This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, September 28, 2015 at 11:15:00 AM

Artist: nano x yuyoyuppe
Title: Beautiful ground
Tags: nanoir A_Mystery
BPM: 182
Filesize: 5302kb
Play Time: 03:11
Difficulties Available:

1. A Mystery's Insane (4.96 stars, 775 notes)
2. Easy (1.55 stars, 178 notes)
3. Hard (3.5 stars, 481 notes)
4. Insane (4.72 stars, 676 notes)
5. Normal (2.13 stars, 264 notes)

Download: nano x yuyoyuppe - Beautiful ground
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Difficulties:
Easy made by me
Normal made by me
Hard made by me
Insane made by me
A Mystery's Insane made by A Mystery

Bubbled by monstrata 2015-09-27
Qualified by BeatofIke 2015-09-29
Thanks to Shiro for timing check

GD ctb diff done

*Link

Download my taiko diff as requested

You did it much better this time \:D/

[General]
[Insane]
[Hard]
[Normal]
[Easy]
sorry modnya pendek, tapi emang overall udah bagus kok, need much improvement di Slider >:D

wendao wrote:

You did it much better this time \:D/

[General]

1. gw ga ngerti kenapa ada tags Remember your color. di tags, meanwhile lagu ini ga ada di album tsb.
2. pls note that I can't mod CtB neither Taiko

OH CRAP

[Insane]

• 
  sayang sekali, Kiainya ga dimanfaatin sempurna, although this is hardest diff... ~gw bingung dan kurang yakin sama kiainya ;w;

1. 00:41:059 (4) - node terakhir pindahin ke 280,152 ~blanket better, tapi DSnya....
2. 00:48:477 (1) - remove whistle, add clap (on tail) ~okay
3. 01:03:972 (2,3,4) - pindahin ke 352,60 looks better moved somwehere else nearby
4. 01:05:455 (4) - you can improve this slider so it'll be more blanket against (3) ~working on it
5. 01:50:125 (3) - remove Finish on tail, annoying ~replaced by whistle
6. 02:37:268 (3) - stack tail to 02:35:950 (1) - ? note kebelakangnya bisa ngikutin~nice

[Hard]

• 
  Hard diff looked more neat than Insane

1. 00:27:378 (1,2,3) - hitsoundnya weird disini ~diseragamkan
2. 01:01:499 (7) - I better add soft-finish on head~added

[Normal]

• 
  all finerly? lol

[Easy]

• 
  entahlah, overall bagus, cuman... rasanya banyak note di tick merah di Kiai section~karena gw sangat ngikutin lirik ngemap ini

sorry modnya pendek, tapi emang overall udah bagus kok, need much improvement di Slider >:D
~thanks :3

WENDAO SO PRO
thanks~

Will mod this, But ungrave it first!

Tari wrote:

Will mod this, But ungrave it first!

Ungraved :p
Check first post

helped with timing and etc

ayyyyyy

[General]

1. idk seems neat. i'd suggest to use silenced sliderslide tho, since the sound of it kinda disturbs me a bit at the quiet part
2. also having the title appear here 00:11:884 - is nice

[Easy]

1. 00:06:939 (2) - just personal preference. would be better if this slider is also curved a bit like the next slider http://puu.sh/gopCl/d941686233.jpg
2. 00:08:917 (1,2) - usually this rhythm is not newbie-friendly lmao i suggest you to change the rhythm into simpler one, like 00:06:939 (2,3) - is nice http://puu.sh/goqaT/235b1279a7.jpg
3. 01:09:246 (3) - clap?
4. 01:43:862 (1) - finish at slider's head? to accent the new verse
5. 01:51:774 (1,2,3,4) - i think this rhythm can be really hard for beginners, since you followed the vocal here 01:51:774 (1,2) - while these suddenly follow the drum 01:53:257 (3,4,1) - even though they're in the same verse, so yeah idk just pointing it out

[Normal]

