Amamiya Sora - Tsuki Akari · forum

smallboat

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-10-19T07:21:24+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年12月3日 at 下午 08:59:47

Artist: Amamiya Sora
Title: Tsuki Akari
Source: アカメが斬る！
Tags: Akame ga Kill! tv size ending takahiro tetsuya square enix white fox gangan comic joker black red eye girl anigi king blood ice zan slash sword cut head kill death die night raid Oracle Minakami Yuki Amamiya Yuko
BPM: 91
Filesize: 24215kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.19 stars, 68 notes)
Hard (2.44 stars, 172 notes)
Insane (3.77 stars, 225 notes)
Normal (1.59 stars, 117 notes)
Oracle's Insane (4.3 stars, 220 notes)
Skystar's Insane (4.46 stars, 233 notes)
Yuki's Insane (4.44 stars, 218 notes)

Download: Amamiya Sora - Tsuki Akari
Download: Amamiya Sora - Tsuki Akari (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy by me (#13 Ranked Map. )

Normal

Hard

Insane

Oracle's Insane by Oracle

Yuki's Insane by Minakami Yuki

Skystar's Insane by Amamiya Yuko

Akame OP 1 :
Amamiya Sora - Skyreach

Akame ED 1 :
Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta. (Anime Ver.)

Akame OP 2 :
Mayama Rika - Liar Mask anime size

Map Log

2014/10/19 Submitted map
2014/10/26 Add Oracle's Insane diff
2014/11/02 Add Yuki's Insane diff
2014/11/06 Add Skystar's 233 diff
2014/11/13 Offset adjust (534->540) by jonathanlfj

Thanks Mod

SoGa
spring
Autumn
wcx19911123
Rakuen
KaedekaShizuru
-Google-
Flask Bubbled
Yuzu-
jonathanlfj Qualified
Garven Rebubbled
Atrue Requalified

At last , I still do the OP2 and ED2 map.

Last edited by smallboat 2014-12-10T03:50:47+00:00, edited 18 times in total.

SoGa

236 posts

Joined June 2013

SoGa 2014-10-19T17:58:37+00:00

Simple Mod from In-Game

General

Yes,Akamega KILL

[Normal]

00:45:369 (1,2) - 复制1粘贴2CTRL+J CTRL+G?

[Easy]

00:32:182 (1) - Blanket it ?
00:11:083 (1) - Finish(虽然whistle比较好听._.
00:16:358 (1) - ^
00:21:632 (1) - ^
00:36:797 (5) - clap
00:42:072 (5) - ^
01:14:380 (1) - Finish

[Hard]

00:08:116 (5,1,2,1) - 间距？不知道有没有问题、

[Insane]

00:18:995 (1,2) - 再近点？
SC4感觉有点奇怪，，毕竟只有3个，加上尾那个4个，要不就在和差不多的也加上，，要不就全程不sc4了，orz

唉，又水一发._.

Last edited by SoGa 2014-10-23T04:15:28+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Spring

117 posts

Joined March 2013

Spring 2014-10-22T01:52:36+00:00

赤瞳控

Easy

00:53:281 (1) - 向右上移动一些可能更好看
01:18:336 (4) - 中间改红描点怎么样
01:07:127 (2,3) - 去掉3，然后和01:04:490 (2) - 这里一样用个折返怎么样

Normal

00:34:819 (5) - 直滑条怎么样lol
00:40:094 (1) - ^
00:43:720 (2) - 包好？
01:05:149 (3,4) - 去掉4然后3延长一拍变折返怎么样
01:21:303 (3,4) - 我觉得这样好看
img

Hard

00:13:391 (7) - 可能改成弯滑条好看lol

hard和in什么都没摸出来sad

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-10-26T17:18:55+00:00

not hitsounded yet

~

http://puu.sh/crtYT/b4ffff8b43.osu

Autumn

501 posts

Joined October 2011

Autumn 2014-11-01T06:41:40+00:00

Hard

01:24:929 (1) - 個人覺得5%的音量正好，25%有點高了

Insane

HP-1？前面節奏比較空，開了HR的話Auto玩起來都只能艱難地維持在1/2 HP..
00:18:995 (1,2) - 1/8出現得比較突然，不如控制一下間距，或者頭尾疊起來
00:41:907 (6) - 鼓點在00:41:990 - ，不如改一下節奏：
SPOILER
增加一個單點對應鼓點，後面換成兩個二分拍slider對應四個鼓音

其他難度都挺好的！沒太多好說的！
祝好運！

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-11-02T17:11:53+00:00

我耳机坏了所以sc3的whistle听得不是很清楚，就照你的insane下的
不过不得不吐槽船业你的音效设置真是。。。。
有些很明显的drum clap你都没下出来啊

yuki's insane

osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:月灯り
Artist:Amamiya Sora
ArtistUnicode:雨宮 天
Creator:smallboat
Version:Yuki's Insane
Source:アカメが斬る！
Tags:Akame ga Kill! tv size ending takahiro tetsuya square enix white fox gangan comic joker black red eye girl anigi king blood ice zan slash sword cut head kill death die night raid
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wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2014-11-04T13:27:26+00:00

[General]
我感觉bpm不是整数。。建议找高人看一看
cancel wildscreen
add lead-in

[Easy]
difficulty setting is a bit too high imo, especially AR
00:29:544 (3,1) - blanket can be better
01:17:017 (3,4) - 不太好看，把01:18:336 (4) - 放到x:72 y:160左右感觉好些

[Normal]
00:09:105 - this tick sounds too loud imo

[Hard]
01:23:610 (1,2,3) - this jump is too huge imo, it's much harder than the average of the difficulty of this diff

[Insane]
00:01:852 (6) - 1/16 sounds better
00:04:490 (7) - ^, I'll ignore same suggestions from now on
00:44:050 (3) - ctrl+g? flow can be a bit better imo
01:19:490 (4) - x:464 y:240? looks better

good luck

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-11-04T14:56:23+00:00

as ur req

no kd

Timing

good enough.
some of the original song's track's sample doesn't snap to the correct ticks, thou the timing itself is cool with downbeat. u may find a bit offset if u listen to one or two of kick and snare beats in the song track really carefully or strictly with 25% playing rate in some sections, but the main rhythm still fits well to the current bpm and offset.

u all smallboat's wives.

good luck

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-11-05T09:46:57+00:00

啦啦啦，来摸

Normal

00:43:720 (2) - 感觉这样会比较好看？如果这样摆了后面的稍微动一下

Hard

00:45:369 (1) - 这个稍微旋转一下，这样怎么样？

Insane

00:03:501 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:03:665 (3) - 可以和00:01:852 (6) - stack一下，然后00:03:501 (2,3,4) - 做成个三角00:04:160 (5,6,7) - 这边就和00:03:501 (2,3,4) - 对称过来看看w【描述有点着急还是上图吧
SPOILER

Oracle's Insane

00:38:116 (2) - 这个到00:38:775 (3) - 的距离是1.6诶……我觉得还是1.8比较好吧？00:38:775 (3) - 可以做成弯曲的slider，尾部和00:36:962 (2) - stack，00:39:435 (4) - 再移动一下，放个预览：
SPOILER
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426,119,39435,1,8,0:0:0:0:
```

摸……摸不动惹……;w;

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2014-11-05T15:48:38+00:00

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

Default = Normal mods
Opt. = Optional / Minor / Nazi
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
:3
看我再来篇论文~

[KIAI points]
01:18:995 - KIAI应该这里完，01:18:501 - 这边背景音乐+拉音还没停
01:24:270 - 最后这里完，也都跟背景音乐
建议更改~

[Easy]

说真的其实这难度AR2就足够了，bpm+note密度也很低，3.5太快
HP和OD改为1
00:32:182 (1) - 没包好:
Image
00:47:676 - Unneeded timing point
00:48:006 (3) - NC here for consistency, remove NC for 00:50:643 (1) -
00:50:314 - ^
00:55:918 - Suggest to put NC for every beat (in KIAI)
01:01:193 - ^
01:11:742 (4) - ^ (and so on)
01:17:676 - Missing Finish （有点小声）

[Normal]

觉得AR4刚好，其他的设定也改下
00:11:083 (1) - 尽可能别贴00:08:446 (4) - :
Image
00:11:742 (2) - 移去中间，X:256 Y:324，因为00:12:402 (3) - DS有点走了
00:17:017 (2) - ^
01:17:676 - Missing Finish

[Hard]

AR6~
01:14:380 (1) - Suggest 1.0x DS,same like other triplets

[Insane]

00:01:852 (6) - 仔细听，这个尾在1/12，00:01:907 -
00:04:599 - Extra sound, maybe can silence it (5%)
00:11:083 (1) - 1/12，不然直接放圈圈吧，跟后面的节奏比较合
00:26:907 (1) - 尾巴没包好
00:28:226 (4) - ^
00:36:138 (4) - DS有点怪，用1.4吧
01:14:380 (1,2) - 包？
01:17:676 (3) - Missing Finish

[Oracle's Insane]

00:19:160 (2) - Extra hit~ Lower the sound / remove?
01:06:138 (8) - Change to a slider ends at 01:06:303 - ? Vocal, like 01:16:852 (6) -
01:17:676 - Missing Finish

[Yuki's Insane]

00:52:539 - Feel like missing hit o3o (opt.)
01:09:764 (2,3,1) - 这个好看
01:17:676 - Missing Finish

Good luck!
~(=^･ω･^)/｡･:*:･ﾟ★，｡･:*:･ﾟ☆

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Skystar 2014-11-05T15:52:18+00:00

http://puu.sh/cEkkn/6510aeb3e1.osu

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

KaedekaShizuru 2014-11-06T13:28:24+00:00

爷爷四个insane 要死人了
[General]
关于KIAI的问题上面已经提到了不过我觉得有点两难

[星爷的233]
话说为啥是233？
00:01:852 - 虽然低BPM 不过这里还是个1/8 我觉得放一个超短slider比较好
00:04:490 (6) - ↑
最后可以放一个spin

[Yuki's Insane]
挑不出什么

[Oracle's Insane]
00:01:852 (4) - 同星爷
00:04:490 (3) - ↑
00:19:077 (1) - 没有必要的三连

[Insane]
01:26:907 (1) - 出于对称考虑摆中间不太好吧

[Hard]
只提一点
我觉得前半段whistle用的太集中了而finish替换在3白线感觉不太好

美丽

Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Nepu 2014-11-06T14:47:18+00:00

Requested in-game
~~我来加SP~~

General

Should add Amamiya Yuko and skystar to tags I think

[Easy]

AR3就够了吧...
00:22:292 (2,3) - 不太好看，把3逆时针转转然后变往左上的flow?
00:29:544 (3,1) - blanket
00:45:369 (2) - 1grid down 1grid right
00:48:665 (4,1) - 强迫症看到这种超难受Q_Q为何不用SV1.12啦
00:50:643 (1) - blanket
01:21:632 (3,1,2) - easy这么玩逆flow不太好的感觉

[Normal]

00:16:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 复制粘贴好歹Ctrl+H一下吧/.\还能符合DS(别忘了后边也要Ctrl+H)
00:42:731 (1,2) - blanket
01:07:127 (2,3) - 改成和01:03:830 (1,2,3) - 一样的1/2 1/2 1/2滑条节奏？
01:14:380 (1,2) - 改成折返和1/2 slider?

[Hard]

01:23:610 (1,2,3) - 尾杀不好玩Q_Q

[Insane]

00:01:852 (6) - 1/12..还不如不跟这个音。。
00:03:665 (3) - overmap ;w; 建议删了
00:04:490 (7) - 1/12
00:11:083 (1) - ^
我觉得一开始星爷和mtb那种简单的感觉就不错了，可以参考下
那几个1/12跟起来有点难- -实在想跟可以大概可以用音效(?
00:30:533 (4) - 改成note?
01:01:523 (2,3) - 感觉间距有点大了

[Oracle's]

00:19:077 (1) - 应该是1/12 00:19:050 (1) -
00:19:160 (2) - overmap
这里还是不跟了吧。。
同上，我觉得星爷和mtb一开始的那种简单的感觉就好了，可以参考下
01:06:138 (8) - 改成一个1/4 slider?有种突然一下空了的感觉

[Yuki's]

Clean

[Skystar's 233]

~~折寿啦折寿啦！星爷用CS5.0啦！~~
00:39:104 (2) - unsnapped slider end
01:05:313 (2) - unsnapped slider end
01:20:314 (3) - unsnapped slider end
01:24:929 - 这个喷星星感觉有点无意义/.\或者建议map完整？
00:27:566 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 感觉有点挤
如果是玩note art的话，00:31:193 (5,6,7) - 也可以换个位置吧/.\
摸不动orz不摸了

祝早日rank~~

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,460 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2014-11-08T02:55:15+00:00

來啦

[General]

ArtistUnicode: 雨宮天 中間沒有空格
Tag少了星爺ID

[Skystar's 233]

開AIMod看一下unsnapped sliderend
00:54:599 - 不跟這裡的音? 沒跟vocal這裡打起來怪怪的 (可能是我自己的問題
01:24:599 - 感覺可以放個減速的slider然後在01:24:929 - 結尾因為那邊還有音嘛
前面音樂好小節奏散散的好難跟;w;

[Yuki's Insane]

00:11:083 - ~ 00:32:182 - 用whistle跟鋼琴的音? 只放在有些重音感覺還是略空
00:34:654 (5,1) - 沒疊好=3=
kiai感覺只有剛開始一小段燃了一點..其他就都有點萎萎散散的

[Oracle's Insane]

00:19:077 (1,2) - 這裡有串的音嗎? 音樂還是屬於比較靜的部分突然間一個串會讓人摸不著頭緒
00:36:797 (1) - 用normal-sampleset跟鼓? (或是什麼custom hitsound都行)
00:48:665 (2,3) - 怎麼突然間距變小了不太好讀
我感覺kiai的部分前面作的不錯不過後面節奏變散的時候spacing變小就感覺挺奇怪啊像是01:09:105 (2,3) - 01:10:424 (5,6,7) - 感覺下次可以注意一下

[Insane]

01:05:808 (7,8) - 第一次讀的時後突然spacing變小讓我差點按錯建議你(8,9)掉換位置

[Hard]

00:46:687 (3,4,1) - 柑橘可以等距 (跳)

~~

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-11-08T15:38:59+00:00

Rakuen

Rakuen wrote:
[KIAI points]
01:18:995 - KIAI应该这里完，01:18:501 - 这边背景音乐+拉音还没停
01:24:270 - 最后这里完，也都跟背景音乐
建议更改~ fixed

[Yuki's Insane]
00:52:539 - Feel like missing hit o3o (opt.) use a 1/8 slider here now
01:09:764 (2,3,1) - 这个好看
01:17:676 - Missing Finish 感觉这里clap更重一点

Flask

Flask wrote:
[Yuki's Insane]
00:11:083 - ~ 00:32:182 - 用whistle跟鋼琴的音? 只放在有些重音感覺還是略空船业的这whistle感觉太吵了
00:34:654 (5,1) - 沒疊好=3= fixed
kiai感覺只有剛開始一小段燃了一點..其他就都有點萎萎散散的还好吧、、

thanks for modding~

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:月灯り
Artist:Amamiya Sora
ArtistUnicode:雨宮 天
Creator:smallboat
Version:Yuki's Insane
Source:アカメが斬る！
Tags:Akame ga Kill! tv size ending takahiro tetsuya square enix white fox gangan comic joker black red eye girl anigi king blood ice zan slash sword cut head kill death die night raid Oracle Minakami Yuki
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Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Skystar 2014-11-08T16:48:51+00:00

http://puu.sh/cIiFI/0765626687.osu

Maruyu

742 posts

Joined July 2013

Maruyu 2014-11-09T15:24:43+00:00

owo/

You should really get your timing checked out.

Oracle's Insane

00:14:050 (2) - I can't quite hear the sound this note's snapped to. Not sure what you'd want to do but a slider at 00:13:720 ending at 00:14:380 doesn't look bad at all to me
00:19:077 (1,2) - the issue with these 2 notes is that the first one doesn't seem quite matching to the music. If timing problems do arise, well. Anyway, the second one is also not really snapped to any note from what I can tell. this tiny 00:18:665 (7,1,2) section feels a bit overmapped in general because of these 2 circles so I'd advise a change.
00:22:621 (5) - the head also has no sound snapped to it, I'd advise to replace 00:22:292 (4) - with a circle and a 1/2 slider that starts at 00:22:457 and ends at 00:22:786.
00:38:775 (3) - it's not like you have to change this, and i get the slider is following the vocals but you could as easily end it at 00:39:105 and place a circle at 00:39:270, just to fill the red tick which has a sound
00:47:676 - eh, maybe you could make this a circle and shorten the slider by 1/4, this sound is pretty strong and the 1/4 tick is also a piano key so it fits better. also change NC to the new circle if you choose to do so.
00:58:226 (3) - NC here instead of 00:58:555 (1) for consistency with last part

Yuki's Insane

ye uh, this is pretty fine but the 00:01:523 (4) - slider bothers me. it's not like you have to but 00:01:852 is pretty strong, a circle fits better so replacing the slider with 2 circles would be my suggestion
00:52:457 (4) - are you sure about this? this feels pretty hard to play and unpredictable

Skystar's 233

00:07:127 (5) - you should still keep 0.9x distance between this note and the last one, since the real note you want to highlight is 00:07:457 (6).
00:41:907 (1) - uhh not quite sure about this
00:52:457 (1,2,3) - ;_;
00:53:940 (3,4) - these 2 sliders sound very off rhythm because 00:53:775 is not clickable and neither is 00:54:599. anything should be fine as long as you fill those.
00:56:577 (3) - the blue tick is completely ignored, and same for white tick at 00:57:072 (5). same as above. in fact this beat ignoring happens often in the kiai, so revise and fix. It's important
you might also want to consider mapping the last seconds as the other insane diffs just for a bit of consistency

again, please ask someone to check your timing. just because

o3o/

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-11-10T08:00:55+00:00

SoGa

SoGa wrote:
Simple Mod from In-Game

[Normal]
00:45:369 (1,2) - 复制1粘贴2CTRL+J CTRL+G? 好
[Easy]
00:32:182 (1) - Blanket it ? 不了
00:11:083 (1) - Finish(虽然whistle比较好听._. 還是whistle好了
00:16:358 (1) - ^ 還是whistle好了
00:21:632 (1) - ^ 還是whistle好了
00:36:797 (5) - clap 好
00:42:072 (5) - ^ 好
01:14:380 (1) - Finish 這不是已經加了finish?
[Hard]
00:08:116 (5,1,2,1) - 间距？不知道有没有问题、改了一點
[Insane]
00:18:995 (1,2) - 再近点？這邊是對稱，懶的改了
SC4感觉有点奇怪，，毕竟只有3个，加上尾那个4个，要不就在和差不多的也加上，，要不就全程不sc4了，orz 還好
唉，又水一发._. 沒關係，thx for mod !

spring

spring wrote:
:) 赤瞳控
Easy
00:53:281 (1) - 向右上移动一些可能更好看懶的改了w
01:18:336 (4) - 中间改红描点怎么样突然多一個有角的slider會有點怪
01:07:127 (2,3) - 去掉3，然后和01:04:490 (2) - 这里一样用个折返怎么样難度已經很低了不用了
Normal
00:34:819 (5) - 直滑条怎么样lol 不了
00:40:094 (1) - ^ 不了
00:43:720 (2) - 包好？這邊沒想包注，但移動了一點
01:05:149 (3,4) - 去掉4然后3延长一拍变折返怎么样不了
01:21:303 (3,4) - 我觉得这样好看 Good
Hard
00:13:391 (7) - 可能改成弯滑条好看lol Good

hard和in什么都没摸出来sad Nothing,thx for mod !

Autumn

Autumn wrote:
Hard
01:24:929 (1) - 個人覺得5%的音量正好，25%有點高了調了20%
Insane
HP-1？前面節奏比較空，開了HR的話Auto玩起來都只能艱難地維持在1/2 HP.. 好
00:18:995 (1,2) - 1/8出現得比較突然，不如控制一下間距，或者頭尾疊起來哦這裡已經沒1/8了，這邊我放錯節奏了233
00:41:907 (6) - 鼓點在00:41:990 - ，不如改一下節奏：原來這是1/8鼓點，沒注意聽....fixed
SPOILER
增加一個單點對應鼓點，後面換成兩個二分拍slider對應四個鼓音
其他難度都挺好的！沒太多好說的！好的 !
祝好運！ Thx for mod !

wcx19911123

wcx19911123 wrote:
[General]
我感觉bpm不是整数。。建议找高人看一看再看看
cancel wildscreen Fixed
add lead-in +1500

[Easy]
difficulty setting is a bit too high imo, especially AR Feel fine
00:29:544 (3,1) - blanket can be better Fixed
01:17:017 (3,4) - 不太好看，把01:18:336 (4) - 放到x:72 y:160左右感觉好些 Fixed

[Normal]
00:09:105 - this tick sounds too loud imo Keep it

[Hard]
01:23:610 (1,2,3) - this jump is too huge imo, it's much harder than the average of the difficulty of this diff I keep the diff spread balance at H -> I , so nothing

[Insane]
00:01:852 (6) - 1/16 sounds better Keep 1/8
00:04:490 (7) - ^, I'll ignore same suggestions from now on Keep 1/8
00:44:050 (3) - ctrl+g? flow can be a bit better imo I think good flow at the previous placement
01:19:490 (4) - x:464 y:240? looks better Fixed

good luck Thx for mod !

OblivioN

OblivioN wrote:
啦啦啦，来摸
Normal
00:43:720 (2) - 感觉这样会比较好看？如果这样摆了后面的稍微动一下前面有提到這邊就不做blanket了

Hard
00:45:369 (1) - 这个稍微旋转一下，这样怎么样？好

Insane
00:03:501 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:03:665 (3) - 可以和00:01:852 (6) - stack一下，然后00:03:501 (2,3,4) - 做成个三角00:04:160 (5,6,7) - 这边就和00:03:501 (2,3,4) - 对称过来看看w【描述有点着急还是上图吧發現有一個音overmap了，所以這個pattern美丽了

摸……摸不动惹……;w; Nothing,thx for mod !

Rakuen

Rakuen wrote:
( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

Default = Normal mods
Opt. = Optional / Minor / Nazi
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
:3
看我再来篇论文~ 儘管來啊

[KIAI points]
01:18:995 - KIAI应该这里完，01:18:501 - 这边背景音乐+拉音还没停好建議，fixed
01:24:270 - 最后这里完，也都跟背景音乐 OK !
建议更改~

[Easy]
说真的其实这难度AR2就足够了，bpm+note密度也很低，3.5太快 AR調到了2.5
HP和OD改为1 個人不喜歡調到最低都喜歡調到2
00:32:182 (1) - 没包好: 怎麼好幾人都挑這個，fixed
00:47:676 - Unneeded timing point 懶的刪了
00:48:006 (3) - NC here for consistency, remove NC for 00:50:643 (1) - Fixed
00:50:314 - ^ Fixed
00:55:918 - Suggest to put NC for every beat (in KIAI) Fixed
01:01:193 - ^ Fixed
01:11:742 (4) - ^ (and so on) Fixed
01:17:676 - Missing Finish （有点小声）Fixed
[Normal]
觉得AR4刚好，其他的设定也改下調了4了
00:11:083 (1) - 尽可能别贴00:08:446 (4) - : Fixed
00:11:742 (2) - 移去中间，X:256 Y:324，因为00:12:402 (3) - DS有点走了 Change a bit
00:17:017 (2) - ^ Fixed
01:17:676 - Missing Finish Fixed
[Hard]
AR6~ 這個就不變了，還OK
01:14:380 (1) - Suggest 1.0x DS,same like other triplets Fixed
[Insane]
00:01:852 (6) - 仔细听，这个尾在1/12，00:01:907 - Fixed
00:04:599 - Extra sound, maybe can silence it (5%) 這邊換了note
00:11:083 (1) - 1/12，不然直接放圈圈吧，跟后面的节奏比较合好，放一個note
00:26:907 (1) - 尾巴没包好修了一點
00:28:226 (4) - ^ ^
00:36:138 (4) - DS有点怪，用1.4吧 Fixed
01:14:380 (1,2) - 包？好
01:17:676 (3) - Missing Finish Fixed
Good luck! Thx for mod ~ !
~(=^･ω･^)/｡･:*:･ﾟ★，｡･:*:･ﾟ☆

KaedekaShizuru

KaedekaShizuru wrote:
爷爷四个insane 要死人了要死了要死了
[General]
关于KIAI的问题上面已经提到了不过我觉得有点两难其實蠻簡單

[Insane]
01:26:907 (1) - 出于对称考虑摆中间不太好吧不動

[Hard]
只提一点
我觉得前半段whistle用的太集中了而finish替换在3白线感觉不太好會嗎，覺得不錯呢

美丽 Thx for mod !

-Google-

-Google- wrote:
Requested in-game
~~我来加SP~~ LOL
General

Should add Amamiya Yuko and skystar to tags I think Added
[Easy]

AR3就够了吧... 調低到了AR2.5
00:22:292 (2,3) - 不太好看，把3逆时针转转然后变往左上的flow? 好
00:29:544 (3,1) - blanket 暈了，怎麼好多個都挑這兒包不好，修了一些
00:45:369 (2) - 1grid down 1grid right 好
00:48:665 (4,1) - 强迫症看到这种超难受Q_Q为何不用SV1.12啦不換，為何要換SV1.12，有什麼涵義? 而且這個時間點選錯了吧
00:50:643 (1) - blanket 好
01:21:632 (3,1,2) - easy这么玩逆flow不太好的感觉 Fixed
[Normal]

00:16:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 复制粘贴好歹Ctrl+H一下吧/.\还能符合DS(别忘了后边也要Ctrl+H) Good,fixed
00:42:731 (1,2) - blanket 這邊沒要做
01:07:127 (2,3) - 改成和01:03:830 (1,2,3) - 一样的1/2 1/2 1/2滑条节奏？現在的比較好
01:14:380 (1,2) - 改成折返和1/2 slider? 改成折返了
[Hard]

01:23:610 (1,2,3) - 尾杀不好玩Q_Q 這還好阿，放這樣是為了增加diff star數
[Insane]

00:01:852 (6) - 1/12..还不如不跟这个音。。沒關係先保持
00:03:665 (3) - overmap ;w; 建议删了之前刪了
00:04:490 (7) - 1/12 換了note
00:11:083 (1) - ^ ^
我觉得一开始星爷和mtb那种简单的感觉就不错了，可以参考下好，會參考
那几个1/12跟起来有点难- -实在想跟可以大概可以用音效(? 也許可以
00:30:533 (4) - 改成note? 再換成note的話，滑條就少了。。
01:01:523 (2,3) - 感觉间距有点大了低bpm還行
祝早日rank~~ Thx for mod !

Flask

Flask wrote:
來啦

[General]
ArtistUnicode: 雨宮天 中間沒有空格有空格，skyreach那張是空一格
Tag少了星爺ID 給每個難度都加了
[Insane]
01:05:808 (7,8) - 第一次讀的時後突然spacing變小讓我差點按錯建議你(8,9)掉換位置 Fixed
[Hard]
00:46:687 (3,4,1) - 柑橘可以等距 (跳) 改了一點
~~

Will finish mod reply soon!
To Gder : 加了星爺標籤和audio lead-in 數字所以有update情況，直接更新就好

Last edited by smallboat 2014-11-11T07:04:23+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-11-11T03:02:51+00:00

@yy那个spacing修了
@rakuen removed the triplet and changed to slider. didn't add finish since that's too noisy
@静流没加kick，想简单的pattern，三连删了
@谷谷全改了
@F酱全改了除了间距找不到好位置，以后我会注意spacing的
@Yuzu-

Yuzu- wrote:
owo/

You should really get your timing checked out.

Oracle's Insane

00:14:050 (2) - I can't quite hear the sound this note's snapped to. Not sure what you'd want to do but a slider at 00:13:720 ending at 00:14:380 doesn't look bad at all to me there's a relatively weak sound on background and i was following it
00:19:077 (1,2) - the issue with these 2 notes is that the first one doesn't seem quite matching to the music. If timing problems do arise, well. Anyway, the second one is also not really snapped to any note from what I can tell. this tiny 00:18:665 (7,1,2) section feels a bit overmapped in general because of these 2 circles so I'd advise a change. yeah, did something
00:22:621 (5) - the head also has no sound snapped to it, I'd advise to replace 00:22:292 (4) - with a circle and a 1/2 slider that starts at 00:22:457 and ends at 00:22:786. it's mapped to "u" in japanese
00:38:775 (3) - it's not like you have to change this, and i get the slider is following the vocals but you could as easily end it at 00:39:105 and place a circle at 00:39:270, just to fill the red tick which has a sound i prefer my current one, don't feel like using a lot of stuff like t his
00:47:676 - eh, maybe you could make this a circle and shorten the slider by 1/4, this sound is pretty strong and the 1/4 tick is also a piano key so it fits better. also change NC to the new circle if you choose to do so. T_T
00:58:226 (3) - NC here instead of 00:58:555 (1) for consistency with last part That NC was for readability improvement on jumps~

thank you very much for modding!!

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jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2014-11-15T07:14:40+00:00

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[General]
bg dimension is off by 1 pixel, not something you have to fix but its for the better if you do
soft-hitnormals are too soft, I've used the same hitnormal and ended up getting an unrank over it. You might want to bump the volume a bit. http://puu.sh/cRol1.wav
