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StylipS - MIRACLE RUSH feat. Ogura Yui

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 1월 10일 토요일 at 오후 5:44:55

Artist: StylipS
Title: MIRACLE RUSH feat. Ogura Yui
Source: 咲-Saki- 阿知賀編 episode of side-A
Tags: スタイリップス Saki: Achiga-hen [_Zzz_] [_Karen_] Delis
BPM: 168
Filesize: 3273kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Delis' Insane (4.34 stars, 401 notes)
  2. Easy (1.44 stars, 105 notes)
  3. Insane (4.67 stars, 416 notes)
  4. KRN's Hard (3.17 stars, 247 notes)
  5. Zzz's Normal (1.93 stars, 149 notes)
Download: StylipS - MIRACLE RUSH feat. Ogura Yui
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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first ranked map \:D/
Mp3 is from Delis
Easy by me
Zzz's Normal by [ Zzz ]
KRN's Hard by [ Karen ]
Delis' Insane by Delis
Insane by me
CookieNia
이맵은 pp맵이 됩니다.
-Yuzuriha
general

artist ogura yui → 小倉唯

insane

00:01:397 NC

00:12:468 fnish

00:13:182 finish cancel
00:16:040  ↑
00:16:040  ↑

00:16:575 finish
00:21:754 ↑

00:46:307 NC

00:56:307 cancel

01:00:325 cansel
match the rhythm of the lyrics

01:21:754 NC
01:23:897 ↑

01:27:111 finish cancel



Zzz's Normal

00:16:575 ~ 00:17:111 slider

00:23:897 finish

01:30:861 spinner finish

good songs! :D
Nuke-
하드가 있다고 써있는데 하드가 안보이네욥 ;ㅅ;
[ Zzz ]

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:

Zzz's Normal

00:16:575 ~ 00:17:111 slider

00:23:897 finish

01:30:861 spinner finish ( no. whishle )

good songs! :D
Thank you mod :3

ㅇㅅㅇ!
osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:MIRACLE RUSH
TitleUnicode:MIRACLE RUSH
Artist:Ogura Yui
ArtistUnicode:Ogura Yui
Creator:Nara
Version:Zzz's Normal
Source:Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A
Tags:stylips 咲-Saki-阿知賀編 episode of side-A [ Zzz ]
BeatmapID:496830
BeatmapSetID:185520

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Len
pick


[hard]
00:01:397 (3) - change slider shape, like this:

00:18:897 (3) - move x185 y327

00:23:540 (3) - move x260 y332 and 00:23:897 (1) - more blanket
00:23:540 - ~ 00:25:147 - code
260,332,23540,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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76,224,24611,2,0,L|104:312,1,80
188,201,24968,2,0,L|211:125,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:28:897 (8) - change slider shape, like this:

00:31:218 (4) - I'd Ctrl+G for make a better flow here

00:43:540 (5) - move x512 y200 and 00:43:897 (1) - ctrl+G the reason is same as above

00:48:897 - ~ 00:50:325 - boring for me ; ~;

00:55:325 (1) - ?

00:56:040 (3) - ?????

00:56:754 (5) - ??????????? change sliders shape, look so ugly

00:58:004 - add 1/2 slider here like this:

01:10:682 - ~ 01:13:004 - This rhythm is awkward i think; please change this rhythm like this:

01:17:111 (8,9) - JUST NO, this is HARD DIFF not INSANE

01:18:897 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^

01:20:504 (1,2,3) - stack?

01:22:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this timeline?

[insane]
00:01:397 (1) - remove nc

00:26:932 (1) - move x104 y180, 00:27:111 (2) - x280 y228 and 00:27:290 (3) - x152 y360

00:27:825 (5) - move x160 y28 and 00:28:004 (6) - x248 y164

00:28:540 (2) - move x492 y80

00:34:075 (2) - move x280 y228

00:48:182 (1) - move x296 y316 and 00:48:361 (2) - x424 y216

00:48:897 (4) - x144 y80, 00:49:075 (5) - x168 y288, 00:49:254 (6) - x276 y94 and 00:49:432 (7) - x96 y192
Topic Starter
Nara

Fast wrote:

pick
Thank you ^오^
Lari

Fast wrote:

pick


[hard]
00:01:397 (3) - change slider shape, like this:

00:18:897 (3) - move x185 y327

00:23:540 (3) - move x260 y332 and 00:23:897 (1) - more blanket
00:23:540 - ~ 00:25:147 - code
260,332,23540,1,6,0:0:0:0:
211,125,23897,6,0,P|151:75|61:122,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,159,24432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,224,24611,2,0,L|104:312,1,80
188,201,24968,2,0,L|211:125,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:28:897 (8) - change slider shape, like this:

00:31:218 (4) - I'd Ctrl+G for make a better flow here

00:43:540 (5) - move x512 y200 and 00:43:897 (1) - ctrl+G the reason is same as above

00:48:897 - ~ 00:50:325 - boring for me ; ~;

00:55:325 (1) - ?

00:56:040 (3) - ?????

00:56:754 (5) - ??????????? change sliders shape, look so ugly

00:58:004 - add 1/2 slider here like this:

01:10:682 - ~ 01:13:004 - This rhythm is awkward i think; please change this rhythm like this:

01:17:111 (8,9) - JUST NO, this is HARD DIFF not INSANE

01:18:897 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^

01:20:504 (1,2,3) - stack?

01:22:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this timeline?
수정했어요 (영어..어려움;;)
EndlessShadow
[Easy]
01:10:325 : slider ends should be on 01:10:861
01:23:182 : Add a slider to 01:23:540
[Normal]
01:30:861 : Add a note
01:31:040 : Put the spiner here!
[hard]
01:31:040 : Add Spiner.
*Good diff. setting~ I like it :3
Lari

EndlessShadow wrote:

[hard]
01:31:040 : Add Spiner.
*Good diff. setting~ I like it :3

Thanks to mod >.<

a
osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 1317
PreviewTime: 60326
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:MIRACLE RUSH
TitleUnicode:MIRACLE RUSH
Artist:Ogura Yui
ArtistUnicode:Ogura Yui
Creator:Nara
Version:KRN's Hard
Source:Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A
Tags:stylips 咲-Saki-阿知賀編 episode of side-A [ Zzz ] [ Karen ]
BeatmapID:500849
BeatmapSetID:185520

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"saki20120923_1024.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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61040,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
82290,-100,4,2,0,50,0,1
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276,288,89790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,352,89968,2,0,L|188:388,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,288,90325,2,0,P|176:244|72:308,1,240,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,91040,12,0,96754,0:0:0:0:
lolia
Hi // PM request.

General
  1. Artist : Ogura Yui → 小倉 唯?
  2. Easy, Normal, Hard : 와이드스크린 풀어주세요
  3. Previewtime : 60326으로 언스냅되있는데 30625로 리스냅시켜주세요
  4. 노말에 브레이크타임이 있어서 letterbox 얘 체크하는게 좋을꺼같네요
  5. TAGs : 원래 [_Zzz_], [_Karen_] 이렇게 하는거일꺼에요
  6. 태그에 StylipS 추가하는것도 나쁘진 않을꺼같네요
  7. 오프셋 -388으로 바뀌주세요

Easy
  1. 00:00:683 - 이 초록색선은 지워주시고 타이밍라인으로 불륨조절 해주세요
  2. 00:01:575 (2,3,4) - 사실 음악이랑 잘 어울리는 리듬이 아니라고 생각되는 부분이에요. 이렇게 하는게 더 어울릴꺼에요
  3. 00:11:754 (3) - 꼬리에 피니시
  4. 00:12:468 (4,1) - 얘들 뉴콤위치 바꿔주시고 00:15:325 (3) - 여기서 음악이 바뀌니 뉴콤을 넣어주세요. 그리고 얘는 1/1 슬라로 바꿔도 괜찮을꺼같네요
  5. 00:16:932 (4) - 사실 큰 차이는 없는데 꼬리부분을 (44|272)쪽으로 옮기는게 보기에는 더 부드럽게 보일꺼에요
  6. 00:43:540 (4,1) - 이렇게 하는게 보컬처리하는데 더 좋을꺼에요
  7. 00:45:682 (3,4) - 개인적으론 노트를 지우고 (3)슬라에 리버스를 넣는게 보컬도 처리되고 음악이랑도 어울린다고 생각되네요
  8. 01:10:325 (2,3) - 이 난이도에는 3/2가 거의 없어서 (3)노트를 지우고 (2)슬라에 리버스를 넣는게 나을수도 있어요
  9. 01:23:897 (1,2,3,4) - 힛사 실수같은데 체크해주세요
  10. 01:31:040 (1) - 피니시없는게 좋을꺼같아요
    잘만드셨네요 ..
    다만 3/1슬라와 더 긴 슬라를 좀 다른 리듬으로 바꾸시면 더 재밌을꺼에요

Zzz's Normal
  1. 00:00:683 (1) - 리듬상으론 필요없는 노트라 생각되네요
  2. 00:06:754 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 개인적으로 음악과 맞지않는 클랩같아요. 휘슬만으로도 충분하지 않을까요?
  3. 00:12:468 (1) - 머리 피니시그냥 전체적으로 피니시가 적네요..
  4. 00:16:397 (2) - 사실 클랩자리가 아닌데.,.지우는게 듣기에 좋을꺼같아요
  5. 00:21:754 (2,3) - DS 지적 꽤 올꺼같은데 고치는게 나을꺼같아요
  6. 01:27:468 (2) - 슬라 하나로 처리하기엔 음악이랑 안맞는거같아요
    피니시자리의 휘슬들이나 단순한 리듬이 좀 아쉽지만 어쩔수없네요..
    그래도 전체적으론 깔끔하다고 생각되네요

KRN's Hard
  1. 키아이전까지 40%로 하는건 너무 작다고 생각되요. 파트마다 필요한만큼 볼륨을 올려주세요
  2. 00:02:647 (1,2,3) - 개인적으론 (1,2)를 스택시키고 (3)을 (348|208)에 두는게 나을꺼같네요
  3. 00:04:968 (4) - 리버스 지우시고 1/2, 1/1 슬라로 놓는게 음악이랑 어울린다고 생각해요
  4. 00:12:468 (1) - 반대로 굽히는게 더 부드러울꺼에요
  5. 00:16:575 (1,2) - 차라리 1/1슬라로 바꾸는게 음악이랑 더 어울리지 않을까요?
  6. 00:21:932 (6) - 이것도 이렇게하는게 더 효과가 클꺼에요
  7. 00:27:022 (2) - 지워주세요. 음이 없기도 하고 하드에서는 어울리는자리도 아닐꺼에요
  8. 00:36:754 (1) - 뉴콤 규칙상 여기의 뉴콤은 지우시는게 나을꺼같아요
  9. 00:36:486 (5) - 얘도 지우는게 더 나을꺼에요
  10. 00:36:754 (1,2) - 좀 안어울리는 리듬이라 생각되네요 1/2 슬라 두개에 노트하나 놓는게 나을꺼에요
  11. 00:38:450 (2) - 인센에서는 어울리는 거긴한데 하드에서는 지우는게 나을꺼에요. 연타가 어울리는부분엔 하나도 안찍으셨기도 하고..
  12. 00:40:682 (1,2) - 뉴콤위치 바꿔주세요
  13. 00:42:736 (2) - 위에랑 마찬가지의 이유에요
  14. 00:44:700 (4) - 이건 어울리지가 않는거같은데..지우는게 나을꺼같아요
  15. 00:46:754 (4) - 여기부터 00:54:968 (8) - 여기까지 뉴콤이 엉망인데 고쳐주세요 ㅜㅜ (00:46:754 (4) - 여기가 뉴콤이 새로 시작되어야 할 부분이고 그 뒷부분도 여기에 맞춰서 고쳐주세요)
  16. 00:48:897 (1,2) - 개인적으로 여기의 1/1은 안어울린다고 생각해요
  17. 00:50:504 (1,2) - 이건 지우는게 앞의 박자랑 매치가 될꺼에요
  18. 00:54:879 (7) - 사실 이것도 지우는게 나을꺼같아요(이 뒤론 3연타 언급은 안할게요..판단이 애매해서,,)
  19. 00:55:326 (1) - 얘가 실제로 보컬을 따라갔기 때문에 00:55:861 (2,3) - 이것도 보컬을 따라가는게 더 어울릴꺼에요
  20. 00:58:272 (1,1) - 하드에서 스핀뒤에 1/4를 넣으면 굉장히 어려울꺼에요. 하드유저들을 배려해서라도 자비를..
  21. 키아이파트도 뉴콤이 엉망인부분이 많은데 확인해주세요
  22. 01:30:325 (8) - 아마 더 나은 리듬으로 고치실수 있을꺼에요
    1/4가 어울리는부분에는 1/2가 들어가고 1/2가 어울리는부분에는 1/4가 들어간 부분이 많아서 아쉽네요..
    좀 더 다양한 리듬을 만들수있는부분에 1/2슬라가 들어간 부분이나..뉴콤이 일관성이 없는것같아요

Insane
  1. 00:03:718 (1,2,3) - 굉장히 짧게 느껴지는 부분이에요. 차라리 (1,2) 뉴콤을 바꾸시고 00:04:611 (1) - 이 뉴콤을 지우는게 나을꺼같네요
  2. 00:11:040 (1) - 모양이 좀 이상하기도 하고 왠지 쓸대없이 길어보이는 슬라같아요. 1/1로 줄이시고 1/4노트 두개 놓는게 어울릴꺼같아요
  3. 00:11:754 (1) - 지워도 상관없는 뉴콤같네요
  4. 00:15:593 (2) - 이건 지우는게 보컬에도 좋고 리듬에도 좋을꺼같아요
  5. 00:17:826 - 이건 그냥 제 취향인데 슬라속도 0.5에 볼륨 50%로 3/4슬라 하나 넣는건 어떤가요? 음악이랑도 어울리고,,
  6. 00:20:414 (6) - 지우는게 더 어울리지 않을까요?
  7. 00:21:754 (3,4) - 음악에 비해서 짧다고 느껴지는 점프네요
  8. 00:57:200 (2) - 여기보다는 00:57:379 - 여기에 놓는게 어울릴꺼같아요
  9. 01:11:040 (2) - 여기비트는 굉장히 약해서 점프는 안어울릴꺼에요. 차라리 이걸 지우고 01:10:861 (1) - 얘를 01:10:326 (5) - 이 슬라 머리에 겹치는게 음악을 강조하는데 더 효과적일꺼에요
  10. 01:18:004 (7,8) - 이거는 그냥 1/4슬라로 바꾸는게 더 어울릴꺼같아요
  11. 01:21:754 (1) - 뉴콤 지워주세요
  12. 01:22:825 (2) - 이건 (296|240)으로 스택시켜주는게 더 어울리지않을까요?
  13. 01:31:040 (1) - 이지랑 같아요
    전체적으로 잘만드셨는데 00:23:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 이런부분같은건 좀 아쉽다고 생각되요. 보컬상으론 (5,6)슬라 부분을 1/2노트 점프로 놓는게 더 어울려서..

That's all. GL~
Good song! ~
okdesu_old
from Endless modding queue~

suggestion
should fix
must fix

[Insane]
  1. 00:01:218 - i think red tick does not need anything. maybe extend 00:01:040 (5) - to white tick
  2. 00:05:325 (5,1) - try something else
  3. 00:06:754 (1) - extend to white tick
  4. 00:15:236 - add note
  5. 00:17:110 (5) - map this
  6. 00:18:718 (2) - let red tick free
  7. 00:22:290 (1) - extend to red tick
  8. 00:26:218 - let red tick free
  9. 00:29:254 (6) - stop at red tick or white tick
  10. 00:30:325 (4) - half size repeat slider
  11. 00:30:950 - add note
  12. 00:37:825 (6) - replace with stream
  13. 00:41:754 (4) - pull to red tick
  14. 00:43:807 - add note
  15. 00:46:307 (1) - remove
  16. 00:47:290 - let red tick free
  17. 00:49:522 - add note
  18. 00:55:236 - add note
  19. 00:56:754 - let white tick free
  20. 01:09:522 (7) - add note
  21. 01:11:040 (2) - remove
  22. 01:17:915 - let blue tick free. also 01:18:093 - here
  23. 01:19:522 - add note
  24. 01:20:950 - add note
gl (`・ω・´)シャキーン
Topic Starter
Nara

Karia wrote:

Hi // PM request.

