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TK from Ling tosite sigure - unravel (TV edit)

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xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on zaterdag 28 februari 2015 at 9:45:05

Artist: TK from Ling tosite sigure
Title: unravel (TV edit)
Source: Tokyo Ghoul
Tags: 東京喰種トーキョーグール Rakuen xxdeathx alacat opening Studio Pierrot
BPM: 135
Filesize: 16013kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. alacat's Insane (3,91 stars, 267 notes)
  2. Desperation (4,88 stars, 301 notes)
  3. Easy (1,35 stars, 81 notes)
  4. Rakuen's Normal (2,22 stars, 128 notes)
  5. xxdeathx's Hard (3,06 stars, 213 notes)
Download: TK from Ling tosite sigure - unravel (TV edit)
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Tokyo Ghoul opening~
shitstorm yisss
Redownload if you have downloaded before 10 January 2015

Easy - xChippy
Normal - Rakuen
Hard - xxdeathx
Insane- alacat
Desperation - xChippy
Last edited by xChippy , edited 49 times in total.
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
i am the shitstorm

helped with timing n stuff http://puu.sh/bXNKk.txt
KSHR
Global Moderator
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR
By the way, TK from Ling tosite sigure
http://tkofficial.jp/disco/unravel/

no kd
hetaneko-chan
47 posts
Joined July 2014
hetaneko-chan
can i help you with the easy diff
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy
Thanks KSHR fixed

@hetaneko, sorry I'm planning to do that one myself :/
Maruyu
742 posts
Joined July 2013
Maruyu
hype
hetaneko-chan
47 posts
Joined July 2014
hetaneko-chan
Oh... :(
hetaneko-chan
47 posts
Joined July 2014
hetaneko-chan
What about normal diff
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy
Rakuen is making it :?
All GD slots are taken.
hetaneko-chan
47 posts
Joined July 2014
hetaneko-chan
Never mind，Chippy senpai :)
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen

hetaneko-chan wrote:

What about normal diff
Yesh I'm da Rakuen asdhjkfd

Rakuen's Normal: http://puu.sh/cpR4C/2d399ccb4c.osu

Edit: renewed diff
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
http://puu.sh/cZGNa/7b5af17366.zip

ok, done :3
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy
Thanks for the nice GDs :3/
Pending~
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
Remapped my gd~

Rakuen's Normal: http://puu.sh/d1aHZ/bac666f888.osu

Hope it helped on diff spread and better mapping~
Squichu
1,013 posts
Joined November 2012
Squichu
hi there! beware: screenshot spam (cause I can't explain rhythm properly)
mod from my queue
I doubt it's useful, tho.

General
  1. think about replacing the dark grey combo colour? as it's hard too see sometimes casue of the dark colour scheme of the video
    (especially the very first combo when the background's completely black)
  2. (all of) you might want to find a consistent point where to end the last spinner/the diffs. In E/I/Desperation it's the downbeat, in N/H the blue tick before that. :n
Easy
  1. hitsounds in the beginning seem to be a little to loud, consider reducing hitsound volume slightly (down to 45%?)
  2. 00:04:276 (1) - cause there's no sound (no beat, nor vocals) on the slider track I'd prefer if you split this into circle + slider:
  3. 00:08:276 - why don't you add an object here? you've followed the vocals before, so the change from vocals to beat feels a little of, considering the vocals are so audiable. I think it'd provide a smoother transition if you add something here.
  4. 00:16:720 (2,3) - the blanket is off. please >-<
  5. 00:20:720 (2) - only short reverse slider in this diff, feels a little lost (/inconsistent), especially cause the red tick is way weaker than the other beats. how about alternating rhythm here slightly, including 00:19:387 (1) - , cause it sounds similar to the beginning, example:
  6. 00:22:943 (1,2) - sounds a little off, I'd prefer a different rhythm -

