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Vospi - Reverence [OsuMania]

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Nivrad00
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Nivrad00
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, June 02, 2015 at 6:00:17 PM

Artist: Vospi
Title: Reverence
Source: Cytus
Tags: Rayark Chapter 8 Another Me
BPM: 172
Filesize: 4442kb
Play Time: 02:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard - 7Key (2.34 stars, 1128 notes)
  2. Insane - 7Key (3.78 stars, 1866 notes)
  3. Normal - 7Key (1.57 stars, 619 notes)
Download: Vospi - Reverence
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Vospi - Reverence

My first ranked map. Thanks to everyone who helped me out!

Artist's website





changelog
3/01/15: finished all difficulties
3/08/15: applied arviejhay's mod, changed Normal to Easy
3/17/15: applied Tristan97's mod
3/20/15: applied schwarzvgrune's mod, changed Easy back to Normal
3/22/15: applied -Kamikaze-'s mod
3/22/15: applied KaitoKid1998's mod
3/26/15: applied Blocko's mod
3/30/15: hitsounded Normal and Hard
3/31/15: hitsounded Insane
4/07/15: applied - R e b a -'s mod
4/08/15: applied iJinJin's mod
4/25/15: applied Meiko Senpai's mod
5/16/15: bubbled by Blocko!
5/19/15: qualified by Zenx!
5/26/15: disqualified by ExPew
5/29/15: applied Expew's mod
5/30/15: applied Ichigaki's mod
6/02/15: bubbled by Blocko!
6/03/15: qualified by Zenx!
Last edited by Nivrad00 , edited 57 times in total.
arviejhay
1,413 posts
Joined August 2009
arviejhay
hello u req?


1,2,3,4,5,6,7

[General]
Check AImod
Audio bitrate
So i adjust the bitrate http://puu.sh/grdFs/a8296b958f.mp3
replace the old mp3 in the song folder with this new one

Its better to change it into NM,HD, and MX

[Normal]
Suggestions:
00:00:348 - add a note on 5
00:01:045 - ^ note on 6
00:01:743 - add a note on 3
00:02:441 - add a note on 2
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00:14:999 (14999|0,14999|6,15173|1,15173|5,15348|2,15348|4,15522|1,15522|5,15696|0,15696|6) - I wouldn't recommend this pattern, change it or remove it.
If you remove it all, 00:14:999 - add a LN on 6 and ends in 00:15:696 - , 00:15:348 - add a LN on 2 and ends in 00:15:696, and 00:15:999 - add notes on 3 and 5 or 1 and 7.
00:36:975 (36975|4,36975|2,37150|5,37150|1,37324|6,37324|0,37499|5,37499|1,37673|4,37673|2) - ^ same but if you remove it. add LN on 2 and ends with 00:15:696, 00:37:324 - add a LN on 6 and ends with 00:15:696 - and 00:15:696 - add notes on 3 and 5.

[Hard]
Suggestions:
00:00:348 - add a note on 5
00:01:045 - ^ note on 6
00:01:743 - add a note on 3
00:02:441 - add a note on 2

[Insane]
00:15:435 (15435|0,15609|0) - move 1 column to the right
00:15:522 (15522|6) - move 1 column to the left


That's all
Good luck! :)
Nivrad00
556 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Nivrad00

arviejhay wrote:

[General]
Check AImod
Audio bitrate
So i adjust the bitrate http://puu.sh/grdFs/a8296b958f.mp3
replace the old mp3 in the song folder with this new one | ✓ thanks!

Its better to change it into NM,HD, and MX | I think it's fine

[Normal]
Suggestions:
00:00:348 - add a note on 5 | ✓ added on 6
00:01:045 - ^ note on 6 | ✓ added on 5
00:01:743 - add a note on 3 | ✓
00:02:441 - add a note on 2 | ✓
--------------------------------------------
00:14:999 (14999|0,14999|6,15173|1,15173|5,15348|2,15348|4,15522|1,15522|5,15696|0,15696|6) - I wouldn't recommend this pattern, change it or remove it.
If you remove it all, 00:14:999 - add a LN on 6 and ends in 00:15:696 - , 00:15:348 - add a LN on 2 and ends in 00:15:696, and 00:15:999 - add notes on 3 and 5 or 1 and 7. | ✓
00:36:975 (36975|4,36975|2,37150|5,37150|1,37324|6,37324|0,37499|5,37499|1,37673|4,37673|2) - ^ same but if you remove it. add LN on 2 and ends with 00:15:696, 00:37:324 - add a LN on 6 and ends with 00:15:696 - and 00:15:696 - add notes on 3 and 5. | ✓

[Hard]
Suggestions:
00:00:348 - add a note on 5 | ✓ added on 6
00:01:045 - ^ note on 6 | ✓ added on 5
00:01:743 - add a note on 3 | ✓
00:02:441 - add a note on 2 | ✓

[Insane]
00:15:435 (15435|0,15609|0) - move 1 column to the right | I prefer all the chords to be alike
00:15:522 (15522|6) - move 1 column to the left | same as above
Thank you! ^^
lenpai
Beatmap Nominator
1,772 posts
Joined December 2014
lenpai
Going for rank?
Nice.
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Tristan97
189 posts
Joined November 2013
Tristan97
Mod Time:

7K Insane:

00:24:941 (24941|1) - remove and move to (24941|1), then making
00:25:115 (25115|0) - a four note chord with 00:25:115 (25115|1) - 00:25:115 (25115|4) - and 00:25:115 (25115|6) -

besides that my only real complaint is the right hand trill pattern occurring 5 times on the same two lanes. Pls diversify, and then you'll be pretty well off imo.
Nivrad00
556 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Nivrad00

Tristan97 wrote:

Mod Time:

7K Insane:

00:24:941 (24941|1) - remove and move to (24941|1), then making
00:25:115 (25115|0) - a four note chord with 00:25:115 (25115|1) - 00:25:115 (25115|4) - and 00:25:115 (25115|6) -

besides that my only real complaint is the right hand trill pattern occurring 5 times on the same two lanes. Pls diversify, and then you'll be pretty well off imo.
All suggestions taken. Thanks Tristan ^^
schwarzvgrune
1,214 posts
Joined April 2014
schwarzvgrune
M4M

general

turn off widescreen support if you don't use SB
i've never seen a mapset that skips the difficulty ladder.
it would be better to raise your easy diffs to normal..
its usually NM HD INSANE. more than 1.5 star will make that easy into normal.


insane

00:05:057 (5057|5,5057|3,5057|6) - add 1 more, you use 4 on 00:07:848 (7848|4,7848|6,7848|1,7848|3) -
i believe they use the same number of notes for those chords, just different emphasis.

