-Neipezi wrote:

hello hentai owo

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quality is not very good Thanks for the better quality video!

[Easy]
- you hear a clap sound on slider ticks. you can add the "soft-slidertick 2". I prefer not to use slidertick hitsounds.
00:15:402 (3) - clap add? I don't think so. It doesn't match my hitsound pattern.
01:07:059 (1,2,3) - when the "hai hai hai" in the lyrics, would you add the whistle? (included in other notes) hard to use whistle there without messing with the sampleset and other stuff because I'm also using other custom hitsounds on those notes, and I'd have to create more custom sets in order to do that. I don't think it's so important to use whistle there.

[Normal]
00:16:846 (3) - would you like to add whistle of soft hit sound is not custom? There's no drums on head or end of the slider, so I don't use hitsound on it.

[Hard]
00:25:027 (7) - NC add?
00:32:247 (5) - ^
Added some new combos.


please wait sleep, we will work again
Edit : perfect map, setting.. must register as soon as possible rankings

LixRei wrote:

Came from mod queue... (hi again)
Damn; map's too perfect. Not much to do here; just pointing out some little misses.

[Normal]

1. 01:22:461 (1,2) - Overlaps don't seem that well... That also applies to 01:25:027 (1,2) Overlap is fine imo.
2. And I think you need to decide if stacking notes with 1/2 or 1/1 beat of separation... Sorry if I'm unclear here. I know what you mean, but I made sure it was pretty obvious, as I only used 1/1 stacks for the ends of phrases where there are the claps and vocal "hai hai".

[Hard]

1. 00:53:102 (2,4) - Stack those two. Will look better. ok

[Insane]

1. 01:03:209 (1,2,3,4) - Putting those short sliders here... are you sure? If you are, at least reduce a little the distance of separation (I personally prefer to turn those in streams). Reduced spacing.
2. 01:26:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this pattern can be better if you shape it as a hexagon. No, I prefer to have increasing spacing.

That's all...
I owe you some proper mod (or you're just too good for me?).
Good luck! (this deserves to be ranked ASAP).

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hey, From my queue!

firetruck, so many diffs, I'll mod the first three diff instead.
Here's my die-hard mod ;__;

[> General <]

1. - Why should you add bladedance when you've used another one for a space(blade dance)? It's counted on the title. Some sources list it without space and some with, so I want users to be able to find it either way. I included tags blade dance because some users may search for the full title of the anime "seirei tsuki no blade dance" in quotation marks, so this is to help them find it.
2. - Remove anime from tags? It'll be counted on the genre later. I know there are other maps are doing it, but i think it's much pressure when adding it there. Is it unrankable to do this? I think I want to keep it because some users don't know how to search properly by genre and will just put "anime" as search query, so I want them to be able to find the map that way.

[> Easy <]

1. 00:02:247 (3,2) - Almost an overlap, I know you want to do it for blanket or some reason, imo, it doesn't fit well here. I don't think overlap is problem here. It fits fine to me.
2. 00:04:813 (3,1) - I think the flow broke a bit here, since the slider's position is away-off and nothing front of it, just behind it. I'll just say; Curve on the straight slider for blanket reasons. No, I think this flows well and gives stronger emphasis to (1).
3. 00:06:739 (2,3) - Too straightic, make a Wave or a Claw formation here. uhh.. what? I think straight sliders play fine here?
4. 00:18:289 (1,2,3) - Make a Cycle formation here. ? I think it's fine as it is now.
5. 00:22:781 (4,5,1) - Instead of stacking on Easy diffs, make a triangle formation here. I think stack is not a problem for 1/1 here because I only use it in those parts of the phrase near the end with the claps and vocal "hai hai" and I think it matches the song well.
6. 00:25:348 (4,5,1) - ^ ^
7. 00:29:199 (2,3) - Try reposition this slider a little and direct to the slider (3)'s head. It's fine.
8. 00:33:049 (4,5,1) - Same as 00:22:781 (4,5,1) - Same.
9. 00:35:616 (4,5,1) - ^ ^
10. 00:49:749 (3) - Remove the Finish here, the beat is not likely strong enough here. Where? If you mean 00:50:375 then I think those finishes fit well since there is cymbal in the music.
11. 00:50:375 (3) - I don't think you need a reverse here, reduce and add a 1/1 slider next to this slider. It doesn't really make a difference to me.. But is there any reason why 2/1 + 1/1 would be better? I think the current rhythm is fine too, and simpler to play.
12. 01:00:001 (2,3,4,1) - Same as 00:22:781 (4,5,1) -, How about a diamond formation here. Same
13. 01:10:910 (2,3) - Same as 00:06:739 (2,3) - ?
14. 01:18:610 (2,3) - ^ ^
15. - Nothing to say here. Great~

