1. Easy (1.49 stars, 116 notes)
2. Final Battle (5.26 stars, 479 notes)
3. Hard (3.51 stars, 302 notes)
4. Insane (4.49 stars, 384 notes)
5. Normal (2.23 stars, 201 notes)

1. 柑橘没什么问题，摸不出来（其实是我做EZNM很渣HHH）

1. 00:06:242 (2,3) - 感觉没包好
2. 00:28:623 (5) - 我觉得弯的滑条好

1. 00:04:605 (1,2,3) - 感觉放在hard上略难，间距小一些？
2. 00:27:140 (2) - 移除这个note感觉好些0.0

1. 00:24:999 (1) - 我觉得这个note和前面滑条尾距离大一些比较好0.0
2. 00:42:146 (3,4) - 感觉改成像前面一样的1/8滑条会很不错
3. 00:53:841 (2) - 向左一格（强迫症又max了233）
4. 01:14:027 (3,4) - 同第二条0.0

1. 00:09:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 改成两两错开的连打如何
2. 00:36:211 (1) - 拆成两个短折返如何
3. 00:24:670 (5) - 向右一格→_→ （强迫症之眼）
4. 01:11:343 (3,4) - 看起来和前一组不同，故意的么

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63846,339.943342776204,4,2,3,70,1,0
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Piyoko_9796 wrote:

From QQ

[Gnenral]
wa 船爺找我拼sp數誒 找不到modder了

開頭的BPM好像不用這麼多紅線诶 還在修改中

各種放法重複好多遍,我不太喜歡這種...然後我就煩了(大霧)
嘛..反正這圖來來去去也幾個節奏....就沒所謂了XDDD, >>> CCS CCS SSSS <<< 這種排列當成梗好了=3=((跑掉 看不懂這意思@@

[Easy]
00:11:163 (1,2) - 00:21:705 (1,2) - 感覺(1)滑條尾和(2)接駁位很怪,Ctrl G然後改一改那reverse slider節奏就好 這兩個感覺還好
00:16:434 (1) - 直接長滑條不要reverse比較好呢? 應該還OK
00:32:258 (1,2,3,4) - 是可以這樣放，但喜歡現在的節奏 w"

OAO

00:35:222 - 00:40:499 - 這裡有音效么?.....加個finish感覺好一點? 是可以加，只是懶的用slidertick了 w
00:45:440 (1,2,3) - 加了變成1.50藍標了，不採用。

OAO

01:01:229 (1,2,3) - ^

OAO

01:02:541 (1) - 我改成的是spinner來的

01:17:330 (1,2,3,4) - ^

OAO

01:19:965 (1,2,3) - ^

OAO

01:22:601 (1,2) - Ctrl G 現在這個比較好
01:28:201 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:33:143 (2,3) - 我選擇跟鼓

感覺音是在01:33:802 - 出來的

01:35:778 (1) - del 啦!太趕的啦!(可能對於新手來說) 應該還好

[Normal]
00:11:492 (2,3,4) - 00:22:034 (2,3,4) - 00:53:676 (2,3,4) - Ctrl G 以下都覺得還好，同樣理由，也是跟鼓。
00:15:446 (5,6) - 00:25:658 (4,5) - ^
00:17:752 (4,5) - 00:28:293 (4,5) - ^
00:32:587 (2,3) - ^,reverse slider 不要reverse,變長滑條 不了
00:49:394 (4,5) - 直接變一個大reverse slider(紅線reverse) 這個再考慮
00:59:589 (3,4,5) - Ctrl G 以下都覺得還好，同樣理由，也是跟鼓。
01:14:695 (1,2) - ^
01:21:283 (4,5) - ^
01:22:601 (1,2) - ^
01:25:566 (2,3) - ^
01:27:872 (1,2) - ^
01:31:825 (4,5) - ^
01:33:143 (1,2) - ^

[insane]
00:12:151 (5) - 這裡感覺應該放一個circle((思 再看看
00:15:116 (1,2,3,4) - 這種節奏的我覺得(2,3,4)才是一組 交換了NC
00:19:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不了

我是來亂的

00:20:717 (2,3,4,1) - 移動了一點

我是來亂的

01:07:251 (1,2,3) - 我覺得沒需要這麼跳 打的還蠻順阿
01:08:871 (1,2) - 我覺得放跟一點易讀很多,這樣放有點醜(?)然後後面的方法就只是只供參考((我不懂放梗啊!!! 覺得現在還好

我是來亂的OAO

00:36:211 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - 這個位置的轉折位真的很含糊,我聽出的是這個 感覺沒差別

OAO

[FB((hhhh]
00:04:933 (3,1) - 有種斷手臂了的感覺 還好 lol
00:36:211 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - 不了

OAO

00:37:283 (2,4) - del 有連打音 不刪
00:42:640 (3) - 最後一個變成4連打+1滑條好像帶感一點 不覺得
01:03:853 (1) - 這.....怎麼這麼像ZZH的臉 不太好看..

