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Uchida Maaya - Soushou Innocence

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Frobe
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 2월 10일 화요일 at 오후 5:17:22

Artist: Uchida Maaya
Title: Soushou Innocence
Source: 悪魔のリドル
Tags: akuma riddle opening no dap no_dap tv size tvsize
BPM: 205
Filesize: 3891kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.58 stars, 97 notes)
  2. Extra (5.3 stars, 365 notes)
  3. Hard (3.54 stars, 244 notes)
  4. No Dap's Insane (4.45 stars, 339 notes)
  5. Normal (2.23 stars, 168 notes)
Download: Uchida Maaya - Soushou Innocence
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Insane by No Dap

original mapset is here

my first ranked beatmap :>
Xinying
Don't kds this , small general areas , sorry for no mod , I think the map is good

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[General]
Include guest name in tags please
Is drum-hitfinish used? If not delete
Topic Starter
Frobe

Chocox wrote:

Don't kds this , small general areas , sorry for no mod , I think the map is good

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[General]
Include guest name in tags please it has already been added.
Is drum-hitfinish used? If not delete using to kiai time.
thank you :)
Narcissu

General

  1. use 4 colours in 4/4 song
  2. very good map~ it will rank soon imo

Extra

  1. 00:46:070 (1,2,3) - try 1/8 slider ?
  2. 01:26:607 (1,2,3) - spinner end ? distinguish SS


No Dap's Insane

  1. i suggest Slider Tick Rate use 1
  2. 01:08:753 - add a note to keep a serial rhythm ?

Hard

  1. 00:07:143 (3,1) - separate will easy read
  2. 00:51:046 (2) - 1/2 slider ? voice here

Normal

  1. 00:10:655 (3,4) - DS ……

all diff well done . star~
Ozato Fumika

Narcissu wrote:

No Dap's Insane

  1. i suggest Slider Tick Rate use 1 I think tick 2 is better
  2. 01:08:753 - add a note to keep a serial rhythm ? fixed
Thanks for modding~

SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: AUDIO.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 49535
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 38168
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Soushou Innocence
TitleUnicode:創傷イノセンス
Artist:Uchida Maaya
ArtistUnicode:内田真礼
Creator:Frobe
Version:No Dap's Insane
Source:悪魔のリドル
Tags:akuma no riddle opening dap no_dap
BeatmapID:564051
BeatmapSetID:243514

