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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, February 08, 2015 at 4:24:58 AM

Artist: xi
Title: Wish upon Twin Stars
Source: SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
Tags: SDVX Character Theme First Contest eon-
BPM: 200
Filesize: 4315kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:

Download: xi - Wish upon Twin Stars
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Fight with Ichia7x
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02:50 LNP-: chi chan
02:50 ichia7x: hi beb
02:50 LNP-: mod request
02:50 *LNP- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/540060 xi - Wish upon Twin Stars]
02:51 LNP-: :D
02:51 ichia7x: wai no gd request
02:51 ichia7x: advanced lv. 10
02:52 LNP-: mau kerjain sendiri dulu
02:52 ichia7x: lv 9
02:52 ichia7x: lel
02:52 ichia7x: ye ye tau
02:52 ichia7x: aku pengen suptag siet
02:52 LNP-: huehue
02:52 ichia7x: mau bikin mapset mode lain
02:52 ichia7x: BAT mania pada repot
02:52 ichia7x: ngurusin MBC
02:52 LNP-: iya
02:53 LNP-: oh yg renatus ya
02:53 ichia7x: give me pls
02:53 LNP-: apanya ?
02:53 LNP-: renatus enak kalo dibikin mania
02:53 ichia7x: yup
02:53 ichia7x: suptag lel
02:54 LNP-: ini aja hasil ngemis ;w;
02:54 LNP-: dan mod queue pada tutup semua `-`
02:55 ichia7x: aku belum pernah denger renatus sampe selesai
02:55 ichia7x: pernah dl, nyoba ngemap 5 detik awal, deleted
02:55 ichia7x: kukira beli sendiri
02:55 LNP-: awakwkawkaw
02:55 LNP-: renatus awalnya ngebosenin
02:55 LNP-: tapi pass masuk reff baru emejing
02:56 ichia7x: lolz
02:56 *ichia7x is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/540061 xi - Wish upon Twin Stars]
02:56 ichia7x: OAO
02:56 ichia7x: fiat x quietus
02:56 LNP-: >w<
02:57 ichia7x: umm, anu aja
02:57 ichia7x: irc
02:57 ichia7x: lel
02:57 LNP-: okeh
02:57 *ichia7x is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/540060 xi - Wish upon Twin Stars [EXHAUST Lv.15]]
02:57 ichia7x: 00:02:125 (2125|0,2162|1,2200|2) -
02:57 ichia7x: turunin ke 1/8 beat
02:57 ichia7x: pake 50% dulu biar jelas
02:58 LNP-: um
02:58 LNP-: itu udh pass deh 
03:00 ichia7x: nggak `-`)
03:01 LNP-: oiya
03:01 ichia7x: 00:04:975 - ga 2 notes?
03:01 LNP-: added
03:02 ichia7x: 00:11:875 (11875|0) - mulainya dari00:11:950 -
03:02 ichia7x: 00:22:300 - 3-notes aja, ngikution sebelumnya
03:02 LNP-: 00:11:875 (11875|0) - udh pass
03:02 ichia7x: 00:24:400 - add note di 2, reverse stairs
03:03 LNP-:  ok
03:03 ichia7x: bentar aku dengerin lagunya dulu
03:03 LNP-: =w=)b
03:03 *ichia7x is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/540060 xi - Wish upon Twin Stars [EXHAUST Lv.15]] <osu!mania> |4K|
03:06 ichia7x: miss 6
03:06 ichia7x: 00:18:925 - add note deh
03:06 LNP-: kenapa ?
03:06 ichia7x: ada beat kelewat
03:07 LNP-: ok
03:07 ichia7x: 00:29:275 - 00:29:800 - samain aja kalo mau, 2-notes semua, tapi ga usah juga ga terlalu ngefek sih, aku tau maksudmu
03:07 LNP-: =w=
03:08 ichia7x: 00:31:275 - 00:32:075 - 1/6 pls
03:08 ichia7x: add note di 3, ada beat kelewat lagi
03:08 LNP-: aih
03:08 LNP-: ok
03:09 ichia7x: 00:33:475 - buat efek fading, kalo mau add note di 1, atau sebelumnya dibuat LN
03:09 ichia7x: di 1
03:10 ichia7x: 00:34:075 - 00:34:375 - 1/3 pls
03:10 LNP-: ok
03:10 LNP-: hue ok
03:10 ichia7x: 00:38:275 - fading juga
03:10 LNP-: eh kenapa 1/3
03:10 LNP-: 1/4 udh pass 030
03:10 ichia7x: emang 1/3 `-`
03:11 ichia7x: nope
03:11 ichia7x: pake 50% dong 8)
03:11 ichia7x: 00:39:100 - ini kalo dikasih note lebih enak deh
03:11 LNP-: oh iya
03:11 ichia7x: 2 aja
03:11 ichia7x: 00:40:676 - faing
03:11 ichia7x: *fading
03:11 LNP-: ok
03:12 ichia7x: 00:41:576 - fading
03:12 LNP-: 00:41:576 -  jangan deh
03:12 LNP-: kurang afdol
03:13 ichia7x: 00:47:126 - 00:47:276 - stairs | 00:47:426 - 00:47:576 - juga
03:18 LNP-: DC `-`
03:18 ichia7x: lol
03:19 ichia7x: mod gw tadi banyak `-`
03:19 ichia7x: 00:47:126 - 00:47:276 - stairs | 00:47:426 - 00:47:576 - juga
03:19 LNP-: itu udh
03:20 ichia7x: 01:08:276 - 01:08:351 - missing note
03:20 LNP-: oh iya
03:21 ichia7x: 01:22:077 - 01:22:377 - full stair harusnya
03:21 LNP-: ikutin biola
03:21 ichia7x: 01:22:377 - 01:22:677 - ga yakin, kalo pake 50% beatnya 1/6, kalo 100% cuma 1/4
03:21 ichia7x: orz
03:21 LNP-: piano*
03:22 ichia7x: kalo piano, yang mod terakhir itu pake 1/6
03:22 LNP-: ok
03:22 LNP-: done
03:23 ichia7x: 01:23:052 (83052|1) - nothing happened, pls delete
03:23 ichia7x: 01:23:052 (83052|1) - add disini, ada piano
03:23 LNP-: =w=a
03:24 LNP-: perasaan dari tadi emank disitu deh
03:24 ichia7x: 01:26:127 - 01:26:277 - 1/6
03:25 LNP-: done
03:25 ichia7x: 01:26:427 - 01:26:502 - piano again
03:25 LNP-: ok
03:25 ichia7x: 01:27:177 - 01:27:252 - double trill kaya atasnya
03:26 LNP-: ok
03:26 ichia7x: 01:27:627 - 01:27:927 - piano semua
03:26 LNP-: ok
03:26 ichia7x: 01:31:902 - missing piano
03:26 LNP-: ok
03:27 ichia7x: 01:33:289 (93289|1,93327|2,93364|3) - turun ke 1/8
03:27 LNP-: ok
03:27 ichia7x: 01:34:377 (94377|1) - move to 01:34:352 -  (1/12)
03:28 LNP-: ok
03:28 LNP-: 01:28:827 - disini tambah piano juga ?
03:29 ichia7x: oh itu ya
03:29 ichia7x: 01:28:902 -
03:30 ichia7x: 01:35:277 - add LN for uprising sound? whatever lel
03:30 LNP-: nonono
03:31 ichia7x: i know it lel
03:31 ichia7x: sounds bat
03:31 ichia7x: *bad
03:31 LNP-: yesyesyes
03:32 ichia7x: 01:40:227 (100227|3,100265|2,100302|1,100340|0,100377|3,100377|2) - copy 01:39:927 (99927|0,99927|2,100002|1,100002|3,100077|0,100077|2) - again reverse it
03:32 ichia7x: lel
03:32 LNP-: hue
03:32 ichia7x: 01:44:727 - 3-notes
03:32 LNP-: 1/8 cocok kok
03:32 LNP-: 2 notes lebih baik
03:33 ichia7x: aku tau, tapi aneh
03:33 ichia7x: terserah sih *-*
03:33 LNP-: meow
03:33 ichia7x: 01:45:177 - white blue piano
03:33 ichia7x: 01:46:677 - ^
03:33 LNP-: meow
03:33 LNP-: ok
03:34 ichia7x: 01:48:327 - 3-notes again
03:34 ichia7x: 01:49:002 - entah kenapa ini enak dikasih mini jack di 1
03:34 ichia7x: 01:49:527 - add note di 3
03:35 ichia7x: 01:49:977 - di 2
03:35 LNP-: no jack
03:35 LNP-: enak dilihat, gk enak dimainkan
03:35 LNP-: ok
03:35 ichia7x: um oke deh
03:35 ichia7x: 01:51:477 - ga 3-notes?
03:35 LNP-: 01:49:977 - no
03:36 LNP-: ok
03:37 LNP-: 00:35:875 - ada hihat
03:38 ichia7x: 01:55:677 (115677|2) - 'rusuh'
03:38 ichia7x: mending di fill semua
03:38 ichia7x: express your notes there
03:38 LNP-: wkwkw
03:38 LNP-: apus LN nya
03:39 ichia7x: 01:55:677 -
03:39 ichia7x: http://puu.sh/cQlFa/7236da7eef.png
03:41 LNP-: hmm
03:42 ichia7x: ah sudah~
03:43 LNP-: ok
03:43 LNP-: =w=
03:43 LNP-: ADV ?
03:43 *ichia7x is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/529285 LeaF - Evanescent [Aspire]] <CatchTheBeat>
03:43 ichia7x: surem
03:44 LNP-: emank
03:44 ichia7x: males =w=a
03:44 ichia7x: ntar kapan-kapan
03:44 LNP-: hue ok
03:44 LNP-: save log dulu
03:44 LNP-: um tombol savelog apa ya?
03:44 LNP-: lupa
03:45 ichia7x: males lol
03:45 ichia7x: a /savelog
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hi kak LNP-
Simple Mod Ready :D