00:13:080 (13080|4) - ghost note.. delete.. please avoid ghost note on all of your diffs.. QAT usually take issue with this
00:13:167 - can use 2 or 3 to mimic the chord
00:34:882 (34882|0,35231|5) - change to LN? u use that here 00:34:534 (34534|5) - and there is guitar sound there

00:38:109 (38109|5,38196|4,38284|3,38371|2,38458|1) - revamp the whole pattern... some ghost notes..
00:38:284 (38284|3,38458|1) - here for example

00:39:156 (39156|1) - delete, ghost note
00:40:900 (40900|5,40987|4) - ghost note
00:40:987 (40987|4) - you can argue there is a sound here but its extremely faint almost inaudible, definitely inaudible if played on normal speed. its difficult even to catch on 25% playback.
00:41:946 (41946|3) - ghost notes
00:43:778 (43778|5) - ^

and etc there are a lot of them, please re check on all diffs.
you have no issue with patterning and note placement, so i have no further comment.. please be careful on ghost note.
Nivrad00
556 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Nivrad00

schwarzvgrune wrote:

M4M

general

turn off widescreen support if you don't use SB | ✓
i've never seen a mapset that skips the difficulty ladder.
it would be better to raise your easy diffs to normal..
its usually NM HD INSANE. more than 1.5 star will make that easy into normal. | ✓ raised the difficulty a little


insane

00:05:057 (5057|5,5057|3,5057|6) - add 1 more, you use 4 on 00:07:848 (7848|4,7848|6,7848|1,7848|3) -
i believe they use the same number of notes for those chords, just different emphasis. | ✓

00:13:080 (13080|4) - ghost note.. delete.. please avoid ghost note on all of your diffs.. QAT usually take issue with this | I think a lot of the ghost notes you pointed out are just so quiet that it's impossible to tell whether they exist or not. But in any case, I think their ambiguity and their position in the middle of fast streams make them more prominent to the player than to someone listening on a slow playback speed. I'll wait to see what a BN or QAT says before changing anything.
00:13:167 - can use 2 or 3 to mimic the chord | I used volume more than I did amount of notes when dealing with quiet octaves like this
00:34:882 (34882|0,35231|5) - change to LN? u use that here 00:34:534 (34534|5) - and there is guitar sound there | ✓

00:38:109 (38109|5,38196|4,38284|3,38371|2,38458|1) - revamp the whole pattern... some ghost notes..
00:38:284 (38284|3,38458|1) - here for example

00:39:156 (39156|1) - delete, ghost note
00:40:900 (40900|5,40987|4) - ghost note
00:40:987 (40987|4) - you can argue there is a sound here but its extremely faint almost inaudible, definitely inaudible if played on normal speed. its difficult even to catch on 25% playback.
00:41:946 (41946|3) - ghost notes
00:43:778 (43778|5) - ^

