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Shimotsuki Haruka - FLOWERS

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Flower
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年4月19日 at 0:28:23

Artist: Shimotsuki Haruka
Title: FLOWERS
Source: FLOWERS
Tags: Innocent Grey yuri visual novel galgame 鈴湯 Suzuyu
BPM: 174
Filesize: 16977kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Blooming Lilies (4.16 stars, 283 notes)
  2. Easy (1.16 stars, 75 notes)
  3. Hard (2.91 stars, 205 notes)
  4. Normal (1.97 stars, 128 notes)
Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - FLOWERS
Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - FLOWERS (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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女の子を好きに為ったらいけないんですか?
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Thanks to happy30 for hitsounds.
Andrea
Nice map like always :)

Reminder to myself to make a Hard difficulty!
Megurine Luka
花花做花花
wantuol
头像眨眼吓死我了
Lapis
花花做花花
Rizia
osu! need more Suzuyu
pw384
Flower mapped by Flower
Topic Starter
Flower

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

osu! need more Suzuyu
ED是Suzuyu Cho. 霜月はるか啊,要不要做
Rizia

Flower wrote:

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

osu! need more Suzuyu
ED是Suzuyu Cho. 霜月はるか啊,要不要做
就是這個?
Topic Starter
Flower

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

Flower wrote:

ED是Suzuyu Cho. 霜月はるか啊,要不要做
就是這個?
花の頁
歌 : 鈴湯 / 作詞 : 高橋麗子 / 作曲 : MANYO / コーラス : 霜月はるか
Raging Bull
Hardest difficulty rename to flower for more confusion pls. kds please.
Rizia

Flower wrote:

花の頁
歌 : 鈴湯 / 作詞 : 高橋麗子 / 作曲 : MANYO / コーラス : 霜月はるか
聽過耶
那首timing好像很難
Topic Starter
Flower

Raging Bull wrote:

Hardest difficulty rename to flower for more confusion pls. kds please.
Unrankable lol
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
root->stem->leaf->flower plz

blooming lilies
建议像LL那样在note上加个花(?)
00:25:149 (1) - 圆圈没有精确地放在滑条的怀抱里
00:41:701 (1) - ^
00:48:425 (5) - 建议摆在230:271, 这样比较好看
00:49:632 (5) - 因为歌词里唱的是胸的里面所以建议把这个滑条的方向改成往里的
01:21:873 (1) - 按照通常的剧本不是应该这个叠在前一个2上面跳回去吗
01:04:460 (3,4) - 这个梗用的太多啦 各种即视感
01:34:373 - 加一个啊

hard
这是用这么大的格子做的吗 好多间距不一样的
00:37:218 (1) - 好坑啊
01:33:425 (3,4,5) - 建议把这里像花瓣飘落一样展开放在下面而不是转回到中间

normal
好像没啥能挑的就不看丽
Setsurei
M4M as requested
[General]
is your preview time snapped on 1/8 on purpose? if yes, ignore this
[Easy]
00:49:977 (4) - fix blanket
01:24:287 - add finish hitsound? the ring sound
01:27:046 - ^
01:29:977 - ^
may apply the hitsounds on all diffs
[Normal]
00:03:080 (1,2) - flow nicer if the (2) is lower
00:14:115 (1,2) - I'm not sure about this, but slider overlap path, I suggest to rotate (2) a bit away from (1) since this is Normal diff
00:19:632 (1,2) - overlap, move (2) down
00:24:287 (3,1,2) - overlap
00:28:598 (1,2) - ^, flip (2) horizontal
00:35:494 (1) - fix blanket
00:36:873 (3,1) - overlap
00:55:494 (1) - blanket with 00:57:391 (3) -
00:57:391 (3,1) - fix blanket
01:07:391 (2,3) - ^
01:13:770 (2,1) - ^ on both, since the blankets are all off
01:16:356 (2,1) - overlap
01:19:977 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:25:839 (1,2) - same case as 00:03:080 (1,2) -
[Hard]
00:37:218 (1) - move to 00:37:333 - , and reduce a repeat, will end at 00:37:563 -
00:41:701 (1) - fix blanket
01:12:046 (1) - ^
[Blooming Lilies]
00:25:149 (1) - fix blanket
00:34:632 (4) - ^
00:36:184 (1) - ^
00:37:218 (5) - same as Hard, reduce 1 repeat, and move at 00:37:333 - , ends 00:37:448 -
00:38:942 (1) - fix blanket
00:41:701 (1) - ^
00:52:391 (6) - ^

