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Kurosaki Maon - Rakuen no Tsubasa

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Asagi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, April 29, 2015 at 6:03:12 AM

Artist: Kurosaki Maon
Title: Rakuen no Tsubasa
Source: グリザイアの果実 -LE FRUIT DE LA GRISAIA-
Tags: Sakaki Yumiko Kajitsu frontwing opening 10nya -_t_e_n_n_y_a_-
BPM: 155
Filesize: 5753kb
Play Time: 03:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. 10nya's Normal (1.85 stars, 272 notes)
  2. Hard (3.19 stars, 523 notes)
  3. Insane (4.39 stars, 732 notes)
Download: Kurosaki Maon - Rakuen no Tsubasa
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2
osu! needs more Grisaia

Normal by 10nyan
Mira-san
HYPE HYPE HYPE


first 2 hoshis #wibu
Winnie
If GD is ever available I would love to contribute and make a normal :)
Osu! really does need more grisaia
Topic Starter
Asagi
Sorry, ill make all the set because its grisaia ;w;

osu! needs more Grisaia indeed (  ・ω・)
Winnie
No problem at all. I'll be first to mod it :)
happy623
pr!
Ashasaki
Hype! XD
P A N
can I make gd? i plan the diff name is Asasexy's isNormal
Topic Starter
Asagi
shut up pedoPAN
BeatofIke
Timing Check as requested:
BPM is correct and the new offset for the new mp3 is 522 (-8).
Also, don't forgot to resnap the preview time as well. Good luck :D
Topic Starter
Asagi
Thanks for the timing check :3
Mira-san

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Hard:

00:09:618 (1) - fixu blanketto
00:50:070 (1) - ^ a little bit
01:46:973 (4,1) - parallel pls
01:59:554 (1) - notha blanketto

10nya:
00:36:909 (4,5,1) - Would rather make this straight.
03:12:134 (1) - Blanketto

That's all.
[ Joey ]
Hi Asagi, I'll be modding this later (requested by Broccoly)
Just leaving this here as a placeholder
Topic Starter
Asagi
le all fix Mera's mod
10nya
yolo mod via chat

SPOILER
13:04 10nya: hard, 00:04:392 - too loud i think remove whistle is better
13:05 10nya: 00:10:199 - naziest shit 1 grid to left
13:06 Asagi: oh, welp me on the hitsounds
13:06 Asagi: changing default skin
13:06 10nya: 00:15:231 - remove whistle, didnt follow your pattern
13:06 10nya: ok
13:06 10nya: hard hard
13:08 10nya: 00:42:134 - remove whistle, too loud and didnt follow anything
13:08 Asagi: 00:04:392 (2) - not quite sure about this
13:08 Asagi: hmmmm
13:08 Asagi: maybe ill keep the whistle, but low volume
13:09 10nya: what i mention is in here 00:04:392 - owo
13:09 10nya: not at (2) slider
13:09 Asagi: wait wat
13:09 Asagi: oh fuck
13:09 Asagi: hard diff ._.
13:09 10nya: ye
13:09 10nya: hard
13:09 10nya: lol i wrote that thrice
13:10 Asagi: brain is still buffering
13:10 10nya: wake up lazy assagi
13:10 Asagi: ok removed that shit
13:11 10nya: http://puu.sh/gXivN/6cc4b4fe3e.jpg 00:42:328 - rearrange like that?
13:11 10nya: well i feel a bit strange about flow from (1) to slider (2)
13:11 10nya: up to you, im bad with flow anyway
13:11 Asagi: btw, i just copied the hitsound on insane hahaha
13:12 10nya: lazy ass
13:12 10nya: LOL
13:12 10nya: 00:42:328 - add whistle
13:12 10nya: follow your pattern
13:12 10nya: well whistle is really fit on red ticks
13:12 10nya: 00:45:038 - lol remove whistle here owo
13:13 Asagi: ^that follows the guitar scratch
13:14 Asagi: for the image, i think ill keep my pattern :3
13:14 10nya: 01:49:876 - sorry 1grid to right to make better symmetry
13:14 10nya: lol sure
13:15 10nya: 01:53:360 - remove whistle, didnt follow anything
13:15 10nya: 01:56:070 - add whistle
13:16 Asagi: wait, something changed on the stackin notes? wat
13:16 10nya: yea
13:16 10nya: i think because its april mop
13:16 10nya: i cant stack my map
13:17 Asagi: not sure
13:17 Asagi: because when you playing the map, its not perfectly stacked anyway
13:18 10nya: dunno though
13:18 10nya: anyway shit too perfect
13:18 Asagi: ok lets move on hahaha
13:18 10nya: lets move to insane
13:18 Asagi: WAT
13:19 Asagi: ill put the clap on the clap
13:19 Asagi: i mean your custom clap
13:19 10nya: wat
13:19 10nya: oh
13:19 10nya: wat
13:19 Asagi: WAT
13:19 Asagi: your clap
13:19 Asagi: wtf
13:20 10nya: its whistle though
13:20 10nya: slider tick
13:20 10nya: ye
13:20 Asagi: HOLY FUCK :V
13:20 Asagi: testplaying the map in the editor = minus coin
13:20 10nya: stupid osu coins
13:20 10nya: well april fools anyway
13:21 Asagi: so i put the custom clap you put on your diff
13:22 10nya: re-hitsounding
13:22 Asagi: wait wat
13:22 10nya: wat
13:23 10nya: wat
13:23 Asagi: WAT
13:23 Asagi: wait wrong
13:23 Asagi: AAAA SHIT
13:23 Asagi: ok here we go...you put the custom clap on your diff right? on the ticks? i used it as the clap of the map instead
13:24 10nya: oh
13:24 10nya: i didnt put custom clap on my diff
13:24 10nya: just custom slider tick
13:24 Asagi: yea dat
13:24 Asagi: still a clap
13:24 Asagi: hahaha
13:24 10nya: normal soft-clap is still on my diff
13:24 10nya: lol
13:24 Asagi: wait
13:24 Asagi: WAT
13:25 Asagi: im using my skin so its kinda conflict on the default hitsounds
13:26 10nya: lol you're too late to notice the hs on my map
13:26 10nya: xD
13:26 10nya: its ok i can remap those
13:26 10nya: anyway 00:40:780 - can you fix the flow? plays weird for me, like ctrl+< this one
13:26 10nya: orz
13:26 10nya: insane
13:27 10nya: 00:41:747 (1,3) - : remove whistle, its better, current one is too loud though
13:27 Asagi: not sure, but its fine like that
13:27 Asagi: slightly long spacing for finish hitsound impact
13:28 Asagi: maybe i just lower the volume on them
13:31 10nya: 01:45:521 - 01:45:715 - add streams like 00:34:199 - this part? i think they have same sound
13:32 Asagi: the 1:45 part has loud bongo sound which is not stream-like compare to 00:34
13:32 10nya: 02:19:683 - last slider point 2 grid up? sorry for nazi lol i cant find anthing
13:32 10nya: hmm
13:32 Asagi: wait my ears are blind
13:32 10nya: well since its insane so i thought add streams would be better
13:32 Asagi: double checking
13:32 10nya: ears > blind
13:32 10nya: OK
13:33 Asagi: if i change that, thatll be a major change
13:33 Asagi: pls
13:33 10nya: well im trying to support the musc lol
13:33 10nya: music*
13:33 Asagi: yea i know
13:33 Asagi: but im considering about it
13:33 Asagi: hmmm
13:34 Asagi: so you gonna rehitsound?
13:34 10nya: up to you though
13:34 10nya: if you choose different custom clap then i dont need to
13:34 10nya: lol
13:35 Asagi: i used your hitsound
13:35 Asagi: well, it fits
13:35 Asagi: that the default soft clap
13:36 10nya: again up to you
13:36 10nya: shit cant find anything
13:36 10nya: god map

