This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年10月5日 at 15:31:22

Artist: Junk
Title: Aihana (Love+ Edit)
Source: BMS
Tags: Uplifting Trance BOF2009 LOVEPLUS Takane Manaka Simple_Star
BPM: 140
Filesize: 3705kb
Play Time: 02:11
Difficulties Available:

1. Another - 7Key (4.69 stars, 1610 notes)
2. Hyper - 7Key (3.39 stars, 960 notes)
3. Normal - 7Key (1.87 stars, 509 notes)
4. S.Star's Another - 7Key (3.81 stars, 1595 notes)
5. S.Star's Beginner - 7Key (1.3 stars, 315 notes)

Download: Junk - Aihana (Love+ Edit)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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素直に言って...いい？


hutuno Another here
Thank you for your awesome GD. It's really a pity that I can't include it in my mapset.

Minor Fix and advice
Normal remap imho
Hyper very good
Another slight suggestions on setting and in general.

Nice map

感謝PC，讓我有聽到神曲的機會

摸摸

[Hyper]
提個意見就好
感覺這難度的白線上的鍵對的有些亂

[S'Star's Another]
00:08:243 (8243|1) - 聽起來沒音
00:14:565 - 可以加一顆搭配後面的double
00:28:815 (28815|5) - 可以考慮拿掉
01:05:565 (65565|2,66422|2) - 建議再加一顆搭配前段
02:04:922 - 加一顆搭配00:49:493 -

[Another]
00:13:708 - 刪一顆
00:17:136 - 一樣刪一顆
02:08:243 - 這音感覺比較小 刪一顆
02:11:243 - 加一顆搭配白線

越聽越想睡，先水這樣吧

PC和小星加油

CrazyStar wrote:

感謝PC，讓我有聽到神曲的機會感谢Junk好吗?!

摸摸

[Hyper]
提個意見就好
感覺這難度的白線上的鍵對的有些亂好的我稍微动了一下 如果还有不对劲的地方请跟我说

[Another]
00:13:708 - 刪一顆好
00:17:136 - 一樣刪一顆好的
02:08:243 - 這音感覺比較小 刪一顆 这个不妥 取了两个音的
02:11:243 - 加一顆搭配白線x

越聽越想睡，先水這樣吧为啥越来越想睡;w;

PC和小星加油

感谢！

CrazyStar wrote:

感謝PC，讓我有聽到神曲的機會

[S'Star's Another]
00:08:243 (8243|1) - 聽起來沒音 有滑音
00:14:565 - 可以加一顆搭配後面的double
00:28:815 (28815|5) - 可以考慮拿掉 拿掉的话就是窜音了
01:05:565 (65565|2,66422|2) - 建議再加一顆搭配前段
02:04:922 - 加一顆搭配00:49:493 -

PC和小星加油

别的Fixed.多谢CS~

Hi~from queue
Here's my mod
column 1234567


Good Luck.

hutunohito wrote:

Hi~from queue
Here's my mod
column 1234567

mod

[General]
offset is a little bit early or late?yeah I am not sure about that. I am gonna double check that
add Kiai timemaybe no

[Normal]
00:15:422 (15422|0,15850|6,16279|0) - change same as 00:17:565 (17565|4,17672|3,17779|2) - x hardly audible
01:13:279 (73279|1,73386|2,73493|3,73600|4,73708|5) - move to 34567 &01:13:708 - add 1?sure
01:23:779 (83779|2,83886|2,83993|2) - hard for Normal...hmm I would like to remain
01:26:993 (86993|1,87100|2,87208|3,87315|4,87422|5) - ^^change as above
02:04:922 - addOK

[Hyper]
00:08:350 (8350|4) - move to 1x

[Another]
00:08:350 (8350|6) - move to 1x
00:22:065 - add 1x beat on 7
01:51:208 - ^OK move note on 2 to 1

Good Luck.

