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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on March 15, 2015 at 8:31:44 PM

Artist: Mitsuki Kotono
Title: Fuyu ni Saku Hana
Source: 彼女のセイイキ
Tags: kanojo no seiiki feng 9th game eroge hentai visual novel galgame opening baldrace Tsukuyomi
BPM: 85
Filesize: 3412kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.42 stars, 104 notes)
  2. Hard (3.24 stars, 280 notes)
  3. Insane (4.59 stars, 384 notes)
  4. Normal (2.07 stars, 173 notes)
  5. Yomi's Extra (5.25 stars, 427 notes)
Download: Mitsuki Kotono - Fuyu ni Saku Hana
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feng9th「彼女のセイイキ」

美月琴音 - 「冬に咲く華」

Yomi's Insane Extra by Tsukuyomi
Momovely
really good song :)
Koiyuki
why so fast QAQ
SoGa
Good Song ;w;
Cool Map
[General]
  1. This may be unrankable stuff : why is only ins diff has 4 red lines instead other 3 have 3 ;w; . check insane 00:11:468
[Hard]
  1. hm , recommend to add a note . 00:30:351
  2. 00:36:351 add a note or let 00:36:527 (3) - Ctrl+G
  3. 00:06:173 (4,5,7) - hm ,consider adding hitsound
[Insane]
  1. 01:19:233 (1) - Whistle on head?
Sry .. im useless :( :(
Fycho
彼女の精液
litoluna

Fycho wrote:

彼女の精液
彼女の愛液
Kinomi
wait for my insane
moecloud
Winnie
Here as requested from modding queue. Such a unique song and a new voice I haven't heard before so it's good :)

General Overview - I thought it was quite smooth, rhythm fell into place quite nicely. The changes I talked about with spacing maybe might be a .98 change to a 1.0 Distance Snap, but when you actually move it, it spaces out further than the mm changes that are in the map and that's ok. It's just the reason why I stated most of them like that. This is a new song for me and now I know the types of songs that you like to map(Or a general view of what you like)

[Easy]

  1. 00:49:409 (3) - Distance Snap
  2. 00:52:233 (2) - Same here
  3. 00:56:645 (1) - Can be DS further to the left
  4. 01:22:586 (1) - It doesn't sound appealing to me being here at the red tick, My suggestion would be to move that to the white tick on the left and then add a note right after it. To me following the vocals throws off the rhythm that the music is playing, but either way it can work
  5. 01:38:292 (3) - DS further
  6. 01:42:527 (1) - Correct Spacing?
[Normal]

  1. 00:07:232 (1) - NC to follow off with the violin here?
  2. 00:32:645 (3) - Space more to the right
  3. 00:42:527 (1) - Possible make this not overlay to this 00:41:115 (1) Seems better if moved to x156 y232
[Hard]

  1. 00:35:998 (2) - I felt that rolling this a little longer would sound really good. I didn't like how it abruptly ends just to then play the next note
  2. 00:44:821 (4,5) - Possibly keep same spacing here? It's not giving me a vibe like the way you it's spaced out because nothing is truly happening for their to be inconsistent spacing
  3. 00:49:939 (2) - Distance Snap and something like this? Example The way you had it didn't seem as clean unless it was intentional for something I'm not seeing clearly
  4. 01:33:880 (2) - Cleaner look would be at x388 y360
[Insane]

  1. 00:22:056 (1,2,3) - Wait is something going on here that I'm not realizing? Example I looked at in on 1/8 and 1/16 and it doesn't seemed like it's snapped
  2. 00:37:409 (2,3,4) - Blanket in the pocket of the slider?
  3. 00:53:292 (4) - Can this be moved so it doesn't overlap on the slider or does that bring a new vibe to it?
  4. 01:33:351 (1) - Maybe a blanket? Example It still keeps the spacing a bit high for an insane depending how far of the blanket you want it to make, but the overall pattern you had was really nice, this is just another suggestion
Overall good map, just need to see and wait for other modders to come in but let me kick if off :)

Interesting new Eroge https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AosHG2Lb9e8 pretty catchy song :)
Noffy
Hello there I'm here with a blanket-nazi-tastic mod which you requested from The Sewing Queue.
There aren't too many blankets for me to mod or suggest so this will be short (maybe) but I'll do my best 'v';
Also this is a really nice sounding song (but who knows about lyric's translation I sure don't for all I know she's singing about her love of a desk chair)! /ovo/ The map goes with it really well and is pretty fun~

[Easy]
  1. 00:22:056 (5) - Could be blanketing 00:21:350 (4,1) . Try moving the first point to x:66 y:222, the second to x:86 y:306, and the third to x:144 y:366 for exmaple.
  2. 00:54:174 (2) - How about moving the end point to x:376 y:125 to blanket 00:55:233 (3) a bit better.
  3. 00:55:233 (3) - ^ and if you did that move the middle point on this to x:437 y:191 :3
  4. 01:17:115 (2) - Maybe move the middle point to x:353 y:227 and the end point to x:286 y:165 for that ever slightly better blanket of 01:14:821 (2) .
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:468 (1) - How about moving the middle point to x:274 y:213 and the end point to x:224 y:235 to blanket the reverse arrow side of 00:10:762 (5) better?
  2. 00:19:938 (1) - Move the middle point to x:399 y:132 and the end point to x:469 y:55
  3. 00:22:762 (1) - Try a' movin' the end point to x:37 y:223
  4. 00:24:173 (4) - Move the middle point to x:190 y:247 and the end point to x:245 y:235
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:821 (3) - Consider making it blanket the end of 00:06:526 (5) .
  2. 00:07:938 (3) - Not a blanket for once. Why not have it start at the same place as 00:06:526 (5) ? (x:136 y:272)
  3. 00:13:585 (5) - It's a single pixel move please don't hurt me. Move the end point to x:492 y:200
  4. 00:14:291 (1) - Middle point to x:383 y:287 and the end point to x:319 y:266 could work better.
  5. 00:22:056 (5) - Why not make this blanket 00:21:350 (4) ? Moving the middle point to x:266 y:151 and the end point to x:293 y:180 for example.
  6. 00:31:233 (1) - This blanket of the end of 00:31:939 (3) can be improved ever so slightly by moving the end to x:227 y:105
  7. 00:35:468 (1) - Why not make this blanket 00:35:998 (2) ? D: For example moving the middle point to x:226 y:290..
  8. 00:37:586 (3,4) - Oh no. I'm going to point this out but even though I feel these two should really blanket eachother I'm not totally sure what to suggestr without messing with your distances ;_; my newness to modding is showing I'm sorrry ;-;
  9. 00:42:527 (1) - By the end of this slider it starts getting closer to 00:43:057 (2) than it was initially. Perhaps move the end to x:439 y:156 to make the spacing between the edges of these two sliders more even?
  10. 00:53:468 (4) - Move the middle point to x:305 y:211 and the end point to x:333 y:180 to improve the blanket of 00:53:115 (3) .
  11. 01:00:527 (4) - Perhaps make it blanket 01:00:880 (1) instead of what it's currently doing.
  12. 01:02:292 (1) - Move the middle point to x:234 y:137 and the end point to x:176 y:84
  13. 01:33:351 (1) - Maybe move the end point to x:463 y:312
  14. 01:34:762 (1,3) - Not a blanket but the place where these two stack don't match up quite right you may want to fix that.
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:173 (4) - Maybe move the first point to x:300 y:275 to improve that blanket of 00:06:703 (6) .
  2. 00:28:410 (1) - Move the middle point to x:301 y:239
  3. 00:37:409 (2,3,4) - How about moving these three up to x:465 y:185 so they can be blanketed by 00:36:880 (1) ?
  4. 00:49:409 (1) ~ Oh my goodness what a perfect blanket ~
  5. 00:52:762 (2) - Possibly move the end point to x:321 y:149
  6. 00:55:057 (1) - How about moving this end point to x:372 and y:217 to improve that blanket of the end of 00:55:586 (3) .
  7. 01:01:939 (5) - Move ze end point to x:313 y:227 ye.
  8. 01:07:939 (1) - This first point could make the blanket ever so slightly better if moved to x:228 y:217
  9. 01:24:880 (1) - Finally move the first point on this to x:225 y:161
Whew have fun C:
Topic Starter
Little
SoGa

SoGa wrote:

Good Song ;w;
Cool Map
[General]
  1. This may be unrankable stuff : why is only ins diff has 4 red lines instead other 3 have 3 ;w; . check insane 00:11:468 They all have 4 red lines.
[Hard]
  1. hm , recommend to add a note . 00:30:351 ok
  2. 00:36:351 add a note or let 00:36:527 (3) - Ctrl+G ok, ctrl+g
  3. 00:06:173 (4,5,7) - hm ,consider adding hitsound Where? there are already hitsounds there..
[Insane]
  1. 01:19:233 (1) - Whistle on head? I don't think it is needed.
Sry .. im useless :( :(
Kocari

