This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年12月6日 at 20:29:48

Artist: ChouCho
Title: DreamRiser (TV size)
Source: GIRLS und PANZER
Tags: Opening KwaN ガールズ&パンツァー ガルパン Garuzu ando Pantsa Actas Sensha-dou ちょうちょ
BPM: 165
Filesize: 17515kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.45 stars, 94 notes)
2. Hard (3.18 stars, 266 notes)
3. Insane (4.37 stars, 326 notes)
4. Normal (1.99 stars, 154 notes)

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#5
♪踏み出した空に　走っていく光

Title Source: http://puu.sh/cNyjs.jpg

Try NewibornCLivee's Taiko diff here!

here's my taiko diff ._. i hope you'll put it in creator's word..
https://www.dropbox.com/s/eoijj6mz65vb3 ... D.osu?dl=0

choucho 0(" 3 ")0

Modding soon~

Thanks for stars, eIN and Habi LOL

Ah.. as it's still WIP, please don't mod it at this moment w

Please call me when this is ready for mods since you didn't let me make a GD~

Finally, TV size <3

Pending!

!summon habi, inyus and modders <3

ChouCho <3

This reminds me scanter.

[Easy]
00:17:892 - Personally this symbol being ignored didn't felt well.

[Hard]
00:33:346 (4) - This doesn't seem like an intended jump, is it? Either way it looks little awkward for me.
00:48:164 (2) - Overmapped.

[Insane]
00:45:710 (1) - This combo color is really unreadable. You must fix this.
01:23:528 (1,2) - It seems the 3/4 slider at (1) was selected to match the extending vocal? But since 01:23:528 (1,2,3,4,5) are all setted as a same combo, maintaining consistency would be better. Consider reducing (1) to a 1/2 slider not to ignore the instrument at 01:23:710 or set a NC at (3) to indicate you are following different element of the song.
01:30:255 - Mind ending the final spinner at here where the music actually ends? A suggestion for all difficulties.

Hi! Quick mod for you.

[General]

1. I would check to see if the source should be GIRLS und PANZER or Girls und Panzer. I've only seen the all capitalized one on Crunchyroll; everywhere else seems to have it only initial capped.
2. I don't think you need KwaN in the tags, I think searching finds IamKwaN when you type in KwaN.
3. Seems like there's inconsistent leadin times, Easy and Normal are both 0, but Hard and Insane are 500.

[Easy]

1. 00:02:074 (1) - I suppose everyone has their own opinion on this kind of thing, but I personally don't like these really short 1/2 sliders on the Easy diff. The SV is very low, so these sliders might be confusing to a new player. I think a circle here works just fine, but I can understand if you'd like to keep.
2. 00:04:983 (1) - same with this one
3. 00:30:074 (2) - It might be nice to end this slider at 00:30:801 instead to keep white tick polarity. This would match the guitar sound in the music which I think works pretty well.
4. 00:47:710 (1) - Maybe decrease the slowdown a little bit here, this tripped me up my first playthrough.
5. 00:48:437 (1) - It would make sense to me for you to return to color for the combo here since the faster drums come back at this part.
6. 00:53:710 (3,1) - very nazi, but the blanket is a bit off.
7. 00:57:710 (2) - I would consider lengthening this slider to end at 00:58:437 for consistency with similar sliders in the kiai.
8. 01:24:619 (2,3) - I suppose if you wanted to be consistent with the beginning part, you could remove (3), add a repeat to (2), and put a circle at 01:26:074.
9. Solid Easy difficulty, although I am slightly concerned over the use of 1/2 rhythms in it. Might want to get some opinions on that.

[Normal]

1. 00:15:164 (2) - I would consider removing this circle, since it is not mapped to the strong string sounds like the other parts mapped in this section.
2. 00:19:528 (1) - even more nazi, endpoint to (34,15) for a slightly better blanket B)
3. 00:24:983 (6) - Maybe make this into a 1/2 slider? I think it would match the music pretty nicely
4. 00:48:437 (1) - same as Easy
5. 01:04:074 (2,3) - consider having the 1/2 slider first and then the circle so that the player can click the circle on the finish sound. You seem to do that with other similar finishes in the kiai, so it makes sense to me.

[Hard]

1. 00:22:437 (1) - I prefer the way you mapped 00:19:528 (1,2,3,4) compared to this. The parts seem very similar to me, so they should be mapped similarly imo. I like 00:19:528 (1,2,3,4) better since it matches to the vocals really well.
2. 00:28:255 (1,2,3) - Your mapping in this part seems to favor vocals more, so I would change this section to match that. Here's my suggestion for a rhythm, which puts emphasis on the vocal part at 00:28:801.
   
