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HHHxMMxST - Oboro [OsuMania]

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Arzenvald
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Arzenvald
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 03 Desember 2014 at 9:09:13

Artist: HHHxMMxST
Title: Oboro
Tags: sakura luminance ryu* ryu☆ pop'n music 20 fantasia mayumi morinaga starving trancer dai jubeat saucer moimoi senya rhytmin DanceEvolution ARCADE plus FASCINATION ファッシネイション REFLEC BEAT colette -Spring- ミライダガッキ FutureTomTom Ver.2 Eternalie medicine melancholy touhou
BPM: 149
Filesize: 10177kb
Play Time: 03:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Etlie's Normal - 4Key (1,93 stars, 698 notes)
  2. Hard - 4Key (3,1 stars, 1654 notes)
  3. Insanity - 4Key (4,29 stars, 2259 notes)
Download: HHHxMMxST - Oboro
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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set
4K Mapset :
// Featuring Guest Diff : Etlie's Normal by Eternalie // 10 mod
// Hard // 11 mods
// Insanity // 10 mods
lyrics
朧 「HHH×MM×ST」
Composer/Arr.: Ryu☆, Starving Trancer
Lyrics: Dai
Vocal: Mayumi Morinaga
----------------
追いかけても　追いかけても　するり指をぬける 水のよう
あなただけに　あなただけに　見つめられて漂う 星の影
夢でもつかまえて

流れる雲に思う　行き先ないこの心
いつか見た 日の明日　青い通り雨

色づいた花びら揺らす　ぬくもりも激しささえも
せつなさの裏側だけを　残していくだけの刹那

かなうのなら　かなうのなら　駆け出してゆきたい　風の中
あなただけを　あなただけを　見つめたなら羽ばたく 蝶のように
夢ならみせないで

星のない夜に密か　巡る季節を忘れて
いつかくる 日の朝を　隠す涙色

絡む指艶めく吐息　昇りつめ堕ちゆく心
ひと時のぬくもりさえも　忘れられずにまた孤独

追いかけたら　追いかけたら　ふわり消えてしまう　月の影
わたしだけに　わたしだけに　触れられたら煌く 星のように
嘘なら抱きしめて

届くのなら　届くのなら　明日さえ要らない　戻らない
離れてても　離れてても　心焦がす炎は　あなただけ

追いかけても　追いかけても　するり指をぬける 水のよう
わたしだけが　わたしだけが　時を止めた闇から　手を伸ばす

かなうのなら　かなうのなら　駆け出してゆきたい　風の中
あなただけに　あなただけに　こころ巡らすはるか 朧月

嘘でも抱きしめて
夢なら醒めないで

-----------------
Oikake te mo oikake te mo su ruri yubi o nukeru mizu no yō
anata dake ni anata dake ni mitsumerare te tadayou hoshi no kage
yume de mo tsukamae te

nagareru kumo ni omou yukisaki nai kono kokoro
itsuka mi ta hi no ashita aoi tōriame

irodui ta hanabira yurasu nukumori mo hageshi sa sae mo
setsuna sa no uragawa dake o nokoshi te iku dake no setsuna

kanau no nara kanau no nara kakedashi te yuki tai kaze no naka
anata dake o anata dake o mitsume ta nara habataku chō no yō ni
yume nara mise nai de

hoshi no nai yoru ni hisoka meguru kisetsu o wasure te
itsuka kuru hi no asa o kakusu namida shoku

karamu yubi tsuya meku toiki nobori tsume ochiyuku kokoro
hito ji no nukumori sae mo wasure rare zu ni mata kodoku

oikake tara oikake tara fuwari kie te shimau tsuki no kage
watashi dake ni watashi dake ni furerare tara kirameku hoshi no yō ni
uso nara dakishime te

todoku no nara todoku no nara ashita sae ira nai modora nai
hanarete te mo hanarete te mo kokoro kogasu honoo wa anata dake

oikake te mo oikake te mo su ruri yubi o nukeru mizu no yō
watashi dake ga watashi dake ga toki o tome ta yami kara te o nobasu

kanau no nara kanau no nara kakedashi te yuki tai kaze no naka
anata dake ni anata dake ni kokoro megurasu haruka oborozuki

uso de mo dakishime te
yume nara same nai de
Last edited by Arzenvald , edited 87 times in total.
Takane6
978 posts
Joined June 2014
Takane6
1st :D
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Hellgert
489 posts
Joined May 2012
Hellgert
HI owo

[Insane]
00:36:886 and 00:36:953 - add note
00:37:289 , 00:37:356 , 00:37:423 - ^
00:38:732 - ^
01:21:987 , 01:22:054 , 01:22:390 , 01:22:457 , 01:22:524 - ^
02:58:866 - move to 02:58:967
02:59:168 - add LN to 02:59:269
02:59:569 - add note