General

Easy

Zzz's Normal

KRN's Hard

Insane

That's all. GL~
Good song! ~
thank you~ :D
Topic Starter
Nara

okdesu wrote:

from Endless modding queue~

suggestion
should fix
must fix

[Insane]
  1. 00:01:218 - i think red tick does not need anything. maybe extend 00:01:040 (5) - to white tick
  2. 00:05:325 (5,1) - try something else
  3. 00:06:754 (1) - extend to white tick
  4. 00:15:236 - add note
  5. 00:17:110 (5) - map this
  6. 00:18:718 (2) - let red tick free
  7. 00:22:290 (1) - extend to red tick
  8. 00:26:218 - let red tick free
  9. 00:29:254 (6) - stop at red tick or white tick
  10. 00:30:325 (4) - half size repeat slider
  11. 00:30:950 - add note
  12. 00:37:825 (6) - replace with stream
  13. 00:41:754 (4) - pull to red tick
  14. 00:43:807 - add note
  15. 00:46:307 (1) - remove
  16. 00:47:290 - let red tick free
  17. 00:49:522 - add note
  18. 00:55:236 - add note
  19. 00:56:754 - let white tick free
  20. 01:09:522 (7) - add note
  21. 01:11:040 (2) - remove
  22. 01:17:915 - let blue tick free. also 01:18:093 - here
  23. 01:19:522 - add note
  24. 01:20:950 - add note
gl (`・ω・´)シャキーン
thanks to mod :)
xxdeathx
Hello, from my queue.

I always thought this song was by StylipS as a group, didn't know they had versions with individual singers o.o

Sounds exactly like the same singer as Baby Sweet Berry Love

[General]
  1. You have 2 "stylips" in tags, remove one
  2. Unicode artist conflicts
  3. Some people don't like negative offsets so maybe use 00:01:040 as your offset.
[Easy]
  1. check AIMod for unsnapped objects
  2. 00:00:683 (1,2) - suggest this rhythm to minimize 3/2 gaps
Nice diff, very creative!

[Normal]
Hey didn't you and karen and habi make that non non biyori OP map
  1. check AIMod for unsnapped objects
  2. 00:11:040 (3) - since you're clapping in this section, it would sound weird that you don't have a clap at 00:11:397. suggest 1/1 repeat slider so you can have the clap.
  3. 00:52:468 (1) - 01:03:897 (1,4) - ^
  4. 01:09:611 (1) - ^ also vocal on the middle tick
  5. 00:55:326 - why stop clapping for this part?
  6. 00:58:182 (1) - i don't like this 3/2 repeat slider, since all the important notes of the song are on the white ticks. highly recommend map 1/1 for this part.
[Hard]
  1. 00:32:111 (2,3) - check blanket. middle is too far and end points are too close.
  2. 00:36:754 (1) - should use 1/2 repeat slider so you don't avoid vocal at 00:36:933
  3. 00:39:611 (6) - 01:08:540 (2) - ^
  4. 00:58:272 (1,1) - object 1/4 tick after spinner is way too soon, instant unrank ;w; give at least 1 beat before spinner
[Insane]
  1. Unsnapped objects AImod
  2. 00:01:575 (7) - move to 136, 188 for better blanket
  3. 00:06:576 (4) - move to 480, 92 so the pattern 00:06:040 (1,2,3,4) - looks cleaner
  4. 00:17:826 (1) - end slider at 00:18:004 so you don't ignore vocals. there is nothing on the 3/4 blue tick anyways
  5. 00:29:611 (1) - suggest delete and put circle at 00:29:790 so the 00:29:790 (7,8,9) - which are similiar vocals have similar objects (all circles). for 00:29:611 either extend previous slider or put circle here. this also helps avoid 3/4 slider
  6. 00:30:325 (10) - blanket is a little off, move end slider point to 340, 180
  7. 00:42:647 (2) - move middle slider point to 408, 28 for blanket
  8. 00:43:182 (3,4,5) - a bigger jump would be good at 00:42:647 (2,3) - because the vocal at (3) is strong. but you don't need to go back and forth between 00:43:182 (3,4,5) - so much because there aren't that many vocals. only (5) and (3) need to be jumps. I suggest stacking 00:43:183 (3,4) - and 00:43:540 (5,1) - like this:
  9. 00:43:718 (1) - not good to end slider on a vocal/long white tick. suggest two 1/2 circles here.
  10. 00:51:040 (1) - middle point to 240, 280 for blanket
  11. 00:49:432 (7) - suggest move around here for much better flow
  12. 00:53:718 (6) - move to 316, 192 for better blanket
  13. 00:55:147 (7) - same thing as 00:43:718 (1)
  14. 01:23:897 (1) - blanket: middle point to 184, 276 and end point to 236, 192
  15. 01:26:040 (5,6,7) - sliders should not end on white ticks. should use this rhythm:
Diff plays pretty nicely but a lot of these sort of things can be improved. Hope this mod helps.

It's nice to see what top players come up with when trying to map, very interesting~
I hope you try to get this ranked!
Lari

Karia wrote:

Hi // PM request.

KRN's Hard
  1. 키아이전까지 40%로 하는건 너무 작다고 생각되요. 파트마다 필요한만큼 볼륨을 올려주세요
  2. 00:02:647 (1,2,3) - 개인적으론 (1,2)를 스택시키고 (3)을 (348|208)에 두는게 나을꺼같네요
  3. 00:04:968 (4) - 리버스 지우시고 1/2, 1/1 슬라로 놓는게 음악이랑 어울린다고 생각해요
  4. 00:12:468 (1) - 반대로 굽히는게 더 부드러울꺼에요
  5. 00:16:575 (1,2) - 차라리 1/1슬라로 바꾸는게 음악이랑 더 어울리지 않을까요?
  6. 00:21:932 (6) - 이것도 이렇게하는게 더 효과가 클꺼에요
  7. 00:27:022 (2) - 지워주세요. 음이 없기도 하고 하드에서는 어울리는자리도 아닐꺼에요
  8. 00:36:754 (1) - 뉴콤 규칙상 여기의 뉴콤은 지우시는게 나을꺼같아요
  9. 00:36:486 (5) - 얘도 지우는게 더 나을꺼에요
  10. 00:36:754 (1,2) - 좀 안어울리는 리듬이라 생각되네요 1/2 슬라 두개에 노트하나 놓는게 나을꺼에요
  11. 00:38:450 (2) - 인센에서는 어울리는 거긴한데 하드에서는 지우는게 나을꺼에요. 연타가 어울리는부분엔 하나도 안찍으셨기도 하고..
  12. 00:40:682 (1,2) - 뉴콤위치 바꿔주세요
  13. 00:42:736 (2) - 위에랑 마찬가지의 이유에요
  14. 00:44:700 (4) - 이건 어울리지가 않는거같은데..지우는게 나을꺼같아요
  15. 00:46:754 (4) - 여기부터 00:54:968 (8) - 여기까지 뉴콤이 엉망인데 고쳐주세요 ㅜㅜ (00:46:754 (4) - 여기가 뉴콤이 새로 시작되어야 할 부분이고 그 뒷부분도 여기에 맞춰서 고쳐주세요)
  16. 00:48:897 (1,2) - 개인적으로 여기의 1/1은 안어울린다고 생각해요
  17. 00:50:504 (1,2) - 이건 지우는게 앞의 박자랑 매치가 될꺼에요
  18. 00:54:879 (7) - 사실 이것도 지우는게 나을꺼같아요(이 뒤론 3연타 언급은 안할게요..판단이 애매해서,,)
  19. 00:55:326 (1) - 얘가 실제로 보컬을 따라갔기 때문에 00:55:861 (2,3) - 이것도 보컬을 따라가는게 더 어울릴꺼에요
  20. 00:58:272 (1,1) - 하드에서 스핀뒤에 1/4를 넣으면 굉장히 어려울꺼에요. 하드유저들을 배려해서라도 자비를..
  21. 키아이파트도 뉴콤이 엉망인부분이 많은데 확인해주세요
  22. 01:30:325 (8) - 아마 더 나은 리듬으로 고치실수 있을꺼에요
    1/4가 어울리는부분에는 1/2가 들어가고 1/2가 어울리는부분에는 1/4가 들어간 부분이 많아서 아쉽네요..
    좀 더 다양한 리듬을 만들수있는부분에 1/2슬라가 들어간 부분이나..뉴콤이 일관성이 없는것같아요



That's all. GL~
Good song! ~


xxdeathx wrote:

Hello, from my queue.

I always thought this song was by StylipS as a group, didn't know they had versions with individual singers o.o

Sounds exactly like the same singer as Baby Sweet Berry Love


[Hard]
  1. 00:32:111 (2,3) - check blanket. middle is too far and end points are too close.
  2. 00:36:754 (1) - should use 1/2 repeat slider so you don't avoid vocal at 00:36:933
  3. 00:39:611 (6) - 01:08:540 (2) - ^
  4. 00:58:272 (1,1) - object 1/4 tick after spinner is way too soon, instant unrank ;w; give at least 1 beat before spinner

It's nice to see what top players come up with when trying to map, very interesting~
I hope you try to get this ranked!
.
osu file format v13

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Artist:Ogura Yui
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Creator:Nara
Version:KRN's Hard
Source:Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A
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328,188,83182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,256,83361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,256,83450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,256,83540,2,0,L|300:280,1,80
224,240,83897,6,0,P|176:228|76:296,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,360,84432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,348,84611,2,0,B|200:316|200:316|224:256|164:228,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,204,85147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,148,85325,2,0,L|252:132,1,80
328,168,85682,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,168,85772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,168,85861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,92,86040,6,0,L|356:272,1,160,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,308,86575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,348,86754,2,0,P|417:342|452:324,1,80
384,268,87111,2,0,P|428:248|448:220,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,136,87468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,92,87647,2,0,P|324:76|232:128,2,160,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,136,88540,6,0,P|428:180|388:192,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,256,88897,2,0,P|408:276|368:272,1,80
412,360,89254,2,0,P|348:356|324:336,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,288,89611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,288,89700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,288,89790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,352,89968,2,0,L|188:388,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,288,90325,2,0,P|288:240|280:204,1,80
348,148,90682,2,0,L|436:112,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,91040,12,0,96754,0:0:0:0:

뉴콤은 이따 ..저녁에 수시원서 넣고나서 바로 할게요
Topic Starter
Nara

xxdeathx wrote:

Hello, from my queue.

I always thought this song was by StylipS as a group, didn't know they had versions with individual singers o.o

Sounds exactly like the same singer as Baby Sweet Berry Love

[General]
  1. You have 2 "stylips" in tags, remove one
  2. Unicode artist conflicts
  3. Some people don't like negative offsets so maybe use 00:01:040 as your offset.
[Easy]
  1. check AIMod for unsnapped objects
  2. 00:00:683 (1,2) - suggest this rhythm to minimize 3/2 gaps
Nice diff, very creative!

[Normal]
Hey didn't you and karen and habi make that non non biyori OP map
  1. check AIMod for unsnapped objects
  2. 00:11:040 (3) - since you're clapping in this section, it would sound weird that you don't have a clap at 00:11:397. suggest 1/1 repeat slider so you can have the clap.
  3. 00:52:468 (1) - 01:03:897 (1,4) - ^
  4. 01:09:611 (1) - ^ also vocal on the middle tick
  5. 00:55:326 - why stop clapping for this part?
  6. 00:58:182 (1) - i don't like this 3/2 repeat slider, since all the important notes of the song are on the white ticks. highly recommend map 1/1 for this part.
[Hard]
  1. 00:32:111 (2,3) - check blanket. middle is too far and end points are too close.
  2. 00:36:754 (1) - should use 1/2 repeat slider so you don't avoid vocal at 00:36:933
  3. 00:39:611 (6) - 01:08:540 (2) - ^
  4. 00:58:272 (1,1) - object 1/4 tick after spinner is way too soon, instant unrank ;w; give at least 1 beat before spinner
[Insane]
  1. Unsnapped objects AImod
  2. 00:01:575 (7) - move to 136, 188 for better blanket
  3. 00:06:576 (4) - move to 480, 92 so the pattern 00:06:040 (1,2,3,4) - looks cleaner
  4. 00:17:826 (1) - end slider at 00:18:004 so you don't ignore vocals. there is nothing on the 3/4 blue tick anyways
  5. 00:29:611 (1) - suggest delete and put circle at 00:29:790 so the 00:29:790 (7,8,9) - which are similiar vocals have similar objects (all circles). for 00:29:611 either extend previous slider or put circle here. this also helps avoid 3/4 slider
  6. 00:30:325 (10) - blanket is a little off, move end slider point to 340, 180
  7. 00:42:647 (2) - move middle slider point to 408, 28 for blanket
  8. 00:43:182 (3,4,5) - a bigger jump would be good at 00:42:647 (2,3) - because the vocal at (3) is strong. but you don't need to go back and forth between 00:43:182 (3,4,5) - so much because there aren't that many vocals. only (5) and (3) need to be jumps. I suggest stacking 00:43:183 (3,4) - and 00:43:540 (5,1) - like this:
  9. 00:43:718 (1) - not good to end slider on a vocal/long white tick. suggest two 1/2 circles here.
  10. 00:51:040 (1) - middle point to 240, 280 for blanket
  11. 00:49:432 (7) - suggest move around here for much better flow
  12. 00:53:718 (6) - move to 316, 192 for better blanket
  13. 00:55:147 (7) - same thing as 00:43:718 (1)
  14. 01:23:897 (1) - blanket: middle point to 184, 276 and end point to 236, 192
  15. 01:26:040 (5,6,7) - sliders should not end on white ticks. should use this rhythm:
Diff plays pretty nicely but a lot of these sort of things can be improved. Hope this mod helps.

It's nice to see what top players come up with when trying to map, very interesting~
I hope you try to get this ranked!

thanks!! :)
hehe
fun insane mod #modreq

[insane]aimod: http://puu.sh/bCIZv/b925105731.png
hp 7
try to keep stream spacing the same DS (0.4), or else it look weird. like 00:22:825 (3,4,5,6,7) and 00:15:593 (2,3,4,5,6,1) much different.

00:05:325 (7,1) - spacing not good. should put further or stack on sldierend, easier to read.
00:11:040 (1) - this is ugly slider.. :(
00:40:682 (6,7) - try not to direct stack for 1/4, overlap a little.
00:41:754 (4,5) - ^
00:46:040 (6,1,2) - space more also, looks messy
00:46:040 (6,1,2) - stream starts here? ^^
Topic Starter
Nara

handsome wrote:

fun insane mod #modreq

[insane]aimod: http://puu.sh/bCIZv/b925105731.png
hp 7
try to keep stream spacing the same DS (0.4), or else it look weird. like 00:22:825 (3,4,5,6,7) and 00:15:593 (2,3,4,5,6,1) much different.

00:05:325 (7,1) - spacing not good. should put further or stack on sldierend, easier to read.
00:11:040 (1) - this is ugly slider.. :(
00:40:682 (6,7) - try not to direct stack for 1/4, overlap a little.
00:41:754 (4,5) - ^
00:46:040 (6,1,2) - space more also, looks messy
00:46:040 (6,1,2) - stream starts here? ^^
thanks to mod~ :)
Kawashiro
#modreq 보고 왔습니다~!

Zzz's Normal

00:06:040 ~ 00:06:397 슬라이더 하나 추가해보세요
00:16:397 (2) 슬라이더 시작부분에 서클 노트를 하나 두고 00:16:754 여기서부터 끝부분까지 슬라이더를 넣어보세요
00:26:040 (5) 이 슬라이더 대신 슬라이더 시작부분과 끝부분에 서클 노트를 넣는게 더 잘 맞네요
01:00:683 여기도 서클 노트 하나 추가해보세요
01:30:861 이 스피너 끝부분을 01:36:754 여기로 옮겨보세요

KRN's Hard

00:31:219 (4) 여기 뉴콤보 넣어주시고 00:31:754 (1) 여기 뉴콤보를 빼주세요
00:59:611 (1,2) 슬라이더 말고 서클 4개 넣는게 더 재밌겠네요
01:10:683 (1) 뉴콤보 빼주세요

Insane

00:00:683 힛사를 20% 정도로 줄이는게 노래랑 어울리네요
00:17:469 ~ 00:17:647 슬라이더 하나 추가해보세요
00:17:826 (1) 이 슬라이더를 시계 반대방향으로 20도 정도 돌려서 배치하는게 더 이쁠것 같네요
00:31:040 (1) 뉴콤보 빼보세요
00:46:308 (1) ↑
00:51:397 (2) 1번 슬라이더와 대칭되게 만드는게 좋을것 같네요
01:00:326 (9) 여기 뉴콤보 넣고 01:01:040 (1) 여기를 빼보세요
01:17:826 컨트롤 + G 눌러주는게 더 흐름상으로 좋은거 같네요
01:23:183 ~ 01:23:361 슬라이더 하나 추가해보세요
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