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Nogizaka46 - Tsuki no ookisa (TV Size)

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EviLKaZi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 12 août 2018 at 23:44:27

Artist: Nogizaka46
Title: Tsuki no ookisa (TV Size)
Source: Naruto Shippuuden
Tags: Naruto Shippuuden Opening 14
BPM: 185
Filesize: 2561kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3,02 stars, 224 notes)
  2. Insane (4,33 stars, 293 notes)
  3. Normal (2,06 stars, 129 notes)
Download: Nogizaka46 - Tsuki no ookisa (TV Size)
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Im litteraly beginner in mapping . Help me improve my map / skill by Modding , Arigatooo~~!
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Insane 100 %
Hard 100%
Normal 100%
Kibbleru
irc a bit

SPOILER
21:18 Evilkazi: Im gonna submit my map
21:18 Evilkazi: I think I need a new mp3 which I can't find :O
21:19 Kibbleru: lol
21:31 Evilkazi: my map is too fkn easy like too easy to SS
21:32 Kibbleru: lol nothing wrong with that
21:32 Evilkazi: free PP
21:32 Evilkazi: LOL
21:32 *Evilkazi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/497353 Nogizaka46 - Tsuki no ookisa (TV Size)]
21:33 Evilkazi: why 4.2 stars and it's easy ?
21:34 Kibbleru: rhythm needs some work tbh
21:34 *Kibbleru is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/497353 Nogizaka46 - Tsuki no ookisa (TV Size)]
21:34 Evilkazi: it needs more than work xD
21:34 Kibbleru: and tbh idk why these notes are even there 00:00:339 (1,2,3,4,5) -
21:34 Kibbleru: song doesnt rly start ill
21:35 Kibbleru: 00:02:609 -
21:35 Kibbleru: till*
21:35 Evilkazi: :O
21:35 Kibbleru: just be careful cuz u have a lot of strong beats in the middle of sliders or just not mapped
21:35 Kibbleru: like
21:36 Kibbleru: 00:03:095 - 00:03:582 -
21:36 Kibbleru: 00:04:393 -
21:36 Kibbleru: 00:04:879 -
21:36 Evilkazi: hmmm kibbie
21:36 Kibbleru: 00:05:366 -
21:36 Kibbleru: 00:06:663 - 00:06:987 -
21:36 Kibbleru: etc
21:36 Evilkazi: 00:00:339 (1) - how the song don't start ? do you have another vers or :O ?
21:36 Kibbleru: and this pattern rly confused me 00:09:582 (4,5,6) -
21:37 Kibbleru: idk lol maybe i gotta redl
21:37 Kibbleru: that could be why thsi looks so messed up
21:37 *Kibbleru is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/497353 Nogizaka46 - Tsuki no ookisa (TV Size) [Insane]]
21:38 Kibbleru: OH
21:38 Kibbleru: i had a different mp3
21:38 Kibbleru: no wonder why the rhythm was so bad LOL
21:38 Kibbleru: k THIS is much better LOL
21:39 Evilkazi: do I have to map every white tick even if I hear nothing ?
21:39 Kibbleru: no
21:39 Kibbleru: ofc not lol
21:39 Evilkazi: 00:04:717 (4) -
21:39 Evilkazi: I can't hear anything on the white
21:40 Evilkazi: 00:04:230 (3) -
21:40 Evilkazi: here yes
21:40 Evilkazi: hmmm evrything else you said is right
21:41 Evilkazi: Im gonna edit that , thanks
21:41 Kibbleru: nono
21:41 Kibbleru: forget what i said
21:41 Kibbleru: cuz i had the wrong mp3
21:42 Kibbleru: tbh u can remove these notes 00:40:717 (1,3,5,7) -
21:42 Kibbleru: just makes it hard to play
21:43 Kibbleru: 00:49:311 (1,2) - place 1/2 slider here
21:43 Kibbleru: 00:49:636 (3) - nc shud be here on the downbeat
21:44 Evilkazi: ok
21:44 Kibbleru: 00:52:230 - i recommend this instead http://puu.sh/bsNVy/b278248422.jpg
21:44 Kibbleru: 00:55:960 (8,1) - i found this slightly hard to read
21:44 Kibbleru: just offset it a bit like so
21:44 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/bsNYf/bef9de7613.jpg
21:44 Kibbleru: looks better too im
21:44 Kibbleru: imo
21:45 Kibbleru: 00:56:933 (3,4) - although i didn't find anything wrong with this, this isn't that great of a pattern
21:45 Kibbleru: u can alternatively stack (3) to (4)'s head
21:45 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/bsO1K/d2b49ec48b.jpg
21:46 Kibbleru: u can make this jump bigger 01:11:690 (8,9) -
21:46 Kibbleru: as with this 01:12:338 (1,2) -
21:46 Kibbleru: 01:17:366 (1,2,3) - eh just space this out regularly
21:51 Evilkazi: I changed the mp3 because there was a problem in the previous , like the volume goes down
21:51 Evilkazi: save your log
21:51 Evilkazi: so you post it when I allow mods , and give kudos
21:51 Kibbleru: yeah i realized haha
21:51 Kibbleru: ok
21:51 Evilkazi: what is funny
21:51 Kibbleru: the mp3 volume going down
21:51 Evilkazi: is that I was chatting with another friend
21:52 Evilkazi: and I thought it was you
21:52 Kibbleru: oh yeah ill post log onto forum
21:52 Evilkazi: 3 AM too op for me
21:52 Kibbleru: xD
21:52 Kibbleru: k ill post log onto forum
Topic Starter
EviLKaZi

