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HeHeJSM - YENA (Dubstep Remix)

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Topic Starter
Euny
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 4월 15일 수요일 at 오전 7:05:04

Artist: HeHeJSM
Title: YENA (Dubstep Remix)
Tags: [_Zzz_] alarido eINess 사랑했나봐 Kim Jo Han 김조한 You Are My Girl
BPM: 140
Filesize: 2385kb
Play Time: 00:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alarido's Hard+ (3.18 stars, 123 notes)
  2. Easy (1.32 stars, 52 notes)
  3. eINess' Extra (3.99 stars, 148 notes)
  4. Insane (3.49 stars, 124 notes)
  5. Normal (1.6 stars, 60 notes)
  6. Zzz's Hard (2.58 stars, 84 notes)
Download: HeHeJSM - YENA (Dubstep Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Set
Easy - By. Me
Normal - By. Me
Zzz's Hard - By. [ Zzz ]
Alarido's hard+ - By. Alarido
Insane - By. Me
eINess' Extra - By.eINess


Habiholic
handsome
Habiholic
Sonnyc







you guys have to watch this video.
this song is a dubstep made from editing a scene of overreaction in a certain kdrama



#2
MitiS_old_1
겟난 하나 넣어도 되나여
Topic Starter
Euny

Latte- wrote:

라떼님이라면 환영이다용!:D 아 섹스 다음은 이거에요
Tenseki
From #PM (random mod)
[Easy]
00:22:356 (5,1) - nc swap
00:29:213 (3) - nc
00:45:111 (4,1,2,3,4) - 힛사 넣어주심이 훨 나을것 같아요.

[Normal]
00:07:785 (2) - 리버스 헤드쪽에 피니쉬
00:33:499 (2,1) - 각각 ctrl g 해주는게 동선에 더 맞는듯, 만약 바꾸시면 00:35:642 (1) - 위치도 바꿔주세요
00:42:480 (1,2) -
[Zzz's Hard]
00:20:642 (1) - 굴곡넣는게 더 나은것같네요
Topic Starter
Euny

Tenseki wrote:

From #PM (random mod)
[Easy]
00:22:356 (5,1) - nc swap - fixxxxxxxed
00:29:213 (3) - nc - fixxxxxxxed
00:45:111 (4,1,2,3,4) - 힛사 넣어주심이 훨 나을것 같아요. - fixxxxxxxed

[Normal]
00:07:785 (2) - 리버스 헤드쪽에 피니쉬 - 탁 치는 소리땜에 이건 지금이 더 잘어울려서!!
00:33:499 (2,1) - 각각 ctrl g 해주는게 동선에 더 맞는듯, 만약 바꾸시면 00:35:642 (1) - 위치도 바꿔주세요 - 우악! 플로우상태는 지금이 이뻐보여 냅둘게여!
00:42:480 (1,2) - - fixxxxxxxed
모딩 너무 고마워요 <3
Ranger
from queue

[General]

  1. 개인적으로 추천하는 콤보색상입니다. 회색 두개는 뒷부분 커쥬마이걸에 넣으면 어울릴것 같아서요
[Easy]

제가 할 말은 아닙니다만, 스피너가 없는게 아쉽네요. 이지 난이도는 보통 스피너로 랭킹 많이 갈려서 스피너 넣어주시는게 좋아요

  1. 00:16:356 (1) - 여기 NC 없어도 될것같아요. 이런거 태그할때 좀 신경쓰여요
  2. 00:45:637 (1) - 끝부분에 심벌소리 들리니 피니시 추천합니다
  3. 00:39:499 (1) - NC 지우는거 추천합니다. 꾸준히 NC간격 길다가 여기서 급 짧아진 느낌 들어서인데 00:27:499 (1) 이거처럼 갑자기 노래가 확 바뀌는 부분도 아닌거 같아서요
  4. 00:48:269 (4) - 뒷부분 클랩 빼먹으신듯(그리고 반복구간에 휘슬 추천합니다)
[Normal]

HP가 하드랑 같네요. 1정도 줄이시는거 추천합니다

  1. 00:27:499 (1) - 이거 이지처럼 모양 재미있게 만들면 좋을것 같아요
  2. 00:34:356 (1) - 뒷부분 클랩 잘어울려요
  3. 00:35:642 (1) - NC 지우시는거 추천합니다. 태그할때 어려워져요ㅠ
[Zzz's Hard]

  1. 00:19:785 (3) - 이거 긴슬라 하나보다는 1/2슬라 하나랑 노트 하나로 바꾸는게 더 어울리는것 같아요
  2. 00:22:356 (1) - 이거 한칸 옆으로 놔주세요. 그럼 딱 전의 두 노트 중간이라 좋네요
  3. 00:35:642 (2) - Ctrl+G? 하드인데 점프 전혀 없는게 좀 아쉬워서요..
[Fang's Insane]

  1. 00:03:499 (2) - 피통 좀 까이는데 NC 추천합니다
  2. 00:38:213 (2) - 이거 반복 슬라이더로 만드는게 노래랑 더 어울려요
  3. 00:50:901 (7) - 조용한 부분이라 피니시 좀 어색하네요, 지우는 것보다는 불륨 줄이시는거 추천합니다
GL :3
Topic Starter
Euny
Ranger 님 모딩 전에,

키아이를 새로 넣어뒀다.