Kocari wrote:

Here as requested from modding queue. Such a unique song and a new voice I haven't heard before so it's good :)

General Overview - I thought it was quite smooth, rhythm fell into place quite nicely. The changes I talked about with spacing maybe might be a .98 change to a 1.0 Distance Snap, but when you actually move it, it spaces out further than the mm changes that are in the map and that's ok. It's just the reason why I stated most of them like that. This is a new song for me and now I know the types of songs that you like to map(Or a general view of what you like)

[Easy]

  1. 00:49:409 (3) - Distance Snap sure..
  2. 00:52:233 (2) - Same here ~
  3. 00:56:645 (1) - Can be DS further to the left ~
  4. 01:22:586 (1) - It doesn't sound appealing to me being here at the red tick, My suggestion would be to move that to the white tick on the left and then add a note right after it. To me following the vocals throws off the rhythm that the music is playing, but either way it can work I prefer the current rhythm because it is more interesting.
  5. 01:38:292 (3) - DS further ~
  6. 01:42:527 (1) - Correct Spacing? ok
[Normal]

  1. 00:07:232 (1) - NC to follow off with the violin here? No.
  2. 00:32:645 (3) - Space more to the right k
  3. 00:42:527 (1) - Possible make this not overlay to this 00:41:115 (1) Seems better if moved to x156 y232 It's fine.
[Hard]

  1. 00:05:821 (3,4,5) - Maybe something like this for a cleaner look? [url=00:05:821 (3,4,5) -]Example[/url] What?
  2. 00:35:998 (2) - I felt that rolling this a little longer would sound really good. I didn't like how it abruptly ends just to then play the next note It follows the music.
  3. 00:44:821 (4,5) - Possibly keep same spacing here? It's not giving me a vibe like the way you it's spaced out because nothing is truly happening for their to be inconsistent spacing sure.
  4. 00:49:939 (2) - Distance Snap and something like this? Example The way you had it didn't seem as clean unless it was intentional for something I'm not seeing clearly Seems fine to me.. I don't tend to strictly use distance snap in hard.
  5. 01:33:880 (2) - Cleaner look would be at x388 y360 Why?
[Insane]

  1. 00:22:056 (1,2,3) - Wait is something going on here that I'm not realizing? Example I looked at in on 1/8 and 1/16 and it doesn't seemed like it's snapped It's snapped to 1/3.
  2. 00:37:409 (2,3,4) - Blanket in the pocket of the slider? It is if you consider stacking.
  3. 00:53:292 (4) - Can this be moved so it doesn't overlap on the slider or does that bring a new vibe to it? The current placement flows smoothest.
  4. 01:33:351 (1) - Maybe a blanket? Example It still keeps the spacing a bit high for an insane depending how far of the blanket you want it to make, but the overall pattern you had was really nice, this is just another suggestion I prefer to keep larger spacing between (3,1)
Overall good map, just need to see and wait for other modders to come in but let me kick if off :)

Interesting new Eroge https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AosHG2Lb9e8 pretty catchy song :)
dorothy3242

dorothy3242 wrote:

Hello there I'm here with a blanket-nazi-tastic mod which you requested from The Sewing Queue.
There aren't too many blankets for me to mod or suggest so this will be short (maybe) but I'll do my best 'v';
Also this is a really nice sounding song (but who knows about lyric's translation I sure don't for all I know she's singing about her love of a desk chair)! /ovo/ The map goes with it really well and is pretty fun~