Novice Lv.5
>> 01:17:276 - add note for consistency
>> 01:19:676 - ^
>> 01:22:077 - ^
>> gk banyak yg jdi msalah disini 8-)


ADVANCED Lv. 12
>> 01:46:752 - move to column 3
>> 01:46:752 - add note for consistency
>> 01:08:126 - ^
>> 01:42:177 - ^
>> 00:21:625 - add note ( the sound is same as 00:21:475 )
>> 00:26:575 - add note ( ^ 00:25:075 )
>> Disini juga gk banyak yg masalah :lol:



EXHAUST Lv. 15
>> 00:02:125 (2125|0,2162|1,2200|2) - move back by 1/8 line
>> 01:33:327 (93327|1,93364|2,93402|3) - ^
>> 00:04:975 - i suggest to make it double note
>> 00:54:326 (54326|0,54326|2) - maybe both note move to column 3 and 4 and turn it to LN end at 00:54:626
>> maybe at note in every 1/4 line at 01:08:126 - 01:08:426 ??
>> 01:46:677 and 01:46:752 - add single note
>> 01:23:277 - add note for consistency
>> I like this Difficulty very much :D


Itu aja dari aku...
klo msih ada kesalahan dimaklumi aja ya... 8-)
Thanks..
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hi kak LNP-
Simple Mod Ready :D


Novice Lv.5
>> 01:17:276 - add note for consistency ok
>> 01:19:676 - ^ ^
>> 01:22:077 - ^ ^
>> gk banyak yg jdi msalah disini 8-)


ADVANCED Lv. 12
>> 01:46:752 - move to column 3 ?
>> 01:46:752 - add note for consistency ? ok
>> 01:08:126 - ^ ok
>> 01:42:177 - ^ ok
>> 00:21:625 - add note ( the sound is same as 00:21:475 ) no
>> 00:26:575 - add note ( ^ 00:25:075 ) ok
>> Disini juga gk banyak yg masalah :lol:



EXHAUST Lv. 15
>> 00:02:125 (2125|0,2162|1,2200|2) - move back by 1/8 line ok
>> 01:33:327 (93327|1,93364|2,93402|3) - ^ kayak nya ini udh pass
>> 00:04:975 - i suggest to make it double note ...ok
>> 00:54:326 (54326|0,54326|2) - maybe both note move to column 3 and 4 and turn it to LN end at 00:54:626 nice
>> maybe at note in every 1/4 line at 01:08:126 - 01:08:426 ?? oh ok
>> 01:46:677 and 01:46:752 - add single note already
>> 01:23:277 - add note for consistency no
>> I like this Difficulty very much :D Thanks :D


Itu aja dari aku...
klo msih ada kesalahan dimaklumi aja ya... 8-)
Thanks..


Thanks ;)

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As per requested
kolomnya 1234 ok?~

General
00:01:075 - tempat seharusnya inherited timing point

EXHAUST
~timing sebelum diubah~
00:01:037 - tambah di 2/3 ?
00:02:837 (2837|0,2837|2) - salah snap?
00:03:512 (3512|2) - hapus
00:54:888 - saran
01:04:526 - sekedar saran
01:34:714 (94714|3) - hapus
01:35:089 - tambah satu

Yah... aku saranin sih remap sedikit di bagian Kiai dan bagian yang mirip karena aku kira polanya mengikuti nada piano...

