This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年10月21日 at 下午 11:56:32

Artist: Afilia Saga
Title: S.M.L (TV size ver.)
Source: 俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
Tags: Noucome Opening PuttyoU -Yuzuriha-inori- Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Lovecome o Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru My Mental Choices are Completely Interfering with my School Romantic Comedy
BPM: 200
Filesize: 10958kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.66 stars, 98 notes)
2. Insane (4.74 stars, 355 notes)
3. Normal (2.16 stars, 145 notes)
4. PU's Hard (3.56 stars, 280 notes)
5. Yuzuriha's Insane (4.69 stars, 411 notes)

Download: Afilia Saga - S.M.L (TV size ver.)
Download: Afilia Saga - S.M.L (TV size ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy by Chaoslitz
Normal by Chaoslitz
PU's Hard by PuttyoU
Yuzuhira's Insane by -Yuzuriha-inori-
Insane by Chaoslitz

My first Ranked beatmap >w<

Sorry for not modding Insane but I still can't play insane so I don't really know how to make a good insane or how to mod it

I hope my mod was helpful

Good Luck

nadapan wrote:

[General]

1. The offset is 00:00:366

[Easy]

1. 00:02:704 (1) Try to avoid making too many slider of that kind. It's a bit boring to play if there's to many sliders are like that (1-3 is enough)
2. 00:32:704 (2) The end of the slider is outside the screen.

Sorry for not modding Insane but I still can't play insane so I don't really know how to make a good insane or how to mod it

I hope my mod was helpful

Good Luck

Thanks :3

you're welcome :3

I just noticed that it's confusing to have the notes on 00:33:936 (3,4,5,6) under 00:32:736 (2) I played the same part around 3-4 times to be able to hit all of them without missing a note or get a combo break .__.

nadapan wrote:

I just noticed that it's confusing to have the notes on 00:33:936 (3,4,5,6) under 00:32:736 (2) I played the same part around 3-4 times to be able to hit all of them without missing a note or get a combo break .__.

Thanks that I have fixed it.

OK , little modding start

[General]

[Insane]

If you have question.please call me
Good luck

Hi from my queue
Confession: I've stalked your profile for your top ranks since you were 9k rank (and only ss'd hards) o-o grats on 2k lol /me runs

[General]
Use this in Source: Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Lovecome o Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru (the tv sizes use romanized while full ver uses japanese title so i'm honestly not sure lol)
Also remove choaslitz since your name is already under creator
maybe add this in tags too?: My Mental Choices are Completely Interfering with my School Romantic Comedy

Kiai times are inconsistent with the diffs. end 2nd kiai here for insane: 00:57:936

I will only repeat the same thing once**
[Easy]
00:02:736 (1) - wave sliders look better like this http://puu.sh/bnxOY/e65056b98b.jpg
00:03:636 (2,3) - you shouldnt stack in easy. and u might want to place at 00:03:936 - instead cuz the drums dont start until then
00:05:136 (2) - very tiny overlap with 00:03:936 (2) - for example, avoid them// also stack.
00:06:336 (3,4) - move it so its like 4 blankets 3 maybe? o-o http://puu.sh/bny14/aa9126f81a.jpg
00:08:736 (1,2,3) - suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/bny8x/687ee1646c.jpg
00:09:936 (1) - shape can be improved like i said earlier
00:18:336 (2) - overlap looks bad
00:20:436 (2,3) - blanket is off
00:25:536 (4) - end 00:26:136 please
00:27:336 - a big note you shouldn't ignore. use this instead http://puu.sh/bnyjp/c4b2b4e2a0.jpg
00:30:336 (2) - 1+ reverse is not recommended
00:31:536 (1) - you can blanket a lot better http://puu.sh/bnyqL/e792af8769.jpg
00:32:736 (2) - 00:30:336 (2) - stack
00:33:936 (3,4,5,6) - 1. you shouldn't stack. 2. there is no spacing here, and since its pretty it makes this section boring to play
00:36:336 (1) - easys are really strict on spinners. you should have at least 2-3 beats after a spinner after easy. maybe u can just end at 00:37:536 ?
00:40:536 (3,1) - arugh blanket
00:53:136 (3) - same as 00:27:336
01:12:336 (1) - doesnt really flow well
01:26:736 (1) - end 01:29:136 so there isnt music still playing after the spinner is over