soft-hitclap4 has a 20ms delay, which is very noticeable when playing. I removed the delay but make sure you check over the other hitsounds as well. http://puu.sh/cRpbs.wav

[Easy]
you might want to clean up some unused green lines in this
00:08:452 (3) - curving it like this would flow much better:

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01:02:518 (2,3,1,2) - the flow here can be smoother
01:14:386 (1,2,1) - not a fan of this kind of setup, would be better if you arranged it like this:

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[Normal]
00:26:913 (8) - NC here instead of 00:27:243 (1)
00:37:463 (1,2,3,4) - these are curved a bit too much, makes the blanket look less appealing. See if you can fix it (ideal curve is something like 00:41:089 (3))
00:52:957 - i imagined a circle here, leads better into the kiai imo
01:24:605 (4) - try x:140 y:144

[Hard]
00:35:485 (2) - see if you can lower this a bit, its overlapping the score and progress pie chart
00:52:627 (3) - how bout a 1/4 repeat slider here, it leads into the 1/4 patterns in the kiai better
01:19:001 (2,3,4,1) - the flow here is a little awkward, i would bend 01:19:660 (1) more upward

[Insane]
00:41:968 (6) - snapped incorrectly, should be at 00:41:996
00:42:078 (1) - why is there a NC on this lol, also i would use two 1/4 sliders here
00:52:463 (2) - when i first played this, i thought this would be a short kick slider, didnt expect it to have more repeats. To avoid confusion you can use two circles followed by a short kick slider:

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01:26:583 (6,1) - to not ruin the symmetry here, you can place 01:26:583 (6) at where 01:24:276 (1) was and use a vertical slider for 01:26:913 (1)

[Oracle's Insane]
00:18:671 (7,1) - i'm not kidding when i say i've played this pattern 5 times and never got a 300 on the circle. This simply will not work as people wont expect a circle snapped 55ms after a slider. You are better off using a short slider here and replace 00:18:671 (7) with a circle.
00:36:803 (1) - missing a clap?
00:41:968 (6) - snap to 00:41:996
00:50:749 - unsnapped green line, snap to 00:50:759
00:52:518 (4) - snap to 00:52:545
01:12:627 (4) - to 01:12:655
01:19:331 (2,3,1) - did you curve this intentionally? i expected a straight flow here based on how you handled previous patterns

[Yuki's Insane]
00:11:089 - there seems to be a lack of hitsounds in this section, i strongly recommend using whistles to accent the piano like the other Insanes
00:19:496 - how bout a circle here to capture the vocals?
00:41:968 (6) - snap to 00:41:996
00:52:682 (2) - snap to 00:52:710

[Skystar's lol]
you are probably gonna have to change the diff name, we all know what will happen if you got through with this name...
basically all the 1/8s are unsnapped, please go through and resnap all of them
01:13:726 (1) - maybe its just me but i always had trouble hitting this one, it would flow a lot better if you moved it to x:212 y:348
01:22:298 (1,2,3,4) - the overmap is way too obvious here with the loud hitsounds, you might want to silence the slider ends

i will check over the mapset again after you fix all the unsnapped stuff (what happens when you resnap all notes in 1/12 xD)

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