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.62
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"MOVIE.AVI"
0,0,"BG1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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364,276,44607,2,0,P|376:245|385:197,1,81,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,292,44899,5,10,0:0:0:0:
152,244,45046,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,196,45192,1,10,0:0:0:0:
184,344,45338,1,10,0:0:0:0:
328,324,45485,1,10,0:0:0:0:
232,228,45631,1,10,0:0:0:0:
264,380,45777,1,10,0:0:0:0:
312,236,45924,1,10,0:0:0:0:
160,268,46070,6,0,P|100:244|72:164,1,121.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,128,46363,2,0,L|232:116,1,121.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,164,46655,2,0,P|346:168|388:126,1,121.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,70,46948,6,0,B|472:108|452:156|452:156|468:172|480:200|468:216|452:216|440:188,1,182.250006952286,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,244,48704,5,4,0:0:0:0:
304,244,48997,6,0,L|296:180,2,40.5,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
306,318,49216,6,0,B|272:316|252:296|252:296|224:316|196:320|160:304|144:280|152:248,1,202.5,4|0,3:2|2:0,0:0:0:0:
214,194,49582,6,0,P|210:153|202:114,1,81,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,85,49875,2,0,P|321:78|362:77,1,81,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,146,50168,2,0,P|86:153|45:154,1,81,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,66,50460,1,8,0:0:0:0:
214,194,50607,6,0,P|298:206|362:158,1,162,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,160,51046,2,0,P|476:212|472:260,1,81,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,96,51338,2,0,P|396:44|400:-4,1,81,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,80,51631,1,8,0:0:0:0:
379,180,51777,6,0,P|339:176|301:164,1,81,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,96,52070,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,248,52216,2,0,P|310:286|313:327,1,81,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,244,52509,2,0,P|198:203|209:164,1,81,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,88,52802,1,10,0:0:0:0:
284,172,52948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,92,53094,6,0,P|408:96|460:168,1,121.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,208,53387,2,0,B|420:256|420:256|440:296|432:352,1,121.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,372,53680,2,0,P|312:356|296:320,1,81,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,208,53972,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,276,54119,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,276,54192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,276,54265,6,0,P|111:239|110:199,1,81,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,92,54558,2,0,L|120:64,1,81,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,160,54851,2,0,P|328:144|364:104,1,81,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,48,55143,1,8,0:0:0:0:
207,92,55290,6,0,P|184:167|221:236,1,162,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,284,55729,2,0,P|96:276|56:272,1,81,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,360,56021,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,296,56168,2,0,P|323:288|363:284,1,81,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,320,56460,6,0,P|472:279|469:239,1,81,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,200,56753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,112,56899,1,10,0:0:0:0:
332,60,57046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,112,57192,2,0,P|480:108|520:96,1,81,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,60,57485,2,0,P|288:64|248:76,1,81,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,264,57777,6,0,P|189:204|184:143,1,121.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,71,58070,2,0,P|133:36|78:55,1,121.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,120,58363,2,0,P|40:160|48:200,1,81,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,295,58655,5,8,0:0:0:0:
154,271,58728,1,8,0:0:0:0:
178,254,58801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,246,58874,1,8,0:0:0:0:
238,248,58948,6,0,B|320:272|320:220|397:242,1,162,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,324,59387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,168,59533,2,0,B|260:108|280:48|280:48|303:79,1,162,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,160,59972,6,0,P|143:159|104:151,1,81,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,48,60265,2,0,P|88:48|127:56,1,81,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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284,168,60851,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,100,60997,2,0,P|392:94|432:89,1,81,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,216,61290,6,0,P|428:248|344:204,1,162,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,61729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,112,61875,2,0,P|231:152|238:192,1,81,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,152,62168,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,44,62314,1,2,0:0:0:0:
231,112,62460,6,0,P|191:114|151:107,1,81,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,183,62753,2,0,P|40:145|32:105,1,81,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,252,63046,2,0,P|112:300|104:344,1,81,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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328,212,63631,6,0,P|368:210|406:197,1,81,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,96,63924,2,0,P|219:97|181:110,1,81,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,127,64216,2,0,P|352:87|348:47,1,81,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,228,64509,2,0,P|239:268|243:308,1,81,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,64802,6,0,L|100:184,1,81,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,48,65094,2,0,L|132:65,1,81,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,152,65387,2,0,L|412:184,1,81,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,48,65679,2,0,L|380:65,1,81,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,180,65972,5,8,0:0:0:0:
212,48,66119,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,152,66265,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,152,66411,6,0,B|144:160|120:184|120:184|72:164|32:181,1,162,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,181,66851,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,239,66997,6,0,P|275:177|261:99,1,162,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,99,67436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,192,67582,6,0,L|168:360,1,162,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,284,68021,2,0,P|39:279|0:286,1,81,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,304,68314,6,0,P|316:304|392:288,1,137.700002626419,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,188,68753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,104,68899,2,0,P|264:104|188:120,1,137.700002626419,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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184,44,69924,1,10,0:0:0:0:
240,164,70070,2,0,P|252:124|256:88,1,68.8500013132096,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,104,70363,1,10,0:0:0:0:
324,188,70509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,32,70655,6,0,P|376:32|420:88,1,137.700002626419,12|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,152,71094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,95,71241,2,0,P|491:61|499:28,1,68.8500013132096,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,152,71533,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,236,71680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,71753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,252,72411,2,0,P|236:212|156:212,2,137.700002626419,10|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,340,73290,5,2,0:0:0:0:
164,288,73582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,352,73875,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,280,74168,5,0,0:0:0:0:
88,212,74460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,128,74753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,212,75046,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,212,75631,6,0,B|144:200|188:236|188:236|232:228|264:212|280:184|276:144|262:120|240:100,1,283.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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356,160,77094,2,0,L|424:148,1,64.8,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,296,77387,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,240,77533,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,312,77680,6,0,P|224:308|200:292,1,81,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,232,77972,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,152,78119,2,0,B|120:108|120:184|16:136,1,162,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,68,78558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,72,78704,6,0,B|312:80|312:80|364:68|364:68|424:76,1,162,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,172,79143,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,264,79290,2,0,B|352:256|352:256|300:268|300:268|240:260,1,162,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,152,79729,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,280,79875,6,0,P|123:243|118:203,1,81,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,75,80168,2,0,P|198:111|204:152,1,81,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,104,80460,2,0,P|52:96|11:95,1,81,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,200,80753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,104,80899,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,200,81046,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,176,81192,6,0,P|203:168|243:174,1,81,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,312,81485,2,0,P|47:306|8:284,1,81,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,252,81777,2,0,B|252:240|284:256|284:256|316:232|372:228,1,162,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,308,82216,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,308,82290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,308,82363,6,0,P|459:268|463:227,1,81,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,124,82655,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,44,82802,2,0,P|284:120|188:112,1,162,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,80,83241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
79,220,83387,6,0,P|160:214|241:218,1,162,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,296,83826,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,144,83972,2,0,P|380:184|374:224,1,81,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,96,84265,2,0,P|284:71|320:52,1,81,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,84558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,172,84704,5,2,0:0:0:0:
175,123,84851,2,0,P|136:116|95:118,1,81,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,256,85143,5,2,0:0:0:0:
252,96,85290,2,0,P|224:52|184:24,1,81,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,85582,5,10,0:0:0:0:
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440,200,86021,5,2,0:0:0:0:
352,296,86168,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86314,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Frobe

Narcissu wrote:

General

  1. use 4 colours in 4/4 song i'll think about it some more, now do not fix this.
  2. very good map~ it will rank soon imo

Extra

  1. 00:46:070 (1,2,3) - try 1/8 slider ? i think this is not a problem... this is will consider getting more mod.
  2. 01:26:607 (1,2,3) - spinner end ? distinguish SS i think now more matching with flow of song.

