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[Emiria]
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年10月29日 at 22:34:01

Artist: Momobako & Aihara Kaori
Title: Senbonzakura
Tags: 黒うさP KurousaP 初音ミク nico douga loli asd123iii
BPM: 154
Filesize: 23472kb
Play Time: 03:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. 3i's Normal - 4Key (1.78 stars, 1031 notes)
  2. Hard - 4Key (2.94 stars, 1949 notes)
  3. Insane - 4Key (3.84 stars, 2497 notes)
Download: Momobako & Aihara Kaori - Senbonzakura
Download: Momobako & Aihara Kaori - Senbonzakura (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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BG/PV--------by Okazaki Ushio BG pixiv ID=45546600
song and video form niconico~ sm17053847
This map salute to my master. His map is really really nice
i just learn the tip of the iceberg from him.
but i try my best to make the map as good as possible
hope you love it
dont close the hitsound xDD
c36098651
wocao這歌聲其實我只是想要讓我的卵子跳跳舞
pocket-Gao

c36098651 wrote:

wocao這歌聲其實我只是想要讓我的卵子跳跳舞
托你的福,我电脑屏幕上一堆饭粒
k1suke
爷爷 图片p站id写上 不然我要被举报盗图辣111

id=45546600
Nagato
tag loli 我已经抱紧了
Crystal
:D
Mashiro-Fang
mod for HD

02:53:039 - 感觉漏个音
03:07:260 - 03:19:338 - 中间全抓人声的话感觉比较好
03:23:526 - 漏音


啥时候DB也让我抱抱大腿(XD
justhow0615
hello, DB詩人以及3i詩人

我來水個mod了

因為你們實在是太詩了,也挑不出什麼小瑕疵,所以這些建議如果不符合原來做譜的原則就無視吧 :)

column 1|2|3|4

3i's Normal
00:28:688 - add a note

00:29:468 - ^

01:34:922 (94922|1,95117|2,95312|1,95507|2,95701|0,96091|0,96481|2,96870|2) - Ctrl+H

因為01:34:533 (94533|0) - 是左起,感覺這樣比較順一點,不過如果排列考慮到音高的話就無視這個吧:3


私心希望這裡01:52:844 (112844|1,112844|3,113234|0,113234|3,113624|2,113624|3,114013|1,114013|3) -

"きっと終幕は大団円"

是01:46:611 (106611|2,106611|0,107000|0,107000|1,107390|3,107390|0,107779|2,107779|0) -

"禅定門を潜り抜けて" 的 Ctrl+H

因為旋律一樣,而相反的排列可以讓左右手有平衡的感覺

不過如果一樣有考慮到音高或是私心喜愛原本的排列就無視吧w


02:26:156 (146156|2,146351|1,146351|3) - Ctrl+H

因為02:24:598 (144598|1,144792|3,144792|2) - 和 02:25:377 (145377|2,145572|1,145572|0) - 是相反排列

所以希望有相應的關係

03:32:195 - add a note

Normal點贊 :)

先卡位,剩下的難度慢慢摸

Hard
00:08:429 (8429|1) - 建議移到|3|

00:12:714 (12714|2) - 建議移到|2|

00:13:883 (13883|2) - 建議移到|1|

以上是覺得這樣的排列會好打一點點,畢竟剛開頭,簡單一點不為過

02:28:494 - add a note 讓這邊和02:27:714 - 這邊有一樣的鍵數

03:00:052 - add a note 跟bass

水一下Hard hehe


Insane
00:57:033 - add a note 讓這邊和01:00:149 - 一樣

01:12:909 - add a note 不管對vocal對樂器這裡加一個應該是OK的

01:59:370 - add a note 或是只把01:59:273 (119273|2) - 移到這裡 01:59:370 -

讓"千本桜 夜ニ紛レ" 和 "君ノ声モ届カナイヨ"02:02:487 - 的部份打起來有類似的感覺

02:05:604 - add a note

02:11:838 - add a note

02:18:072 - add a note

02:27:909 - add a note to |1|

02:28:007 - add a note to |3|

02:28:494 - add a note 讓這邊和02:27:714 - 這邊有一樣的鍵數

03:00:052 - add a note 跟bass

很喜歡這首曲子,Insane難度打起來也很痛快 :) ,太詩
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

justhow0615 wrote:

hello, DB詩人以及3i詩人

我來水個mod了

因為你們實在是太詩了,也挑不出什麼小瑕疵,所以這些建議如果不符合原來做譜的原則就無視吧 :)

column 1|2|3|4


先卡位,剩下的難度慢慢摸

Hard
00:08:429 (8429|1) - 建議移到|3|

00:12:714 (12714|2) - 建議移到|2|

00:13:883 (13883|2) - 建議移到|1|

以上是覺得這樣的排列會好打一點點,畢竟剛開頭,簡單一點不為過

02:28:494 - add a note 讓這邊和02:27:714 - 這邊有一樣的鍵數

03:00:052 - add a note 跟bass

水一下Hard hehe


Insane
00:57:033 - add a note 讓這邊和01:00:149 - 一樣

01:12:909 - add a note 不管對vocal對樂器這裡加一個應該是OK的

01:59:370 - add a note 或是只把01:59:273 (119273|2) - 移到這裡 01:59:370 -

讓"千本桜 夜ニ紛レ" 和 "君ノ声モ届カナイヨ"02:02:487 - 的部份打起來有類似的感覺

02:05:604 - add a note

02:11:838 - add a note

02:18:072 - add a note

02:27:909 - add a note to |1|

02:28:007 - add a note to |3|

02:28:494 - add a note 讓這邊和02:27:714 - 這邊有一樣的鍵數

03:00:052 - add a note 跟bass

很喜歡這首曲子,Insane難度打起來也很痛快 :) ,太詩
fixed most
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

Mashiro-Fang wrote:

mod for HD

02:53:039 - 感觉漏个音
03:07:260 - 03:19:338 - 中间全抓人声的话感觉比较好不太好i
03:23:526 - 漏音复制错了?


啥时候DB也让我抱抱大腿(XD
ecafree2
[insane]
02:52:942 (172942|1) - 這個條晚了
02:54:208 (174208|0) - 要對吉他的話這個也用條吧
02:54:403 (174403|0,174598|0,174792|0,174987|0) - 對吉他的話我建議連起來 分段會讓我以為是人聲 然後以為多了一聲
pocket-Gao
送上渣mod :P
Normal
00:02:974 - Finsh 和 Clap 分开放吧 (我无聊凑字数哈哈→ →)
00:13:104 - add a note (个人感觉这里两个note好点,相应前后note调整下位置,使音整齐一点点)
00:18:169 - add a note (00:18:364 处的音抓了,那这里的也抓吧)
03:54:403 - add a note
Hard
00:07:649 - 和00:07:844 (7844|1,7844|0) - 感觉衔接得不是很好
00:08:429 - 同上↑
00:12:909 - |2|,其中一个note与justhow说的轨道相同吧相同吧
00:23:624 (23624|0,23721|1,23818|2,23916|1,24013|2) - 排列与00:20:507 处类似吧
00:47:000 (47000|3,47000|1,47000|2,47000|0) - 不懂为何全压 :(
01:16:221 (76221|1) - 太长♂了
01:27:520 (87520|0,87617|1,87714|2,87812|1) - 建议与前面的面条连贯摆放
01:28:688 (88688|2) - 不建议与前面的音连贯
01:40:766 (100766|2,101059|1,101156|0,101156|3,101253|1) - 打图是读图有点容易200,提示一下,大体没问题w
01:50:507 - 这里的vocaloid 可以加个短条~
03:53:624 (233624|3) - 这里换成note好点,LN音太小了
Insane
00:17:292至00:17:487处的楼梯可以尝试与00:17:585至00:17:779 相类似
00:19:046 这里仔细听可以把LN换成note (推荐连点,理由:00:22:260 (22260|3,22357|3) -
00:47:000 (47000|1,47000|3,47000|2,47000|0,47195|1) - LN有点点overnote了
02:23:721 - 加note,相应02:23:429 (143429|1,143526|2,143624|0) - 调整下吧~
02:37:844 (157844|3) - 不建议有
02:42:325 (162325|1,162520|1) - 整合成一条LN吧
02:42:714 - 这里开始hard是面条...为何insane不也来面条呢 :?:
03:19:338 至03:19:727 双note对拍如何(→ →我在鬼畜思想中....)
以上是我的渣mod,别黑我.... :(
萝莉音不断洗我脑啊hhh
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

pocket-Gao wrote:

送上渣mod :P

Hard
00:07:649 - 和00:07:844 (7844|1,7844|0) - 感觉衔接得不是很好
00:08:429 - 同上↑
00:12:909 - |2|,其中一个note与justhow说的轨道相同吧相同吧这部分重新排版 原来没仔细排
00:23:624 (23624|0,23721|1,23818|2,23916|1,24013|2) - 排列与00:20:507 处类似吧
00:47:000 (47000|3,47000|1,47000|2,47000|0) - 不懂为何全压 :(
01:16:221 (76221|1) - 太长♂了修改了排列
01:27:520 (87520|0,87617|1,87714|2,87812|1) - 建议与前面的面条连贯摆放
01:28:688 (88688|2) - 不建议与前面的音连贯
01:40:766 (100766|2,101059|1,101156|0,101156|3,101253|1) - 打图是读图有点容易200,提示一下,大体没问题w
01:50:507 - 这里的vocaloid 可以加个短条~
03:53:624 (233624|3) - 这里换成note好点,LN音太小了
Insane
00:17:292至00:17:487处的楼梯可以尝试与00:17:585至00:17:779 相类似
00:19:046 这里仔细听可以把LN换成note (推荐连点,理由:00:22:260 (22260|3,22357|3) - 这里没准备取鼓 我这里的LN是配合人声写的
00:47:000 (47000|1,47000|3,47000|2,47000|0,47195|1) - LN有点点overnote了LN vocal
02:23:721 - 加note,相应02:23:429 (143429|1,143526|2,143624|0) - 调整下吧~
02:37:844 (157844|3) - 不建议有
02:42:325 (162325|1,162520|1) - 整合成一条LN吧可以
02:42:714 - 这里开始hard是面条...为何insane不也来面条呢 :?: 用了面条。就太那啥 原来是用的,,但是太难了 就改回来了
03:19:338 至03:19:727 双note对拍如何(→ →我在鬼畜思想中....)双拍砖不是很必要
以上是我的渣mod,别黑我.... :(
萝莉音不断洗我脑啊hhh
hokin1995
lolicon_db 8-) 8-)
shionelove
meow
column 1234

[3i's Normal]
00:19:727 (19727|1,19922|0,20117|1,20117|2,20312|3,20507|2) -
i like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2057720(hi!=2chords)
to 00:30:247
00:36:481 (36481|3) - add?
00:49:922 - add 2?
01:43:494 (103494|2) - move to 2
03:16:611 - add 1
03:32:585 to 03:54:403 -^^^^^
03:58:591 (238591|2) - move to 03:58:688
this is unclear vocal part,so my and your rhythm is right.So i think my rhythm is better
[Hard]
00:17:974 (17974|1,18072|2,18169|1) - 1/6
00:49:338 (49338|2,49403|1,49468|0,49533|1,49598|2,49662|3) - 1/4
02:05:507 (125507|2,125701|1) - if this following vocal,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061015
02:39:890 (159890|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061032
03:35:117 (215117|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061036 ?
03:53:818 (233818|0,233916|1) - 1/6
03:58:591 (238591|0,238591|3) - same Normal thing~
[Insane]
00:09:403 (9403|3,9500|2,9598|3) - 1/6
00:17:974 (17974|1,18072|2,18169|1) - 1/6
00:21:870 (21870|3,21968|1) - 1/6
00:49:338 (49338|2,49403|1) - 1/4
00:55:182 (55182|2,55182|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061111 ?(opinion)
01:58:688 (118688|3,118786|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061117 ?(soi+ya!)
02:05:507 (125507|2,125701|1) - same Hard thing
02:39:890 (159890|2,159922|1,160052|1,160117|2) - ^
03:35:117 (215117|2,215214|1) - 1/6
03:58:591 (238591|0,238591|3) - same Normal thing~