kd pls
_tasty
Hi, from my queue :3

Tbh I can't say anything at all about this. I think it's perfect.
The Insane difficulty is really fun, much better than I expected.
The hard difficulty is really good too.

Good luck! ^-^)b
Spaghetti
Winnie
Leaving this here for a mod later :)
[ Joey ]
Hey Asagi, sorry this took so long to get to.

So yeah, as requested, by Broccoly

General
Unfortunately you will probably run into issues with the difficulty gap between Normal and Hard. tbh the Normal feels more like an Easy to me. I recommend adding a difficulty in between the Normal and the Hard.

Insane

00:04:199 (1,2,3,4,5) - A little overmapped imo. There is nothing going on in the music here. I recommend a rhythm more like this: http://puu.sh/h96QS/92d02d8341.jpg
00:24:328 (1,2,3) - This jump is a little big for this slow part in the music. Consider lowering the distance
01:39:425 (4,1) - Not a big deal, but you can stack these better
02:32:263 (1,2,1) - This spacing can be confusing because they look evenly spaced. People might mistake slider 2 to slider 1 as a 1/4 note. Consider adding more space between these: 02:32:554 (2,1) -
02:40:586 - The clap here doesn't sound good imo
03:22:973 (5,2) - Stack
03:28:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I like all these hitcircles, but I think a slider here 03:29:554 (1,2) - Would make this finish feel even better
03:31:102 (1,2) - This distance is quite far for a 1/4 note, and might trip some people up. Not a big deal, but just thought I'd point it out.

Hard

Perfect Diff :o

10nya's Normal

00:10:199 - Why start the break here? I would just start it right after the spinner
00:30:715 (4,5) - This diestance is longer than what you were using previously, should probably keep it the same
00:37:683 (1) - I don't really like the sound of the claps on these slider ticks. I would remove them
00:59:747 (2) - Sorry I really don't agree with these slider tick claps =/ I think it would sound better with them removed, srry
01:27:231 (1) - Should change this to a 1/1 slider so you hit this beat also 01:27:618 -
02:41:554 (1) - Extend this slider to here 02:42:328 -

Wow short mod, sorry about that. It's a really good set Asagi. I enjoy it a lot. Good luck!
Winnie
Call me back here when you guys are done making changes to Joey's mod
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