[Hard]
01:41:148 - move to 2

[Etile's Normal]
00:00:058 - 00:19:906 - try not add long LN in this section plus a double,it will bit to surprise some newbie,put instead note
00:58:161 - move to 3
00:58:363 - add note
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Xleonq wrote:

HI owo

[Insane]
00:36:886 and 00:36:953 - add note // oh nice catch, added.. on 00:36:920 (36920|1) -
00:37:289 , 00:37:356 , 00:37:423 - ^ // keep empty, not audible.. x_x
00:38:732 - ^ // done, additional notes added to keep consistency
01:21:987 // done // 01:22:054 , 01:22:390 , 01:22:457 , 01:22:524 - ^ // the rest keep empty, not audible.. x_x
02:58:866 - move to 02:58:967 // rearranged
02:59:168 - add LN to 02:59:269 // yup, ^ done
02:59:569 - add note

[Hard]
01:41:148 - move to 2 // ^^; silly me, that circle not supposed to be placed there.. removed..

[Etile's Normal]
i will fix this for eter.. :3
00:00:058 - 00:19:906 - try not add long LN in this section plus a double,it will bit to surprise some newbie,put instead note // keep.. :3
00:58:161 - move to 3 // done
00:58:363 - add note // done
aww nice catch.. xD thanks xleonq..
Ginshu
1,038 posts
Joined May 2014
Ginshu
M4M :v

