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Hanatan - Shiwa [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
puxtu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24 Februari 2015 at 22:25:26

Artist: Hanatan
Title: Shiwa
Tags: bilqiscutee YURiCa cordelia VOCALOID utaite nicovideo buzzG
BPM: 185
Filesize: 8210kb
Play Time: 03:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. bilqis's MX - 4Key (3,54 stars, 2305 notes)
  2. EZ - 4Key (1,42 stars, 744 notes)
  3. HD - 4Key (2,79 stars, 1740 notes)
  4. NM - 4Key (2,15 stars, 1237 notes)
Download: Hanatan - Shiwa
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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「僕は幸せだ。」そう言って目を閉じた
"I am happy" I say, as I close my eyes.
bilqiscutee
edited
Topic Starter
puxtu
well, edited too
Lirai
Mod by Request ~

[NM]

00:04:617 (4617|1,5266|2) - Delete
00:14:996 (14996|3,15644|3) - ^

00:15:806 (15806|1) - Move to 4
00:24:725 (24725|2) - ^

00:26:509 (26509|1) - Delete

00:29:752 (29752|1) - Pindah ke garis merah bawah kolom 1

00:32:347 (32347|2,32509|1) - Move to 1

00:32:996 (32996|2) - Move to 2

00:38:833 (38833|0) - Pindah ke Garis putih atas

00:48:888 (48888|0,49212|0) - Delete

00:49:536 (49536|1) - Move to 4

00:54:401 (54401|2) - Delete
01:00:725 (60725|3) - ^
01:14:510 (74510|3) - ^
01:19:536 (79536|2,79861|1) - ^

01:20:509 (80509|3) - Pindah ke garis putih atas kolom 2

01:48:401 (108401|1) - Move to 1

02:04:131 (124131|1,124455|1,124779|1) - Delete
03:25:860 (205860|3) - ^

[HD]

00:02:834 (2834|1,3158|2) - Delete, gk usah berlebihan ok

00:05:752 (5752|1) - Delete
00:08:347 (8347|1) - ^
00:10:942 (10942|1,12239|2) - ^
00:13:536 (13536|2) - ^
00:33:969 (33969|2) - ^

01:29:915 (89915|2) - Move to 1

Sorry Poor Mod

Good Luck ~
Topic Starter
puxtu

DE-CADE wrote:

Mod by Request ~

[NM]

00:04:617 (4617|1,5266|2) - Delete piano sound. can't remove it
00:14:996 (14996|3,15644|3) - ^ ^

00:15:806 (15806|1) - Move to 4
00:24:725 (24725|2) - ^

00:26:509 (26509|1) - Delete

00:29:752 (29752|1) - Pindah ke garis merah bawah kolom 1

00:32:347 (32347|2,32509|1) - Move to 1

00:32:996 (32996|2) - Move to 2

00:38:833 (38833|0) - Pindah ke Garis putih atas

00:48:888 (48888|0,49212|0) - Delete

00:49:536 (49536|1) - Move to 4

00:54:401 (54401|2) - Delete
01:00:725 (60725|3) - ^
01:14:510 (74510|3) - ^
01:19:536 (79536|2,79861|1) - ^ err, piano sound?

01:20:509 (80509|3) - Pindah ke garis putih atas kolom 2

01:48:401 (108401|1) - Move to 1

02:04:131 (124131|1,124455|1,124779|1) - Delete
03:25:860 (205860|3) - ^

[HD]

00:02:834 (2834|1,3158|2) - Delete, gk usah berlebihan ok

00:05:752 (5752|1) - Delete
00:08:347 (8347|1) - ^
00:10:942 (10942|1,12239|2) - ^
00:13:536 (13536|2) - ^
00:33:969 (33969|2) - ^

01:29:915 (89915|2) - Move to 1

Sorry Poor Mod

Good Luck ~
ok done. thx
MX nya mana?
Lirai

puxtu wrote:

ok done. thx
MX nya mana?
pusing w,
ke hapus orz

nyusul ~
Topic Starter
puxtu

DE-CADE wrote:

puxtu wrote:

ok done. thx
MX nya mana?
pusing w,
ke hapus orz

nyusul ~
ok gw tunggu
Maou - sama
col: 1|2|3|4

NM
Change NM to NM+

01:00:563 (60563|2) - move to 4
01:00:725 (60725|0,60725|3,60888|2,60888|1) - ctrl+J
01:01:212 (61212|3) - move to 3
01:19:861 (79861|1,80022|2,80185|1,80347|2,80509|3) - how about like THIS
01:27:806 (87806|3,88131|2) - remove and try THIS
02:24:401 (144401|3) - move to 3
02:24:725 (144725|2) - move to 4
02:24:888 (144888|3) - move to 2
02:25:212 (145212|0) - move to 2
02:25:536 (145536|2) - move to 1
02:26:023 (146023|0) - move to 2
02:26:185 (146185|1) - move to 3
02:26:509 (146509|3) - move to 1
02:26:833 (146833|1) - move to 1
02:26:996 (146996|1) - move to 3
02:27:320 (147320|3) - move to 1
02:27:482 (147482|1,147482|2) - move to 3 and 4
02:28:130 (148130|1) - move to 4
02:28:779 (148779|3) - move to 2
02:29:428 (149428|2) - move to 4
02:29:590 (149590|2) - move to 2
02:29:915 (149915|0) - move to 4
02:30:077 (150077|2,150077|3) - move to 1 and 2
02:30:563 (150563|2) - move to 4
02:30:725 (150725|3) - move to 1
02:30:888 (150888|3) - move to 3
02:31:212 (151212|3) - move to 2
02:31:374 (151374|0) - move to 4
02:32:671 (152671|3) - move to 2
02:32:833 (152833|2) - move to 4
02:32:996 (152996|1) - move to 3
02:33:157 (153157|3) - move to 2
02:33:320 (153320|2) - move to 4
02:33:482 (153482|0) - move to 2
02:33:806 (153806|1) - move to 1
02:33:968 (153968|3,153969|0) - move to 3 and 4
02:34:617 (154617|2) - move to 2
02:34:942 (154942|3) - move to 1
02:35:103 (155103|2) - move to 2
02:35:266 (155266|0) - move to 3
02:35:428 (155428|2) - move to 2
02:35:428 (155428|1) - move to 1
02:35:590 (155590|1,155752|2) - ctrl+J
02:35:915 (155915|0) - move to 4
02:36:401 (156401|0) - move to 2
02:36:563 (156563|1) - move to 3
02:36:888 (156888|3) - move to 3
02:37:374 (157374|3) - move to 3
02:37:698 (157698|2) - move to 4
02:37:861 (157861|3) - move to 2
02:38:185 (158185|0) - move to 4
02:38:347 (158347|3,158509|1) - ctrl+J
02:38:833 (158833|3) - move to 3
02:38:996 (158996|0) - move to 4
02:39:158 (159158|3) - move to 1
02:39:320 (159320|0) - move to 3
02:39:968 (159968|0) - move to 2
02:40:131 (160131|1) - move to 3
02:40:293 (160293|3) - move to 1
02:40:455 (160455|0) - move to 4
02:40:617 (160617|3) - move to 1
02:40:779 (160779|0) - move to 2
02:41:265 (161265|1) - move to 4
02:41:428 (161428|3) - move to 3
02:41:752 (161752|1) - move to 3
02:42:239 (162239|2) - move to 4
02:42:401 (162401|3) - move to 3
02:43:861 (163861|1) - move to 3
02:44:347 (164347|2) - move to 2
02:46:293 (166293|2) - move to 4
02:46:941 (166941|2) - move to 2
02:47:266 (167266|0) - move to 3
02:47:590 (167590|2) - move to 4
02:48:076 (168076|2) - move to 4
02:48:239 (168239|3) - move to 2
02:48:887 (168887|2) - move to 2
02:49:698 (169698|3) - move to 2
02:49:861 (169861|2) - move to 4
02:50:023 (170023|1) - move to 3
02:50:347 (170347|0) - move to 2
02:50:347 (170347|0) - move to 2
02:50:671 (170671|2) - move to 4
02:50:834 (170834|3) - move to 2
02:51:969 (171969|0) - move to 3
02:52:131 (172131|3) - move to 1
02:52:293 (172293|0) - move to 4
02:52:941 (172941|0) - move to 3
02:53:428 - add note to 4
02:53:590 - add note to 3
02:53:752 - add note to 1
02:53:915 (173915|2) - move to note to 4 and add note to 1
02:54:077 - add note to 3

HD
01:27:806 (87806|3,87888|1,87969|2,88050|0,88131|1,88212|2,88293|0,88374|1) - like THIS?
01:28:942 (88942|1) - move to 1
01:29:104 (89104|0) - remove
01:29:428 (89428|3,89590|0) - remove
01:29:428 (89428|1,89590|2) - ctrl+j
01:29:915 (89915|3) - move to 1
01:30:077 - add note to 3
01:30:239 (90239|1) - move to 4
01:30:401 (90401|3) - remove
01:30:401 (90401|2) - move to 2
01:30:725 (90725|2,90888|0,91050|3) - remove
01:31:698 (91698|3) - remove
01:32:023 (92023|3,92185|0) - remove
01:32:023 (92023|1,92185|2) - ctrl+j
03:11:590 (191590|3) - move to 2?