and etc there are a lot of them, please re check on all diffs.
you have no issue with patterning and note placement, so i have no further comment.. please be careful on ghost note.
Thanks for the mod! Also thanks for pointing out the ghost notes to me... I've never considered them before in this map. I guess my style of charting isn't very literal ^^'
Kamikaze
2,898 posts
Joined November 2012
Kamikaze
Self-reminder to get my lazy ass off to mod this thing
Okay, IRC mod done
SPOILER
2015-03-22 20:35 -Kamikaze-: d-d-d-d-d-dayum
2015-03-22 20:35 -Kamikaze-: get in da editor
2015-03-22 20:36 Nivrad00: kk
2015-03-22 20:37 -Kamikaze-: are 8 HP/ODs on every diff intentional?
2015-03-22 20:37 Nivrad00: uhhhhh i never thought about it
2015-03-22 20:37 -Kamikaze-: do 7,5 on normal and 8,5 on insane
2015-03-22 20:38 Nivrad00: ok
2015-03-22 20:38 -Kamikaze-: let's start with normal
2015-03-22 20:38 -Kamikaze-: 00:11:161 (11161|2) - I think this would sound better as 1/1 LN and without 00:11:336 (11336|3) - 
2015-03-22 20:38 -Kamikaze-: expresses 1/4 better
2015-03-22 20:39 Nivrad00: one sec im lagging
2015-03-22 20:39 Nivrad00: doing the od hp thing
2015-03-22 20:39 -Kamikaze-: sure
2015-03-22 20:40 Nivrad00: uh i prefer it like it is
2015-03-22 20:40 Nivrad00: for consistency if anything else
2015-03-22 20:41 -Kamikaze-: okay
2015-03-22 20:41 -Kamikaze-: 00:15:696 (15696|6,15696|0) - holding 2+6 into hitting 1+7 is p hard for newbies
2015-03-22 20:41 -Kamikaze-: suggesting to move single notes into 35
2015-03-22 20:41 -Kamikaze-: inwards movement is just easier to do
2015-03-22 20:41 Nivrad00: arg a previous modder suggested this pattern
2015-03-22 20:41 Nivrad00: kk changed
2015-03-22 20:41 Nivrad00: and i'll change it for the other LNs too
2015-03-22 20:42 -Kamikaze-: sure
2015-03-22 20:42 -Kamikaze-: 00:21:801 (21801|4,21801|2) - I don't like how you accent so quiet sound with double LNs
2015-03-22 20:43 -Kamikaze-: I mean, it's barerly audible
2015-03-22 20:43 -Kamikaze-: change into single LN on 4th
2015-03-22 20:44 Nivrad00: ok
2015-03-22 20:44 -Kamikaze-: 00:31:045 - delete one note maybe? It's just one instrument and quite low volume one too
2015-03-22 20:45 Nivrad00: 00:32:964 - i'll change it here too
2015-03-22 20:45 -Kamikaze-: yeah
2015-03-22 20:45 Nivrad00: at 31:045 i charted a kick
2015-03-22 20:45 Nivrad00: to make the SR higher
2015-03-22 20:45 Nivrad00: it happens throughout the chart is that a bad idea
2015-03-22 20:45 -Kamikaze-: lol
2015-03-22 20:46 -Kamikaze-: well it isn't anything bad
2015-03-22 20:46 Nivrad00: like i mean
2015-03-22 20:46 -Kamikaze-: it just sounds weird
2015-03-22 20:46 Nivrad00: it's laned
2015-03-22 20:46 Nivrad00: the left side is drums
2015-03-22 20:46 -Kamikaze-: o
2015-03-22 20:46 -Kamikaze-: advanced mlg laning
2015-03-22 20:46 Nivrad00: :P
2015-03-22 20:47 -Kamikaze-: now, the thing that annoys me a bit about this diff
2015-03-22 20:47 -Kamikaze-: stuff like this 00:40:987 (40987|5,41161|4,41336|3,41510|2,41685|1,41859|0) - 
2015-03-22 20:47 -Kamikaze-: mapped to sounds that are almost non existant
2015-03-22 20:47 -Kamikaze-: not to mention that this is (most likely) for piano that is on diffrent snaps
2015-03-22 20:48 Nivrad00: uhh i was being expressive
2015-03-22 20:48 -Kamikaze-: you have to really deeply listen into it to get what is this mapped for
2015-03-22 20:48 Nivrad00: ? really
2015-03-22 20:48 -Kamikaze-: yeah
2015-03-22 20:48 -Kamikaze-: when I was watching auto I just didn't know what this is for
2015-03-22 20:48 -Kamikaze-: now I sorta get it
2015-03-22 20:48 Nivrad00: i thought it was pretty obvious
2015-03-22 20:48 Nivrad00: alright
2015-03-22 20:48 Nivrad00: but it happens a lot
2015-03-22 20:49 -Kamikaze-: yeah
2015-03-22 20:49 Nivrad00: and the only other thing to chart is drums
2015-03-22 20:49 Nivrad00: so that's really repetitive
2015-03-22 20:49 -Kamikaze-: it is consistent
2015-03-22 20:49 -Kamikaze-: you could alter between drums and piano more I guess
2015-03-22 20:49 -Kamikaze-: but it's up to you
2015-03-22 20:49 Nivrad00: i'll see what i can change
2015-03-22 20:49 -Kamikaze-: 00:51:452 - why only one note here?
2015-03-22 20:50 Nivrad00: symmetrical lmao
2015-03-22 20:50 -Kamikaze-: yeah I noticed that
2015-03-22 20:50 Nivrad00: is that a bad idea
2015-03-22 20:51 -Kamikaze-: nah, not really
2015-03-22 20:51 -Kamikaze-: I'm just being picky with density consistency
2015-03-22 20:51 Nivrad00: alrighto
2015-03-22 20:52 -Kamikaze-: 00:56:685 - this sounds like it could even use a triple chord tho
2015-03-22 20:52 -Kamikaze-: and that'd make it symmetric
2015-03-22 20:52 -Kamikaze-: if you get what I mean
2015-03-22 20:52 Nivrad00: isn't that also aproblem with density consistency?
2015-03-22 20:53 -Kamikaze-: nah, piano is louder here
2015-03-22 20:53 -Kamikaze-: I think it can warrant 2 notes at least
2015-03-22 20:53 Nivrad00: http://puu.sh/gLf4m.jpg i'll do this
2015-03-22 20:53 -Kamikaze-: that works too
2015-03-22 20:55 -Kamikaze-: 00:57:906 (57906|5,58080|4,58254|3,58429|2,58603|1,58778|0) - damn first 2 notes are on point with piano and rest is sort of random
2015-03-22 20:55 Nivrad00: :x
2015-03-22 20:56 -Kamikaze-: 01:04:185 - add for consistency 01:05:580 - same
2015-03-22 20:56 Nivrad00: sure
2015-03-22 20:57 -Kamikaze-: 01:08:720 (68720|0,68894|1,69068|2,69243|3,69417|4,69592|5,69766|6) - this is totally random
2015-03-22 20:57 Nivrad00: but it's the same way i charted every other piano stream
2015-03-22 20:58 -Kamikaze-: yeah, and that's what I don't like about this diff
2015-03-22 20:58 -Kamikaze-: I mean, just listen to it with hitsounds
2015-03-22 20:58 -Kamikaze-: it sounds off
2015-03-22 20:59 Nivrad00: ok what do you think i should do
2015-03-22 20:59 Nivrad00: well i know it's off
2015-03-22 20:59 Nivrad00: i just didn't think it would bother anyone playing a 1.5* map
2015-03-22 20:59 Nivrad00: from 01:47:789 -  to like
2015-03-22 20:59 -Kamikaze-: only map stronger pianos in that part
2015-03-22 20:59 Nivrad00: 02:17:092 -
2015-03-22 21:00 Nivrad00: it's the same thing over and over
2015-03-22 21:00 -Kamikaze-: you have a point, it wouldn't bother anyone playing that diff too much
2015-03-22 21:00 -Kamikaze-: but
2015-03-22 21:00 -Kamikaze-: you know how ranking a map here works
2015-03-22 21:00 Nivrad00: i really dont
2015-03-22 21:00 Nivrad00: this is my first time trying
2015-03-22 21:00 Nivrad00: lmao
2015-03-22 21:00 Nivrad00: 01:08:720 (68720|0,69068|2,69417|4,69766|6) - can i just leave these four
2015-03-22 21:00 -Kamikaze-: you are just not getting it ranked when it sounds off
2015-03-22 21:01 -Kamikaze-: yeah, sounds good
2015-03-22 21:01 -Kamikaze-: 01:14:475 (74475|5,74475|4) - delete one of'em for consistency
2015-03-22 21:01 Nivrad00: so            you can't be expressive
2015-03-22 21:01 Nivrad00: well they DISCOURAGE being expressive
2015-03-22 21:01 -Kamikaze-: hmm, it's not that
2015-03-22 21:02 -Kamikaze-: it's just that if you're being expressive you have to be pinpoint on it
2015-03-22 21:02 Nivrad00: alright
2015-03-22 21:02 -Kamikaze-: 01:18:138 - add a note here
2015-03-22 21:02 Nivrad00: that's still discouraging
2015-03-22 21:03 -Kamikaze-: well yeah
2015-03-22 21:03 Nivrad00: and okay
2015-03-22 21:04 -Kamikaze-: 01:22:499 -  add note here for consistency again
2015-03-22 21:04 -Kamikaze-: aaand delete one note here 01:25:638 - 
2015-03-22 21:04 Nivrad00: uhhhhhh consistency with what
2015-03-22 21:04 -Kamikaze-: with next drums
2015-03-22 21:04 -Kamikaze-: that are mapped as doubles
2015-03-22 21:04 Nivrad00: oh
2015-03-22 21:05 Nivrad00: ok
2015-03-22 21:05 Nivrad00: sorry i was trying to make that pattern work
2015-03-22 21:05 -Kamikaze-: no problem
2015-03-22 21:06 -Kamikaze-: btw have you already changed notes on 01:25:464 - ?
2015-03-22 21:06 Nivrad00: yeah
2015-03-22 21:06 -Kamikaze-: cool, so next note should be on 4th
2015-03-22 21:06 Nivrad00: yep
2015-03-22 21:07 -Kamikaze-: 01:27:034 - delete one
2015-03-22 21:07 -Kamikaze-: 01:32:615 - same
2015-03-22 21:07 Nivrad00: this pattern is the same as a pattern earlier on
2015-03-22 21:08 Nivrad00: should i delete notes in those too
2015-03-22 21:08 Nivrad00: mostly i did it for SR
2015-03-22 21:08 -Kamikaze-: I pointed out them alread
2015-03-22 21:08 -Kamikaze-: alrady
2015-03-22 21:08 Nivrad00: ?
2015-03-22 21:08 -Kamikaze-: some are good because they are loud
2015-03-22 21:08 -Kamikaze-: but those I pointed out are too quiet for 2 notes
2015-03-22 21:09 Nivrad00: ah
2015-03-22 21:09 Nivrad00: i was just following consistency
2015-03-22 21:09 Nivrad00: i'll delete
2015-03-22 21:09 Nivrad00: SR is going to drop a bunch already anyways
2015-03-22 21:09 -Kamikaze-: lemme take a 15 min break
2015-03-22 21:09 Nivrad00: ok
