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Josh & Jutta - Szep karacsony

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Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Kazuya
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014. december 24. at 8:42:13

Artist: Josh & Jutta
Title: Szep karacsony
Tags: christmas teleton 2007 magyar hungarian xmas kazuya-sama
BPM: 80
Filesize: 8119kb
Play Time: 03:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fast (2,87 stars, 386 notes)
  2. Medium (1,72 stars, 238 notes)
  3. Slow (1,14 stars, 147 notes)
Download: Josh & Jutta - Szep karacsony
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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7. Boldog Karácsonyt!
Last edited by Kazuya , edited 28 times in total.
Kaguya Hourain
514 posts
Joined October 2012
Kaguya Hourain
Oh looks like I get first post. Hi! From my modding team queue~

General
  1. Offset 2907
  2. Fix audio preview time on Fast

Slow
  1. 00:56:907 - 01:20:907 - The kiai feels way too bland with 1/1 spam only. Spice it up with some 1/2 here and there \:D/
  2. Nothing to really mod here to be honest, the map feels really boring with so little 1/2 and basically 1/1 spam. Why not try making some interesting rhythms with 1/2?

Medium
  1. 00:15:657 (2) - If you are following the vocals, this here is how the slider should be mapped:
    ohai cute box
  2. 02:03:657 (2) - Actually same as above
    Nothing again this looks really clean.

Fast
  1. 00:26:532 (6) - This fits as slider circle more than reverse slider.
  2. 01:18:657 (3) - This would be better off as two circles since both instances have the same impact in the music.
    01:20:532 (7) - Same as first suggestion.

Pretty clean mapset, go for it, and good luck!
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Kazuya
Hello. Thanks for mod.

Fixed all in medium & fast diff.

Slow: I know it's boring, but good for beginners. : ) 1/2? There's the normal. (Which is very easy/slow, because this song is 80 BPM)

Thanks.
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu

hello~!
Request from Christmas☆Queue 2014
Thank you for request!

[ Slow]
  1. 02:19:407 (2) - Add a finish at the end point in order to match with the big whistle sound of song. It realy make a good sound!
  2. 02:20:907 (1) - ^ at here.
  3. 02:26:157 (6) - ^ at here
  4. 02:31:407 (4) - ^ at the end point.
  5. 02:32:907 (1) - ^ at the start point.
  6. 03:05:907 (1) - Time of the end point is a little bad. So i think 03:08:907 is better than 03:11:157.

[ Medium]
  1. 00:05:157 (1,2) - Swap these new combos in order to keep the consistency.
  2. 00:15:657 (2) - I feel this rhythm strange, even if you are to follow the vocals. Also it shouldn't follow the vocals. Therefore i'd like to strongly recommend that you change to the 1/1 slider. Of course other diffs also are should fix this.
    image
  3. 00:18:657 (2) - ^
  4. 00:43:032 (3,4) - I think this rhythm is better than now.
    image
  5. 01:20:532 (5) - Add a whistle at the end point.
  6. 01:46:407 (7) - ^
  7. 03:05:532 (5) - The end point is unrankble because it is too silent. So you must be changed the volume!
  8. 03:06:094 (1) - The same as Slow diff.

[ Fast]
  1. 00:32:157 (6) - Clap is missing.
  2. 00:35:157 (2) - ^ at the start point.
  3. 00:53:719 (5) - Add a whistle at the end point.
  4. 01:19:032 (x) - Would you like to add a circle here?
  5. 01:20:907 (10) - Add a whistle~
  6. 02:13:032 (x) - The same as 01:19:032.
  7. 03:04:032 (x) - The same as 01:19:032.
  8. 03:05:907 (3) - unrankble because it is too silent. So you must be changed the volume!
  9. 03:06:094 (1) - The same as Slow diff.

good map :3/
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
The non uguu Christmas queue guy is here!
[Storyboard]

Myself from another Christmas map wrote:

Right now it doesn't snow on the sides when you use widescreen and that looks pretty weird.
Both of you and another map I modded use the template SGL snow tutorial. The problem is that it isnt made for widescreen so you have to change it to get it to work with it. Changing the range to -107, 767 instead of 0,640 will make it look better on widescreens.