things to look for: blankets, overlaps, stacks and some rhythm

[Insane]
00:02:436 (1) - remove new combo, nc this instead 00:02:736 (5) -
00:03:786 (1,2) - remove on 1, nc on 2 (you want nc's on beginning of the measure, the big white ticks)
00:07:236 (4) - try ctrl+g on this
00:09:636 (1) - it feels odd since this is the only place where you have a 3/4 slider pattern, u can add more in other places lol
00:13:236 (4,5) - ctrl+g
00:16:836 (6) - dont stack
00:18:636 (8) - 2 circles instead of a slider. slider ends dont really have much emphasis
00:23:586 (2) - dont stack
00:26:586 (5) - ^ i guess its kinda personal preference tho?
00:26:736 (1,2) - repeats here feel eh
00:30:336 (5,6,7,8) - no spacing = boring
00:32:736 (1,2,3) - rhythm is eh. try this http://puu.sh/bnzg7/2f2a8bc158.jpg
00:37:536 (11) - nc
00:45:936 (1,2) - blanket
00:46:686 00:46:761 - unused words o-o
00:47:436 (2,3,4,5) - replace with 2 sliders (random pattern i came up on the spot) http://puu.sh/bnzsZ/d8b79db518.jpg
00:51:636 (1,2,3,4) - try this (1 and 3 is stacked, 4 blankets 3) 00:55:386 - put something here
00:56:586 - ^
01:06:186 (5) - u should put a bit closer cuz spacing its quite big
01:26:736 (1) - same as easy

look for basically the same things as easy: rhythm, blankets and spacing
good luck!

Hi~
Hard diff　finished.
Please add your maps folder.
http://puu.sh/bnBK5/31f9291ab3.zip

Gaia wrote:

Hi from my queue
Confession: I've stalked your profile for your top ranks since you were 9k rank (and only ss'd hards) o-o grats on 2k lol /me runs

[General]
Use this in Source: Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Lovecome o Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru (the tv sizes use romanized while full ver uses japanese title so i'm honestly not sure lol)
Also remove choaslitz since your name is already under creator
maybe add this in tags too?: My Mental Choices are Completely Interfering with my School Romantic Comedy

Kiai times are inconsistent with the diffs. end 2nd kiai here for insane: 00:57:936

I will only repeat the same thing once**
[Easy]
00:02:736 (1) - wave sliders look better like this http://puu.sh/bnxOY/e65056b98b.jpg
00:03:636 (2,3) - you shouldnt stack in easy. and u might want to place at 00:03:936 - instead cuz the drums dont start until then
00:05:136 (2) - very tiny overlap with 00:03:936 (2) - for example, avoid them// also stack.
00:06:336 (3,4) - move it so its like 4 blankets 3 maybe? o-o http://puu.sh/bny14/aa9126f81a.jpg
00:08:736 (1,2,3) - suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/bny8x/687ee1646c.jpg
00:09:936 (1) - shape can be improved like i said earlier
00:18:336 (2) - overlap looks bad
00:20:436 (2,3) - blanket is off
00:25:536 (4) - end 00:26:136 please
00:27:336 - a big note you shouldn't ignore. use this instead http://puu.sh/bnyjp/c4b2b4e2a0.jpg
00:30:336 (2) - 1+ reverse is not recommended
00:31:536 (1) - you can blanket a lot better http://puu.sh/bnyqL/e792af8769.jpg
00:32:736 (2) - 00:30:336 (2) - stack
00:33:936 (3,4,5,6) - 1. you shouldn't stack. 2. there is no spacing here, and since its pretty it makes this section boring to play
00:36:336 (1) - easys are really strict on spinners. you should have at least 2-3 beats after a spinner after easy. maybe u can just end at 00:37:536 ?
00:40:536 (3,1) - arugh blanket
00:53:136 (3) - same as 00:27:336
01:12:336 (1) - doesnt really flow well
01:26:736 (1) - end 01:29:136 so there isnt music still playing after the spinner is over