超級漂亮的有沒有(*(沒 _ 有)*)

01:09:041 (2,1) - 跟ins的一樣 我看了一下ins沒這時間點阿..
01:25:154 (8,1) - 沒聽懂怎麼隔這么遠,不爽诶...DS不一樣誒((霧 好多人都噴這裡，那麼就fixed.
01:25:895 (3,4,5) - 這三個快成一直線了,覺得現在還好

我是來超級搗亂der

INS和FB我不知道怎樣摸好了,大概我要摸節奏我得比其他人打死 233
我就是聽不順耳lol,大概就是我們兩下節奏的方式不同啦((我這么渣,船爺你這么叼嘛~XD 有dio嗎(?
船爺帶我飛 下次LOL

先謝謝港妹的mod，修了一些位置 ~ !

1. bg2.jpg have weird dimensions, is really weird for me considering your other bg have a properly dimensions, maybe you can edit this one as well

1. AR9 play better for me, since AR 9,2 seems unnecesary for me >:
2. HP7 is better to , play fairly considering this is an extra diff
3. OD 8.3 doesn't make a really big difference in gameplay, maybe you can use OD 8 or OD 8.5
4. 00:01:972 (1) - adding whistles on stanzas where the guitar appear will be a nice idea, if you agree with me add them to other spots and apply to every diff
5. 00:05:093 (1) - similar as above spots like this one will sound really great by having a whistle, also this NC 00:05:093 (4) - seems really not necessary and not fitting with your combo pattern, plus as you know spamming NC can mess up the overall HP drain in the whole diff
6. 00:11:170 (1) - finish + whistle sound better, like you was doing before
7. 00:21:047 unnecesary NC, this kind of pattern can be readed without them, same goes for 00:21:376
8. 00:25:002 (1) - , 00:30:275 (1) - ^
9. 00:34:889 (1,2) - not hitsounds? even with the music having a nice special moment there >:
10. 00:36:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - the rhythm here doesn't fit the song nicely IMO, I guess s better if you do something like this:
    
11. 00:41:810 (1,1,1) - remove the NC spam, it doesn't help to read or play this part better
12. 00:48:731 (3,4) - if you listen careful a circle 1/2 pattern sound better with the music rhythm than 1/2 sliders
13. 00:51:368 (1) - unnecesary NC
14. 00:51:615 (2,3) - this play really weird. mostly cuz you are ignoring the beat at 00:51:533 - starting those doubles at blue tick is really hard, even more when the previous beat have sound
15. 00:53:837 (1) - unnecesary NC
16. 01:07:245 ^
17. 01:13:362 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - to be honest parts with combos like this are not ok IMO
18. 01:30:093 (5) - ths circle doesn't sound good here, is better if you remove it and keep the pattern like 01:29:515 (2,3) -
19. 01:33:806 (1) - similar to other NC, this one is not folowing a changing in the music or supossed to make this part easy to play, it seems like not necesary
20. 01:35:456 (1) - ^

1. OD 7.5 or OD 8 will be better, try to don't have OD lower by 2 respect to AR
2. 00:09:856 (1) - this repeat slider are really unusual, since they have 6 repeats instead of 4 like most of maps do, this can be a little confused, I suggest you to use this rhythm instead:
   
3. 00:13:798 (1) - the repeat of this slider get covered by the hitburst of 00:13:141 (3) - and is really hard to notice in a first try, try t make it more noticeable
4. 00:15:112 (6) - here is the place where your NC should be, but not in 00:15:441 (1) - , if you check your extra diff you'll notice this
5. 00:20:387 (1,2,3) - similar space in different gaps can be really bad when playing, try to use less spacing in 00:20:717 (2,3,4) -
6. 00:30:275 (1) - remove this NC is not really necessary
7. 00:31:923 (1) - ^
8. 00:34:230 (1) - ^
9. 00:35:548 (1) - ^
10. 00:37:196 (1) - ^
11. 00:51:533 similar to extra
12. 00:52:027 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same as 00:09:856

1. why this have the same OD as Insane?
2. AR 7.5 pay much better here IMO
3. 00:09:692 this greenline is unnecessary, consider to remove it and there are more like 00:41:316
4. 00:31:923 (4,1) - make this beats overlaped a bit like you did with 00:37:196 (6,1) - will be easy to read
5. 00:41:481 (1,3) - 1/2 slider fit better the music, since the music is more prominent in the upbeats than the blue ticks
6. 01:06:565 (1,2,3,4) - this do a really ugly overlap (In game) I highly suggest you to avoid this
7. 01:35:869 were is the spinner? >:

1. AR 5 play better here
2. 00:41:316 you should remove some unnecesary greenlines in this diff
3. 01:14:356 (6,1,2) - the spacing between this objects is not the same

1. 01:16:000 (3) - this is touching the HP bar and doesn't look nice.
2. remove some unnecesary green lines

Natsu wrote:

As requested:

General:

1. bg2.jpg have weird dimensions, is really weird for me considering your other bg have a properly dimensions, maybe you can edit this one as well Perhaps can change another background for the last diff,I usually like take special bg for so hard diff.

Extra:

1. AR9 play better for me, since AR 9,2 seems unnecesary for me >: Okay,adjust to AR9 LOL
2. HP7 is better to , play fairly considering this is an extra diff Fixed
3. OD 8.3 doesn't make a really big difference in gameplay, maybe you can use OD 8 or OD 8.5 Fixed to OD 8.2
4. 00:01:972 (1) - adding whistles on stanzas where the guitar appear will be a nice idea, if you agree with me add them to other spots and apply to every diff Sure,added
5. 00:05:093 (1) - similar as above spots like this one will sound really great by having a whistle, also this NC 00:05:093 (4) - seems really not necessary and not fitting with your combo pattern, plus as you know spamming NC can mess up the overall HP drain in the whole diff Okay,cancel NC for this part combo
6. 00:11:170 (1) - finish + whistle sound better, like you was doing before Sure,added
7. 00:21:047 unnecesary NC, this kind of pattern can be readed without them, same goes for 00:21:376 All fixed
8. 00:25:002 (1) - , 00:30:275 (1) - ^ Remove 00:25:002 this NC,but 00:30:275 this has no new NC here?
9. 00:34:889 (1,2) - not hitsounds? even with the music having a nice special moment there >: Seems I forgot notice to it,add a whistle +finish for all diff in there
10. 00:36:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - the rhythm here doesn't fit the song nicely IMO, I guess s better if you do something like this: Feel fine,fixed
    
11. 00:41:810 (1,1,1) - remove the NC spam, it doesn't help to read or play this part better Fixed
12. 00:48:731 (3,4) - if you listen careful a circle 1/2 pattern sound better with the music rhythm than 1/2 sliders Fixed
13. 00:51:368 (1) - unnecesary NC Has no new NC there o_o
14. 00:51:615 (2,3) - this play really weird. mostly cuz you are ignoring the beat at 00:51:533 - starting those doubles at blue tick is really hard, even more when the previous beat have sound Then I just add a note at 00:51:533 ?
15. 00:53:837 (1) - unnecesary NC Fixed
16. 01:07:245 ^ Fixed
17. 01:13:362 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - to be honest parts with combos like this are not ok IMO Reomve NC here
18. 01:30:093 (5) - ths circle doesn't sound good here, is better if you remove it and keep the pattern like 01:29:515 (2,3) - Okay,remove this note
19. 01:33:806 (1) - similar to other NC, this one is not folowing a changing in the music or supossed to make this part easy to play, it seems like not necesary Removed NC here
20. 01:35:456 (1) - ^ Same

Insane:

1. OD 7.5 or OD 8 will be better, try to don't have OD lower by 2 respect to AR Fixed
2. 00:09:856 (1) - this repeat slider are really unusual, since they have 6 repeats instead of 4 like most of maps do, this can be a little confused, I suggest you to use this rhythm instead: Right,fixed
   