1. 00:03:642 (1) - add clap at reverse arrow? i can still hear the loud drum there
2. 00:28:202 (2,3) - rhythm suggestion, since 00:28:202 (2) - follows the vocal and the you suddenly follow the drum after that. imo the rhythm change is too sudden http://puu.sh/govNC/124c23ed7a.jpg
3. 00:43:367 (1) - add finish? idk seems cool /runs
4. 00:57:048 (2) - add clap? i can hear the drums
5. 00:57:213 (3) - ^ at reverse arrow
6. 01:07:763 (2,3) - lmao lame nazi blanket mod you can do better than this. i'd move the slider to 480|316 http://puu.sh/gowaW/61fc552ec4.jpg
7. 01:09:246 (5,1) - ^ move the slider up a bit http://puu.sh/gowgv/08d8240ba8.jpg
8. 02:15:510 (1) - add soft-finish at slider's head?
9. 02:33:642 (7) - add clap at reverse arrow? i can hear the drums which you accented by claps like 02:31:994 (2) -
10. 02:45:180 (7) - add clap, same drums like 02:45:510 (1) -
11. 02:55:070 (1) - whats with the normal-whistle here o.o

[Hard]

1. 00:21:774 (1) - did you use the normal-clap at slider's head on purpose? idk it seems random
2. 00:49:466 (3) - i'd add a finish at slider's tail because you added two finishes here 00:48:477 (1) -
3. 00:52:928 - add a note here? it can make the rhythm flow better
4. 01:01:334 (7,8) - more lame nazi blanket mod bcs im lame http://puu.sh/goywl/63eb34894d.jpg also i think you can improve the blanket here 00:58:862 (8,1) -
5. 01:11:884 - add a note here. the rhythm currently is kinda idk derp because 01:11:059 (3,4,5) - follows the vocal and there's still the vocal here 01:11:884 -
6. 01:22:598 (1) - does the normal-whistle at slider's head is also intentional? idk it seems out of place
7. 02:41:059 - add a note here? makes the rhythm flow better
8. 02:44:521 - ^ i really suggest this one, because this one has a strong beat

[Insane]

1. 00:03:807 - this part here has a strong beat so it's kinda a pity not to make this clickable ):
2. 00:30:510 (2,3) - rhythm is kinda boring for insane. i suggest to add something clickable between them. but that'll require some huge change so yeah idk up to you http://puu.sh/gozLP/fa06b42e7f.jpg http://puu.sh/gozY3/8790d4ffb4.jpg
3. 01:28:037 (1) - only suggestion. ctrl+< this slider makes the flow better. but you have to adjust the next pattern tho. i relocated 01:28:532 (2) - and ctrl+G 01:28:697 (3) - so the jump wont be really far after the change http://puu.sh/goAkU/52bb98e850.jpg
4. 01:36:609 (3,4,1,2,3) - dayummmmmmmmm
5. 01:43:202 (1,2,3,4) - add soft-finishes here? idk it fits the song
6. 02:30:345 (2,3) - i think you can emphasize this part by adding an anti-jump stack like this http://puu.sh/goAxI/870b17ba66.jpg but you have to relocate the sliders afterwards
7. 02:40:812 - add a note here to make triplet? kinda fits the song http://puu.sh/goADd/94e9700783.jpg
8. 02:56:224 (6) - i think soft-finish at slider's head is better than clap. to balance the finishes here 02:55:070 - 02:54:081 (1) -

ghgghhgghghghghgh lame mod im sorry ;w; the flow is already neat so idk what to mod aside from small things lmao sorry if its not really helpful

anyway goodluck kak!!

tfw when you lose mods post because you accidently direct to some websites to check something on mods post tab

[General]
looks fine for me

[Insane]

1. 00:03:477 (5,1) - It think unstack and then spacing them like this 00:01:005 (1,2) - play a bit better here
2. 00:34:301 (6) - Try this ? maybe it make the flow here 00:34:136 (5,6,7) - better imo
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:40:565 (3,4) - This overlap can be a bit better imo , try move (3)'s tail a little bit there
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:42:708 (2,4) - These finish sound weird imo
5. 00:45:840 (1,2) - looks weird imo , why not blanket (1)'s tail with (2)'s curve , I think it okay to make jumps here
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:28:037 (1,2) - uhh..I know you try to emphasis (2) here but upward jumps is not a great idea here imo , when it come to feeling I think downward jumps have a lots of impact more than upward jumps when playing it (Example:01:30:675 (1,2) - ) but it's up to you to rework jumps here or not
7. 01:36:939 (4) - Should curve this to make the pattern here 01:35:950 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - consistent (straight > curve > straight > curve > ...)
8. 01:43:367 (2,3) - Theses finish sound weird imo
9. 01:47:488 (3,4,1) - Should make spacing a bit consistent here so it make the feeling when playing this a bit better like 02:40:070 (3,4,1) - imo , make spacing inconsistent with the straight pattern like this here really feel a bit awkward imo
10. 02:37:268 (3,5) - Aesthetic- stack can be improved