    might be just me, tho, not sure. ;-;
  7. 00:26:720 (1) - way too short for the easiest diff, imo. when a beginner player notices the spinner it's - most likely - already gone. you could replace it with a slider, that works better for Easy
  8. 00:45:387 (3) - sounds a little weak, might go better with the song if you remove this and put a circle at 00:45:832 instead (or a short slider til the downbeat and alternate the following objects)
  9. 01:02:060 (3,1) - slider borders almost touch, which is fine to play, but it looks rather cluttered (and maybe a bit confusing to beginners). you can rotate 1 slightly or curve it differently to avoid that.
Rakuen's Normal
looks good to me, I think sometimes combos get a little bit long (not combo count, but the number of objects in a row, I'm bad at explaining. xD), but that might be okay (?). anyway, some minor suggestions -
  1. 00:14:054 (1,2) - sounds a bit off, I'd prefer this -
  2. 00:20:943 (1,2) - unstack them to avoid confusion? it might be a little hard to understand cause of the previous objects
  3. 00:30:054 (1) - might be better if you place this further right so it's clearly visible. (might get tricky cause prev objects overlap and revesre arrows and yah. ;-; )
  4. 00:56:727 (1) - consider splitting this into slider + circle, that goes better with the beat
    also, I miss an object on the downbeat here - 00:58:504 - so how about this -
xxdeathx's Hard
not sure what to mod here. '_' at some points I don't feel comfortable with the rhythm, but that's due to lack of skill and should be fun to play for others. D:
  1. AR/OD seem a little too high compared to Normal/Insane, while HP are rather low for a Hard diff o:
    I'd prefer AR7 ~ 7.3 with OD6 and HP6, but that's up to you ofc!
  2. 00:14:054 (1,2) - I think you could emphasizethe guitar sound a bit better, it stands out, so I kind of miss this, example:
  3. 00:21:387 (2,3) - jump doesn't go well with the song here, imo. there's no real indicator for one here, so it feels unnecessary. also, there is this other background.. eerrrr.. guitar? Idk.
    anyway, why don't you switch placement of 3 and 00:21:943 (4) - (with adjusted length ofc) or try a different rhythm, example:
  4. 00:34:832 (6,7,1,2) - looks crowded, unstack 6+7? just to simplify it slightly
  5. 00:48:498 (6) - to match better with vocals and beat, you could lengthen it, so reverse is on the blue tick and sliderend on 00:49:165.
    or put a cirlce at 00:49:165 - the sound should be mapped, imo, as it's clearly audiable .o.
as stated, I'm bad with Insane and above, so just two things for
alacat's Insane
  1. 00:02:276 (3) - remove reverse and put a cirlce at 00:02:721, instead, sounds better to me. (cause the vocals aren't going on, but it's just taking breath)
  2. 00:14:276 (4) - sounds slightly off, cause there's nothing on the white tick where it ends, how about
    ?
hope I could help at least a little bit, good luck! owo
sammy711
207 posts
Joined November 2012
sammy711
wow wonderful
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx

Squirrel wrote:

hi there! beware: screenshot spam (cause I can't explain rhythm properly)
mod from my queue
I doubt it's useful, tho.

General
  1. think about replacing the dark grey combo colour? as it's hard too see sometimes casue of the dark colour scheme of the video
    (especially the very first combo when the background's completely black)
  2. (all of) you might want to find a consistent point where to end the last spinner/the diffs. In E/I/Desperation it's the downbeat, in N/H the blue tick before that. :n @xChippy the last note is on the blue tick, you should probably change desperation then

xxdeathx's Hard
not sure what to mod here. '_' at some points I don't feel comfortable with the rhythm, but that's due to lack of skill and should be fun to play for others. D:
  1. AR/OD seem a little too high compared to Normal/Insane, while HP are rather low for a Hard diff o:
    I'd prefer AR7 ~ 7.3 with OD6 and HP6, but that's up to you ofc! lowering OD to 5.5 and increasing HP to 5.5
  2. 00:14:054 (1,2) - I think you could emphasizethe guitar sound a bit better, it stands out, so I kind of miss this, example: i don't hear any other sound to emphasize
  3. 00:21:387 (2,3) - jump doesn't go well with the song here, imo. there's no real indicator for one here, so it feels unnecessary. also, there is this other background.. eerrrr.. guitar? Idk.
    anyway, why don't you switch placement of 3 and 00:21:943 (4) - (with adjusted length ofc) or try a different rhythm, example: changed placement
  4. 00:34:832 (6,7,1,2) - looks crowded, unstack 6+7? just to simplify it slightly it's really hard to play 1/4 circle before slider if they aren't stacked
  5. 00:48:498 (6) - to match better with vocals and beat, you could lengthen it, so reverse is on the blue tick and sliderend on 00:49:165.
    or put a cirlce at 00:49:165 - the sound should be mapped, imo, as it's clearly audiable .o. i'm just following vocals here
hope I could help at least a little bit, good luck! owo
thanks!

