1. Fycho's Hard (3.43 stars, 605 notes)
2. Normal (1.95 stars, 340 notes)
3. Tsubasa (4.9 stars, 911 notes)

guineaQ wrote:

I-I didn't throw a star because Fycho is doing hard diff for this b-baka!

Kibbleru wrote:

guineaQ wrote:

I-I didn't throw a star because Fycho is doing hard diff for this b-baka!

fycho <3

Neil Watts wrote:

Hi !
"Random" mod

Kuribayashi Minami - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line
I think all diffs of this map needs a drum hitsound, like this one, to every upbeat. i have one xD

-Normal-
- 02:13:345 (4) - move this slider to the previous red tick for these i'm not really mapping the vocals. listen to the drums and harmony line
- 02:14:012 (1) - ^ and make it longer
- 02:29:928 - try this http://puu.sh/9PLuH/a9b5ad24f9.png but then i'd be missing a strong sound
- 02:30:512 (2,3) - too near what? o-o its distance snapped fine


-Insane-
- 02:03:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - hm, to avoid? hm yeah i know its a bit hard to play but i think it fits the song and it works . besides, its an insane xD
- 04:10:012 (1) - imaginatioooon imaagginnattioonnn!
I can't really mod this insane diff, maybe because I haven't enough experience, but I think your jumps are often random, try to replace them with some known shapes (squares, triangles, circles, stars,...) hm i don't really like using any of those "known shapes" they're just too... boring to me. the jumps should play fine though because of the high approach rate

Please take the time to comment my mod if you can, I need to improve myself in modding. Thanks!

Good luck !

No Dap wrote:

15:44 No Dap: wow your normal is so good

Kinshara wrote:

lol m4m

hopefully this helps ;_;

General

Normal

00:16:012 (4) - this slider is weird because it doesn't really have any instrumental music to back it up like the previous ones. drums o-o
00:18:678 (4) - same here; also you are mapping instruments at one instance and drums at another...that may be confusing yeah but the insturment is just a held note so what else should i map lol.
00:33:178 (2,3) - this sort of breaks flow they're kinda like. circular flow
01:02:012 (1,2) - fix flow
01:08:512 (3,4) - ^
02:58:678 - consider ending spinner here i want some more time for newbs to react
03:27:345 (1) - passive slider, ne? on purpose. gives a nice effect

Insane

00:09:849 (1) - fix flow same as normal
00:15:682 (1) - ^
03:43:349 (1) - ^
03:51:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - looking over the map, some of your jumps don't make sense and don't fit the music o: Like over here, 2, 4, 5 shouldn't really be jumps imo. i kinda just like >_> spam jumps soo..
04:09:349 - you can add some reverse sliders over here to fit the music mm nah i may or may not change my mind tho

Ok, sorry I have to go! Sorry for shitty mod q.q

Frostings wrote:

[Insaneuuuuuuuuuuu]

OD -1 ... your map contains streams that are waaaay too hard od 7.5

Your guitar solo is a huuuuuge spike in difficulty, maybe try to make it less intensive it gets easier imo owo but idk

00:10:516 (2,1) - nice flow. Maybe either move (2) to the right to line it up, or unstack (1) and move it to the left no change
00:15:182 (6,1) - swap NC (like this 00:17:849 (1,3) - )
00:16:349 (3,1) - blankets
00:27:682 (2) - why not put this on the path of (1) so that it flows (square pattern isn't even noticeable in testplay because your AR is so high) idk this is like my style or something so didnt change any of these :/
00:46:682 (2) - NC consistency with 01:53:349 (1) - deleted the latter NC
01:11:182 (6,1) - NC swap
02:04:682 (1,2) - just a suggestion, the back-and-forth thing is ok, but maybe make these different for emphasis, otherwise they get muddled with the rest of the combo nice
02:17:016 (2) - move down a little to flow with (1) slider
02:20:682 (1,2) - better blanket (maybe move (2) one or two grids right)
02:39:016 (4) - move left for flow with (3) slider
02:44:516 - this section i don't know
03:23:682 (3,5) - this overlap actually looks bad, i suggest move (5) to the right so they're not touching... it doesn't ruin the flow or change the playing at alli like it though. adjusted it a bit hopefully looks a bit better now?
03:25:349 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - i think this stream starts too early. Maybe delete (4) i don't think so owo
03:42:682 (2,1) - i think it'll look better if you blanket, but your choice nah intended
04:04:682 (1,4) - better blanket o3o
04:10:016 (1) - wow jonathangel reported lol


[Normallllll]

slidertick rate 1? It's over 1000 combo for a normal....... i'd like to keep int consistent for now... if a bat mentions, ill change

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Alright, here's your mod requested trough #modreqs

[Insane]

00:46:099 (2) - Maybe this slider should be converted into a stream....
01:10:016 (1) - This isn't stacked on 01:08:849 (1) . Is it intentional?
03:55:016 (5,1) - These aren't stacked properly
04:10:016 (1) - You're a genius, man

[Fycho's Hard]

01:13:182 (2) and 01:14:016 (1) aren't stacked properly
01:13:349 (3) and 01:14:682 (2) Same ^
01:17:016 (2) and 01:17:682 (4) Same ^
02:13:016 (2) and 02:14:016 (1) Same ^
02:24:349 (4) and 02:25:016 (2) Same ^
02:36:349 (3) and 02:37:182 (3) Same ^
03:23:682 (2) and 03:24:349 (4) Same ^
04:10:016 (1) - Tell me the truth: you did on purpose this awesomeness i think he followed me up on dis slider art stuff

[Normal]

02:31:349 (3,4) - Stack them properly
03:25:349 (4,1) - Same ^ (but they are far in the timeline, maybe that 0.01 difference doesn't matter at all)
04:10:016 (1) - Nuoooo, you ruined the awesomeness' chain xD (I don't really care: it was just a personal note xD) i tried to do something here x_x but i couldn't with this low ass SV and CS BUT if you do manage to find a nice shape or something please tell me and i'll use it!

