01:34 smallboat: hi 兔兔
01:34 - Tu -: hi
01:35 smallboat: 神觸求試玩個譜
01:35 - Tu -: @@@@@@@@@@@
01:36 - Tu -: 可以呀不過我不觸呀= =
01:36 *smallboat is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/442221 Nakagawa Shouko - Sora-iro Days (TV Size)]
01:36 - Tu -: @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
01:36 - Tu -: 愛曲
01:36 - Tu -: <3中川
01:36 smallboat: 030
01:37 smallboat: 是喔
01:37 smallboat: 順便求+fav? 诶
01:37 - Tu -: 竟然沒有注意到你map
01:37 - Tu -: @@@@@@@@@@
01:37 smallboat: 反正我沒存在感ww
01:40 - Tu -: 這神map呀
01:40 smallboat: 我打都fail
01:41 - Tu -: unrank對我來說比較容易FC qwq
01:41 smallboat: 唔
01:43 smallboat: 神處無疑
01:43 - Tu -: 00:49:100 (2) -
01:43 - Tu -: 這個@@
01:43 - Tu -: 不好看
01:44 smallboat: 030
01:44 smallboat: ins?
01:45 - Tu -: 什麼是ins QQ
01:45 smallboat: insane
01:46 - Tu -: hard@@
01:46 - Tu -: 包一下
01:46 smallboat: 哦 好 考慮一下
01:47 - Tu -: 不用考慮了 wwww
01:47 - Tu -: 直接包丟:D
01:48 smallboat: 呵呵
01:50 smallboat: 低難度作的不好w
01:52 - Tu -: 測試中w
01:52 smallboat: ww
01:54 - Tu -: easy 1.49star wwww
01:54 - Tu -: 剛剛好
01:55 - Tu -: normal成覺感有點難
01:55 - Tu -: 節奏做的有點不好打
01:56 smallboat: ww
01:57 smallboat: nm跟人聲
01:59 - Tu -: 說到做圖
01:59 smallboat: ?
01:59 - Tu -: 我又忘了mod zzh和regraz的圖
01:59 - Tu -: DDDDDDDDD::::::::::
01:59 smallboat: lol
01:59 - Tu -: 剛記起
01:59 smallboat: 我記得之前好像也有船你一封pm
01:59 - Tu -: 嗯
01:59 - Tu -: app
01:59 smallboat: 恩現在沒關係
02:00 - Tu -: 那個太長ww
02:00 smallboat: 沒什麼問題了那張 (應該
02:00 - Tu -: 你沒有追我 所以我就沒做mod了wwwwww
02:00 smallboat: 哦哦
02:01 smallboat: 那這張tv看看要不要隨便寫寫mod下? (+上面的irc
02:02 - Tu -: test play不知能不能有一個kd呢
02:02 - Tu -: 我mod一下normal吧
02:02 - Tu -: 整張圖問題不大呀
02:02 smallboat: 沒被發現就好?
02:06 smallboat: 缺rank標準 的12sp
02:07 - Tu -: 什麼是12sp@@
02:07 smallboat: 上ˋ面
02:07 smallboat: 的sp
02:07 smallboat: 現在+8
02:07 smallboat: 要12才能rank
02:07 - Tu -: O
02:08 - Tu -: 00:05:997 (1,2) -
02:08 - Tu -: normal
02:09 - Tu -: 改成這樣http://puu.sh/9QXYC.jpg
02:09 - Tu -: 好聽點?
02:10 smallboat: ok這也考慮看看
02:10 smallboat: 我抉擇一下w
02:10 - Tu -: 00:21:169 (1) - http://puu.sh/9QY6E.jpg
02:11 smallboat: 恩這個好等下改
02:12 - Tu -: 00:25:997 (4) - 這個要不換做reverse slider
02:13 smallboat: 恩..想簡單點這就不換了
02:13 - Tu -: ok
02:14 - Tu -: 00:57:548 (2,3,4) - 就個移過左面點
02:14 smallboat: 左邊一點? 好 再看看
02:14 - Tu -: 00:56:859 (7,1) - 移下一點
02:15 smallboat: 好
02:15 - Tu -: 因為停了一個拍
02:15 smallboat: 好
02:16 - Tu -: 01:04:617 (5,6) - 這兩個連去下一個combo?
02:17 smallboat: 好像也可以..那麼我再看看
02:19 - Tu -: 01:19:445 (1,2) - 這裡聽上去有點單調
02:19 - Tu -: 有沒有@@
02:20 smallboat: 所以1改1/2?
02:21 - Tu -: 試一下吧ww
02:22 - Tu -: 媽
02:22 - Tu -: 手殘按到"X"
02:23 - Tu -: irc record靠你了

Mao wrote:

I don't have much time so I'm just going to give you a general check of the Insane for now. Okay,nevermind.

1. Unrankable Issue/Highly Suggested
2. Comment/Minor

Insane

1. My Main Concern with this Diff is the Hitsounding. The Volume feels inconsistent since you change it drastically for some patterns even though the Music barely changes. (e.g. 00:12:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) Also some patterns feel kinda bland as there are many strong drum-ish sounds in the music that are just ignored like the ones at 00:28:501 (1,2,3,4) - (00:28:501 - and 00:28:846 - ) for example. After that almost nonexistent hitsounding you suddenly start to spam extremely loud claps at 00:30:570 (2,3,4) - which feels so wrong. Thanks hitsound suggestion,have change some here.
2. This might be just me but the S:C1 Clap is way too loud imo. It sounds kinda overdone to my ears. Especially these combinations with whistles in the Kiai (e.g. 00:51:432 (2) - ) need to be removed ;_; ^
3. 00:04:880 (1,2) - I'd personally go for a bigger gap between these two as they are completely different snaps and so close to each other so that a faster movement after the fast one to have a better transition would be nicer imo. Example Okay,then keep a bit gap for these sliders here.
4. 00:24:363 (1,2) - Meh, I'd rather go for something like the previous two ones. This just simply feels inconsistent with them since the cymbals are basically still the same instruments just playing another notes which makes the different hitnormal feel weird to me. Change S:C1 hitsound here,fixed.
5. 00:26:259 (1) - /Comment/ - This might me my personal prference on this but the stream would flow much smoother into this if you'd place it so that it's complemented by the stream's curve like this. Sure, move the 00:26:259 (1) keep the curve here :3
6. 00:28:156 (3,4,1) - I don't really understand your spacing here to be honest as you've used a higher spacing from 3 to 1 even though the note at 4 is stronger imo. My personal preference would be to even out the Spacing since the difference isn't really that or to change the spacing to the vice-versa. Sure,move a bit here.
7. 00:37:121 (2) - Perhaps you can try to place this somewhere around 115|105 in order to get the Distance to 00:37:294 (1) - higher in order to emphasize this note a bit better. Sure, move to (112|97) here.
8. 00:52:294 (1) - Stop overlapping my Score ;_; Forgot notice this placement x_x ,fixed.
9. 01:08:846 (5) - Why is this so quiet? The sound in the music doesn't seem less loud than the ones before but even stronger or at least the same as the previous ones. Try to use 60% Vol. here as well. Because if turn up volume for this note,this finish hitsound will have a bit noisy and loud,then just follow suggestion add +10% volume here.
10. 01:09:190 (1) - Is the low volume intentional here? The Music sounds pretty much the same as before which makes this low volume feel out of place. Please consider to use 60~70% Volume here as well. You say right, fixed this volume :3

16:19 smallboat: 駿媽 我記得你ez跟nm這些都做的還不錯  能幫看一下ez跟nm的節奏有沒有什麼問題嗎?
16:42 IamKwaN: hao
16:45 *smallboat is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/442462 Nakagawa Shouko - Sorairo Days]
16:45 smallboat: BAT雖然說不強制找摸  但想在改善些
16:46 IamKwaN: en
16:47 IamKwaN: 你這
16:47 IamKwaN: 圖找了那個BAT
16:48 smallboat: 恩? 對
16:48 IamKwaN: 哪個*
16:48 smallboat: Cheery blossm
16:48 IamKwaN: 慘了
16:48 IamKwaN: 他肯定噴你polarity
16:48 *IamKwaN is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/442222 Nakagawa Shouko - Sorairo Days [Normal]]
16:48 smallboat: .
16:48 smallboat: 早噴了
16:49 IamKwaN: 哈哈哈哈
16:49 smallboat: 2333.
16:49 smallboat: 咦不先看ez?
16:50 IamKwaN: 因為你跟vocal
16:51 IamKwaN: hitsounds好空
16:51 smallboat: 原來是這樣.
16:52 IamKwaN: 00:15:225 (1) - unsnapped
16:52 IamKwaN: 其實低難度我建議跟樂器
16:52 smallboat: 綠線和位置都沒有呢?
16:52 smallboat: 恩
16:53 smallboat: 這邊看這個點沒有問題
16:53 IamKwaN: 滑條尾?
16:54 IamKwaN: http://puu.sh/bx1oz/819d0d101d.jpg
16:54 smallboat: 哦你在看easy 我還以為你看nm
16:54 IamKwaN: EZ
16:54 smallboat: fixed
16:54 IamKwaN: 節奏的話沒啥 因為你跟vocal
16:54 smallboat: 好
16:54 IamKwaN: 但其實你有點ZZH
16:55 smallboat: orz
16:55 IamKwaN: 00:27:294 (2,3) - 不是全部跟vocal
16:55 IamKwaN: 有時會轉換
16:55 smallboat: 稍微一點
16:55 smallboat: 好
16:55 smallboat: 恩我也沒像他會一直跟
16:55 IamKwaN: 他就是隨機轉換
16:56 smallboat: 恩0.0
16:56 IamKwaN: 0.0服了
16:56 smallboat: 剛剛那個2 3你會怎樣改呢(?
16:57 smallboat: 2這樣聽好像移到前面尾端紅線  然後3移到 00:28:156 頭?
16:59 IamKwaN: lol現在這樣就好
17:00 IamKwaN: 00:27:294 - 是樂器開始
17:00 smallboat: o_o好
17:00 IamKwaN: 恩
17:07 smallboat: nm沒什麼問題?
17:08 IamKwaN: 等一下
17:08 smallboat: ok
17:09 IamKwaN: 00:11:087 (1) - 這個好坑
17:10 smallboat: 那 減去一個reverse能否?
17:10 IamKwaN: 好
17:10 smallboat: fixed
17:10 IamKwaN: 00:41:604 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得這段的節奏需要簡化一下
17:11 IamKwaN: 連續8個1/2物件
17:11 smallboat: 說的也堆
17:11 IamKwaN: 00:47:984 (1) - 這個NC是幹嘛的
17:12 smallboat: 好像不小心加到
17:12 smallboat: fixed
17:14 smallboat: 00:42:639 (7,2) - 剛剛那段消去了這兩個note  就這樣
17:14 IamKwaN: 好
17:15 IamKwaN: 01:21:432 (1) - 換成長滑條?
17:16 smallboat: 聽起來這好像前面那個一樣
17:16 IamKwaN: 接近完結 可以改變點排版
17:16 IamKwaN: 是阿
17:16 smallboat: 那就換成長的 fixed
17:16 IamKwaN: 也可以減少一個reversed
17:16 IamKwaN: 你喜歡
17:16 smallboat: 恩那就長的再減reverse ok
17:18 IamKwaN: EZ可以
17:18 smallboat: 好
17:18 smallboat: 駿媽能不能把這irc貼在那兒?
17:18 IamKwaN: 你要sp嗎?

Cherry Blossom wrote:

I'm free and here now ;w;

General

1. bg2.jpeg 's dimension is 1279*767, You should resize it or take another BG. Although the size have a bit error,but looks fine,this isn't effect the rules :3 (Btw,I can't find the same size for this BG in google internet and forum x_x")

Easy

1. 00:15:225 (1) - i guess this slider is unsnapped, you should fix it. Fixed.
2. 00:23:328 (4,5) - i don't really recommend to make this, i mean, this looks really extreme when playing, for a beginner, so it should be better if you stack these objects. Fixed.
3. 00:30:053 (2,3,1) - the movement here could be improved, you can move 00:31:087 (3) - a bit downward for a better and smoother movement, seems more natural to play. Fixed.
4. 00:40:397 (2,3) - the movement could be better if you move this slider 00:41:259 (3) - to the center, so 256|240, the shape will look better because it will be perfectly circular, but don't forget to move next objects if you apply this suggestion. Fixed.
5. 00:52:294 (2,3,2) - The hitsounding pattern could be found kinda messy by people, Plus, yes it looks. Since you are following vocals and you didnt use any claps for the first pattern, i recommend to remove these claps. Or, you could make the same thing as you did 00:59:018 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - concerning clap placement. Good suggestion,I do a slider for head is 00:50:053 , and end is 00:50:742 with the same part (01:01:087 (4)) , and 00:56:087 (1) this end reduce to 00:56:259 , but isn't add clap ,is finish here. And I removed the 00:59:363 (1,2,3) 's clap make keep consistent here,done.
   So for the first pattern, you should make these ticks audible, with a clap : 00:50:053 - 00:50:742 - 00:56:259 -
6. 01:10:053 (4,1) - unstack these objects, it could be kinda confusing with 01:12:811 (2,3) - since you didnt stack anything before. Fixed.
   
   Not bad for an easy, more or less well mapped. Okay.
   This diff could be improved more, i saw some awkward things i mentionned above. Perhaps I will change a bit for this.

Normal

1. 00:08:501 - Since you followed guitar before, it looks more intuitive to play this note on this tick where you can hear guitar which sounds strong. Right,fixed.
2. 01:18:846 - same as ^ ^
3. 00:22:639 (5,6) - it could be better if you stack these circles, because it is more readable and handleable when playing. And also, you stacked all double 1/2 circles, so it will also make things consistent for this part which more or less sounds calm. Okay,then just stack these notes in the same placement,nice,fixed.
4. 00:36:604 (1,2,3,4) - this shape could be improved for a better movement, it is not really well done, so try this instead (i also moved slider's tail) Okay,move a bit.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   This normal contains dense patterns which are a bit extreme for traditional Normal players. Yes, this normal is harder than a traditional one, 1/2s were used too much for my taste, it could be better if you avoid some 1/2 to give fresh air, because patterns like this 00:33:673 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - could asphyxy. Okay,indedd have a bit hard,perhaps I will apply ur suggestion in my next map :3
   Nice diff anyway. Thanks~ !

Hard

1. 00:07:984 (5) - it could be better if you add 2 circles instead of this slider it will more accentuate the guitar, and gives more impressions when playing. Added.
2. 01:18:328 (5) - same as ^ ^
3. 00:29:018 (1,2,3) - DS looks kinda messy here, you see that they are not the same (1.10 and 1.20), so it should be better if there is a constant DS here. Fixed the DS.
4. 00:33:673 (3,4) - to make things more consistent here, you should stack these circles as you did for 00:28:156 (3,4) - Okay fixed.
5. 00:39:880 (5,1,2,3) - same as i said above about spacing, it looks kinda messy here, and it should be better if there is an equal distance between 00:39:880 (5,1,3) - Fixed the DS.
6. 00:55:742 (3,4,5,1) - flow could be more improved here, you could make a curved shape for a smoother movement, just see : Fixed the curve.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   This looks fine, you can improve things like aesthetics but it is enough on this diff.
   There is jumps which are more or less used sparingly, so it is a good point, for a Hard diff. Okay :3

Insane

1. 00:34:018 (5,6,7,8,9) - i don't really think this stream is suitable here, i don't hear 5 sounds in a row, i rather hear something which sounds like this Fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:43:328 (4,5,6) - seems uncomfortable to play, the flow is a bit broken here because of the slider you used imo, it should be better if you make something like this instead Fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:51:604 (3,4,5) - just minnor, it should be better if there is a equal distance between 00:51:432 (2,3,4,5,6) - , you see that the distance between 00:51:432 (2,3) - and 00:51:777 (5,6) - are not the same. Right,fixed.
4. 00:55:570 (6) - same as ^ Fixed a bit DS.
   
   Symmetries , the only "problem" i can mention is that symmetries play a bit forced because they are really distant from each other. And flow could be hurt if you don't use them sparingly.
   But cool diff anyway. Okay,thanks :3

Nice set, Normal could be a bit undermapped for the sake of diff spread. Will discuss with friends (Good at making ez & nm diff mapper)
Call me back when you want, you can find more mods. Esitimate 1~2 days.
And make sure the metadata is correct. Okay.
I'll leave that star. o/ Wa,thanks > <

Thanks CB ~ o/ !