Dont Open pls ;w;
06:39 ExUsagi: ;w; bisa mod / m4m gk?
06:39 LNP-: bisa
06:40 ExUsagi: owo
06:40 *ExUsagi is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/511087 HHHxMMxST - Oboro [Etlie's NM]]
06:40 ExUsagi: m4m or nm? :3
06:40 LNP-: ok , tpi mau selesain ini dulu , nanggung
06:40 *LNP- is editing xi - Garyou Tensei [7K EZ]
06:40 ExUsagi: ok
06:40 ExUsagi: =w=)b
06:40 ExUsagi: pro tip : save as new diffculty dari 4K, dan ubah jadi 7K
06:41 LNP-: ('-')b
06:41 LNP-: emank begitu :v
06:41 ExUsagi: \ :v / lazy mappers rules
06:42 LNP-: :v /
06:42 LNP-: cuman 7K dibuat agak berseni =w=)b
06:45 ExUsagi: =w=)b
07:12 LNP-: =w=)7
07:12 LNP-: irc mod ya ?
07:12 ExUsagi: `-`
07:12 ExUsagi: boleh.. :3
07:12 LNP-: ok
07:13 ExUsagi: kalo gw dc, post di thread aja
07:13 LNP-: ok
07:14 LNP-: 00:26:651 -  -  00:26:953 - 
07:14 LNP-: cocok begini http://puu.sh/bSGfe/a436d08519.png
07:15 ExUsagi: diff ape tuh?
07:15 *LNP- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/511089 HHHxMMxST - Oboro [Insane]]
07:15 LNP-: 00:28:262 -  - 00:28:564 -  ini juga sama
07:16 ExUsagi: bentar oy
07:16 ExUsagi: oh
07:16 ExUsagi: <3
07:17 ExUsagi: k k done
07:17 LNP-: 00:20:712 -  - 00:07:020 -  gk ikut suara piano ?
07:17 LNP-: eh kebalik ;v
07:18 ExUsagi: mulai dari situ, bikin 'transisi'
07:18 ExUsagi: atau pergeseran
07:18 LNP-: oh ok
07:19 ExUsagi: lu udah update to pending version kan? `-`
07:19 LNP-: udah
07:19 ExUsagi: x3 k k
07:19 LNP-: 00:43:665 - part ini sering bikin miss o3o
07:20 ExUsagi: `-` tapi udah pas sama pitchnya.. :"<
07:20 LNP-: iyasih o3o
07:20 LNP-: 00:56:148 -  - 00:56:551 -  tambah 1/4
07:21 ExUsagi: hmm
07:21 ExUsagi: ikutin suara 'dum dum dum' aja deh
07:21 LNP-: ok
07:22 LNP-: 01:03:396 - dilihat susah , tpi dimainkan so EZ :v /
07:22 ExUsagi: EMANG
07:22 ExUsagi: AWKAKWKAWKWAWKAWk
07:23 ExUsagi: LNnya jahat ya.. :v
07:23 LNP-: susah dapet 300 rainbow jadinya :v
07:23 ExUsagi: '-' emang sih
07:23 ExUsagi: tapi seru.. xD
07:23 LNP-: awkwkwakwa
07:23 LNP-: 01:11:853 -  - 01:12:255 -  1/4 
07:24 ExUsagi: ok
07:25 LNP-: 01:14:067 (74067|1,74168|2) - cocok nya note biasa aja
07:25 ExUsagi: nanti buat yg EtLie, kalo bisa pm si eternalie ya
07:25 ExUsagi: ooh hampir lupa
07:25 LNP-: gk bisa mod normal ;<
07:25 ExUsagi: :"<
07:26 ExUsagi: anything else?
07:26 LNP-: sabar 
07:26 LNP-: upload push
07:27 ExUsagi: awkwkkwkwkwk.. :v
07:27 LNP-: 01:14:873 -  - 01:15:477 - 
07:27 LNP-: meowmeow http://puu.sh/bSH4U/22f1202051.png
07:29 LNP-: aaa
07:30 LNP-: aaaaaaaaaaa
07:30 ExUsagi: haduh
07:30 ExUsagi: retype.. :v
07:30 LNP-: yang pussh tadi masuk ?
07:30 ExUsagi: kagak
07:30 LNP-: hue
07:31 ExUsagi: pencet arrow atas
07:31 LNP-: 01:14:873 -  - 01:15:477 - 
07:31 ExUsagi: tombol up
07:31 LNP-: MEOW ! http://puu.sh/bSH4U/22f1202051.png
07:31 ExUsagi: lol sengaja kosong
07:31 ExUsagi: itu mah suara echo
07:32 LNP-: ok
07:32 ExUsagi: buat break time pula.. `-`
07:32 LNP-: hue
07:32 LNP-: 02:14:973 -  yakin begini ?
07:33 ExUsagi: `-` insane
07:33 ExUsagi: 17va versi 4K :v
07:33 LNP-: :v
07:33 LNP-: ok
07:34 LNP-: 02:24:537 - suara piano / suara bass nya ==a?
07:34 ExUsagi: bass
07:34 LNP-: 02:24:437 - kalo bass 1/8 mulai dari sini
07:37 LNP-: o.o
07:37 ExUsagi: hooo... 1/6, 02:24:470 (144470|3) -
07:38 ExUsagi: cek lebih teliti deh, 5 suara bass
07:38 ExUsagi: http://puu.sh/bSHMT.png
07:38 LNP-:  yo wes 5 bass
07:38 ExUsagi: x3
07:38 ExUsagi: thanks udah notice sebelah situ
07:38 LNP-: ok
07:38 ExUsagi: bisa gaswat kalo gk ke check
07:39 LNP-: 02:24:739 -  nanggung nih o3o
07:39 LNP-: kasih 1/4 aja
07:39 ExUsagi: sengaja... :"<
07:39 LNP-: ok
07:39 ExUsagi: biar di isi sama si erene
07:39 LNP-: hue
07:39 LNP-: Insane = COMPLETE !
07:40 ExUsagi: xD
07:40 ExUsagi: yay
07:40 ExUsagi: <3
07:40 *LNP- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/511088 HHHxMMxST - Oboro [Hard]]
07:40 ExUsagi: `-` lu biasa tidur jam berape?
07:40 LNP-: jam 2
07:40 ExUsagi: D:
07:40 LNP-: ntar lagi mau off , nonton kartun jepun dulu