Kibbleru wrote:

irc a bit

SPOILER
21:18 Evilkazi: Im gonna submit my map
21:18 Evilkazi: I think I need a new mp3 which I can't find :O
21:19 Kibbleru: lol
21:31 Evilkazi: my map is too fkn easy like too easy to SS
21:32 Kibbleru: lol nothing wrong with that
21:32 Evilkazi: free PP
21:32 Evilkazi: LOL
21:32 *Evilkazi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/497353 Nogizaka46 - Tsuki no ookisa (TV Size)]
21:33 Evilkazi: why 4.2 stars and it's easy ?
21:34 Kibbleru: rhythm needs some work tbh
21:34 *Kibbleru is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/497353 Nogizaka46 - Tsuki no ookisa (TV Size)]
21:34 Evilkazi: it needs more than work xD
21:34 Kibbleru: and tbh idk why these notes are even there 00:00:339 (1,2,3,4,5) -
21:34 Kibbleru: song doesnt rly start ill
21:35 Kibbleru: 00:02:609 -
21:35 Kibbleru: till*
21:35 Evilkazi: :O
21:35 Kibbleru: just be careful cuz u have a lot of strong beats in the middle of sliders or just not mapped
21:35 Kibbleru: like
21:36 Kibbleru: 00:03:095 - 00:03:582 -
21:36 Kibbleru: 00:04:393 -
21:36 Kibbleru: 00:04:879 -
21:36 Evilkazi: hmmm kibbie
21:36 Kibbleru: 00:05:366 -
21:36 Kibbleru: 00:06:663 - 00:06:987 -
21:36 Kibbleru: etc
21:36 Evilkazi: 00:00:339 (1) - how the song don't start ? do you have another vers or :O ?
21:36 Kibbleru: and this pattern rly confused me 00:09:582 (4,5,6) -
21:37 Kibbleru: idk lol maybe i gotta redl
21:37 Kibbleru: that could be why thsi looks so messed up
21:37 *Kibbleru is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/497353 Nogizaka46 - Tsuki no ookisa (TV Size) [Insane]]
21:38 Kibbleru: OH
21:38 Kibbleru: i had a different mp3
21:38 Kibbleru: no wonder why the rhythm was so bad LOL
21:38 Kibbleru: k THIS is much better LOL
21:39 Evilkazi: do I have to map every white tick even if I hear nothing ?
21:39 Kibbleru: no
21:39 Kibbleru: ofc not lol
21:39 Evilkazi: 00:04:717 (4) -
21:39 Evilkazi: I can't hear anything on the white
21:40 Evilkazi: 00:04:230 (3) -
21:40 Evilkazi: here yes
21:40 Evilkazi: hmmm evrything else you said is right
21:41 Evilkazi: Im gonna edit that , thanks
21:41 Kibbleru: nono
21:41 Kibbleru: forget what i said
21:41 Kibbleru: cuz i had the wrong mp3
21:42 Kibbleru: tbh u can remove these notes 00:40:717 (1,3,5,7) -
21:42 Kibbleru: just makes it hard to play
21:43 Kibbleru: 00:49:311 (1,2) - place 1/2 slider here
21:43 Kibbleru: 00:49:636 (3) - nc shud be here on the downbeat
21:44 Evilkazi: ok
21:44 Kibbleru: 00:52:230 - i recommend this instead http://puu.sh/bsNVy/b278248422.jpg