@Rakuen when i made the hard i thought it should balance between normal and desperation, i hope remap wasn't too much trouble for you :(

SPOILER
osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55609
Countdown: 0
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[Metadata]
Title:unravel (TV edit)
TitleUnicode:unravel (TV edit)
Artist:TK from Ling tosite sigure
ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
Creator:xChippy
Version:xxdeathx's Hard
Source:東京喰種トーキョーグール
Tags:Tokyo Ghoul Rakuen xxdeathx alacat
BeatmapID:536191
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Mint
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Joined February 2013
Mint
Hello xChippy! from my queue

:idea: General


* Easy/alacat/Desperation have a different spinner end time than Rakuen/xxdeathx. I personally recommend ending it on the blue tick, and don't forgot to move the green line as well if you fix it.

Easy


* 00:04:276 (1) - I don't think this slider here emphasizes the vocals the best way, since the strong vocal is on the slider end. Try this rhythm? Might not be the best, but you could use it for reference.

Couldn't really find anything else >_<

Rakuen's Normal


* I don't think you need the green lines at 00:55:832 - 00:56:727 - 01:09:171 - 01:10:935 - 01:18:046 -, since there's no SV change (it stays 1.0x), no volume change, and the KIAI is already set on the uninherited (red) timing sections.
* 00:01:165 - (optional) Add a note here for the vocals? I don't see why you didn't add a note here, or else 00:08:498 (1) - shouldn't be mapped either.
* 00:24:276 (3) - Nazi. But the NC with the previous note is x0.95, which you could see at x1. Placing it somewhere at (156,224) should work.
* 00:30:054 (1) - Add break time after this one to be consistent with Desperation diff.
* 00:47:832 (1) - (optional) Try this rhythm? Then you can actually click the 'tick' sound at 00:48:720
* 00:58:504 (3) - Add a note here as well? You have a note at 01:01:838 (3) - I don't recommend having this kind of gap in KIAI, since it's the strongest part of the song.

Nice Normal diff!

xxdeathx's Hard


* Disable 'Widescreen Support', no SB.
* 00:01:165 - Consider adding a note here, since you are following the vocals in the beginning.
* 00:04:943 (2) - Shouldn't the NC be here? The whistle sound and the 'no' in the vocals are much stronger here, and to make it somewhat more consistent with 00:08:720 (1) -
* 00:10:276 - 'till 00:11:832 - I think you should map this section, since this large gap/break is really awkward to me. I really liked how you mapped 00:13:832 (5,6,1,2) - , so you could try something similar here as well.
* 00:19:387 (1) - Change to 1/1 slider to make it rhythm-wise the same as 00:16:943 (2) - ?
* 00:25:609 (4,5) - This gap is a bit awkward to me, add a note on the white tick? There's a guitar sound there that you might want to map.
* 00:42:276 - Similar to the first suggestion that I gave you.
* 00:51:387 (1) - This sudden change of rhythm might confuse some players, since the repetitive vocals and the rhythm you using might make some players think that this starts on the red tick. I recommend you to keep it consistent.
* 01:16:935 (2,3,4,5) - This plays like a mini stream of 4-notes which is really hard to play. You're using a lot of triplets here, so you could try turning (3,4,5) to a 1/4 repeat slider.
* 01:25:157 - You should put the green line on the blue tick before this, or else it won't effect the spinner end at all.

