20:26 *ProfessionalBox is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/501107 Pendulum - Propane Nightmares (Celldweller Remix)]
20:27 ProfessionalBox: pls
20:38 *HandHeldPillow is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/501107 Pendulum - Propane Nightmares (Celldweller Remix) [Heaven's Gate]]
20:42 HandHeldPillow: LOL
20:43 ProfessionalBox: xD
20:44 ProfessionalBox: Hitsoudning is pretty much all over the place so
20:44 ProfessionalBox: dont mod hitsounds xD
20:44 HandHeldPillow: kk
20:44 HandHeldPillow: 00:13:078 (5,6,7) - is confusing to read
20:44 HandHeldPillow: it throw off sightreading soo bad
20:46 ProfessionalBox: mm i can see that
20:47 HandHeldPillow: maybe use non-white combo's as it blends to the background too much
20:48 HandHeldPillow: 01:29:285 (7,1,2,3) - throws off flow a bit and it jsut confusing for sight reading again
20:49 HandHeldPillow: 01:35:319 (5,6) - just evil, keep it tho >:
20:49 HandHeldPillow: D
20:49 ProfessionalBox: xD
20:50 HandHeldPillow: 01:42:044 (2) - move to x:364 y:48
20:51 HandHeldPillow: your sliders are so smooth
20:51 HandHeldPillow: i love it
20:51 HandHeldPillow: streams* not sliders
20:51 ProfessionalBox: so my sliders suck
20:51 ProfessionalBox: ok
20:51 ProfessionalBox: ;__;
20:51 HandHeldPillow: yes
20:51 *ProfessionalBox dies
20:52 HandHeldPillow: nah they are fine
20:52 *ProfessionalBox magically comes back to life
20:52 HandHeldPillow: http://pillow.s-ul.eu/9Zm9tuNX is this a boomarang?
20:53 HandHeldPillow: trying to win over the aussy's i see
20:53 HandHeldPillow: illuminati
20:53 ProfessionalBox: LOL
20:53 ProfessionalBox: Im sorry but
20:53 ProfessionalBox: now that you know the truth
20:53 ProfessionalBox: I cant let you live
20:54 HandHeldPillow: 02:37:044 (1,2,3,4) -  more spacing inbetween these please, makes for fun jumps
20:54 HandHeldPillow: 02:41:699 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - the flow is dropped here D:
20:54 ProfessionalBox: btw if I dont say anything im making changes
20:55 ProfessionalBox: I think it flows fine ?
20:55 ProfessionalBox: Ill look further into that
20:55 HandHeldPillow: alright
20:56 HandHeldPillow: 02:41:699 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - move like http://pillow.s-ul.eu/59RdNgNd so it's closer and a bit more appealing to the eyes
20:58 HandHeldPillow: 04:17:733 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -  
20:58 HandHeldPillow: i love this
20:59 ProfessionalBox: are you a masochist?
20:59 ProfessionalBox: Like, you failed there and you loved it
20:59 ProfessionalBox: xD
20:59 HandHeldPillow: yes
21:00 ProfessionalBox: kappa
21:00 HandHeldPillow: anyway's there's your mod
21:00 HandHeldPillow: i'm gay

Yuzu- wrote:

Insomnia

kd for diff name lulz xD


General stuff~


I would advise that you disable both Letterbox in breaks and Widescreen Support. As far as I can tell you're not using any kind of storyboard so both of them aren't needed. Sure why not

That's pretty much it for general stuff.