[Easy]
  1. 00:22:056 (5) - Could be blanketing 00:21:350 (4,1) . Try moving the first point to x:66 y:222, the second to x:86 y:306, and the third to x:144 y:366 for exmaple. Nah. I prefer no blanket here.
  2. 00:54:174 (2) - How about moving the end point to x:376 y:125 to blanket 00:55:233 (3) a bit better. That doesn't quite do it.. Fixed the blanket.
  3. 00:55:233 (3) - ^ and if you did that move the middle point on this to x:437 y:191 :3 oh, this is a multi-step thing...
  4. 01:17:115 (2) - Maybe move the middle point to x:353 y:227 and the end point to x:286 y:165 for that ever slightly better blanket of 01:14:821 (2) . Fixed blanket.
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:468 (1) - How about moving the middle point to x:274 y:213 and the end point to x:224 y:235 to blanket the reverse arrow side of 00:10:762 (5) better? Fixed blanket.
  2. 00:19:938 (1) - Move the middle point to x:399 y:132 and the end point to x:469 y:55 ok
  3. 00:22:762 (1) - Try a' movin' the end point to x:37 y:223 ok
  4. 00:24:173 (4) - Move the middle point to x:190 y:247 and the end point to x:245 y:235 ok
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:821 (3) - Consider making it blanket the end of 00:06:526 (5) . No thanks
  2. 00:07:938 (3) - Not a blanket for once. Why not have it start at the same place as 00:06:526 (5) ? (x:136 y:272) For flow, and the stack would not be visible anyway.
  3. 00:13:585 (5) - It's a single pixel move please don't hurt me. Move the end point to x:492 y:200 ~
  4. 00:14:291 (1) - Middle point to x:383 y:287 and the end point to x:319 y:266 could work better. ok
  5. 00:22:056 (5) - Why not make this blanket 00:21:350 (4) ? Moving the middle point to x:266 y:151 and the end point to x:293 y:180 for example. I like the current flow better.
  6. 00:31:233 (1) - This blanket of the end of 00:31:939 (3) can be improved ever so slightly by moving the end to x:227 y:105 ok
  7. 00:35:468 (1) - Why not make this blanket 00:35:998 (2) ? D: For example moving the middle point to x:226 y:290.. Current placement plays nicer.
  8. 00:37:586 (3,4) - Oh no. I'm going to point this out but even though I feel these two should really blanket eachother I'm not totally sure what to suggestr without messing with your distances ;_; my newness to modding is showing I'm sorrry ;-; Nah, I don't wanna blanket here.
  9. 00:42:527 (1) - By the end of this slider it starts getting closer to 00:43:057 (2) than it was initially. Perhaps move the end to x:439 y:156 to make the spacing between the edges of these two sliders more even? sure.
  10. 00:53:468 (4) - Move the middle point to x:305 y:211 and the end point to x:333 y:180 to improve the blanket of 00:53:115 (3) . k
  11. 01:00:527 (4) - Perhaps make it blanket 01:00:880 (1) instead of what it's currently doing. Too hard to do without overlapping the other slider.
  12. 01:02:292 (1) - Move the middle point to x:234 y:137 and the end point to x:176 y:84 ok
  13. 01:33:351 (1) - Maybe move the end point to x:463 y:312 sure
  14. 01:34:762 (1,3) - Not a blanket but the place where these two stack don't match up quite right you may want to fix that. it's a bug.
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:173 (4) - Maybe move the first point to x:300 y:275 to improve that blanket of 00:06:703 (6) . ok
  2. 00:28:410 (1) - Move the middle point to x:301 y:239 k
  3. 00:37:409 (2,3,4) - How about moving these three up to x:465 y:185 so they can be blanketed by 00:36:880 (1) ? It is blanketed if you consider the in-game stacking.
  4. 00:49:409 (1) ~ Oh my goodness what a perfect blanket ~
  5. 00:52:762 (2) - Possibly move the end point to x:321 y:149 ok
  6. 00:55:057 (1) - How about moving this end point to x:372 and y:217 to improve that blanket of the end of 00:55:586 (3) . k
  7. 01:01:939 (5) - Move ze end point to x:313 y:227 ye. k
  8. 01:07:939 (1) - This first point could make the blanket ever so slightly better if moved to x:228 y:217 k
  9. 01:24:880 (1) - Finally move the first point on this to x:225 y:161 It think it's better as it is.
Whew have fun C:
Thanks guys.
HelloSCV
from my queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:32:645 (3) - i think 2/1 slider seems better for rhythm because of the drum sound
  2. 00:41:115 (1) - adding a repeat and removing next note would be better imo
  3. 01:31:233 - it seems that you don't want to add a spinner on this diff, then consider adding a note at here instead
  4. 01:45:351 - same as Normal diff
[Normal]
  1. 00:43:586 (3) - same as other diffs
  2. 01:21:351 (5) - ^
  3. 01:29:645 - considering this is a normal diff, adding a note would be great for the vocal sound
  4. 01:45:351 (1) - maybe adding a note would be great since it's the last part of this song and acutally you did nicely on higher diffs. oh and current spinner should be moved on next red tick
[Hard]
  1. 00:19:232 (6) - hmmmmm since this part is quite silent part, i think putting a note instead of a slider would be great
  2. 00:33:174 (4) - dividing this slider into a 1/2 slider and a note is highly recommended since current slider ignores the drum sound ,which is quite loud to ignore it, at 00:33:351 - here
  3. 00:43:586 (3) - same opinion as Insane,
  4. 01:04:939 - emptying this section isn't that good idea, try adding a note? it fits better with the vocal
  5. 01:16:057 (5) - same as Insane
  6. 01:21:351 (3) - ^
  7. 01:30:615 - i expected a spinner on here like you did on Insane diff. current rhythm without a it feels really empty. well you'd better add some objects if you don't want to add a spinner
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:820 (2) - it seems that you mostly followed the vocal rather tha piano while you map this part. so what about changing this rhythm a bit? like, adding a repeat on this slider would be awesome, well you need to adjust the big jump between 00:14:820 (2,3) - these for better playing
  2. 00:18:526 (4) - same opinion as above, but oh well i'm really not sure what is the best way to deal with it
    examples