[Hard]

1. 00:01:499 - Why you skip most of 1/2 beat in the beginning part ? I think it make the flow between each 1/1 notes a bit awkward there so it sound better to map those 1/2 beat imo
2. 00:09:246 (3,4) - Make spacing consistent with 00:08:917 (1,2,3) - ?
3. 00:32:488 (7) - This note feel a bit redundant , I'd delete this and give player a small break here
4. 00:33:147 (3,4) - I'd focus on vocal here since it sound a bit better imo
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:53:092 (6,1) - This jumps is a bit too sudden for hard imo so I suggest you lower spacing a bit here
6. 00:57:213 (3,4,5) - Why use 1.1x ds here? should make the ds here consistent with previous notes (1.2x ds)

[Normal]

1. 01:30:675 (1,2,3) - Try this ?
   SPOILER

   

[Easy]

1. 00:09:741 (2,3) - This sound a bit better imo
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:27:048 (2) - S:C1 Clap at tail ?
3. 02:46:829 - Clap ?
4. 02:55:070 (1) - Finish instead?
   idk but some hitsound here is a bit different from normal , hard , insane

Good luck





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AlpacaCokelat wrote:

ayyyyyy

[General]

1. idk seems neat. i'd suggest to use silenced sliderslide tho, since the sound of it kinda disturbs me a bit at the quiet part ~I never use anything that sounds inaudible
2. also having the title appear here 00:11:884 - is nice ~iirc only BN/QAT can adjust this

[Easy]

1. 00:06:939 (2) - just personal preference. would be better if this slider is also curved a bit like the next slider http://puu.sh/gopCl/d941686233.jpg ~curved more
2. 00:08:917 (1,2) - usually this rhythm is not newbie-friendly lmao i suggest you to change the rhythm into simpler one, like 00:06:939 (2,3) - is nice http://puu.sh/goqaT/235b1279a7.jpg ~simplified
3. 01:09:246 (3) - clap? ~ok
4. 01:43:862 (1) - finish at slider's head? to accent the new verse ~missed this one
5. 01:51:774 (1,2,3,4) - i think this rhythm can be really hard for beginners, since you followed the vocal here 01:51:774 (1,2) - while these suddenly follow the drum 01:53:257 (3,4,1) - even though they're in the same verse, so yeah idk just pointing it out ~followed the vocal more

[Normal]

1. 00:03:642 (1) - add clap at reverse arrow? i can still hear the loud drum there ~My ear was high
2. 00:28:202 (2,3) - rhythm suggestion, since 00:28:202 (2) - follows the vocal and the you suddenly follow the drum after that. imo the rhythm change is too sudden http://puu.sh/govNC/124c23ed7a.jpg ~fixed my way
3. 00:43:367 (1) - add finish? idk seems cool /runs ~My ear was high again ;w;
4. 00:57:048 (2) - add clap? i can hear the drums ~^
5. 00:57:213 (3) - ^ at reverse arrow ~^
6. 01:07:763 (2,3) - lmao lame nazi blanket mod you can do better than this. i'd move the slider to 480|316 http://puu.sh/gowaW/61fc552ec4.jpg ~gud
7. 02:15:510 (1) - add soft-finish at slider's head? ~normal-finish is cooler imo
8. 02:33:642 (7) - add clap at reverse arrow? i can hear the drums which you accented by claps like 02:31:994 (2) - ~My ear was high
9. 02:45:180 (7) - add clap, same drums like 02:45:510 (1) - ~^
10. 02:55:070 (1) - whats with the normal-whistle here o.o ~add a finish instead

[Hard]

1. 00:21:774 (1) - did you use the normal-clap at slider's head on purpose? idk it seems random ~Yes it is on purpose, maybe now it is your ear that is high lol
2. 00:49:466 (3) - i'd add a finish at slider's tail because you added two finishes here 00:48:477 (1) - ~added
3. 00:52:928 - add a note here? it can make the rhythm flow better ~00:52:763 - is now a 1/2 slider instead
4. 01:01:334 (7,8) - more lame nazi blanket mod bcs im lame http://puu.sh/goywl/63eb34894d.jpg ~fuk, so thin also i think you can improve the blanket here 00:58:862 (8,1) - ~ I decided not to make these a blanket
5. 01:11:884 - add a note here. the rhythm currently is kinda idk derp because 01:11:059 (3,4,5) - follows the vocal and there's still the vocal here 01:11:884 - ~I missed that '"-ful"
6. 01:22:598 (1) - does the normal-whistle at slider's head is also intentional? idk it seems out of place ~My bad, I was exaggerating
7. 02:41:059 - add a note here? makes the rhythm flow better ~Nah , I will keep this to maintain the pre and post 1/4 triplet a pure 1 beat of delay
8. 02:44:521 - ^ i really suggest this one, because this one has a strong beat ~added note and rearranged the notes around there myself

[Insane]

1. 00:03:807 - this part here has a strong beat so it's kinda a pity not to make this clickable ): ~Fixed
2. 00:30:510 (2,3) - rhythm is kinda boring for insane. i suggest to add something clickable between them. but that'll require some huge change so yeah idk up to you http://puu.sh/gozLP/fa06b42e7f.jpg http://puu.sh/gozY3/8790d4ffb4.jpg ~I made more 1/2 notes instead
3. 01:28:037 (1) - only suggestion. ctrl+< this slider makes the flow better. but you have to adjust the next pattern tho. i relocated 01:28:532 (2) - and ctrl+G 01:28:697 (3) - so the jump wont be really far after the change http://puu.sh/goAkU/52bb98e850.jpg ~kewl
4. 01:36:609 (3,4,1,2,3) - dayummmmmmmmm ~All the vocals here are just 1/2 so I dont know what to do more hue
5. 01:43:202 (1,2,3,4) - add soft-finishes here? idk it fits the song ~I think the current one is ok
6. 02:30:345 (2,3) - i think you can emphasize this part by adding an anti-jump stack like this http://puu.sh/goAxI/870b17ba66.jpg but you have to relocate the sliders afterwards ~great
7. 02:40:812 - add a note here to make triplet? kinda fits the song http://puu.sh/goADd/94e9700783.jpg ~ok
8. 02:56:224 (6) - i think soft-finish at slider's head is better than clap. to balance the finishes here 02:55:070 - 02:54:081 (1) - ~used normal finish instead, idk it just sounds more epic

ghgghhgghghghghgh lame mod im sorry ;w; the flow is already neat so idk what to mod aside from small things lmao sorry if its not really helpful

anyway goodluck kak!! ~Nah you so pro o3o

Thanks alpaca!!

CelsiusLK wrote:

tfw when you lose mods post because you accidently direct to some websites to check something on mods post tab

[General]
looks fine for me

[Insane]

1. 00:03:477 (5,1) - It think unstack and then spacing them like this 00:01:005 (1,2) - play a bit better here ~Fixed flow and stack my own way
2. 00:34:301 (6) - Try this ? maybe it make the flow here 00:34:136 (5,6,7) - better imo
   SPOILER

   ~cool
3. 00:40:565 (3,4) - This overlap can be a bit better imo , try move (3)'s tail a little bit there
   SPOILER

   
   I tried, lol
4. 00:42:708 (2,4) - These finish sound weird imo ~Nah, Im just making my own sounds
5. 00:45:840 (1,2) - looks weird imo , why not blanket (1)'s tail with (2)'s curve , I think it okay to make jumps here
   SPOILER