21:44 Kibbleru: 00:55:960 (8,1) - i found this slightly hard to read
21:44 Kibbleru: just offset it a bit like so
21:44 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/bsNYf/bef9de7613.jpg
21:44 Kibbleru: looks better too im
21:44 Kibbleru: imo
21:45 Kibbleru: 00:56:933 (3,4) - although i didn't find anything wrong with this, this isn't that great of a pattern
21:45 Kibbleru: u can alternatively stack (3) to (4)'s head
21:45 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/bsO1K/d2b49ec48b.jpg
21:46 Kibbleru: u can make this jump bigger 01:11:690 (8,9) -
21:46 Kibbleru: as with this 01:12:338 (1,2) -
21:46 Kibbleru: 01:17:366 (1,2,3) - eh just space this out regularly
21:51 Evilkazi: I changed the mp3 because there was a problem in the previous , like the volume goes down
21:51 Evilkazi: save your log
21:51 Evilkazi: so you post it when I allow mods , and give kudos
21:51 Kibbleru: yeah i realized haha
21:51 Kibbleru: ok
21:51 Evilkazi: what is funny
21:51 Kibbleru: the mp3 volume going down
21:51 Evilkazi: is that I was chatting with another friend
21:52 Evilkazi: and I thought it was you
21:52 Kibbleru: oh yeah ill post log onto forum
21:52 Evilkazi: 3 AM too op for me
21:52 Kibbleru: xD
21:52 Kibbleru: k ill post log onto forum

Thanks kibbie
ego_17
lol there you get that mp3 ?
Topic Starter
EviLKaZi

ego_17 wrote:

lol there you get that mp3 ?
ego_17 huh ?
ego_17
its the same that i used for my map - i cutted it by myself//
Topic Starter
EviLKaZi

ego_17 wrote:

its the same that i used for my map - i cutted it by myself//
hmmm Im not sure about why do you think this mp3 is yours but if that isn't clear , pm me on game or out-game
ego_17
CookieYoshi
Insane
00:04:473 (3,4) - Spacing here feels odd because it's to small.
00:09:824 (4,5,6) - These could sync with the music better if you used 1/6 beat snap divisor.
01:22:520 (4,5,6) - ^
00:41:122 (8,9,10) - Spacing between these should be consistent since the music makes them feel steady.
01:04:149 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Replace the hit circles with sliders similar to sliders 7 and 8 to emphasize the accents in the music.
01:12:419 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't match the music very well. I suggest adding a circle at 1:12:744 and replacing hit circle 3 and slider 4 with a 1/1 slider.
01:24:912 (1,2) - Slider ends sound out of place. Replace each slider with a hit circle.
1:24:912 should be 187 BPM.
Topic Starter
EviLKaZi