07:40 ExUsagi: gile, gw sejam / setengah jam lagi udah disuruh tidur.. hue
07:40 LNP-: ;v
07:41 LNP-: 00:28:262 - mau bikin sama kayak insane tadi ?
07:42 LNP-: 00:26:651 -  ini juga
07:42 ExUsagi: jgn, buat ngebedain hard ama insane
07:42 LNP-: ok
07:42 LNP-: 00:26:752 (26752|1) - pindah ke 1
07:42 LNP-: kemudian
07:43 LNP-: 00:26:953 (26953|2) - pindah ke 3
07:43 ExUsagi: `-`
07:43 ExUsagi: yg mana yg dipindahin ke 3?
07:43 LNP-: oh udh kugeser duluan :v
07:43 ExUsagi: kyknya keep aja deh sebelah situ
07:43 ExUsagi: :v
07:44 LNP-: 00:26:953 (26953|3) - 
07:44 LNP-: pindah ke 3
07:44 ExUsagi: hoo
07:44 ExUsagi: yup keep
07:44 ExUsagi: :3
07:44 LNP-: suara bass cocoknya note nya bersebelahan , kayak 12 23 34
07:45 ExUsagi: ho
07:45 ExUsagi: tapi kesannya berulang, apalagi di verse sebelum chorus.. :"<
07:46 LNP-: jangan pake bahasa orang kantor plis , mudeng pala ane :v
07:46 ExUsagi: =w=
07:46 LNP-: 00:33:698 -  add note
07:46 ExUsagi: kden... '-'
07:47 LNP-: 00:36:920 - add note
07:47 ExUsagi: yg pertama ok, yg ke 2belah situ fokus ke piano
07:48 ExUsagi: 00:40:141 added,, :v
07:48 ExUsagi: 00:40:141 -
07:48 LNP-: ok
07:48 LNP-: 00:40:141 - add note
07:48 LNP-: eh udh
07:48 LNP-: :v
07:48 LNP-: 00:46:584 -  add note
07:49 ExUsagi: :v added woy
07:49 LNP-: 00:46:886 -  - 00:47:289 -  ikutin piano aja
07:49 ExUsagi: wkwkwkwkwk
07:49 ExUsagi: oh sebelas situ sengaja
07:49 ExUsagi: `-` cuma nge emphasize 1/2 beat
07:49 LNP-: 11 =/=sebelah
07:49 LNP-: ok
07:49 ExUsagi: yg kata gw verse sebelum chorus
07:50 LNP-: 00:55:343 - tambah note satu lagi , suaranya GEDE!
07:51 LNP-: 00:56:551 - ini juga GEDE!
07:51 ExUsagi: semuanya jadi 3 3
07:51 ExUsagi: :v
07:51 LNP-: :v
07:52 LNP-: 01:15:477 -  tambah 1 note
07:52 ExUsagi: 01:11:450 (71450|1,71450|2) -  perlu jadi 3 3?
07:52 LNP-: gk
07:52 LNP-: yg tadi aja
07:52 ExUsagi: lol over use
07:53 LNP-: 01:12:255 (72255|2,72255|1,72457|2,72457|3,72658|2,72658|1,72859|0,72859|1) - ctrl + H ?
07:53 ExUsagi: udah cucok
07:53 LNP-: hue
07:53 ExUsagi: ikutin pitch suara vocal.. :v
07:54 LNP-: 01:15:477 -  udh ditambah 1 note ?
07:54 LNP-: nyaaaann
07:54 ExUsagi: o
07:54 LNP-: 01:18:799 - add note
07:54 LNP-: 01:25:242 - add note
07:56 LNP-: (/´；Д；｀)/
07:57 LNP-: 01:24:739 - add note
07:57 LNP-: why
07:57 LNP-: you
07:57 LNP-: OFF !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
07:58 LNP-: (~´；ω；｀)~
07:58 ExUsagi: ;w;
07:58 LNP-: 01:24:739 -  add nyote
07:59 ExUsagi: done
07:59 LNP-: 01:25:242 - add nyote di 1
07:59 ExUsagi: bisa rusak dah barang elektronik diruma gw.. ;w;
07:59 LNP-: :v
08:00 ExUsagi: oh sengaja gk pake 1/4
08:00 ExUsagi: ada LN
08:00 LNP-: ok
08:00 LNP-: 01:31:685 - add nyote
08:01 ExUsagi: =w= 1/2 only
08:01 LNP-: 01:38:128 - add nyote
08:01 LNP-: hue
08:01 ExUsagi: u know, verse b4 choru
08:01 LNP-: no
08:01 ExUsagi: *chorus.. :v
08:01 LNP-: males buka google
08:01 ExUsagi: awkwkwkwk
08:01 LNP-: :v
08:02 ExUsagi: maksudnya, sebelum bagian reff, sebelum masuk ke kiai
08:02 LNP-: kiai = tokoh agama ?
08:03 ExUsagi: =-=
08:03 LNP-: :v
08:03 LNP-: 02:24:437 -  sama juga dengan insane
08:04 ExUsagi: baru selese di perbaiki.. :v
08:05 LNP-: o3o
08:05 LNP-: 02:51:316 -  2 note aja
08:06 LNP-: 02:51:920 (171920|2,171920|0) -  pindah ke 02:52:020 - 
08:06 LNP-: eh
08:07 LNP-: 02:52:121 (172121|3,172121|1) - ini yang pindah ke 02:52:020 - 
08:07 LNP-: again (´；Д；｀)
08:07 *LNP- karaoke
08:08 LNP-: aku punya kakek,  seorang pelaut , punya senjata dibawah perut  ,
08:09 LNP-: bisa menegang , dan bisa mengerut ,
08:09 LNP-: sekali tembak rebbit jdi gendut (∩ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)⊃━☆ﾟ. * ･ ｡ﾟ
08:13 LNP-: hai
08:13 LNP-: http://puu.sh/bSJU6/de8ba5aa8b.jpg
08:14 LNP-: ok cukup sampai disini saja perjumpaan kita pada malam hari ini
08:15 ExUsagi: TwT
08:15 ExUsagi: nm?
08:15 LNP-: m4m garyou tensei
08:15 LNP-: :v
08:15 LNP-: yg 7K
08:15 ExUsagi: ok
08:15 ExUsagi: x3
08:15 LNP-:  /savelog
08:16 LNP-: ok