2015-03-22 21:09 -Kamikaze-: I'm watchin french tournament for which I selected 8k mappool
2015-03-22 21:09 -Kamikaze-: lol
2015-03-22 21:09 Nivrad00: o nice
2015-03-22 21:09 -Kamikaze-: http://www.twitch.tv/osufrlive
2015-03-22 21:10 Nivrad00: i already have the stream up actually
2015-03-22 21:10 -Kamikaze-: o
2015-03-22 21:10 -Kamikaze-: nice
2015-03-22 21:10 Nivrad00: it just
2015-03-22 21:10 Nivrad00: oh therei t goes
2015-03-22 21:34 -Kamikaze-: ok, back
2015-03-22 21:34 -Kamikaze-: 01:38:196 - delete one
2015-03-22 21:36 Nivrad00: ok
2015-03-22 21:36 -Kamikaze-: and about that part you mentioned
2015-03-22 21:36 -Kamikaze-: fix piano streams like you did earlier and just layer more kicks
2015-03-22 21:36 -Kamikaze-: that way you won't lose too much SR
2015-03-22 21:36 Nivrad00: i've already changed all the streams
2015-03-22 21:36 Nivrad00: o/
2015-03-22 21:36 -Kamikaze-: \o
2015-03-22 21:37 -Kamikaze-: 02:19:534 (139534|4) - move 1/2 earlier
2015-03-22 21:37 Nivrad00: the SR is actually higher than when I began
2015-03-22 21:37 Nivrad00: i dont knwo what happened
2015-03-22 21:37 -Kamikaze-: o
2015-03-22 21:37 -Kamikaze-: SR is a mystery
2015-03-22 21:37 Nivrad00: i was charting the pattern with the uh
2015-03-22 21:37 Nivrad00: pitches
2015-03-22 21:37 Nivrad00: instead of the volume
2015-03-22 21:37 Nivrad00: which i think is more intuitive
2015-03-22 21:37 -Kamikaze-: makes sense
2015-03-22 21:38 -Kamikaze-: 02:21:278 - add one for crash
2015-03-22 21:38 Nivrad00: k
2015-03-22 21:38 -Kamikaze-: 02:25:987 - add here maybe for stronger piano?
2015-03-22 21:38 -Kamikaze-: 02:25:464 - same
2015-03-22 21:39 -Kamikaze-: I really like the way you've ended this diff
2015-03-22 21:39 -Kamikaze-: feels classy
2015-03-22 21:39 Nivrad00: good idea
2015-03-22 21:39 Nivrad00: and thanks
2015-03-22 21:40 -Kamikaze-: okay, 1 diff down, 2 to go
2015-03-22 21:40 -Kamikaze-: brb 5 mins
2015-03-22 21:40 Nivrad00: ^^
2015-03-22 21:40 -Kamikaze-: or 10
2015-03-22 21:40 Nivrad00: k
2015-03-22 21:41 Nivrad00: kk
2015-03-22 21:56 -Kamikaze-: b a c k
2015-03-22 21:56 Nivrad00: cool cool
2015-03-22 21:57 -Kamikaze-: hard diff now
2015-03-22 21:57 -Kamikaze-: 00:11:510 - add on 7th
2015-03-22 21:58 Nivrad00: k
2015-03-22 21:58 -Kamikaze-: 00:14:999 (14999|2,15086|3,15173|4,15260|5) - move one column right and then add on 00:15:696 - at 6th 
2015-03-22 21:59 -Kamikaze-: possibly even add 2 notes because of crash
2015-03-22 22:00 Nivrad00: i like the symmetry better
2015-03-22 22:00 Nivrad00: but i'll add a note
2015-03-22 22:00 -Kamikaze-: 00:44:475 (44475|4,44475|5,44650|1) - you've placed notes wrong
2015-03-22 22:00 -Kamikaze-: first one should be single note, second should be a double
2015-03-22 22:02 Nivrad00: i was usiung doubles to represent piano
2015-03-22 22:02 Nivrad00: at that moment
2015-03-22 22:02 Nivrad00: um i wasn't paying attention to note density which i guess is a thing i do a lot
2015-03-22 22:02 -Kamikaze-: but you seemed to use doubles for kick also
2015-03-22 22:02 -Kamikaze-: yeah maybe lol
2015-03-22 22:02 Nivrad00: welll
2015-03-22 22:02 Nivrad00: well but only for that time
2015-03-22 22:02 Nivrad00: where
2015-03-22 22:02 Nivrad00: i was using doubles
2015-03-22 22:03 -Kamikaze-: hmm
2015-03-22 22:03 Nivrad00: i just dont notice chord density inconsistency when i play maps
2015-03-22 22:03 Nivrad00: so i dont focus on it when i make maps
2015-03-22 22:03 -Kamikaze-: 00:45:348 - this also has 1 note and then 00:46:045 - we're back to doubles
2015-03-22 22:03 -Kamikaze-: so make that consistent I guess
2015-03-22 22:04 Nivrad00: well at 45:348 i wasn't even charting a drum
2015-03-22 22:04 Nivrad00: i just dropped the drum at that beat because the space was already occupied
2015-03-22 22:04 -Kamikaze-: o, maybe
2015-03-22 22:04 Nivrad00: like filled
2015-03-22 22:04 Nivrad00: by piano stuff
2015-03-22 22:04 Nivrad00: u know
2015-03-22 22:04 -Kamikaze-: yeah, but what I mean is
2015-03-22 22:04 Nivrad00: my layering is inconsistent sorry xc
2015-03-22 22:04 -Kamikaze-: that you made singles for that sound only in 2 places
2015-03-22 22:05 Nivrad00: oh
2015-03-22 22:05 Nivrad00: alright i'll fix it
2015-03-22 22:05 Nivrad00: you missed 00:39:068 -
2015-03-22 22:05 Nivrad00: and 00:38:371 -
2015-03-22 22:05 -Kamikaze-: o
2015-03-22 22:05 -Kamikaze-: _F U C
2015-03-22 22:05 Nivrad00: and 00:39:766 -
2015-03-22 22:05 Nivrad00: i think i'll leave it then lmao
2015-03-22 22:05 -Kamikaze-: okay I get it
2015-03-22 22:05 -Kamikaze-: ;_;
2015-03-22 22:06 Nivrad00: lmao sorr
2015-03-22 22:06 -Kamikaze-: np
2015-03-22 22:06 -Kamikaze-: it's nothing major
2015-03-22 22:06 -Kamikaze-: 00:50:406 - imo this should be a triple and 00:50:754 - should be  adouble
2015-03-22 22:06 -Kamikaze-: judging by volume and stuff
2015-03-22 22:07 Nivrad00: oo i remember working on this part
2015-03-22 22:07 Nivrad00: i couldn't make the pattern look nice
2015-03-22 22:08 -Kamikaze-: hmm
2015-03-22 22:08 -Kamikaze-: delete this? 00:50:406 (50406|0) - 
2015-03-22 22:08 -Kamikaze-: or 00:50:406 (50406|4) - 
2015-03-22 22:08 -Kamikaze-: should still look good
2015-03-22 22:09 Nivrad00: well i dont think the first one looks good
2015-03-22 22:09 Nivrad00: and the second one has the first lane too empty
2015-03-22 22:09 Nivrad00: i think i focus on aesthetic more than other charters
2015-03-22 22:09 Nivrad00: i'll figure it out though
2015-03-22 22:09 Nivrad00: i'll delete a note
2015-03-22 22:09 Nivrad00: carry on
2015-03-22 22:09 -Kamikaze-: I care about aesthetics too c:
2015-03-22 22:09 -Kamikaze-: but I guess I'm more about making stuff comfortable to play
2015-03-22 22:10 Nivrad00: i didn't mean to imply i was skimping on playability to increase aesthetic
2015-03-22 22:10 -Kamikaze-: avoiding jackhammers and weird finger transtions
2015-03-22 22:10 Nivrad00: more like i skimp on consistency
2015-03-22 22:10 Nivrad00: and accuracy
2015-03-22 22:10 -Kamikaze-: yeah I know
2015-03-22 22:10 Nivrad00: ok cool
2015-03-22 22:10 -Kamikaze-: I get what you mean
2015-03-22 22:10 Nivrad00: yeh
2015-03-22 22:11 -Kamikaze-: 00:59:999 - delete LN from 6th and add note on 1st
2015-03-22 22:11 Nivrad00: i k
2015-03-22 22:11 Nivrad00: *k
2015-03-22 22:11 -Kamikaze-: o, just noticed that that time sig looks funny
2015-03-22 22:11 -Kamikaze-: 59:999
2015-03-22 22:12 -Kamikaze-: so close yet so far
2015-03-22 22:12 Nivrad00: o-o
2015-03-22 22:12 Nivrad00: how did
2015-03-22 22:12 Nivrad00: what
2015-03-22 22:12 -Kamikaze-: idk man
2015-03-22 22:12 -Kamikaze-: ~ m a g i c ~
2015-03-22 22:13 Nivrad00: i just accidentally closed the tab
2015-03-22 22:13 Nivrad00: can you save our PM for me
2015-03-22 22:13 Nivrad00: lmao
2015-03-22 22:13 Nivrad00: and also what? doesn't the second number represent how many beats into a measure you are
2015-03-22 22:13 Nivrad00: oh you're talking about the timestamp
2015-03-22 22:13 -Kamikaze-: nope
2015-03-22 22:13 Nivrad00: nbm lmao
2015-03-22 22:14 -Kamikaze-: LOL
2015-03-22 22:14 Nivrad00: mv,*
2015-03-22 22:14 -Kamikaze-: ggwp
2015-03-22 22:14 Nivrad00: *nvm
2015-03-22 22:14 -Kamikaze-: and dw I have logs saved
2015-03-22 22:14 -Kamikaze-: 01:18:225 - missing 1/4 on purpose?
2015-03-22 22:15 Nivrad00: uhh i think i couldn't figure out a way to add the 1/4 without it getting crowded
2015-03-22 22:15 Nivrad00: and still ahve the melody start correctly
2015-03-22 22:15 Nivrad00: i'll fix thtsa
2015-03-22 22:15 Nivrad00: that*
2015-03-22 22:15 -Kamikaze-: coolies
2015-03-22 22:16 -Kamikaze-: 01:21:278 - add at 7th
2015-03-22 22:17 Nivrad00: already done
2015-03-22 22:17 -Kamikaze-: `kay
2015-03-22 22:17 Nivrad00: it happens like 3 or 4 times so i changed them all
2015-03-22 22:17 -Kamikaze-: yeah, I was just about to point out next one
2015-03-22 22:17 -Kamikaze-: at 1:25
2015-03-22 22:17 Nivrad00: :P
2015-03-22 22:18 Nivrad00: i think hard is my best difficulty
2015-03-22 22:18 -Kamikaze-: it looks very interesting
2015-03-22 22:19 Nivrad00: o-o thats good right
2015-03-22 22:19 -Kamikaze-: yeah
2015-03-22 22:19 -Kamikaze-: very good
2015-03-22 22:19 Nivrad00: sweet
2015-03-22 22:19 -Kamikaze-: we don't get a lot of good HD diffs here
2015-03-22 22:19 Nivrad00: what makes you say that though?
2015-03-22 22:20 Nivrad00: o
2015-03-22 22:20 -Kamikaze-: most of them are just stripped down IN diffs
2015-03-22 22:20 Nivrad00: well sweet
2015-03-22 22:20 -Kamikaze-: 01:36:627 - add more notes for crash?
2015-03-22 22:21 Nivrad00: k
2015-03-22 22:21 Nivrad00: are the jacks too much
2015-03-22 22:21 Nivrad00: nah
2015-03-22 22:21 Nivrad00: they're fine
2015-03-22 22:21 -Kamikaze-: it's 1/2 on 172
2015-03-22 22:21 -Kamikaze-: it's not hard
2015-03-22 22:22 -Kamikaze-: 01:52:586 - missing piano note