I think I should explain all of those "stacks" xD bleh all these stacking errors are caused by an editor bug which unstacked them x.x it wouldn't be noticeable in game though, however due to stack leniency. thanks for the mod and star! but no changes sry
If all of those notes were to be more distant, both in timeline and playfield, I wouldn't bother pointing them out, but since it looks like you guys tried to put those notes on the same spot a wrote down everything it was subjected to this case.
Final note: I wonder why the hell not a single BAT it's around here...
Here, take one of my star : this song MUST be ranked

[-Sophie-] wrote:

[General]
A lot of your sliders are "odd" odd owo? hmm maybe xP
[Normal]
00:03:349 (1) - Sound odd sounds fine to me o-o
00:08:682 (1) - Make this shorter for these, i wanted to get the guitar or piano sound
00:19:349 (1) - ^
00:24:682 (1) - ^
00:56:682 - Spinner sounds off huh? why? i think it fits as its a gradual increase in intensity
01:14:682 (3) - Sounds off leading to the note #4 seems fine to me o-o
02:06:016 (1,2) - Overlapping these overlaps are fine, they're readable and they look nice c:
02:32:182 (5) - Dosen't lead well into 02:32:682 (1) its like. ah idk a rly tight circular flow thing
02:55:849 - Goes into the spinner hmm ill think about this a bit for now it seems fine though since at the start of the slider the spinner isn't there.. i dont think
03:09:849 - Remove note here it's quite strong to be removed
03:18:682 (2) - Too long
03:24:849 (3) - Maybe just 2 or 1 note would be fine instead of a slider a slider works tho x.x
03:31:516 (3) - Reverse arrow is off beat o-o its on a white tick and its at the start of the descending piano part or w/e
03:52:849 (3) - Overlapping
04:04:016 (4) - I don't know what to do with this, but it sounds off sounds fine to me x_x

[Insane]
00:06:016 - Ends too early yeah both these cases play on a piano thing
00:07:349 (1) - Confused on if this should be here?
Enjoy!

Gaia wrote:

Because senpai noticed me in his team queue and in my queue

[Normal]
tick rate 1? I just notice a bunch of slider ticks on those long ones lol.
00:10:849 (4) - curve to left instead of right? im not really a big fan of curcing something the same way twice. looks better to me if i cuve it the opposite way of the previous one. it doesn't flow badly anyways so i dont see a problem
00:19:349 (1) - curve up instead? ^
02:45:349 (4,1) - curve these 2 more? hmm they seem fine as it is o-o

QQ senpai's map too good no defects ty xD


[Insane]
Hmm o-o well i guess my shapes are quite weird but i quite like the overlaps and shapes. Triangles and squares etc are just so boring imo. random polygon jumps are nice . also about the DS, it doesn't really have to be perfectly DS'ed out. you should decide distance by how it play's/ feels rather than looking at the numbers. if its close enough the it should play well. I understand some of ur ctrl g is for better flow but i want to break flow for emphasis so they're intended :X

00:09:849 (1) - unnecessary overlap
00:15:682 (3) - ctrl + g
00:36:682 (1,2,3,4) - spread them to have more of a shape?
01:40:849 (1,2,3,1,2) - have same time interval yet different distances (why not make them all jumps lol.)
01:43:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make a better looking shape?
02:01:016 (2,2,2) - aren't stacked properly
02:09:516 (5,7) - Ctrl + G mmm i changed the shape SLIGHTLY idk lol
02:35:849 (2) - blanket?
02:41:349 (2) - ^
02:47:182 (1) - ^ these do blanket tho owo
03:07:682 (1,2) - looks off with the overlap
03:19:849 (3) - stack on 6? idk your shapes are weird to me lol
03:22:849 (6,7) - wider apart? (keeping distance constant)
03:35:682 (3) - (84, 272) to be more triangluar?
04:10:016 (1) - i slider broke on this so many times lol. no problem but just saying :p lol sorry x.x i like the shape tho ;w;
Much jump so excite wow

but yeah sry not many changes changes ;w

im picky as firetruck though so don't be discouraged lol.

I-I'll allow you to tell me the next time you want to spam msg my mom.. But don't get the wrong idea!! B-baka
I-it's not like I like your map or anything!! I-it's not like your jumps are fun or something Hmph!
I-I didn't get this star for just for you!! I-I just had too much!!
J-just take it, gosh!
so tsundere >w<
kawaii mutual pls

• 00:15:182 (3) - make this slider same as 00:14:016 (1) - for sym. its a bit uncomfortable.
  00:44:182 (2,3) - make (2) blanket (3)
  00:45:349 (4,1) - is this a jump? what distance you use here?
  00:58:516 - remove this inherit point, you dont use it. but there is more of them in other parts, find it yourself.
  02:31:349 (3,4) - a little unstacked, restack.

• 00:21:849 (1,3) - stack?
  00:52:682 (1,4) - ^, it looks a bad overlap to me.
  00:58:516 - same in normal diff
  02:18:682 (4,5) - make (5) smooth like (4) for sym.