がんばってめおう
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

hutunohito wrote:

meow
column 1234


[Hard]
00:17:974 (17974|1,18072|2,18169|1) - 1/6
00:49:338 (49338|2,49403|1,49468|0,49533|1,49598|2,49662|3) - 1/4
02:05:507 (125507|2,125701|1) - if this following vocal,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061015
02:39:890 (159890|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061032
03:35:117 (215117|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061036 ?
03:53:818 (233818|0,233916|1) - 1/6
03:58:591 (238591|0,238591|3) - same Normal thing~
[Insane]
00:09:403 (9403|3,9500|2,9598|3) - 1/6
00:17:974 (17974|1,18072|2,18169|1) - 1/6
00:21:870 (21870|3,21968|1) - 1/6
00:49:338 (49338|2,49403|1) - 1/4
00:55:182 (55182|2,55182|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061111 ?(opinion)
01:58:688 (118688|3,118786|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2061117 ?(soi+ya!)
02:05:507 (125507|2,125701|1) - same Hard thing
02:39:890 (159890|2,159922|1,160052|1,160117|2) - ^
03:35:117 (215117|2,215214|1) - 1/6
03:58:591 (238591|0,238591|3) - same Normal thing~

がんばってめおう
fixed most thanks
asd123iii

justhow0615 wrote:

hello, DB詩人以及3i詩人

我來水個mod了

因為你們實在是太詩了,也挑不出什麼小瑕疵,所以這些建議如果不符合原來做譜的原則就無視吧 :)

column 1|2|3|4

00:28:688 - add a note

00:29:468 - ^ 這邊不加 加了要連後面一起...

01:34:922 (94922|1,95117|2,95312|1,95507|2,95701|0,96091|0,96481|2,96870|2) - Ctrl+H

因為01:34:533 (94533|0) - 是左起,感覺這樣比較順一點,不過如果排列考慮到音高的話就無視這個吧:3 移了01:34:533 -

私心希望這裡01:52:844 (112844|1,112844|3,113234|0,113234|3,113624|2,113624|3,114013|1,114013|3) -

"きっと終幕は大団円"

是01:46:611 (106611|2,106611|0,107000|0,107000|1,107390|3,107390|0,107779|2,107779|0) -

"禅定門を潜り抜けて" 的 Ctrl+H

因為旋律一樣,而相反的排列可以讓左右手有平衡的感覺

不過如果一樣有考慮到音高或是私心喜愛原本的排列就無視吧w OK


02:26:156 (146156|2,146351|1,146351|3) - Ctrl+H

因為02:24:598 (144598|1,144792|3,144792|2) - 和 02:25:377 (145377|2,145572|1,145572|0) - 是相反排列

所以希望有相應的關係 OK

03:32:195 - add a note OK

Normal點贊 :)

pocket-Gao wrote:

送上渣mod :P

00:02:974 - Finsh 和 Clap 分开放吧 (我无聊凑字数哈哈→ →)
00:13:104 - add a note (个人感觉这里两个note好点,相应前后note调整下位置,使音整齐一点点)OK
00:18:169 - add a note (00:18:364 处的音抓了,那这里的也抓吧) No
03:54:403 - add a note No

hutunohito wrote:

meow
column 1234

[3i's Normal]
00:19:727 (19727|1,19922|0,20117|1,20117|2,20312|3,20507|2) -
i like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2057720(hi!=2chords)
to 00:30:247
00:36:481 (36481|3) - add?
00:49:922 - add 2?
01:43:494 (103494|2) - move to 2
03:16:611 - add 1
03:32:585 to 03:54:403 -^^^^^
03:58:591 (238591|2) - move to 03:58:688 ok
this is unclear vocal part,so my and your rhythm is right.So i think my rhythm is better
がんばってめおう
Thanks, guys :D

http://puu.sh/bJr3Q/a1947c0b7f.rar
richardfeder
All are suggestions only
asd
00:18:948 (18948|2,19143|3) - delete and add at 00:19:338 (19338|0) - this is the easiest diff and stressing on heavy beat instead of other minor things is recommended. 强调重音 其他地方可以简化的就没必要写出来了

00:18:948 (18948|2,19143|1,19143|3,19338|2,19338|0) - this is completely the reverse version of ^... still I would recommend you to delete 00:19:143 (19143|3) -

00:23:234 (23234|2) - ...?这些...写法跟前面不统一而且我没有听出来有什么需要double强调的音 我觉得这样还不如腾出点空间写一写1/4多点变化 我觉得这几个double有些莫名 尤其到后面重beat轻beat都分不开了完全是按节拍double

00:33:364 (33364|2,33364|0) - 00:34:922 (34922|1,34922|3) - why are they double? shouldn't double only occur in the case that crash is presented? How you map 00:36:481 (36481|3) - is clearly conflict with those doubles and I do believe that one note is fairly enough