    or something else
  3. 00:24:173 (3) - ^
  4. 00:38:998 (5) - how about adding NC to emphasize this special rhythm?
  5. 00:43:586 (5) - try adding whistle on head to fit with the piano sound
  6. 00:45:351 (1) - i think there needs some adjustments on this slider (or rhythm).i expected a note or extended slider at 00:45:615 - here because of the drum sound on the blue tick. for this reason, current rhythm seems little bit awkward. i highly recommend you to change this rhythm a bit like extending current slider by 3/4 or adding a note at 00:45:615 - here is also fine imo
  7. 01:04:409 (4,5,6,7) - i tried adjusting some hitsounds on these notes (based on the song). i wonder how do you think about this
    code
    136,372,64409,2,0,P|113:368|92:361,1,45,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    192,272,64586,2,0,P|213:264|235:260,1,45,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    280,364,64762,2,0,P|257:360|236:353,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    336,264,64939,2,0,P|357:256|379:252,1,45,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  8. 01:15:968 (4) - is no clap intended?
  9. 01:16:320 (8) - this note needs drum sampleset instead of soft clap according to the song
  10. 01:21:351 (3) - since there is a cymbal sound which is suitable to have finish hitsound. why don't you add it?
good luck~
Topic Starter
Little
HelloSCV

HelloSCV wrote:

from my queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:32:645 (3) - i think 2/1 slider seems better for rhythm because of the drum sound I feel the rhythm as two sets of 3 notes, so this fits better for my interpretation.
  2. 00:41:115 (1) - adding a repeat and removing next note would be better imo No, I think it's fine.
  3. 01:31:233 - it seems that you don't want to add a spinner on this diff, then consider adding a note at here instead No, that doesn't seem right to me.
  4. 01:45:351 - same as Normal diff ~
[Normal]
  1. 00:43:586 (3) - same as other diffs ~
  2. 01:21:351 (5) - ^ ^
  3. 01:29:645 - considering this is a normal diff, adding a note would be great for the vocal sound ok, added a circle.
  4. 01:45:351 (1) - maybe adding a note would be great since it's the last part of this song and acutally you did nicely on higher diffs. oh and current spinner should be moved on next red tick ok, added circle.
[Hard]
  1. 00:19:232 (6) - hmmmmm since this part is quite silent part, i think putting a note instead of a slider would be great ok, changed to circle.
  2. 00:33:174 (4) - dividing this slider into a 1/2 slider and a note is highly recommended since current slider ignores the drum sound ,which is quite loud to ignore it, at 00:33:351 - here I prefer the current rhythm for the fun syncopated rhythm.
  3. 00:43:586 (3) - same opinion as Insane, ~
  4. 01:04:939 - emptying this section isn't that good idea, try adding a note? it fits better with the vocal Leaving an empty beat helps make the next note feel stronger, which is important here.
  5. 01:16:057 (5) - same as Insane ~
  6. 01:21:351 (3) - ^ ^
  7. 01:30:615 - i expected a spinner on here like you did on Insane diff. current rhythm without a it feels really empty. well you'd better add some objects if you don't want to add a spinner ok, added spinner.
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:820 (2) - it seems that you mostly followed the vocal rather tha piano while you map this part. so what about changing this rhythm a bit? like, adding a repeat on this slider would be awesome, well you need to adjust the big jump between 00:14:820 (2,3) - these for better playing I try to follow a bit of both piano and vocal, but I like how the slider release feels here with the piano, and it plays better to me as it is.
  2. 00:18:526 (4) - same opinion as above, but oh well i'm really not sure what is the best way to deal with it I don't have to map every beat.. the vocal note in the middle is less important, so I prefer to have the slider end on the other vocal note, and keep circle to click on piano note. The longer slider also gives a stretched feeling with goes nicely with the vocals.
  3. 00:24:173 (3) - ^ ^
  4. 00:38:998 (5) - how about adding NC to emphasize this special rhythm? ok, added NC.
  5. 00:43:586 (5) - try adding whistle on head to fit with the piano sound ok, added whistle for all diffs.
  6. 00:45:351 (1) - i think there needs some adjustments on this slider (or rhythm).i expected a note or extended slider at 00:45:615 - here because of the drum sound on the blue tick. for this reason, current rhythm seems little bit awkward. i highly recommend you to change this rhythm a bit like extending current slider by 3/4 or adding a note at 00:45:615 - here is also fine imo I disagree. There is also beat on 00:45:527 and since the empty beat is on a 1/4 tick, it is weaker, and less important (not necessary to map). It's better to leave a gap to have reasonable distance spacing and better emphasis on (2).
  7. 01:04:409 (4,5,6,7) - i tried adjusting some hitsounds on these notes (based on the song). i wonder how do you think about this added whistle on (7).
  8. 01:15:968 (4) - is no clap intended? I guess I'll change it to clap..
  9. 01:16:320 (8) - this note needs drum sampleset instead of soft clap according to the song ok, changed to drum
  10. 01:21:351 (3) - since there is a cymbal sound which is suitable to have finish hitsound. why don't you add it? It's much quieter, so I must have missed it when placing the hitsounds. Added.
good luck~
Thanks for modding.
-Nya-