Thank you!

hutunohito wrote:

Hi~from queue
Here's my mod
column 1234567
[General]
offset is a little bit early or late?
add Kiai time

[Beginner]
00:10:279 (10279|4,10493|2,10708|0) - move to 246? I don't know why need move
00:14:779 (14779|1) - start 00:14:993 - and 00:14:779 - add?
00:42:315 (42315|2) - delete(Beginner shouldn't have 1/4 or more,in my experience) Nope Follow piano here
00:46:065 - add Here i not catch beat
00:48:636 - ^
00:59:779 - ^
01:02:350 - ^
01:33:208 - ^
01:35:136 (95136|0) - move to 5?
02:12:208 (132208|5) - delete?



[S.Star's Another]
00:55:922 (55922|0,56136|2,56350|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1880026
00:56:350 - add 1/2 or 1/4 or 1/8
00:59:565 (59565|3,59993|3) - ?
01:01:493 (61493|2) - end 01:02:350 - and add LN same time?
01:40:386 (100386|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1880043
01:41:136 - to 01:44:565 - add 1/4 single notes?
02:10:815 (130815|6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1880056?
02:11:886 (131886|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1880062 Fixed Some


Good Luck.

Thanks for mod~

Hi~
Can I GD?(hutuno Another)
https://www.dropbox.com/s/y86vbgrssffvjar/Junk%20-%20Aihana%20%28Love%2B%20Edit%29%20%28richardfeder%29%20%5Bhutuno%20Another%5D.osu
Level 11 in IIDX

來水摸

[General]
沒

[S.Star's Beginner]
00:42:208 到 00:42:850 - 好好的抓主音，00:42:315 (42315|2,42636|6) - 完全看不懂
00:46:065 - 漏音
00:48:636 - 漏音
00:49:708 (49708|4) - ?
00:52:493 - 漏音
00:59:779 - 漏音
01:02:350 - 漏音
01:03:422 (63422|0) - ?
01:33:208 - 漏音，這個必須加，前後都是抓主音，這個也是主音
01:35:136 - 這裡休息不妥，不是因為有休息所以不妥，而是前面感覺好像節奏沒打完，結果就休息一樣
01:58:279 到 02:08:565 - 坦白來說，這段我完全看不懂
02:12:208 (132208|5) - 其實可以去掉

[Normal]
00:15:422 - 你後面節奏都弄一樣的Pattern，但是前面這裡怎麼空的。。
00:45:850 (45850|5,45877|6) - Normal而已，其實不用這麼兇殘，給人SS吧
00:59:565 (59565|5,59591|6) - ↑
02:10:279 - 這裡空了有一種說不出的奇怪

[Hyper]
坦白來說這難度沒有原譜好打(先把原譜尾殺排除來講)
00:29:136 - 這裡開始，我知道跟原譜有點相似，但你又避開可能被懷疑Copy的嫌疑所以動了，不過比起原譜來說打起來不舒服很多，我建議排列可以再思考
01:23:779 (83779|2,83886|2,83993|2) - 其實我對於這三點第一直覺會想動中指去打，可以放到2看看
02:08:565 - 好一個尾殺

大概就這樣，Good luck

Spy wrote:

來水摸

[General]
沒

[S.Star's Beginner]
00:42:208 到 00:42:850 - 好好的抓主音，00:42:315 (42315|2,42636|6) - 完全看不懂 你如果再仔细点就能发现这边跟的是之前的节奏 只不过多了3连钢琴00:46:065 - 漏音
00:48:636 - 漏音
00:49:708 (49708|4) - ?
00:52:493 - 漏音
00:59:779 - 漏音
01:02:350 - 漏音
01:03:422 (63422|0) - ?
01:33:208 - 漏音，這個必須加，前後都是抓主音，這個也是主音 改了一大半 具体忘记了
01:35:136 - 這裡休息不妥，不是因為有休息所以不妥，而是前面感覺好像節奏沒打完，結果就休息一樣 OK
01:58:279 到 02:08:565 - 坦白來說，這段我完全看不懂
02:12:208 (132208|5) - 其實可以去掉 和PC讨论了下改了一部分

大概就這樣，Good luck

多谢审判员~

Spy wrote:

來水摸怎么这么多(.

[Normal]
00:15:422 - 你後面節奏都弄一樣的Pattern，但是前面這裡怎麼空的。。听不到声音啊
00:45:850 (45850|5,45877|6) - Normal而已，其實不用這麼兇殘，給人SS吧
00:59:565 (59565|5,59591|6) - ↑我想了想 这么低的OD 就这样吧
02:10:279 - 這裡空了有一種說不出的奇怪可是真的没东西可以写了 加东西更奇怪

[Hyper]
坦白來說這難度沒有原譜好打(先把原譜尾殺排除來講)干 我是不是要学习一下原谱
00:29:136 - 這裡開始，我知道跟原譜有點相似，但你又避開可能被懷疑Copy的嫌疑所以動了，不過比起原譜來說打起來不舒服很多，我建議排列可以再思考我还是打打好了...稍微动了几个卡手的空格 连点不会动的
01:23:779 (83779|2,83886|2,83993|2) - 其實我對於這三點第一直覺會想動中指去打，可以放到2看看好 连着后面也动了点
02:08:565 - 好一個尾殺hh hhhhhhhh

大概就這樣，Good luck

感谢~

=w=)/ modreqs here..

1/2/3/4/5/6/7

[General]
01:44:565 - until 02:11:993 - where's Kiai time?

[S.Star Beginner]
<3 how you make transition from bass 'n drum to synth..

00:45:850 (45850|3,46065|1) - & 00:59:565 (59565|2,59779|1) - move them 2 column to right? pitch just very high.. ==a

[Normal]

00:29:136 (29136|0) - add on 4? strong opening in 2nd verse
00:49:279 (49279|2) - 00:52:708 (52708|4) - not really strong sound? remove
00:56:458 add 1 note?
00:56:565 - ^
01:10:279 - ^
G01:18:636 (78636|4,78743|2,78850|4) - ctrl + h, it's not hurt to follow pitch.. ==a
01:23:779 (83779|2,83886|2,83993|2) - o_o move it to 4th or 5th lane, left hand usually weaker to do jack (even only 3 notes), or spread them
01:44:565 - add 1 note? opening chorus (and strong sound)
01:58:279 - ^
02:11:993 - add 1 note.. :3

[Hyper]
00:42:850 - add 1 note?
01:46:279 (106279|0) - 01:47:993 (107993|0) - 01:49:708 (109708|0) - 01:51:422 (111422|6) - 01:53:136 (113136|6) - 01:54:850 (114850|6) - 01:56:565 (116565|6) - 1 note only?

overall i <3 dis diff

[S.Star Another]
00:15:422 (15422|3) - 00:29:136 (29136|3) - 00:42:850 (42850|6) - 01:27:422 (87422|4) - 01:44:565 (104565|5) - 01:58:279 (118279|5) - strong sound.. ==a add 1?
01:26:350 (86350|4,86458|6,86565|2,86672|4,86779|6,86886|2,86993|6,87100|4,87208|2,87315|0) - double notes seems legit too.. ==a
01:50:350 - add 1? while the other parts like 01:49:493 (109493|6,109600|4) - layered with double notes (piano and synth)

[Another]
teach me how to map fun chart like you.. *-* things just seamless, challenging, yet fun.. xD (can't find a really big problem on this diff.. ==a)
00:15:422 - add 1 note?
00:56:565 - add on 6?

[Overall]
<3 those layering.. just add kiai, and rank this map.. >:I we need more replacement for those deleted IIDX map.. T-T

._. anyway richard, mind if we do M4M? i really need modding for my map t/234680

good luck!

ExUsagi wrote:

=w=)/ modreqs here..

1/2/3/4/5/6/7

[General]
01:44:565 - until 02:11:993 - where's Kiai time?

[S.Star Beginner]
<3 how you make transition from bass 'n drum to synth.. Orz

00:45:850 (45850|3,46065|1) - & 00:59:565 (59565|2,59779|1) - move them 2 column to right? pitch just very high.. ==a OK

[S.Star Another]
00:15:422 (15422|3) - 00:29:136 (29136|3) - 00:42:850 (42850|6) - 01:27:422 (87422|4) - 01:44:565 (104565|5) - 01:58:279 (118279|5) - strong sound.. ==a add 1?
01:26:350 (86350|4,86458|6,86565|2,86672|4,86779|6,86886|2,86993|6,87100|4,87208|2,87315|0) - double notes seems legit too.. ==a
01:50:350 - add 1? while the other parts like 01:49:493 (109493|6,109600|4) - layered with double notes (piano and synth) OK

good luck!

Thanks Usagi~

ExUsagi wrote:

=w=)/ modreqs here..

1/2/3/4/5/6/7

[General]
01:44:565 - until 02:11:993 - where's Kiai time?sorry don't want to add kiai time /.\

[Normal]

00:29:136 (29136|0) - add on 4? strong opening in 2nd versesure
00:49:279 (49279|2) - 00:52:708 (52708|4) - not really strong sound? remove x clap + piano
00:56:458 add 1 note?no piano note only if I am gonna add one I will have add tons of it T.T
00:56:565 - ^
01:10:279 - ^x
G01:18:636 (78636|4,78743|2,78850|4) - ctrl + h, it's not hurt to follow pitch.. ==asure
01:23:779 (83779|2,83886|2,83993|2) - o_o move it to 4th or 5th lane, left hand usually weaker to do jack (even only 3 notes), or spread themintended!
01:44:565 - add 1 note? opening chorus (and strong sound)1 note for synth is enough no crash or any other extra instrument that worth mapping xD
01:58:279 - ^x ^
02:11:993 - add 1 note.. :3x XD

[Hyper]
00:42:850 - add 1 note?x same as normal
01:46:279 (106279|0) - 01:47:993 (107993|0) - 01:49:708 (109708|0) - 01:51:422 (111422|6) - 01:53:136 (113136|6) - 01:54:850 (114850|6) - 01:56:565 (116565|6) - 1 note only?yeah 1 note 1 instrument standard bms /.\

overall i <3 dis diff me too /me run

[Another]
teach me how to map fun chart like you.. *-* things just seamless, challenging, yet fun.. xD (can't find a really big problem on this diff.. ==a)no I am not that strong ;w; please improve together I am not superior than anyone in mapping
00:15:422 - add 1 note?x same idea as normal
00:56:565 - add on 6?added and rearranged

@_@ owell dems brackets on ending..

hhhhh /me run

[Overall]
<3 those layering.. just add kiai, and rank this map.. >:I we need more replacement for those deleted IIDX map.. T-Tyeah indeed...

._. anyway richard, mind if we do M4M? i really need modding for my map t/234680
sure I will do it later just too bust recently but I will mod that I ensure you
good luck!

Thank you!

Hey there.

These are my humble opinions to try and improve your map.

Cool hitsounds.
Awesome song.

Convention is 1234567.
PR is Pitch Relevancy.

[S.Star's Beginner]
There's severe inconsistencies.
Throught 00:16:708 - to 00:29:136 - there's pretty much no reason to place the notes in the way they're placed; I don't see why would be ascending patterns when they're clearly mapped to the kicks; since that is what hitsounds are suggesting.
00:34:065 (34065|4) - Move to 1 to keep the ascending/descending patterns you were using before.
00:35:458 (35458|6,35779|4) - Switch lanes. Same reason.
00:42:850 - No reason not to have a 3-chord in here to acknowledge the crash. Also the section is a bit too empty overall. Having a bunch of 1/1s won't kill anyone.
00:49:493 (49493|2) - Change to 7 for PR.
00:59:993 (59993|2) - These singled out notes put at the beginning of the measure feel extremely out of place; if you're going to do piano there's no reason to have these.
00:59:993 (59993|2) - Put something besides a bunch of notes that follow the piano please, you're really going to bore players out of their minds otherwise

[Normal]
01:27:422 - I would be happy if you kept mapping the piano as you did before from this point too.

[Hyper]
00:35:565 - To 3-chord for consistency. I'm only noting this one since the next subsection is about to start; and it uses 2-chords consistently.
01:41:136 - Use a 2-chord.

I think this section would play better with a bunch of 3-chords; like here:
01:46:708 - Use a 3-chord.
01:48:422 - ^
01:50:993 - ^
01:51:850 - ^
01:53:565 - ^

[S.Star's Another]
01:56:350 (116350|5,116350|1,116458|1,116458|5) - No audio cue for this jack. Besides being the one jack on the whole song. So either put more or remove this one.

[Another]
00:21:315 (21315|2) - To lane 2 for PR
00:22:815 (22815|4,22922|2,23029|3) - To 3-5-2 instead. (PR)
00:26:243 (26243|4,26350|1,26458|3) - to 5-6-3 instead. (PR)
00:29:565 (29565|4,29672|4) - No audio cue for this jack.
00:30:636 (30636|3,30743|3) - ^
00:31:279 (31279|2,31386|2) - ^
00:32:029 - Here's a better place to put a jack.
00:32:350 (32350|1,32458|1) - No audio cue for jack.
00:32:993 (32993|6,33100|6) - ^
00:34:065 (34065|3,34172|3) - ^
00:34:708 (34708|4,34815|4) - ^
Etcetera, a bunch more of these jacks that have nothing that can be easily heard to justify them.
00:49:493 (49493|5) - Change to 7th lane for PR.
00:48:636 (48636|1,49065|5,49279|1,49493|5) - The piano you're mapping these to don't extend into each other like these lanes suggest. Similar situations ahead, as well.
00:48:636 (48636|1,49065|5,49279|1,49493|5) - Map the grace note.
01:10:279 - 3-chord for emphasis.
01:23:136 (83136|2,83458|2,83779|2) - Switch to lane 5 for PR.
01:23:779 (83779|4,83886|4,83993|4) - To lane 2 for PR.

Good luck.

Agka wrote:

Hey there.

These are my humble opinions to try and improve your map.

Cool hitsounds.
Awesome song.

Convention is 1234567.
PR is Pitch Relevancy.

[S.Star's Beginner]
There's severe inconsistencies.
Throught 00:16:708 - to 00:29:136 - there's pretty much no reason to place the notes in the way they're placed; I don't see why would be ascending patterns when they're clearly mapped to the kicks; since that is what hitsounds are suggesting.
00:34:065 (34065|4) - Move to 1 to keep the ascending/descending patterns you were using before.
00:35:458 (35458|6,35779|4) - Switch lanes. Same reason.
00:42:850 - No reason not to have a 3-chord in here to acknowledge the crash. Also the section is a bit too empty overall. Having a bunch of 1/1s won't kill anyone.
00:49:493 (49493|2) - Change to 7 for PR.
00:59:993 (59993|2) - These singled out notes put at the beginning of the measure feel extremely out of place; if you're going to do piano there's no reason to have these. Keep
00:59:993 (59993|2) - Put something besides a bunch of notes that follow the piano please, you're really going to bore players out of their minds otherwise

[S.Star's Another]
01:56:350 (116350|5,116350|1,116458|1,116458|5) - No audio cue for this jack. Besides being the one jack on the whole song. So either put more or remove this one.

Good luck.

Other All Fixed thanks Agka!

Agka wrote:

Hey there.

These are my humble opinions to try and improve your map.

Cool hitsounds.
Awesome song.

Convention is 1234567.
PR is Pitch Relevancy.

[Normal]
01:27:422 - I would be happy if you kept mapping the piano as you did before from this point too.01:36:208 (96208|0) - to 01:44:136 (104136|0) - will be all empty then x.x I would like to that too but...yeah just can't

[Hyper]
00:35:565 - To 3-chord for consistency. I'm only noting this one since the next subsection is about to start; and it uses 2-chords consistently.x one sound per note 3 is OK but at that section I am not mapping the sound that makes it triple so remain
01:41:136 - Use a 2-chord.why only 1 bass here

I think this section would play better with a bunch of 3-chords; like here:
01:46:708 - Use a 3-chord.
01:48:422 - ^
01:50:993 - ^
01:51:850 - ^
01:53:565 - ^ah I am not gonna map that x.x

[Another]
00:21:315 (21315|2) - To lane 2 for PRx that would place 00:21:529 (21529|1) - in a embarrass situiation
00:22:815 (22815|4,22922|2,23029|3) - To 3-5-2 instead. (PR)? I thought 00:22:922 (22922|2,23029|3) - is obviously lower than 00:22:815 (22815|4) -
00:26:243 (26243|4,26350|1,26458|3) - to 5-6-3 instead. (PR)^ ya same
00:29:565 (29565|4,29672|4) - No audio cue for this jack.
00:30:636 (30636|3,30743|3) - ^
00:31:279 (31279|2,31386|2) - ^no. there are
00:32:029 - Here's a better place to put a jack.
00:32:350 (32350|1,32458|1) - No audio cue for jack.
00:32:993 (32993|6,33100|6) - ^
00:34:065 (34065|3,34172|3) - ^
00:34:708 (34708|4,34815|4) - ^
Etcetera, a bunch more of these jacks that have nothing that can be easily heard to justify them.x there are listen carefully
00:49:493 (49493|5) - Change to 7th lane for PR.that will be hard to press
00:48:636 (48636|1,49065|5,49279|1,49493|5) - The piano you're mapping these to don't extend into each other like these lanes suggest. Similar situations ahead, as well.not really the end of the piano sound is hard to tell and the reason why I mix them up with each other is I think that better represent the feeling of piano sounds are mixing together and cannot distinguish them from each other clearly
00:48:636 (48636|1,49065|5,49279|1,49493|5) - Map the grace note.
01:10:279 - 3-chord for emphasis.yeah added but 3 too much for me 2 is OK imo
01:23:136 (83136|2,83458|2,83779|2) - Switch to lane 5 for PR.
01:23:779 (83779|4,83886|4,83993|4) - To lane 2 for PR.yeah you are right but now I just switch the whole direction since I have to make a shift and let right hand to do piano

Good luck.

Thank you very much!

"Arcwinolivirus BAT checking/modding"

Take note that I am focusing on note patterns, comfortability, placements and consistency.
Also, do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod but reason them out with sense.

daisuki~ -wait watdafoq

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!
Suggesting: add kiai time 01:44:565 until 02:11:993

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[S.Star's Beginner]
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[Overall]
Daisuki this 7K mapset <3 Keep it up and good luck ^o^)b

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[General]
Suggesting: add kiai time 01:44:565 until 02:11:993x I just don't want to add kiai ;w;

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00:45:877 (45877|6) - suggesting to remove since its normal difficulty and I think 1/8 note is not that consistent atm. Also its like 4-noter in NM which we would want to avoid.

00:56:565 (56565|4) - move to 4 since pitch of the melody is not the same as 00:56:136 (56136|4) - x 00:56:565 (56565|4,59779|3) -

00:59:591 (59591|6) - remove same reason previously.

01:23:886 (83886|2) - move to 5. we would like to avoid that 3-jacknoter for normal :<

cool diff~all apply except the one reply in red

[Hyper]

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00:23:565 - add note. 2-noter clapnice

00:42:850 - add note since strong sound and fits to be 3-noteradded

00:49:279 (49279|6) - move to 4 for comfortability.I think 4 is also not very handy imo. Considering a relatively low bpm I would just leave this here

01:02:779 (62779|2) - move to 6. notes too much focused on left hand.PR 01:02:779 (62779|2,62993|3,63208|1) -

01:58:386 (118386|1,118493|2) - ctrl j to avoid similarity on 01:57:850 (117850|0,117958|1,118065|2) - which has different consistentcy and instruments. Also more comfortable.yeah sure

wow diff /o/

[Another]

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00:14:350 (14350|5,14458|2,14565|6) - add more note like 00:13:922 (13922|0,13922|4,14029|2,14029|6,14136|0,14136|4) - since same sound and strengthsure added

00:35:993 - add note. 3-noter beat.

00:37:708 - ^

00:39:422 - ^

00:41:993 - ^not really for all above since they are all kick+constantly audible 1/4 only. Both actually lanes (clap/main melody)silence here.

00:42:850 - add note to 6 strong sound.yes

01:40:065 (100065|5) - move to 01:39:958 like 01:38:886 (98886|3,98886|4,98886|1) - not really they are different. You can refer to 01:34:493 (94493|0,94493|2,94815|0,94922|2) - they are on the same lane

cool diff~!

[Overall]
Daisuki this 7K mapset <3 Keep it up and good luck ^o^)b

Thank you!