things to look for: blankets, overlaps, stacks and some rhythm

[Insane]
00:02:436 (1) - remove new combo, nc this instead 00:02:736 (5) -
00:03:786 (1,2) - remove on 1, nc on 2 (you want nc's on beginning of the measure, the big white ticks)
00:07:236 (4) - try ctrl+g on this
00:09:636 (1) - it feels odd since this is the only place where you have a 3/4 slider pattern, u can add more in other places lol
00:13:236 (4,5) - ctrl+g
00:16:836 (6) - dont stack
00:18:636 (8) - 2 circles instead of a slider. slider ends dont really have much emphasis
00:23:586 (2) - dont stack
00:26:586 (5) - ^ i guess its kinda personal preference tho?
00:26:736 (1,2) - repeats here feel eh
00:30:336 (5,6,7,8) - no spacing = boring
00:32:736 (1,2,3) - rhythm is eh. try this http://puu.sh/bnzg7/2f2a8bc158.jpg
00:37:536 (11) - nc
00:45:936 (1,2) - blanket
00:46:686 00:46:761 - unused words o-o
00:47:436 (2,3,4,5) - replace with 2 sliders (random pattern i came up on the spot) http://puu.sh/bnzsZ/d8b79db518.jpg
00:51:636 (1,2,3,4) - try this (1 and 3 is stacked, 4 blankets 3)

SPOILER

00:55:386 - put something here
00:56:586 - ^
01:06:186 (5) - u should put a bit closer cuz spacing its quite big
01:26:736 (1) - same as easy

look for basically the same things as easy: rhythm, blankets and spacing
good luck!

Thanks ;D

PuttyoU wrote:

Hi~
Hard diff　finished.
Please add your maps folder.
http://puu.sh/bnBK5/31f9291ab3.zip

Added :3

back for a recheck, just real quick
no kds
no kds
i said it twice

[easy]
edit: sry forgot this but it's important
check your AIMod (ctrl+shift+a) and fix all your distance issues.
00:02:736 (1) - yeah you've got the right idea but you want the line to be parallel
00:03:936 (3) - rhythm wise this section still very awk
00:08:886 (1,2,3) - sorry this doesnt flow that well lol
00:14:736 (1,2) - things like these u can blanket
00:17:136 (1,2) - it looks alright but the blanketing can be improved. put circles around to use their approach circles as a guide. you might want to take off grid snap if u have to
00:25:536 (4) - doesn't flow well.. and actually doesn't look good either. you want to try to make them on 1 curve, or maybe just blanket it
00:28:236 (2) - doesnt flow well, move up a bit more

nice blanket patterns, but overall can be improved. look for flow and rhythms too

[insane]
i dont see my patterns being used ;w;
yeah same as easy basically work on your rhythms and look for good flow. cuz yea a map with good flow is pretty much like halfway to a perf map

good luck

that bg tho// is that season 2 or what lol

Gaia wrote:

back for a recheck, just real quick
no kds
no kds
i said it twice

[easy]
edit: sry forgot this but it's important
check your AIMod (ctrl+shift+a) and fix all your distance issues.

SPOILER

00:02:736 (1) - yeah you've got the right idea but you want the line to be parallel

also make sure the line goes through your slider tick for a balanced slider

00:03:936 (3) - rhythm wise this section still very awk
00:08:886 (1,2,3) - sorry this doesnt flow that well lol

did i give u this last night? lol if i did then my bad.. this flows much better

00:14:736 (1,2) - things like these u can blanket
00:17:136 (1,2) - it looks alright but the blanketing can be improved. put circles around to use their approach circles as a guide. you might want to take off grid snap if u have to

what you have

see? so much nicer!

00:25:536 (4) - doesn't flow well.. and actually doesn't look good either. you want to try to make them on 1 curve, or maybe just blanket it

bleh idrk

00:28:236 (2) - doesnt flow well, move up a bit more

flowflow

nice blanket patterns, but overall can be improved. look for flow and rhythms too

[insane]
i dont see my patterns being used ;w;
yeah same as easy basically work on your rhythms and look for good flow. cuz yea a map with good flow is pretty much like halfway to a perf map

good luck

that bg tho// is that season 2 or what lol

Done:3
This a cover page for the 2nd novel instead of the anime

Hey, from your M4M queue, my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/210248
[easy]
00:00:336 (1,2) - Rotate by 9 Clockwise, looks cleaner ^^
00:16:836 (3) - Move to x:328 y:188,it fits the curve slider.
00:22:236 - This blank space sounds wrong, maybe try to add a slider ?
00:24:336 (3,4) - Improve blanket.
00:47:136 (4) - I suggest 2 symmetrical slider instead of this, this type of slider is not recommanded for Easy.
00:25:536 (4) - doesn't flow well.. and actually doesn't look good either. you want to try to make them on 1 curve, or maybe just blanket it
Overall:
I think it can still be improved (flow etc..) but the blanket are nice and the rthyme is nice.