Hello! Sorry for the delay.
Well, here's my mod:

Easy:
00:12:173 (1,3) – I suggest to try and avoid this overlap. Perhaps this will work better.
00:32:645 (3) – To me it sounds better if you extend this slider till it’s here: 00:33:351 - (On the white tick)
01:27:704 (1) – I don’t really recommend two repeats in an Easy diff. Consider breaking it up into two sliders, or something else.

Normal:
00:31:233 (1,3) – This stack can be improved. Place 00:32:645 (3) – here: X:340 Y:15700:31:939 (2,4) – I really don’t recommend this overlap. Try to do something else here.01:32:468 (1) – Why not stack this slider on the head of 01:29:821 (6) –

Hard:
Uncheck “Widescreen support”00:14:820 (2,3) – This stack can be improved. Place 00:15:350 (3) – here: X:266 Y:8100:21:350 (4) – Maybe make this slider look similar to these two sliders: 00:19:938 (1,2) – 00:29:115 (3) – Also curve this slider like you curved these 00:28:410 (1,2) – 00:36:351 – Place a note here. The music suggests it.00:56:645 (1) – Why not move this slider a bit to the right to make a nice triangle shape with 00:56:292 (4,5) –
01:40:057 (5) – Move this slider upwards a bit to make it more parallel with 01:39:704 (4) –

Overall, nice mapset.
I’ll shoot a star.
Good Luck with this map! :D
Topic Starter
Little
-Nya-

-Nya- wrote:



Hello! Sorry for the delay.
Well, here's my mod:

Easy:
00:12:173 (1,3) – I suggest to try and avoid this overlap. Perhaps this will work better. No, it flows much better the current way.00:32:645 (3) – To me it sounds better if you extend this slider till it’s here: 00:33:351 - (On the white tick) No, the current rhythm matches my interpretation of it.01:27:704 (1) – I don’t really recommend two repeats in an Easy diff. Consider breaking it up into two sliders, or something else. There's nothing wrong with using multiple repeats. It matches the song really well here.

Normal:
00:31:233 (1,3) – This stack can be improved. Place 00:32:645 (3) – here: X:340 Y:157 Fixed stack.00:31:939 (2,4) – I really don’t recommend this overlap. Try to do something else here. Overlap is fine.01:32:468 (1) – Why not stack this slider on the head of 01:29:821 (6) – I put some initial direction into it to get the feel I want.

Hard:
Uncheck “Widescreen support” ok00:14:820 (2,3) – This stack can be improved. Place 00:15:350 (3) – here: X:266 Y:81 Yeah, I know how to fix stacks. I can't do much if osu! keeps breaking them.00:21:350 (4) – Maybe make this slider look similar to these two sliders: 00:19:938 (1,2) – No.00:29:115 (3) – Also curve this slider like you curved these 00:28:410 (1,2) – Why? and which direction?00:36:351 – Place a note here. The music suggests it. No. I prefer to leave space there so the map isn't too hard, and better emphasis of the next object which has a more important note.00:56:645 (1) – Why not move this slider a bit to the right to make a nice triangle shape with 00:56:292 (4,5) – Jump to play stronger.01:40:057 (5) – Move this slider upwards a bit to make it more parallel with 01:39:704 (4) – Sure.

