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Larval Stage Planning - Stargazer

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Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年10月21日 at 12:37:58

Artist: Larval Stage Planning
Title: Stargazer
Source: 天体のメソッド
Tags: kakifly sora no method opening noel nonoka yuzuki toyosaki aki natsukawa shiina minase inori loli lolicon yuri Celestial TV Size tvsize
BPM: 136
Filesize: 17518kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.43 stars, 94 notes)
  2. Hard (2.81 stars, 181 notes)
  3. Insane (3.66 stars, 267 notes)
  4. kakifly's Normal (1.87 stars, 118 notes)
Download: Larval Stage Planning - Stargazer
Download: Larval Stage Planning - Stargazer (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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sora no method op<3

ED map here: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/216214
请叫我送PP小天使
thanks to Kagamine Rin for background.
Last edited by Fycho , edited 27 times in total.
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
MirinH
唔。。
你要Hard gd吗
SoGa
236 posts
Joined June 2013
SoGa
ww,op ed都被飞球包了，5萝莉1正太的飞球争夺战ww
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

Alex Li wrote:

唔。。
你要Hard gd吗
不需要了谢谢
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
As request 骗kd

[Normal]
00:16:163 (2) - 连续两个长直滑条感觉有点无聊 换成弯的？
00:40:869 (3) - 变奏(是叫这个吗)的感觉略弱 加个nc？

[Hard]
00:10:428 (3) - hitnormal加在头上更好
01:14:398 (5) - 往上挪一点 这样拐角更大 会不会更贴歌（扯


[Insane]
00:10:869 (6) - 这里其实没音啊 56换成短滑条好一点 这次我换了好耳机
00:15:280 (2,3) - 有点反应不过来 摆开一点 而且00:18:369 (1) - 也摆开了
00:55:648 (2) - ctrl+g
00:58:516 (3) - 我觉得antijump加在后面的头上更好

好 幼女prpr 虽然我不是贫乳党
Kamio Misuzu
580 posts
Joined November 2012
Kamio Misuzu
As your request

[Insane]
00:26:310 (3,1) - ，这flow不怎么舒服。不好说怎么改，换我的话00:26:751 (1,2,3) - 这一块儿重新摆一下

00:32:045 (7) - 稍微向正下方移动一点

00:33:589 (3,4) - ctrl + G

00:40:648 (2) - 这个可以向左下再移点，大概284|320

00:46:383 (1) - 弧度改大一些，ctrl+g ，和00:47:045 (2) - 的距离自己把握

00:47:707 (5,1) - 上面如果改了这里不改就感觉有些憋屈了。自己考虑

01:04:251 (2,3) - 2的短slider有点画蛇添足了。尾巴都没音的。我看了下你hard是直接长slider压过去的，这里用slider+note感觉也足够了。如果你觉得影响你布局的话就算了

01:07:780 (2,3) - ^

[Hard]
一如既往的中规中矩，没问题

[Normal]
没问题

meili
Sellenite
1,092 posts
Joined September 2013
Sellenite
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:633 (5,1) - 交换NC？我习惯重音NC，而且你刚好要跳，也是另一个音轨的开始了
  2. 00:32:928 (2,4) - 修下blanket
  3. 00:33:589 (3,4) - 这两个ctrl+g吧，flow好奇怪啊
  4. 00:36:457 (2,3) - 这样吧
    SPOILER
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:560 (1,3) - paaaaaaaarallel
  2. 00:10:428 (3) - 卧槽你这个折返的音效超难听啊，沉得要命，改为whistle多好
  3. 00:32:928 (2,3,1) - 好丑啊。。滑条弄那么弯，压迫感太强了，润滑点吧，如果你改的话后面也要调整好
    SPOILER
  4. 00:42:413 (7) - 换成1/4折返然后00:42:523加个normal clap？主要是你的蓝线的clap没表现出来直接跟歌词很强的违和感，明明前面clap那么大声这里就没了
  5. 00:58:516不明白为什么这里不加circle，直接按下去kiai不是觉得怪怪的吗
[Easy]
normal美丽
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
已經發展到萌軟歌曲都用紅線finish的時代了啊……“/me 非常裝逼地喝着青島啤酒說道”

00:58:405 - 我覺得preview timing下這裡比較合適……

[Insane]

