1. Easy (1,08 stars, 59 notes)
2. Haunted (2,14 stars, 123 notes)
3. Normal (1,43 stars, 91 notes)

1. Hmmm not sure about the hitsounding ><. As Haunted is a collab I see you both utillized your own hitsounding style which is fine I guess, but it doesnt really sounds that good at the lower diffs as the note density is a bit lower (I suppose you copied the hitsounds from Haunted). The hitsounding in the lower diffs sound really inconsistent to me :< and pretty bland

1. Hitsounds are somewhat inconsistent for the individual parts, idk if it's intentional so I'll just leave it as is
2. 00:22:419 (2,3) - How about making a slight jump from (2) to (3) like you did here 00:13:958 (4) -, and also it pretty much fits the music.
3. 00:30:881 (1) - I Suppose your missing a finish on the end? You have it here 00:25:496 (1) - and those are pretty much identical.
4. 00:38:189 (2,3) - Just some nitpicking blanket with (1) is sliiiightly off
5. 00:40:112 (1) - Random drum addition owo?,
6. 00:46:266 (1) - again nitpicking, move this a bit to the left so it forms a even line with (4,5).
7. 00:47:035 (2) - Imo its better to remove the finish from the head, at other identical parts you dont have a finish
8. 00:47:804 (3,4,5) - How about using the same hitsound pattern as here 00:41:650 (3,4,5) - they are the same music wise soo, its better having them the same imo.
9. 00:54:727 (4) - Spacing is a bit cramped compared with the rest of this part so maybe space it a bit more out?
10. 01:00:112 (5,6) - Maybe make those look more similiar so it looks better visually. ?
11. 01:00:881 (6,1) - The flow here is somewhat uncomfortable, especially because of the curve on (1), try to ease it a bit?
    smth like this?
    
    Box

    
12. 01:10:881 (1,2,3) - I think the jump should be the other way around, Instead of a jump from (1) to (2). A jump from (2) to (3) would be alot more compatible with the music.
13. 01:24:727 (5,6,1) - I expected some larger jumps as it is somewhat the climax, consider something like this?
    
    box

    

1. 00:12:419 (1) - Missing finish on head and clap+drum on end
2. 00:32:419 (3,4) - Blanket is off srry nitpicking
3. 01:16:266 (8,1) - How about smth like this instead? Looks neater imo
   
   box

   
4. 01:20:112 (1) - Remove this NC for consisntency?
5. 01:26:266 (6) - Either add an NC here or remove the NC at Haunted for consistency across the diffs
6. Hmmm well actually I think it's better for you to hitsound this diff instead of using the copier. The copier isn't really an option imo as said in general.

1. 00:12:419 (1) - I suppose your missing a finish on the head here, considering you have one in Haunted, Also the Clap+Drum at the repeat and at the end the Whistle+Drum.
3. 01:26:266 (6) - Either add an NC here or remove the NC at Haunted for consistency across the diffs
4. Same here about the hitsounds

1. 01:16:266 (8,1) - Sorry, I'd prefr to keep it this way because the pattern you suggested feels out of my style and doesn't flow really good, imo.
   
2. Also, hitsound-related suggestions and these two are up to Sieg.
   01:00:112 (5,6) - Maybe make those look more similiar so it looks better visually. ?
   01:00:881 (6,1) - The flow here is somewhat uncomfortable, especially because of the curve on (1), try to ease it a bit?
   smth like this?

1. 00:41:650 (5) - Я бы сделала его округленным:
   
   
2. 01:10:881 (3) - Мб округлить его побольше? Или сделать такую же форму, как у (1)?
3. 01:10:881 (3,4,1) - Равносторонний треугольник.
4. 01:16:266 (2,3) - Очень нази бланкет.
5. 01:20:112 (1,3) - ^

1. 00:13:573 (2) - Может не залезать слишком влево и переместить это хотя бы на x:220 y:212? И другие объекты передвинуть не забудь, если применишь.
2. 00:32:419 (3,4) - Бланкет.
3. 01:07:804 (1,2) - Сделай их одинаковой формы?
4. 01:07:804 (5,1) - Поменяй НК местами
5. 01:13:958 (5) - Если применил ^, то поставь НК тут
6. 01:17:035 (1,5) - Поменяй НК местами, если, опять же, применил ^
7. 01:23:189 (1) - и удали нк тут, если применил ^

1. 00:15:496 (1,2) - Сделай их одинаковой формы
2. 00:30:112 (6) - Может ctrl+g ?
3. 00:30:881 (1,2) - Бланкет можно чутка пофиксить
4. 00:37:035 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:40:112 (1,2,3) - Сделай равносторонний треугольник.
6. 00:42:419 (5,1) - Бланкет чуть-чуть
7. 00:50:496 (2,4) - ^
8. 00:54:727 (4,1) - ^
9. 00:55:496 (1,2) - ^
10. 01:10:112 (5,1) - ^
11. 01:18:573 (3,4) - ^
12. 01:20:881 (3,5,6) - Сделай одинаковое расстояние между ними
13. 01:24:727 (5,6,7) - Сделай равносторонний треугольник.

