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TERRA - DoLL (full version) [For Approval]
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First section:
BPM: 125
Offset: 563
Second Section:
BPM: 170
Offset: 20,873
These SHOULD be the only timing sections you'll need, including the ending. From my limited testing, the section at the end (beginning at 04:12:402) seems to work if you use 1/3 and 1/6.
BPM: 125
Offset: 563
Second Section:
BPM: 170
Offset: 20,873
These SHOULD be the only timing sections you'll need, including the ending. From my limited testing, the section at the end (beginning at 04:12:402) seems to work if you use 1/3 and 1/6.
done 
Download: TERRA - DoLL (full version) (ouranhshc) [x3ns0r's DoLL].osu
the background and minor SB:
Download: 11478 TERRA - DoLL (full version).zip
Download: TERRA - DoLL (full version) (ouranhshc) [x3ns0r's DoLL].osu
the background and minor SB:
Download: 11478 TERRA - DoLL (full version).zip
Finally done 
Change what you like etc. Also don't add me to tags or anything since I only helped out a little ~ sorry if some of it seems shabby I simply ran out of ideas
Download: TERRA - DoLL (full version) (ouranhshc) [OURAN].osu
Change what you like etc. Also don't add me to tags or anything since I only helped out a little ~ sorry if some of it seems shabby I simply ran out of ideas
Download: TERRA - DoLL (full version) (ouranhshc) [OURAN].osu
Hmm... (quick look)
[Crimmi's EZ]
I can barely hear the hitsounds >< Also, I don't really agree with the spinner at [01:04:635]...
[x3ns0r's DoLL]
Don't like the "flash" storyboarding... Also, some of the notes/sliders don't fit the song.
[OURAN]
Too many random spinners >,.,<
[Crimmi's EZ]
I can barely hear the hitsounds >< Also, I don't really agree with the spinner at [01:04:635]...
[x3ns0r's DoLL]
Don't like the "flash" storyboarding... Also, some of the notes/sliders don't fit the song.
[OURAN]
Too many random spinners >,.,<
UPDATE:Download: TERRA - DoLL (full version) (ouranhshc) [x3ns0r's DoLL].osu
[x3ns0r]
Turn Stack Leniency on Rarely Stack. < Makes the map more enjoyable to play. and some of your nice patterns plays nicer too =p
Ok, I noticed you really didn't give your sliders (most) any love. this is a shame, since it looks sloppy, no eye candy in this map. So, my first section of the mod I will point out sliders that need more love. That really stand out as ugly
00:27:931 (3) - Ugly Slider
00:31:460 (2) - Maybe make more round?
00:48:224 (2) - End/Start should be match
00:55:635 (9) - Ugly slider
01:10:281 (6) - < nice I notice some effort
02:06:749 (3) - Ugly slider
02:18:748 (8,9) - ^
03:13:804 (6) - ^
03:20:156 (4) - ^
03:22:627 (1) - ^
Ok enough of slider rage~ And I could probably have posted more, but these bother me the most. Apart from that I like the beatmap, has some pretty nice patterns.
00:48:047 (*) - Maybe add a hit circle?
00:59:164 (8) - delete? and repeat (7) once. ( sounds better IMO )
02:58:628 (2) - Should end on white tick(02:59:334), and add a Hit circle on 02:59:510
02:59:951 (4) - Should be on the white tick (03:00:040)
Also you forgot to set an Audio Preview point.
Thats about it.
In general, it has some interesting patterns, but how it looks now? rough? doesn't make it nice to play. Maybe if you fix that up, and put more work on the the sliders, this will be a an awesome diff.
[Ouran]
Since this is a going for approval, I cant see anything wrong with it. Good job
But you also forgot to set a Preview Point.
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Star
Edit:
[Crimmi's EX]
Audio Preview Point missing too.
Lower OD by 1 more maybe~
Turn Stack Leniency on Rarely Stack. < Makes the map more enjoyable to play. and some of your nice patterns plays nicer too =p
Ok, I noticed you really didn't give your sliders (most) any love. this is a shame, since it looks sloppy, no eye candy in this map. So, my first section of the mod I will point out sliders that need more love. That really stand out as ugly
00:27:931 (3) - Ugly Slider
00:31:460 (2) - Maybe make more round?
00:48:224 (2) - End/Start should be match
00:55:635 (9) - Ugly slider
01:10:281 (6) - < nice I notice some effort
02:06:749 (3) - Ugly slider
02:18:748 (8,9) - ^
03:13:804 (6) - ^
03:20:156 (4) - ^
03:22:627 (1) - ^
Ok enough of slider rage~ And I could probably have posted more, but these bother me the most. Apart from that I like the beatmap, has some pretty nice patterns.
00:48:047 (*) - Maybe add a hit circle?