原曲的音叉都是有輕有重有主有次……但是音效都一個輕重，實際跟的效果和自創節奏差不多……

00:24:986 - 有很明顯的鋼琴音……前面的whistle貌似也是應和鋼琴……所以這裡我覺得不適合停頓……

00:45:942 (6,7) - clap大概是00:46:163 (7) - 上面

00:53:222 (8,1) - 边緣物件自带别扭度+1……这里也算比较难的梗我觉得放中间点会好一点，另外后面的滑条锚点出界……01:03:810 (1) - 本体出界……关照一下强迫症人士和非宽屏人士不？

01:15:280 (3,1) - 這種比較坑爹的梗……額……

[Hard]

00:16:825 - 這里一口氣太多折返了……連用折返我覺得相當不合適

00:58:516 - 前面的滑條如果是跟人聲的話……這裡補一個note可能更合適？

[Easy]

額……把名字換成normal？ 原來有Gd。。

01:22:339 - nazi……多餘的線……
Last edited by Narcissu , edited 1 time in total.
Spring Roll
230 posts
Joined April 2013
Spring Roll
mod from game PM

Easy

  1. 00:16:163 (2) - 这个和前后两个滑条是不是不平行啊，虽然很细微看不太出来
  2. 没了，nice diff

Hard

  1. 00:07:560 (1,3) - 没平行，似乎你是故意的（？）后面有好多地方都这样不过强迫症看着有点难受
  2. 00:28:075 (3,4,5) - 拉开点。45在游戏中会和3重叠不好看
  3. 00:32:928 (2,3,1) - 可以包的更好点

Insane

  1. 00:55:648 (2) - Ctrl+G
  2. 01:15:060 (2) - 用normal的clap
  3. 01:16:825 (2) - ^
  4. 01:22:119 (3,1) - 这地方不舒服，不如把1和3叠起来
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru
from QQ
久弥萝莉好

[General]
感觉clap不太合曲

[Insane]
00:26:310 (3,1) - 这个flower很别手 上面糍粑也提到了 我大概会把00:26:751 (1) - CTRL+G 后面也会顺着摆
00:35:795 (1) - 不妨给一点稍微向上翘的弧度？
貌似别的地方上面都有人提到了我就不废话了

[Hard]
00:05:795 (1) - 我觉得不该漏掉00:06:016 这个音
00:40:869 (1) - 用和00:39:545 (1)一样的slider多好

[Normal]
神隐

[Easy]
01:12:854 - 我觉得不应跳过这根长白线

美丽
Meg
1,617 posts
Joined August 2012
Meg
as your request
乃々香かわいいいい

General
  1. remove widescreen support
Easy
  1. 00:05:795 (4) - move to x:177 y:312. will become better triangle
  2. 00:37:560 (3,4,5,6) - I think overcircle... change to 2 slider?
  3. 00:49:913 (1) - stack better on 00:48:148 (4)
  4. 01:20:795 (4) - add NC?
  5. many circle :? i think star diff too high. you can change some circle→slider
Hard
  1. 00:56:972 (1) - want any hitsound on tail
  2. 01:23:442 (3) - add NC?
Insane
  1. 00:05:133 (5) - stack better on 00:04:472 (2) x:412 y:87
  2. 00:55:648 (2) - I like Ctrl+G
  3. 00:58:516 (3) - NC? different rhythm with 00:56:972 (1,2)
Good Luck
pkk
1,821 posts
Joined November 2013
pkk

Fycho wrote:

fycho senpai hentai
!!
Setz
1,419 posts
Joined August 2013
Setz
from PM request.

this map is pretty good, so i wont be able to really say much.