[> Normal <]

1. 00:02:888 (1,2) - This overlap looks beutiful to you, but to me, Not very much. Make a Wave formation or blanket. It's fine.
2. 00:04:172 (3,4,5,1) - Making a diamond formation looks fitting here, It's a little symmetry, but just give it a try > http://puu.sh/b7k13/be4c9b34fd.png Stack is better for emphasizing the vocals imo.
3. 00:06:418 (3) - Curve this slider downgrid? or make the formation like you did already here 00:08:985 (3,4) - Current shape/positioning flows better.
4. 00:17:327 (4,5,6,1) - Same as 00:04:172 (3,4,5,1) - Same.
5. 00:18:931 (2,3) - Reposition the slider (3) front of the slider (2)'s tail. Makes no difference to me.
6. 00:25:349 (5,6,3) - Stack everything in, Or is it impossible? It's not possible, and (5) is already not visible by the time (3) renders, so it doesn't matter.
7. 00:33:690 (1,2) - Make a symmetry here? No..?
8. 00:37:862 (4,2) - Overlap, or on purpose? It looks alright.
9. 00:40:749 (4) - Same reason as the previous diff, Are you letting the finish hitsound follow the vocal? well, the vocal is a little weak with the beat here, It might not fit on the song track at all. Same.
10. 00:45:241 (4,5,1) - Same as 00:33:690 (1,2) - No, current pattern flows better.
11. 01:00:482 (3) - Curve like 00:59:359 (1) - ? a bit of symmetry if so. No.
12. 01:17:327 (1,2) - Same as 00:33:690 (1,2) - No.
13. 01:25:027 (1,2) - Same as 00:02:888 (1,2) - Same.
14. - Another great diff, nop nop!

[> Hard <]

1. - AiMod is such a soab on the spacings you have >_>
2. 00:00:642 (2,5) - Stack slider tail on head. sure
3. 00:03:530 (3,4,5) - Make a Squared Cycle formation here, just curve the slider (4) downright grid. A little nice flow it would be. I like the current flow (the intention is to feel dance-like)
4. 00:05:134 (8,1,2) - Maybe AiMod is right, this spacing looks a bit confusing, since you're using 1.4x or 1.5x spacing between circle (8) and slider (1). Try fixing that, There are more of them on other parts of the song track, find it yourself, I'm avoiding big mods. Not sure what you want me to do here, I think it plays fine too, but do you have a suggestion?
5. 00:09:947 (6,7) - Make a triangle formation here, since you never did this on other tracks. Stack is better for emphasis.
6. 00:16:364 (2,3,4) - Balance the triangle here, it looks weird when the spacing is fine but the pattern is not. Made an equilateral triangle.
7. 00:25:027 (1,2,3) - Try this pattern a bit, It might look okay when a little jump is there > http://puu.sh/b7lOL/d778b07a0c.png I prefer the current smoother flow, and not make such a huge jump to the next (1).
8. 00:30:482 (8,9,1,2) - Make symmetry here? Curve or uncurve, it's still well-flowed. No. It goes against my slider shape pattern (straight sliders on those strong claps at the end of the phrase, curve sliders for those parts with more motion in the music.
9. 00:35:295 (1,1) - Same as 00:00:642 (2,5) - ok
10. 00:43:637 (4,1) - Overlap, or on purpose? Why is it necessary to avoid overlap?
11. 00:53:584 (4,1) - Same as 00:30:482 (8,9,1,2) - Not sure what you mean for this.. But I don't think symmetry is needed here.
12. 00:59:359 (1,2,3) - Balance this Cycle formation. ok
13. 01:03:771 (7) - I still think this reversed slider doesn't fit the song track here, reduce, and add 1/2 slider or two stacked circles. I think current rhythm fits better than those you suggested.
14. 01:14:760 (1,5) - Why not stack the slider (5)'s head on the slider (1)'s tail? It would be a triangle formation, and avoiding the overlap with 01:15:081 (2,3) - Stacked with (2,3) instead, because it flows smoother.
15. 01:22:461 (1,2) - Same reason, Make a Claw or Wave formation here. I don't know what that means.
16. - Pretty much challenging, but i'm not amazing with the spacing(Jumps aren't included) you have there. gg