2015-03-22 22:22 -Kamikaze-: 01:58:167 - ^
2015-03-22 22:22 Nivrad00: yeah i'll fix all of them
2015-03-22 22:25 -Kamikaze-: 02:21:103 - I actually kinda expected a 1/2 LN here
2015-03-22 22:25 Nivrad00: uhh maybe
2015-03-22 22:25 Nivrad00: but then it would be inconsistent with the other times this melody appears
2015-03-22 22:25 -Kamikaze-: yeah
2015-03-22 22:26 -Kamikaze-: nvm that
2015-03-22 22:26 -Kamikaze-: 02:24:068 - added note here? y/n
2015-03-22 22:27 Nivrad00: sorry i was checking the previous melodies
2015-03-22 22:27 Nivrad00: nah
2015-03-22 22:27 -Kamikaze-: add then
2015-03-22 22:27 Nivrad00: ?
2015-03-22 22:28 -Kamikaze-: at the timestamp
2015-03-22 22:28 -Kamikaze-: add on 7th
2015-03-22 22:28 -Kamikaze-: 02:29:650 - here too
2015-03-22 22:28 Nivrad00: OH
2015-03-22 22:28 Nivrad00: that
2015-03-22 22:28 Nivrad00: i already did add on 7
2015-03-22 22:28 Nivrad00: so i thought you meant add on 2 or something
2015-03-22 22:28 -Kamikaze-: oh
2015-03-22 22:28 -Kamikaze-: lmao
2015-03-22 22:30 -Kamikaze-: 02:31:568 - [http://puu.sh/gLoFO/2506e396e9.png this] feels more accurate to the music imo
2015-03-22 22:31 Nivrad00: i think alternating left-right is too hard for this difficulty
2015-03-22 22:31 -Kamikaze-: hmm
2015-03-22 22:31 -Kamikaze-: http://puu.sh/gLoR8/558fdd040d.png ?
2015-03-22 22:32 Nivrad00: ehhhhhhhhhhhhh
2015-03-22 22:32 Nivrad00: this entire diff i was avoiding doing any sort of patterns with 1/4 except
2015-03-22 22:32 Nivrad00: like
2015-03-22 22:32 Nivrad00: completely unbroken stairs
2015-03-22 22:33 -Kamikaze-: yeah I get it
2015-03-22 22:33 -Kamikaze-: but somehow this drum sound just right for this kind of pattern
2015-03-22 22:33 -Kamikaze-: maybe just do a trill?
2015-03-22 22:33 Nivrad00: of course
2015-03-22 22:33 Nivrad00: in insane it's a trill
2015-03-22 22:34 -Kamikaze-: oh, okay
2015-03-22 22:34 -Kamikaze-: it wouldn't be too hard for this diff to have a 1/4 two hand symmetric trill tho
2015-03-22 22:34 -Kamikaze-: something like 3535353
2015-03-22 22:34 Nivrad00: well alright if you say so
2015-03-22 22:35 -Kamikaze-: 35 trill is the most basic trill you'll find
2015-03-22 22:35 -Kamikaze-: and the easiest
2015-03-22 22:36 -Kamikaze-: okay, last diff
2015-03-22 22:36 Nivrad00: http://puu.sh/gLpgB.jpg would this be any better
2015-03-22 22:36 Nivrad00: really not a fan of the trill for this diff
2015-03-22 22:36 -Kamikaze-: okay, looks better
2015-03-22 22:36 Nivrad00: cool cool
2015-03-22 22:37 -Kamikaze-: I'll just do a quick check on Insane since I don't have much time left
2015-03-22 22:37 Nivrad00: ok that's cool
2015-03-22 22:37 -Kamikaze-: 00:09:068 (9068|6) - you sure about this 1/4 LN?
2015-03-22 22:37 -Kamikaze-: it'll be annoying to acc
2015-03-22 22:38 Nivrad00: mm
2015-03-22 22:38 -Kamikaze-: 00:10:464 (10464|4,10638|4) - same thing + 1/4 shield damn
2015-03-22 22:38 Nivrad00: yeah but
2015-03-22 22:38 Nivrad00: that would be played the same way
2015-03-22 22:38 Nivrad00: if it was just a normal jack
2015-03-22 22:38 Nivrad00: you would release it at around that time
2015-03-22 22:38 -Kamikaze-: surerly it would
2015-03-22 22:38 -Kamikaze-: but the  twist is
2015-03-22 22:39 -Kamikaze-: that it'll be much harder to acc
2015-03-22 22:39 -Kamikaze-: due to wonky LN mechanics
2015-03-22 22:39 Nivrad00: ??? but it's just one note
2015-03-22 22:39 Nivrad00: the accuracy might decrease by like .05%
2015-03-22 22:39 Nivrad00: if you get a 200 on it
2015-03-22 22:40 -Kamikaze-: yeah, it doesn't matter if you play it normally
2015-03-22 22:40 -Kamikaze-: bt when you go for high scores
2015-03-22 22:40 -Kamikaze-: it's pain
2015-03-22 22:40 Nivrad00: even if there's only two of them?
2015-03-22 22:40 -Kamikaze-: syvleon told me similar thing about sv in funka
2015-03-22 22:40 -Kamikaze-: yeah
2015-03-22 22:40 Nivrad00: is that going to affect anyone's score in a significant way
2015-03-22 22:40 -Kamikaze-: when someone goes for SS
2015-03-22 22:40 -Kamikaze-: it's can be annoying
2015-03-22 22:40 Nivrad00: if you're good enough to SS the jack patterns later on in this diff
2015-03-22 22:40 Nivrad00: you're more than good enough to release those LN at the right time
2015-03-22 22:40 Nivrad00: >.>
2015-03-22 22:41 -Kamikaze-: well it's just me nitpicking anyway
2015-03-22 22:41 Nivrad00: i just think the amount of difficulty presented by those LN isn't significant compared to the difficulty of the rest of the chart
2015-03-22 22:41 -Kamikaze-: if you say so
2015-03-22 22:43 -Kamikaze-: from 00:15:696 - there are a lot of 1/4 sounds in the background, not layering them on purpose?
2015-03-22 22:44 -Kamikaze-: 00:26:074 (26074|5,26074|6) - this doesn't fit into minijack imo, move to [45]
2015-03-22 22:44 Nivrad00: yes
2015-03-22 22:44 Nivrad00: too complex
2015-03-22 22:44 -Kamikaze-: I get'cha
2015-03-22 22:44 Nivrad00: mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm these jacks were like the things i was most proud of in this diff
2015-03-22 22:45 Nivrad00: drum breakdowns in general
2015-03-22 22:45 -Kamikaze-: hmm
2015-03-22 22:45 Nivrad00: it's a sharp and loud drummy thing so without any jacks the pattern felt soft
2015-03-22 22:45 -Kamikaze-: idk, to me it feels like minijack into trill like pattern on same sound
2015-03-22 22:45 Nivrad00: so i put the jack in an way that seems intuitive to the rhythm without really considering the volume
2015-03-22 22:46 Nivrad00: i don't understand what you just said
2015-03-22 22:46 -Kamikaze-: 00:36:975 (36975|5,36975|4,37063|4,37063|5) - this pattern into 00:37:063 (37063|5,37063|4,37150|1,37150|2,37237|6,37237|5,37324|0,37324|1) - this pattern when nothing really changes in drums
2015-03-22 22:47 -Kamikaze-: keep it if you like I sorta get what you mean here
2015-03-22 22:47 Nivrad00: ok
2015-03-22 22:48 -Kamikaze-: 00:51:452 - delete one note
2015-03-22 22:48 Nivrad00: k
2015-03-22 22:49 -Kamikaze-: 01:48:138 - layer claps maybe?
2015-03-22 22:49 -Kamikaze-: there are not a lot of them, but would be a nice touch
2015-03-22 22:50 -Kamikaze-: or is 2nd lane for claps
2015-03-22 22:50 Nivrad00: yeah 2nd lane is for claps
2015-03-22 22:50 Nivrad00: and 6 i think
2015-03-22 22:50 Nivrad00: later on
2015-03-22 22:50 -Kamikaze-: dayum
2015-03-22 22:50 -Kamikaze-: but the other thingy is also there when claps are happening
2015-03-22 22:51 Nivrad00: yeah
2015-03-22 22:51 Nivrad00: it's an expressive thing idk
2015-03-22 22:51 -Kamikaze-: so layer it too
2015-03-22 22:51 Nivrad00: sure
2015-03-22 22:51 -Kamikaze-: aroudn 01:53:720 -  too
2015-03-22 22:51 Nivrad00: i think this is a tactic i use in high-density maps that i just kinda used on here without thinking
2015-03-22 22:51 -Kamikaze-: around*
2015-03-22 22:51 Nivrad00: because at a high density no one would tell if there's not enough notes at that one point
2015-03-22 22:51 -Kamikaze-: it's cool
2015-03-22 22:51 Nivrad00: where it's like
2015-03-22 22:51 Nivrad00: you dont NEED a note for every sound
2015-03-22 22:52 Nivrad00: if a note can represent two sounds
2015-03-22 22:52 Nivrad00: both by existing and by positioning!
2015-03-22 22:52 Nivrad00: yeah i'll add the layer
2015-03-22 22:52 -Kamikaze-: !!
2015-03-22 22:52 -Kamikaze-: and then express it even more with hitsounds!
2015-03-22 22:52 -Kamikaze-: hehe
2015-03-22 22:52 -Kamikaze-: 01:56:074 (116074|4) - what is this note for?
2015-03-22 22:52 Nivrad00: ech
2015-03-22 22:52 Nivrad00: hitsounds don't have any expressive potention
2015-03-22 22:52 Nivrad00: potential
2015-03-22 22:52 -Kamikaze-: yeah ik
2015-03-22 22:53 Nivrad00: uhh it's piano
2015-03-22 22:53 Nivrad00: dont you hear it
2015-03-22 22:53 -Kamikaze-: tbh
2015-03-22 22:53 -Kamikaze-: nah
2015-03-22 22:53 -Kamikaze-: oooo
2015-03-22 22:53 -Kamikaze-: I had to slow it down to 25%
2015-03-22 22:53 -Kamikaze-: lol
2015-03-22 22:53 Nivrad00: o-o
2015-03-22 22:53 Nivrad00: well i hear it
2015-03-22 22:53 Nivrad00: it's pretty prominent to me
2015-03-22 22:54 -Kamikaze-: keep it then
2015-03-22 22:54 -Kamikaze-: 02:18:313 - add note on middle maybe?
2015-03-22 22:54 Nivrad00: alright
2015-03-22 22:55 -Kamikaze-: and that's it
2015-03-22 22:55 -Kamikaze-: \:D/
2015-03-22 22:55 Nivrad00: biznasty
2015-03-22 22:55 Nivrad00: thank you so much o/
2015-03-22 22:55 -Kamikaze-: no problem \o/
2015-03-22 22:55 -Kamikaze-: now I'm waiting for you to mod my Granat hehe
2015-03-22 22:55 Nivrad00: can you send me the log >.>
2015-03-22 22:55 Nivrad00: yeah ik
2015-03-22 22:55 Nivrad00: i'm getting there
2015-03-22 22:55 Nivrad00: ^^
2015-03-22 22:55 -Kamikaze-: I'll post log myself in thread
Good luck man! o/
Kaito-kun
490 posts
Joined July 2014
Kaito-kun
Hi, sorry for the late mod, have been busy. Anyways, here's the mod:

[General]
Source: Cytus
Tags: Rayark Chapter 8 Another Me

[Normal]
01:29:650 (89650|0) - Delete this note, I find it unrelevant to the music, or at least not to the instrument you are mapping there

[Hard]
Nothing wrong (=w=)b

[Insane]
Nothing wrong (=w=)b

Had more things to add, but Kamikaze modded at the same time as me (lol), and covered everything except metadata, so at least I was of help :P. Btw, loved your beatmap, please rank it :3

Good Luck with your beatmap :D
Nivrad00
556 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Nivrad00

KaitoKid1998 wrote:

Hi, sorry for the late mod, have been busy. Anyways, here's the mod:

[General]
Source: Cytus | ✓
Tags: Rayark Chapter 8 Another Me | ✓

[Normal]
01:29:650 (89650|0) - Delete this note, I find it unrelevant to the music, or at least not to the instrument you are mapping there | ✓

[Hard]
Nothing wrong (=w=)b

[Insane]
Nothing wrong (=w=)b

Had more things to add, but Kamikaze modded at the same time as me (lol), and covered everything except metadata, so at least I was of help :P. Btw, loved your beatmap, please rank it :3 | thank you <3

Good Luck with your beatmap :D
Thanks a bunch!! ^^
Blocko
osu! Alumni
742 posts
Joined February 2014
Blocko
Thanks for waiting!
Here's the M4M as requested.




[General]
Offset: The offset is rather early for the map. Use this offset 377 so the map is in sync with the music.

Be sure to apply the mod first before applying the offset suggestion!




7K Column:
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
[]
[Normal]
Mod inside
01:08:720 (68720|0,69068|2,69417|4,69766|6) - Ctrl + H for the descending piano pitch

01:45:348 - Add a note here for the piano (preferably on 5). This is so that this part isn't as empty as before.

01:45:696 - Same suggestion as above (on 3). This is so the piano notes trail off, giving the newbies a little one-second break time before starting back up again.

01:58:952 - Add a note here for the crash, similar to what you have on 02:04:534 - .
[Hard]
Mod inside
00:03:138 - Add a note on 7 to increase impact with the crash

00:21:539 (21539|4) - Move to 1 for pitch relevancy with the piano

00:22:499 (22499|3,22499|1) - Move to the right column, then 00:22:673 (22673|6) - move to 1, same reason as above

00:26:859 - Add a note here for the crash

00:33:661 (33661|3,33661|5) - Move both notes one column to the right for the pitch

01:01:394 (61394|0) - What's this note for?

