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ShockOne - Polygon (feat. Reija Lee)

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Secretpipe
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Secretpipe
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mardi 2 septembre 2014 at 11:33:37

Artist: ShockOne
Title: Polygon (feat. Reija Lee)
Tags: dnb liquid drum and bass Kuron-Kun Asphyxia Irreversible collab collaboration
BPM: 175
Filesize: 4336kb
Play Time: 02:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Asphyxia's Insane (4,98 stars, 492 notes)
  2. Irreverpipe's Hard (3,47 stars, 244 notes)
  3. Kuronpipe's Insane (4,6 stars, 373 notes)
  4. Normal (1,98 stars, 157 notes)
Download: ShockOne - Polygon (feat. Reija Lee)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#4 Ranked
Again some liquid DnB , I hope you'll like it :3
07/29/14 : Please re-dl ! SB names added !
Normal →Done by me
Irreverpipe's Hard→Done by Irreversible and me
Collab Insane → Done by me and Kuron-kun
Asphyxia's Insane→Done by Asphyxia
SB names→Done by the magical doctor inverness
Last edited by Secretpipe , edited 102 times in total.
Kuron-kun
Kuron-kun
Let me be the:


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add me on tags
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
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Secretpipe
Added you in tags.
Normal and Collab Insane are ready for modding !
I just need to map an Hard !
69653863
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69653863
sprites

irevrelisbiblesnebiseblse hard
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insen
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kd pls
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe
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ProfessionalBox
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;)
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe
Take a break of the map !
I'll search mod when GD will be finished B-)
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
Hi Pipe <3

Sorry for the huge delay but here's my difficulty as promised; http://puu.sh/aJIcM/bb1d451319.txt I hope you'll accept it and I definitely hope it's good enough! There's currently no hitsounds but I'll do that later!

pce o/
Secretpipe
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AlexaBM
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AlexaBM
hi Secret C:
[Normal]
  1. AR 4?
  2. 00:25:264 (3,4) - About this moment. I suggest to change it and I have 2 variants how to:
    1) Delete (3), it's a bit hard to understand for beginners.
    2) Replace them with an 1/2 slider.
    You have such moments further, check them too please.
  3. 00:38:121 (5,6,7) - Make a perfect triangle?
  4. 00:42:921 (4,4) - You can stack'em better.
  5. 00:56:464 (2,1) - ^
  6. 01:08:121 (3,4,1) - Perfect triangle please.
  7. 01:10:864 (3,4) - Move them to x:388 y:296 to make a circle from sliders. Flow is better now. Also don't forget to fix the spacing.
  8. 01:39:664 (1,3) - I'm sure, someone will click on the slider's reverse. Move (2)'s tail somewhere.
  9. 01:42:407 (1) - Maybe end this spinner here? 01:44:464 -
  10. 01:47:892 (1,2) - Blanket can be fixed a bit.
  11. 01:49:264 (4,1) - Stack them better please.
  12. 01:54:749 (4,1) - ^
  13. 01:56:464 (2,5) - ^
  14. 02:04:349 (1) - Why not to end the spinner here? 02:07:092 -
    I know what you gonna say me, but I'm sure that ^this variant is better!
[Collab Insane]
Kuron-Kun:
  1. 00:27:150 (4,5) - Improve this blanket a bit.
  2. 00:28:521 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:31:264 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:06:407 (4,5) - ^
  5. 01:26:292 (3,4) - Stack'em better!
Secret:
  1. 00:34:007 (1,2) - Make these sliders the same?
  2. 00:39:150 (1) - I don't really like when the downbeats are ignored. Instead of using reverse add a circle maybe? I mean:
  3. 01:11:892 (4,1) - This overlap is bad , maybe add a jump here? (or just replace it)
[Asphyxia's Insane]
  1. 01:31:435 (1,2) - I understand what sound you wanted to follow, but it's not so comfortable to play. Make 1/2 sliders instead or make the distance lower?
  2. 01:47:549 (5,1) - Blanket please
More DnB please <3 good luck~
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
AlexaBM

AlexaBM wrote:

[Asphyxia's Insane]
  1. 01:31:435 (1,2) - I understand what sound you wanted to follow, but it's not so comfortable to play. Make 1/2 sliders instead or make the distance lower? It actually plays really really really well, I want to keep it.
  2. 01:47:549 (5,1) - Blanket please It ruins it but sure, doesn't look too bad. :D
More DnB please <3 good luck~

Thank you for your mod!