3. 00:36:074 (3) - Maybe have this stack on 00:36:255 (4) instead since it is part of the guitar?
4. 01:06:619 (3) - bring the endpoint down a bit for a better blanket with 01:07:164 (4).
5. 01:16:074 (1) - I don't agree with this 3/4. I see that you were aiming to map to the strings, but the strings actually end on on a 1/6 tick, so you're not really matching that either. I would suggest just making this a 1/2 slider instead, it feels better to play I think.
6. 01:26:983 (3,4) - Consider ctrl+J on these, I think it feels a bit better and provides more emphasis. A little jump could also fit really well for this.
   
   ___

   

[Insane]

1. Some comboing suggestions for the beginning section. These would put the NCs on the stronger parts, which makes more sense to me than the way it is now.
2. 00:02:074 (4,1) - Switch NCs
3. 00:02:983 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:03:346 (4) - NC
5. 00:03:892 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:04:983 (6,1) - switch NCs
7. 00:05:892 (1) - remove NC
8. 00:06:255 (4) - NC, end of NC suggestion for intro.
9. 00:06:983 (1,2) - I would consider replacing these with two 1/2 sliders. This would match the strings a lot better, which is what is mapped in this section.
10. 00:11:346 (4) - more NC suggestion, but I think an NC here works really well with the rotating jumps
11. 00:12:437 (4) - here also
12. 00:39:892 (1) - Maybe try ctrl+J on this, and placing it above (6). I think this plays better since you're following the zig zag motion of 00:39:346 (4,5,6). If you do this, adjust the next objects to be closer to the slider, but the flow should work out fine.
    
    Kind of like this

    
13. 00:41:346 (5) - NC here
14. 00:41:892 (1) - remove this one
15. 00:59:710 (4) - ctrl J + ctrl G this for better flow from 00:59:528 (3) I think
16. 01:16:619 (3,4) - I have a suggestion here to improve flow. I like the way you did 01:14:801 (1,2,3), where the object after the 3/4 slider + circle kind of goes back against the flow of the 3/4 slider, if that makes sense. I think it plays better than the way you did 01:16:619 (3,4), so here's how I would do it so that you don't have to change too much.
    
    ___

    

老婆我来啦



低难度skip啦啦啦啦

I saw you didn't apply all mods yet, so feel free to ignore some suggestions if they're repeated.





Hard is fine for me. sorry for this bad mod

Clean mapset, gl!

i won't mod normal/easy in order not to be frustrated...... u too pro at them

GL

If not mentioned, then it's fixed :>
Thanks a lot guys! Updated!

00:37:710 - I don't like girls who smirk and think that they know everything...

[Insane]
00:20:983 (1,3) - Not trying to be picky, but make curve a little less for a blanket
00:31:164 (2,1) - Swap NC
01:10:801 (2,3) - Move 3 about only a square difference from 2 on the smallest graph division

[Hard]
00:03:074 (4,5) - Move these two from under the slider, since that what you did for the next sequence at 00:05:710
00:40:619 (3) - Make the part before the red point a little more circular in terms of curve
01:00:801 (3) - I think you do without the first red point
01:07:346 (1,2) - Fix blanket on first slider and second slider's end

[Normal]
01:13:892 (5) - Am I the only person that sees this under the HP bar?
01:20:528 - Remove point
01:23:528 (1) - I think you can turn this into two one whole measure sliders like the next sequence

[Easy]
00:10:801 (1,2) - Something I do, but you don't have to if you don't like, it check the slope of these two sliders and see if they're the same. You don't have to.

Personally, I did now think that a BAT would one day PM for a mod request.
At first when I saw the BG, I thought it was fanart, but then I saw the video, and then I thought to myself, "Oh... They're trained to destroy people will military tanks.. au nau, bat jiu sei aa..."
Good luck~

Hi KwaN.

[Easy]

1. 00:02:255 - This inheriting section (green line) doesn't change anything, so remove it?
2. 00:08:983 (2) - I think it would be better to move it like this for smoother flow: http://puu.sh/cTo4w/93cc4a6b91.jpg (x:162|y:171)
3. 00:27:528 (3) - Add whistle on head?
4. 00:33:346 (4,4) - These are the same parts of the phrase, but you use whistle on the first one, and not the second one. Make it consistent?
5. 00:42:801 (1) - Clap on end.