Good quality of the mapset ~ \(^o^/)

yf_bmp wrote:

Req from KwaN & yf's Modding Queue

Notice:

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1. Red: Be unrankable
2. Blue: Be important
3. Black: Suggestions

[Dance]

1. I think adjusting cs to at least 4.7 is better, coz your style in this map doesn't fit cs5 imo. ok
2. 00:00:322 (1,2,3) - try make the spacing equal, or in a bit more difference it's fine since (1,2) has smooth motion while (2,3) is opposing, giving the illusion that spacing is similar.
3. 00:02:888 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
4. 00:01:605 (5,6,7,8,1) - try make them as a five-pointed star? The pattern now looks messy I think it flows too rigid that way, and makes it difficult for me to keep the next pattern on screen.
5. 00:04:172 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^ ^
6. 00:07:059 (1,3) - these two looks too close, should increase the spacing. and same as 00:07:701 (3,2) - ok
7. 00:08:022 (1) - try finish on the head No, it's excessive imo.
8. 00:09:947 (2) - try to add finish to follow the music ok
9. 00:13:156 (1) - finish on the head no
10. 00:15:081 (1) - finish on the head ok
11. 00:15:723 (1) - it's better to remove whistle here, since it will sounds odd with finish It sounds fine.
12. 00:25:990 (1) - ^ ^
13. 00:37:701 (2) - this 1/4 slider doesn't fit the music at all imo, and unnecessary overmapped. I recommend just use a note here. ok
14. 00:52:140 (6,9) - a little mess. try separate them I think it's fine.
    
    not much to mod except some small issues.
    
    map's quality is ok for rank
    
    kiai is good, but didn't you think the pattern in other parts is a little ordinary? or just say like.. not very splendid.
    just like 00:05:455 (1,2,3,4) - such pattern. it is only used by 1/2 slider to spam the rhythm. And this map have too many such patterns. So how about trying more patterns? The map will be more fun. I know this. My original intention of the map was just for experimenting with mapping style. I will probably remove this diff before ranking.

[Insane]

1. 00:13:156 (1,3) - uhm.. I suggest separating them It's fine.
2. 01:10:749 (1,3,4) - ^ ^
3. 00:38:824 (1,3) - make a blanket ok
4. 01:26:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make them to a shape? the spacing now looks a little messy No, I like it this way to have increasing spacing between each pair of notes.
   
   I think this diff is more splendid than Dance diff. You did a good job on this diff I think so too.

[Very Hard]

1. 00:21:979 (5,7,8) - these objects are a little close imo. I think it's fine.
2. 01:06:739 (6,1) - ^ ^
3. 01:05:134 (1,2,3,4) - make them as a shape I prefer this way to have small spacing between (2,3), jump between (3,4).

[Hard]

• I think this diff is a little harder. For the diff spread, I recommend to decrease the standard spacing between the objects. I prefer to keep the standard spacing because it flows properly this way, but reduced some jumps.

[Normal]

1. 00:02:247 (4,5,1) - too many overlaps may confuse new players I think it's quite simple to read.
2. 01:24:386 (4,5,1) - ^ ^

[Easy]

1. 01:05:134 (2) - remove clap I think it fits.
2. 01:14:760 (4) - NC Fixed.
   
   nothing to say

Be attention to your diff spread between Normal and Hard. It is not reasonable now. I will continue working to reduce that gap.
Good luck

spring wrote:

From soga's queue. LOL
I'm a modding beginner now ,so my mod may not useful.

easy

1. 01:12:193 (1) - extend the end to 01:13:156 ,I felt a little strange with the empty beat while I was playing .LOL(Perhaps not following the vocal is a reason ) I think it's fine.

normal

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  All good.OVO

hard

1. 01:00:001 (3) - Ctrl +G ok
2. 01:06:418 (3,4) - I think that making them parallel would looks good ok
3. 01:22:461 (1) - How about shaping it like http://puu.sh/brKAl/979a28793d.png Current shape flows better.

very hard

1. 00:05:134 (5) - consider to curve this slider no

insane

1. 01:03:530 (3,4) - exchange these two sliders' position No, I think it flows better as it is.

dancing

1. 00:02:567 (2) - Puting a note might be better than a slider I prefer slider.
2. 00:05:134 (2) - ^ ^
3. 00:20:856 (1) - Ctrl +G might be better OVO it is not.

over here,good luck to you