3. 00:13:798 (1) - the repeat of this slider get covered by the hitburst of 00:13:141 (3) - and is really hard to notice in a first try, try t make it more noticeable Move a bit.
4. 00:15:112 (6) - here is the place where your NC should be, but not in 00:15:441 (1) - , if you check your extra diff you'll notice this Okay,fixed.
5. 00:20:387 (1,2,3) - similar space in different gaps can be really bad when playing, try to use less spacing in 00:20:717 (2,3,4) - Reduce a bit DS here.
6. 00:30:275 (1) - remove this NC is not really necessary Fixed
7. 00:31:923 (1) - ^ Fixed
8. 00:34:230 (1) - ^ Fixed
9. 00:35:548 (1) - ^ Fixed
10. 00:37:196 (1) - ^ Fixed
11. 00:51:533 similar to extra Fixed
12. 00:52:027 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same as 00:09:856 Fixed
    
    Hard:
    
    
    1. why this have the same OD as Insane? Sorry I didn't notice here,and ins diff adjust to 8 in there.
    2. AR 7.5 pay much better here IMO Fixed
    3. 00:09:692 this greenline is unnecessary, consider to remove it and there are more like 00:41:316 The same as easy diff reason
    4. 00:31:923 (4,1) - make this beats overlaped a bit like you did with 00:37:196 (6,1) - will be easy to read Fixed
    5. 00:41:481 (1,3) - 1/2 slider fit better the music, since the music is more prominent in the upbeats than the blue ticks Okay,fixed to 1/2 here.
    6. 01:06:565 (1,2,3,4) - this do a really ugly overlap (In game) I highly suggest you to avoid this Sure,change a bit placement here.
    7. 01:35:869 were is the spinner? >:[/col lor=#0000FF]Okay,added.
    Normal:
    
    
    1. AR 5 play better here Fixed
    2. 00:41:316 you should remove some unnecesary greenlines in this diff The same as easy diff reason
    3. 01:14:356 (6,1,2) - the spacing between this objects is not the same Fix a bit here
    Easy:
    
    
    1. 01:16:000 (3) - this is touching the HP bar and doesn't look nice. Turn a bit angle here
    2. remove some unnecesary green lines I know,but have a bit lazy,so keep it

I really don't like the whistle usage in this map, since you have a 2º and 4º downbeat whistle + clap pattern, I prefer if you add whistles where the music have those special parts mostly 1º and 3º downbeat Perhaps can change a bit here,but still sounds like okay xD

Gamu wrote:

hello~ Hi ~ o/


[ General]

1. soft-hitfinish have a delay of more than about 6ms, so you must fix or change it. Download this soft-hitfinish.wav Changed

   New Rule wrote:

   Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms, unless there's a special purpose.

   image

   

[ Easy]

1. 00:01:972 (3) - Unnecessary whistle. Snare sound in the song is not heard to me. Okay,removed
2. 00:28:297 (1) - clap and whistle are missing at the end point. Added
3. 00:42:799 (1) - Add a finish at the start point. I think it make a good sound and will fit in the song. Forgot add it,fixed
4. 01:35:786 (1) - I'd like to recommend that you lower the volume and change to the default soft-hitnormal. Because the song is quietly finished. Change 5% here

[ Normal]

1. 00:01:972 (4) - The same as Easy diff. Okay,removed
2. 01:25:225 (1) - Move to x:256 y:220 :3 Moved
3. 01:35:786 (1) - The same as Easy diff. Change 5% here

[ Hard]

1. 00:01:972 (1) - The same as Easy diff. Okay,removed
2. 01:35:869 (1) - The same as Easy diff. Change 5% here

[ Insane]

1. 00:01:972 (1) - The same as Easy diff. Okay,removed
2. 01:08:860 (1,2) - Since rhythm is hard to understand, it is easy to make rhythm mistakes. I'd like to recommend that you change this to slider. Change a 1/1 slider
3. 01:19:452 (5) - whistle and clap are missing. Added,and add another diff too.
4. 01:35:869 (1) - The same as Easy diff. Change 5% here

[ Final Battle]

1. 00:01:972 (1) - The same as Easy diff. Okay,removed
2. 01:08:860 (1,2) - The same as Insane diff. Want to do a different spread rhythm,so keep it
3. 01:35:869 (1) - The same as Easy diff. Change 5% here

I'll leave the bubble to Hollow Wings o/ Okay,thanks Gamu ~!

About timing: I seem to have no problem. good timing~ Yes ~!

CDFA wrote:

Let's have the BAT worst at timing rank this.

Let's go!! GO GO ~!

Extra:
All diffs made by the same mapper must start and end at the same time. So you're going to have to remove the spinner at the end of this map

Where? These diff last spinner end are the same time there,so there is nothing wrong

Everything else looks fine. Forum PM me when you're done. Done.