ADVANCED
~timing sebelum diubah~
00:09:925 (9925|2,9925|1) - pindah ke 14
00:50:726 (50726|1,50726|3) - pindah ke 13 ~sama untuk not dan nada yang mirip~
00:51:326 - tambah 2 not, ikuti snapping 1/4

Cukup lah

NOVICE
Sudah bagus, aku kaga nemu apapun yang harus dimod :3


That's all. Kalau nggak membantu jangan dikasih kudosu~
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As per requested
kolomnya 1234 ok?~

General
00:01:075 - tempat seharusnya inherited timing point hmm. . kayaknya udh pass, mungkin nunggu opini yang lain dulu :D

EXHAUST
~timing sebelum diubah~
00:01:037 - tambah di 2/3 ? no
00:02:837 (2837|0,2837|2) - salah snap? hmmm. . . ke white line dulu , butuh lebih banyak opini
00:03:512 (3512|2) - hapus no
00:54:888 - saran no , udh pass itu
01:04:526 - sekedar saran
01:34:714 (94714|3) - hapus no
01:35:089 - tambah satu no

Yah... aku saranin sih remap sedikit di bagian Kiai dan bagian yang mirip karena aku kira polanya mengikuti nada piano...

ADVANCED
~timing sebelum diubah~
00:09:925 (9925|2,9925|1) - pindah ke 14 ok
00:50:726 (50726|1,50726|3) - pindah ke 13 ~sama untuk not dan nada yang mirip~ ok
00:51:326 - tambah 2 not, ikuti snapping 1/4 ok

Cukup lah

NOVICE
Sudah bagus, aku kaga nemu apapun yang harus dimod :3 >w<


That's all. Kalau nggak membantu jangan dikasih kudosu~


Thanks :)

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Hi LNP-
General
BPM 199.995→BPM 200
Tag add 第一回ボルテキャラテーマ曲コンテスト or VOLTEX Character Theme First Contest
source https://remywiki.com/Wish_upon_Twin_Stars

|1|2|3|4|


Good luck ;)
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Really fun map, can never have too much xi!
I can only play up to the ADVANCED, so I'll only mod the first two diffs.

|1|2|3|4|

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NOVICE Lv.5
01:33:027 - add note 1 or 2
01:33:327 (93327|1) - move to 3?
01:33:552 - add note 1 or 2
01:33:777 - add note 4
01:34:077 (94077|3) - move to 3
01:34:377 - add note 2 or 4
01:34:677 - add note
01:34:977 - add note
01:35:127 - add note

Here's a suggestion pattern...
Image

Very nice diff, just towards the end I feel it could use a few more notes at the bridge where the piano is in full control..



ADVANCED Lv.12
Same section as in NOVICE really. However I feel I should explain my suggestion first....
At 01:13:076 - we have LNs that focus on bass notes which add a nice flow
At 01:32:277 - however, I feel there is more "influence" in the main melody, so I feel adding some LN's for the melody, and standard notes for the bass would make it flow a little better.

01:32:727 - Add LN until 01:33:027 -
01:33:327 - move 4 to 3, change it to an LN until 01:33:777
01:33:777 (93777|1) - Remove note
01:33:777 (93777|1) - Add note
01:33:777 (93777|3) - LN until 01:34:077 -
01:34:077 - add LN until 01:34:377 -
01:34:377 (94377|2) - LN until 01:34:677 -

Overall, another really nice diff, a lot of fun to play!
Keep it up ~


Sorry I can't help with EXHAUST, I could mod it, though I feel it's better to mod what I can play.
All the best with this map! :)
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-LASU- wrote:
Hi LNP-
General
BPM 199.995→BPM 200 fixed
Tag add 第一回ボルテキャラテーマ曲コンテスト or VOLTEX Character Theme First Contest added
source https://remywiki.com/Wish_upon_Twin_Stars

|1|2|3|4|
mod
EXHAUST Lv.15
00:08:500 - add note 1 or 4 add note 4
00:08:650 - add note 3 ok
00:30:775 (30775|3,30850|2) - 1/6 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2241505 ok
00:31:225 (31225|0,31225|2,31225|1) - 1/6 (00:31:275-) already 1/6
00:32:950 - add note ok
00:33:100 - add note 2 ok
00:34:375 - add note ok
01:28:302 - add note 3ok


Good luck ;)


Thanks :D

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Really fun map, can never have too much xi!
I can only play up to the ADVANCED, so I'll only mod the first two diffs.

|1|2|3|4|

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NOVICE Lv.5
01:33:027 - add note 1 or 2 ok
01:33:327 (93327|1) - move to 3? no
01:33:552 - add note 1 or 2 no
01:33:777 - add note 4 add note 3
01:34:077 (94077|3) - move to 3 ok
01:34:377 - add note 2 or 4 add note 2
01:34:677 - add note ok
01:34:977 - add note ok
01:35:127 - add note no

Here's a suggestion pattern... nice , but i dont apply it, i dont need more note because its novice diff, sorry
Image

Very nice diff, just towards the end I feel it could use a few more notes at the bridge where the piano is in full control..



ADVANCED Lv.12
Same section as in NOVICE really. However I feel I should explain my suggestion first....
At 01:13:076 - we have LNs that focus on bass notes which add a nice flow
At 01:32:277 - however, I feel there is more "influence" in the main melody, so I feel adding some LN's for the melody, and standard notes for the bass would make it flow a little better.

01:32:727 - Add LN until 01:33:027 -
01:33:327 - move 4 to 3, change it to an LN until 01:33:777
01:33:777 (93777|1) - Remove note
01:33:777 (93777|1) - Add note
01:33:777 (93777|3) - LN until 01:34:077 -
01:34:077 - add LN until 01:34:377 -
01:34:377 (94377|2) - LN until 01:34:677 -
remap
Overall, another really nice diff, a lot of fun to play!
Keep it up ~


Sorry I can't help with EXHAUST, I could mod it, though I feel it's better to mod what I can play.
All the best with this map! :) Thanks :)



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My modding is focusing at the genre music itself.
Also i checked your note pitch and measure error.
note for beat is little suggest


General

try to follow step number while see my suggesting, it may be confuse you (me too)

not sure if background dimension are rankable from its dimension size, i suggest you to change background.