For NM, i mod later o3o
Aii-
357 posts
Joined May 2013
Aii-
Hello :3 Mod request via pm~

[Normal]

00:58:564 - add 1 note
01:05:007 - ^
01:08:229 - ^

01:21:920 (81920|2,82021|1,82121|0) - Cntrl + G

01:45:275 (105275|1) - move to col 1

01:46:886 (106886|1) - move to col 1

01:51:718 (111718|1) - move to col 1

02:00:980 (120980|0,121182|1) - how about change to normal note ?

02:15:477 (135477|2,135477|3) - maybe u just use 1 note .. make a same like before part o_o *Consistent

[Hard]

01:29:168 (89168|2) - move to col 1 ?

02:02:994 (122994|0) - move to col 3

02:03:296 (123296|2) - move to col 2 , or Delete o_o

02:07:222 (127222|2) - move to col 1

02:07:423 - add note to col 3

02:07:826 - add note

02:45:275 - add note plz ..

03:24:739 (204739|3) - move to col 2

[Insane]
xxx

nice map beb :3
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Aii- wrote:

Hello :3 Mod request via pm~

[Hard]

01:29:168 (89168|2) - move to col 1 ?

02:02:994 (122994|0) - move to col 3

02:03:296 (123296|2) - move to col 2 , or Delete o_o // lel that note.. moved to 02:03:396 (123396|1) -

02:07:222 (127222|2) - move to col 1

02:07:423 - add note to col 3 // keep, will maintain 2 notes on LNs part

02:07:826 - add note

02:45:275 - add note plz ..

03:24:739 (204739|3) - move to col 2 // keep.. >w<

[Insane]
xxx

nice map beb :3 // thanks beb.. >w< ahuehuehuehue
no reply means <3 thanks aii-nyan.. \(>w<)/
Ryu Sei
2,879 posts
Joined October 2013
Ryu Sei
Aaaa oboro!! GL usa!
Oya ada slot buat diff kagak?
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Ryu Sei wrote:

Aaaa oboro!! GL usa!
Oya ada slot buat diff kagak?
;w; y u alwaiz usa meh.. `-` kyknya udah penuh deh... gw mau bikin diffnya gak banyak banyak.. hue
Fubukicat
970 posts
Joined February 2012
Fubukicat
Ai sir

Aii- wrote:

Hello :3 Mod request via pm~

[Normal]

00:58:564 - add 1 note hmm not feeling it right
01:05:007 - ^ same as above
01:08:229 - ^ same as above

01:21:920 (81920|2,82021|1,82121|0) - Cntrl + G OK

01:45:275 (105275|1) - move to col 1 OK

01:46:886 (106886|1) - move to col 1 OK

01:51:718 (111718|1) - move to col 1 OK

02:00:980 (120980|0,121182|1) - how about change to normal note ? Sure

02:15:477 (135477|2,135477|3) - maybe u just use 1 note .. make a same like before part o_o *Consistent Ok :V
Ryu Sei
2,879 posts
Joined October 2013
Ryu Sei
Checking metadata only. No kudosu if that doesn't helps, cheers. actually I want to mod this but... ah I can't :/
===================
Use × instead on the title section. It should be HHH×MM×ST

Tags: replace all w/ "sakura luminance ryu* ryu☆ pop'n music 20 fantasia mayumi morinaga starving trancer dai jubeat saucer moimoi senya Eternalie"
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Ryu Sei wrote:

Checking metadata only. No kudosu if that doesn't helps, cheers. actually I want to mod this but... ah I can't :/
===================
Use × instead on the title section. It should be HHH×MM×ST

Tags: replace all w/ "sakura luminance ryu* ryu☆ pop'n music 20 fantasia mayumi morinaga starving trancer dai jubeat saucer moimoi senya Eternalie"
tags fixed, kalo title, x nya sengaja ngikutin dari map yg udah ranked, plus gw takut kalo pake karakter Unicode, pencariannya malah nambah susah... >w< thanks ryuw..

EDIT 24/11
i forgot that i can use romanised artist.. and use both unicode and non unicode.. orz
ok applied! thanks a lot ryu!
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Ryu Sei
2,879 posts
Joined October 2013
Ryu Sei
Karena saya dapet dari RemyWiki kalau title artis emang harusnya HHH×MM×ST

Tapi uty, terserah :) kenapa artis dan titel selalu tertukar aaaaa
ExVeemon
157 posts
Joined December 2011
ExVeemon
Excellent work on the Insane diff Usagi, enjoyed the LN's a lot. Easy to read too, which is good as well~
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

MasterSonic10 wrote:

Excellent work on the Insane diff Usagi, enjoyed the LN's a lot. Easy to read too, which is good as well~
lel thanks, i should quote your words on your signature in this map.. :v

MasterSonic10 wrote:

"I feel like we need more harder/super hard 4K LN maps... :^)"
Mysticalia
61 posts
Joined May 2013
Mysticalia
Mod request~

Mod~
[BPM/Offset/Timing/Setup]
  1. Seems fine~
[Etlie's Normal]
  1. 00:11:853 - Add note for drum (stronger sound, refer to 00:07:020 / 00:13:463)?
  2. 00:58:564 - Add note to emphasise cymbal / start of kiai? (refer to 02:40:041)
  3. 01:14:671 - Sounds somewhat "incomplete" without a note here - add one?
  4. 03:02:591 - Pattern break? (make one of the notes here into an LN ending at 03:04:202)
  5. 03:19:504 - Missing note / pattern break - add one?
[Hard]
  1. 00:46:484 (46484|1,46484|0,46685|0,46685|2,46886|1,46886|3,47088|2,47088|3) - Ctrl-H for some balance?
  2. 00:48:094 (48094|2,48094|1,48296|2,48296|0,48497|0,48497|1,48698|2,48698|3) - ^
  3. 00:58:463 - Missing note? (refer to 01:00:074)
  4. 00:58:866 / 01:00:477 / 01:05:309 / 01:06:920 - move a note from the blue line to emphasise the next white line (drum) instead? Seems to happen in the second and third kiais as well - possibly deliberate?
  5. (01:11:450 to 01:12:859) / (01:56:953 to 01:58:161) / (02:12:658 to 02:14:067) - make into triples? (refer to 00:55:343 / (01:40:443 to 01:42:849) - same instruments?)
  6. 02:09:034 - Missing guitar LN? (guitar does two 1/2 notes here)
  7. 02:25:141 - Really fun to play but the music is kinda fading away at this point - delete at least one?
  8. 02:59:369 / 03:05:812 - Add a note for cymbal? (Refer to 03:02:591 / 03:09:034)
  9. 03:00:980 - Not actually a cymbal in the background - take off the cymbal hitsounding? (optional)
[Insane]
  1. 00:25:745 - Maybe a double-single-triple here to emphasise the sound at 00:25:947? (00:25:947 is the same as 00:25:141 / 00:23:531 I think?)
  2. 00:37:524 - Not sure if deliberate or wrong emphasis (same point as HD mode - weird emphasis on blue line? 00:37:423 and 00:37:524 sound the same)
  3. 00:58:463 - Maybe this will link patterns better?
  4. 01:22:725 to 01:25:947 - I have a feeling that this pattern overflowed into the next phrase because of how you used 3 LNs in a row? (since this phrase is basically 8 beats, lasting for the vocal line (which starts 1.5 beats into the phrase) "itsuka kuru hi no / asa mo" (slash indicates midpoint of phrase), with the next phrase being "kakusu namida... etc etc"). Your current pattern has the first LN on the third beat of the phrase, so your LN is emphasising the 3rd, 4th, 5th, then 7th, 8th and 9th/1st beat, making it "overflow" - maybe:
    1. Either move the LNs one beat earlier so it's emphasising 2nd/3rd/4th and 6th/7th/8th beats of the phrase (recommended, as this would have the additional side-effect of emphasising the vocal too)?
    2. Or alternatively just emphasise 3rd and 4th / 7th and 8th beats of the phrase (not really recommended, taking into account the difficulty of the map (doing this would probably make this section a bit too easy for insane standards))
  5. 01:42:658 - Try this? (the gaps in the triple notes follows pitch, also the note at 01:42:960 might link with the rest of the pattern better)
  6. Again quite a few weird emphases on 1/4 lines... timing resnap error or deliberate? (e.g. 02:00:074 / 02:03:296 / 02:45:175 / 01:02:088 etc)
  7. (01:59:772 to 02:12:658) - A few weird emphases here I think? (strong white beats with only one note while the previous blue line has two notes - e.g. 02:03:296 / 02:06:517 / 02:08:128 - I'm not sure if the guitar is playing a (3/4)-(3/4)-(1/2) rhythm there. The normal notes between (02:09:739 and 02:10:242) also feel a bit strange - Maybe a note pattern similar to this might be emphasising the music more accurately? (optional - may destroy mapping style :S)
  8. 02:01:786 - Missing note? (refer to 02:02:591)
  9. 02:25:141 - Same point as HD (fading music)
  10. 02:51:014 - Missing note / pattern break? (maybe deliberate - but I don't hear anything different in the music)?
  11. 02:51:416 - Maybe make this into a normal note since I think the the... whatever that is that's playing the 1/4 LNs... doesn't start until 02:51:517?
  12. 02:58:161 - Delete one? (Sounds the same as 02:57:759 / 02:58:564)
  13. 02:58:262 - Missing a 1/4 note LN? (pattern break - maybe the fault of the triple note at 02:58:161 above)?
  14. 03:02:591 - Consistency break (refer to 02:59:369) - same instruments but 02:59:369 is a triple because of the LN - so maybe delete one from 03:02:591? (optional - since this is the last point in the whole song where that sort of thing happens I think?)
  15. 03:24:739 - Make into an LN ending at 03:24:940? I think the piano still plays at that point.
This song is so upbeat and catchy, really liked it~ :)

