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DeletedUser_1574070
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年11月9日 at 3:15:22

Artist: sakuzyo
Title: AXION
Source: Cytus
Tags: BMS C82 NatsumeRin
BPM: 160
Filesize: 4422kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.29 stars, 90 notes)
  2. Expert (4.93 stars, 528 notes)
  3. Hard (3.37 stars, 348 notes)
  4. Normal (2 stars, 184 notes)
  5. Rin's Insane (4.75 stars, 543 notes)
Download: sakuzyo - AXION
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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elements mostly brought from Flower's mapset

Thanks NTR for dropping me a Insane diff

Help
Ar3sgice
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Kagamine Ren
Zweib
M o k o r i
toybot
sjoy
Modem
Sonnyc
No_Gu
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Mei
imoutosan
Okazaki Ushio
BeatofIke
Karia
Low
Charles445
CDFA
sionKotori
the best CS5 mapper of 2014
Akiyama Mizuki

sionKotori wrote:

the best CS5 mapper of 2014
yes
Cherry Blossom

sionKotori wrote:

the best CS5 mapper of 2014
LKs
so cool, this map contains so many information, about 3 times as many as an ordinary map :?
Reol

sionKotori wrote:

the best CS5 mapper of 2014
Liqh
Love the map
Gamu

sionKotori wrote:

the best CS5 mapper of 2014
caren_sk
mapping expert
Enon

sionKotori wrote:

the best CS5 mapper of 2014
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
you should add tag for ntr as the insane mapper
and i think it's too hard, needs a diff between hard and insane for normal people to play

Expert
00:50:275 - add note
01:05:650 (3) - better end at 01:06:025 -
01:11:650 (3) - ^
01:33:400 (1) - swap the position with 01:32:556 (3) -
01:56:837 (2) - this is so weird

Hard
00:42:212 (8) - this note feels uncomfortable remove this note
01:53:837 (4) - remove this note

Insane
00:21:400 (1) - move 1 grid left
00:50:275 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - candle
01:19:431 (5,6,7) - 123456788
01:21:775 (5,6,5,6) - stack 5 and 6
01:26:650 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ball ball

the map is nice, but since i have mapped this song before(?), i feel weird to some rhythm like 00:24:400 (7,1) - , 00:28:618 (3,4) - , 00:30:962 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - , 00:41:556 (4,5) - , 00:44:556 (4) - , 00:56:650 (1,2) -
maybe different people have different opinion on the music, o.o

also, although this seems to be the correct bg, rrt's map background looks better to fit in the music, and better for playing since the darkness style

so many people mapping this, good luck
Hollow Wings
as ur req

Expert

  1. 00:50:275 this beat can hardly be missed imo, just add a note at the head of 00:50:368 (3) - to stack it. if u care about the spacing then maybe just shorter that jump's ds a bit, thou anyway is fine to me if u do that changing.
  2. 01:47:650 some kind of similar as above, but not that strongly recommend to change.
  3. 01:57:306 (1,2) - i think ctrl+g is better to catch the rhythm coz the ds shfiting here, and anti-flow can give a feeling of emphasis that heavy beat better than what u did currently here imo.
  4. nothing to say, 2 stars to u.

Insane

  1. wtf i can't find anything?? i'm so noooooob... a star to u ;w;
  2. oops this is made by ntr lol

Hard

  1. 01:04:900 (4,1) - for all those 4 notes' patterns, maybe exchange nc setting here to follow the heavy beats... well i know what u r thinking to those patterns to keep them like symm, but maybe just consider a bit more.
other stuffs r fine to me

i call u supernova coz u start shining in 2014

good luck
Karen
m4m from my queue

[Easy]

  • 00:55:900 (2) - move a little right to blanket with 00:54:400 (1) -
    01:04:900 (1,1) - stack them well
    01:48:400 (3) - NC
[Normal]
nothing to say

[Hard]

