575 (6) more left.
   done
3. 01:33:700 (1) - This touches the health bar. Lower 01:33:700 (1,2) both of them.
   done
4. 01:36:700 (1,2) - The spacing between those is completely different than 01:34:700 (1,2) and they are all 3/4 sliders, which is really confusing. Maybe lower the spacing a little bit?
   No. They are not so problem IMO.
5. Same with 01:38:700 (1,2)
   So, same it is.
6. 02:58:575 (2,3) - This looks kinda ugly. Maybe move 02:58:575 (2) up and left so that 02:58:700 (3) blankets it? Or change the shape of 02:58:700 (3) idk.
   Uh, I think they are not so. If others point this again, I'll do something
7. 03:24:700 (3) - Move a little down for perfect blanket.
   done
8. 03:55:950 (7,1) - These two are nearly touching. Move or curve 03:56:200 (1) a little up.
   done
9. 05:01:950 (5) - Add NC, since it's the last note?
   add NC on 05:01:700 (1) -

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  Feedback

  
  You did a great job on this, it is really enjoyable and it is noticable that you gave a lot of effort. Good luck! Take a star

EvilElvis wrote:

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