맵셋 꼭 재다운이나 업뎃하고나서, 픽스 부탁할게 애들앙.
Topic Starter
Euny

Ranger wrote:

from queue

[General]

  1. 개인적으로 추천하는 콤보색상입니다. 회색 두개는 뒷부분 커쥬마이걸에 넣으면 어울릴것 같아서요
캬... 컬러선택 끝내주시네 역시 빠워레잉져. 2번콤보빼고 비슷한 컬러로 맞췄습니다. 고맙습니다.

[Easy]

제가 할 말은 아닙니다만, 스피너가 없는게 아쉽네요. 이지 난이도는 보통 스피너로 랭킹 많이 갈려서 스피너 넣어주시는게 좋아요
-ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 자기두 스핀없이 만들면성 > <..아니 저두 자타공인스핀여왕으로써, 스핀없는 슬픈맵을 만든다는게 쉬운일이아니었어요 ㅠㅠ ㅇㅈㄹ근데 노래가 너무 다이네믹하게 바로바로이어져 버리는통에, 어쩔 수 없이..

  1. 00:16:356 (1) - 여기 NC 없어도 될것같아요. 이런거 태그할때 좀 신경쓰여요 - fixed
  2. 00:45:637 (1) - 끝부분에 심벌소리 들리니 피니시 추천합니다- fixed
  3. 00:39:499 (1) - NC 지우는거 추천합니다. 꾸준히 NC간격 길다가 여기서 급 짧아진 느낌 들어서인데 00:27:499 (1) 이거처럼 갑자기 노래가 확 바뀌는 부분도 아닌거 같아서요- fixed
  4. 00:48:269 (4) - 뒷부분 클랩 빼먹으신듯(그리고 반복구간에 휘슬 추천합니다)- fixed
[Normal]

HP가 하드랑 같네요. 1정도 줄이시는거 추천합니다- fixed

  1. 00:27:499 (1) - 이거 이지처럼 모양 재미있게 만들면 좋을것 같아요 - 이지에선 키아이 시작부분이 다 슬라이더 끝이라 노멀은 좀 다른느낌줘보려고 일부러 저렇게 넣었어용 ㅎ
  2. 00:34:356 (1) - 뒷부분 클랩 잘어울려요- fixed
  3. 00:35:642 (1) - NC 지우시는거 추천합니다. 태그할때 어려워져요ㅠ- fixed
GL :3
모딩,스타 너무 감사합니다 > <!!!
[ Zzz ]

Ranger wrote:

[Zzz's Hard]

  1. 00:19:785 (3) - 이거 긴슬라 하나보다는 1/2슬라 하나랑 노트 하나로 바꾸는게 더 어울리는것 같아요
  2. 00:22:356 (1) - 이거 한칸 옆으로 놔주세요. 그럼 딱 전의 두 노트 중간이라 좋네요
  3. 00:35:642 (2) - Ctrl+G? 하드인데 점프 전혀 없는게 좀 아쉬워서요..
이유는 irc로 설명한거랑 같아요!

초반 앞부분도 살짝고침 솔찍히 리매핑하고싶긴하네 'ㅅ' ..
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: yena (dubstep remix).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 10463
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:YENA (Dubstep Remix)
TitleUnicode:지딸도 아닌 예나(Dubstep Remix)
Artist:HeHeJSM
ArtistUnicode:HeHeJSM
Creator:Euny
Version:Zzz's Hard
Source:
Tags:[_Zzz_] dark_fang 사랑했나봐
BeatmapID:622987
BeatmapSetID:244936

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80,284,46690,6,0,B|24:228|24:228|32:188|24:148,1,160.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,72,47480,2,0,L|256:72,1,160.000000596046,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,32,48269,2,0,B|358:39|358:103|350:111,1,80.000000298023,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,204,48795,1,2,0:0:0:0:
DahplA
Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

Fang's Insane
  1. 00:13:785 (1) - Blanket around 00:13:356 (2) - and 00:13:571 (3) -
  2. 00:14:642 (1) - Move this slider further down so it's not as clustered.
  3. 00:16:356 (1) - Blanket around 00:16:142 (3) -
  4. 00:20:428 (4) - Move to x: 249 y: 110 to stack with 00:19:570 (4) -
  5. 00:41:954 (2) - Move to x: 240 y: 164 to stack with 00:40:571 (2) -
  6. Try to incorporate more circles. Circle:Slider ratio is way too slider heavy.
Easy
  1. 00:14:213 (3) - Space a bit closer.
  2. 00:29:213 (3) - Replace with a single circle.
  3. 00:35:642 (4) - ^
  4. 00:21:928 (4) - ^
Topic Starter
Euny

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.
- was helpful thanks for mod.