Should be good to go soon!

alacat's Insane


* Disable 'Widescreen Support', no SB. osu! should have an automatic feature to disable it when there's no SB www
* HP6 maybe? For a 5/6/7 spread with H/I/EX :oops:
* I think you can try raising the AR with about 0.5. The Hard diff is already 7.6 and the Insane uses 9.0 so you could try finding something in between. I worry a bit about the AR now, because your spacing changes with 1/4 patterns in the KIAI (for example 01:15:157 (5,6) - ) are now extremely hard to read.
* 00:04:499 (3) - Maybe you could remove the repeat and add 1/2 circle on the long white tick, so the whistle sound is actually clickable. Would be nicer to make it clickable, especially since this a really slow part.
* 00:08:720 (2) - NC this here? The tone and the overall setting of the song changes a lot. It's also in the Desperation diff, but it depends what xChippy decides to do. You should talk to him/her what NC pattern you're going to use, same goes for 00:42:276 (1,2) -
* 00:17:387 (4) - I'd make this a triplet and 00:17:832 (1,2,3) - a reverse slider instead, so the strong bass sound at 00:17:609 (5) - won't be skipped.
* 00:36:054 (5) - For some reason, this note here sounds strange here, but that's probably because you have 1/4 reverse sliders at 00:37:609 (3) - and 00:39:387 (3) - , but here you don't. I recommend to make it consistent.
* 00:40:165 - (optional) The instruemtn that you are following, actually does have a sound here, so you could try mapping it, but it's all up to you o/
* 00:45:609 (4) - This slider and the slider at 00:47:498 (3) - are following the same sound, so I recommend you to change this one to a 1/4 repeat slider.
* 00:59:727 (7) - I think you forgot a clap here :roll: (you did add one at 01:03:726 (8) - and 01:01:949 (8) -)
* 01:01:171 (4) - Adding an extra clap on the slider head would sound much better imo. Now this slider sounds a bit inaudible.

I really liked how you used the normal whistles in the last KIAI. I think it really fits the song, and the diff itself is also well done :3

Desperation


* 00:04:943 (1) - There's no whistle sound here, while the stress of the vocals is here, like 00:05:832 (3) - . It's optional to remove the whistle at 00:04:721 (3) -
* 00:08:721 (1) - I see why you added a NC here, but you didn't add one at 00:01:388 (2) - . I'd add a NC to the beginning, or just remove this one.
* 00:14:054 (3) - The NC should be here, because the pitch here is much higher, and the whistle indicates that. Also to keep consistent NCs (00:17:387 (6,7,1) - )
* 00:26:498 (1) - Add a clap from S:C1 along with the whistle?
* 00:34:498 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you could try a zig-zag pattern instead so it's a bit similar to 00:38:054 (1,2,3,4) -
* 00:39:054 (2) - This offbeat repeat slider doesn't fit well here imo. I'd have a kickslider + circle rhythm you had in the previous combo's. ( 00:33:720 (2,3) - )
* 00:43:832 (3) - A soft-whistle would fit quite well with the vocals here.
* 00:45:387 (4) - I wonder why you used the drum-sampleset on the repeat and end only, and not on the end, unlike 00:47:498 (4) - . I'd make it consistent.
* 00:53:832 (1,3) - It's probably just me, but I don't really like this overlap here. You could try to move it down a little.
* 00:54:832 (4) - Shouldn't the whistle on the slider end be a clap to be consistent with the ends of (1,2,3)?
* 01:01:393 (5) - Is the extra clap needed here?
* 01:10:935 (1) - Remove the normal-sampleset on the slider end to be consistent with 00:58:504 (1) - ? Sound really weird to me now.
* 01:12:712 (1) - ^
* 01:15:379 (4) - ^ (if you think it sounds fine, you can also just add one at 01:10:935 for consistent hitsounds.)
* 01:12:379 (6,7,8) - These notes sound so empty here, maybe you could add some claps like you did at 01:05:282 (6,7,8) -

Crazy diff, but really nice! All the hitsounds suggestions could be applied to the other diffs as well if you used HS copier x_x