01:58:952 - Add a note here for crash

02:19:882 (139882|5,140580|1) - You can turn these notes into LNs to accentuate the bass

02:40:638 (160638|6,160638|5,160813|1,160813|0,160813|3) - Ctrl + H for piano pitch
[Insane]
Mod inside
00:10:638 (10638|4) - Move to 6 for easier readability

00:13:080 (13080|4) - I think this is a ghost note. Remove?

00:26:859 - Add one note here for the crash
Same suggestion for 01:36:627 -

00:28:036 - I think you missed a piano note at this point in time.
Also, suggesting this note pattern. This one has the piano notes present in this portion of the song while keeping pitch relevancy in place.
Same suggestion for 01:37:673 - , but it doesn't have to strictly follow the pattern suggestion.

00:31:743 - Add a note here for the audible click

00:42:034 (42034|5) - Move to 3, then add a note at 00:42:121 - . This is to continue the piano stream even when they're very slightly audible.

01:00:348 to 01:08:720 - These note placements were weirdly snapped even when they're all in 1/3. Fix them?

02:10:813 - Add at least a note here or fill the section 02:10:666 to 02:11:015 - with a 1/4 stream for the audible clicks so it doesn't give a slight feeling of 'emptiness' to this part.
Same suggestion for this part here 02:12:236 -

02:18:487 - Add a note here for the bass, similar to what you did on the Hard diff.

02:19:882 (139882|5,140580|6) - You can turn these two into long notes to express the bass better

02:21:278 - Add a note here for the crash

Pretty solid mapset overall!

One thing that I'd like to point out is that some patterns repeat over and over, especially for Hard and Insane. Some parts of the music actually repeat themselves in the song, but try to shake things up a little by rearranging a few patterns to increase the variety of patterns on your diffs.




This song has a nice ring to it.
Good luck on rank, Nivradino!
Nivrad00
556 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Nivrad00

Blocko wrote:

Thanks for waiting!
Here's the M4M as requested.




[General]
Offset: The offset is rather early for the map. Use this offset 377 so the map is in sync with the music. | ✓ bloco master offset-finder <3

Be sure to apply the mod first before applying the offset suggestion!




7K Column:
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
[]
[Normal]
Mod inside
01:08:720 (68720|0,69068|2,69417|4,69766|6) - Ctrl + H for the descending piano pitch | ✓

01:45:348 - Add a note here for the piano (preferably on 5). This is so that this part isn't as empty as before. | ✓

01:45:696 - Same suggestion as above (on 3). This is so the piano notes trail off, giving the newbies a little one-second break time before starting back up again. | ✓

01:58:952 - Add a note here for the crash, similar to what you have on 02:04:534 - . | ✓ I'll be honest, I didn't consciously chart a crash in any of these difficulties. the places where it looks like I did are just coincidence X(
[Hard]
Mod inside
00:03:138 - Add a note on 7 to increase impact with the crash | ✓

00:21:539 (21539|4) - Move to 1 for pitch relevancy with the piano | I had that originally but I prefer the pattern over the pitch

00:22:499 (22499|3,22499|1) - Move to the right column, then 00:22:673 (22673|6) - move to 1, same reason as above | I didn't even think about the octave jump X( I want to keep the shield pattern though

00:26:859 - Add a note here for the crash | ✓

00:33:661 (33661|3,33661|5) - Move both notes one column to the right for the pitch | same as above

01:01:394 (61394|0) - What's this note for? | ✓ deleted (there's a glitch where the editor randomly places notes and it's driving me crazy omg)

01:58:952 - Add a note here for crash | ✓

02:19:882 (139882|5,140580|1) - You can turn these notes into LNs to accentuate the bass | ✓

02:40:638 (160638|6,160638|5,160813|1,160813|0,160813|3) - Ctrl + H for piano pitch | tried this earlier but I couldn't make the pattern look right
[Insane]
Mod inside
00:10:638 (10638|4) - Move to 6 for easier readability | the jack is supposed to represent the accented piano note. Also, in this instance I want to avoid creating a 1/4 LN with a note in an adjacent lane on the next 1/2 snap bc I think it's a little unintuitive

00:13:080 (13080|4) - I think this is a ghost note. Remove? | ✓

00:26:859 - Add one note here for the crash | ✓
Same suggestion for 01:36:627 - | ✓

00:28:036 - I think you missed a piano note at this point in time. | actually, I think I just put the previous note on the wrong snap, so I'll fix that
Also, suggesting this note pattern. This one has the piano notes present in this portion of the song while keeping pitch relevancy in place.
Same suggestion for 01:37:673 - , but it doesn't have to strictly follow the pattern suggestion. | same

00:31:743 - Add a note here for the audible click | I'm going to delete the note at 00:31:830 instead because I didn't chart the clicky instrument anywhere else

00:42:034 (42034|5) - Move to 3, then add a note at 00:42:121 - . This is to continue the piano stream even when they're very slightly audible | ✓

01:00:348 to 01:08:720 - These note placements were weirdly snapped even when they're all in 1/3. Fix them? | ✓ fuq sorry that was a resnap-all-notes thing

02:10:813 - Add at least a note here or fill the section 02:10:666 to 02:11:015 - with a 1/4 stream for the audible clicks so it doesn't give a slight feeling of 'emptiness' to this part. | ✓
Same suggestion for this part here 02:12:236 - | ✓

02:18:487 - Add a note here for the bass, similar to what you did on the Hard diff. | I think the sudden decrease in volume is a lot more prominent than the bass. I put a note here in Normal because the low density makes the missing note look more like a mistake than an expressive choice >.>

02:19:882 (139882|5,140580|6) - You can turn these two into long notes to express the bass better | I prefer this pattern with single notes

02:21:278 - Add a note here for the crash | ✓


Pretty solid mapset overall!

One thing that I'd like to point out is that some patterns repeat over and over, especially for Hard and Insane. Some parts of the music actually repeat themselves in the song, but try to shake things up a little by rearranging a few patterns to increase the variety of patterns on your diffs. | actually what I think is interesting here is the difference between charting styles on feel the beats and osumania! I made this diff back on feel the beats, and since moving to mania I've noticed that copypasta and laning aren't anywhere near as common. I've wondered if that means the standard of quality was different back then, but I'm also kind of biased so I'm not a good person to ask

cOUGH COUGH anyways I'll change things if another modder points it out ^^




This song has a nice ring to it. blocko i got you a nice ring wILL YOU MARRY ME
Good luck on rank, Nivradino!
Thank you!!!!!!!!! And don't worry about the wait it's no problem ^^
Arzenvald
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Arzenvald
marked, solid mapset is solid
Blocko
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Blocko
Marked this one too.
Reba
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Reba
Hi~ came from queue (m4m)

Columns: 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6

Normal
00:51:480 (51480|3) - this one should have 2 notes, what i suggest is: 00:51:131 (51131|4,51131|2) - move these two notes to 0 and 6 and then 00:51:480 (51480|3) - in this one place the 2 notes in 2 and 4
01:34:213 delete both and place one in column 3
02:32:120 add 1 or 2 notes

Hard
00:09:096 add a note
00:10:492 ^
02:22:352 ^

Insane
00:02:294 (2294|6) - how about changing this to LN?
00:06:480 add a note
00:10:317 remove 1 note
00:26:015 change both notes to 1/4 above
00:26:102 change both to 1/4 below
00:26:189 (26189|0) - delete
02:03:166 ~ 02:04:474 - i do not think this sounds repetitive like the other ones below.
02:08:748 ~ 02:10:056 - this one either

Man i love these type of jazz music, hope it gets ranked :) Good luck!!
Nivrad00
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Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Nivrad00