Easy
  1. 00:14:213 (3) - Space a bit closer.- fixed
  2. 00:29:213 (3) - Replace with a single circle. - i know what do you want. but i like to this tempo. sorry.
  3. 00:35:642 (4) - ^ - also, sorry
  4. 00:21:928 (4) - ^ ^

:D and i updated zzz's hard please keep going for this map
Alarido
New diff's coming → http://puu.sh/gAyDE/0ca2af68a4.osu

Instructions:
  1. Right click over the link above and choose "Save As...". Save in your Desktop.
  2. Open the song at osu! editor and click File → Open Song Folder (or something like. It may vary according to your language if it's not in English)
  3. Copy the file to the song's folder.
  4. Enjoy (:
Topic Starter
Euny

Alarido wrote:

New diff's coming → http://puu.sh/gAyDE/0ca2af68a4.osu

Instructions: << LOL .. this guy> <....
  1. Right click over the link above and choose "Save As...". Save in your Desktop.
  2. Open the song at osu! editor and click File → Open Song Folder (or something like. It may vary according to your language if it's not in English)
  3. Copy the file to the song's folder.
  4. Enjoy (:
! so FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFAST.!!!!!!
i love you Ala


my map set is complete. so ready for mod \ > < /
Dark Fang
thank you for moddng
Topic Starter
Euny

Dark Fang wrote:

thank you for moddng

너무 형식적이잖아 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
meii18
Gift for your first qualified mapset
asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - important

General
  1. Found unused .wav files:
    - soft-hitfinish2.wav
    - soft-sliderslide2.wav
    - soft-slidertick5.wav
    - drum-hitfinish.wav
    - soft-hitclap2.wav
    - soft-slidertick4.wav

    Check them why they're unused
  2. Uncheck Widescreen Support since there's video not SB

Easy
  1. 00:10:356(2)- Delete green line cuz here N:C1 doesn't fit well the cymbal let's say I have not idea how to say ;w; and then add finish for consistency
  2. 00:15:499(1)- I feel a strong beat here which you ignore using reverse.I suggest to snap the slider from 1/1 to 1/2 I mean to remove the reverse and then adding a note for strong beat
  3. 00:27:499(1)- http://puu.sh/gBCo9/ece0e16578.jpg This slider looks how to say unnestetic and it can ruin the flow and the cursor movement. Try this : http://puu.sh/gBCzU/73793fb270.jpg to repair the flow and the cursor movement
Continue in few days I guess
Topic Starter
Euny

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Gift for your first qualified mapset
asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - important

General
  1. Found unused .wav files:
    - soft-hitfinish2.wav
    - soft-sliderslide2.wav
    - soft-slidertick5.wav
    - drum-hitfinish.wav
    - soft-hitclap2.wav
    - soft-slidertick4.wav

    Check them why they're unused
  2. Uncheck Widescreen Support since there's video not SB
    y~ fixed them all

Easy
  1. 00:10:356(2)- Delete green line cuz here N:C1 doesn't fit well the cymbal let's say I have not idea how to say ;w; and then add finish for consistency - yay, you are right.
  2. 00:15:499(1)- I feel a strong beat here which you ignore using reverse.I suggest to snap the slider from 1/1 to 1/2 I mean to remove the reverse and then adding a note for strong beat - okay i'll change later
  3. 00:27:499(1)- http://puu.sh/gBCo9/ece0e16578.jpg This slider looks how to say unnestetic and it can ruin the flow and the cursor movement. Try this : http://puu.sh/gBCzU/73793fb270.jpg to repair the flow and the cursor movement
    Continue in few days I guess - oh i love this shape xD

thank you my little sis
yugijedi
okay lets start :)

General

why does the vocal end of the song quality sounds like I'm scratching with my nail over a chalkboard :O :cry: in school

Easy

00:06:071 (2) - move it to 184/271

00:18:928 (1,2) - this blanket could really be improved

00:20:642 (3) - move it to 341/100

why not move the whole thing 00:23:213 (2,3,4,1) - to 138/318? It will avoid a ugly touch of 00:22:356 (1,3) - and the blanket of will be better ! ;)
00:26:642 (2,1,2) - move them to the right as well because of distance and then equal the distance to the next slider through moving 00:28:785 (2) - a bit down

sorry for these minithings but move 00:32:642 (1) - 1 up :D

00:41:428 (1) - the time distance to this slider is weird, but okay thats the song,, but i suggest to make 00:40:356 (4) - 1/1 so that it's more readable.