Good luck! :D
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Kawawa
Kawawa
hello!
i suggest u r song :) 7K INSANE, or other LV apply.

just it's timing change. (timing setup / panel)

01:00:387 - BPMx0.75 -> BPM x0.10

01:00:687 - BPM x1.1Kial -> BPM x1.0 Kial

01:19:887 -> 01:20:037 - and, BPM x1.1 Kial -> BPM x1.0
REDYUMiKA
485 posts
Joined August 2013
REDYUMiKA
...Focused ;)
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Mysticalia wrote:

Mod request~

Mod~
[BPM/Offset/Timing/Setup]
  1. Seems fine~
[Etlie's Normal]
  1. 00:11:853 - Add note for drum (stronger sound, refer to 00:07:020 / 00:13:463)?
  2. 00:58:564 - Add note to emphasise cymbal / start of kiai? (refer to 02:40:041)
  3. 01:14:671 - Sounds somewhat "incomplete" without a note here - add one?
  4. 03:02:591 - Pattern break? (make one of the notes here into an LN ending at 03:04:202)
  5. 03:19:504 - Missing note / pattern break - add one?
[Hard]
  1. 00:46:484 (46484|1,46484|0,46685|0,46685|2,46886|1,46886|3,47088|2,47088|3) - Ctrl-H for some balance? // keep not flipped, nice idea though.. :3
  2. 00:48:094 (48094|2,48094|1,48296|2,48296|0,48497|0,48497|1,48698|2,48698|3) - ^
  3. 00:58:463 - Missing note? (refer to 01:00:074) // keep..
  4. 00:58:866 / 01:00:477 / 01:05:309 / 01:06:920 - move a note from the blue line to emphasise the next white line (drum) instead? Seems to happen in the second and kiais as well - possibly deliberate? // i see, my bad.. >< but it's actually follow the synth sound, and supposed for vice versa on this beat 00:58:564 (58564|0,58866|0,59168|0,59369|1) - 10010010 10101010 10010010 10101010
  5. (01:11:450 to 01:12:859) / (01:56:953 to 01:58:161) / (02:12:658 to 02:14:067) - make into triples? (refer to 00:55:343 / (01:40:443 to 01:42:849) - same instruments?) // oh, i think those part will be fitting for some 1/4 stream, and triplets because there's an emphasize before kiai.. will consider to add later.. xD
  6. 02:09:034 - Missing guitar LN? (guitar does two 1/2 notes here) orz i forget.. done..
  7. 02:25:141 - Really fun to play but the music is kinda fading away at this point - delete at least one? // ok
  8. 02:59:369 / 03:05:812 - Add a note for cymbal? (Refer to 03:02:591 / 03:09:034) // done... >< sorry i forget (and keep the LN part not added with additional notes..)
  9. 03:00:980 - Not actually a cymbal in the background - take off the cymbal hitsounding? (optional) // oh right.. done.. :D (applied for another diffs too)
[Insane]
  1. 00:25:745 - Maybe a double-single-triple here to emphasise the sound at 00:25:947? (00:25:947 is the same as 00:25:141 / 00:23:531 I think?) // nice idea.. all done in opening part..
  2. 00:37:524 - Not sure if deliberate or wrong emphasis (same point as HD mode - weird emphasis on blue line? 00:37:423 and 00:37:524 sound the same) // vice versa thing... idk.. will consider to change if that's a really matter thing to change.. :3
  3. 00:58:463 - Maybe this will link patterns better? // puush error 522, ppy y u do diz.. (2) website is offline.. will see this later
  4. 01:22:725 to 01:25:947 - I have a feeling that this pattern overflowed into the next phrase because of how you used 3 LNs in a row? (since this phrase is basically 8 beats, lasting for the vocal line (which starts 1.5 beats into the phrase) "itsuka kuru hi no / asa mo" (slash indicates midpoint of phrase), with the next phrase being "kakusu namida... etc etc"). Your current pattern has the first LN on the third beat of the phrase, so your LN is emphasising the 3rd, 4th, 5th, then 7th, 8th and 9th/1st beat, making it "overflow" - maybe:
    1. Either move the LNs one beat earlier so it's emphasising 2nd/3rd/4th and 6th/7th/8th beats of the phrase (recommended, as this would have the additional side-effect of emphasising the vocal too)?
    2. Or alternatively just emphasise 3rd and 4th / 7th and 8th beats of the phrase (not really recommended, taking into account the difficulty of the map (doing this would probably make this section a bit too easy for insane standards))
    // actually, i want to map it as you suggested above, but i realized many peoples already got pissed off with those LNs on kiai parts, that's why i choose to follow 6 strongest piano sounds on 2nd verse, to make it feels not too repetitive as 1st verse.. reason : vice versa things again.. ^^;
  5. 01:42:658 - Try this? (the gaps in the triple notes follows pitch, also the note at 01:42:960 might link with the rest of the pattern better) // website is offline.. will see this later
  6. Again quite a few weird emphases on 1/4 lines... timing resnap error or deliberate? (e.g. 02:00:074 / 02:03:296 / 02:45:175 / 01:02:088 etc) // ^^; my bad.. hehehe.. but i wll keep it that way
  7. (01:59:772 to 02:12:658) - A few weird emphases here I think? (strong white beats with only one note while the previous blue line has two notes - e.g. 02:03:296 / 02:06:517 / 02:08:128 - I'm not sure if the guitar is playing a (3/4)-(3/4)-(1/2) rhythm there. The normal notes between <02:09:739 and 02:10:242> also feel a bit strange - Maybe a note pattern similar to this might be emphasising the music more accurately? (optional - may destroy mapping style :S) // hoo vice versa things again... also, adapting stepmania LN usage, i crop some LNs, replace them with notes, and make it a bit more simpler on that part..
  8. 02:01:786 - Missing note? (refer to 02:02:591) // :O nice catch, thanks.. :D
  9. 02:25:141 - Same point as HD (fading music etc etc) // lel i think i will keep
  10. 02:51:014 - Missing note / pattern break? (maybe deliberate - but I don't hear anything different in the music)? // ok, done.. :3
  11. 02:51:416 - Maybe make this into a normal note since I think the the... whatever that is that's playing the 1/4 LNs... doesn't start until 02:51:517? // remapped, will keep LN starts from here 02:51:316 (171316|1) -
  12. 02:58:161 - Delete one? (Sounds the same as 02:57:759 / 02:58:564) // done
  13. 02:58:262 - Missing a 1/4 note LN (pattern break - maybe the fault of the triple note at 02:58:161 above)? // keep
  14. 03:02:591 - Consistency break (refer to 02:59:369) - same instruments but 02:59:369 is a triple because of the LN - so maybe delete one from 03:02:591? (optional - since this is the last point in the whole song where that sort of thing happens I think?) // keep, yea, the last point in the whole song that supposed to be hardest, vice versa.. >w<
  15. 03:24:739 - Make into an LN ending at 03:24:940? I think the piano still plays at that point. // oh ok.. :D
This song is so upbeat and catchy, really liked it~ :) // i know, right? >w<