CookieYoshi wrote:

Insane
00:04:473 (3,4) - Spacing here feels odd because it's to small.
00:09:824 (4,5,6) - These could sync with the music better if you used 1/6 beat snap divisor.
01:22:520 (4,5,6) - ^
00:41:122 (8,9,10) - Spacing between these should be consistent since the music makes them feel steady.
01:04:149 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Replace the hit circles with sliders similar to sliders 7 and 8 to emphasize the accents in the music.
01:12:419 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't match the music very well. I suggest adding a circle at 1:12:744 and replacing hit circle 3 and slider 4 with a 1/1 slider.
01:24:912 (1,2) - Slider ends sound out of place. Replace each slider with a hit circle.
1:24:912 should be 187 BPM.
Thanks for your Help ! mate :D
Meyrink
[Insane]

IRC and Teamspeak
19:42 Evilkazi: ina diff ?
19:42 Meyrink: insane
19:42 Meyrink: aji ts :3
19:44 Evilkazi: tssena chouf
19:45 Evilkazi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157612
19:46 Meyrink: 00:01:879 (4) -
19:47 Meyrink: 00:03:176 (3) -
19:48 Evilkazi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157612
19:52 Meyrink: 00:50:203 (2) -
19:59 Meyrink: 00:38:203 (2) -
20:04 Meyrink: 00:04:473 (3) -
20:05 Meyrink: 00:20:041 (5) -
20:06 Meyrink: 00:20:041 (5) -
20:07 Meyrink: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157688
20:07 Meyrink: http://puu.sh/cl59H/8741507392.jpg
20:08 Meyrink: 00:12:581 (7) -
20:09 Meyrink: puu.sh/cl5h0/e4bdd0aedd.jpg
20:09 Meyrink: http://puu.sh/cl5h0/e4bdd0aedd.jpg
20:18 Meyrink: 00:36:906 (6) -
20:18 Meyrink: 00:34:797 (2) -
20:19 Meyrink: 00:31:716 (1) -
20:25 Meyrink: 00:04:473 (3) -
20:26 Meyrink: 00:04:473 (3) -
20:31 Meyrink: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157760
20:34 Meyrink: 00:12:581 (7) -
20:39 Meyrink: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157786
20:42 Meyrink: 00:03:176 (3) -
20:47 Meyrink: 00:03:177 (3) -
20:47 Meyrink: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157802
20:48 Meyrink: 00:03:176 (3,4,1,2) -
20:48 Meyrink: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157816
20:51 Meyrink: 00:05:284 (4) -
20:52 Meyrink: http://puu.sh/cl8KI/8185c613a7.jpg
20:55 Meyrink: 00:03:176 (3) -
20:57 Evilkazi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157839
20:58 Meyrink: http://puu.sh/cl9d8/2568f7f0ca.jpg
21:09 Evilkazi: 00:05:284 (4) -
21:09 Meyrink: 00:03:662 (4) -
21:11 Meyrink: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157886
21:16 Meyrink: 00:02:365 (6) -
21:16 Evilkazi: 00:04:473 (3) -
21:18 Meyrink: 00:04:473 (3) -
21:20 Meyrink: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157926
21:21 Meyrink: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2157931
21:26 Meyrink: 00:05:446 (5) -
21:27 Meyrink: 00:05:446 (5) -
21:28 Evilkazi: 00:12:257 (5) -
21:34 Meyrink: 00:12:581 (7) -
21:34 Evilkazi: 00:04:473 (3) -
Septembre
Good flow in general

But I've a little problem here : 00:51:824 (1,2,3) - this pattern break a little the flow (mostly with hidden), swap circle 2 with circle 3 maybe (insane)

And maybe add artist and song in original language : 乃木坂46 - 月の大きさ (you're map will be more seen probably)
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