First time modding a Fycho map. pls be gentle senpai :o

[Easy]
  1. 00:26:972 (2) - maybe move this slider to the next white tick? this sounds and plays better in my opinion, you are catching the strong downbeat at 00:26:972- with the slider's head.
  2. 00:28:736 (1,2,3,4) - maybe try a more circular flow here? plays nicer imo. but after looking at the rest of the map, you use this straight line flow alot, so i guess this is your personal preference.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:48:148 (4,1) - fix stack.
  4. 01:11:972 (5) - maybe try a more interesting shape for this slider? as an example, I ctrl+g'ed 4 to show what I would do here.
    SPOILER
    thats all i can really suggest, very nice diff.
[Kakifly's Normal]
  1. you forgot to add the kiai time for your diff, you should make it consistent with Fycho's diffs.
  2. 00:05:795 (5) - in my opinion, you could use a better rhythm here to represent the music. this is my suggestion :
    SPOILER
  3. 00:10:428 (5) - here, you have the strong downbeat on this slider's tail, this would feel better if this was something the player clicks on. this is not to say all downbeats should be clickable, because some are weaker than others, but here, in my opinion, you should have the player click.
  4. 00:13:516 (4) - reverse on this doesn't really seem to follow anything in the music, what i suggest is to remove the reverse, and instead use a 1/2 slider at 00:14:178-
  5. spacing in this diff is actually all over the place, you should go back and check every single object, because the spacing ranges from 1.53 to 1.62, and you shouldn't have these big inconsistencies in a Normal.
  6. 00:26:972 (3) - nazi: move to 138, 203 for smoother curve.
  7. 00:36:457 (2,3) - this was pretty confusing, maybe try this rhythm which plays and sounds much better.
    SPOILER
  8. 01:00:501 (4) - again here, i think you could do something more interesting, like this :
    SPOILER
  9. 01:07:560 (3) - ^
  10. 01:12:854 (1) - here, i suggest thys rhythm, so you can catch the strong beat at 01:14:398 - you did it here in a different way. 01:15:501 (4,5) -
    SPOILER
  11. 01:18:810 (2) - add finish
  12. 01:23:663 (1) - spinner end time inconsistent with Fycho's diffs.
[Hard]
  • not much to say here, I love all of your Hard and insane diffs, i will only be able to offer small nazi suggestions here.
  1. 00:07:560 (1,3) - move the end point of 3 so that the slider is parallel with 1. this really bothered me while playing for some reason :o
  2. 00:10:428 (3) - don't you think the downbeat at 00:11:089 - should be clicked? you could try something like this, although i see why you did this, since 3 ends on a blue tick.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:12:413 (5) - maybe make this two circles, so that the player can click the beat at 00:12:633-
  4. 00:39:104 (6) - maybe make this a triple instead of a reverse slider. you could handle it like you did here 00:55:648 (2,3,4) - so that the player clicks on the strong beat.
[Insane]
  • just osme nazi stacks.
  1. 00:05:133 (5,2) - fix stack
  2. 00:04:913 (4,3) - ^
  3. 00:26:310 (3,3) - ^
  4. 00:36:457 (2,3) - ^ ok, maybe you are doing this on purpose, so I am going to stop here.
Not much else to say here, i really cant mod your insane because I for one really like your maps, and I am not great at modding some insanes. putting those two things together, I really don't think i can give you anything useful. I hope at least what i suggested for the other diffs is useful to you even if just a little.
kakifly
940 posts
Joined April 2014
kakifly

Setz206 wrote:

[Kakifly's Normal]
  1. you forgot to add the kiai time for your diff, you should make it consistent with Fycho's diffs. fixed
  2. 00:05:795 (5) - in my opinion, you could use a better rhythm here to represent the music. this is my suggestion :
    SPOILER
    ok
  3. 00:10:428 (5) - here, you have the strong downbeat on this slider's tail, this would feel better if this was something the player clicks on. this is not to say all downbeats should be clickable, because some are weaker than others, but here, in my opinion, you should have the player click. (thats why i made the slider shape like this) imo this downbeat isnt as significant as some so no changes here
  4. 00:13:516 (4) - reverse on this doesn't really seem to follow anything in the music, what i suggest is to remove the reverse, and instead use a 1/2 slider at 00:14:178- if you remove the custom whistle hitsounds here you can clearly hear what i am following; so no changes sorry :o
  5. spacing in this diff is actually all over the place, you should go back and check every single object, because the spacing ranges from 1.53 to 1.62, and you shouldn't have these big inconsistencies in a Normal. ok (thanks4betrayingmeDS)
  6. 00:26:972 (3) - nazi: move to 138, 203 for smoother curve. fixed
  7. 00:36:457 (2,3) - this was pretty confusing, maybe try this rhythm which plays and sounds much better.
    SPOILER
    gonna keep a consistent rhythm here that follows the beat in the music instead
  8. 01:00:501 (4) - again here, i think you could do something more interesting, like this :
    SPOILER
    fixed
  9. 01:07:560 (3) - ^ gonna keep like tihs; since i followed your prev suggestion^ the rhythm may get a bit repetitive if i use it more here
  10. 01:12:854 (1) - here, i suggest thys rhythm, so you can catch the strong beat at 01:14:398 - you did it here in a different way. 01:15:501 (4,5) -
    SPOILER
    huhu nice suggestion; fixed
  11. 01:18:810 (2) - add finish i dont think a finish fits there
  12. 01:23:663 (1) - spinner end time inconsistent with Fycho's diffs. fixed
thanks for modding :3

update
SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: stargazer.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56972
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Stargazer
TitleUnicode:Stargazer
Artist:Larval Stage Planning
ArtistUnicode:Larval Stage Planning
Creator:Fycho
Version:kakifly's Normal
Source:天体のメソッド
Tags:kakifly sora no method opening noel nonoka yuzuki toyosaki aki natsukawa shiina minase inori loli lolicon yuri
BeatmapID:520428
BeatmapSetID:220811

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
This lolicon requested a mod, so here I am.