Hard

  1. 00:07:143 (3,1) - separate will easy read umm... no fixed.
  2. 00:51:046 (2) - 1/2 slider ? voice here ok

Normal

  1. 00:10:655 (3,4) - DS …… it's for better reading

all diff well done . star~
thank you for mod and star~ :)
Frostings
[Easy]
  1. 너무 어렵다요 ㅠㅠ
    There are difficult rhythms in this map
    I think rhythm like this 00:59:533 (1,2) - should have bigger space
    It is hard to read with small AR
    Other examples
    00:28:509 (1,2,3) -
    01:08:314 (1,2,3) -
  2. 00:51:046 (2) - maybe have red point further away from end of slider for better look?
  3. 01:20:460 (4) - same as above
  4. 00:48:704 - map this part? Similar to here 00:04:216 (2,3,1) -

[Normal]
  1. 01:03:631 (1,2,3) - Maybe make a cleaner triangle?
  2. 01:05:972 (1,2,3,4) - This is very hard ;;
  3. 01:17:387 (1) - I think you should remove NC. The SV change is unnoticeable and just makes it confusing

[Hard]
  1. AR 8 makes the map much easier to read
  2. 00:48:704 (1,2,3) - This jump is very sudden and quite hard to play. I think you should move it closer

[No Dap]
  1. Please use OD 8. I keep getting note-locked at this part 00:07:436 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) -
  2. 00:00:412 (1,2,3,4) - make it a square? looks much neater that way
  3. 00:02:753 (1,2,3,4) - same here.. make it a diamond
  4. 00:48:704 (1) - I think there is better movement if you stack this with the end of previous slider while leaving the next slider where it is
  5. Please father my children

[Extra]
Looks good = v = b orz
Nice set ~
Topic Starter
Frobe

Frostings wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 너무 어렵다요 ㅠㅠ
    There are difficult rhythms in this map
    I think rhythm like this 00:59:533 (1,2) - should have bigger space well... instead i stack it
    It is hard to read with small AR hmm.... i think it is more hard to raise the ar from now.
    Other examples
    00:28:509 (1,2,3) -
    01:08:314 (1,2,3) -
  2. 00:51:046 (2) - maybe have red point further away from end of slider for better look? sorry... i like a shape for now. ;w;
  3. 01:20:460 (4) - same as above ^
  4. 00:48:704 - map this part? Similar to here 00:04:216 (2,3,1) - i look at it a little different. :D

[Normal]
  1. 01:03:631 (1,2,3) - Maybe make a cleaner triangle? little fixed
  2. 01:05:972 (1,2,3,4) - This is very hard ;; ;w;
  3. 01:17:387 (1) - I think you should remove NC. The SV change is unnoticeable and just makes it confusing ok

[Hard]
  1. AR 8 makes the map much easier to read i'll try it a little more thought. now do not fix this.
  2. 00:48:704 (1,2,3) - This jump is very sudden and quite hard to play. I think you should move it closer ^

[Extra]
Looks good = v = b orz
Nice set ~
thank you :)~
Ozato Fumika

Frostings wrote:

[Easy]
[No Dap]
[notice]
  1. Please use OD 8. I keep getting note-locked at this part 00:07:436 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - No to OD8 cuz it's already hard due to high bpm. and what do you mean note-locked?
  2. 00:00:412 (1,2,3,4) - make it a square? looks much neater that way you know my maps. I dont intend to do shapes, I just happened to have them
  3. 00:02:753 (1,2,3,4) - same here.. make it a diamond
  4. 00:48:704 (1) - I think there is better movement if you stack this with the end of previous slider while leaving the next slider where it is good point, but there are 4.5 measures of nothingness so the players will be doing something with their cursor anyway.
  5. Please father my children but I'm the mom
Topic Starter
Frobe

No Dap wrote:

Frostings wrote:

[Easy]
[No Dap]
[notice]
  1. Please use OD 8. I keep getting note-locked at this part 00:07:436 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - No to OD8 cuz it's already hard due to high bpm. and what do you mean note-locked?
  2. 00:00:412 (1,2,3,4) - make it a square? looks much neater that way you know my maps. I dont intend to do shapes, I just happened to have them
  3. 00:02:753 (1,2,3,4) - same here.. make it a diamond
  4. 00:48:704 (1) - I think there is better movement if you stack this with the end of previous slider while leaving the next slider where it is good point, but there are 4.5 measures of nothingness so the players will be doing something with their cursor anyway.
  5. Please father my children but I'm the mom
give kds to my mistakes Dx......
Ozato Fumika
ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 님 리폿함 ㅅㄱ ^^
tutuhaha
[Easy]
00:07:436 (1) - 00:11:826 (3) -
try this rhythm
osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359580
dont deliberately to stress some rhythm also dont deliberately to skip some rhythm in easy and normal
it always cause rhythm been really weird _(:зゝ∠)_
00:15:338 (1,2,3,4) - space issue, regulate litter bit
00:23:533 (x) - well, I pretty sure there has stress _(:зゝ∠)_...add note please
00:29:533 (2) - In easy diff,the part like this, you need try really hard to find the white line rhythm to instead it ._. 00:28:509 (1) - begin here, try this rhythm
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359599
00:30:851 (4) - NC?
00:31:875 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - weird /-\
00:59:533 (1,2,3) - weird
01:05:972 (4,5) - weird
01:18:558 (1,2,3,4,5) - weird..rhythm: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359621
01:22:948 (1) - Move 1 to here
01:23:533 (X) - and then add note on here
01:24:704 (4) - rhythm: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359633
actually you need pay more attention on easy lol
I made some simple explain on this file ↓
http://puu.sh/dtcMy/fdcd975cef.rar
hope it will help you
Oh and by the way, Bat and Qat mostly doesn't agree to use overlap on easy and normal diff, just remind you <3

