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Tanizawa Tomofumi - Sawakaze (TV Version) [Taiko]

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mingmichael
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, September 06, 2014 at 11:20:46 AM

Artist: Tanizawa Tomofumi
Title: Sawakaze (TV Version)
Source: 君に届け 2nd Season
Tags: Kimi ni Todoke opening op
BPM: 142
Filesize: 1568kb
Play Time: 00:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (1.92 stars, 128 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.3 stars, 86 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2.48 stars, 187 notes)
  4. Oni (3.06 stars, 239 notes)
Download: Tanizawa Tomofumi - Sawakaze (TV Version)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kimi ni Todoke!
relax song now~
qoot8123
[General]
  1. The volume is not impressive to me change to this(Oni) would be better to me :
[ Kantan]

  1. 00:13:414 (2) - I think you can remove this note to make a break here :)

[ Futsuu]

  1. 00:23:132 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - the vocal is not similar with previous part, so try to follow the vocal and beat here?ex:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1741880
  2. 00:44:470 (5) - k? base on vocal's pitch :)

[ Muzukashii]

  1. 00:37:288 (4,1) - reverse these two notes? base on vocal's pitch and the drum on background music (00:34:963 (1,1,1) -

[ Oni]

  1. 00:37:498 (1,1) - reverse? to follow the vocal's pitch

That's all
Very relax song~ :)
Topic Starter
mingmichael
qoot8123
[General]
  1. The volume is not impressive to me change to this(Oni) would be better to me : changed! i am not really good to choose volumes TTwTT
[ Kantan]

  1. 00:13:414 (2) - I think you can remove this note to make a break here :) sure!



[ Futsuu]

  1. 00:23:132 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - the vocal is not similar with previous part, so try to follow the vocal and beat here?ex:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1741880 hmm i keep mine. mostly i followed the drum hits there ><
  2. 00:44:470 (5) - k? base on vocal's pitch :) agree. but i will consider again here o o o on 1/2 isn't good idea for myself

[ Muzukashii]

  1. 00:37:288 (4,1) - reverse these two notes? base on vocal's pitch and the drum on background music (00:34:963 (1,1,1) - yes it's. but i made a different pattern there. i followed the chime sounds there (it looks like chime, or cymbal..?) which comes out on 00:37:288 - and 00:37:710 -

[ Oni]

  1. 00:37:498 (1,1) - reverse? to follow the vocal's pitch same reason like Muzukashii xD i followed thatsoundwhichisunknown

That's all
Very relax song~ :)
thanks for the mods and also the star~! >w<
mliencheng
mod :)

Kantan
00:41:302 k
00:42:992 k
00:54:400 d
00:54:823 k

00:57:358 move to 00:57:147
00:57:992 move to 00:57:569



Futsuu
00:32:640 k
00:42:781 k
00:42:992 k
00:46:372 move to 00:46:161
00:57:992 remove note



Muzukashii
00:55:245 remove note
00:57:781 remove notes after this note



Oni
00:06:865 add d
00:07:499 remove note
00:08:133 add k
00:08:344 remove note
00:08:555 add k
00:09:189 remove note
00:47:851 k
Topic Starter
mingmichael
mliencheng
mod :)

[Kantan]00:41:302 k
00:42:992 k nope for these. dons are for the low pitch sounds
00:54:400 d
00:54:823 k ah sorry i keep mine here. 00:54:823 - must be a don to make a easier pattern if we connect it with 00:55:457 - which comes out on 1/2 bsd. i believe that kantan players will be confused with this sudden 1/2 note, so that's why i put a same note like the previous one which is don :P

00:57:358 move to 00:57:147
00:57:992 move to 00:57:569 nice idea there to follow the vocals. but i followed the instruments there. well i'll consider about this again