[General]
  1. English title of anime is Celestial Method, please add to tags. Some people don't search animes by Japanese name, like me when I was new to osu, so it's easy for them to miss maps that don't have English names in tags.
[Easy]
  1. 01:11:972 (5,1) - Try this to avoid polarity issue:
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:692 (2) - the spacing difference is a little noticeable
  2. 00:36:457 (2,3) - Covering too many beats here seems unnecessary. Just make it a 3/2 slider.
    [*01:00:280 (3,4,5) - - Similar thing here. 01:00:501 is really weak so it'd be better to ignore. Get rid of 01:00:280 (3,4) - and put a 3/2 slider where (3) is, then map 01:01:383 and 01:01:825 however you want, either 2 circles or a 1/1 slider.
  3. 01:04:030 (4) - move 1/2 beat earlier and extend 1/2 beat
  4. 01:05:575 (7) - This circle is quite unnecessary, delete it to help give the player a break.
[Hard]
  1. 00:08:442 (3) - Move endpoint to 284, 88 so it's parallel with 00:07:560 (1) -
  2. 00:32:928 (2,3,1) - Check your blankets, they look a bit off.
[Insane]
  1. 00:18:810 (3,4) - You can move them around a little so that 00:18:369 (1,2,3,4) - form a cross pattern:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:20:575 - I think you should map a circle here because it's the same kind of sound as 00:20:795 (2,3,4,5) -
  3. 00:49:251 (7,8,9) - - If you swap the location of 00:49:251 (7,9) - and (8) you can have a bigger jump between 00:49:692 (9,1) - which fits the music better.
  4. 01:12:854 (1) - This plays really awkwardly, I'd ctrl-G to be best.
  5. 01:15:280 (3,1) - Snap the slider head of (3) and red slider point of (1) on the grid so they completely stack.
  6. 01:18:148 (1) - Better flow between 01:18:148 (1,2) - if you put (1) to the right of 01:17:928 (7) -
    SPOILER
Ganbatte Fycho~
kakifly
940 posts
Joined April 2014
kakifly

xxdeathx wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:04:692 (2) - the spacing difference is a little noticeable fixed
  2. 00:36:457 (2,3) - Covering too many beats here seems unnecessary. Just make it a 3/2 slider. ok
    [*01:00:280 (3,4,5) - - Similar thing here. 01:00:501 is really weak so it'd be better to ignore. Get rid of 01:00:280 (3,4) - and put a 3/2 slider where (3) is, then map 01:01:383 and 01:01:825 however you want, either 2 circles or a 1/1 slider. changed this part in prev mod but i think fycho forgot to update =w=
  3. 01:04:030 (4) - move 1/2 beat earlier and extend 1/2 beat idk.. i kind of want to emphasize the downbeat & clap here.. will wait for more opinions on this :0
  4. 01:05:575 (7) - This circle is quite unnecessary, delete it to help give the player a break. b-but theres a clap in the music...
thanks for modding xD

update :3
SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: stargazer.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56972
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Stargazer
TitleUnicode:Stargazer
Artist:Larval Stage Planning
ArtistUnicode:Larval Stage Planning
Creator:Fycho
Version:kakifly's Normal
Source:天体のメソッド
Tags:kakifly sora no method opening noel nonoka yuzuki toyosaki aki natsukawa shiina minase inori loli lolicon yuri
BeatmapID:520428
BeatmapSetID:220811