[Normal]
00:08:314 (2,3) - actually I think rhythm should be this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359651
00:13:582 (x) - well, I feel more comfortable if you add rhythm on here
00:18:851 (5,1) - dont overlap..just makes noob player feel confusing (like me _(:зゝ∠)_)
00:20:899 (3,1,2) - well, if you following vocal, you should end your slider on 00:21:631 (X) -
00:21:924 (3) - and this one should end on 00:22:216 (x) -
00:22:948 (4,5) - dont overlap..just makes noob player feel confusing (like me _(:зゝ∠)_) x2
00:30:704 (6) - move 6 to here
00:35:387 (x) - add note
00:36:119 (2) - if you really want to show this rhythm that clear, use this rhythm on 00:36:851 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359680
01:02:314 (3) - rhythm_(:зゝ∠)_
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359686
01:08:607 (2) - clap at the end
01:09:192 (3) - clap
01:12:704 (6) - whistle?
01:19:875 (5,1) - dont overlap..just makes noob player feel confusing (like me _(:зゝ∠)_) x3
01:26:607 (1) - well, maybe too short at normal diff :P
need more work _(:зゝ∠)_

[Hard]
00:14:899 (2,3,4,5,6) - same space please
00:18:265 (6,7,8) - same space please
00:20:314 (6,7,1) - space kind of weird, try to increase the space between 6 and 7
00:21:777 (2,3,4) - same space please
00:23:826 (1,2) - increase the space, at least use 1.5X please _(:зゝ∠)_
00:30:558 (6) - clap
00:46:070 (1,2,3) - weird.......make a jump will work more better actually
00:50:168 (3,1,2,3) - same space please
00:52:655 (3,4,1) - ^
00:54:851 (3,1,2) - ^
01:02:314 (3) - actually I think slider should begin at here

[Insane]
00:00:412 (1,2,3,4) - square?
00:02:753 (1,2,3,4) - square?
00:16:655 (6,1) - suggest use one 1/2 slider to instead it _(:зゝ∠)_
00:21:924 (3,4) - ^
00:22:509 (1,2) - ^
00:36:119 (3) - I suggest end at 00:36:338
00:37:290 (8) - I suggest use circle to instead this slider _(:зゝ∠)_
00:42:485 (x) - add note _(:зゝ∠)_?
00:59:972 (1,2) - increase space?
01:17:680 (1,2,3) - same space

[Extra]
00:04:802 (1) - well...try to make this slider more...funny?..
00:08:021 (2,3) - ctrl+g
00:08:460 (2,3) - ^
00:09:046 (3,1,2,1) - ...unreadable
00:15:338 (4) - ctrl+g
00:15:631 (1,2,3,4) - same space?
00:17:094 (2,3,4) - ^
00:37:290 (1,2,3,4,1) - ..unreadable..increase the space between 1 and 2 please
00:51:046 (3,4) - ctrl+g
01:12:704 (6) - whistle?
well...I pretty sure someone will hate this extra so...goodluck <3
Ozato Fumika

tutuhaha wrote:

[Insane]
00:00:412 (1,2,3,4) - square?I like the current shape better
00:02:753 (1,2,3,4) - square?^00:16:655 (6,1) - suggest use one 1/2 slider to instead it _(:зゝ∠)_ fixed
00:21:924 (3,4) - ^ I think it's fine
00:22:509 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:36:119 (3) - I suggest end at 00:36:338 I think current rhythm is more safe to play
00:37:290 (8) - I suggest use circle to instead this slider _(:зゝ∠)_ I think it's fine
00:42:485 (x) - add note _(:зゝ∠)_?can't think of a pattern :3
00:59:972 (1,2) - increase space?fixed
01:17:680 (1,2,3) - same space fixed
Thanks for mod

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Frostings

No Dap wrote:

No to OD8 cuz it's already hard due to high bpm. and what do you mean note-locked?
Note-locking occurs in high bpm maps with low OD. The interval when two consecutive notes can be pressed overlaps creating an abstract difficulty increase.
This makes jumps in high bpm much harder to play. If you change to OD8 there shouldn't be a problem with this.
Ozato Fumika
I honestly don't know. I can FC this with my mouse lol, maybe I will need more opinion.
Topic Starter
Frobe

tutuhaha wrote:

[Easy]
00:07:436 (1) - 00:11:826 (3) -
try this rhythm
osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359580 fixed 00:08:607 (2) -
dont deliberately to stress some rhythm also dont deliberately to skip some rhythm in easy and normal
it always cause rhythm been really weird _(:зゝ∠)_
00:15:338 (1,2,3,4) - space issue, regulate litter bit i think it's a good shape :3
00:23:533 (x) - well, I pretty sure there has stress _(:зゝ∠)_...add note please
00:29:533 (2) - In easy diff,the part like this, you need try really hard to find the white line rhythm to instead it ._. 00:28:509 (1) - begin here, try this rhythm
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359599
00:30:851 (4) - NC?
00:31:875 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - weird /-\ sorry... i don't know what's weird T_T
00:59:533 (1,2,3) - weird ^
01:05:972 (4,5) - weird ^
01:18:558 (1,2,3,4,5) - weird..rhythm: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359621
01:22:948 (1) - Move 1 to here
01:23:533 (X) - and then add note on here umm... i think it is better empty.
01:24:704 (4) - rhythm: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359633
actually you need pay more attention on easy lol
I made some simple explain on this file ↓
http://puu.sh/dtcMy/fdcd975cef.rar
hope it will help you
Oh and by the way, Bat and Qat mostly doesn't agree to use overlap on easy and normal diff, just remind you <3

[Normal]
00:08:314 (2,3) - actually I think rhythm should be this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359651
00:13:582 (x) - well, I feel more comfortable if you add rhythm on here
00:18:851 (5,1) - dont overlap..just makes noob player feel confusing (like me _(:зゝ∠)_)
00:20:899 (3,1,2) - well, if you following vocal, you should end your slider on 00:21:631 (X) -
00:21:924 (3) - and this one should end on 00:22:216 (x) -
00:22:948 (4,5) - dont overlap..just makes noob player feel confusing (like me _(:зゝ∠)_) x2
00:30:704 (6) - move 6 to here
00:35:387 (x) - add note
00:36:119 (2) - if you really want to show this rhythm that clear, use this rhythm on 00:36:851 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359680 umm... i think it's a okay.
01:02:314 (3) - rhythm_(:зゝ∠)_ i think need put a clap to 01:02:460 (4) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359686
01:08:607 (2) - clap at the end
01:09:192 (3) - clap
01:12:704 (6) - whistle?purposely did not put. :D
01:19:875 (5,1) - dont overlap..just makes noob player feel confusing (like me _(:зゝ∠)_) x3
01:26:607 (1) - well, maybe too short at normal diff :P i already checked the normal of ranked map. it add a spins.
need more work _(:зゝ∠)_

[Hard]
00:14:899 (2,3,4,5,6) - same space please
00:18:265 (6,7,8) - same space please
00:20:314 (6,7,1) - space kind of weird, try to increase the space between 6 and 7 it will keep distance... maybe no problem :3
00:21:777 (2,3,4) - same space please
00:23:826 (1,2) - increase the space, at least use 1.5X please _(:зゝ∠)_
00:30:558 (6) - clap umm... why...
00:46:070 (1,2,3) - weird.......make a jump will work more better actually
00:50:168 (3,1,2,3) - same space please
00:52:655 (3,4,1) - ^
00:54:851 (3,1,2) - ^
01:02:314 (3) - actually I think slider should begin at here you are right. but i think not bad now :>

[Extra]
00:04:802 (1) - well...try to make this slider more...funny?.. i think it fits the song
00:08:021 (2,3) - ctrl+g i think now is a better moving.
00:08:460 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:09:046 (3,1,2,1) - ...unreadable seems no problem about the extra difficulty.
00:15:338 (4) - ctrl+g umm... this is my favorite :3
00:15:631 (1,2,3,4) - same space?fixed 00:15:631 (1,2,3) -
00:17:094 (2,3,4) - ^ changed the pattern
00:37:290 (1,2,3,4,1) - ..unreadable..increase the space between 1 and 2 please umm... i think it it helps in reading.
00:51:046 (3,4) - ctrl+g above same reasons
01:12:704 (6) - whistle?i've mentioned this already in the normal :3
well...I pretty sure someone will hate this extra so...goodluck <3
not mention is all fixed. really thank you for mod and advice! :)
Suimya
Hey Frobe owo/ random mod here from #modreqs www

Let's see what i can find :3


General:
  1. How about removing the widescreen support, since you didn't really use it on your map :3
  2. How about adding "TV Size" and "TVsize" to your tags, since it is short ver of the song, and it'll be easier for people to find your map