[Futsuu]00:32:640 k sorry i keep this with don because wanna make it a bit easier. it's a don because the next note which is 1/2 note is a don too and it's a big don. so to make it a bit easier, i put 00:32:640 - with a don, to make a similar note with the next
00:42:781 k hmm IMO the pitch sound has changed there, so i put a different note like the previous note which is kat
00:42:992 k same ^
00:46:372 move to 00:46:161 sorry, i didn't follow the vocal on there
00:57:992 remove note similar like above, because of the instrument sounds



[Muzukashii]00:55:245 remove note i keep mine here sorry. it follows the vocal imo
00:57:781 remove notes after this note sorry, same like another diff. i followed the instrument sounds



[Oni]00:06:865 add d
00:07:499 remove note
00:08:133 add k
00:08:344 remove note
00:08:555 add k
00:09:189 remove note sorry nope all. i wanted to use a simple pattern for the first part (from 00:00:738 - until 00:12:569 - ) because the music is calm and soft on there. and actually i don't really focus vocals there, because i followed the basic pattern (there's not any notes on the red strikes)
00:47:851 k sorry it can't. i should keep the consistency of the pattern from 00:46:372 - until 00:48:062 - which the pattern is o o o o o o o on the 1/2 bsd ><
thanks for the mods >w< but sorry no changes. even i don't use your mods, but i still consider some of them >< thanks once again~!
Asagi Mutsuki
moemichael >w<

[ General]
YOU HAVE COUNTDOWN WIDESCREEN LETTERBOX ENABLED YOU BAKA *cough cough* as this is a taiko set you should disable all of them in every difficulty for rankability stuff

[ Kantan]
00:10:879 - um this note as a kat breaks the d k d k pattern for the whole beginning part D: well from what i can see you put k d k only to have more variety with 00:06:653 (1,1,2) and 00:03:273 (1,2,3) , but d fits your whole pattern more so why not use d?
00:19:330 - I'd delete this note to give Kantan players more space as the patterns nearby are not that easy >_>
00:57:992 - why is this note even here O_O there aren't any 1/2 sounds obvious enough to be mapped here, plus if you deleted this note the kd dk flows better~

Well to be honest the map is kinda random, you followed the vocals too closely and so the rhythm might be a little to grasp for beginners >w< imo the map is too hard for a calm song like this~

[ Futsuu]
00:10:879 - same as Kantan O.O
00:32:640 - delete this note to give players time to react to the next big D, the current spacing before the big note is too short and its kinda hard to use both fingers to hit the big note D:
00:47:851 - same as above, imo the vocals isn't too important to be mapped here as it makes this part too hard ;w;
00:56:090 (1,2,1) - since you followed the vocals before, why not move these notes to 00:55:879 - 00:56:302 - 00:56:724 to follow the vocals too ? the way you switch from beat-mapping (cough) and vocal-mapping is really confusing
00:57:992 - same as Kantan, but here I just think that the note here breaks the flow :?

Same as Kantan, the map is relatively too dense compared to the song, also the jump from Kantan to Futsuu is a little big (some 1/1 patterns -> 1/2 everywhere) try to make some patterns easier ;w;

[ Muzu]
00:04:330 - add a k here to follow the vocals k i don't know why you ignored it here
00:28:626 - add a d here? this part sounds too empty D:
00:42:992 - why not make this a big note too like 00:41:090 ?
00:47:428 (1,2,1) - ctrl+g these notes (d k k) feels better as it will fits the vocal pitchs (low-low-high-high-low) from 00:47:217 better
00:57:992 (2,3) - same as Kantan and Futsuu

welp there are a LOT inconsistencies in the map (eg different patterns for the exact same vocals) so um I hope you're doing that on purpose and not just putting notes randomly D:

[Oni]
00:04:330 - same as Muzu
00:26:830 - move this note to 00:26:619 to follow the guitar? also if you moved the note change it to k too XD
00:54:928 - try adding a k here, it gives a very nice feel with the dk afterwards!