Good luck! :D
thank you so much, mystica.. many things to be reconsidered later, since yea, it's a worth shot to use all your mods.. >w<

KawaEE wrote:

hello!
i suggest u r song :) 7K INSANE, or other LV apply. // i won't make 7K mapset for this one.. :(

just it's timing change. (timing setup / panel)

01:00:387 - BPMx0.75 -> BPM x0.10

01:00:687 - BPM x1.1Kial -> BPM x1.0 Kial

01:19:887 -> 01:20:037 - and, BPM x1.1 Kial -> BPM x1.0 // i want to make this map clean from any speed changes, especially on full streamy parts, it's not allowed..
though it's quiet fun to play.. will consider to add some SV later.. ^^;

REDYUMiKA wrote:

...Focused ;)
hocus.. focus... >;3
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Fubukicat
970 posts
Joined February 2012
Fubukicat

Mysticalia wrote:

Mod request~

Mod~
[BPM/Offset/Timing/Setup]
  1. Seems fine~
[Etlie's Normal]
  1. 00:11:853 - Add note for drum (stronger sound, refer to 00:07:020 / 00:13:463)? Nope I don't see Louder sound at all I mapped one more note for drums and here it hasn't so i'll not add here
  2. 00:58:564 - Add note to emphasise cymbal / start of kiai? (refer to 02:40:041) Nope there is Imo too much notes already and it would only breaks newcomer , I want to make this diff Feelingfull so Adding less while keeping the Fun to da maximum :D
  3. 01:14:671 - Sounds somewhat "incomplete" without a note here - add one? Nope I don't feel this great at all , I don't feel sounds here and a LN would break my vision of it , but yup dat could be a great idea indeed
  4. 03:02:591 - Pattern break? (make one of the notes here into an LN ending at 03:04:202) Nope there is too much density here imo add would only break the flow of new comer (imo) xD
  5. 03:19:504 - Missing note / pattern break - add one?
OK added :D/d thank you


This song is so upbeat and catchy, really liked it~ :)

Good luck! :D
Thank you for Mod Really aprreciate it >w<b
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