For Secretpipe; (note that these are must fix things!)
  1. Why do you have 2 mp3 files in the song folder? Remove one? (I highly doubt this is intentional)
  2. Add Asphyxia to tags
  3. Add Irreversible to tags
I already added them to my Insane's tags so you don't have to do it for me!
Remember to disable widescreen support and letterboxes for obvious reasons!

http://puu.sh/aMgBR/ffbe28041d.txt <- Diff update
-Neipezi
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Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
hi owo/

[General]
- Tag Asphyxia, inverness add
- Who is the map of the Irreverpipe's Hard?
- There are duplicate mp3 files. Delete the "Shock One Polygon [Ft. Reija] (2) .mp3" in the folder.

[Normal]
00:58:521 (1,1) - This approach of (1) too close.
01:01:264 (1) - add to finish the head
01:23:207 (1) - ^
01:20:464 (1,1) - 00: 58: 521 (1,1) - the same as.

[Collab]
01:00:321 (2,3) - Spacing x.x
01:00:921 (6) - NC add?
01:11:549 (3) - ^
01:12:235 (1) - After the treatment (4), too close to the right (1) to the interval. Do you want to change the location to x:352 y:120?
01:38:292 (5,1) - NC change
01:39:664 (5,1) - ^

[Asphyxia's Insane]
00:27:150 (2,4) - NC add?
00:43:950 (2,3) - Move one space to the left? Align the position of the 00:46:007 (7) -
01:00:921 (1) - Add a clap on the head?
01:45:149 - ~ 02:06:749 - Does not exist in this part is to add a hit sound.
02:06:407 (5) - NC add?

owo)b and where Did it all hit sounds are gone :o
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
-Neipezi

-Neipezi wrote:

hi owo/

[Asphyxia's Insane]
00:27:150 (2,4) - NC add? No, would break pattern
00:43:950 (2,3) - Move one space to the left? Align the position of the 00:46:007 (7) - It's meant to be like that though :c
01:00:921 (1) - Add a clap on the head? Whistle sounds better though, fits the song a lot better!
01:45:149 - ~ 02:06:749 - Does not exist in this part is to add a hit sound.
02:06:407 (5) - NC add? Sure!

owo)b and where Did it all hit sounds are gone :o

Thanks for your mod! :)

My difficulty is now hitsounded! (copier op ok) http://puu.sh/aMB42/9d381c6949.txt <- Diff update
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe

AlexaBM wrote:

hi Secret C: Hi C:
[Normal]
  1. AR 4? Done
  2. 00:25:264 (3,4) - About this moment. I suggest to change it and I have 2 variants how to:
    1) Delete (3), it's a bit hard to understand for beginners.
    2) Replace them with an 1/2 slider. Done
    You have such moments further, check them too please.
  3. 00:38:121 (5,6,7) - Make a perfect triangle? Improved it !
  4. 00:42:921 (4,4) - You can stack'em better. Moved one grid down xD really nazi though!
  5. 00:56:464 (2,1) - ^ ^
  6. 01:08:121 (3,4,1) - Perfect triangle please. It's already fine imo !
  7. 01:10:864 (3,4) - Move them to x:388 y:296 to make a circle from sliders. Flow is better now. Also don't forget to fix the spacing. Done
  8. 01:39:664 (1,3) - I'm sure, someone will click on the slider's reverse. Move (2)'s tail somewhere. I'll change it if someone else complain about it !
  9. 01:42:407 (1) - Maybe end this spinner here? 01:44:464 - Okay done !
  10. 01:47:892 (1,2) - Blanket can be fixed a bit. Fix'd
  11. 01:49:264 (4,1) - Stack them better please. Done
  12. 01:54:749 (4,1) - ^ Done
  13. 01:56:464 (2,5) - ^ Done
  14. 02:04:349 (1) - Why not to end the spinner here? 02:07:092 - Done
    I know what you gonna say me, but I'm sure that ^this variant is better!
[Collab Insane]
Secret:
  1. 00:34:007 (1,2) - Make these sliders the same? It'll ruin the blanket ><
  2. 00:39:150 (1) - I don't really like when the downbeats are ignored. Instead of using reverse add a circle maybe? I mean:
    Nice idea ! But I'll change it if another ppl complain :3
  3. 01:11:892 (4,1) - This overlap is bad , maybe add a jump here? (or just replace it) This isn't my part tho ! *facedesks*
More DnB please <3 good luck~ Thanks a bunch for modding :D
/////////////////////\o3o/////////////////////