I don't really you need to have the epilepsy warning. The lights isn't that fast moving.


[Skin]
Lovely

I like that you skinned the CTB fruits. It would be sweet if you also did fruit-ryuuta so you would have a complete CTB skin.

[General]
I suggest you have the claps on all diffs like it is in Medium on the choruses, I think that fit's best.

However I find that the whistle usage is better in Fast so I suggest you use whistles like you do in Fast on the other difficulties.

I noticed you used colorhax in a neat way with the cold colours in the verses and warm in the choruses... and that's awesome Buuut
02:29:907 (1) - On Medium is a warm colour outside a chorus.
And in Fast the first verse. All choruses don't have it and the instumental doesn't have it. I love that small touch so it such a shame that you kinda forgot about it in the hardest difficulity.

[Slow]
Agree with Kaguya. The choruses could use some more variation.
You did use some 1/2 in the sliders so you could that to spice it up a bit like for an example making 01:02:907 (1) - and 01:14:907 (1) - 1/2 longer.

[Fast]
01:11:907 (1) - The one beat combo here is completely out of place.

Nice little mapset.
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Kazuya
Hi \o

Gamu:

All suggestion fixed! Thank you very much! :3

Xgor:

I will answer tomorrow, because need to sleep, and need lot of time the storyboard & skin.

Thank you! : )

Edit:

Easy is currently under construction. (remap). If i'm done, I answer you.
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Kazuya
Okay, easy remapped, completed! Snow and skin is coming soon! Unfortunately my PC is very old, doesn't run the SGL program.. >_<
Avena
2,158 posts
Joined December 2012
Avena
Mod:
Delete Rain
kd pls
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Kazuya
Will be deleted, because shit troll difficulty. x'D
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
You guys can't be serious? this isn't funny at all...
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Kazuya
Okie. :3

Then... i'm waiting for mod or M4M. Someone? :roll:
Tarrasky
1,203 posts
Joined March 2014
Tarrasky
M4M---> The Ghost Princess of Hakugyokurou

Slow


00:11:907 (4) - put this slider in this angle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2337300
00:14:157 (6) - the flow not is perfect, look the picture, http://puu.sh/drLL7/88f357e52a.jpg in green line have the perfect flow, and in red your flow,
if you put this circle in x:232 and y:92 sounds better
00:23:907 (3,4) - maybe this angle is better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2337318
00:26:157 (5,6) - one slider in this time is better and the 00:26:157 (5) - sounds a bit overmap, try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2337322
01:05:907 (1,2) - Ctrl + J in this 2 sliders, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2337328 is cool (cause get a better flow for 01:05:157 (3) - )
01:20:157 (3,4) - or you remake like i correct in 00:26:532 - or try this
01:39:657 (5,6) - Ctrl + J in this sounds good, and more down like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2337342 the flow curve between 01:38:907 (4,5) - dont sounds good
in your form to make
/\ if do this dont forget to review 01:41:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

Medium


00:26:532 (4) - try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2337357
01:18:657 (2) - maybe this slider can get a red tick, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2337370
02:12:657 (2) - /\
03:03:657 (2,3) - /\
02:15:657 (2) - add clap
02:26:907 (1) - add finish
02:27:657 - add clap
maybe you can add a circle in 02:38:532 -
03:05:907 - add clap

Fast


00:08:907 (1) - crtl + G
00:14:719 (1) - remove finish
00:37:407 (5) - remove this circle
01:37:407 (1,4) - remove whistle
01:46:407 (5) - this slider is better in this position https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2337455
02:02:157 (6) - stack this slider in 02:00:657 (3) -
02:09:469 (3) - remove this circle
02:22:782 (6) - ctrl + G and in 02:23:157 (7) - the same https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2337461
02:45:282 (2,3) - stack?
03:05:907 (3) - add clap

Nice map and nice music, Merry Christmas and good luck ^^ :) :) :) :)
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Kazuya
Okay. Thank you, fixed.
Merry Christmas. : )
Come[Back]Home
1,785 posts
Joined October 2011
Come[Back]Home
Slow
00:02:907 (1,2) Why not like this?
SPOILER
(Of course as a repeat)
00:50:907 (3,4) Why not like this?
SPOILER
00:54:094 Spinner from here till 00:56:157
01:29:907 (1) Make this one curvy
02:02:907 (1) The finisher doesnt fit, maybe add a whistle
02:23:907 (4,5) This one is weird and doesn't fit. Make just one long slider from 02:23:907 till 02:24:657

Maybe add some hitsounds somehow it feels really empty.