Novice

Pitch note problem
00:03:775 (3775|0) - move this to 2nd column for

1. 00:04:225 (4225|3) - this note, move to 1st column

2. 00:04:375 (4375|1) - i think this should been placed to 3rd column, according to your note pitch

3. 00:15:775 (15775|1,15925|0,16075|2,16225|3) - how about move them to 4th-3rd-2nd-1st column (Piano key goes down)

4. 00:13:675 - i suggest you to add note in 1st column, this part has chord (low key piano) i think better to make it double

5. 00:14:125 - same things like above, add note to 4th column

6. 00:15:475 - add note to 3rd column

7. 00:16:525 - add note to 4th column

8. 00:16:975 - 00:17:275 - add note to 3rd and 2nd (has same chord btw)

9. 00:17:575 (17575|1) - i'm not sure if this had chord, so i just suggest move this to 4th column, its high key

10. 00:25:975 (25975|3,25975|2) - move this to 1st and 2nd column, and 00:25:825 (25825|0) - to 3rd column. its almost same with 00:25:375 (25375|3,25525|0,25525|1) -

11. 00:43:826 (43826|3) - move to 2nd note, double drum and cymbal roll

12. 00:45:626 (45626|0,45776|1) - move them to 4th column and 00:46:076 (46076|3) - to 2nd column

13. From 01:01:076 - till 01:02:126 - pitch are more like this

14. 01:07:676 (67676|1,67826|2) - ctrl + H

15. 01:13:076 (73076|3,73076|0) - ctrl + H , this note has high pitch also 01:15:476 (75476|3) - should be in 1st column

20. 01:16:076 (76076|2) - move to 2nd column, i think its the proper pitch than 3rd

26. 01:18:476 (78476|2) - move to 2nd column

30. 01:19:676 (79676|3) - move to 2nd column

32. 01:20:277 (80277|2) - move this to 1st column and 01:20:277 (80277|0) - to 2nd column

37. 01:22:377 (82377|1) - move this to 3rd column

38. 01:32:427 (92427|1,92577|2,92727|3) - ctrl + h , pitch goes down

39. 01:37:077 (97077|3) - move to 1st column

40. 01:37:677 (97677|2) - move to 01:37:527 - in same column


Measure note problem
16. 00:05:575 (5575|2) - start hold note should be here 00:05:500 - lead synth and piano are sounded in that place

17. 01:15:476 (75476|0) - After you fixed #15 issue, this should can be highlighted. then this hold note end supposed to be 01:15:776 - or you can just change it to normal note

33. 01:20:277 (80277|0) - hold note end supposed to be 01:20:877 -

41. 01:42:927 (102927|1) - hold note end supposed to be 01:43:377 -



Note for beat problem
18. 00:07:675 - add note to 4th column and use finish sample sound

19. 01:15:776 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound, is not hard

21. 01:16:376 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

22. 01:16:676 - add note to 4th column for symphonic synth sound

23. 01:16:976 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

24. 01:17:576 - add note to 4th column for symphonic synth sound

25. 01:18:176 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

27. 01:18:776 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

28. 01:19:076 - add note to 4th column for symphonic synth sound

29. 01:19:376 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

31. 01:19:976 - add note to 1st column for symphonic synth sound

34. 01:20:577 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

35. 01:21:177 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

36. 01:21:777 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound




EXHAUST

Pitch note problem
1. 00:01:225 (1225|1,1525|2) - ctrl + H

3. 00:03:437 (3437|0,3475|1,3512|2) - still same with #2 problem, note start from 2nd column ( 00:03:437 - ) , grace pattern still same.

4. 00:04:375 (4375|0) - move to 3rd column

5. 00:06:400 (6400|0) - move to 2nd column

6. 00:06:475 (6475|1) - move to 1st column

Piano Sliding, i see this pattern seems to following piano sound but i think it hasn't follow the proper pitch. 8 -
8. 00:52:000 (52000|0) - move to 2nd column

9. 00:52:075 (52075|1) - move to 1st column

10. 00:52:150 (52150|3) - move to 3rd column

11. 00:52:225 (52225|2) - move to 2nd column

12. 00:52:300 (52300|0) - move to 4th column

13. 00:52:375 (52375|1) - move to 3rd column

14. 00:52:450 (52450|3) - move to 2nd column

15. 00:52:525 (52525|2) - move to 1st column

16. 00:52:675 (52675|0,52750|1,52825|2,52900|3) - Ctrl + H

17. 00:52:975 (52975|2,53050|1,53125|0) - move to right

18. 00:53:200 (53200|2) - move to 1st column, and you can see the result here

19. 01:33:287 (93287|1,93325|2,93362|3) - same like #2 & #3 issue , just the note started are from red measure line (1/2 beat)


Measure note problem
2. 00:02:087 (2087|0,2124|1,2162|2) - this grace isn't 1/8 beat, the grace used 1/16 as well it started from 1/4 00:02:087 - the things only you do is moving 00:02:125 (2125|1) - to 2nd column ( 00:02:106 - 1/16 measure ) and 00:02:162 (2162|2) - to 3rd column ( 00:02:125 -
1/16 measures )

7. 00:34:175 (34175|0,34275|3) - i see error note measure here it isn't 1/3, delete it and add note with this pitch

20. 01:22:425 (82425|0,82475|1,82525|2,82575|1,82625|0) - again, error note #7 issue. fix it

21. 01:26:175 (86175|0,86225|1) - error note , but i can hear from 01:25:975 - till 01:26:125 - it has 1/8 piano slide (or maybe 1/6) im not sure with 1/6 so i think you should make 1/8


Note for beat problem
22. if you interest to make it more harder, you can put 1/12 piano slide (don't reverse the slide) from 01:55:675 - till 01:55:900 -




ADVANCED

Pitch note problem
1. 00:01:225 (1225|1) - move to 3rd column
2. 00:01:375 (1375|3) - move to 2nd column

3. 00:01:525 (1525|2) - move to 3rd column

5. 00:25:375 (25375|2) - move to 4th column with 00:25:825 (25825|1,25975|2,25975|3) - Ctrl + H

6. 00:43:375 (43375|0) - move to 4th column, this part piano has same key being pressed


Measure note problem
Clear


Note for beat problem
4. 00:18:325 - Piano chord, suggested add note to 4th column

7. 01:08:275 - add note to 3rd column

8. 01:08:350 - add note to 2nd column

9. 01:31:825 (91825|2,92125|3) - delete this to make this note -> 01:31:975 (91975|1) - more clear to pressed as piano key
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Reikosaka wrote:
My modding is focusing at the genre music itself.
Also i checked your note pitch and measure error.
note for beat is little suggest


General

try to follow step number while see my suggesting, it may be confuse you (me too)

not sure if background dimension are rankable from its dimension size, i suggest you to change background. fixed


Novice

Pitch note problem
00:03:775 (3775|0) - move this to 2nd column for ok

1. 00:04:225 (4225|3) - this note, move to 1st column ^

2. 00:04:375 (4375|1) - i think this should been placed to 3rd column, according to your note pitch ^

3. 00:15:775 (15775|1,15925|0,16075|2,16225|3) - how about move them to 4th-3rd-2nd-1st column (Piano key goes down) // 00:15:775 (15775|2,15925|1,16075|0) - move to 3 2 1

4. 00:13:675 - i suggest you to add note in 1st column, this part has chord (low key piano) i think better to make it double no

5. 00:14:125 - same things like above, add note to 4th column ^

6. 00:15:475 - add note to 3rd column ^

7. 00:16:525 - add note to 4th column ^

8. 00:16:975 - 00:17:275 - add note to 3rd and 2nd (has same chord btw) ^

9. 00:17:575 (17575|1) - i'm not sure if this had chord, so i just suggest move this to 4th column, its high key ok

10. 00:25:975 (25975|3,25975|2) - move this to 1st and 2nd column, and 00:25:825 (25825|0) - to 3rd column. its almost same with 00:25:375 (25375|3,25525|0,25525|1) - ok

11. 00:43:826 (43826|3) - move to 2nd note, double drum and cymbal roll ok

12. 00:45:626 (45626|0,45776|1) - move them to 4th column and 00:46:076 (46076|3) - to 2nd column ok

13. From 01:01:076 - till 01:02:126 - pitch are more like thismoved some note

14. 01:07:676 (67676|1,67826|2) - ctrl + H ok

15. 01:13:076 (73076|3,73076|0) - ctrl + H , this note has high pitch also 01:15:476 (75476|3) - should be in 1st column ok

20. 01:16:076 (76076|2) - move to 2nd column, i think its the proper pitch than 3rd

26. 01:18:476 (78476|2) - move to 2nd column

30. 01:19:676 (79676|3) - move to 2nd column ok

32. 01:20:277 (80277|2) - move this to 1st column and 01:20:277 (80277|0) - to 2nd column ok

37. 01:22:377 (82377|1) - move this to 3rd column

38. 01:32:427 (92427|1,92577|2,92727|3) - ctrl + h , pitch goes down moved to 4 3 2

39. 01:37:077 (97077|3) - move to 1st column

40. 01:37:677 (97677|2) - move to 01:37:527 - in same column ok


Measure note problem
16. 00:05:575 (5575|2) - start hold note should be here 00:05:500 - lead synth and piano are sounded in that place no

17. 01:15:476 (75476|0) - After you fixed #15 issue, this should can be highlighted. then this hold note end supposed to be 01:15:776 - or you can just change it to normal note ok

33. 01:20:277 (80277|0) - hold note end supposed to be 01:20:877 - no

41. 01:42:927 (102927|1) - hold note end supposed to be 01:43:377 - no



Note for beat problem
18. 00:07:675 - add note to 4th column and use finish sample sound

19. 01:15:776 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound, is not hard

21. 01:16:376 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

22. 01:16:676 - add note to 4th column for symphonic synth sound

23. 01:16:976 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

24. 01:17:576 - add note to 4th column for symphonic synth sound

25. 01:18:176 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

27. 01:18:776 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

28. 01:19:076 - add note to 4th column for symphonic synth sound

29. 01:19:376 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

31. 01:19:976 - add note to 1st column for symphonic synth sound

34. 01:20:577 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

35. 01:21:177 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

36. 01:21:777 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound
add some note




EXHAUST

Pitch note problem
1. 00:01:225 (1225|1,1525|2) - ctrl + H no

3. 00:03:437 (3437|0,3475|1,3512|2) - still same with #2 problem, note start from 2nd column ( 00:03:437 - ) , grace pattern still same. ok

4. 00:04:375 (4375|0) - move to 3rd column

5. 00:06:400 (6400|0) - move to 2nd column ok

6. 00:06:475 (6475|1) - move to 1st column ok

Piano Sliding, i see this pattern seems to following piano sound but i think it hasn't follow the proper pitch. 8 -
8. 00:52:000 (52000|0) - move to 2nd column

9. 00:52:075 (52075|1) - move to 1st column

10. 00:52:150 (52150|3) - move to 3rd column

11. 00:52:225 (52225|2) - move to 2nd column

12. 00:52:300 (52300|0) - move to 4th column

13. 00:52:375 (52375|1) - move to 3rd column

14. 00:52:450 (52450|3) - move to 2nd column

15. 00:52:525 (52525|2) - move to 1st column

16. 00:52:675 (52675|0,52750|1,52825|2,52900|3) - Ctrl + H

17. 00:52:975 (52975|2,53050|1,53125|0) - move to right

18. 00:53:200 (53200|2) - move to 1st column, and you can see the result heremoved some note

19. 01:33:287 (93287|1,93325|2,93362|3) - same like #2 & #3 issue , just the note started are from red measure line (1/2 beat) ok


Measure note problem
2. 00:02:087 (2087|0,2124|1,2162|2) - this grace isn't 1/8 beat, the grace used 1/16 as well it started from 1/4 00:02:087 - the things only you do is moving 00:02:125 (2125|1) - to 2nd column ( 00:02:106 - 1/16 measure ) and 00:02:162 (2162|2) - to 3rd column ( 00:02:125 -
1/16 measures )ok

7. 00:34:175 (34175|0,34275|3) - i see error note measure here it isn't 1/3, delete it and add note with this pitchits 1/3 `-` , check it with playback rate 50%

20. 01:22:425 (82425|0,82475|1,82525|2,82575|1,82625|0) - again, error note #7 issue. fix it ^ with playback rate 25%

21. 01:26:175 (86175|0,86225|1) - error note , but i can hear from 01:25:975 - till 01:26:125 - it has 1/8 piano slide (or maybe 1/6) im not sure with 1/6 so i think you should make 1/8 ^[/box


box=Note for beat problem22. if you interest to make it more harder, you can put 1/12 piano slide (don't reverse the slide) from 01:55:675 - till 01:55:900 - no , i dont want to make it harder, because its fun map 8-)




ADVANCED

Pitch note problem
1. 00:01:225 (1225|1) - move to 3rd column ok
2. 00:01:375 (1375|3) - move to 2nd column ok

3. 00:01:525 (1525|2) - move to 3rd column ok

5. 00:25:375 (25375|2) - move to 4th column with 00:25:825 (25825|1,25975|2,25975|3) - Ctrl + H ok

6. 00:43:375 (43375|0) - move to 4th column, this part piano has same key being pressed no


Measure note problem
Clear


Note for beat problem
4. 00:18:325 - Piano chord, suggested add note to 4th column no

7. 01:08:275 - add note to 3rd column ok

8. 01:08:350 - add note to 2nd column ok

9. 01:31:825 (91825|2,92125|3) - delete this to make this note -> 01:31:975 (91975|1) - more clear to pressed as piano keyno


Thanks :D

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very cool song :) nice map

good luck :D
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Oh hi there

|1|2|3|4|
Hitsounds: EQ the low bass out of the kick sample, it will sound bad if the player hits that even slightly off perfect timing. Otherwise, very good.
Timing: Good.
Special FX: Kiai time good.