-Neipezi wrote:

hi owo/ hi :3

[General]
- Tag Asphyxia, inverness add
- Who is the map of the Irreverpipe's Hard?
- There are duplicate mp3 files. Delete the "Shock One Polygon [Ft. Reija] (2) .mp3" in the folder. All done

[Normal]
00:58:521 (1,1) - This approach of (1) too close. If you talk about the spinner , it's fine :3
01:01:264 (1) - add to finish the head I don't get the sentence sorry ><
01:23:207 (1) - ^ ^
01:20:464 (1,1) - 00: 58: 521 (1,1) - the same as. Same as 58:521

[Collab]
01:00:321 (2,3) - Spacing x.x I don't see the problem owo
01:00:921 (6) - NC add? Yeah , my bad , I remove it x)
01:11:549 (3) - ^ not my part :3
01:12:235 (1) - After the treatment (4), too close to the right (1) to the interval. Do you want to change the location to x:352 y:120? Done :3 Amazing idea tho
01:38:292 (5,1) - NC change Not my part lol
01:39:664 (5,1) - ^ ^
Thanks a bunch for modding too Neipezi :3
Kuron-kun
Kuron-kun
AlexaBM's Mod

AlexaBM wrote:

hi Secret C:

[Collab Insane]
Kuron-Kun:
  1. 00:27:150 (4,5) - Improve this blanket a bit. This isn't my part ):
  2. 00:28:521 (1,2) - ^ Same
  3. 00:31:264 (1,2) - ^ Same
  4. 01:06:407 (4,5) - ^ Done
  5. 01:26:292 (3,4) - Stack'em better! orz ok, fixed.
blameinverness2014

More DnB please <3 good luck~

-Neipezi's Mod

-Neipezi wrote:

hi owo/ hellow

[Collab]
01:11:549 (3) - NC Nooo, I'm trying to keep the NCs on the big white tick.
01:38:292 (5,1) - NC change YES IT'S YOUR PART
01:39:664 (5,1) - ^ smoke

owo)b and where Did it all hit sounds are gone :o

http://puu.sh/aNUJw.osu
sheela
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sheela
Yo yo Secretpipe.

Normal

  1. 00:25:778 (1) - L'objet précédent va à gauche (ça suit 00:24:407 (2) ), tandis que 00:25:778 (1) va courber à droite, ce qui brise la flow. Je te suggère de la courber en haut:
    SPOILER

    108,152,25778,6,0,P|163:134|227:147,2,112.500004291535,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    Je trouve que ceci fera un meilleur flow.
  2. 00:30:750 (3,4) - Peut-être un 1/2 slider, comme 00:25:264 (3) ? Je le trouve un peu "forever alone".
  3. 00:35:378 (2) - Juste une petite chose. Bouge-le plus haut pour que la tête soit aligné avec l'objet précédent. Après avoir l'avoir fait, bouge 00:36:750 (3) à x:307 y:233 pour mieux compléter le motif (le triangle). Et, bouge 00:37:778 (4) à x:198 y:43 pour réparer la distance constante.
  4. 00:36:750 (3) - Peut-être mes oreilles sont défectuées, mais je crois que ce slider ne suit pas bien avec la musique.
  5. 00:40:864 (2) - Encore une petite chose. Bouge-le vers la droite (x:288) pour qu'il soit aligné avec l'objet précédent.
  6. 00:53:721 (3) - La queue est un peu trop en dehors, je crois.
  7. 01:13:607 (3) - Encore une petite chose. Courbe-le plus pour avoir un blanket avec l'objet précédent. Il n'y a pas de grosse différence, mais c'est quelque chose que je veux juste dire.
  8. 01:24:578 (3,4) - C'est plus beau si cela faire un effet mirroir:
    SPOILER
    Pour le faire, copie 01:25:264 (4) et remplace 01:24:578 (3) . Sélectionne 01:24:578 (3) et fait Ctrl + J et Ctrl + H. Ensuite, pivote-le à -70°. Finalement, bouge-le à x:459 y:84.
  9. 01:46:521 (3) - Retourne-le verticalement (Ctrl + J)? Celle d'à toi, je trouve que tu doit faire un bond (comme un ballon qui bondit) pour aller à l'objet suivant. Si tu la tourne verticalement, ça va faire un flow circulaire, ce qui est mieux (dans mon opinion).
    SPOILER

    Cette suggestion mènera à refaire 01:47:207 (4) et aux autres objets. Je ne te conseillera pas de le changer, mais c'est un point que je te donne.

