Estellia-Estellia- wrote:
HEY FROM M4M THANK YOU
TIEM 4 MOD
- 00:02:152 (2,3) - Nazi blanket
Adjusted a bit - 00:03:589 (4) - This slider doesn't fit the rhythm here, try this: [box=]
I follow the drum sound here since it's very loud here and my rhythm would be a bit easier for beginners
00:05:744 - Will suggest note here
No, might be too hard for beginner00:08:619 (2) - Rhythm is too short for such a slider, will suggest change but you can keep it
I want the clap sound here 00:08:978 - 00:09:337 (1,2) - Rhythm doesn't feel good, try copying the rhythm of here: 00:12:212 (1,2,3) or something similar. The long slider doesn't fit the rhythm.
I follow the instrument there it sound much better and easier for beginner00:23:709 (1,2,3,4) - Try having circular flow here
No,I like mine00:34:846 (1,2) - Transition of sliders are weird
I understand that (2)'s head is kinda off but the emphasized beat there help fix this so I guess this is fine00:57:840 (2) - You sure this isn't too hard to follow for Easy players?
Yes, the flow actually really simple here using 1/2 beat here shoudn't make this that hard much imo00:59:637 (1,2,3) - Transition is very weird
Yeah but the how emphasized the music is fix this thing01:02:511 (1,2) - Round 1 more for better circle flow
Okay01:03:948 (2,1) - Nazi blanket
I think it's fine01:11:134 (1) - Will suggest Ctrl+G so it fits pentagon pattern
No, I like mine01:20:834 (2,3) - Shift 2 up and 3 lower for better lead-in
What? I need x y axis for this01:25:505 (1) - Suggest place notes here and shift spinner to the back
No, I like mineI think its ok, just certain minor errors. I see many weird slider shapes that I personally will not recommend for Easy. Also, some flow problems to watch out for. Rhythming is occasionally bad, but its ok overall.
The slider shapes is weird but as long as it flow nice and fit with the music it still fine, for the rhythm I try to make this easy as possible so I mostly mapped the beat that sound strong to me[Normal]00:05:744 (5,1) - Nazi blanket
Whoops, fixed00:08:978 (4,2) - Blanket better
I think this is fine00:12:212 (1,2) - Transition of sliders are weird
Why is it looks weird to you? (1)'s tail is facing right at (2)'s head00:19:756 (5,1) - Are these parallel?
Yes00:20:834 (1,2) - Transition of sliders are weird
Why is it looks weird to you? 00:48:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Comparing this and 00:51:014 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - , I don't get why there are different NC patterns and different rhythms
The NC here 00:52:451 (1) - is to make the players know that rhythm is changing to 1/2 beat01:11:673 (4) - Suggest change this into hitcircle on start of slider
No, mine looks fine01:25:505 (1) - Suggest place notes here and shift spinner to the back
Same as EasyAn ok normal, don't see many problems. However, the sliders lead-in to each other weirdly sometimes.
Why it looks weird? I need reasons :/ [Hard]00:03:589 (1) - Double reverse highly not recommended
But this is Hard ;w;00:07:900 (1,2) - Parallel?
Yes00:10:415 (3,4,1) - Make this more circular
No, I like mine00:17:960 (1) - The back end of this slider is too short, but its fine if you want to keep it
Keep it so this will be a bit parallel with 00:18:679 (2) - 00:29:457 (1,2) - Blanket
Adjusted a bit00:30:894 (1,2) - Try make these circular instead to lead in to slider 3
I break the flow at (2) to emphasis the vocal00:36:104 (4,5,6,1) - Pattern may be confusing, suggest remove 1 and 2, make 6 a slider to beginning of 2, make end of 2 a hitcircle
Will consider this 00:45:265 (1) - Slider feels too rushed for the slow part
I want the SV to be consistent here01:03:948 (1,2,3,4) - Centralize + speed up?
What do you mean?01:10:415 (3,4,5) - Consider having a 4 note stream then a slider, if not the back feels empty
01:10:685 - This beat is emptyNo spinner?
YesIMO weird rhythms are rampant, but you can keep some of them. Some weird slider lead ins but should feel ok when played.
I keep chagning from vocal to instrument to make this it looks intresting[Insane]00:00:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pattern should have consistent DS so 4 to 5 doesn't feel awkward
Play fine for me00:02:691 (2,3) - Undesirable (Weird rhythm + kinda big jump)
^00:08:798 (2,3) - Suggest having loud hitsounds here
No , I like it quite like that00:11:852 (5) - Suggest having only hitcircle here, slider can feel too draggy
No,this one emphasis the drum sound and make the flow to (1) good imo00:16:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I don't really feel a stream here
This is for bulid-up feeling00:38:798 (3,4,5,6) - Undesirable, you're missing too many strong beats here
I follow the drum sound on white tick but using only 2 circles here might be too easy so I use add some notes at blue tick01:02:331 (6,7,1,2) - Will suggest removing 2, and making 1 a long slider to last the singer's vocal
No, mine looks fine01:03:948 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythm is very weird, doesn't fit
It doesn't sound weird to me , I try to make this different from the one I use here 01:15:445 (1,2,3,4) - A lot of weird rhythms, weird slider lead ins, weird patterns. It feels like you're placing sliders on a whim and simple trying to comply to rhythm without taking into account the song's rhythm or vocal. The jumps are very haphazard, since they don't seem to accentuate anything.
But I play it again (after haven't check this map for like 4 days) and I still get nice acc and score here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2200664 so it might because this one is not your taste ,well I think Insane is a bit subjective each players have their own tasteI find a good Easy, Normal, kinda good Hard, but weird Insane. Its ok overall, I guess
(Sorry if I was too harsh or anything
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Thanks it doesn't that bad but try to think about mapper's intention a little bit, it might make you modding skill better 
Easy by me
Normal by me
Hard by me
Insane by me