Easy:
  1. 00:00:412 (1) - I really suggest you to add a finish here, since i really think it fit with the map here o3o/
  2. 00:05:094 (1) - I really think the clap don't fit on repeat, how about replacing it with a whistle instead
  3. 00:09:777 (1) - ^
  4. 00:16:216 (2) - This slider's body kinda looking ugly while this slider 00:15:338 (1) - touching its body, how moving the middle point few grids down, just to avoid that
  5. 00:16:802 (3) - I think a whistle would fit great imo
  6. 00:21:485 (3,4) - how about adding a whistle, to (3)'s start and to (4), it's kinda sounds empty right now
  7. 00:30:558 (3) - I think you kinda missed a clap here, i really suggest you to add it o.o
  8. 00:35:826 (1) - ^
  9. 00:41:387 (3) - how about making this slider symmetrical, just by moving the last slider's point to x:480 y:96
  10. 00:51:924 (3) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, it'll fit with the music imo
  11. 00:57:192 (4) - ^
  12. 01:10:363 (3) - how about switch the clap with a finish on slider's tail, and whistle with clap on slider's start. It'll fit much better imo. And i highly suggest you fix the slider shape, it's kinda looking bad right now
  13. 01:20:314 (4) - I really think you missed a clap on slider's tail, it kinda fitting with music imo
  14. 01:21:192 (5) - how about replacing this whistle with a clap instead. with same reason above :3



Normal:
  1. 00:09:192 (3) - clap on the tail, it'll fit with music, I can clearly hear it in the music o.o
  2. 00:12:119 (1,2) - how about adding a whistle, to (1)'s slider's start and to (2) slider's tail, it'll, it'll have a nice effect with the music imo
  3. 00:14:460 (1) - how about adding a finish to slider's start, since i can clearly hear it in the music
  4. 00:16:655 (1) - whistle maybe on slider's start, it'll follow the guitar sound in the music
  5. 00:19:143 (1) - finish on slider's start, same reason as 00:14:460 (1) -
  6. 00:26:168 (1) - ^ you can keep the clap, it's fine here as well o.o
  7. 00:36:119 (2) - this slider kinda sounds off, how about making something like this instead (it's really sounds off, i really suggest you to change the rhythm here)

    or
  8. 01:04:802 (3) - this slider's end kinda looks bad, how about moving few grids to the right, so it'll stuck under 01:03:338 (6) - I really think it's ganna fix the flow here


Hard:
  1. 00:16:655 (1) - whistle on slider's start, it'll fit with the guitar sound in the music here imo
  2. 00:17:972 (5) - how about adding a nc here, just go with lyrics and jump o.o
  3. 00:21:338 (1) - whistle on slider's start here maybe, it'll fit with the music imo
  4. 00:21:924 (3,5) - ^
  5. 00:30:558 (6) - I think you missed a clap here, it'll fit with music
  6. 00:32:899 (6) - ^
  7. 00:31:436 (2) - I really think ctrl+g here will flow much better here, and it'll give nice jump to the next slider o3o/
  8. 00:45:192 (2) - ^
  9. 00:48:704 (1,2,3) - this kinda hard for this diff, how about removing the triples and adding 1/4 slider instead. I think it'll make the diff much easier and fitting with diff spread imo
  10. 00:55:729 (2) - I think ctrl+g here will have much better flow and will also reduce spacing problem here, so yeah it's better to make ctrl+g here
  11. 01:03:338 (6) - ^ it's ganna be fun here, since it'll follow the lyrics here
  12. 01:20:460 (2) - ^
  13. 01:22:802 (3,5,7) - I think whistle would fit great on all those slider's start, it'll follow the guitar sound really awesome here owo


Baka Dap's Insane:
  1. 00:04:802 (1) - I think you should add a finish on slider's start, it'll fit with music
  2. 00:24:411 (2) - how about making ctrl+g here, it's ganna be fun imo
  3. 00:40:509 (2,4) - ^
  4. 00:45:338 (1,1) - how about adding a nc here, to follow your jump patterns jumps here kinda feels weird, so a nc here might fix it
  5. 00:55:729 (2) - how about sticking this slider under 00:54:119 (5) - it's kinda looking bad right now
  6. 01:05:094 (2,4) - I think these can be better with ctrl+g, it's totally ganna be fun baka dap =3=
  7. 01:12:119 (2) - ^


Extra:
  1. 00:12:119 (1) - I think whistle would fit great on slider's start, how about adding it? o.o
  2. 00:14:460 (1) - ^ but finish instead this time
  3. 00:15:338 (4) - how about making ctrl+g here it'll fit with your patterns imo, and it'll make nice jump as well
  4. 00:16:655 (1) - maybe whistle on slider's start, it'll follow the guitar sound in the music
  5. 00:24:119 (2,4) - I think this ganna flow better with ctrl+g here, and it's ganna have better rhythm as well
  6. 00:30:119 (3) - ^
  7. 00:38:460 (3) - ^
  8. 00:41:680 (2,4) - ^
  9. 01:12:119 (4) - ^