00:45:111 (4) - 282/104

00:47:216 (2) - ^

Normal

1/3 repeating slider (whole length 1/1) will go with the dubstep tone so smooth *__* instead of 00:12:071 (1) -

00:17:213 (1,1) - stack them better :)

00:20:642 (1) - I would move it up a bit for a better blanket..

00:27:499 (1,2) - thats just my personal opinion but these sliders should go with two extremely different tones, I would let the second slider be more "special" because of the tone

Hard

Here no placements, more rhythm-like improvements, cause this has to be improved before..

00:13:785 (1,2) - these to go wrong with the melody. replace them by a 3/4 repeating slider which goes from 00:13:785 to 00:14:428

00:22:785 (2) - make this one extended till the blue tick. check the distance then. to end this one at the white tick sounds weird.

1/3 repeating sliders instead of them 00:39:499 (1,2) - ?

Hyper

00:19:356 (2,3) - that WOULD be ok (I hate such patterns anyway, sorry :( ) IF the melodytone is a different one to the next ones (the square) so there would be a difference between the weird spaced stack and the square. but there is no difference so please change it.

change that into something which covers 1/3 beat, because 1/2 doesn't dominate here at all 00:26:213 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -

00:31:785 (3,4) - add a crazy slider instead of the, would be perfect :P

again 1/3 00:40:356 (3,4,5,6) - (maybe 1/3 starts even before)

00:50:901 one last circle here?

Insane

00:06:713 (3) - don't place this one random, I suggest to move the start of it under the end of 00:04:999 (1) - would be cool to play! and this under the end of the second slider again! "like a continue motion"

00:20:428 (4) - improve stack..

I cannot find more here.. nearly perfect.. A good mapset like everytime!
Topic Starter
Euny

yugijedi wrote:

okay lets start :)

General

why does the vocal end of the song quality sounds like I'm scratching with my nail over a chalkboard :O :cry: in school
- that vocal comes in drama sounds. made by drama + dub step. it is really weird song. so, vocal part quality is some shit. i hope so you understand it

Easy

00:06:071 (2) - move it to 184/271 - fixed

00:18:928 (1,2) - this blanket could really be improved - fixed

00:20:642 (3) - move it to 341/100 - fixed

why not move the whole thing 00:23:213 (2,3,4,1) - to 138/318? It will avoid a ugly touch of 00:22:356 (1,3) - and the blanket of will be better ! ;)
00:26:642 (2,1,2) - move them to the right as well because of distance and then equal the distance to the next slider through moving 00:28:785 (2) - a bit down - fixed

sorry for these minithings but move 00:32:642 (1) - 1 up :D - fixed

00:41:428 (1) - the time distance to this slider is weird, but okay thats the song,, but i suggest to make 00:40:356 (4) - 1/1 so that it's more readable.
- sorry i love this more :D

00:45:111 (4) - 282/104 - fixed

00:47:216 (2) - ^ - fixed

Normal

1/3 repeating slider (whole length 1/1) will go with the dubstep tone so smooth *__* instead of 00:12:071 (1) - hmm, i think it makes some noise to newbies

00:17:213 (1,1) - stack them better :) - fixed

00:20:642 (1) - I would move it up a bit for a better blanket.. - fixed

00:27:499 (1,2) - thats just my personal opinion but these sliders should go with two extremely different tones, I would let the second slider be more "special" because of the tone - i always made like 00:20:642 (1) - this. so, i know your suggest is really cool. but i want to keep this intentional.

I cannot find more here.. nearly perfect.. A good mapset like everytime!
thank you so much yugijedi!!! you always help me xDDDDDD
i love you (i mean really) LOL
Alarido

yugijedi wrote:

okay lets start :)

Hyper

00:19:356 (2,3) - that WOULD be ok (I hate such patterns anyway, sorry :( ) IF the melodytone is a different one to the next ones (the square) so there would be a difference between the weird spaced stack and the square. but there is no difference so please change it. ► Changed to undo the halfstacking here, replacing it by an edge flow.

change that into something which covers 1/3 beat, because 1/2 doesn't dominate here at all 00:26:213 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ► Going into simpler than the insanier, so kept.

00:31:785 (3,4) - add a crazy slider instead of the, would be perfect :P ► Done something.

again 1/3 00:40:356 (3,4,5,6) - (maybe 1/3 starts even before) ► feels perfect as now.

00:50:901 one last circle here? ► Yes.

I cannot find more here.. nearly perfect.. A good mapset like everytime!
@yugijedi > Thx

@Euny > Update > http://puu.sh/gEPm7/63a0bc953c.osu

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