~star
hope it was helpful and good luck!
alacat
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alacat

appleeaterx wrote:

alacat's Insane


* Disable 'Widescreen Support', no SB. osu! should have an automatic feature to disable it when there's no SB www oops, removed.
* HP6 maybe? For a 5/6/7 spread with H/I/EX :oops: Agreed.
* I think you can try raising the AR with about 0.5. The Hard diff is already 7.6 and the Insane uses 9.0 so you could try finding something in between. I worry a bit about the AR now, because your spacing changes with 1/4 patterns in the KIAI (for example 01:15:157 (5,6) - ) are now extremely hard to read. always use AR8 with my Insane diff :p and not fit that rate in this difficulty.
* 00:04:499 (3) - Maybe you could remove the repeat and add 1/2 circle on the long white tick, so the whistle sound is actually clickable. Would be nicer to make it clickable, especially since this a really slow part. cool, fixed it!
* 00:08:720 (2) - NC this here? The tone and the overall setting of the song changes a lot. It's also in the Desperation diff, but it depends what xChippy decides to do. You should talk to him/her what NC pattern you're going to use, same goes for 00:42:276 (1,2) - break my pattern ;.;
* 00:17:387 (4) - I'd make this a triplet and 00:17:832 (1,2,3) - a reverse slider instead, so the strong bass sound at 00:17:609 (5) - won't be skipped. no change.
* 00:36:054 (5) - For some reason, this note here sounds strange here, but that's probably because you have 1/4 reverse sliders at 00:37:609 (3) - and 00:39:387 (3) - , but here you don't. I recommend to make it consistent. It's fine to me.
* 00:40:165 - (optional) The instruemtn that you are following, actually does have a sound here, so you could try mapping it, but it's all up to you o/ prefer to use 3hits + 3hits here x)
* 00:45:609 (4) - This slider and the slider at 00:47:498 (3) - are following the same sound, so I recommend you to change this one to a 1/4 repeat slider. orz you're right changed.
* 00:59:727 (7) - I think you forgot a clap here :roll: (you did add one at 01:03:726 (8) - and 01:01:949 (8) -) >.< added!
* 01:01:171 (4) - Adding an extra clap on the slider head would sound much better imo. Now this slider sounds a bit inaudible. not fit to me.

I really liked how you used the normal whistles in the last KIAI. I think it really fits the song, and the diff itself is also well done :3 I felt your modding skill is great :>
Thank you for modding ;)

http://puu.sh/d4NQt/14983d886b.zip
xChippy
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xChippy
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Squirrel wrote:

hi there! beware: screenshot spam (cause I can't explain rhythm properly)
mod from my queue
I doubt it's useful, tho.

General
  1. think about replacing the dark grey combo colour? as it's hard too see sometimes casue of the dark colour scheme of the video
    (especially the very first combo when the background's completely black) I kinda prefer this colour tho, but ppl always can disable video or skin
  2. (all of) you might want to find a consistent point where to end the last spinner/the diffs. In E/I/Desperation it's the downbeat, in N/H the blue tick before that. :n fixed
Easy
  1. hitsounds in the beginning seem to be a little to loud, consider reducing hitsound volume slightly (down to 45%?) done
  2. 00:04:276 (1) - cause there's no sound (no beat, nor vocals) on the slider track I'd prefer if you split this into circle + slider: ok
  3. 00:08:276 - why don't you add an object here? you've followed the vocals before, so the change from vocals to beat feels a little of, considering the vocals are so audiable. I think it'd provide a smoother transition if you add something here. The interval between this and the previous objects is hard to determine especially if your a beginner, and I'd like to refrain from using 1/2 therefore no 1/2 slider here o3o
  4. 00:16:720 (2,3) - the blanket is off. please >-< done
  5. 00:20:720 (2) - only short reverse slider in this diff, feels a little lost (/inconsistent), especially cause the red tick is way weaker than the other beats. how about alternating rhythm here slightly, including 00:19:387 (1) - , cause it sounds similar to the beginning, example:
    did something else
  6. 00:22:943 (1,2) - sounds a little off, I'd prefer a different rhythm -prefer the current imo the vocal on the red tick is much more significant therefore following to would be better