[insane]
00:01:386 (5) - Move this note at the end of the number 3 slider.
00:05:136 (3) - NC
00:06:186 (7) - Move this note at the end of the number 5 slider.
00:29:136 - I suggest you reduce slider velocity on this part
Overall:
You should remove some of the triplets that doesn't fit the music. And work on the flow.

That's all for me, feedbacks of my mod is welcome.

Came from my modding queue lol

*=Personal Opinion
**=Should Fix
***=FIX NOW LOL

[ Setsuna ] wrote:

Came from my modding queue lol

*=Personal Opinion
**=Should Fix
***=FIX NOW LOL


[PU's Hard]**00:04:686 (1,2) - Not appropriate for hard levels.
**00:21:786 (6,1) - Blanketed slightly wrong. fix
***00:37:536 (1) - Should use slower slider velocity for this slider, as it confuses relatively new players that play hards.
**01:15:336 (4) - Start this where 01:14:736 (2) ends.

Notes: IMO overmapped for a hard D; Yeah,this is "Hard" diff

Thank you for modding

Update please~
http://puu.sh/bqoiN/7406552095.osu

哈囉來摸 ~

fm4a93au04's standard modding queue

感覺 E 跟H 差距有點大 … 不過也不是沒看過這種 mapset , 就不多言了 .


Good luck to your map ~

fm4a93au04 wrote:

哈囉來摸 ~

fm4a93au04's standard modding queue

感覺 E 跟H 差距有點大 … 不過也不是沒看過這種 mapset , 就不多言了 .

我的摸

[Easy]

有些地方間距差到 x0.1 , 在 Easy 還是盡量統一比較好 .

差個 x0.05 還沒話講 , 可以怪罪給格子 … 但差到 x0.1 就可能會被找碴 ……

=ㄦ= ” <- 在說這些話的同時 , 意外發現自己就是那個找碴的人 ……

00:03:936 (3,4) - 竟然把N-H 放在W上然後再降低音量 , 第一次看到這種增幅方式 , 只是感覺落差有點太大 …

音量改成65% 如何 ? ( 如果同意後面比照辦理 )

00:07:536 (4) – 我都會被這個增幅嚇到 @W@” .

00:22:386 (5,1,2) – 間距驟降 x0.3 , 新手會以為這裡是相隔 1 拍的物件 . 就算是 Normal , 也不能這樣吧 …

00:33:936 (4) – 考慮NC ? 因為後面換節奏改成隔2拍的圈 .

00:40:536 (3,1) – 間距 .

00:41:136 (1,2) - ^ .

額 … 你的默認間距是 …從 00:41:136 (1) 改成 x0.8 ? 我記得全難度不是都得統一嗎 ? 恩 …

好吧 , 我先假定這樣是可以被允許的 , 以此模式下進行後面的 modding .

00:50:136 (3,1) - ^ . 沒理由在 Easy 跳阿= = .

00:50:736 (1,2) - ^ .

…00:53:136 (3) 這裡又改回 x1.0 … =ㄦ= . 還是統一一下吧 …

00:55:986 – 這裏考慮 80% vol. .

00:56:736 (6,7) – 這4個 beats 感覺可以強調出來 . 加音量或是啥的 .

00:57:936 (1,2,3) – 新手玩到這個會跟我一樣直接壞死 …

這個 … 後面不間距了 , 沒完沒了 …

01:17:136 (1) – 頭加F .

01:18:336 (2) – 可以強調出來 .

01:20:736 (2) - ^ . 這種再結尾出現的 , 不一樣的節奏我覺得都可以強調一下 .