   
   ~Blanket incoming
6. 01:28:037 (1,2) - uhh..I know you try to emphasis (2) here but upward jumps is not a great idea here imo , when it come to feeling I think downward jumps have a lots of impact more than upward jumps when playing it (Example:01:30:675 (1,2) - ) but it's up to you to rework jumps here or not ~Fixed someway
7. 01:36:939 (4) - Should curve this to make the pattern here 01:35:950 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - consistent (straight > curve > straight > curve > ...) ~done
8. 01:43:367 (2,3) - Theses finish sound weird imo ~ ))
9. 01:47:488 (3,4,1) - Should make spacing a bit consistent here so it make the feeling when playing this a bit better like 02:40:070 (3,4,1) - imo , make spacing inconsistent with the straight pattern like this here really feel a bit awkward imo ~done
10. 02:37:268 (3,5) - Aesthetic- stack can be improved ~Very Minor indeed

[Hard]

1. 00:01:499 - Why you skip most of 1/2 beat in the beginning part ? I think it make the flow between each 1/1 notes a bit awkward there so it sound better to map those 1/2 beat imo I agree, but those 1/2s are guitar sounds, while I am following the drum percussion here, which is all 1/1
2. 00:09:246 (3,4) - Make spacing consistent with 00:08:917 (1,2,3) - ? ~ fixed, rearranged
3. 00:32:488 (7) - This note feel a bit redundant , I'd delete this and give player a small break here ~There is the vocal line here,cant ignore that
4. 00:33:147 (3,4) - I'd focus on vocal here since it sound a bit better imo
   SPOILER

   
   ~My bad
5. 00:53:092 (6,1) - This jumps is a bit too sudden for hard imo so I suggest you lower spacing a bit here ~Fixed already
6. 00:57:213 (3,4,5) - Why use 1.1x ds here? should make the ds here consistent with previous notes (1.2x ds) ~I have no idea why this happens

[Normal]

1. 01:30:675 (1,2,3) - Try this ?
   SPOILER

   

~Looks good!

[Easy]

1. 00:09:741 (2,3) - This sound a bit better imo
   SPOILER

   
   I found this too hard and too confusing
2. 01:27:048 (2) - S:C1 Clap at tail ? ~Missed it
3. 02:46:829 - Clap ? ~ ok
4. 02:55:070 (1) - Finish instead? ~yes
   idk but some hitsound here is a bit different from normal , hard , insane

Good luck
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Thanks :O

We made an IRC not big deal cuz the mapper wasn't so ''online'' D:

In IRC the mapper decided to cut the delays from hitsounds

Here are the undelayed hitsounds : soft-hitclap normal-hitclap

Good Luck ~

Thanks for hitsoound, ByBy!
Updated

and some suggestions in hard


That's all for now

Good Luck ~

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

and some suggestions in hard

Hard

1. 00:21:774(1)- I think a 1/1 slider doesn't fit better the rhythm D: I think 2 notes and a 1/2 slider will works perfectly with the instruments : http://puu.sh/gt6jC/cd6c7660a2.jpg ~fixed my own way, I just realised something
2. 00:27:873(2)- ~ 00:32:488(7)- Imo here you begin to use claps but I feel there's only guitar.Ty to use in this part whistle for consistency with 00:22:268(2)- ~ 00:27:378(1)- since there's no drums ~no drums? really? listen here 00:28:367 - , here 00:29:521 - , 00:29:851 - , here 00:30:345 - , here 00:31:005, here 00:31:664 - , here 00:32:323 - , they are all drum sounds
3. 00:43:367(1)- Why you added here a spinner ? I think it doesn't fit well the vocal D: The better way is to try maybe this rhythm : http://puu.sh/gt86s/efaa2166a8.jpg it will follow the vocal and guitar much better and also with the spinner you ignored the beat from 00:44:191()- to 00:44:686()- but before that , you should remove the note from 00:43:202()- ~why? Because it follows the vocal very well,a long held vocal like that is good to be covered by a spinner, and I want a spinner there-note that I am a very fanatic to vocal-following
4. 00:45:840(2,3)- Here just nazi the blanket looks weird to me D: Look at this picture : http://puu.sh/gt8s0/fa2d467aa3.jpg I moved (3)- some grids down and then I curved it ~asdfasdf it is pretty pretty and pretty thin OTL
5. 00:46:829(4)- This slider's tail makes a bad overlap with 00:47:653(6)- and also is visible in gameplay.Try to move it to 329|214 to avoid the overlap.It should be like here : http://puu.sh/gt8Hl/e4ca33971d.jpg after 00:46:334(3)- was curved ~I tried fixing it lol
6. 00:54:906(3,5)- Why you don't want to make the sliders smoother for a smoother flow ? The cursor movement will be much better ~I like these sliders, so I am keeping it
7. 01:39:906()- Why you not add a note here ? I clearly hear the vocal and the guitar here and it's so sad to ignore here the beat ;w; I tried listening it with 50% speed, the vocal disappears here 01:39:906 - and then re-appears here 01:40:070 - ,anyway I added them
8. 01:44:026(1)- As I said 00:43:367(1)- it will be much better if you try this rhythm : http://puu.sh/gt86s/efaa2166a8.jpg to not ignore the vocal and guitar from 01:44:851()- to 01:45:345()- but you should remove the repeat from 01:43:202(7)- and adding a note instead ~same reason with the previous
9. 01:52:928(4)- I think it's better to make this slider smoother for a smoother flow for a better cursor movement ~same reason with the previous,I like this kind of sliders personally