00:39:598 (39598|2,39598|0) - ^一样的 我不是很理解问什么到双柏县的就double起来了

00:41:935 (41935|0,42325|2) - change to normal notes

00:50:896 (50896|1,50896|2,51286|3,51286|2,51675|0,51675|1) - same awkward doubles ^ refer to 00:45:831 (45831|1,46221|1,46611|1) -

00:52:844 (52844|3,52844|1,53234|2,53234|0) - ^
00:53:624 (53624|2,53624|3,53818|0,53818|1) - 这里还可以理解 上面感觉莫名

why chart becomes extremely plain when the song enter its climax...

01:32:195 (92195|2,92195|0,92390|3,92390|1,92585|2) - ^ still same issue heavy beat is dismissed while you spend notes on 01:32:195 (92195|0,92390|1) - which is not understandable

The repeated section shares the same issue that I pointed out above please check on your own

03:13:494 (193494|0) - 03:13:688 (193688|0) - add this obviously deserve notes

03:14:273 (194273|3,194662|1,195052|1,195442|2,195831|2,196221|0) - 这些跟的是什么...如果是鼓的话为什么在人声停的时候也停了
我觉得写的时候可能有点欠缺考虑 感觉有很多地方写的有些随便而且不统一 不好意思我没有时间从头到尾都看

Hard
00:00:442 (442|0,539|1) - unsnap

00:18:169 (18169|0,18364|1) - move right by one column
00:18:753 (18753|0) - delete

00:21:675 (21675|1) - should be double according to your earlier pattern

00:31:026 (31026|3,31221|2) - I prefer to combine them into one LN at column 3

00:56:351 (56351|0,56448|1,56546|2,56643|3) - ???

01:16:026 - 01:16:124 - missing piano

01:27:520 (87520|0,87617|1,87714|2,87812|1) - 可能只是我个人不是很喜欢突然插鼓进来

01:32:779 (92779|1) - delete unnecessary imo

01:33:169 (93169|3,93169|0,93364|1,93364|2,93559|0,93559|3) - ...? 这个条后点...我觉得没有repeat的东西或者感觉啊 这个感觉莫名

01:38:331 (98331|2) - no sound

01:52:844 (112844|3,112844|1) - triple?

02:05:507 (125507|3,125701|2,125896|1) - ? piano clearly don't flow like this and if these are vocal notes then they should be unsnapped(02:05:604 - ). I don't quite get your idea here

02:26:935 (146935|0) - -> 02:26:156 - 02:24:598 - ect.. I thought they are the same drum

02:40:036 (160036|3) - missing a piano

02:42:520 (162520|1) - should start at 02:42:325 -

02:46:805 (166805|2) - add a note

02:49:143 (169143|0,169240|1,169338|2,169922|0,170020|1,170117|2) - 这种..其实是1/6不过算了吧...我觉得就这样了

02:52:942 (172942|1,173137|2) - unsnap 错位了啊整个应该往上1/4条子是红线开始的

03:11:935 (191935|2) - ?delete

03:12:520 (192520|1) - add
03:12:909 (192909|1) - add piano

03:43:494 (223494|0) - add note for crash..

03:44:273 (224273|3,224273|1,224468|0,224468|2) - I thought 1/1 LN is far more logic...
看来做到最后是醉了 这pattern已经跟insane没啥分别了

Insane
00:00:442 (442|0,539|1) - unsnap

02:39:208 (159208|1,159305|1) - wrong snap

02:39:987 (159987|3,160085|1) - same as hard
这个diff摸不动..
sorry for the delay. good luck
Topic Starter
[Emiria]

richardfeder wrote:

All are suggestions only

Hard
00:00:442 (442|0,539|1) - unsnap

00:18:169 (18169|0,18364|1) - move right by one column
00:18:753 (18753|0) - delete

00:21:675 (21675|1) - should be double according to your earlier pattern

00:31:026 (31026|3,31221|2) - I prefer to combine them into one LN at column 3

00:56:351 (56351|0,56448|1,56546|2,56643|3) - ???