AlexaBM wrote:

C:

[Mysterious]

1. 00:41:650 (5) - Я бы сделала его округленным:
   
   
2. 01:10:881 (3) - Мб округлить его побольше? Или сделать такую же форму, как у (1)? ага
3. 01:10:881 (3,4,1) - Равносторонний треугольник. da
4. 01:16:266 (2,3) - Очень нази бланкет.
5. 01:20:112 (1,3) - ^ yup, fixed both

[Forgotten]

1. 00:13:573 (2) - Может не залезать слишком влево и переместить это хотя бы на x:220 y:212? И другие объекты передвинуть не забудь, если применишь. я хочу что-то типа зиг-зага тут, пусть будет влево
2. 00:32:419 (3,4) - Бланкет. ~
3. 01:07:804 (1,2) - Сделай их одинаковой формы? ~
4. 01:07:804 (5,1) - Поменяй НК местами По паттерну же вроде как, не меняю комбо, извини
5. 01:13:958 (5) - Если применил ^, то поставь НК тут
6. 01:17:035 (1,5) - Поменяй НК местами, если, опять же, применил ^
7. 01:23:189 (1) - и удали нк тут, если применил ^_^аналогично для вот этих

[Haunted]

1. 00:15:496 (1,2) - Сделай их одинаковой формы sure
2. 00:30:112 (6) - Может ctrl+g ? там повторяется похожий звук и слайдеры дублируют друг-друга, если я все понял правильно
3. 00:30:881 (1,2) - Бланкет можно чутка пофиксить смирение
4. 00:37:035 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:40:112 (1,2,3) - Сделай равносторонний треугольник. подчинение
6. 00:42:419 (5,1) - Бланкет чуть-чуть да, для всех
7. 00:50:496 (2,4) - ^
8. 00:54:727 (4,1) - ^
9. 00:55:496 (1,2) - ^
10. 01:10:112 (5,1) - ^
11. 01:18:573 (3,4) - ^
12. 01:20:881 (3,5,6) - Сделай одинаковое расстояние между ними повиновение
13. 01:24:727 (5,6,7) - Сделай равносторонний треугольник.послушание

Нечего сказать, еле-еле что-то нашла. Удачи c:

12BARRY21 wrote:

Hi~~~

I may have a bad dream tonight o.O, little terrible song xD then it means that I did a good job with the SB

<General>

Add a preview time?? oh my, of course!
Add a Kiai time?? 01:13:958 - maybe here ww nah, I don't feel like adding kiai. it doesn't fits with the song and any kiais would look weird here, sorry
There are 2 error about SB?? plz fix it o.Oa these are not the mistakes, it happens due to animation I use, it should be fine
Combo color (1) & (3) are too alike lol, maybe replace with another color?? different shades of the same colours give some variety and match with the BGs, gonna keep it for now, sorry
Add some more Tags?? Hmm such as Foggy Silent Terrible Quite Missing Forest Relax hmm bad English.... :/ I don't think that any of these tags are related to the song or to the beatmap.

<Haunted>

00:12:419 (1) - finish? whops, we've already fixed that but didn't update in time
00:43:189 (1) - Blanket 00:42:419 (5) - better plz~ yeah
01:05:112 (2,3) - Ctrl + G? nah, I don't think that this kind of pattern will work here. will try to mget more opinions, tho
01:09:727 (4,5) - ^ sudden jump after the stack feels unbalanced, sorry
01:24:343 (4) - Move to [X:228 Y:56] and Rolate The four circles by 10 degree?? I got your point, but that's not the pattern I'd like to see here. it feels out of my style and doesn't match with the mood of this track
01:26:266 (7) - Try to replace this circle with a 0.75x Slider? and end with 10% volume at 01:27:035 - ww nah, I feel like the slowdown would be unnecessary and I want to avoid using it, sorry.