MX
GOOD :P
Topic Starter
puxtu

Maou - sama wrote:

i cant mod HD and MX for now tired already maybe tomorrow i will finish the HD and MX don't give kudosu yet!!!

Give kudosu to my MOD tomorrow xD
lol ok..
Zillah
I don't really know how to map 4k so I'll just leave my suggestion here :?
Feel free to not change anything if you think you did correctly


[NM]
snares
snare sounds like 00:03:806, 00:04:455, 00:05:104, 00:06:401 and so on are worth to emphasize in my opinion
SPOILER
00:34:617 - 00:38:185
00:39:806 - 00:43:374
00:44:996 - 00:47:915
these 3 sections and the later parts would be better if there are patterns to follow instead of loose notes
the current pattern looks kind of random

00:31:861 - add
00:32:347, 00:32:509, 00:32:833, 00:32:996 - add
00:38:996 (38996|1) - the snare is at 00:39:077
00:54:563 (54563|1) - 00:54:644
00:59:752 (59752|2) - 00:59:833
01:02:347 (62347|1) - 01:02:428
01:03:644 (63644|1) - 01:03:725
01:04:942 (64942|1) - 01:05:023
01:05:590 (65590|1) - 01:05:671

01:07:698 - 01:17:428 - I like this :)

01:48:725 - add
01:59:428 (119428|1) - 01:59:509
02:03:644 - add
02:03:806 - add
02:09:806 (129806|1) - 02:09:888
02:14:996 (134996|1) - 02:15:077
02:17:671 - add
02:17:752 (137752|1) - move to 1
02:18:969 - add
02:20:266 - add
02:32:023 - 02:54:077 - this section actually is harder than the kiais
03:08:347 - add
03:22:455 (202455|1) - 03:22:536
03:30:239 (210239|1) - 03:30:320
03:31:536 (211536|1) - 03:31:617
03:32:833 (212833|1) - 03:32:915
03:41:915 (221915|1) - 03:41:996
03:43:212 (223212|1) - 03:43:293

[HD]
00:13:374 (13374|0) - remove
00:18:563 (18563|1) - ^
00:28:779 - add
00:32:833 - add
00:48:969 (48969|1,49293|1) - remove
00:49:698 (49698|1) - remove
02:04:212 (124212|2,124536|2) - remove
This diff looks good :3