That's all for now

Good Luck ~

Thanks, sorry if this feels unsatisfactory

Overall design is quite nice. Not really any awkward -visible- off putting points.
(warning #nazimod (not in an offensive way k))

[Insane]
00:08:257 (3,4) - Being a person who extremely hard maps, this point really doesn't make and sense flow-wise.
00:23:422 (5) - Middle point feels too far from the longer Combo 3 slider.
00:23:752 (6) - (4) - To x:377 y:15 for nicer blanket?
00:28:532 (4) - Your choice here, but the end of this slider doesn't look like a nice curve. Its understandable if you want to keep it like that. (middle node needs to be higher some points for a normal curve)
00:41:059 (4) - Not a perfect blanket again (;-;)
00:53:917 (2) - Not equal first and second halves. I'm sure this has been pointed out loads of times...
00:45:180 (3,4,1) - I can see the line made here, but I think making 00:45:840 (1) - a couple of pixels lower suits the flow of the "curve".
01:00:840 (7) - Another not same first and second half
01:08:092 (1) - Move whole curve to x:295 y:97 for a better blanket? Old one wasn't nice
01:10:235 (3) - Not same halves, but it shouldn't matter here. Just a point to bring up.

Admittedly, the second half of the map was really hard to mod since I couldn't
02:12:708 (1) - Second half has a weird curve compared to start. Not a major thing either.
(02:18:972 (3,4,5,1) - I'm not sure if I like playing these anti-jumps.)
02:47:158 (1) - Halves not equal again.
02:53:092 (3,4,5) - I personally don't like the way these flow together. I would put 02:53:092 (3) - further down and rotate it up to 02:53:422 (4) - so it can curve nicely to the next slider.

[Hard]
00:01:005 (1,2,3) - DS is close, but the difference in the side notes is still "visible", atleast for me, in play.
00:07:433 (3,4,5) - Curve more if possible? Notes and slider start feel too straight.
00:39:081 (3) - Halves aren't equal
00:41:059 (2) - Gets too close to the previous slider at the end, up the curve a little?
00:43:202 (3) - I would prefer to see this in a straight line from the last slider (x:238 y:145 worked for me)
01:33:312 (1,2) - Not perfect blanket
02:10:895 (4,5) - I would give a reasonable change, but I can't. All I can say is this bit seems random compared to the maps (really nice) structure.
02:25:235 (1,2,3,4) - Improve this note curve please!
02:48:807 (4) - This slider is ugly compared to any other version you made of it, and it doesn't blanket the previous note. Fix please!

I can't mod normals/easies ;-;
Hope this gets ranked, it's really neat and structured well.