Wow dat modding quality drop, I really need to mod more

jkjk hm imo you need to find more modders before asking a BAT in this mapset, mostly because the difficulty of Kantan and Futsuu is kinda questionable D: Muzu and Oni looks fine to me though :3

Good luck!!
Topic Starter
mingmichael
cdhsausageboy
moemichael >w<

[ General]
YOU HAVE COUNTDOWN WIDESCREEN LETTERBOX ENABLED YOU BAKA *cough cough* as this is a taiko set you should disable all of them in every difficulty for rankability stuff lolll always forget about this problem. removec all

[ Kantan]
00:10:879 - um this note as a kat breaks the d k d k pattern for the whole beginning part D: well from what i can see you put k d k only to have more variety with 00:06:653 (1,1,2) and 00:03:273 (1,2,3) , but d fits your whole pattern more so why not use d? nope, actually i wanted to make another kind of pattern there, and also kat on 00:03:273 (1,2,3) - follows the vocal too which is high (it's not really as high as 00:11:724 - , but it's already a bit high ww)
00:19:330 - I'd delete this note to give Kantan players more space as the patterns nearby are not that easy >_> actually i deleted 00:19:330 - . 00:17:640 - has a same part like 00:14:259 - , so it's quite impossible to be deleted
00:57:992 - why is this note even here O_O there aren't any 1/2 sounds obvious enough to be mapped here, plus if you deleted this note the kd dk flows better~ it has hahaha hear it again carefully. the sound comes out really low there. i still keep mine on here

Well to be honest the map is kinda random, you followed the vocals too closely and so the rhythm might be a little to grasp for beginners >w< imo the map is too hard for a calm song like this~ i changed a bit for the patterns. well i followed the vocals from the beginning until 00:12:569 - , and i followed the beats from 00:14:259 - until 00:33:274 - , and during kiai parts, i followed the vocals. so i think it's not random because it already has the patterns o.o

[ Futsuu]
00:10:879 - same as Kantan O.O same then. nope
00:32:640 - delete this note to give players time to react to the next big D, the current spacing before the big note is too short and its kinda hard to use both fingers to hit the big note D: nope, it's not hard. i have asked my friend (who is noob on taiko) and he could press the big notes there after 1/2 before
00:47:851 - same as above, imo the vocals isn't too important to be mapped here as it makes this part too hard ;w; same here
00:56:090 (1,2,1) - since you followed the vocals before, why not move these notes to 00:55:879 - 00:56:302 - 00:56:724 to follow the vocals too ? the way you switch from beat-mapping (cough) and vocal-mapping is really confusing nope here. if i should follow the vocals, why don't you ask me too on 00:45:738 - and 00:46:161 - ? the vocals come out there right? well to make it consistent, i put a same notes on 00:56:090 - like 00:45:950 -
00:57:992 - same as Kantan, but here I just think that the note here breaks the flow :? nope, same like kantan too

Same as Kantan, the map is relatively too dense compared to the song, also the jump from Kantan to Futsuu is a little big (some 1/1 patterns -> 1/2 everywhere) try to make some patterns easier ;w; nope, it's already easy tbh and i'll keep mine here. the same pattern is same like my previous map and it's not a big problem too. kantan already has kantan pattern and futsuu already has futsuu pattern btw i tried to delete some notes to give a little break there

[ Muzu]
00:04:330 - add a k here to follow the vocals k i don't know why you ignored it here it will destroy my pattern actually haha. make a simple pattern for the first part. and don't really care about the vocals even i followed the vocals ww
00:28:626 - add a d here? this part sounds too empty D: no drums no notes
00:42:992 - why not make this a big note too like 00:41:090 ? the "feel" for the finishers are different if i put it on 00:42:992 - too. hard to be explained hahaha
00:47:428 (1,2,1) - ctrl+g these notes (d k k) feels better as it will fits the vocal pitchs (low-low-high-high-low) from 00:47:217 better actually i followed the instrument sounds there which give sounds for kats (i don't really know what sound is that ww)
00:57:992 (2,3) - same as Kantan and Futsuu nope too