  • 00:49:806 (7,1) - it's not easy to read,change the slider to 2 notes?
    01:24:400 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much overclap here
    01:39:025 (7) - add finish
[Insane]

  • 00:49:712 (6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this stream should be in an Extra ,too difficult
    00:56:650 (1,2) - stack well or keep the stream with the same distance
    01:31:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i thin you should increase the distances of them to follow the music
    01:53:650 (2) - add clap
[Expert]

  • 00:44:556 (4) - is this rankable? u have use the red point to change the slider's speed
    00:49:712 (1) - delete NC
    01:30:775 (5) - add clap
    01:39:306 (1) - finish sounds better
    01:55:900 (1) - add finish
can't say much about this diff.it's too difficult for me
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

you should add tag for ntr as the insane mapper
and i think it's too hard, needs a diff between hard and insane for normal people to play

Expert
00:50:275 - add note
01:05:650 (3) - better end at 01:06:025 -
01:11:650 (3) - ^
01:33:400 (1) - swap the position with 01:32:556 (3) -
01:56:837 (2) - this is so weird

Hard
00:42:212 (8) - this note feels uncomfortable remove this note
01:53:837 (4) - remove this note

Insane
00:21:400 (1) - move 1 grid left
00:50:275 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - candle
01:19:431 (5,6,7) - 123456788
01:21:775 (5,6,5,6) - stack 5 and 6
01:26:650 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ball ball

the map is nice, but since i have mapped this song before(?), i feel weird to some rhythm like 00:24:400 (7,1) - , 00:28:618 (3,4) - , 00:30:962 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - , 00:41:556 (4,5) - , 00:44:556 (4) - , 00:56:650 (1,2) -
maybe different people have different opinion on the music, o.o

also, although this seems to be the correct bg, rrt's map background looks better to fit in the music, and better for playing since the darkness style

so many people mapping this, good luck

fixed majority except NTRDIFF thx!
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

Hollow Wings wrote:

as ur req

Expert

  1. 00:50:275 this beat can hardly be missed imo, just add a note at the head of 00:50:368 (3) - to stack it. if u care about the spacing then maybe just shorter that jump's ds a bit, thou anyway is fine to me if u do that changing.
  2. 01:47:650 some kind of similar as above, but not that strongly recommend to change.
  3. 01:57:306 (1,2) - i think ctrl+g is better to catch the rhythm coz the ds shfiting here, and anti-flow can give a feeling of emphasis that heavy beat better than what u did currently here imo.
  4. nothing to say, 2 stars to u.

Insane

  1. wtf i can't find anything?? i'm so noooooob... a star to u ;w;
  2. oops this is made by ntr lol

Hard

  1. 01:04:900 (4,1) - for all those 4 notes' patterns, maybe exchange nc setting here to follow the heavy beats... well i know what u r thinking to those patterns to keep them like symm, but maybe just consider a bit more.
other stuffs r fine to me

i call u supernova coz u start shining in 2014

good luck

OVERESTIMATED MAPPER KLOYD

Thx btw. fixed 90%
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

Kagamine Ren wrote:

m4m from my queue

[Easy]

  • 00:55:900 (2) - move a little right to blanket with 00:54:400 (1) -
    01:04:900 (1,1) - stack them well
    01:48:400 (3) - NC
[Normal]
nothing to say

[Hard]

  • 00:49:806 (7,1) - it's not easy to read,change the slider to 2 notes?
    01:24:400 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much overclap here
    01:39:025 (7) - add finish
[Insane]

  • 00:49:712 (6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this stream should be in an Extra ,too difficult
    00:56:650 (1,2) - stack well or keep the stream with the same distance
    01:31:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i thin you should increase the distances of them to follow the music
    01:53:650 (2) - add clap
[Expert]

  • 00:44:556 (4) - is this rankable? u have use the red point to change the slider's speed
    00:49:712 (1) - delete NC
    01:30:775 (5) - add clap
    01:39:306 (1) - finish sounds better
    01:55:900 (1) - add finish
can't say much about this diff.it's too difficult for me

Fixed all. Thx
Zweib

sionKotori wrote:

the best CS5 mapper of 2014
m4m~

[Easy]
00:36:400 (1) - this slider body seems to be off-screen
00:48:775 (1) - Perhaps this spinner is too short for Easy. Let it starts at 00:48:587 may improve a little?