Overall, nice mapset.
I’ll shoot a star.
Good Luck with this map! :D
Thanks for modding.
Aerous
Sorry for the super long delay. I had a lot of exams for the past few weeks. Gomenasai

Insane :

This is a suggestion , why not add a spinner from 00:00:174 to 00:05:115 ?
00:22:762 (1) Make this with the same y-axis as the previous note
00:27:703 Add a note here ? Maybe stack it on 00:28:056 (1) ?
00:40:409 Maybe ?

Hard :
Same as Insane , why not add a spinner from 00:00:174 to 00:05:115 ?


Nothing to say for Normal and Easy

I'll give you a star when it's available
Topic Starter
Little
Aerous

Aerous wrote:

Sorry for the super long delay. I had a lot of exams for the past few weeks. Gomenasai

Insane :

This is a suggestion , why not add a spinner from 00:00:174 to 00:05:115 ? Spinner doesn't fit with the music there.
00:22:762 (1) Make this with the same y-axis as the previous note No.
00:27:703 Add a note here ? Maybe stack it on 00:28:056 (1) ? No.
00:40:409 Maybe ? No.

Hard :
Same as Insane , why not add a spinner from 00:00:174 to 00:05:115 ? ~


Nothing to say for Normal and Easy

I'll give you a star when it's available
Thanks, no change.
Laurier
thanks for request.


General

Easy
00:22:056 (5) - Ctrl+G ? will be able to smoothly the aiming.
00:38:645 - this timing should follow by note. this will fit in note and finish.
00:42:527 (1) - remove whistle on slider end. it don't follow anything.
00:57:880 (2) - add soft finish ?
01:07:939 (1) - please try this rhythm. http://puu.sh/f8II9/6150bdea11.jpg
01:10:762 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is a bit odd to me. why didn't use same rhythm as 00:48:174 (1,2,3) - ?
01:21:351 (3,1) - please try this http://puu.sh/f8J2H/e4dd012868.jpg

Normal
good

Hard
00:28:410 (1,2,3) - make a something pattern with those note ? like this http://puu.sh/f8Lzh/1d32918b17.jpg
00:44:821 (4) - move to 00:44:909 - ? it is better to follow the vocal.
01:04:939 - add note under the slider end. 01:04:409 (4,1) - I felt the anti-jump is too tricky. but I don't want to broke next patterns.
01:12:880 (3) - make a curve like 01:13:233 (4) - ?
01:20:998 (2,3) - I felt that a bit odd pattern about this stack. don't fit with your style. maybe will be better if you try this http://puu.sh/f8NGh/5a37f49caf.jpg

Insane
00:06:173 (4) - Ctrl+G ? a little early to start the jump.
00:22:056 (1,2,3) - 1/6 ? don't fit this rhythm. should use 1/8. http://puu.sh/f8Oct/8a54294a8d.jpg
00:46:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this flow is bad. please make to the natural flow like this. http://puu.sh/f8OKv/57339f324f.jpg
00:53:292 (4) - I don't like overlap like this. how about this pattern ? http://puu.sh/f8OWV/6e86e2d471.jpg
00:57:262 - add not here ? why dont follow this sound =.= for example http://puu.sh/f8P9h/3fc0555401.jpg

Yomi's Extra
Disable Widescreen Support
00:22:056 (1,2,3) - same as Insane
00:30:880 (2) - what the 1/8. please change to 1/4 slider.
01:04:057 (2,3,4,5) - a bit odd rhythm. please start to kick at (2)
Topic Starter
Little

Laurier wrote:

thanks for request.


General

Easy
00:22:056 (5) - Ctrl+G ? will be able to smoothly the aiming. hmm.. I thought the direction I used was kinda cool, but maybe smooth movement is better for Easy diff. Changed.
00:38:645 - this timing should follow by note. this will fit in note and finish. I tried some different rhythms that had note there, but I still like current one better.
00:42:527 (1) - remove whistle on slider end. it don't follow anything. There's piano note in the music, but really quiet. Removed whistle here in my diffs.
00:57:880 (2) - add soft finish ? I think it's not needed there.
01:07:939 (1) - please try this rhythm. http://puu.sh/f8II9/6150bdea11.jpg I think that 3/2 beat spacing doesn't really feel god with the song, since there is sustained vocal note, which I think it's weird to leave empty.
01:10:762 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is a bit odd to me. why didn't use same rhythm as 00:48:174 (1,2,3) - ? Changed rhythm, but a bit different because it was hard to keep the spacing and smooth aiming.
01:21:351 (3,1) - please try this http://puu.sh/f8J2H/e4dd012868.jpg good.