welp there are a LOT inconsistencies in the map (eg different patterns for the exact same vocals) so um I hope you're doing that on purpose and not just putting notes randomly D: i don't know how you can say this. if it has inconsistent patterns, show it to me. actually for the first basic pattern i used the kats for every second and forth beats. and i mixed that patterns with vocals/instruments. it depends for the sounds which is more dominant, it can be vocals but suddenly instruments but it's alright after i checked it for many times before i uploaded this. well for the example on 00:40:667 (1,2) - , the instruments are more dominant than the vocals even the vocals are low-high there. but it feels that we missing the "feel" for the stronger pitch than vocals. well i always used this kind of patterns for all my maps actually and nobody modders/bats mentioned if it's inconsistent. nice suggestions, i will think again later

[Oni]
00:04:330 - same as Muzu same too nope
00:26:830 - move this note to 00:26:619 to follow the guitar? also if you moved the note change it to k too XD nope, sounds weird to put the triplet earlier there
00:54:928 - try adding a k here, it gives a very nice feel with the dk afterwards! hegh? hmm i will consider about this again soon

Wow dat modding quality drop, I really need to mod more

jkjk hm imo you need to find more modders before asking a BAT in this mapset, mostly because the difficulty of Kantan and Futsuu is kinda questionable D: Muzu and Oni looks fine to me though :3

Good luck!!
thanks for the mods~ i'll update the diffs asap~
10nya
so sorry for the long wait ;w;

[General]
  1. prefer to change the Source into 君に届け 2nd Season and move "Kimi ni Todoke" to tags
[Kantan]
  1. 00:45:316 (2) - a bit unread and too sudden (i'm afraid easy player miss read this one) so how about change this to d and move to 00:45:527
  2. 00:55:457 (2)- same opinion here
[Futsuu]
  1. seems good~
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:12:358 - how about add d here? to follow previous rhythm and piano
  2. 00:37:710 (1,1)- how about swap k d to d k here? it'll more fit imo
[Oni]
  1. 00:47:217 (3) - i think k is fit here to support next rhythm (since next rhythm is loud k)
nice mapset as always~ sorry for the poor mod and good luck!
Senritsu
(:

[Kantan]
00:24:822 (2) - coba ganti ke kat, biar rhythm katnya konstan. seems noprob for me for same pattern dijejer berdua gitu ovo
00:54:823 (1) - ganti ke kat? mirror 00:50:597 (1,2,1) - , dan biar patternnya nggak sama terus uwu

[Futsuu]
00:23:766 (1) - imo enakan d di sini. karna drumnya lebih kedengeran + vokalnya juga mendukung gitu. dan mirror ftw
00:42:568 (1,1,2) - kdk? karna kamu ngikutin dari pattern sebelumnya 00:37:499 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1) - kalo beda sendiri imo aneh
00:52:709 (1,1,1) - coba ddk? mirror sih, dan terkesan lebih ngikutin vokalnya daripada kdk

[Muzukashii]
00:30:316 mungkin add d di sini? rasanya janggal kalo mulai di red line, dan samar" ada vokalnya juga eue
00:50:808 (1) - ganti ke d? karna vokalnya sama kaya 00:50:597 (1) - .. naiknya baru di 00:51:019 (2) -

[Oni]
00:31:054 (3) - d? ngpasin sama musiknya imo. . ``

nothing else. . . what should i mod with 58 sec song and relaxing too. .
sorry for poor mod uwu
well gl and gwvs~ ovo/
Topic Starter
mingmichael
10nya
so sorry for the long wait ;w;