間距在 Easy 非常非常重要 , 因為新手仰賴間距來判斷點擊時機 , 你要想想看 : 他們有可能完全沒玩過節奏遊戲欸 ~~~ 所以盡量保持間距統一吧 , 讓他們至少在茫茫大海上有條浮木可以抓 ……

[Hard]

沒發現啥 …

Good luck to your map ~

先謝了:3
距差我都跟AI Mod的,還要想怎麼改
其他的大概都改了ww

Hi.
Coming from my M4M Q :3

General:

1. Inconsistent kiai times. Somehow Pu's Hard has a lot of kiai times
2. There may be a problem with the difficulty spread coz you got Easy/Hard/Insane and skipped 1 diff. I hope you are considering making a normal diff

Easy


PU's Hard


Insane

Done. Hope my mod helped.
GL !
Any question regarding my mod or your map feel free to ask me in-game

Ntasuto wrote:

Hi.
Coming from my M4M Q :3

General:

1. Inconsistent kiai times. Somehow Pu's Hard has a lot of kiai times
2. There may be a problem with the difficulty spread coz you got Easy/Hard/Insane and skipped 1 diff. I hope you are considering making a normal diff

PU's Hard

SPOILER

General: -

00:01:236 (3) - changing it into a 1/2 slider , it sounds better to me. + you got no note @ 00:01:836 which is another reason to change it to 1/2 slider ( rhythmical reason )
No change. I like this ryhthm.
00:04:836 (2) - change to 1/2 slider. the vocals extend a bit more the on the second slider and the kick slider sounds a bit awkward :/
00:15:936 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:21:786 (6,1) - blanket a bit better
00:27:336 (3,4) - not perfectly stacked
00:37:536 (1) - decrease the sv multiplier so it becomes shorter ( maybe 1.00 ). As it is now , looks a bit too big :/
only volume down.
00:40:836 (4,1) - blanket a bit better
00:42:936 (3) - What is going on on the slider's head ? O.O' ? is that intentional or accident? take a look and fix please.
little change
00:42:936 (3,5) - overlap doesn't look very nice.
little change
00:44:736 (4,1) - maybe try and blanket here
no change
00:52:986 (6,7) - blanket a bit better
01:05:736 (6,8) - stack em
01:09:036 (5,6,7) - this part sound very passive and doesn't feel right. I recommend change the pattern there to : 1/2 slider + 1/2 slider + 1 circle . Like this : http://puu.sh/bubDe/4b0db7dbb1.png Sounds so much better
01:15:936 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - i believe you can arrange them in a nice beautiful pattern.

other all fixed

Done. Hope my mod helped.
GL !
Any question regarding my mod or your map feel free to ask me in-game

Thank you for good modding~

Chaoslitz:Please change this file
I was fixed for myself.
http://puu.sh/bulnx/55cf7a2010.osu

應邀來摸 Easy ~

改得超好的 XD ~ 剩下些小問題嚕 ~

先說我覺得要改的部份 , 再說無關痛癢 ( 個人建議 ) 的部份吧 =ㄦ= .

No kds ~ ( 想給也是可以喇 ~~ XD )

01:14:736 (5) - 這裡音量爆錶了 =u=" . 要在結尾強調可以弄個 70% ~ 75% vol. .

... 沒了 .

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 以上要改 , 以下癢癢 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------

00:21:336 (4,5,1) - 盡量少出這種 1 拍半的圈 , 可以把 5,1 改成滑條 . 不過整張圖也就這裡有 , 不改也沒關係喇 XD ~ 給新手一點小難讓他們記住這張圖也是不錯 ~

00:26:736 (1,2) - 不如 Blanket ?

01:05:136 (1,2,3) - 在 2 與 3 的頭上加 F ( finish ) , 然後漸升音量 .



例如這樣 . 從左至右的六條綠線分別是 : 85 . 90 . 95 . 100 . 80 .<- 最後切回 80 .

01:14:136 (4) - 這裡好像漏一個 C ? 若是故意不要那就甭理我 =W= .

01:26:736 (1) - 換成 Soft , 或降低音量 .



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就這樣囉 ~

P.S. 要不要考慮做個 N diff ?

我可以幫你 GD Normal 因為我也超愛這首可是有人 Rank 了所以後來就沒做趁此機會音效又跟我找的一樣來個 GD <- 無視我ㄚ~~~~~~~ !!!! (( 奔逃 ~~~

=ㄦ=

Good luck to your map ~