1. EASY (1.57 stars, 142 notes)
2. EXTRA (6.07 stars, 601 notes)
3. HARD (3.12 stars, 332 notes)
4. HARDER (3.78 stars, 382 notes)
5. INSANE (4.92 stars, 509 notes)
6. NORMAL (2.48 stars, 245 notes)

1. 00:21:486 (1) - delete it and put this slider here 00:21:606 (2) - because it sounds weird
2. 00:23:166 (2) - delete clap on the end of the slider
3. 01:00:606 (6) - ctrl+g?
4. 01:40:206 (1,2,3) - this isnt perfect! http://puu.sh/ab4I5/8a7c20ede5.jpg
5. 00:13:342 (3) - this blanket isnt perfect too! try x:160 y:168
6. 00:19:566 (1,2) - swap them on timeline, because it sounds weird
7. 01:09:006 (5) - delete clap and put finish on the end of slider

1. 00:09:966 (1,2,3,4) - i think that this singletap is too fast for normal
2. 00:24:366 (3,4,5,6) - ^

340 wrote:

amazing map as always :3

[General]

offset = 386 (listen here 00:10:462 - to verify this) ok

[Extra]

this part of mod were writen with your offset!

1. 00:21:486 (1) - delete it and put this slider here 00:21:606 (2) - because it sounds weird not problem
2. 00:23:166 (2) - delete clap on the end of the slider k
3. 01:00:606 (6) - ctrl+g? nope.
4. 01:40:206 (1,2,3) - this isnt perfect! http://puu.sh/ab4I5/8a7c20ede5.jpg maybe done.
5. 00:13:342 (3) - this blanket isnt perfect too! try x:160 y:168 done.
6. 00:19:566 (1,2) - swap them on timeline, because it sounds weird nice catch.
7. 01:09:006 (5) - delete clap and put finish on the end of slider nope.

[Normal]

1. 00:09:966 (1,2,3,4) - i think that this singletap is too fast for normal no problem.
2. 00:24:366 (3,4,5,6) - ^ ^

Timorisu wrote:

Nice map but will you still map Hard and Insane? ;Д;

ts8zs wrote:

Strange song :3
[EXTRA]
Just some idea.
00:22:946 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1829396
00:31:826 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1829398
00:34:226 (2,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1829404
00:35:666 (6) - 356,160
00:38:786 (3) - NC
00:47:426 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1829407
00:50:306 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:50:786 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:51:026 (5) - Ctrl+G
00:56:066 (1,2) - swap
00:56:786 (5,6) - swap
01:00:626 (6) - Crl+G
01:00:866 (1,2) - swap
01:03:746 (1,2) - swap
01:09:026 (5) - move 256,232 SV x0.5
01:16:546 (5,6) - del and 01:16:586 - note or a sliderend
01:31:946 - ^
02:20:306 (1,2) - Ctrl+J,swap
[Insane]
Much harder than Hard.more like Extra?how about call this another:3
[Hard]
00:49:346 (6) - NC

paseli wrote:

[HARD]
00:37:346 (1) - it sounds odd if you leave the backslider like this, split it up into 2 sliders with the 2nd one starting at 00:37:826 - done.
01:00:866 (5,6,7,8) - THese double stacks are maybe too hard for a hard map, a backslider should be fine here as well np imo.
01:11:426 (1) - that backslider is way too long, split it up in 3 smaller ones i want some pettern.
I see you go from 1-3 backsliders after every iteration - which is nice, but too long backsliders are a no-go for a hard map imo.
01:15:266 (1) - split in two
01:26:786 (1) - split in three
01:30:626 (1) - split in two


[INSANE]
00:28:106 - add circle done.
00:29:186 - add circle here and start the spinner at the red tick and let it end on 00:30:866 - added circle.
00:31:106 - add circle here instead no.
00:38:426 (1,2,1) - i think you can find a more interesting pattern than this one (the same for the Extra map) i like this. keep.
01:15:266 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - you may try out doing a small jump between 6&7 as well as at the end between 12 & 1 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1830705 . This could also be applied on the extra map. interesting, but, keep now. i want thinking time.
01:19:106 - ^
01:26:786 - ^
01:30:626 - ^

[EXTRA]
Pretty much the same as in INSANE. Also not much to say from me since i can't pass this yet. xD

Average song, but good maps! Too bad i can't pass the last one yet to test it properly xD

Greetings,
paseli

Regraz wrote:

Hi!Pomuta~
As you requested!
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Note that I am a new mapper/modder, so sorry if I cannot offer much help!
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[General]
Why not add Pomuta in the tags like your other maps? XD added!
[EASY]
00:23:426 (1,2) - (nazimod) This blanket can beimproved. http://puu.sh/ahoAe/6923f17f4c.jpg
00:33:026 (4) - The slidertick here is little noisy. -5%
01:28:226 (4,1) - ^ not fixed.
02:21:986 (4) - Why not create a 1/1 here like your previous section 02:20:066 (2) - ? I want some pettern. and more easily. because easy diff.
[NORMAL]
Oh! Why slildertick so high! Really a little noisy at some degree!~ agreed!
00:04:226 (1,1) - Is it rankable to place a note only 1/1 after a spinner in NORMAL? I have easy diff. maybe fine imo.
01:29:186 (2) - Repeat twice is a combo killer to newbies. bit long slider. fine
01:35:426 (4) - Moveto 163|80 for a prefect stack. fixed
01:49:106 (2,2) - This overlap is not good. http://puu.sh/ahpaS/3166dac5c4.jpg fixed more beautiful.
01:59:426 (1) - Not recommend stack together when the space between them is 2/1 fine for me. but, will consider.
[HARD]
00:12:386 (2) - Hidden under th slider? According to the rnking creteria, only Insane can do this. other modder said this, i'll conside ;w;
01:11:426 (1) - Repeat a lot of times. A little noisy, maybe you can lower the volume a little just same stream!. nothing problem imo~.
02:03:986 (4) - End at 345|176 to make a perfect stack. fixed
Other diffs are perfect.
Only one thing more I want to say that, during the last part of the last KIAI, the hitsounds are too loud, thus the music is hard to be heard. ok, all 80%→75%!!
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=Anyway, this map is so good! Good Luck!~

Loneight wrote:

Hi~
M4M.

• 
  Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[general]

1. because the music stop at 02:26:185 - , I think kiai time's end is not at 02:26:306 - but at 02:26:185 - okay.

[Easy]

1. 00:23:426 (1,2) - I just feel a little weird for there no have clap hitsound, how about 00:24:866 (2) - add a clap to make different hitsounds of system? if you change, 00:28:226 (2) - add a clap at rotation, 00:32:546 (3) - add a clap sorry, all no.
2. 01:55:106 (6) - remove the whistle at start, because it's weird that only there have whistle sound and it's not suitable for music ? sound fit imo. this part only is bad? That is wrong.

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[Normal]

1. 00:04:226 (1,1) - I think there is hard for newbie, because the waiting-time is too short in the high BPM, try 00:04:226 (1) - end on 00:07:106 - and put a note on 00:07:586 -
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2. 00:29:306 (1,1) - reason same as ^, try 00:29:306 (1) - end on 00:30:626 - and put a note on 00:31:106 -
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3. 00:26:546 (3) - I think it is hard to read for newbie, because of stack, it would be covered by 00:25:346 (1) - 's score, try to NC it or move other way
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4. 00:36:866 (1) - reason same as 00:04:226 (1,1) - , how about end on 00:38:066 - to make a different rhythm? or you can change it like 00:04:226 (1,1) -
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5. 01:55:586 (1,2) - how about swap NC? to make easier to read for newbie okay.
6. 02:08:906 (1) - change it end on 02:10:466 - , I think you know why

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[Hard]

1. 00:22:226 (4) - how about NC it? a little hard to read because it's close 00:21:866 (2,3) - can't understand
2. 02:10:946 - ~ 02:26:186 - I think there claps are unnecessary, they are a little noisy and not suitable for music, try to remove them like Normal or reduce them sounds good, keep

[Insane]

1. 00:07:826 (3) - well.. try to NC it, it's hard to read when the music just start without prompt agree
2. 02:10:946 - ~ 02:26:186 - same as Hard

[Extra]

1. 00:34:346 (3) - try to NC it to make 00:34:226 (2,4) - easier to read, 01:03:146 (3) - same as here
2. 01:34:466 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - because of the stack Leniency system, 1:35:426 (1) - would be covered by their score and hard to read that is a slider
3. 01:19:826 (10) - a one-rotation slider in a stream is hard to read and uncomfortable, why you don't make it to be a perfect stream? I mean change this to 3 circles
4. 02:20:306 (1) - remove NC, it would make player hesitate
5. 02:10:946 - ~ 02:26:186 - same as Hard

Extra all no.

that's all
good luck

-APXH wrote:

[Extra]
A lot of symmetry. I kinda got annoyed playing this (Ok, TRIED playing this)
00:53:666 (5,6) - I'm not sure about the shape of these two i like this.

[Insane]
This is the only difficulty with slowdowns in the Kiai. Just saying
00:09:926 and 00:09:986 - Remove these timing points two. They're not in use. done.
00:13:766 and 00:13:886 - ^ done.
00:17:606 and 00:17:666 - 00:17:666 done.
00:54:146 (1,2,1,2) - Most of the time, I usually try avoiding using more than 2 repeats back sliders for insane difficulties, but that's just me. fine imo.
01:01:826 (1,2,1,2) - ^ ^
01:24:386 - Remove timing point done.

True be told, my computer lagged when I was modding these two ~

[Hard]
Is this really a hard difficulty, or an I just still stuck in 2013?
00:16:706 (3) - No, why a red point? Just curve regularly. I'd accept it if it was along side other slider with red dots but... ok.
00:18:626 (5) - ^ ok.
00:19:106 (7) - Try making this curve more so that it blankets 4 better fine for me.

[Normal]
00:19:106 (5) - Is this slider a bit short? lol, thanks.

[Easy]
00:33:026 (4) - Curve this more so that it can blanket 3 other style changed.

It's a good map, but the song kinda drives me nuts...
Um... If you can to ask for a mod, could you try to remember I don't like THESE kinds of songs? Thanks
Thank you for listening~ Ganbatte ya~

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Here I am (a bit late xD)
Mod request from in game

[EXTRA]

00:17:426 (5,4) - Aren't stacked properly ok
00:28:466 (3,5) - Same ^ ok
00:53:306 (2,1) - Same ^ ok
00:57:026 (1,2) - Ctrl+G ? no
01:00:626 (6) - Ctrl+G ? no
01:03:146 (3,5) - Stack properly ok

02:05:906 (5) - Blanket could be improved: move the last anchor point to 406:89 ok
02:10:826 (1) - Stack this note properly ok

[INSANE]

00:08:786 (4) - Blanket could be improved: move the first anchor point to 345:308 other fixed.
00:17:186 (3) - Stack this properly
00:54:626 (2,2) - Stack them properly
00:59:186 (2,3,4,5,6) - (4) in (5)'s place; (5) on (2)'s end; (6) on the next combo's slider's start (I mean where (3) was) (Basically it's triangle, if I was too confusing xD no problem imo :p
01:49:706 (3,3) - Stack them properly
01:50:906 (2,4) - Same ^
01:50:786 (1,5) - Same ^
01:51:746 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe another triangle? Same as 00:59:186 (2,3,4,5,6) (clockwise or not, it's upon to you) keep.
01:54:026 (4,6) - Stack them properly
NOTE: if you haven't a SB disable Widescreen Support, you don't need it :3 done

[HARD]

00:15:266 (4) - Maybe Q ? From here you change DS...so...this is fine!
00:33:026 (1) - Stack this note properly ok

02:24:506 (1) - Same ^ ok

[NORMAL]

01:46:946 (7,1) - Stack them properly ok

01:47:666 (9,2) - Same ^ ok
01:59:426 (1) - Maybe put it in the previous combo? keep?

[EASY]

01:32:546 (1,3) - I know on Easy and Normal diffs there is a lot of spacing, but these two notes are 0.01 apart xD ok
01:53:666 (5) - Blanket could be improved: move first anchor point to 364:117 sorry, spacing nochanged,

That's pretty much all I had to say.
I hope I was useful
Good Luck with this