- R e b a - wrote:

Hi~ came from queue (m4m)

Columns: 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6

Normal
00:51:480 (51480|3) - this one should have 2 notes, what i suggest is: 00:51:131 (51131|4,51131|2) - move these two notes to 0 and 6 and then 00:51:480 (51480|3) - in this one place the 2 notes in 2 and 4 | ✓
01:34:213 delete both and place one in column 3 | ✓
02:32:120 add 1 or 2 notes | ✓

Hard
00:09:096 add a note | no thanks, I want only one layer for this section
00:10:492 ^ | same
02:22:352 ^ | here I sacrificed chord consistency for the sake of patterning. I think it feels the same to the player either way

Insane
00:02:294 (2294|6) - how about changing this to LN? | I usually avoid LN on piano notes. This is actually an old habit from when I used to make piano-only maps! I thought it was improper to have two types of notes for only one instrument.
00:06:480 add a note | I think the difference from the last chord is too subtle for a player to catch
00:10:317 remove 1 note | the chord represents the piano layer
00:26:015 change both notes to 1/4 above | I thought about this pattern a whole lot (as well as my other jacky patterns) but in the end I decided that this effect -- using harsh jacks to make the notes feel percussive -- is an important part of my charting style and the most unique part of my map. A lot of my maps have weird jack usage, tbh. I'll keep it unless a BN says something
00:26:102 change both to 1/4 below | same
00:26:189 (26189|0) - delete | same
02:03:166 ~ 02:04:474 - i do not think this sounds repetitive like the other ones below. | I hear the new layers, but getting rid of the trill would make this part too easy compared to previous repetitions and I prefer not to chart more piano in the left hand. Too cramped
02:08:748 ~ 02:10:056 - this one eithe | same

Man i love these type of jazz music, hope it gets ranked :) Good luck!!
Thank you so much! I'll have my mod on Adventurer posted ASAP ^^'
Jinjin
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Jinjin
Hey nooooovrad :D

Columns
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Normal]

00:09:445 (9445|3,9620|4,9794|3) - What about moving this 1 column to the right? This avoids the double spacebar minijack that people around this level do not like

00:35:085 (35085|6,35259|5,35434|3,35608|4,35782|2,35957|1) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/h6ofH/7f592f175f.jpg

01:19:213 (79213|3,79387|4,79562|3) - Same suggestion as 00:09:445 -

02:27:585 (147585|3,147759|4,147934|3) - ^

Personal Remarks: This difficulty is solid, I think it's good to go!

[Hard]

00:21:306 (21306|5,21306|3,21567|4,21567|2) - I would Ctrl + J this for pitch relevance -> Edit: nvmd, I see what you did to the pattern starting at 00:32:469 (32469|1,32469|3) - :p. I guess if you were to apply my suggestion, you'd have to change this part as a mirrored version too

00:36:655 (36655|0) - Recommend adding one note here for the strong volume of the bass

00:38:922 (38922|5,38922|3,39096|1) - try to keep the notes the same amount (as compared to 00:40:317 (40317|4,40317|5,40492|2,40492|1) - )

01:41:451 (101451|2,101451|0,101713|2,101713|0,101887|4,101887|5) - I suggest going with the previous atmospheric whistling sounds instead of suddenly switching to this syncopation drum rhythm. It kinda threw me off when I was sight reading it, haha

01:47:817 - to 02:18:515 - I really like the 1/4 stairs mapped in this section of the music, nicely done ~

Personal Remarks: This diff is also pretty well laid out, nothing much for me to go over

[Insane]

Check the ai-mod, there are two overlapped objects

00:01:771 (1771|5) - I think you can add one more note here for the accent

00:10:666 (10666|4) - Move to 6 for a better playability

00:46:422 (46422|1) - I think this note can be removed (unless you were going for the two base clef notes at the piano + percussion)

01:17:469 (77469|0) - Move to column 4 for to highlight that click

01:30:899 (90899|2,90957|3,91015|4,91073|5) - You are snapping this part in accordance with the arpeggio of the synthesizer / keyboard, but after listening to it at 25% speed I think that it should start earlier?

01:41:887 (101887|0) - Moving this note to another column is more effective in the expression for that snare, imo

01:45:463 (105463|5,105463|3) - Move one column to the right (so that this part is balanced for those left hand spacebar people)

02:17:469 (137469|4,137469|5) - Add a note here for chord consistency



Overall, a really nicely made map! I don't think I gave out as many suggestions because the map looks fine to me. Good luck with rank, niv o/
Nivrad00
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Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Nivrad00

iJinjin wrote:

Hey nooooovrad :D

Columns
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Normal]

00:09:445 (9445|3,9620|4,9794|3) - What about moving this 1 column to the right? This avoids the double spacebar minijack that people around this level do not like | ✓

00:35:085 (35085|6,35259|5,35434|3,35608|4,35782|2,35957|1) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/h6ofH/7f592f175f.jpg | ✓

01:19:213 (79213|3,79387|4,79562|3) - Same suggestion as 00:09:445 - | ✓

02:27:585 (147585|3,147759|4,147934|3) - ^ | ✓

Personal Remarks: This difficulty is solid, I think it's good to go!

[Hard]

00:21:306 (21306|5,21306|3,21567|4,21567|2) - I would Ctrl + J this for pitch relevance -> Edit: nvmd, I see what you did to the pattern starting at 00:32:469 (32469|1,32469|3) - :p. I guess if you were to apply my suggestion, you'd have to change this part as a mirrored version too | Yeah I took some liberties with pitch here to make an interesting pattern

00:36:655 (36655|0) - Recommend adding one note here for the strong volume of the bass | ✓

00:38:922 (38922|5,38922|3,39096|1) - try to keep the notes the same amount (as compared to 00:40:317 (40317|4,40317|5,40492|2,40492|1) - ) | ✓ went through and made the entire section more consistent

01:41:451 (101451|2,101451|0,101713|2,101713|0,101887|4,101887|5) - I suggest going with the previous atmospheric whistling sounds instead of suddenly switching to this syncopation drum rhythm. It kinda threw me off when I was sight reading it, haha | Oops x: I see what you mean, but I think I'll leave it because the syncopated rhythm only happens once in the entire song

01:47:817 - to 02:18:515 - I really like the 1/4 stairs mapped in this section of the music, nicely done ~ | thanks! ^^

Personal Remarks: This diff is also pretty well laid out, nothing much for me to go over

[Insane]

Check the ai-mod, there are two overlapped objects | ✓ how did this happen >.>

00:01:771 (1771|5) - I think you can add one more note here for the accent | I prefer it this way bc it's hard to hear two pitches

00:10:666 (10666|4) - Move to 6 for a better playability | the jack expresses the accented piano chord (like at 00:07:701 - )

00:46:422 (46422|1) - I think this note can be removed (unless you were going for the two base clef notes at the piano + percussion) | ✓ tbh I didn't add one note for each sound so much as just put a big chord because the sound is loud x:

01:17:469 (77469|0) - Move to column 4 for to highlight that click | ✓

01:30:899 (90899|2,90957|3,91015|4,91073|5) - You are snapping this part in accordance with the arpeggio of the synthesizer / keyboard, but after listening to it at 25% speed I think that it should start earlier? | ✓ wow you're right o-o How did I not notice this

01:41:887 (101887|0) - Moving this note to another column is more effective in the expression for that snare, imo | I used this kick-snare jack all throughout the chart so I'd rather be consistent

01:45:463 (105463|5,105463|3) - Move one column to the right (so that this part is balanced for those left hand spacebar people) | ✓ good call

02:17:469 (137469|4,137469|5) - Add a note here for chord consistency | ✓



Overall, a really nicely made map! I don't think I gave out as many suggestions because the map looks fine to me. Good luck with rank, niv o/
Thanks!! Great suggestions <3
lenpai
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