Novice
I'm no good at making easy maps, but here are some suggestions
00:08:275 (8275|3) - Fill in the empty space after this note with some 1/2, this occurs many times throughout the map
00:13:375 (13375|0,13525|1) - LNs
00:53:425 (53425|0) - something here, it's too empty
01:17:275 (77275|1) - nothing in the music here really, do something else? idk
01:54:025 (114025|2,114175|3,114325|2,114475|1,114625|0,114775|1,114925|2) - make this pattern less generic

feel free to ignore any/all of the above lol

don't do that for the other difficulties though :P


Advanced
Patterning and layering:
00:02:125 (2125|3) - two notes here, preferably a grace note like you did in Exhaust
00:03:475 (3475|3) - ^
00:03:925 (3925|3) - ^
00:04:375 (4375|3) - ^
01:33:325 (93325|1) - ^you already have a double here but if you are going to make the above grace notes, this should be too
00:02:875 (2875|3) - move to 3
00:03:175 (3175|2) - move to 2
00:06:775 (6775|2) - double note here to be consistent with surrounding layering
00:07:975 (7975|3) - ^
00:07:075 (7075|3) - triple note
00:17:875 (17875|0) - double note
00:18:325 (18325|0) - double note
00:27:100 - add note here for piano , i suggest column 3
01:02:800 (62800|1,62875|0,62950|1,63025|2,63100|3) - make this generic pattern a little more interesting
01:08:275 (68275|2,68350|1,68425|0,68500|1) - ^
01:03:775 (63775|3) - make a double
01:10:525 (70525|3) - delete, not enough in the music to justify a double
01:23:125 (83125|2) - make a triple
01:23:575 (83575|2) - ^
01:24:025 (84025|3) - ^
01:24:475 (84475|2) - ^
01:24:925 (84925|3) - ^
01:25:375 (85375|2) - ^
01:25:825 (85825|2) - ^
01:27:250 (87250|2) - move to 1 for more interesting pattern and pitch relevancy
01:27:325 (87325|3) - move to 3 for more interesting pattern and pitch relevancy
01:30:775 (90775|2) - make triple


Rhythms:
00:17:950 (17950|1,18025|2,18100|3,18175|1,18325|0,18400|1,18475|2,18550|3,18625|1,18700|2) - if you're following piano here, this is not completely correct, do this:
00:17:950 (17950|1) - delete
00:18:250 - add note here, i suggest column 2
00:18:400 (18400|1) - delete

00:27:100 (27100|1) - delete
00:34:150 (34150|1,34225|2,34300|1) - should be 1/3 not 1/4
00:36:100 (36100|2) - delete
00:42:250 (42250|3) - delete
00:43:150 (43150|0) - delete
00:44:500 (44500|2) - delete
00:55:900 (55900|1) - delete, or do LNs, or do what you did in exhaust
01:01:900 (61900|0) - ^
01:43:900 (103900|2) - ^
01:02:725 - needs a note here
01:09:100 (69100|2) - delete
01:22:375 (82375|3,82450|2,82525|1,82600|2) - should be 1/6 but that would be too hard wouldn't it.... I suggest LNs
01:26:200 (86200|1) - ^
01:26:725 (86725|3) - add note here
01:30:925 (90925|1,90925|2) - delete
01:37:900 (97900|0,97975|1) - delete
01:39:175 (99175|1) - delete


Exhaust
Pattering and Layering:
00:00:925 (925|2) - move to 4
00:01:225 (1225|1) - move to 3
00:01:375 (1375|3) - move to 2
00:09:625 (9625|2,9625|1,9625|0,9775|2,9775|0,9775|1,9925|2,9925|1,9925|3,10075|1,10075|3,10075|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248035
00:13:375 (13375|1,13450|0,13525|1,13600|2) - make this more pitch relevant, i suggest 00:13:375 (13375|1) - move to 3
00:15:475 (15475|0) - move to 2
00:21:400 (21400|3) - delete for layering, there's no kick here
00:24:625 (24625|0,24662|1,24700|2,24737|3,24775|0,24775|2) - please realize that this pattern is much harder than 01:29:425 (89425|0,89462|1,89500|2,89537|3,89575|0,89575|1) , either move 00:24:775 (24775|2) - to 2 or maybe something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248071
00:36:625 (36625|0,36662|1,36700|2,36737|3,36775|0,36775|2) - ^ same issue
01:43:825 (103825|3,103862|2,103900|1,103937|0,103975|2,103975|1) - ^same issue
00:29:425 (29425|3,29500|2) - this instead : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248080
00:44:500 (44500|3) - delete, there's only a kick here, no need for double
00:45:925 (45925|2,45925|1) - fix pitch relevancy, ctrl + H
00:47:425 (47425|3,47500|2,47575|1,47725|2,47800|1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248104
00:49:675 (49675|1,49675|0,49750|3,49750|2,49825|0,49825|1) - no need for doubles
00:51:175 (51175|2,51175|3) - the whole stream starting here needs to be redone to fit the pitch of the piano: for example, this note 00:52:675 (52675|0) should definitely be in column 1 because it is the highest point of the whole piano melody here
01:22:375 (82375|2,82425|0,82475|1,82525|2,82575|1,82625|0,82675|1,82675|2) - way too dense for left hand, balance it out a bit more or release the LN in column 4 sooner
01:26:875 (86875|3) - make a double
01:28:300 (88300|2) - make a double
01:28:525 (88525|2) - make a double
01:52:075 (112075|2) - move to 4
01:52:675 (112675|2) - ^
01:53:275 (113275|2) - ^
01:56:275 (116275|1,116275|0,116275|3,116425|2,116425|3,116425|0) - these two triples should be the same

Some of these streams are a little awkward to play, up to you if you want to fix this and re-pattern some of them.