Normal
good

Hard
00:28:410 (1,2,3) - make a something pattern with those note ? like this http://puu.sh/f8Lzh/1d32918b17.jpg Okay, made a pattern.
00:44:821 (4) - move to 00:44:909 - ? it is better to follow the vocal. I prefer to keep it on 1/2 tick, following drum.
01:04:939 - add note under the slider end. 01:04:409 (4,1) - I felt the anti-jump is too tricky. but I don't want to broke next patterns. I changed my rhythm to avoid the anti-jump. I hope it's better now.
01:12:880 (3) - make a curve like 01:13:233 (4) - ? Fixed.
01:20:998 (2,3) - I felt that a bit odd pattern about this stack. don't fit with your style. maybe will be better if you try this http://puu.sh/f8NGh/5a37f49caf.jpg Ok, fixed.

Insane
00:06:173 (4) - Ctrl+G ? a little early to start the jump. Fixed.
00:22:056 (1,2,3) - 1/6 ? don't fit this rhythm. should use 1/8. http://puu.sh/f8Oct/8a54294a8d.jpg Good catch.
00:46:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this flow is bad. please make to the natural flow like this. http://puu.sh/f8OKv/57339f324f.jpg ok, changed.
00:53:292 (4) - I don't like overlap like this. how about this pattern ? http://puu.sh/f8OWV/6e86e2d471.jpg Changed it a bit differently.
00:57:262 - add not here ? why dont follow this sound =.= for example http://puu.sh/f8P9h/3fc0555401.jpg Added a circle.
Thanks!
-Tochi
From my modding queue
Only modding Extra as requested!


  • General
  1. Disable Widescreen Support since there's no SB.


  • Yomi's Extra
  1. 00:05:732 (2,1) - This is a difficult start, i recommend to Ctrl + G on 00:05:468 (1) - for a better flow.
  2. 00:22:291 (2) - This should be on 00:22:320 - and 00:22:526 (3) - should be here 00:22:585 - Can you here that it sounds better?
  3. 00:28:056 (7,8,1) - Same as 00:05:732 (2,1) -
  4. 00:30:792 (1) - If u want to keep this, make a new combo here 00:30:880 (2) - or stack 00:30:792 (1) - with 00:30:880 (2) - 's end.
  5. 00:31:057 (2) - Delete and make 00:30:880 (1) - end here 00:31:057 - It sounds better, and it's not overmapped.
  6. 00:57:704 (6) - Move to x88 y348 to make a better jump.
  7. 01:04:057 (2,3) - It looks bad when it's stacked. I recommend to move 01:04:057 (2) - to x256 y16


  • Feedback

    Nice map \o/ Good luck with it!
Kinomi
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187,289,98821,1,8,0:0:0:0:
201,293,98909,1,8,0:0:0:0:
215,295,98998,6,0,B|258:300|258:300|338:269,1,100,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
469,282,99351,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,134,99527,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,113,99615,1,8,0:0:0:0:
363,95,99704,2,0,B|320:90|320:90|240:121,1,100,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
310,279,100057,1,10,0:0:0:0:
147,316,100233,2,0,L|96:288,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,277,100409,6,0,B|74:240|74:240|112:168,1,100,2|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
284,46,100762,2,0,B|286:83|286:83|248:155,1,100,14|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,138,101027,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,138,101115,6,0,L|323:164,1,66.6666666666667,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,188,101351,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,208,101468,2,0,B|459:242|459:242|425:309,1,66.6666666666667,10|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
398,330,101704,1,4,3:0:0:0:
325,339,101821,6,0,B|285:342|285:342|229:278,1,100,6|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
115,172,102174,1,0,3:0:0:0:
164,347,102350,1,10,3:2:0:0:
111,83,102527,1,10,0:0:0:0:
160,258,102703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,166,102880,1,8,0:0:0:0:
247,264,103056,1,10,0:0:0:0:
358,106,103233,5,10,0:0:0:0:
148,165,103409,1,8,0:0:0:0:
465,101,103586,1,8,0:0:0:0:
255,160,103762,1,10,0:0:0:0:
365,2,103939,1,10,0:0:0:0:
248,265,104115,1,8,0:0:0:0:
223,40,104292,1,8,0:0:0:0:
309,337,104468,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105351,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105439,12,0,109586,0:0:0:0:

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