00:52:736 (1) - ^
01:01:011 (1) - ^
01:14:804 (1) - ^
sorry for the nazi blanket mod orz orz orz
I can't find anything else

good luck
Topic Starter
Flower
AR3

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

root->stem->leaf->flower plz

blooming lilies
建议像LL那样在note上加个花(?)
00:25:149 (1) - 圆圈没有精确地放在滑条的怀抱里 都改了
00:41:701 (1) - ^
00:48:425 (5) - 建议摆在230:271, 这样比较好看 比较喜欢原位置,因为有强迫症
00:49:632 (5) - 因为歌词里唱的是胸的里面所以建议把这个滑条的方向改成往里的 啥玩意
01:21:873 (1) - 按照通常的剧本不是应该这个叠在前一个2上面跳回去吗 innovation
01:04:460 (3,4) - 这个梗用的太多啦 各种即视感
01:34:373 - 加一个啊 ???

hard
这是用这么大的格子做的吗 好多间距不一样的 这都被你发现了
00:37:218 (1) - 好坑啊 掉了个头
01:33:425 (3,4,5) - 建议把这里像花瓣飘落一样展开放在下面而不是转回到中间

normal
好像没啥能挑的就不看丽


Setsurei

Setsurei wrote:

M4M as requested
[General]
is your preview time snapped on 1/8 on purpose? if yes, ignore this
[Easy]
00:49:977 (4) - fix blanket
01:24:287 - add finish hitsound? the ring sound all good
01:27:046 - ^
01:29:977 - ^
may apply the hitsounds on all diffs
[Normal]
00:03:080 (1,2) - flow nicer if the (2) is lower it's for distance snap
00:14:115 (1,2) - I'm not sure about this, but slider overlap path, I suggest to rotate (2) a bit away from (1) since this is Normal diff it's common pattern in normals and easy to read. i think it's fine. also for following overlap patterns, no change.
00:19:632 (1,2) - overlap, move (2) down
00:24:287 (3,1,2) - overlap
00:28:598 (1,2) - ^, flip (2) horizontal
00:35:494 (1) - fix blanket all blankets are fixed
00:36:873 (3,1) - overlap
00:55:494 (1) - blanket with 00:57:391 (3) -
00:57:391 (3,1) - fix blanket
01:07:391 (2,3) - ^
01:13:770 (2,1) - ^ on both, since the blankets are all off
01:16:356 (2,1) - overlap
01:19:977 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:25:839 (1,2) - same case as 00:03:080 (1,2) -
[Hard]
00:37:218 (1) - move to 00:37:333 - , and reduce a repeat, will end at 00:37:563 -
00:41:701 (1) - fix blanket
01:12:046 (1) - ^
[Blooming Lilies]
00:25:149 (1) - fix blanket
00:34:632 (4) - ^
00:36:184 (1) - ^
00:37:218 (5) - same as Hard, reduce 1 repeat, and move at 00:37:333 - , ends 00:37:448 -
00:38:942 (1) - fix blanket
00:41:701 (1) - ^
00:52:391 (6) - ^