[MX]
00:04:455 (4455|0) - remove or add LN from 00:04:617 to 00:04:779
00:11:104 (11104|0) - remove
00:14:509 (14509|1) - remove
00:14:833 (14833|0) - remove or add LN on next 1/2
00:17:104 (17104|1) - remove
00:25:536 (25536|3,25698|2) - remove
00:32:671 - Add LN
00:32:996 (32996|2) - remove
00:33:158 - Add LN
00:37:374 (37374|3) - move to next 1/2
00:37:698 (37698|3,37698|1,37860|0,37861|2,38023|3,38023|1,38185|2,38185|0,38347|3) - I've no idea what does this whole part represent
00:38:509 - remove 00:38:509 (38509|0) or 00:38:509 (38509|2)
00:39:320 (39320|1) - remove
00:40:779 (40779|0) - move to next 1/2
00:41:104 (41104|3) - remove
Please rearrange 00:44:996 to 00:48:239
00:44:996 - Add LN
00:45:320 (45320|3) - move to 00:45:644
00:45:969 (45969|3) - move to 00:46:131
00:50:509 - Add LN
00:50:833 (50833|0) - remove
00:52:131 (52131|3) - remove
00:52:617 (52617|2,52779|0,52779|3,52942|1,52942|2,52942|3,53104|2,53104|3,53104|0,53104|1) - consider rearrange this part
00:55:942 - add
00:56:023 (56023|2) - move to 1
00:56:671 (56671|2) - remove
01:12:401 (72401|0) - remove
01:14:671 (74671|1) - remove
01:14:833 (74833|0) - remove
01:15:320 (75320|3) - remove
01:16:617 (76617|1) - remove
01:16:779 - add
01:17:266 (77266|2) - remove
01:21:969 (81969|3) - remove
01:24:563 (84563|2) - remove
01:29:104 - 01:32:67 - if the LNs are referring to piano, please note them all
01:33:806 (93806|1) - remove
01:35:104 (95104|1) - remove
01:36:077 (96077|2) - remove
01:36:401 (96401|1) - remove
01:38:833 - x1.5 01:38:996 - x0.5 01:39:158 - x1.0 would be more readable
01:49:698 (109698|0) - remove
01:50:185 - add LN
01:50:428 - add
01:51:806 (111806|1) - LN end at 01:52:131
01:52:779 (112779|1,112779|0,112779|2,112942|3,113104|0,113104|2,113266|3,113266|1,113428|1,113428|0,113428|2) - I've no idea what does this whole part represent
01:54:239 (114239|1) - remove
01:54:563 (114563|2) - remove
01:54:888 (114888|1) - ^
02:00:077 (120077|2) - ^
02:02:347 - add
02:04:942 (124942|2) - remove
02:09:158 (129158|2) - remove
02:09:806 (129806|0,129806|1) - remove
02:10:455 (130455|2) - remove
02:11:185 - add
02:14:671 - add
02:15:320 (135320|1) - remove
02:15:644 (135644|1,135969|2) - remove
02:16:131 - add
02:24:401 (144401|2,144563|0) - remove
02:24:685 (144685|2) - 02:24:725
02:24:887 (144887|2) - move to 2
02:25:982 (145982|1,146063|2) - move to 02:26:023
02:27:279 (147279|2,147360|1) - move to 02:27:320
02:28:577 (148577|2,148658|1) - move to 02:28:617
02:29:874 (149874|2,149955|1) - move to 02:29:915
02:31:171 (151171|2,151252|1) - move to 02:31:212
03:08:428 (188428|2) - remove
03:08:752 (188752|1) - remove
03:08:833 (188833|0) - move to 2
03:09:077 (189077|2) - remove
03:09:239 - add
03:09:320 - add LN
03:11:023 - remove
03:11:104 - add
03:11:266 - add
03:12:401 (192401|1) - remove
03:12:725 (192725|2) - remove
03:14:671 (194671|1) - remove
03:15:969 (195969|0) - remove
03:17:915 (197915|2) - remove
03:18:563 (198563|1) - remove
03:22:454 (202454|3,202454|2) - remove
03:23:104 (203104|1) - remove
03:26:996 (206996|3,206996|2) - remove one note
03:27:969 (207969|2) - remove
03:28:293 (208293|2) - remove
03:28:942 (208942|2) - remove
03:29:266 - add
03:30:239 (210239|3) - remove
03:30:320 - add
03:30:888 - add
03:31:861 - add
03:32:833 (212833|1) - remove
03:34:131 (214131|0) - remove
03:40:617 (220617|2) - remove
03:40:942 - add
03:43:212 (223212|2,223212|0) - remove
03:43:293 - add
Topic Starter
puxtu
thx for your mods zillah, maou! it's really help..

KSHR are you lost? searching for something?
Ginshu
D:
Topic Starter
puxtu

LoveNoobPlayer wrote:

D:
maaf mas, tidak menerima sumbangan
Ginshu
:(
Topic Starter
puxtu

LoveNoobPlayer wrote:

:(
coba ke forum sebelah ya
Lunatic Raccoon
Hello puxtu this is my Mod from Q!
Modding NM and HD only since this song is long and i don't really have time to fully mod it, sorry :'(

General
  1. Too many Kiais?
  2. BG is like you taken from some Shoujo manga/anime...

NM
  1. 00:33:158 (33158|3) replace with a LN
  2. 01:58:455 - 01:58:779 Add a note
  3. 02:04:374 ^
  4. 02:21:401 - 02:21:563 ^
  5. 03:00:482 ^
  6. 03:27:725 ^

HD
  1. Nicely charted
  2. 01:07:050 A suggestion only: Add a LN
  3. 01:20:671 Unsnap note in coll 3
  4. 01:23:266 ^
  5. 01:46:131 to 01:46:455 I think it's too much, let them be 3 single notes
  6. 02:56:671 Add a note since it's a piano chord

Good luck on ranking! Awesome song xD!
Topic Starter
puxtu
thanks for mods..
but where's the MX? :/
Pikobaka
from you Req. XD

1/2/3/4

[NM]

00:02:834 (2834|2) - move to 4
00:04:455 (4455|2) - ^
00:06:401 - add 1 note
00:07:050 - ^
00:07:861 - ^
00:08:996 - ^
00:09:644 - ^
00:10:455 - ^
00:17:428 - ^
00:39:077 (39077|1) - move to 00:38:996
00:54:644 (54644|1) - move to 00:54:563

I'm little mapper level XD

I like this song. Good Luck :D
Topic Starter
puxtu
thanks for your mods piko! 5555 x3
Lunatic Raccoon
God damn connection X.X
Sorry for double-posted
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