[Normal]

1. I think HP/OD 3 are too low, considering you used HP/OD 6 on Hard. I suggest increasing to HP/OD 4.
2. 00:26:801 (4) - Add whistle.
3. 00:27:164 (5) - Add whistle on end.
4. 00:40:983 (4) - I think it would actually play much better if this was moved to either align with (5), or to the right of (5) with equal angle between the circles: http://puu.sh/cTsDk/75a5d78a24.jpg or http://puu.sh/cTsVw/a0eb4df430.jpg

[Hard]

1. There are unused inheriting sections: 00:02:255 and 01:22:074
2. I recommend stack leniency 4 because you used a lot of circle/slider stacks that don't look very good with high stack leniency. For example, 00:24:437 (4,6) and 00:20:801 (5,2) I think it will look better with stack leniency 4.
3. 00:27:528 (3) - Whistle on head.
4. 01:27:528 (4) - In my opinion, it's smoother if you move this a bit down and right: http://puu.sh/cTylJ/27cb38c5e2.jpg (x:359|y:277)

[Insane]

1. 00:05:164 (2,2,3,4) - Hmm.. the stack of (2,3,4) makes it overlap with the slider, and it looks a bit unpleasant. Maybe you can move it to x:157|y:155 so the blanket looks right when playing.
2. 01:08:619 (5,6,7,8) - Try to make the stream shape more regular?
   Good.

Good luck!

Hello! From my queue
First time I mod something from a BAT, so yh...idk..what

General

Nothing to complain about actually, only some blankets zzzzz.

Insane

It felt like OD8 was a bit overkill, and although I like it, I personally think 7.5 would fit better.

00:03:346 (5) - Blanket. I will pick those who stand out when playing.
00:17:892 (1) -
00:20:983 (1) - I don't see why you would use a 1/1 slider, instead of mapping the voice by using e.g. a 1/2 slider and a circle.
00:39:892 (1) - Why not blanket 00:39:710 (6) - ?
00:45:710 (1,2,3) - I honestly don't think these stacks fit, the music is pretty much moving on just like here 00:43:164 (2,3,4) - (suggestion: making 00:46:074 (2,3) - 2 1/2 sliders somewhere where they will fit and so you can continue with what is placed after that. Something like this http://puu.sh/cTR9q/3506502d7f.jpg)
01:00:255 (1) - Slightly improve this blanket
01:08:619 (5,6,7,8,1) - Why is this burst all like http://puu.sh/cTRzP/c3b145aab9.jpg
01:10:255 (1) - blanket pls
01:13:892 (3) - You can try to make a blanket with 01:14:619 (5,6,1) - with the first curve point of the wave-slider
01:18:983 (1) - Blanket
01:23:528 (1) - Where are the insane and senseless jumps for extra pp and unnecessary difficulty that would totally not ruin this map?

Hard

I know it's 3 stars, but I think ar8 would fit better, because of the (anti-)jumps.

00:08:255 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/cTSaX/f48bbdac8e.jpgI think this is going to be confusing for a hard-player, but oh well.
00:12:983 (3) - Improve a little bit
00:20:983 (1) - Was this supposed to be a blanket?
00:25:164 (6,7,1) - I know you want to let it stack but this looks really bad to me. 2 reasons for this: It isn't a completely straight line, and the stack leniency doesn't let it stack exactly on top of each other, but in the auto-stack form.
00:39:892 (1) - 1 pixel down for a perfect stack
00:42:255 (3) - this one as well, but I don't think it will affect anything because it is auto-stacked. Also, I think 00:41:710 (2,3,4) - is a bit confusing for most players. I like the idea though
00:47:710 (1,2,3) - (3) is a bit too far away compared to the slider-end and the first circle.
01:07:892 (2) - Wouldn't ctrl+g feel better?
01:08:983 (1,2) - Improve this a little bit if you feel like it. http://puu.sh/cTSTI/803e9c257f.jpg
01:25:710 (4,5) - Why not ctrl+g both?
01:26:437 (1) - 1 pixel to the right for a perfect stack. Also, this one 01:25:710 (4) - makes a blanket while this one 01:26:074 (5) - doesn't.

Normal

01:20:619 (1,2,3,4) - Would rather see something like 1/2 sliders, I don't really get this rhythm.
Also 01:22:074 (4) - 2 circles would emphasize the 2 last violin strokes.