#kindnessofyourheartmodding2k15

Arphimigon wrote:

Overall design is quite nice. Not really any awkward -visible- off putting points.
(warning #nazimod (not in an offensive way k))

[Insane]
00:08:257 (3,4) - Being a person who extremely hard maps, this point really doesn't make and sense flow-wise. ~moved somewhere else
00:23:422 (5) - Middle point feels too far from the longer Combo 3 slider. ~fixed somehow
00:23:752 (6) - (4) - To x:377 y:15 for nicer blanket? ~yeah
00:28:532 (4) - Your choice here, but the end of this slider doesn't look like a nice curve. Its understandable if you want to keep it like that. (middle node needs to be higher some points for a normal curve) ~make the curve better
00:41:059 (4) - Not a perfect blanket again (;-;) It's pretty thin, looks fine personally

Non- fix and Fix

to

00:53:917 (2) - Not equal first and second halves. I'm sure this has been pointed out loads of times... ~this is the first time I was told to fix this, I tried anyway

Slider before and after

to

00:45:180 (3,4,1) - I can see the line made here, but I think making 00:45:840 (1) - a couple of pixels lower suits the flow of the "curve". ~moved 7 pixels down
01:00:840 (7) - Another not same first and second half ~I tried lol

Before and after

to http://puu.sh/gykVd/4cbae8e5ec.jpg

01:08:092 (1) - Move whole curve to x:295 y:97 for a better blanket? Old one wasn't nice ~295 | 98 you mean? lol
01:10:235 (3) - Not same halves, but it shouldn't matter here. Just a point to bring up.

Admittedly, the second half of the map was really hard to mod since I couldn't
02:12:708 (1) - Second half has a weird curve compared to start. Not a major thing either. ~fixed a little
(02:18:972 (3,4,5,1) - I'm not sure if I like playing these anti-jumps.) ~made 3-4-5 a triangle
02:47:158 (1) - Halves not equal again. ~yeah I realised the first half is more linear than the second one

Equality

to Also that required tweaks of the curve nodes more.

02:53:092 (3,4,5) - I personally don't like the way these flow together. I would put 02:53:092 (3) - further down and rotate it up to 02:53:422 (4) - so it can curve nicely to the next slider. ~put 3 further down

[Hard]
00:01:005 (1,2,3) - DS is close, but the difference in the side notes is still "visible", atleast for me, in play. ~upscaled them 3 a bit
00:07:433 (3,4,5) - Curve more if possible? Notes and slider start feel too straight. ~yeah right
00:39:081 (3) - Halves aren't equal ~I tried fixing it

Old vs new

to http://puu.sh/gylp6/a032a06560.jpg

00:41:059 (2) - Gets too close to the previous slider at the end, up the curve a little? ~ok
00:43:202 (3) - I would prefer to see this in a straight line from the last slider (x:238 y:145 worked for me) ~cool
01:33:312 (1,2) - Not perfect blanket ~perfected

Blanket

http://puu.sh/gylvc/b06e94ebc2.jpg to http://puu.sh/gylx9/d1a1d8bc6e.jpg

02:10:895 (4,5) - I would give a reasonable change, but I can't. All I can say is this bit seems random compared to the maps (really nice) structure. ~random??? really? This follows the guitar melody man
02:25:235 (1,2,3,4) - Improve this note curve please! ~improved a bit, I guess

Reference if you want

to

02:48:807 (4) - This slider is ugly compared to any other version you made of it, and it doesn't blanket the previous note. Fix please! ~changed patterns and flows

I can't mod normals/easies ;-; please, learn to ;w;
Hope this gets ranked, it's really neat and structured well. ~I hope so

#kindnessofyourheartmodding2k15

Thanks for your nazi (even more nazi than mine) mod

ga bisa modding std
bantu star aja

semoga cpt rank (y)

Halo.. ＼(＾▽＾*)
I think you requesting me to mod this before ? lol
Noob mod , i hope this helping a bit

Nice All! Good Luck senpai theramdans ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ♥

- aLine - wrote:

Halo.. ＼(＾▽＾*)
I think you requesting me to mod this before ? lol
Noob mod , i hope this helping a bit

• [General]

1. I think Insane is too hard , can you reduce the star a bit? 4,42★ - 3,21★ ~no, the gap is fine. Even the insane is 95% 1/2 spam with long sliders and only a few of 1/4s
2. add tag : Vocaloid (you can add tag character name in BG too )

~dude this is not even close to a thing named vocaloid. This song is original work from the both artist (or an utaite x composer collab work). And the bg itself is only a fanart of nano