That's all i can find here, really good job with the map, I totally liked it <3

Good luck with ranking it Frobe owo/
Ozato Fumika

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Baka Dap's Insane:
  1. 00:04:802 (1) - I think you should add a finish on slider's start, it'll fit with music added~
  2. 00:24:411 (2) - how about making ctrl+g here, it's ganna be fun imo I like the up and down flow orz
  3. 00:40:509 (2,4) - ^
  4. 00:45:338 (1,1) - how about adding a nc here, to follow your jump patterns jumps here kinda feels weird, so a nc here might fix it added
  5. 00:55:729 (2) - how about sticking this slider under 00:54:119 (5) - it's kinda looking bad right now lol sure
  6. 01:05:094 (2,4) - I think these can be better with ctrl+g, it's totally ganna be fun baka dap =3= similar as above :3 I like the back and forth flow here too
  7. 01:12:119 (2) - ^
lol thanks for mod baka

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Topic Starter
Frobe

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Hey Frobe owo/ random mod here from #modreqs www

Let's see what i can find :3


General:
  1. How about removing the widescreen support, since you didn't really use it on your map :3
  2. How about adding "TV Size" and "TVsize" to your tags, since it is short ver of the song, and it'll be easier for people to find your map



Easy:
  1. 00:00:412 (1) - I really suggest you to add a finish here, since i really think it fit with the map here o3o/ umm... i think it is better that do not add. :>
  2. 00:05:094 (1) - I really think the clap don't fit on repeat, how about replacing it with a whistle instead
  3. 00:09:777 (1) - ^
  4. 00:16:216 (2) - This slider's body kinda looking ugly while this slider 00:15:338 (1) - touching its body, how moving the middle point few grids down, just to avoid that
  5. 00:16:802 (3) - I think a whistle would fit great imo
  6. 00:21:485 (3,4) - how about adding a whistle, to (3)'s start and to (4), it's kinda sounds empty right now i think this should be added that whistle two to 00:21:924 - , 00:22:216 - however, the two rhythm's note is empty. i don't agree your suggesion, it seems to quite a bit forced hitsound. ;w;
  7. 00:30:558 (3) - I think you kinda missed a clap here, i really suggest you to add it o.o
  8. 00:35:826 (1) - ^
  9. 00:41:387 (3) - how about making this slider symmetrical, just by moving the last slider's point to x:480 y:96
  10. 00:51:924 (3) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, it'll fit with the music imo
  11. 00:57:192 (4) - ^
  12. 01:10:363 (3) - how about switch the clap with a finish on slider's tail, and whistle with clap on slider's start. It'll fit much better imo. And i highly suggest you fix the slider shape, it's kinda looking bad right now oh, i forgot finish xD and was fixed else
  13. 01:20:314 (4) - I really think you missed a clap on slider's tail, it kinda fitting with music imo
  14. 01:21:192 (5) - how about replacing this whistle with a clap instead. with same reason above :3 i think a better fit is the whistle to clap of the above :D



Normal:
  1. 00:09:192 (3) - clap on the tail, it'll fit with music, I can clearly hear it in the music o.o
  2. 00:12:119 (1,2) - how about adding a whistle, to (1)'s slider's start and to (2) slider's tail, it'll, it'll have a nice effect with the music imo
  3. 00:14:460 (1) - how about adding a finish to slider's start, since i can clearly hear it in the music
  4. 00:16:655 (1) - whistle maybe on slider's start, it'll follow the guitar sound in the music i need requires a little more thought about this. but i don't fix it now. fixed
  5. 00:19:143 (1) - finish on slider's start, same reason as 00:14:460 (1) -
  6. 00:26:168 (1) - ^ you can keep the clap, it's fine here as well o.o
  7. 00:36:119 (2) - this slider kinda sounds off, how about making something like this instead (it's really sounds off, i really suggest you to change the rhythm here)

    or
  8. 01:04:802 (3) - this slider's end kinda looks bad, how about moving few grids to the right, so it'll stuck under 01:03:338 (6) - I really think it's ganna fix the flow here



Hard:
  1. 00:16:655 (1) - whistle on slider's start, it'll fit with the guitar sound in the music here imo i mentioned this already in normal :3 fixed
  2. 00:17:972 (5) - how about adding a nc here, just go with lyrics and jump o.o
  3. 00:21:338 (1) - whistle on slider's start here maybe, it'll fit with the music imo instead, i added a whistle in the same place as normal
  4. 00:21:924 (3,5) - ^
  5. 00:30:558 (6) - I think you missed a clap here, it'll fit with music
  6. 00:32:899 (6) - ^ umm... i'm hard to understand your opinion.
  7. 00:31:436 (2) - I really think ctrl+g here will flow much better here, and it'll give nice jump to the next slider o3o/
  8. 00:45:192 (2) - ^
  9. 00:48:704 (1,2,3) - this kinda hard for this diff, how about removing the triples and adding 1/4 slider instead. I think it'll make the diff much easier and fitting with diff spread imo
  10. 00:55:729 (2) - I think ctrl+g here will have much better flow and will also reduce spacing problem here, so yeah it's better to make ctrl+g here i think that now is a better flow.
  11. 01:03:338 (6) - ^ it's ganna be fun here, since it'll follow the lyrics here
  12. 01:20:460 (2) - ^ ^^ i think the same as above.
  13. 01:22:802 (3,5,7) - I think whistle would fit great on all those slider's start, it'll follow the guitar sound really awesome here owo very good idea! but... i want to highlight the whistle of 01:24:704 (1,2,3,4,5) - ... sorry T_T