Medium
00:05:157 (4) Let the slider end on 00:05:907
00:24:657 (2) ^
00:30:844 (2) Im unsure about this in a normal
00:36:844 (2) ^
01:17:907 (1,2) Maybe like this
SPOILER
01:30:844 (2) Unsure about this
02:17:907 (4) Make this sider end on 02:18:657

Fast
01:05:157 (7) Why dont you make this one curvy
01:45:282 (2,4) This overlap seems ugly


Thats it, really nice Map :3
I dont understand anything but i like the song haha
Godd luck with it :)
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Kazuya
Hello. Sorry for late. I worked this week.

Slow:

Fixed:

00:50:907 (3,4) Why not like this?
01:29:907 (1) Make this one curvy
02:23:907 (4,5) This one is weird and doesn't fit. Make just one long slider from 02:23:907 till 02:24:657

[Medium]

Fixed:

01:17:907 (1,2) Maybe like this

Fast:

Fixed all. Thank you! : )
Nyartin
35 posts
Joined October 2013
Nyartin
:)
Last edited by Nyartin , edited 4 times in total.
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
Kazuya
I love you Allah. Thank you! This mod is very helpful! Really! OoO *-----------------------*
Nyukai
2,415 posts
Joined July 2012
Nyukai
Yo, M4M.

[General]

  1. You could add xmas too in tags, people might look for christmas songs by using that word too.
  2. Diff names don't fit imo, especially because this is a slow song/map, no matter which diff you are playing, so that 'Fast' don't fit for example. If you don't want E/N/H what about Simple - Medium - Advanced? Since the song hasn't much rhythm, I think it fits better.
  3. Hungarian artist's name I think is Josh és Jutta, so maybe you should do this: http://puu.sh/dGlEw/a97a334cb2.png since artist is hungarian. Not sure about this, though.
  4. Some breaks are unnecessary in the mapset. I'll mention them:
    1. 00:26:907
    2. 00:53:907
    3. 01:47:907
    4. 02:38:907
  5. I'd move preview point to 00:55:969 - to catch better the vocals.
[Slow]

  1. You can increase some settings a bit. For example, since Normal has AR:5, adding AR:2 feels a bit unbalanced, at least for me. Just change it to 3.
  2. OD and HP feel a bit low for more or less same reason, just increase them to 2.
  3. 01:05:907 (1) - Weren't you adding NC each two stanzas? This one should be removed. Keep the consistency.
  4. 01:17:907 (1) - Same.
  5. 01:56:157 (5,1) - !nazi - For a better flow I'd curve a bit 01:56:157 (5) - following the next note, you already did something like that before. It will look better :3
  6. 02:56:907 (4) - You might want to move this a biiiit to the left until you form a better triangle, like this: http://puu.sh/dGmhw/0a62cf6f17.jpg
  7. Nothing else, good job <3
[Medium]

  1. 00:05:157 (4,1) - Swap NC.
  2. 00:20:907 (1,2) - !nazi - Move (1)'s end 1 grid down for a better blanket.
  3. 00:32:907 (5) - You missed a NC here :(
  4. 00:38:907 (6) - Same, you were adding NC each stanza, this needs to be more tidy.
  5. 00:44:907 (7) - Well, check this stuff please.
  6. 00:52:407 (5,6) - Hm... This pattern is like too close, although DS is ok, looks totally different regarding the map in general, so I'd try something different. Shouldn't be a big problem since there is no notes later o3o
  7. 01:44:907 (4) - You missed a NC.
  8. 02:47:157 (4,5,1) - I've just had totally the feel here should be a symmetric pattern. Up to you.
[Fast]

  1. This diff is perfectly fine and playable if you add AR:7 or 7,5 and reduce the OD and HP to 6. Although this is the hardest diff, those settings don't fit due the rhythm and song's slowness :/
  2. 01:38:907 (5) - NC.
  3. I can't find anything else. Well done!
Good luck and merry christmas! :3
Pappy
1,020 posts
Joined August 2013
Pappy
Hi! From your PM request :3

I like this song very much <3
Most are suggestions.