00:52:736 (1) - ^
01:01:011 (1) - ^
01:14:804 (1) - ^
sorry for the nazi blanket mod orz orz orz
I can't find anything else

good luck[/color]

thanks for modding!
Asagi
Hello Flower /(  ・ω・)/

M4M as I request hahaha

[Blooming Lilies]
  1. 00:25:149 (1) - Ctrl+ G this slider, the flow is much better if you tried it
  2. 00:43:942 (4) - You should move this at least 1 grid to avoid the slider stacking, even the rhythm is really apart, its still really confusing that could be mistaken as a circle only
  3. 00:44:804 (1,2,3) - Even the hitsound volume is 80%, it feels that i didnt click the note because of the hitsound. I can only hear the piano hitsound that is really fitting on the music, but i cant hear the hit-normal which is confusing (applies on all diffs)
  4. 00:49:460 (4,5) - the arrangemet here is kinda odd, try mo make (5) a straight slider and make a better flow from 4 to 5 like this : http://puu.sh/cZqhs.jpg
  5. 00:52:046 (5) - im sure blanket really fits here well
  6. 00:55:494 (1,1) - looks like you intentionally did this, but it ended up really bad imo, why not blanketing it instead? I cant see any reason why you made it overlap
  7. 00:56:011 (1) - You forgot finish on the head
  8. 01:30:207 (1,2,3,4,5) - okay, this evil part. I played it and i retried a few times to know how that rhythm works, and yet, still getting some 100. Why did you follow the piano instead of drums? I can hear the drums well than the piano. If you insist to follow the piano, them make it slider instead so its easy to catch up
  9. 01:33:080 (1,1,1,1) - not sure if you should remove the NC spam here
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:977 (6) - Is this jump really necessary? I mean, that part is slow/soft, i dont think putting jump could be a good idea, try to stack it on the next note instead
  2. 00:34:115 (2) - I expect this slider should be pointing out on the next slider. The flow is kinda weirding me out ><
  3. 00:37:218 (1) - Nothing is wrong in here, its just, i hope players dont mistake it as a 1/4 or 1/2 slider with 1 repeat
  4. 00:56:011 (2) - Finish on head
  5. 01:10:322 (4) - Ctrl + G?
  6. 01:13:080 (4) - You should blanket it with 01:11:701 (4) - so it has better approach on the next slider
  7. 01:20:149 (4) - The finish hitsound here doesnt work well on the tail, you should replace that slider with a note instead for better impact
  8. 01:34:115 (5) - NC
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:736 (2,3) - Putting anti jump/stacking here is really that necessary? Its kinda confusing for newbies to click because it was gap is 1 1/2 which is a little bit to catch up, to make it worst, it was stacked lol
  2. 00:23:770 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:44:804 (1,2,3) - You should replace this note with repeat slider instead, so that part should be easy to catch up
  4. 00:48:942 (2,3) - Not sure about this 1/2 sliders, the rhythm feels kinda odd and a little bit weird to play, maybe you should follow the vocals instead?
  5. 00:59:460 (3,4,5) - ^ same here
[Easy]
  1. Nothing is wrong with Easy, just make the slider slide here 00:44:804 (1) - silent
Really good mep owob

Hope my mod helps ;w;
Best of Luck ;)
Topic Starter
Flower

Asagi wrote:

SPOILER
Hello Flower /(  ・ω・)/

M4M as I request hahaha

[Blooming Lilies]
  1. 00:25:149 (1) - Ctrl+ G this slider, the flow is much better if you tried it it's intended to break the flow to emphasize the downbeat
  2. 00:43:942 (4) - You should move this at least 1 grid to avoid the slider stacking, even the rhythm is really apart, its still really confusing that could be mistaken as a circle only moved down and I think it reads better now
  3. 00:44:804 (1,2,3) - Even the hitsound volume is 80%, it feels that i didnt click the note because of the hitsound. I can only hear the piano hitsound that is really fitting on the music, but i cant hear the hit-normal which is confusing (applies on all diffs) I think it's all right, and any extra sounds will sound absurd here, also you can listen to your keyboard, and never mind, everybody uses cookiezi's skin and ignore all hitsounds
  4. 00:49:460 (4,5) - the arrangemet here is kinda odd, try mo make (5) a straight slider and make a better flow from 4 to 5 like this : http://puu.sh/cZqhs.jpg it's how Fycho arranges notes, it's not bad, but absolutely not my style. and it says "mune" which means chest, and girls' chests aren't often flat
  5. 00:52:046 (5) - im sure blanket really fits here well looks good
  6. 00:55:494 (1,1) - looks like you intentionally did this, but it ended up really bad imo, why not blanketing it instead? I cant see any reason why you made it overlap because I tried blanket, and the flow was not my taste. can't say blanket is better.
  7. 00:56:011 (1) - You forgot finish on the head fixed
  8. 01:30:207 (1,2,3,4,5) - okay, this evil part. I played it and i retried a few times to know how that rhythm works, and yet, still getting some 100. Why did you follow the piano instead of drums? I can hear the drums well than the piano. If you insist to follow the piano, them make it slider instead so its easy to catch up Yea, I was thinking of it. But I need a concrete and illustrated idea, if not I should have changed the pattern.
  9. 01:33:080 (1,1,1,1) - not sure if you should remove the NC spam here It indicates the anti jump, also I think it fits the music.
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:977 (6) - Is this jump really necessary? I mean, that part is slow/soft, i dont think putting jump could be a good idea, try to stack it on the next note instead k
  2. 00:34:115 (2) - I expect this slider should be pointing out on the next slider. The flow is kinda weirding me out >< I think it's a good way to emphasize the strong beat
  3. 00:37:218 (1) - Nothing is wrong in here, its just, i hope players dont mistake it as a 1/4 or 1/2 slider with 1 repeat I'll consider the pattern later. my possible alternatives tend to be more confusing
  4. 00:56:011 (2) - Finish on head yea
  5. 01:10:322 (4) - Ctrl + G? I don't like this, cause this tends to make the cursor fly out of the play area
  6. 01:13:080 (4) - You should blanket it with 01:11:701 (4) - so it has better approach on the next slider this is intended, and imitates someone's flow. breaking the flow makes the player concentrates on map
  7. 01:20:149 (4) - The finish hitsound here doesnt work well on the tail, you should replace that slider with a note instead for better impact changed
  8. 01:34:115 (5) - NC it breaks the feeling of the pattern, so nah
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:736 (2,3) - Putting anti jump/stacking here is really that necessary? Its kinda confusing for newbies to click because it was gap is 1 1/2 which is a little bit to catch up, to make it worst, it was stacked lol I think it should look normal now
  2. 00:23:770 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:44:804 (1,2,3) - You should replace this note with repeat slider instead, so that part should be easy to catch up it's now time for the player to recognise syncopated notes, that's why I think it's ok in this diff
  4. 00:48:942 (2,3) - Not sure about this 1/2 sliders, the rhythm feels kinda odd and a little bit weird to play, maybe you should follow the vocals instead? It's my OCD. I can't skip that clap, it sounds weird.
  5. 00:59:460 (3,4,5) - ^ same here
[Easy]
  1. Nothing is wrong with Easy, just make the slider slide here 00:44:804 (1) - silent k
Really good mep owob

Hope my mod helps ;w;
Best of Luck ;)

Thank you!
liangv587
花花的图压力好大啊,怎么才能装作很屌的样子呢
差点还以为是sb,结果是视频
soft-hitwhistle2这个跟默认没区别吧

[Blooming Lilies]
00:41:528 (3,4) - 可以放个3连
00:50:494空着打起来有点别扭,我试过了,加个圈吧
01:09:804 (2,1) - 2哈告诉我这样不好,我也觉得不要这样吧,把头移到01:10:667 (3) - 上
01:04:287 (2,3) - 这两个换下位置?01:04:632这里有个重音

[Hard]
00:16:873 (1) - 做好看点吧,可以先在对称轴上做好在旋转
00:27:390 (3,1) - 有点诡异,试试00:27:390圈,00:27:908 (1) - 提前1拍,00:28:597圈

只能这样了,其他两个难度实在没什么可说的
mintong89
花花做花花 花花玩花花
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