[Normal]
00:20:275 (2) - To avoid overlapping with 00:19:337 (5) is preferred
00:38:837 (3,1,2,3) - this pattern may be a little bit confusing..
00:40:900 (1) - make perfect blanket :/
01:51:400 (1) - make this parallel with 01:50:837 (3)?

[Hard]
have nothing to say with it :D

[Insane]
01:21:025 (3,4) - this anti-jump may be hard to aim... I prefer (4) ctrl+g
01:30:775 (2) - It may be cool if you make a jump here?

[Extra]
beautifully arranged and really fun to play~
I think HP drain 7.2 is too high for me :(
00:24:400 (7,1) - swap NC?
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

Zweib wrote:

sionKotori wrote:

the best CS5 mapper of 2014
m4m~

[Easy]
00:36:400 (1) - this slider body seems to be off-screen
00:48:775 (1) - Perhaps this spinner is too short for Easy. Let it starts at 00:48:587 may improve a little?

[Normal]
00:20:275 (2) - To avoid overlapping with 00:19:337 (5) is preferred
00:38:837 (3,1,2,3) - this pattern may be a little bit confusing..
00:40:900 (1) - make perfect blanket :/
01:51:400 (1) - make this parallel with 01:50:837 (3)?

[Hard]
have nothing to say with it :D

[Insane]
01:21:025 (3,4) - this anti-jump may be hard to aim... I prefer (4) ctrl+g
01:30:775 (2) - It may be cool if you make a jump here?

[Extra]
beautifully arranged and really fun to play~
I think HP drain 7.2 is too high for me :(
00:24:400 (7,1) - swap NC?
fixed all!
Asahina Momoko
modしてくれたお礼にという事なんですけども、完成度が高すぎて指摘する点があんまり思いつかなかったという・・・ :cry:
あくまでも自分だったらこうしてたって言う観点で書きますので、参考までに!(英語下手なので日本語でいきます、ゴメンナサイ)

[Easy]
特にこれといってありませんでした!しいて言えば
自分なら00:22:525 (5,1) - をスライダーに変えて、 00:22:150 (4,2) - のどちらかとBlanketにするかな、くらいでした。

[Normal]
配置・音取りは個人的には好みでしたが、Normalにしてはちょっときつい重なり方のところがあるかなとも思えました。
normalレベルを実際にプレイしているフレンドの意見に加え、自分が感じた難所としては、
01:15:400 (1,2,3,4) -
01:23:650 (4,5,1,2,3) -
あたりでした。スライダーとスライダーの間に単発がある場合、アプローチサークルと的がごっちゃになって少し見づらいかもしれません。

[Hard]
この感じなら、AR7.7ではなくいっそAR8にしてみてはどうでしょう?
以下提案です、要修正というところはありませんでした!
・00:03:775 (2) - を00:03:962 (3) - の始点とスタック
・00:26:087 (1) - のスピナーを00:27:025まで伸ばす
・01:04:900 (1,1) - NCをはずす

[Insane]
以下提案です
00:25:712 (4) - スライダーに変更したほうが元の音と合いそうな気がします
00:36:400 (1,2,3,4) - すべて1の方向で揃えるのはどうでしょう
00:41:275 (2,3,4) - こんな配置にすると動きが出るような?
http://puu.sh/cjaWF/af41c6ed0f.jpg

[Expart]
ほとんどの部分がスライダー速度1.0ではないので、大元のslide velocity を変えてみてはいかがでしょうか
他の配置とかは何も言うことありませんでしたすばらしい出来でした!!!

以上ですべてになります、ranked待ってます ;)
Akiyama Mizuki
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