Rhythms:
00:01:075 (1075|0) - grace note like you did at 00:02:075 (2075|0,2125|1,2175|2)
00:03:925 (3925|0) - ^
00:04:375 (4375|0) - ^
00:19:075 (19075|1,19075|2) - ^
00:03:425 (3425|1,3475|2,3525|3) - this grace note is faster than 00:02:075 (2075|0,2125|1,2175|2) , so 1/8 snap instead of 1/6
00:05:950 (5950|2) - delete
00:06:400 (6400|1) - delete
00:07:150 (7150|1) - delete
00:07:600 (7600|1) - delete
00:09:475 (9475|3,9475|2) - delete
00:17:125 - add note here
00:17:950 (17950|0) - delete
00:18:400 (18400|0) - delete
00:20:500 (20500|2) - add a note
00:29:350 (29350|1) - delete
00:30:775 (30775|3,30825|2,30875|1) - i would just keep the 1/4 of the piano here but this is ok too
00:33:475 (33475|0) - delete
00:40:675 (40675|0) - delete yes there is a hi-hat but it sounds and feels so trivial compared to what's going on in the rest of the music)
00:43:525 (43525|1,43525|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248086
00:45:925 (45925|2,45925|1) - ^same issue
00:48:775 (48775|3,48775|2,48925|0,48925|1) - add 1/4 stream in this measure
between 00:49:525 (49525|0,49525|2,49525|3) and 00:50:125 (50125|3,50125|0) needs 1/4 streams
00:50:200 (50200|2) - add note
00:50:425 (50425|1,50425|0,50425|2,50575|1,50575|2,50575|0,50725|2,50725|3,50725|1,50875|3,50875|2,50875|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248035
00:56:425 (56425|1,56500|2) - delete
00:56:650 (56650|2) - delete
00:59:500 (59500|3) - delete
01:01:750 (61750|2) - delete
01:02:725 - needs note here
01:06:700 - needs note here. also the pattern around this should be changed a little to fit a note here
01:06:850 - ^
01:08:200 (68200|1) - delete
01:09:100 (69100|3) - delete
01:23:050 (83050|1) - delete
01:23:950 (83950|2) - delete
01:24:250 (84250|1) - delete
01:24:700 - needs note here, also the pattern around this should be changed a little to fit a note here
01:25:300 (85300|2) - 1/6
01:25:525 (85525|2) - delete
01:26:425 (86425|0,86500|1) - delete
01:26:650 (86650|1) - delete
01:26:950 (86950|2) - delete
01:28:000 (88000|3) - delete
01:29:200 (89200|2) - delete
01:33:325 (93325|0,93375|1,93425|2) - too early, push this back an 1/8 or so
01:37:900 (97900|0) - delete
01:47:500 (107500|2) - delete
01:49:525 (109525|2) - delete? or have a little 1/4 run
01:55:675 (115675|0,115675|3) - dude there's some awesome piano stuff happening here! don't just ignore it, it will feel lonely :cry:


Good map, hope you find this useful!
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Oh hi there

|1|2|3|4|
Hitsounds: EQ the low bass out of the kick sample, it will sound bad if the player hits that even slightly off perfect timing. Otherwise, very good.
Timing: Good.
Special FX: Kiai time good.

Novice
I'm no good at making easy maps, but here are some suggestions
00:08:275 (8275|3) - Fill in the empty space after this note with some 1/2, this occurs many times throughout the map um. . ok
00:13:375 (13375|0,13525|1) - LNs no, note is fine
00:53:425 (53425|0) - something here, it's too empty // 00:53:275 - add LN 1
01:17:275 (77275|1) - nothing in the music here really, do something else? idk
01:54:025 (114025|2,114175|3,114325|2,114475|1,114625|0,114775|1,114925|2) - make this pattern less generic ok

feel free to ignore any/all of the above lol

don't do that for the other difficulties though :P


Advanced
Patterning and layering:
00:02:125 (2125|3) - two notes here, preferably a grace note like you did in Exhaust ok
00:03:475 (3475|3) - ^ ^
00:03:925 (3925|3) - ^ ^
00:04:375 (4375|3) - ^ ^
01:33:325 (93325|1) - ^you already have a double here but if you are going to make the above grace notes, this should be too
00:02:875 (2875|3) - move to 3 ok
00:03:175 (3175|2) - move to 2 ok
00:06:775 (6775|2) - double note here to be consistent with surrounding layering ok
00:07:975 (7975|3) - ^ ok
00:07:075 (7075|3) - triple note no
00:17:875 (17875|0) - double note ok
00:18:325 (18325|0) - double note ok
00:27:100 - add note here for piano , i suggest column 3 ok
01:02:800 (62800|1,62875|0,62950|1,63025|2,63100|3) - make this generic pattern a little more interesting
01:08:275 (68275|2,68350|1,68425|0,68500|1) - ^
01:03:775 (63775|3) - make a double ok
01:10:525 (70525|3) - delete, not enough in the music to justify a double no
01:23:125 (83125|2) - make a triple no
01:23:575 (83575|2) - ^ no
01:24:025 (84025|3) - ^ no
01:24:475 (84475|2) - ^ no
01:24:925 (84925|3) - ^ no
01:25:375 (85375|2) - ^ no
01:25:825 (85825|2) - ^ no
01:27:250 (87250|2) - move to 1 for more interesting pattern and pitch relevancy move to 4
01:27:325 (87325|3) - move to 3 for more interesting pattern and pitch relevancy move to 1
01:30:775 (90775|2) - make triple no


Rhythms:
00:17:950 (17950|1,18025|2,18100|3,18175|1,18325|0,18400|1,18475|2,18550|3,18625|1,18700|2) - if you're following piano here, this is not completely correct, do this:
00:17:950 (17950|1) - delete
00:18:250 - add note here, i suggest column 2
00:18:400 (18400|1) - delete

00:27:100 (27100|1) - delete
00:34:150 (34150|1,34225|2,34300|1) - should be 1/3 not 1/4
00:36:100 (36100|2) - delete
00:42:250 (42250|3) - delete
00:43:150 (43150|0) - delete
00:44:500 (44500|2) - delete
00:55:900 (55900|1) - delete, or do LNs, or do what you did in exhaust
01:01:900 (61900|0) - ^
01:43:900 (103900|2) - ^
01:02:725 - needs a note here
01:09:100 (69100|2) - delete
01:22:375 (82375|3,82450|2,82525|1,82600|2) - should be 1/6 but that would be too hard wouldn't it.... I suggest LNs
01:26:200 (86200|1) - ^
01:26:725 (86725|3) - add note here
01:30:925 (90925|1,90925|2) - delete
01:37:900 (97900|0,97975|1) - delete
01:39:175 (99175|1) - delete
Remap