Easy

00:16:619 (1,2) - Improve the blanket of the (2) slider tail a little bit.
00:17:710 (2) - ? Why do you use a 2/1 return slider starting there? It really doesn't fit the music.
00:26:074 (2) - Blanket
01:09:346 (2) - Also improve this one a little bit. In an easy they are easily visible.
01:15:892 (3) - Same here, the slider doesn't fit at all. Maybe something like this would sound better http://puu.sh/cTTJq/0bcd3875ce.jpg

Great mapset! I liked the insane the most, very nice flow. I feel like you put a little bit less effort in the hard and in the easy, or maybe it's just me that thinks this way. Anyway good luck! Have a star.

oh this :>

NM via pm o/

hi bakwan

[General]

1. uhh check aimod, u have alot of unsnapped objects
2. 01:08:892 - why is the kiai fountain effect so short o-o? maybe end kiai at 01:08:619 - instead? i think its a bit better than just a random 1/4 gap

[Insane]

1. 00:13:710 (1) - i think you should shorten this to a 1/2 slider, the extended slider doesn't make too much sense and you're also skipping a prominent drum beat. and besides, itll be more consistent with 00:14:255 (3) -
   00:16:619 (1) - ^
2. 00:29:346 (4,5) - just my opinion, how bout turning this into a slider? i think it will compliment the little guitar or w/e sound nicely.
3. 00:41:346 (1,2,3) - very nazi space them a bit out pls lol, they're just touching atm
4. 01:08:619 (5,6,7,8,1) - this curve looks a bit uneven lol.
5. 00:11:346 (4,4) - NC? just my opinion
6. 00:05:164 (2,2,3,4) - stack leniency reallly screws up this blanket lol i'd suggest manual stack here
   
   hitsound - these may apply to all other diffs too
7. 00:03:346 - i think you need a whistle (kick drum sound) with all your finishes. While listening to the music, the symbol crash drowns it out which is probably why you couldn't hear it but its definitely suppose to be there to add emphasis.
   00:04:074 - ^
   00:06:255 - ^
   00:06:983 - ^
   etc.
8. 01:00:983 - missing whistle
   01:02:437 (3) - ^
   01:05:346 - ^
   01:08:255 (3) - ^

[Hard]

1. uh just something i noticed but not important why did u manual stack these 00:51:164 (4,1) - but autostack 00:49:710 (4,1) - ? owo
2. 00:08:255 (2,3,4,5) - i have some concerns with this pattern as it can get pretty tricky to read
   same with 00:10:801 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - maybe you can get some more opinions on this.
3. 00:25:346 (1,3) - lol this could be blanketed better, just a minor thing

[Normal]

1. 00:36:074 - i think you could try mapping this out along with 00:36:437 - a bit weird just to ignore them. rhythm suggestion you don't have to follow
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:55:710 - map this out maybe? its a very strong sound

[Easy]

1. 00:02:074 (1,2) - nazi- blanket lol
2. 00:50:074 (3) - why bezier curve *-*
3. 01:16:074 - move or make a slider kink here to get the finish sound? like what u did here 00:17:710 (2) -
   hm 1/2 in easy eh.

Hello!

[Metadata]
Artist - ちょうちょ
Romanised Artist - ChouCho

[Tags]
You don't have to include "KwaN" as you are the map creator.
Remove "ちょうちょ" from tags and add it as Artist instead. (See above point in Metadata)
Add "north_abyssor" as a tag to credit the artist of the background picture.

According to vgmdb this song is composed by "rino" and arranged by " h-wonder", lyrics by "Saori Codama".
You can add them all to the tags too.
Source:
Disc 2 Track 12
http://vgmdb.net/album/35777

[Easy]
Perfect, really amazing easy difficulty.

[Normal]
00:19:528 - Add section with volume 50% here to make it consistent with 00:25:346 -
00:20:619 (3,3) - Same pattern but different hitsounds, the song has same sounds for those parts as far as I can tell. Make 00:20:619 (3) - consistent with the rest?
00:23:710 - Increase volume to 40%
00:24:437 - ^
00:25:255 - Pointless timing section
00:29:528 (3) - This beat sounds weak for that part of the song, add a finish?
01:20:528 - Pointless timing section
01:20:619 - ^

[Hard]
00:19:528 - Add section with volume 50% here to make it consistent with 00:25:346 -
00:02:255 - Pointless timing section
00:20:801 (5) - Same thing as in Normal with consistent hitsounding
00:23:710 - Increase volume to 40%
00:24:437 - ^
00:29:710 (1) - Finish on sliderstart?
00:36:164 - Add a beat here? There is an instrument playing at this point.

[Insane]
Same hitsound suggestion as in other difficulties!
I think some of the extended sliders in the intro don't play nicely and should be changed, mainly speaking about 00:04:074 (2,3) - and 00:08:255 (2,3) -

[Ending Note]
This mapset is really really good, amazing difficulty spread and no technical errors at all.
Nice layout in all diffs and it's really appealing, and fits the song well.
My mod seemed to be kind of useless because I couldn't spot anything that seems out of place.. I hope it's still helpful to you!

Wish you the best for your mapset.