00:59:164 (8) - delete? and repeat (7) once. ( sounds better IMO )
02:58:628 (2) - Should end on white tick(02:59:334), and add a Hit circle on 02:59:510
02:59:951 (4) - Should be on the white tick (03:00:040)
Also you forgot to set an Audio Preview point.
Thats about it.
In general, it has some interesting patterns, but how it looks now? rough? doesn't make it nice to play. Maybe if you fix that up, and put more work on the the sliders, this will be a an awesome diff.
[Ouran]
Since this is a going for approval, I cant see anything wrong with it. Good job
But you also forgot to set a Preview Point.
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Star
Edit:
[Crimmi's EX]
Audio Preview Point missing too.
Lower OD by 1 more maybe~
Hello ^u^
[General]
1) Source?
2) Tags?
3) The preview is not set. Set the preview point please.....
[Crimmi's EZ]
I use nazi mod to make interesting to see. Remember that!
00:38:519 (4) - Move 1 grid down
[x3ns0r's DoLL]
00:48:047 (x) - Add note here
00:54:929 (8) - Move forward to white tick and cut short this slider to 00:55:459
01:06:046 (1,2) - Add a finish hitsound
01:52:985 (4) - New combo
01:59:337 (3) - ^
02:03:925 (3) - ^
02:05:866 (1) - No new combo
02:55:716 (5) - Move forward to white tick and cut short to 02:56:157
Not bad....
STAR
[General]
1) Source?
2) Tags?
3) The preview is not set. Set the preview point please.....
[Crimmi's EZ]
I use nazi mod to make interesting to see. Remember that!
00:38:519 (4) - Move 1 grid down
[x3ns0r's DoLL]
00:48:047 (x) - Add note here
00:54:929 (8) - Move forward to white tick and cut short this slider to 00:55:459
01:06:046 (1,2) - Add a finish hitsound
01:52:985 (4) - New combo
01:59:337 (3) - ^
02:03:925 (3) - ^
02:05:866 (1) - No new combo
02:55:716 (5) - Move forward to white tick and cut short to 02:56:157
Not bad....
STAR
Cooool <3
That 1/6 part is so confusing at a first play xD I completely lost the rythm when I played it xD
*stars*
That 1/6 part is so confusing at a first play xD I completely lost the rythm when I played it xD
*stars*
apllied Teara's and Leorda's mods:Leorda wrote:
[x3ns0r's DoLL]
00:54:929 (8) - Move forward to white tick and cut short this slider to 00:55:459 < Doesn't sound good to me
Download: TERRA - DoLL (full version) (ouranhshc) [x3ns0r's DoLL].osu
Make tags the same on all diffs.
[crimmi]
Nothing (Didn't do nazi).
[x3ns0r]
00:29:696 (6) - This note sucks. It's out of the beat. Delete it.
00:30:048 (6) - If you did the previous advice, move this note back by 1/2.
00:36:754 (1) - Delete new combo.
00:40:283 (8,1) - Swap new combo.
01:00:047 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:07:458 (3) - New combo.
01:41:691 (1,2) - These sliders sound really weird. At least move them 1/2 forward (
01:52:102 (3) - Move 1/2 forward and make it 1/2 shorter.
01:54:749 (5) - Move 1/2 forward and delete the last repeat.
02:19:101 (9) - New combo.
02:21:924 (8) - Delete new combo.
03:31:097 (7) - New combo.
03:32:861 (1) - Delete new combo.
03:32:861 (1,4) - Swap new combo.
[ouran]
Nothing (Didn't do nazi).
Great.
[crimmi]
Nothing (Didn't do nazi).
[x3ns0r]
00:29:696 (6) - This note sucks. It's out of the beat. Delete it.
00:30:048 (6) - If you did the previous advice, move this note back by 1/2.
00:36:754 (1) - Delete new combo.
00:40:283 (8,1) - Swap new combo.
01:00:047 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:07:458 (3) - New combo.
01:41:691 (1,2) - These sliders sound really weird. At least move them 1/2 forward (
01:52:102 (3) - Move 1/2 forward and make it 1/2 shorter.
01:54:749 (5) - Move 1/2 forward and delete the last repeat.
02:19:101 (9) - New combo.
02:21:924 (8) - Delete new combo.
03:31:097 (7) - New combo.
03:32:861 (1) - Delete new combo.
03:32:861 (1,4) - Swap new combo.
[ouran]
Nothing (Didn't do nazi).
Great.
updated: Download: TERRA - DoLL (full version) (ouranhshc) [x3ns0r's Standard].osufartownik wrote:
[x3ns0r]
00:29:696 (6) - This note sucks. It's out of the beat. Delete it.
00:30:048 (6) - If you did the previous advice, move this note back by 1/2.
00:36:754 (1) - Delete new combo.
00:40:283 (8,1) - