hi there.
from #modreqs
just some
suggestions (!)
[Easy]
01:43:625 (1) - to me it sounds better when you end the spinner at 01:45:241 - or even 01:45:010 -
02:31:164 - something is missing here, see 02:38:548 (4)
02:36:241 (2) - transform this into a slider so 02:36:702 - doesn't feel weird
02:57:471 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i guess i get why you added all those claps, but imo it's unfitting
03:48:241 (4) - put a finish sound here and remove the one from 03:49:164 (1) -
04:24:241 (1,2,3,1) - a spinner would do well here (remember, just a suggestion)
[Normal]
00:44:548 (1) - bend that upwards for playflow and beauty ( 02:13:163 (1) - bend that downwards)
00:51:010 (5) - circle instead of slider?
00:57:702 (1,2,3) - chain is ok but you could make it more beautiful
03:08:087 (6) - why is there a circle while you don't fill places like 02:44:317 - or 02:46:164 - :c
03:55:625 (2) - this whole pattern is a little bit hard for a normal diff, atleast get rid of the hiding sliderend
04:00:933 (2) - slider should start at 04:01:164 - and a circle at 04:00:933 -
[Hard]
00:43:394 (1,1) - i don't get it, neither the melody nor the lyrics allow that
00:58:164 (1,1) - here the melody and the pattern actually go together somehow, but i still don't like that space
02:12:010 (1,1) - ^ (when i saw that this pattern repeats itself over and over again throughout the beatmap, i gotta admit that players will not be confused when they understood the pattern once, so i will not continue pointing out the spacing issue at these parts. if you change it or not is your choice.)
01:05:317 (3) - you could shape that slider so it looks more like the continuation of 01:04:856 (2) - that slider (see the pic in <Normal>, just looks a bit better and isn't hard to fix)
01:43:625 - spinner could start here, really just a matter of taste
02:01:625 (5,1) - i would stack that o.o
02:09:010 (6,1,2) - weird overlap and directions of the sliders
02:16:394 (6,1) - that really tiny spacing between objects that are far apart in time might be fitting in some situations, i know, but imo not here. Generally not in Hard diffs.
03:52:394 (2,1) - ^
03:40:856 (3,4,1) - in this case i like the tiny spacing c:
04:00:702 (3,4) - spacing
04:01:856 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - very brave pattern for Hard, but i like it!
04:06:702 (5,1) - tiny space plus kickslider are unfitting
Sorry, i didn't pay too much attention to hitsounding in the Hard diff, but i really like your Hard. Good luck with your map!