[General]
  1. prefer to change the Source into 君に届け 2nd Season and move "Kimi ni Todoke" to tags owh sure fixed!
[Kantan]
  1. 00:45:316 (2) - a bit unread and too sudden (i'm afraid easy player miss read this one) so how about change this to d and move to 00:45:527
  2. 00:55:457 (2)- same opinion here thanks for the suggestions here xD well i just wanted to give a little different pattern there xD
[Futsuu]
  1. seems good~
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:12:358 - how about add d here? to follow previous rhythm and piano hmm well let i consider again about this
  2. 00:37:710 (1,1)- how about swap k d to d k here? it'll more fit imo owh sorry it can't because i followed the instrument sounds there xD
[Oni]
  1. 00:47:217 (3) - i think k is fit here to support next rhythm (since next rhythm is loud k) yeah agree, but actually i used kat there to emphasize the instrument sounds like on 00:47:428 - and 00:47:640 - @@ so i can't put kat too on 00:47:217 - because that sound doesn't come out
nice mapset as always~ sorry for the poor mod and good luck!
Senritsu
(:

[Kantan]
00:24:822 (2) - coba ganti ke kat, biar rhythm katnya konstan. seems noprob for me for same pattern dijejer berdua gitu ovo tadinya don buat ngasih variasi tapi jadi aneh ya lol ganti ganti~
00:54:823 (1) - ganti ke kat? mirror 00:50:597 (1,2,1) - , dan biar patternnya nggak sama terus uwu well coba gua pikir lagi xD soalnya itu harus don biar sama kayak 00:55:457 - yang don di 1/2. karena ini tiba2 muncul 1/2 pattern, jadinya gua pake not yang sama biar gampangin pemaen wkwk

[Futsuu]
00:23:766 (1) - imo enakan d di sini. karna drumnya lebih kedengeran + vokalnya juga mendukung gitu. dan mirror ftw agree ganteh
00:42:568 (1,1,2) - kdk? karna kamu ngikutin dari pattern sebelumnya 00:37:499 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1) - kalo beda sendiri imo aneh gua ga ngikutin pattern sebelomnya xD wkwk itu mungkin kebetulan pas gua ngemap depannya sama wkwk
00:52:709 (1,1,1) - coba ddk? mirror sih, dan terkesan lebih ngikutin vokalnya daripada kdk hmm tapi 00:52:710 - harus kat disini buat snare soundnya :c

[Muzukashii]
00:30:316 mungkin add d di sini? rasanya janggal kalo mulai di red line, dan samar" ada vokalnya juga eue hmm coba gua pikir lagi deh. tapi dasarnya gua fokusin ke drum hitsnya. sama aja kayak 00:28:837 - yang mulai di red line wkwkw
00:50:808 (1) - ganti ke d? karna vokalnya sama kaya 00:50:597 (1) - .. naiknya baru di 00:51:019 (2) - sebenernya gua ngikut instrument disana.... xD hehee /me runssss

[Oni]
00:31:054 (3) - d? ngpasin sama musiknya imo. . `` pake kat lebih greget dapetnya `w` wkwkwk

nothing else. . . what should i mod with 58 sec song and relaxing too. .
sorry for poor mod uwu
well gl and gwvs~ ovo/
thankyou girls for modding!!! 8-) yay indonesian taiko modders ww
wasonz
From my queue

Muzukashii
00:45:105 (2) - move to 00:45:527 (2) -
00:55:245 (1) - delete
00:57:992 (2,3) - delete
00:57:992 (2) - add d

Oni
00:52:181 (2) - k
00:55:034 (3) - add d

very good mapset ;)

Good Luck ~ :)
Topic Starter
mingmichael
IMMoRTalS
From my queue

[Muzukashii]00:45:105 (2) - move to 00:45:527 (2) - it can't. 00:44:998 (1,2) - follows the vocal
00:55:245 (1) - delete ^
00:57:992 (2,3) - delete it follows the last instrument sounds which are drums
00:57:992 (2) - add d nope then

[Oni]00:52:181 (2) - k nope ooo or ooo here
00:55:034 (3) - add d nope there. wanna give a break. same like 00:44:999 - that i gave a break

very good mapset ;)

Good Luck ~ :)
thanks for the mods~
karterfreak
Mod as per PM request.