• [Easy]

1. 00:51:114 (1,2) - very confusing here , i keep get 100 when i test play this. ~it follows the drums after the vocal which is not a clickable note
   
   try this

   
2. 01:49:136 (1) - tried following 01:46:499 (1) - ( sound better )
   
   try this

   
   ~which notes are you pointing out again??
3. 01:52:598 (2,3) - I think it's too hard for newbie like me .. can you change to single not ? not a slider. It's still following vocal ~do this and ignore the note at 01:52:763 - ?? no. Adding circle at this tick while the previous is circle? no - no 1/2 circle on easy for me,so I am keeping this
4. 02:20:125 (3,1) - more blanked ? ~fixed
5. 02:34:136 - 02:35:867 - I prefer to add spinner than a break. Same as other difficult ..~added
6. all good! ♥

• [Hit Sound]

1. 00:30:015 (1) - whistle (tail) additional to 'drum' added
2. 01:11:224 (3) - missing clap (tail) - Check 'Normal' difficult ~I made the normal one with no sound instead. Actually , there is no instruments audible here so I leave it empty
3. all good! ♥

• [Normal]

1. 01:06:939 (1) - fix this slider ? more curve I think ..~tweaked a bit
2. 01:11:884 (5,1) - changing DS? why? prev 1.00 next 1.01 - it didnt change
3. 01:51:444 (5) - 272 , 104 ~why?
4. 01:53:752 (1) - 256 , 39 ^
5. 02:17:653 (3,1) - blanked It's fine
6. 02:34:136 (1) - longer to 02:35:867 - ? no, not enough recovery time, instead I ended it at 02:35:290 - for consistency with easy diff
7. 02:44:356 (6) - New Combo here , delete New Combo : 02:45:510 (1)

ok

• [Hit Sound]

1. 01:28:532 (2) - change to whistle? (tail) ok
2. all good! ♥

• [Hard]

1. 00:46:829 (4) - more space here? I think : 340 , 199 ~ok
2. 00:48:312 (8,1) - blanked ~fixed
3. 00:53:257 (7) - I prefer to give a jump here .. maybe rotate 40° ~this was a jump before, but I think about it again and a 'stop' like this is more fitting
4. 00:56:224 (1) - remove New Combo here , you can start New Combo : 00:56:719 (2) "KIM-iga kieru...." this verse and how the vocal sounds is perfect for NC
5. 01:31:829 (1) - remove New Combo? ~listen to the lyrics, it is the perfect tick to add NC
6. 01:43:120 (6) - remove maybe .. overmapped here ~ listen here 01:43:120 - carefully with 25% playback. The 1/4 drum roll/kick bass is audible, I dont even overmap or anything I just follow what I heard
7. 02:23:752 (2) - 109 , 353 ~why?
8. 02:34:136 (1) - longer to 02:35:290 ok
9. 02:44:521 (6,1) - swap New Combo?~ok

• [Hit Sound]

1. 01:11:884 (6) - clap ~no, same reason with easy
2. all good! ♥

• [Insane]

1. 00:08:917 (1) - 351 , 176 ~no, why anyway? you didnt explain
2. 00:09:906 (6,1) - swap New Combo? ~Ok
3. 00:39:741 (6) - fix this slider? more curve maybe ..~ It is curvy already
   
   try this

   
4. 00:49:961 (4) - New Combo? ~no, the right one is the next (1) which is alreeady NC'd
5. 00:50:125 (5) - I found a better flow on this slider .. ~added
   
   click!

   
6. 00:52:268 (1) - remove New Combo? ~no, listen to the slight finish sound in the BGM and the vocal obviously
7. 02:12:708 (1) - fix this slider? more curve maybe .. ~it is curvy already, and it has 2 lol
8. 02:32:818 (6,1) - swap New Combo? ~no, "BEAU-tiful..." - listen to this phrase
9. 02:38:092 (5) - New Combo? ~no, the right one is the next (1), which is already NC'd
10. 02:43:037 (4) - New Combo? no

• [Hit Sound]

1. all good! ♥

Nice All! Good Luck senpai theramdans ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ♥

Thanks
sorry if this feels unsatisfactory