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Fluttershy03Take heed, some of our suggestions may be the same.mainly a sound check[Normal]
00:14:237 (5) - Add finish here for consistency from previous notes.
00:15:116 (7) - ^
00:16:875 (3) - ^ but on the end of the slider
00:21:270 (5) - Whilst this one is more iffy due to there being a finish after it, I find the music has a pause in it allowing for two to be placed here.
00:26:545 (1,2,3) - Make these notes go in a downward position, I think it'll be cool and match the songs change in music
SPOILERhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1905991
00:29:182 (5) - ^^ again consistency
00:30:940 (3) - Right at the end of the slider add finish to retain consistency
Overall: Nice map, love the variation and flow.[Hard]
00:02:809 (4) - Add a finish here perhaps, if not try and add one near this area since the consistency breaks from the beginning.
00:03:468 (1) - ^ At the end of the slider
00:06:984 (1) - ^
00:15:116 (5,6) - Finishes on both sliders on the head for a good buildup to the new part of the song.
00:16:875 (4) - Retain consistency from previous parts in the song with a finish on the head of the slider.
00:17:754 (1) - ^
00:21:050 (3) - ^ at the end of this slider.
00:29:182 (4,6) - Add finished here, it sounds bland being all whistle.
00:30:940 (4) - Add finish on the end of the slider to have a nice consistent flow into this part of the song.
Overall: Nice map, again a nice flow and pattern throughout.[Irre's Extra]
fun circle size, not many around 00:01:490 (5,6) - Consider a blanket between these notes, make the head of slider 6 blanketed in the slider 5.
00:02:809 (5) - Add a finish sound on the head of this slider.
00:04:127 (3) - ^ add a finish here for consistency.
00:06:325 (4) - Add a finish here so that consistency is flowing and so that it fits music nicely.
00:07:204 (1,2) - Make the heads of these sliders parallel , I think it looks better this way.
SPOILERhttp://gyazo.com/4be30806772e35e0cdd642c8452e3da6
00:07:644 (2) - ^ add a finish sound on the head of this slider too.
00:15:995 (1,2,3,4) - Create a blanket with these notes, so that 2,3 and 4 and blankets with the end curve of slider 1.
00:16:875 (4) - Finish note for same reasons as before.
00:18:193 (3) - ^
00:20:391 (1) - Finish note to denote change in the song and emphasis on NC.
00:21:710 (2) - ^^
00:29:182 (5,7) - Finishes for a nice buildup to a new part of the song.
00:33:688 (1) - Finish on the end of this to make the difficulties before consistent with this.
Overall: Very fun map and challenging for me with my mouse XD[Kyshiro's Insane]
00:01:930 (1,2) - Revise this blanket, move the 2nd note slightly lower.
00:03:688 (2) - Add a finish here to have a consistent flow with the first finish.
00:05:006 (6) - Finish on the head of the slider to have a nice consistency.
00:07:204 (2) - ^^ Add a finish here, same reasons apply.
00:08:523 (6) - ^^
00:15:116 (1,3) - Finishes here for other difficulties reason, a nice flow back in the main part of the song.
00:17:754 (2) - ^^
00:21:270 (1) - ^
00:29:622 (5) - Finish here for a flow back like (^^^)
00:33:688 (1) - Add a finish here, for the same reason as Irre's Extra, and make it so the spinner is less sudden and a bit shorter, I feel it's unnecessary.
Overall: Looks like a nice map with overall nice positioning.Good luck on rank!