Irreverpipe's Hard

  • Irreversible
  1. 00:41:893 (6) - In my opinion, the curve is ugly when it's too curve (you can see the hard edges on the border).
  2. 01:41:378 (2,3,4) - Try this pattern.
    SPOILER
    Your pattern has tails overlapping, and maybe the flow doesn't flow well, since each slider shoots to a tail.
  3. 02:06:064 (2) - Little stuff. Move this to x:392 y:147 so that the head could be on the same curve with the previous object?

    Secretpipe
  4. 01:25:949 (1) - Un petite chose. Bouge-le vers x:230 y:175 pour qu'il soit entre des deux objets précédents.

Asphyxia's Insane

  1. 00:23:041 (1) - Move this somewhere on the top-left (maybe x:67 y:159) to get a "better" flow. By quoting, it means that the flow isn't natural, but it best that it shoots to the next object. Also, it's not snapped.
  2. 01:38:464 (2) - Little stuff. Move this to x:186 y:94 to get a equilateral triangle (with 01:38:292 (1,3) ).

Collab Insane

  • Secretpipe
  1. 00:34:007 (1,2) - Fait un effet mirroir:
    SPOILER

    325,298,34007,6,0,P|269:318|197:286,1,127.500004863739,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    C'est plus beau et si tu met 00:34:007 (1) à x:325 y:298, ça fait une petite "feinte", ce qui met 0.10% plus difficile.
  2. 00:55:435 (1) - Remplace la tête avec la queue? Ça suit le motif avec 00:55:778 (2) . Tu peux le faire à 00:56:121 (3) , mais ça ne marche pas si bien.

    Kuron-Kun
  3. 01:11:549 (3) - It's too much outside of the grid set; it touches the bottom. Move it a little up.
  4. 01:26:635 (4) - Little stuff. Stack it perfectly with 01:27:492 (2) . There's also 01:26:292 (3) that you need to perfectly stack the tail with the other tail.
J'aime beaucoup the contenu, alors voici un staru~ / I really like the mapset, so here's a staru~
Bonne chance pour la rank~ / Good Luck on ranking this map~
Les questions peuvent être demandé par PM dans les forums ou dans le jeu. / Any questions can be ask via PM in forum or in-game.
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
sheela901

sheela901 wrote:

  1. 00:23:041 (1) - Move this somewhere on the top-left (maybe x:67 y:159) to get a "better" flow. By quoting, it means that the flow isn't natural, but it best that it shoots to the next object. Also, it's not snapped. Nah, I prefer mine a lot more, sorry x_x
  2. 01:38:464 (2) - Little stuff. Move this to x:186 y:94 to get a equilateral triangle (with 01:38:292 (1,3) ). Nice catch, fixed!
[/notice]

Thanks for your mod! Diff update sent in-game. :3
sheela
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sheela

Asphyxia wrote:

sheela901

sheela901 wrote:

  1. 00:23:041 (1) - Move this somewhere on the top-left (maybe x:67 y:159) to get a "better" flow. By quoting, it means that the flow isn't natural, but it best that it shoots to the next object. Also, it's not snapped. Nah, I prefer mine a lot more, sorry x_x
  2. 01:38:464 (2) - Little stuff. Move this to x:186 y:94 to get a equilateral triangle (with 01:38:292 (1,3) ). Nice catch, fixed!
[/notice]

Thanks for your mod! Diff update sent in-game. :3
No problem~ But the first slider is not snapped. And I just realized that the tail of 01:55:435 (4) is outside of the gridset.
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia

sheela901 wrote:

No problem~ But the first slider is not snapped. And I just realized that the tail of 01:55:435 (4) is outside of the gridset.
*sigh* I thought I fixed these but I guess I didn't, thanks for pointing out again! I moved 4 a lot more down so it's not offscreen or anything and apparently the first slider wasn't on the red line properly so I fixed that too, hopefully everything's fine now.

http://puu.sh/aURX0/999ef3c398.txt
Kuron-kun
Kuron-kun

sheela901 wrote:

Kuron-Kun
  1. 01:11:549 (3) - It's too much outside of the grid set; it touches the bottom. Move it a little up. Hope it's better now.
  2. 01:26:635 (4) - Little stuff. Stack it perfectly with 01:27:492 (2) . There's also 01:26:292 (3) that you need to perfectly stack the tail with the other tail. Okie, fixed them.
Thanks for modding!

http://puu.sh/aWzNp.osu
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