Exhaust
Pattering and Layering:
00:00:925 (925|2) - move to 4 ok
00:01:225 (1225|1) - move to 3 ok
00:01:375 (1375|3) - move to 2 ok
00:09:625 (9625|2,9625|1,9625|0,9775|2,9775|0,9775|1,9925|2,9925|1,9925|3,10075|1,10075|3,10075|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248035
00:13:375 (13375|1,13450|0,13525|1,13600|2) - make this more pitch relevant, i suggest 00:13:375 (13375|1) - move to 3 ok
00:15:475 (15475|0) - move to 2 ok
00:21:400 (21400|3) - delete for layering, there's no kick here ok
00:24:625 (24625|0,24662|1,24700|2,24737|3,24775|0,24775|2) - please realize that this pattern is much harder than 01:29:425 (89425|0,89462| 1,89500|2,89537|3,89575|0,89575|1) , either move 00:24:775 (24775|2) - to 2 or maybe something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248071 no
00:36:625 (36625|0,36662|1,36700|2,36737|3,36775|0,36775|2) - ^ same issue no
01:43:825 (103825|3,103862|2,103900|1,103937|0,103975|2,103975|1) - ^same issue no
00:29:425 (29425|3,29500|2) - this instead : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248080 no
00:44:500 (44500|3) - delete, there's only a kick here, no need for double ok
00:45:925 (45925|2,45925|1) - fix pitch relevancy, ctrl + H no
00:47:425 (47425|3,47500|2,47575|1,47725|2,47800|1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248104 ok
00:49:675 (49675|1,49675|0,49750|3,49750|2,49825|0,49825|1) - no need for doubles ok
00:51:175 (51175|2,51175|3) - the whole stream starting here needs to be redone to fit the pitch of the piano: for example, this note 00:52:675 (52675|0) should definitely be in column 1 because it is the highest point of the whole piano melody here
01:22:375 (82375|2,82425|0,82475|1,82525|2,82575|1,82625|0,82675|1,82675|2) - way too dense for left hand, balance it out a bit more or release the LN in column 4 sooner ok
01:26:875 (86875|3) - make a double ok
01:28:300 (88300|2) - make a double ok
01:28:525 (88525|2) - make a double ok
01:52:075 (112075|2) - move to 4 no
01:52:675 (112675|2) - ^ no
01:53:275 (113275|2) - ^ no
01:56:275 (116275|1,116275|0,116275|3,116425|2,116425|3,116425|0) - these two triples should be the same ok

Some of these streams are a little awkward to play, up to you if you want to fix this and re-pattern some of them.

Rhythms:
00:01:075 (1075|0) - grace note like you did at 00:02:075 (2075|0,2125|1,2175|2)
00:03:925 (3925|0) - ^
00:04:375 (4375|0) - ^
00:19:075 (19075|1,19075|2) - ^
00:03:425 (3425|1,3475|2,3525|3) - this grace note is faster than 00:02:075 (2075|0,2125|1,2175|2) , so 1/8 snap instead of 1/6
00:05:950 (5950|2) - delete
00:06:400 (6400|1) - delete
00:07:150 (7150|1) - delete
00:07:600 (7600|1) - delete
00:09:475 (9475|3,9475|2) - delete
00:17:125 - add note here
00:17:950 (17950|0) - delete
00:18:400 (18400|0) - delete
00:20:500 (20500|2) - add a note
00:29:350 (29350|1) - delete
00:30:775 (30775|3,30825|2,30875|1) - i would just keep the 1/4 of the piano here but this is ok too
00:33:475 (33475|0) - delete
00:40:675 (40675|0) - delete yes there is a hi-hat but it sounds and feels so trivial compared to what's going on in the rest of the music)
00:43:525 (43525|1,43525|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248086
00:45:925 (45925|2,45925|1) - ^same issue
00:48:775 (48775|3,48775|2,48925|0,48925|1) - add 1/4 stream in this measure
between 00:49:525 (49525|0,49525|2,49525|3) and 00:50:125 (50125|3,50125|0) needs 1/4 streams
00:50:200 (50200|2) - add note
00:50:425 (50425|1,50425|0,50425|2,50575|1,50575|2,50575|0,50725|2,50725|3,50725|1,50875|3,50875|2,50875|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248035
00:56:425 (56425|1,56500|2) - delete
00:56:650 (56650|2) - delete
00:59:500 (59500|3) - delete
01:01:750 (61750|2) - delete
01:02:725 - needs note here
01:06:700 - needs note here. also the pattern around this should be changed a little to fit a note here
01:06:850 - ^
01:08:200 (68200|1) - delete
01:09:100 (69100|3) - delete
01:23:050 (83050|1) - delete
01:23:950 (83950|2) - delete
01:24:250 (84250|1) - delete
01:24:700 - needs note here, also the pattern around this should be changed a little to fit a note here
01:25:300 (85300|2) - 1/6
01:25:525 (85525|2) - delete
01:26:425 (86425|0,86500|1) - delete
01:26:650 (86650|1) - delete
01:26:950 (86950|2) - delete
01:28:000 (88000|3) - delete
01:29:200 (89200|2) - delete
01:33:325 (93325|0,93375|1,93425|2) - too early, push this back an 1/8 or so
01:37:900 (97900|0) - delete
01:47:500 (107500|2) - delete
01:49:525 (109525|2) - delete? or have a little 1/4 run
01:55:675 (115675|0,115675|3) - dude there's some awesome piano stuff happening here! don't just ignore it, it will feel lonely :cry:

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NOVICE Lv. 5
00:04:225 (4225|3) - move to 2 bcs i think it has same sound with 00:03:775 (3775|1,3925|2) -

00:57:625 - add note to 2
01:06:175 - add note to 1 or 2
01:16:375 - add note
01:16:675 - ^
01:16:975 - ^
01:17:575 - ^
01:18:775 - ^
01:19:075 - ^
01:19:375 - ^
01:19:975 - ^
01:21:175 - ^
01:21:775 - ^


ADVANCED Lv. 12
00:04:975 - add note to 4, loud enough

00:07:975 (7975|2) - move to 1, avoid jack
00:08:275 (8275|1) - ^ to 3

00:09:325 (9325|0) - i think not fit this note placed here, try to move to 00:09:400 - at 2nd coloumn
then 00:09:325 (9325|1) - move to 3

00:20:725 (20725|2) - move to 2

00:53:575 (53575|2,53725|1) - ctrl + G

01:01:225 - add note to 4, same sound with 01:01:075 (61075|2,61075|1) -


EXHAUST Lv. 15
00:18:775 - add note to 1

00:38:275 (38275|1) - better remove this
then make 00:37:975 (37975|3) - to be Hold until 00:38:275 -

01:07:675 (67675|2,67675|1) - move to left by 1 coloumn
01:07:825 (67825|1,67825|0) - move to right by 2 coloumns

01:50:875 (110875|0,111100|3) - bcs here are 3-noted so lets make these 3-noted too
01:50:425 - add note to 4
01:50:575 - ^ to 4
01:50:725 - ^ to 1
01:51:325 - ^ to 4


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