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Fycho
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Fycho
@imoutosan, Kamio Misuzu, Sellenite, Narcissu, Spring Roll, KaedekaShizuru, 感谢mod，改了很多东西，想要探讨理由ingame来说

iMage-- wrote:

as your request
乃々香かわいいいい

General
  1. remove widescreen support
Easy
  1. 00:05:795 (4) - move to x:177 y:312. will become better triangle
  2. 00:37:560 (3,4,5,6) - I think overcircle... change to 2 slider?
  3. 00:49:913 (1) - stack better on 00:48:148 (4)
  4. 01:20:795 (4) - add NC?
  5. many circle :? i think star diff too high. you can change some circle→slider
Hard
  1. 00:56:972 (1) - want any hitsound on tailno idea which hitsound fits it
  2. 01:23:442 (3) - add NC? okay
Insane
  1. 00:05:133 (5) - stack better on 00:04:472 (2) x:412 y:87 k
  2. 00:55:648 (2) - I like Ctrl+G I don't like it
  3. 00:58:516 (3) - NC? different rhythm with 00:56:972 (1,2) I like nc at big white tick
Good Luck
Thanks image--

Setz206 wrote:

from PM request.

this map is pretty good, so i wont be able to really say much.

First time modding a Fycho map. pls be gentle senpai :o

[Easy]
  1. 00:26:972 (2) - maybe move this slider to the next white tick? this sounds and plays better in my opinion, you are catching the strong downbeat at 00:26:972- with the slider's head. I follow vocal mainly so keeping it at red tick is fine
  2. 00:28:736 (1,2,3,4) - maybe try a more circular flow here? plays nicer imo. but after looking at the rest of the map, you use this straight line flow alot, so i guess this is your personal preference.
    SPOILER
    ok
  3. 00:48:148 (4,1) - fix stack. ok
  4. 01:11:972 (5) - maybe try a more interesting shape for this slider? as an example, I ctrl+g'ed 4 to show what I would do here. ok
    SPOILER
    thats all i can really suggest, very nice diff.
[Hard]
  • not much to say here, I love all of your Hard and insane diffs, i will only be able to offer small nazi suggestions here.
  1. 00:07:560 (1,3) - move the end point of 3 so that the slider is parallel with 1. this really bothered me while playing for some reason :ofixed
  2. 00:10:428 (3) - don't you think the downbeat at 00:11:089 - should be clicked? you could try something like this, although i see why you did this, since 3 ends on a blue tick. I set it at sliderend on purpose, just like the reverse slider
    SPOILER
  3. 00:12:413 (5) - maybe make this two circles, so that the player can click the beat at 00:12:633- slider is fine too imo
  4. 00:39:104 (6) - maybe make this a triple instead of a reverse slider. you could handle it like you did here 00:55:648 (2,3,4) - so that the player clicks on the strong beat. Reverse slider is ok too
[Insane]
  • just osme nazi stacks.
  1. 00:05:133 (5,2) - fix stack
  2. 00:04:913 (4,3) - ^
  3. 00:26:310 (3,3) - ^
  4. 00:36:457 (2,3) - ^ ok, maybe you are doing this on purpose, so I am going to stop here.
Not much else to say here, i really cant mod your insane because I for one really like your maps, and I am not great at modding some insanes. putting those two things together, I really don't think i can give you anything useful. I hope at least what i suggested for the other diffs is useful to you even if just a little.

xxdeathx wrote:

This lolicon requested a mod, so here I am.

[General]
  1. English title of anime is Celestial Method, please add to tags. Some people don't search animes by Japanese name, like me when I was new to osu, so it's easy for them to miss maps that don't have English names in tags.
ok

[Easy]
  1. 01:11:972 (5,1) - Try this to avoid polarity issue:can't see the difference
[Hard]
  1. 00:08:442 (3) - Move endpoint to 284, 88 so it's parallel with 00:07:560 (1) - done
  2. 00:32:928 (2,3,1) - Check your blankets, they look a bit off. it's not for blanket, it's for triangle
[Insane]
  1. 00:18:810 (3,4) - You can move them around a little so that 00:18:369 (1,2,3,4) - form a cross pattern:
    SPOILER
    lemme take a consideration
  2. 00:20:575 - I think you should map a circle here because it's the same kind of sound as 00:20:795 (2,3,4,5) - but nothing at00:20:354 - , 1/1 slider fits better
  3. 00:49:251 (7,8,9) - - If you swap the location of 00:49:251 (7,9) - and (8) you can have a bigger jump between 00:49:692 (9,1) - which fits the music better. if that, spacing would be messy
  4. 01:12:854 (1) - This plays really awkwardly, I'd ctrl-G to be best. I don't think it plays awkwardly as I play it well
  5. 01:15:280 (3,1) - Snap the slider head of (3) and red slider point of (1) on the grid so they completely stack. okay
  6. 01:18:148 (1) - Better flow between 01:18:148 (1,2) - if you put (1) to the right of 01:17:928 (7) - I tried it but it doesn't play well:<
    SPOILER
Ganbatte Fycho~
Thanks for modding. Updated all diffs.
ritsu-tanaika
468 posts
Joined September 2012
ritsu-tanaika
sup, my promised mod!