[Kantan]
Please consider using 1.4 SV like the Muzukashii and Oni do. Lower SV will do nothing but make it harder for players to adjust to the next difficulty (reading speed + difficulty jump at the same time is hard to manage for newer players).
00:17:217 (1) - Use a kat here?
00:35:808 (2) - Consider deleting to refer to vocals a bit better (like you do at 00:37:076 (2,1,1,1,1) )
00:49:329 (1) - Same as above
00:57:357 (2,1,2) - Move this section so that it starts at 00:57:147.

[Futsuu]
Please consider using 1.4 SV like the Muzukashii and Oni do. Same explanation as the Kantan.
00:27:568 (1) - Consider deleting to have at least 1/1 spacing between the previous note and the finish note.
00:32:639 (1) - Same as above.
00:47:850 (1) - ^

[Muzukashii]
00:57:357 (1) - I'd consider deleting this to emphasize the vocals at the end a bit more.

[Oni]
00:57:569 (2) - Change to don to be consistent with other difficulties.
Topic Starter
mingmichael
Tasha
Mod as per PM request.

[Kantan]
Please consider using 1.4 SV like the Muzukashii and Oni do. Lower SV will do nothing but make it harder for players to adjust to the next difficulty (reading speed + difficulty jump at the same time is hard to manage for newer players). quite agree with you. kay changed to 1.40. the speed isn't too fast IMO so i changed it
00:17:217 (1) - Use a kat here? sure changed here
00:35:808 (2) - Consider deleting to refer to vocals a bit better (like you do at 00:37:076 (2,1,1,1,1) ) oh i get it. changed here
00:49:329 (1) - Same as above sure
00:57:357 (2,1,2) - Move this section so that it starts at 00:57:147. moved it and also deleted 00:57:992 -

[Futsuu]
Please consider using 1.4 SV like the Muzukashii and Oni do. Same explanation as the Kantan. same
00:27:568 (1) - Consider deleting to have at least 1/1 spacing between the previous note and the finish note. sure~
00:32:639 (1) - Same as above. sure same ^
00:47:850 (1) - ^ ^

[Muzukashii]
00:57:357 (1) - I'd consider deleting this to emphasize the vocals at the end a bit more. agree there with o o and o o

[Oni]
00:57:569 (2) - Change to don to be consistent with other difficulties. owh sure
thanks for the mods~! :oops:
qoot8123
[General]
  1. change the title to 爽風 (TV Version) Romanised title : Sawakaze (TV Version)
    source :http://vgmdb.net/album/22535
[ Kantan]

  1. 00:53:977 (1) - how about remove this note? to reflect this pattern 00:56:090 (1,1) -

[ Futsuu]

  1. 00:57:992 (2) - remove this note? this kat sounds a bit weird to me
  2. 00:37:709 (2) - move to 00:38:555 - to follow this pattern 00:34:540 (3,1,1,2) -


[ Oni]

  1. 00:47:112 (2) - change to k to enhance 00:47:217 (3) - this d's emphasize
:)
Topic Starter
mingmichael
qoot8123
[General]
  1. change the title to 爽風 (TV Version) Romanised title : Sawakaze (TV Version)
    source :http://vgmdb.net/album/22535 thanks for the source >< changed~
[ Kantan]

  1. 00:53:977 (1) - how about remove this note? to reflect this pattern 00:56:090 (1,1) - changed something by myself here :3

[ Futsuu]

  1. 00:57:992 (2) - remove this note? this kat sounds a bit weird to me actually it follows the instrument, but let i deleted this. i decided not to follow the last instrument sounds on Kantan and Futsuu :P
  2. 00:37:709 (2) - move to 00:38:555 - to follow this pattern 00:34:540 (3,1,1,2) - changed here


[ Oni]

  1. 00:47:112 (2) - change to k to enhance 00:47:217 (3) - this d's emphasize i keep mine here since it decided not to use ooo or ooo triplet on my map ><
:)
thanks for the mods again :3
qoot8123
:3

Topic Starter
mingmichael
:3
thanks hihii
Xinely
ferensip /runs
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