Extra:
  1. 00:12:119 (1) - I think whistle would fit great on slider's start, how about adding it? o.o
  2. 00:14:460 (1) - ^ but finish instead this time
  3. 00:15:338 (4) - how about making ctrl+g here it'll fit with your patterns imo, and it'll make nice jump as well sorry, i don't want to change patterns. it a same also below ;w;
  4. 00:16:655 (1) - maybe whistle on slider's start, it'll follow the guitar sound in the music same :3 fixed
  5. 00:24:119 (2,4) - I think this ganna flow better with ctrl+g here, and it's ganna have better rhythm as well above mentioned.
  6. 00:30:119 (3) - ^ ^
  7. 00:38:460 (3) - ^^
  8. 00:41:680 (2,4) - ^ ^
  9. 01:12:119 (4) - ^ ^


That's all i can find here, really good job with the map, I totally liked it <3

Good luck with ranking it Frobe owo/
not mention is all fixed. thank you for mod and your mind! :)
Gaia
Hey >:3
gawd it's my first mod in a month

[General]
tick 2 on extra sounds better

[Easy]
00:02:460 (3,1) - 00:04:802 (3,1) - 00:07:143 (3,1) - obligatory don't stack in easys, but since you have an nc it SHOULD be relatively okay lol
00:16:802 (3,4) - 00:22:070 (4,5) - (and more) these aren't though

00:12:119 (1,1) - needs at least one whole measure of break after the spinner try this rhythm? OR
00:21:485 (3) - doesn't look that great, either blanket it or just make it go off like so http://puu.sh/dDXPK/bfbfec5e95.jpg
00:24:411 (2) - not really the biggest fan of the same slider shape right after the other, see if this looks good for u? http://puu.sh/dDXXx/5d99871b29.jpg
00:29:094 (2) - tbh instead of using sliderticks you're better off actually mapping this part like 00:33:777 (1,2,3) - , it's the only part you use sliderticks too so to be consistent i guess
00:36:119 (2) - move it up a bit for better flow owo
00:36:851 - this gap sounds really odd to me, try this rhythm?
00:42:265 - and maybe a circle here ?
00:49:290 - ^
01:01:290 (3) - more rhythms
01:03:046 (4,1) - this stack is problematic because the spacing in the timeline is 2 beats, whereas all your other stacks were 1 beat apart
01:18:558 (1) - same as earlier, needs one whole measure of break

i personally think the rhythms in the kiai could be better, some really strong notes were ignored such as 00:55:290 - 00:56:021 - and more, you followed vocals mostly in the song but when u got to the kiai u switched to following instrumentals more so like, to be consistent i guess :>

[Normal]
00:00:412 (1) - 00:02:753 (1) - (and more) use 2 1/2 sliders instead, 1/2 sliders that repeat more than once is reeeeally hard to read for beginners
00:35:387 (5,1) - stack these o:
00:36:851 (4) - curve it in more to avoid that tiny overlap
00:53:680 (5) - use copy and paste? also fix blanket
00:55:143 (3) - i think it'd be cool if u blanketed this with 00:54:558 (2) - http://puu.sh/dDZNX/06a32ff039.jpg
00:58:363 (5,1) - the (1) overlaps so much with 00:57:777 (4) - and just doesnt look good tbh, the blanket is off too
01:00:265 - there is no drum sound here so remove clap
01:01:875 (2,3) - idk if its just me but this part sounds off to me; 01:11:241 (2,3) - sounds a lot better
01:05:972 (1,2,3,4) - these are all 1/2 repeats, but not they dont repeat the same number of times, that's confusing.
01:08:021 - um soft clap sound better to me imo
01:26:607 (1) - not sure if this would be too short uhhh

[Hard]
00:07:436 (1) - also stack this manually if you're into manual stacking :v
00:21:777 (2,3) - uh fix this blanket
00:36:411 - i know the vocals are on the blue tick but uhh the only 1/4 you used in the whole song is here so you should stay away from it
00:41:387 (3) - centre this so it goes with 00:40:216 (1,2) - and then maybe try so there wont be a random slider following after (3)
00:57:192 (3,4,5,6) - omg this is super hard in a hard diff :>
01:06:704 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - remove ncs
01:26:607 - try a circle here and then start the spinner 1/4 later

[mom's Insane]
00:00:412 (1,2,3,4) - gg no squares today
00:11:680 (3) - there's no need for a slider tick just map this :>
01:00:119 - missing clap
01:09:411 - u can make this a triple or something owo
01:15:631 (1,1,2) - missing hitsounds yooo

lol preettyyy coool stuffs

[Extra]
00:00:997 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - (and others) nc spam aaaa
00:46:070 (1,2,3) - well this is overmapped :> change to circles
00:56:607 (2) - i really think this is a better emphasis on the vocals
01:04:509 (4) - fix blanket
01:22:070 - aaaaahh this unmapped snare tho ):

Good luck and have fun!! C:
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