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T.M.Revolution x Mizuki Nana - Preserved Roses

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Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Xinely
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 03 Desember 2014 at 16:16:05

Artist: T.M.Revolution x Mizuki Nana
Title: Preserved Roses
Source: 革命機ヴァルヴレイヴ
Tags: Kakumeiki Valvrave the Liberator opening P_A_N pan koreapenguin
BPM: 167
Filesize: 6128kb
Play Time: 03:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab Hard (3,36 stars, 515 notes)
  2. Collab Insane (4,58 stars, 809 notes)
  3. Normal (1,92 stars, 289 notes)
Download: T.M.Revolution x Mizuki Nana - Preserved Roses
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my 20th beatmap o.o
yeah this song is awesome <3

Mapset :
~ Normal : me (Done)
~ Collab Hard : me and PAN (Done)
~ Insane : me and koreapenguin (Done)

Redownload if you download before 10/31/2014 16:50 (GMT+7), added stuff

Ready for mods ~

Note : red combo colours on Insane diff supposed to mark faster sliders
Last edited by Xinely , edited 19 times in total.
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
Use the mp3 + timing from this mapset https://osu.ppy.sh/b/292396
Your current mp3 has a weird cut before the kiai (so you need the second timing point), the break is incredibly long ;w;
Also, the current timing is really off, the first timing point would need around +40 o:

Good luck! o3o
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Xinely
i'm fucking bad at timing lol
used your offset

for mp3 i guess i wont change since i mapped the full version and flask version is tv size

thank you despe o/
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
Omg I failed... xD
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin
EDIT :3 2014-10-30 DONE!!!!!!! GO GO Xinely >~</

Let's Go!
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DONE!
Owntrolf
546 posts
Joined December 2013
Owntrolf
Goddammit I clicked a comment and destroyed all my mods :d *I put less effort into looking for problems in Hard because I just realized that I didnt follow your topic rules, pending only qq

Collab Insane
00:22:853 (3) - Could look more symmetrical
00:43:512 (4,1) - Could blanket better
01:33:452 (3,4,5) - I dont think the 2+slider flits, It should probably just be 3 1/2 circles
01:33:991 (6,1,2) - 1/2 sliders
01:36:147 (3,4,5) - Similar things here
02:05:428 (5) - Change to 2 circles
02:05:787 (6,7) - Change into 1/2 sliders
02:17:284 (1,2) - ^
02:49:979 (5) - Could change into a triplet and a circle after

Some parts feel strange because some parts feel overmapped and or sliders are at the ending of words instead of the start of words


Collab Hard
Reenable widescreen support
00:10:638 (1,2,3) - Maybe change 1 into a 1/2 repeat slider and then change 2 into 2 circles and 3 into a 1/2 slider
00:24:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think the combo might be a bit long
01:51:416 (1,2) - Could blanket a little bit better

Im lazy

Normal seems fine
Last edited by Owntrolf , edited 5 times in total.
Sellenite
1,092 posts
Joined September 2013
Sellenite
[Collab Insane]
xinely
  1. 00:40:638 (5,6) - ctrl+g?better flow imo
  2. 00:45:308 (1) - slider head also add finish，so hot！
  3. 01:20:338 add a circle，here shouldnt have empty rhythm，perhaps on 476,177
penguin
  1. 01:49:979 (1) - slider head also add finish
  2. 02:29:141 (3) - ctrl+g?more challenge and continue triangle jump make the flow better
[Collab Hard]
pan
  1. 00:24:290 add a circle here，you follow the electricity but here empty make the rhythm a bit wired,perhaps on 0,221
  2. 00:26:626 (6) - nc？
  3. 00:45:308 add finish
  4. 02:31:656 (1) - make it end at 02:34:530 lol
  5. 03:09:738 (2) - blanket?461,310
  6. 03:14:947 (8,1) - switch nc
  7. 03:25:007 silence the spinner end sound more good imo
xinely
  1. 01:19:710 add a circle to make triplets,here the voice deserve it
  2. 01:49:979 add finish
  3. 01:20:338 like my word in insane
  4. 01:51:955 (2) - blanket
  5. 03:01:833 circle，you follow the voice here
[Normal]
  1. 02:18:003 (3) - slider end use normal additions
  2. 02:18:722 (1) - blanket
beautiful
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
Hi Xinely, P A N, and KP, m4m :D

[Normal]
  1. 00:33:452 (6,2) - You should be able to fully stack these for neatness.
  2. 02:12:973 (1) - Maybe move this a bit lower so it matches the curve of the previous objects.
[Hard]
  1. 01:06:865 (1,2,3) - Kinda nazi but try to make the spacing between them appear the same.
  2. 01:40:997 (3,1) - Blanket is off, move middle point to 128, 376 and end point to 200, 320
  3. 01:51:416 (1,2) - This blanket's off by a lot more
  4. 02:49:979 (4) - I think this looks a little better:
    SPOILER
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's easier to play the stream and have the 1/4 sliders after, plus it usually feels like having the 1/4 sliders come after helps build up with the music.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:43:512 (4,1) - Might as well blanket these to be neater.
  3. 00:51:416 (2,3,4) - These don't seem exactly lined up.
  4. 01:06:686 (6) - Since 01:06:686 (6,1) - plays a little awkwardly right now, try moving (6) to here so the pattern flows better.
    SPOILER
  5. 01:20:518 (2,3) - It would look better and more consistent if you had both of them curved the same amount, maybe by using copy/paste+rotate or just eyeballing it.
  6. 01:37:404 (2,3,1) - Yeah this is kind of questionable. Fully stacking 01:37:674 (3,1) - would eliminate the confusion caused by the change in direction while playing that pattern.
  7. 01:40:638 (3,4,5,6) - Also plays kind of awkwardly. I'm guessing this is koreapenguin's part (i've seen a similar pattern in another map)? The direction of the 1/4 sliders just don't agree with how the pattern is played. Try this which plays better and creates a jump at 01:40:997 (5,6) - that fits the vocals.
    SPOILER
    [img]01:40:638%20(3,4,5,6)%20-[/img]
  8. 02:08:482 (6,1) - This 1/4 jump doesn't fit the music well and seems a bit big; I think it's too hard to hit without getting a 100 from missing the last slider tick.
  9. 02:18:362 (1,2,1) - I'd decrease the spacing here too so they at least touch. All your other 1/4 circles between two sliders overlap, so this one could be mistaken for 1/2. You want to keep it consistent.
  10. 03:17:283 (5,6,7) - Try swapping the locations of 03:17:283 (5,7) - and 03:17:462 (6) - because the strong notes are 03:17:283 (5,1) - so you want bigger spacing before them. It also flows somewhat better this way.
    SPOILER
Normal and Hard are very clean, so I have these suggestions for the insane. Nice map!
Sakaue Nachi
558 posts
Joined September 2012
Sakaue Nachi
Hi, Xinely m4m from your queue :)

[Normal]
CS3.3 should be fine for the spread
00:05:787 (3) - NC here?
00:32:195 (3) - try this rhythm? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196023 or you can use the same rhythm as 00:37:763 (2,3,4,5) -
01:09:380 (3,1) - can try to make a blanket
02:03:632 (1) - add finish at the head sounds good, and lower the volume
02:07:045 (6) - a little off, move to (121,84) will look better
02:08:662 (2,3) - can improve this blanket
03:12:073 (1,2) - try to make it like 03:06:325 (1,2) - just move the tail a little up
03:12:612 (2,4) - can make a blanket

[Collab Hard]
00:09:201 (4) - keep the same ds between 00:08:662 (3,1) - because you do so at 00:14:410 (3,1) - or you can stack at 00:09:380 (1) - ?
00:21:955 (5,1) - looks not good, can use higher ds,1.0x will be fine etc.
00:23:752 the sound here should not be ignore can try this rhythm ,00:23:572 (5,6) - just ctrl+g
00:38:482 (2,5) - maybe can try to stack
01:12:614 (1) - nearly touch the hp bar, can move a bit down
01:19:710 add a circle here? because there's voice here
01:49:979 (1) - move a bit up, nearly offscreen
01:51:416 (1,2) - blanket a little off,try to improve it
02:31:656 (1) - end at 02:34:530 would be better imo

[Collab Insane]
00:02:913 (4,1) - try to stack this, will look better
00:11:177 (2,3) - ctrl+g flow will be better imo
00:15:129 (1) - this slider use lower sv will fit the music more,and 00:15:488 (2) - change to 1/2 slider with higher sv
00:30:039 (3,1) - stack it properly 00:30:937 (1) - (325,248)
00:46:027 (4,1) - can try to improve the blanket
00:51:416 (2,3,4) - looks not good, make it on the same line like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196158
01:17:284 (2) - move to (208 ,284) jump here may fit the music more
01:20:338 try fill something here? example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196179
01:21:596 (2) - make it like this, because the arrow can't be seen clearly https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196188
01:33:542 (4) - delete, triple start at white tick not good
01:50:787 (5) - move to 01:50:967
02:26:087 (2) - try move to(148,224)
02:43:422 add a circle?
02:43:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - try this rhythm, I think the two hits not fit here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196208
02:58:959 (4) - I'm doubtful with this ,maybe a circle is OK

Good map, that's all
byfar
1,186 posts
Joined July 2014
byfar
[Insane]

03:17:642 (7) - really really do not like this overlap
01:37:674 (3) - flow could be better here

beautiful map. don't even know what else to comment on.

anyways for m4m:
1:24 duration
t/255150
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
maybe m4m? lol

[Collab Insane]

  • Xinely
  1. 00:08:482 - will u consider adding a note here? itll just make the rhythm connect better
  2. 00:21:955 (3) - you could make a slight jump here just to follow up with the previous kickslider jumps. so the motion doesn't stop too abruptly. (maybe even nc owo)
  3. 00:12:793 (3,4,5) - lol am i the only one that think this looks a bit weird? maybe make it linear or w/e (or maybe im just weird) nazi suggestion so w/e
  4. 00:53:931 (1,2) - a very nazi blanket improvement thing (you can consider using 2 slider nodes instead)
  5. 00:59:320 (1) - hm imo would be more interesting if you did ctrl g here owo?
  6. 01:25:907 (2) - err should there be nc here? just to follow up with the following patterns
  7. 02:43:063 - there should be a note here maybe?
  8. 02:50:338 - get rid of one repeat and add a circle here? people are generally more used to playing repeats in groups of 4 1/4s rather than 5
  9. 02:54:110 - not too sure if this offset reset is necessary o-o its just a single buildup part towards the kiai. not really an entire section.

    KP
  10. 01:25:907 (2) - this pattern kinda hard for an insane, a bit hard to read.
  11. 02:04:351 (1,1) - uh just my opinion. this looks better lol
    SPOILER
  12. 03:11:713 (3) - consider nc? it just looks nicer with the previous slider pattern.
  13. 03:12:612 (1,2) - such a large jump not that necessary imo D:
[Collab Hard]

  • PAN
  1. 00:23:752 - kinda weird to skip this downbeat :/
  2. 00:44:590 (5,6) - maybe just copy paste one of the sliders?
  3. 00:46:746 (3,4) - blanket could really be better
  4. 02:31:296 (5) - sounds better to me if you extend this to the next blue tick o-o
  5. 02:31:656 (1) - why not end this spinner at the strong beat at 02:34:530 - ?

    Xinely
  6. 00:57:793 (4,5,6) - a jump after a triplet is kinda harsh.
  7. 02:06:326 (3) - uh maybe center the circle in the sliders? looks better imo lol
    SPOILER
  8. 02:06:506 (4,5) - also maybe just copy paste one of these sliders and ctrl hj
    02:56:984 (4,5) - ^
[Normal colla- wait what?!]
  1. 00:18:722 (2,3) - how bout use 1/2 sliders instead to get that bass beat before the finish?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:52:853 (4) - that one slider point is off grid, not sure if that effects anything important. but this may be off screen to ppl who don't use widescreen
  3. 01:14:590 - map this out as you did before?
    SPOILER
    or something similar.
  4. 01:44:231 (1,2,3) - wait what? is it just me or does the ds look messed up
  5. 02:18:722 (1,2) - nazi blanket
  6. 02:27:344 (1,2) - make them parallel or something? other wise could you make them more different? looks kinda awkward like this lol.
  7. 02:46:027 (1) - i think 3/2 fits better here
  8. 03:22:133 (1) - i think the vocals actually end slightly before the spinner ends so the whistle sounds delayed lol.
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Xinely

Owntrolf wrote:

Goddammit I clicked a comment and destroyed all my mods :d *I put less effort into looking for problems in Hard because I just realized that I didnt follow your topic rules, pending only qq

Collab Insane
00:22:853 (3) - Could look more symmetrical symmetry already :C
00:43:512 (4,1) - Could blanket better
02:49:979 (5) - Could change into a triplet and a circle after

Some parts feel strange because some parts feel overmapped and or sliders are at the ending of words instead of the start of words


Collab Hard
Reenable widescreen support
00:10:638 (1,2,3) - Maybe change 1 into a 1/2 repeat slider and then change 2 into 2 circles and 3 into a 1/2 slider nope, i feel this rhythms fit the best
01:51:416 (1,2) - Could blanket a little bit better yep

Im lazy

Normal seems fine

Sellenite wrote:

[Collab Insane]
xinely
  1. 00:40:638 (5,6) - ctrl+g?better flow imo the jump becomes too forced
  2. 00:45:308 (1) - slider head also add finish，so hot！hmm music is not really loud, whistle feels better imo
  3. 01:20:338 add a circle，here shouldnt have empty rhythm，perhaps on 476,177
[Collab Hard]

xinely
  1. 01:19:710 add a circle to make triplets,here the voice deserve it i know but we keep to use less 1/4 for spread here
  2. 01:49:979 add finish same as Insane
  3. 01:20:338 like my word in insane we need a break for Hard. too long rhythms lol
  4. 01:51:955 (2) - blanket
  5. 03:01:833 circle，you follow the voice here same as last reply ^^
[Normal]
  1. 02:18:003 (3) - slider end use normal additions
  2. 02:18:722 (1) - blanket fixed both
beautiful

xxdeathx wrote:

Hi Xinely, P A N, and KP, m4m :D

[Normal]
  1. 00:33:452 (6,2) - You should be able to fully stack these for neatness.
  2. 02:12:973 (1) - Maybe move this a bit lower so it matches the curve of the previous objects. fixed both
[Hard]
  1. 01:51:416 (1,2) - This blanket's off by a lot more
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's easier to play the stream and have the 1/4 sliders after, plus it usually feels like having the 1/4 sliders come after helps build up with the music. epic Screenshot bro lol, well tbh i dont want to make hard streams too. spread..
    SPOILER
  2. 00:43:512 (4,1) - Might as well blanket these to be neater.
  3. 00:51:416 (2,3,4) - These don't seem exactly lined up.
  4. 01:06:686 (6) - Since 01:06:686 (6,1) - plays a little awkwardly right now, try moving (6) to here so the pattern flows better. hmm let me keep mine first since im totally fine with this
    SPOILER
  5. 01:20:518 (2,3) - It would look better and more consistent if you had both of them curved the same amount, maybe by using copy/paste+rotate or just eyeballing it.
Normal and Hard are very clean, so I have these suggestions for the insane. Nice map!

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

Hi, Xinely m4m from your queue :)

[Normal]
CS3.3 should be fine for the spread i keep CS 3 since this Normal is easiest diff here
00:05:787 (3) - NC here? it makes sense, fixed
00:32:195 (3) - try this rhythm? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196023 or you can use the same rhythm as 00:37:763 (2,3,4,5) - i want variation here, sorry ><
01:09:380 (3,1) - can try to make a blanket nice idea, fixed
02:03:632 (1) - add finish at the head sounds good, and lower the volume aa no hitsound before kiai time is my hitsound style lol
02:07:045 (6) - a little off, move to (121,84) will look better ok
02:08:662 (2,3) - can improve this blanket done
03:12:073 (1,2) - try to make it like 03:06:325 (1,2) - just move the tail a little up ok
03:12:612 (2,4) - can make a blanket aaa i keep the design here by (4) between of (2) and (3)

[Collab Hard]
00:09:201 (4) - keep the same ds between 00:08:662 (3,1) - because you do so at 00:14:410 (3,1) - or you can stack at 00:09:380 (1) - ? jump for stanza
00:38:482 (2,5) - maybe can try to stack yep but i dont have any idea orz
01:12:614 (1) - nearly touch the hp bar, can move a bit down
01:19:710 add a circle here? because there's voice here ok much modders said this one, fixed
01:49:979 (1) - move a bit up, nearly offscreen but not offscreen so fine
02:31:656 (1) - end at 02:34:530 would be better imo already end there

[Collab Insane]
00:02:913 (4,1) - try to stack this, will look better impossible here lol
00:11:177 (2,3) - ctrl+g flow will be better imo
00:15:129 (1) - this slider use lower sv will fit the music more,and 00:15:488 (2) - change to 1/2 slider with higher sv keep SV since the music is dissapearing here
00:30:039 (3,1) - stack it properly 00:30:937 (1) - (325,248)
00:46:027 (4,1) - can try to improve the blanket
00:51:416 (2,3,4) - looks not good, make it on the same line like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196158
01:17:284 (2) - move to (208 ,284) jump here may fit the music more hmm i would like to keep normal spacing. i dont like jumps too much lol
01:20:338 try fill something here? example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196179
01:21:596 (2) - make it like this, because the arrow can't be seen clearly https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196188
02:43:422 add a circle? wanna make a mini jump for drum
02:43:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - try this rhythm, I think the two hits not fit here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2196208 wanna something different rhythms, too boring with triplet triplet and triplet
02:58:959 (4) - I'm doubtful with this ,maybe a circle is OK totally fine

Good map, that's all

Kibbleru wrote:

maybe m4m? lol

[Collab Insane]

  • Xinely
  1. 00:08:482 - will u consider adding a note here? itll just make the rhythm connect better hope, calm part needs something break and i feel 1/1 better here
  2. 00:21:955 (3) - you could make a slight jump here just to follow up with the previous kickslider jumps. so the motion doesn't stop too abruptly. (maybe even nc owo) hmm readable clearly so i guess fine
  3. 00:12:793 (3,4,5) - lol am i the only one that think this looks a bit weird? maybe make it linear or w/e (or maybe im just weird) nazi suggestion so w/e
  4. 00:53:931 (1,2) - a very nazi blanket improvement thing (you can consider using 2 slider nodes instead)
  5. 00:59:320 (1) - hm imo would be more interesting if you did ctrl g here owo? firstly thought kinda harsh but KP did same like that so ctrl+Ged
  6. 01:25:907 (2) - err should there be nc here? just to follow up with the following patterns let me keep since.. still.. how to explain lol
  7. 02:43:063 - there should be a note here maybe? i want make a mini jump for stanza, also having stream in stanza but that's not first circle kinda bad for me
  8. 02:50:338 - get rid of one repeat and add a circle here? people are generally more used to playing repeats in groups of 4 1/4s rather than 5 yup
  9. 02:54:110 - not too sure if this offset reset is necessary o-o its just a single buildup part towards the kiai. not really an entire section. lol usually i timing with trying change offset, forget to remove this one

    [Collab Hard]

    Xinely
  10. 00:57:793 (4,5,6) - a jump after a triplet is kinda harsh.
  11. 02:06:326 (3) - uh maybe center the circle in the sliders? looks better imo lol
    SPOILER
  12. 02:06:506 (4,5) - also maybe just copy paste one of these sliders and ctrl hj
    02:56:984 (4,5) - ^ already did one o.o
[Normal colla- wait what?!] just Normalllll
  1. 00:18:722 (2,3) - how bout use 1/2 sliders instead to get that bass beat before the finish? but i want clickable for emphasize the finish ><
    SPOILER
  2. 00:52:853 (4) - that one slider point is off grid, not sure if that effects anything important. but this may be off screen to ppl who don't use widescreen my resolution always 4:3 and i dont find offscreen here
  3. 01:14:590 - map this out as you did before? ok
    SPOILER
    or something similar.
  4. 01:44:231 (1,2,3) - wait what? is it just me or does the ds look messed up still 0,8x here o.o
  5. 02:18:722 (1,2) - nazi blanket fixed in previous lol
  6. 02:27:344 (1,2) - make them parallel or something? other wise could you make them more different? looks kinda awkward like this lol. ok lol
  7. 02:46:027 (1) - i think 3/2 fits better here right
  8. 03:22:133 (1) - i think the vocals actually end slightly before the spinner ends so the whistle sounds delayed lol.lol but let me keep this one since i feel empty w/o hitsound here
thanks all for mods and sorry late. busy.. checked Normal only here. rest will be done soon Done
no reply = fixed

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koreapenguin
omg, late sorry ; ^ ; also i can't reply to theirs mod orz my english is so poor

Del my parts on your map and just copy them :3
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Len
2,812 posts
Joined June 2012
Len
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XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
Hi Xinely. Time to mod your map :D

Normal

  1. 00:09:380 (1) I know that this slider is following vocals properly, but it feels a bit bad for me since it's ignoring a Clap that should be at 00:09:740.
  2. 00:29:500 (3) What about to move this slider to x:292 y:68?. It gives a better flow with previous slider
  3. 02:47:464 (2) Could be better if you move this circle to x:272 y:180. Plays better , at least for me
  4. 02:51:775 (1) I can hear a little strong beat at here, so I suggest you to use a Finish at the beginning of this slider
Collab Hard

  1. 00:02:195 (1,2) The jump between these objects feels a bit weird imo since the music doesn't need it. So, It could be better if you use the consistent spacing
  2. 00:07:763 (x) Are there any reason to ignore vocals at here?. I feel that a circle here is necessary
  3. 00:12:255 (1,2) Similar than 00:02:195 (1,2) , the jump is a bit unnecessary. But If you don't want to change it ,it's okay
  4. 02:21:596 This combo feels a bit long compared at the rest of combos, I thnk you could add a NC at 02:23:392 (6)
Collab Insane

  1. 00:15:488 (2) The clap here is not needed because of your hitsounds pattern :P
  2. 00:30:308 (4) Maybe you want to something a bit overmapped but this note plays totally uncomfortable. I suggest you to delete this note for a better gameplay
  3. 01:01:835 (3,4,5) If you hear properly this part , you'll notice than there is a 1/8 rythm and not a 1/4 (current one). So, maybe you could replace this triplet for a slider like 01:03:811 (4)
  4. 01:05:069 (1) This speed up plays a bit weird imo, since you was using this kind of velocity when there was a CLAP sound (00:11:895 (1) - 00:24:829 (1) . . ) or a strong beat (02:15:847 (1) ).
That's all for me, It's a good beatmap. Good luck with the ranking! :)
CSLM
1,058 posts
Joined May 2013
CSLM
hi! m4m from your queue
[General]
why you don't start the 2nd timing point in 02:54:111 - better? in this position look better imo because make more emphasis for the vocal

[Normal]
00:05:787 (1) - i don't think really necesary the NC
01:09:380 (3,1) - improve blanket
01:13:871 (4) - delete note. i don't feel appropiated a note there
02:46:027 (1) - move the curve point to: x400 y196. Looks better in that position imo
02:57:522 (5) - delete note, i don't feel appropiated

[Hard]
00:02:195 (1,2) - why this spacing difference? is strange, plzz fix
00:30:757 (1) - move curve point to: x72 y140
01:49:979 (1) - this slider move it a little bit up, is outing of the screen
i love the pan parts, the only thing are the overlaps of 3/4 rhythm, i suggest what make a stack in all of them

[insane]
01:19:440 (1) - move curve point to: x204 y88, look better imo

the map and song are great, i wish could make a gd :(
this mapste are practicaly ranked, but good luck :3
here is my map (i don't wanna what you make me the mod now, i'll tell you when you will mod my map :)): https://osu.ppy.sh/s/142614
choo choo~
edit: shoot~
byfar
1,186 posts
Joined July 2014
byfar
Hi Xinely, I'm back for full mod (and my map is in pending now with full diff spread!!)

for m4m:: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/228745
only mod tsumi's extra, insane, and normal please

[normal]
00:09:380 (1) - i think you should change shape or something, because i feel like this place doesnt fit in with flow

[Collab Hard]
01:12:434 (4,1) - i find this spacing a bit uncomfortable
[Collab Insane]

00:57:344 (4,1,1,1) - sliders not straight? feels weird if its intended.
01:12:614 (1) - better blanket with 01:12:973 (2) -
heres how it currently looks like: http://i.imgur.com/JNBxxoa.png
01:13:332 (3,4,5) - to y 340 (better flow with previous slider)
01:26:626 (1,2,1) - this flows weirdly
01:40:638 (3,4) - ^

good work!!
Julie
1,416 posts
Joined March 2013
Julie
[Normal]
00:04:350 (2) - *Sugestion* could make something nice with slider because of this sound 00:04:710 , instead of a plain nearly normal slider, maybe a slider like what you did here 00:35:249 (3) ? :D!!!
01:22:674 (1) - move the 1st red point to x:432 y:104 for this 01:22:853 and this 01:23:931 sound


[Hard]
00:19:440 (4) - slider end replace clap by whistle
01:47:823 (3,4) - slider instead of 2 circles to match the voice on this part 01:47:105 (1,2,3,4,5)
02:08:662 (1) - no sound on blue stick
02:25:189 (2) - remove addition normal on the head of slider
02:25:907 (4) - addition normal whistle for this one? on the head and end :D
02:46:566 (2) and 02:48:003 (5) - remove whistle

[Insane]
00:00:758 (1) - add clap on begining slider with it?
00:03:272 (6) - shouldn't reverse slider start here 00:03:452 ? It feel kinda overmap, since no 1/8 before that and 00:03:272 this part should be tappable :D
00:08:841 - whistle
00:09:021 (3,4,1) - same spacing
00:09:919 (2) - whistle at the end of slider instead of the begining? same sound as the begining slider of this 00:09:380 (1)
00:16:835 (8) - add whistle
00:17:284 (2) - add some clap like this one 00:17:644 (1) ? :D! additionnal normal clap at this point 00:17:374 , and maybe soft clap at this point 00:17:284
00:18:542 (3) and 00:19:260 (6) - no hitsound? xD
00:36:506 (1) - change a bit the shape of slider so the red point on the slider fit the white tick? like most of you previous slider, like this one 00:32:195 (1) and this 00:22:853 (3) I really loved those ones :D!! fun to play, match the rythmn without pressing :3
00:54:829 (3) - 1/8 reverse slider? shouldn't change pattern much~
01:35:428 (1) - add clap at the end of slider
01:39:560 (8,9,1) - same spacing?
01:59:500 (4) - 1/8 reverse slider? shouldn't change pattern much~
02:01:476 , 02:01:835 , 02:02:195 - useless green lines~
02:14:769 (3) - add finish
02:42:793 (4) - add finish on the begining of slider
02:54:469 (2) - not fully snapped (AI mod)
03:05:965 (5) - whistle?

I'm going to post that here for the moment, I'm not done with normal yet, I'm getting yell to go to sleep ;w;...
So posting to show I'm actually focusing on modding this >,<
When I'm done, I'm going to post my map

EDIT : Done~~ Nice mappu~ :3!! GL :D
m4m map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/219944 (Wonder if is ok if I request mod for both std and ctb, is all tv size >,<) thanks a lots >///<
Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
haai m4m from ur queue

[General]
ur bookmarks are unsnapped but i have no idea if that really matters or not lol.

There's a letterbox in the Hard but nothing in the other 2 diffs
hard
insane
[Normal]
00:07:045 (2,3) - blanket is off by 2 pixels but still off -3-
00:09:380 (1) - i think its better for u to keep ur rhythms consistent, like what u did with 00:06:506 (1,2) - and 00:12:255 (1,2) -
00:16:925 (4) - move it down a bit and tilt it up, to have better spacing with 00:15:129 (1) - (looks better imo) and it doesnt touch the bar so dw c:
00:19:799 (4) - do u have some drum hitsound u can put on these? sound empty with these whistles
00:21:596 (2,1) - move it right a bit to stack with 00:19:799 (4) - ?
00:32:195 (3) - dont really need this tbh, instead i think you should complicate the rhythms at 00:35:249 (3) - a little more
00:54:290 (2,3) - blanket
01:11:177 (1) - curve it more so u can blanket?
01:18:362 (3) - why not curve it down slightly instead? you didnt really blanket and i think this gives the flow a nice twist
01:19:081 (4) - blanket s:
01:39:920 (3) - same as 00:35:249 (3) -
01:45:668 (3) - off by 2 pixels again aaaaa
01:58:961 (2) - is this supposed to blanket 4? if so its really off s:
02:02:195 (2,3) - this stacking is really tricky imo, how about moving the combo down ? maybe something like this
02:07:225 (1) - 02:15:848 (1) - its the kiai no need for such simple rhythms imo o:
02:23:033 (4) - same as 01:18:362 (3) -, also move 02:23:752 (5) - down a bit for a triangle http://puu.sh/cSwO3/327423c767.jpg
02:24:470 (1) - blanket again
03:06:325 (1,2) - these 2 overlaps quite a lot, can u change it so its more like 03:09:199 (1,2) - where (1) only overlaps about half the sliderbody?
03:13:510 (3) - try this? http://puu.sh/cSx2b/c47d9b4344.jpg isnt a perf blanket but i think u did it on purpose

[Hard collab]
Tsundere// i-it's not like i modded this for you or anything... b-baka >////<
00:17:644 (3) - nc for sv change?
00:47:284 (4) - aaa pull out more for blanket
00:49:081 (2) - ^
01:41:177 (1) - omg blanket freak sorry ;w;
01:49:979 (1) - a finish on the beginning fits nicely imo
01:57:344 (5) - 02:00:039 (6) - nc
02:50:698 (3) - some small stuff but this curve is a bit much i like this one http://puu.sh/cSAh0/8170408443.jpg so 02:50:698 (3,4,5) - kinda goes slightly curved>curved>straight
03:17:822 (1,2,3,4) - Nice pattern :3
03:19:259 (1) - that little overlap kinda ugly s: overlap like half the slider pls http://puu.sh/cSAxJ/f8556e2efc.jpg
Xinely
00:36:506 (1) - not suitable for a reverse imo, maybe this
01:14:590 (2) - blanket
02:04:889 (2) - ^
02:57:343 (5) - maybe a jump here or sth o3o
03:01:833 - kinda an awk break since your note density is relative high earlier

[Insane collab]
i dont hear any 1/8's but it might be just me orz im tired sorryy T^T
Xinely:
00:12:793 (3,4,5) - sounds a lot better to me
00:21:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - speaking as a player, i'd realllly prefer it if the kicksliders were after the streams, it also allows for more jumps too
00:22:853 (3) - kinda hidden, and also there's a beat on 00:23:033 - which i think would be a good idea not to ignore it
00:30:308 (4,5,6) - make these a triple instead please ;w;
00:38:123 (8) - 0.5x spacing on this pls
00:49:081 (5) - 00:51:955 (5) - 00:52:674 (1) - 1/4 reverse is good enough tbh
01:02:554 (1) - looks like spacing can be a little bit further out
01:03:811 (4) - 1/4 kickslider plssss ;A;
01:05:428 (1) - your spacing is larger than ur others anyway, why not just make them not touch? and the overlap i think can look better if it doesnt go over the beg/end http://puu.sh/cSBqH/ac64ffb602.jpg
01:08:302 (1) - 01:13:961 (2,1) - (etc) spacing, make them the same please (cuz ur sv change so even tho DS is the same the actual spacing is different so make them consistent pls o:)
02:44:051 - missed out on a pretty big note here
02:44:500 - maybe here too, i'd do this instead
03:00:576 (1) - didn't i see this earlier ;w; well, same suggestion as above
kp kp kp kp kp kp kp kp kp
01:39:560 (8) - ;w;
01:40:638 (5) - follow vocals
02:11:535 (1,2) - why simplify rhythms so much?
02:14:769 (3) - 02:15:487 (7) - finish to be consistent with all the other diffs in the set
02:15:847 (1) - would be cool if this blanketed one of the notes in the stream??
02:17:284 (1) - so simple owo
02:20:517 (2) - 02:20:877 (4) - 02:21:237 (8) - finish same reason as above
02:31:565 (8) - nc here cuz u nc'd at the ending
03:06:863 (3) - ;A;


so many blankets so i stopped being annoying orz
good luck and have fuuuun c:
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  • sry i'm bad at modding normal...
    00:35:249 (3) - better be split into shorter sliders and notes.it covers so many voices.01:39:919 (3) - the same.
    01:00:578 - add note
    01:24:470 (2,3) - should be a circle followed by a slider.
    02:47:464 (2) - http://puu.sh/cUsj1/cce3b23a77.png
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