<Forgotten>

00:12:419 (1) - finish yush
00:39:343 (4) - left 1 lines for a better triangle yep
00:44:727 (3) - Curve this a little? no, this straight slider flows better and looks great, imo
01:25:496 (4,5,6) - Rotate by 10 degree? I want to keep the flow soft, gonna use 5
01:26:266 (6) - Same as "Haunted" same, sorry

<Mysterious>

00:12:419 (1) - finish yup
00:39:343 (2,3,4,5) - Try this?? Looks better! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1854455 but this breaks my flow and looks really ouut of my style, I will consider changing i to something else!
01:26:266 (6) - Same as "Haunted" lol (1.0x Slider) same, sorrry

That's all
Best of Luck!!

Inyuschan wrote:

Okay, let's try.

General:

I don't know so much about diffs' rules, but I think only Hard diff can have custom name. In that case, mapset should be: Easy, Normal, Haunted. Was looking for confirmation and found it. gonna go with these diff names for now

Slider tick 2 in all diffs pls o3o str 2 sounds rather off in the easy diff since I don't use any 1/2 patterns there.

I'd remap some parts in Normal, I mean, make it a bit easier, since is pretty similar to Hard. Working on it!

Mysterious:

Easy: CS:2 better imo. but that would hurt the balance of the mapset

01:26:266 (6) - Add NC. yup

Forgotten:

Well, I don't like that settings, so you can do whatever you want, but I'd prefer: I see your point, but I was trying to make something between easy and relaxing hard and came up with these settings. changing them would require changing a few patterns and re-considering diff settings of the whole spread. since current settings are okay, I want to use them, sorry

CS:3
AR:4
OD:3 (or maybe 4)
HP:3 (or maybe 4)

01:03:958 (4) - I prefer this for a better flow. http://puu.sh/aqnuH/7976b1bd5b.jpg I can give you a more detailed explanation of my flow here, if you're interested. But I believe that my current pattern flows better, sorry

01:26:266 (6) - NC. Sure

Haunted:

Oh god I hate kinda small circles CS:4 better pls ;_; The song is way too easy for CS4, that's why I use 4,5

00:27:035 (5) - Better this. http://puu.sh/aqnA4/2201feb752.jpg Sieg tried to point out the beginning of a new part in music this way. keeping it for now

01:26:266 (7) - Guess what xD Yeah


Nice map and song, a bit creepy though x3x But it's slow and instrumental, which I like the most <3

1. idk, but, you used SB, so added widescreen support all diff?
2. add tag 'classical' http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1180941

• 
  Nothing wrong.

1. 00:42:419 (7) - remove whistle and add clap slider head? 00:36:266 (6) - same part. also, 00:41:650 (6) - used whistle.
2. 01:18:189 (2) - nazi, move (x:214 y:239). more space seems good.

1. 00:27:804 (1) - switch clap and whistle? strong piano. same 00:26:266 (3) - .
2. 00:30:112 (6) - Ctrl+G? nothing to mean.
3. 00:39:343 (5) - switch clap and whistle? strong piano.

1. scared.. = ㅅ =

1. 00:48:573 (4,5) - silder better.
2. 00:56:650 (2,3) - swithch?

1. how about more use NC? like this place. 00:15:496 (5) - , 00:21:650 (5) -

1. I can't fouund problem. o3o

P o M u T a wrote:

hi.

[General]

1. idk, but, you used SB, so added widescreen support all diff? The SB isn't made for widescreen dislays, better keep it disabled, I think
2. add tag 'classical' http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1180941 missed that, thanks!

[Mysterious]

• 
  Nothing wrong. good to hear it

[Forgotten]

1. 00:42:419 (7) - remove whistle and add clap slider head? 00:36:266 (6) - same part. also, 00:41:650 (6) - used whistle.
2. 01:18:189 (2) - nazi, move (x:214 y:239). more space seems good. moved around a little bit

[Mysterious]

1. 00:27:804 (1) - switch clap and whistle? strong piano. same 00:26:266 (3) - .
2. 00:30:112 (6) - Ctrl+G? nothing to mean. since someone mentioned it before, I think it'd be really bettr to do so. applied
3. 00:39:343 (5) - switch clap and whistle? strong piano.

cool. sorry really short mod. please all ignore.

eINess wrote:

Sorry late. >w< better late than never, so it's okay

[General]

1. scared.. = ㅅ = that's what I was trying to do, good to hear that I didn't fail to scare people

[Haunted]

1. 00:48:573 (4,5) - silder better. yup
2. 00:56:650 (2,3) - swithch? oh my, that sounds much better, thanks

[Forgotten]

1. how about more use NC? like this place. 00:15:496 (5) - , 00:21:650 (5) - no, sorry, I feel like that'd make my combos too short

[Mysterious]

1. I can't fouund problem. o3o good to know it

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