EASY
00:23:442 (4) - this slightly overlaps with 00:21:678 (1) - at the tail end. I suggest moving the head to (68,232) to avoid the overlap, and to make blanket with 00:23:001 (3) - .

SPOILER

00:24:325 (5) - IF you follow ^, please move this to suit Distance Spacing

01:20:354 (4) - suggest adding a note here so the rhythm doesnt feel broken off, make it continuous

NORMAL

00:12:633 (3) - suggest adding a clap at the end of slider, otherwise it feels quite silent

00:16:825 (3) - stacking with a 1/2 gap is not a very good idea for Normal diff in my opinion. I suggest changing the rhythm to a 1/2 slider at (312,288). you can keep the distance spacing equal while making the rhythm match the vocal more

SPOILER

00:54:104 (5) - I think the shape would look better if you (Ctrl H + Ctrl J) so that it points downwards isntead of upwards

HARD

00:12:854 (1) - I suggest also adding a finish on the head of slider to emphasize cymbol sound

00:41:972 (5) - suggest adding a clap here, since it feels a little empty

01:05:354 (5) - I think even for hard, the jump here is very big. I suggest stacking this on top of 01:05:575 (6) - instead, to make it easier to play

INSANE

00:21:016 (3) - I dont this blanket is very good in my opinion. I suggest moving it to (464,128) so that you can make a triangle pattern between 00:20:133 (1,2,3) -

01:12:854 (1) - same suggestion as Normal, I suggest adding a finish on the head of slider as well


Thats all, everything else is very good. I hope I helped
wcx19911123
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Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
千叶县西北部大雨、洪水警报


[General]
useless file: 02 Suisei Melody.mp3
cancel wildscreen
tag可以加上"TV Size"
强烈建议把蓝色改成那个萝莉色
offset need to +6~+8 imo(4037~4039)
video offset 可能也需要更小一点，顺带敢不敢换个没天气预报的vid

[kakifly's Normal]
OD+1? it's a bit low imo
missed video
01:22:339 (1,2) - use 1.0x speed for them?

[Insane]
00:55:869 (3) - 我感觉ctrl+g一下更符合flow点


TOKYO MX 天气预报　　终了
Fycho
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ritsu-tanaika wrote:

sup, my promised mod!

EASY
00:23:442 (4) - this slightly overlaps with 00:21:678 (1) - at the tail end. I suggest moving the head to (68,232) to avoid the overlap, and to make blanket with 00:23:001 (3) - . ok

SPOILER

00:24:325 (5) - IF you follow ^, please move this to suit Distance Spacing k

01:20:354 (4) - suggest adding a note here so the rhythm doesnt feel broken off, make it continuous changed to slider


HARD

00:12:854 (1) - I suggest also adding a finish on the head of slider to emphasize cymbol sound it's noisy for me

00:41:972 (5) - suggest adding a clap here, since it feels a little empty not a snare-drum in music, no need to add

01:05:354 (5) - I think even for hard, the jump here is very big. I suggest stacking this on top of 01:05:575 (6) - instead, to make it easier to play you are right, fixed

INSANE

00:21:016 (3) - I dont this blanket is very good in my opinion. I suggest moving it to (464,128) so that you can make a triangle pattern between 00:20:133 (1,2,3) - it's not blanket, it's just jump

01:12:854 (1) - same suggestion as Normal, I suggest adding a finish on the head of slider as well ^


Thats all, everything else is very good. I hope I helped

wcx19911123 wrote:

千叶县西北部大雨、洪水警报


[General]
useless file: 02 Suisei Melody.mp3 我手滑了orz。。。
cancel wildscreen done
tag可以加上"TV Size" k
强烈建议把蓝色改成那个萝莉色 k
offset need to +6~+8 imo(4037~4039) changed with +7
video offset 可能也需要更小一点，顺带敢不敢换个没天气预报的vid 难找video，你帮我找行不行啊


[Insane]
00:55:869 (3) - 我感觉ctrl+g一下更符合flow点 这里前面是顺时针，然后3是重音就放了个逆时针的


TOKYO MX 天气预报　　终了
thanks for modding
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