    might be just me, tho, not sure. ;-;
  7. 00:26:720 (1) - way too short for the easiest diff, imo. when a beginner player notices the spinner it's - most likely - already gone. you could replace it with a slider, that works better for Easy Should be fine tho so prefer to keep it as-is for now
  8. 00:45:387 (3) - sounds a little weak, might go better with the song if you remove this and put a circle at 00:45:832 instead (or a short slider til the downbeat and alternate the following objects) I don't like using 1/2 in a easy so nope ><
  9. 01:02:060 (3,1) - slider borders almost touch, which is fine to play, but it looks rather cluttered (and maybe a bit confusing to beginners). you can rotate 1 slightly or curve it differently to avoid that. lol seems fine imo, if more mention I'll change I guess
hope I could help at least a little bit, good luck! owo
Thanks! 8-)

appleeaterx

appleeaterx wrote:

Hello xChippy! from my queue

:idea: General


* Easy/alacat/Desperation have a different spinner end time than Rakuen/xxdeathx. I personally recommend ending it on the blue tick, and don't forgot to move the green line as well if you fix it. done

Easy


* 00:04:276 (1) - I don't think this slider here emphasizes the vocals the best way, since the strong vocal is on the slider end. Try this rhythm? Might not be the best, but you could use it for reference. yep did smth
[box=]

Couldn't really find anything else >_<

Desperation


* 00:04:943 (1) - There's no whistle sound here, while the stress of the vocals is here, like 00:05:832 (3) - . It's optional to remove the whistle at 00:04:721 (3) - done
* 00:08:721 (1) - I see why you added a NC here, but you didn't add one at 00:01:388 (2) - . I'd add a NC to the beginning, or just remove this one. Did @beginning
* 00:14:054 (3) - The NC should be here, because the pitch here is much higher, and the whistle indicates that. Also to keep consistent NCs (00:17:387 (6,7,1) - ) done
* 00:26:498 (1) - Add a clap from S:C1 along with the whistle? prefer the lone Normal+Finish here :/
* 00:34:498 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you could try a zig-zag pattern instead so it's a bit similar to 00:38:054 (1,2,3,4) - aight done
[box=]
* 00:39:054 (2) - This offbeat repeat slider doesn't fit well here imo. I'd have a kickslider + circle rhythm you had in the previous combo's. ( 00:33:720 (2,3) - ) I'll consider >< imo both variation play fine
* 00:43:832 (3) - A soft-whistle would fit quite well with the vocals here. this section I kinda want to focus on the drum therefore no soft whistles ><
* 00:45:387 (4) - I wonder why you used the drum-sampleset on the repeat and end only, and not on the end, unlike 00:47:498 (4) - . I'd make it consistent. uuuh o-o? It is on the end tho, but I did it like this cuz of the volume diffrences but idk maybe I'm going to put it on the whole and be consistent idk
* 00:53:832 (1,3) - It's probably just me, but I don't really like this overlap here. You could try to move it down a little. what overlap :OO
* 00:54:832 (4) - Shouldn't the whistle on the slider end be a clap to be consistent with the ends of (1,2,3)? yep
* 01:01:393 (5) - Is the extra clap needed here? doesnt sound right w/o it imo, besides there is a rather soft clap sound there tho
* 01:10:935 (1) - Remove the normal-sampleset on the slider end to be consistent with 00:58:504 (1) - ? Sound really weird to me now.
* 01:12:712 (1) - ^
* 01:15:379 (4) - ^ (if you think it sounds fine, you can also just add one at 01:10:935 for consistent hitsounds.) uuh imo as this is a different section it doesnt need to be consistent, besides I used a different hs pattern here as the music also changes :OO
* 01:12:379 (6,7,8) - These notes sound so empty here, maybe you could add some claps like you did at 01:05:282 (6,7,8) - same reason as above

Crazy diff, but really nice! All the hitsounds suggestions could be applied to the other diffs as well if you used HS copier x_x

~star
hope it was helpful and good luck!
Thanks! 8-)
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