General
  1. Don't you think that hit100k, hit300g and hit300k looks strange? It looks like sun so It doesn't fit... :P
  2. Why "karácsony" in tags? It is in title already o.o
Fast
  1. 00:07:032 (3,4) - Fix that blanket, in most of the map you did it perfect ;w;
  2. 00:37:032 (3,4) - This is calm part of the song and this moment doesn't call for 1/4 jump at all. :<
  3. 02:20:532 (6) - Move this a bit right for better movement?
  4. 02:55:782 - Add note for guitar?
  5. Song is kinda long so should be at least -1 HP D:
Medium
  1. 01:29:157 (3,1) - Move (1) a bit left for better "blanket and stuff" with (1)
  2. 02:03:657 (2) - This is the only time when you used 1/3 on this diff, change it to something another.
  3. 01:06:657 (2) - Use rhytm as in other kiais (02:00:657 (2,3) - and 02:51:657 (2,3) - )
  4. 03:03:657 (2) - Change to 1/4 slider?
Slow
  1. Why you used 1.4 DS? qq It's pretty high because your diff have 1.1 star rating, so it's like for beginners.
That's all, brillant mapset! :D
Have my two stars, hope you rank this on xmas. c:
lino1000
lino1000
I saw your request in the modreq channel channel so i wanted to help you with your christmas song :D i am not too good in modding though and it is already well mapped so if you dont find it helpful dont give me kudosu.

  • General Thoughts
  1. Kazuya-sama as tag? nice idea XD
  2. As someone else mentioned, maybe you could change the difficultie names, since the fast difficulty still isnt fast
  3. Its a nice song, but not really my style of music. Still thanks for mapping it :D
  4. Sometimes the circles are shown as white boxes in the editor only. but when i go forward and back again they show normaly. i dont know if this is because of me or the skin has some problem, but i wanted to let you know. little screenshot
    SPOILER
  • Slow
  1. 00:26:157 (5) - Delete this circle since in my oppinion it isnt going with the song. if you want you could make 00:24:657 (4) a return slider. i think that would fit better.
  2. Thats all for this difficulty :/ not much to do for me...
  • Medium
  1. 00:10:407 (3) - Maybe make this half a tick sooner and longer because when i played it, it confused me a bit since they sing fast and there is a small pause (sorry cant really explain it, but i hope you understand what i mean). make it like this
    SPOILER
  2. Again not much to do for me.
  • Fast
  1. 00:15:469 (3) - Maybe maybe move this to 00:15:375 (3)
  2. 00:15:657 (4) - Move this to 00:15:563 (4)
  3. 00:26:157 (5) - Delete this since in my oppinion this does not go with the music
  4. 01:07:594 (5) - Add here a hitcirlce, or make the slider from 01:07:219 (4) a repeat/longer
  5. 01:09:469 (3) - Move this to 01:09:375 (3)
  6. 01:09:657 (4) - Move this slider to 01:09:563 (4)
  7. 01:30:657 (2) - Add here another hitcircle
  8. 02:00:657 (3) - Make this slider repeat since i believe that it fits the music better
  9. 02:02:157 (6) - Same as above
  10. 02:03:469 (3) - Move this to 02:03:375 (3)
  11. 02:03:657 (4) - 02:03:657 (4) - Move this to02:03:563 (4)
  12. 02:51:657 (3) - Make this slider repeat
  13. 02:54:469 (3) - Move this to 02:54:375 (3)
  14. 02:54:657 (4) - Move this to 02:54:563 (4)
Ok that was all. Good luck with your beatmap and merry christmas :3
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