01:16:026 - 01:16:124 - missing piano

01:27:520 (87520|0,87617|1,87714|2,87812|1) - 可能只是我个人不是很喜欢突然插鼓进来

01:32:779 (92779|1) - delete unnecessary imo

01:33:169 (93169|3,93169|0,93364|1,93364|2,93559|0,93559|3) - ...? 这个条后点...我觉得没有repeat的东西或者感觉啊 这个感觉莫名这里我有点半意识流 其实这边是有一个鼓的。大体上没有抓音的问题

01:38:331 (98331|2) - no sound

01:52:844 (112844|3,112844|1) - triple?

02:05:507 (125507|3,125701|2,125896|1) - ? piano clearly don't flow like this and if these are vocal notes then they should be unsnapped(02:05:604 - ). I don't quite get your idea here

02:26:935 (146935|0) - -> 02:26:156 - 02:24:598 - ect.. I thought they are the same drumyes

02:40:036 (160036|3) - missing a piano

02:42:520 (162520|1) - should start at 02:42:325 -

02:46:805 (166805|2) - add a note

02:49:143 (169143|0,169240|1,169338|2,169922|0,170020|1,170117|2) - 这种..其实是1/6不过算了吧...我觉得就这样了

02:52:942 (172942|1,173137|2) - unsnap 错位了啊整个应该往上1/4条子是红线开始的

03:11:935 (191935|2) - ?delete

03:12:520 (192520|1) - add
03:12:909 (192909|1) - add piano

03:43:494 (223494|0) - add note for crash..

03:44:273 (224273|3,224273|1,224468|0,224468|2) - I thought 1/1 LN is far more logic...
看来做到最后是醉了 这pattern已经跟insane没啥分别了最后一部分好像都差不多。。一样也么啥问题吧 xD 最后的一部分是高潮部分 我所以加上了难度了 看上去还是和IN有区别的。

Insane
00:00:442 (442|0,539|1) - unsnap

02:39:208 (159208|1,159305|1) - wrong snap

02:39:987 (159987|3,160085|1) - same as hard
这个diff摸不动..
sorry for the delay. good luck
其他都fix了
asd123iii

richardfeder wrote:

All are suggestions only
asd
00:18:948 (18948|2,19143|3) - delete and add at 00:19:338 (19338|0) - this is the easiest diff and stressing on heavy beat instead of other minor things is recommended. 强调重音 其他地方可以简化的就没必要写出来了

00:18:948 (18948|2,19143|1,19143|3,19338|2,19338|0) - this is completely the reverse version of ^... still I would recommend you to delete 00:19:143 (19143|3) -

00:23:234 (23234|2) - ...?这些...写法跟前面不统一而且我没有听出来有什么需要double强调的音 我觉得这样还不如腾出点空间写一写1/4多点变化 我觉得这几个double有些莫名 尤其到后面重beat轻beat都分不开了完全是按节拍double

00:33:364 (33364|2,33364|0) - 00:34:922 (34922|1,34922|3) - why are they double? shouldn't double only occur in the case that crash is presented? How you map 00:36:481 (36481|3) - is clearly conflict with those doubles and I do believe that one note is fairly enough

00:39:598 (39598|2,39598|0) - ^一样的 我不是很理解问什么到双柏县的就double起来了

00:41:935 (41935|0,42325|2) - change to normal notes

00:50:896 (50896|1,50896|2,51286|3,51286|2,51675|0,51675|1) - same awkward doubles ^ refer to 00:45:831 (45831|1,46221|1,46611|1) -

00:52:844 (52844|3,52844|1,53234|2,53234|0) - ^
00:53:624 (53624|2,53624|3,53818|0,53818|1) - 这里还可以理解 上面感觉莫名

why chart becomes extremely plain when the song enter its climax...

01:32:195 (92195|2,92195|0,92390|3,92390|1,92585|2) - ^ still same issue heavy beat is dismissed while you spend notes on 01:32:195 (92195|0,92390|1) - which is not understandable

The repeated section shares the same issue that I pointed out above please check on your own

03:13:494 (193494|0) - 03:13:688 (193688|0) - add this obviously deserve notes

03:14:273 (194273|3,194662|1,195052|1,195442|2,195831|2,196221|0) - 这些跟的是什么...如果是鼓的话为什么在人声停的时候也停了
我觉得写的时候可能有点欠缺考虑 感觉有很多地方写的有些随便而且不统一 不好意思我没有时间从头到尾都看
圖太蠢真是對不起了

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