Now, to the map itself~i'll be nazi hue I eat nazis for breakfast

00:01:699 (3) - move your tail point to (40|196). Blankets are beautiful~ Yes sir
00:03:595 (4) - You might want to consider adding some spacing to this note, since it's obviously highlighted by the vocals. How about you tried something like this? The example below emphasizes the vocal start which is fairly strong, and it keeps the spacing on 00:03:595 (4,5) with spacing on 00:03:768 (5,1) having pretty much no change. Feels good
00:04:285 (2) - This is just a personal preference but I'd go for a 1/2 slider on this one. I feel like this is the only slider in the section that completely follows the vocals and ignores the tick on 00:04:457. 00:06:009 (3) does it too but this one looks great even though it ignores the red tick because it follows the lyrics. But since it doesn't end where the lyrics does, I'd advise to place a circle at 00:06:526 and stack because since the slider doesn't follow the lyrics perfectly this circle allows for a player to enter the song's beat as rhythm again. I hope that was clear enough c: Regarding 00:04:285 (2), maybe you'd want to add a circle at 00:04:544 and cut off the slider to 1/2. It fills the vocal that you intended to cover with the long slider and it fills up the red tick. Something like this:

Or just stack it, your choice~ I like it as it is now, plays well
00:14:975 (1,2,3,4) - How about you try something like this? It kind of uses that small stream you have there to blanket 00:14:975 (1) and then 00:15:492 (4) is stacked with the tail of 00:14:630 (7). Looks neat to me~ Sure
00:16:009 (6,1) - I think you could improve your spacing increase usage here. I'd personally focus the spacing increase between 00:16:009 (6,1) even though they're 1/4 apart. It's playable because of the emphasis on the song, and while 00:15:664 (5,6) isn't necessarily wrong the attention gets a bit taken away here. 00:16:354 (1) being stacked is to me something you should avoid in such a strong note, try something like this: Did changes
00:19:802 (3,1) - fix this stack real fast, minor thing~ Stupid nazis
00:26:699 (4) - no wiggly ;w; Wigglyness applied :3
00:32:044 (3,4,5,6,7) - This set of circles is very random, I'd personally revert back to the slider pattern-like rhythm you were using, because consistency~ Yup, changed
00:35:319 (6,7,8,9) - Okay, you've been using a couple triples before, and they sound lovely, but this stream here is a bit random imo. It has no support whatsoever on the song and it doesn't feel like one should be here in the first place. I'd advise to remove 00:35:578 (9) and make it a triple again. But if you mean to keep the feeling of stream movement, you can have the triple like this:

It fits great because of the NC on 1 and strong beat on it, which makes it perfectly readable imo. Give it a try~ Changed
00:36:354 (3,4,5) - I'd prefer if you tried to fit 00:36:613 (4,5) in the rhythm before 00:36:354 (3), because you have a stream/triple before 00:35:664 (1) which brings more consistency into play, making it sound great~ Did some changes here, not sure if it is anything like you meant though xD
00:47:906 (1) - In terms of rhythm, this slider is a bit wrong because 00:48:078 is such a strong beat and covering it with a slidertail (which are called passive sliders, just to make sure you know what I mean next time I mention those) doesn't help, it should be clickable. I'd advise you to use a rhythm similar to the one I'm about to show you, it's probably the one that sounds best in this section: I have these passive slider parts put in some parts because of wanting to mix up the playability of some parts, Some of them play well but this one for example I have changed
00:53:250 (6,1,2,3) - ^Same applies to this section~
01:14:285 (1,2) - This thing needs a ctrl + g in rhythm, passive stuff.
02:05:319 (1,2) - ^
02:13:595 (1,2) - ^, I'd just advise you to check your whole difficulty for this kind of stuff c: Changed some of these, mainly those which were really unfitting
02:22:561 (4) - This needs to be a bit more rotated counter-clockwise, just to make cursor movement a bit less tight~ Sure
02:29:457 (5) - In order to improve flow a bit you should ctrl+g this, as well as 02:29:975 (7) and move 02:29:802 (6) over to somewhere like (200|240) This is great, applied!
02:33:250 (2) - In my opinion, this is a bad stack, forcing it makes 02:33:250 (2,3) a very harsh flow break. Maybe you should consider something like this:
Stacking 02:32:906 (1) instead should do the trick~ Works for me
02:47:044 (2,3) - Swapping these two with ctrl + G makes this whole section flow a bit better, so please do~ This actually makes no sense imo, completely breaks the flow :s
03:06:182 (2,3) - This pattern should actually start on 03:06:009, because of the sound it has, I'd advise you to To what xD? Kept it the same for now

Inyuschan wrote:

DnB <3 <3

General:

Seems clean for me. :o

Insomnia:

Maybe is OD too high? I would change it to OD:7. The diff itself is considered as an extra so that is why I want to have a high od
00:39:544 (7) - I've listened so many times with 25% playback rate and I'm almost sure this is overmapped. Just put a simple note on 00:39:457 - o3o Done
00:39:716 (8) - Same. This im going to keep
00:58:940 (6, 1) - You've been adding NC in this type of sliders (which start on red tick and finish on stanza). So, I'd consider adding NC here. I want the stream to begin the NC since it looks better and makes more sense in this situation
01:02:561 (5, 7) - What do you think about adding finish in these notes? Sounds good for me. Awesome
01:11:182 (1) - Why this NC here. Removed
01:14:285 (1) - Just a suggestion, but I'd add finish here too. Music increases a bit, so, will fit ok imo. Moved the finish from spinner to here
01:31:871 (8) - What about curving this slider a bit? Would make a nice blanket (or, at least, a try of it. I'm not good with blankets...) with (2). Tried something
02:03:078 (1) - Unnecessary NC. You did a similar pattern in 02:00:319 (3) - and you didn't add NC there, just in 02:00:837 (1). So, same here. Btw, was just a suggestion too; I'd do it in all cases. Fixed
02:26:009 (8, 1) - Fix this stack. Move (1) to x:275 y:114. Fixed
02:29:975 (7) - Inconsistency of NCs. You should add one here and remove this one: 02:30:837 (1). Fixed
02:35:664 (8) - Same, and remove this one: 02:36:182 (1). Fixed
02:38:423 (5) - Same, and remove this one: 02:38:940 (1) - (do it in all cases, I won't repeat it anymore). Did it in all cases I believe
02:57:906 (1) - Is it me or there is no music here? I dont want this part to slow down since it is supposed to be fast and fun
02:58:164 (2) - Same. Same here
03:20:837 (1) - Remove this NC and add it on (5). Fixed
04:56:009 (1) - Remove this NC and add it on (2). Fixed
04:56:526 (1) - Remove this NC. Fixed
05:20:664 (1) - Same as 04:56:009 (1). This I will keep since I want the patterns to be seperated by NC to make it clearer

Midge wrote:

DUDE HUUUUGE AIRSHOT LATER DOG whaa..?

[Insomnia]
first run and replay


00:09:716 (2,3) - have this continue downwards http://puu.sh/bUGzU/84b0a7df6a.jpg Sure
02:17:388 (6,1) - this'd be cool, since it's like what you had for the other ones like this http://puu.sh/bUKAD/8aa48207be.jpg Changed
02:38:423 (1,3) - i wouldn't like these stacked, move 3 over a little? Sure
02:45:578 (2,3) - same as 00:09:716 (2,3) This would be incredibly hard to put in here
03:04:630 (1) - change this to a kick slider and remove 2, fits the song more http://puu.sh/bUKPG/c8782b7c7c.jpg (if that's not readable, you could space the kick slider out more http://puu.sh/bUKT3/3d468b2fb0.jpg something like that) Changed this
03:14:544 (2,3) - don't stack? ok
04:28:940 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - confusing ;n; the fade from the 4 makes it hard to read the lip on the stream. it's cool, but off putting pretty late into the song. it's part of the difficulty though, feel free to keep or change Changed the pattern
04:56:526 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this probably won't fly. that spacing is THE combo breaker, and many (non-pro) players will bash their skulls trying to get this. i'd highly suggest a change :S Made it a bit easier


Very nicely done map, and it's well out of my modding capabilities. if you get my tf2 reference you get bonus points Thanks! Havent played tf2 for a while so I cant say that I got the reference :s

edit: wtf you updated it mid-mod >:C xD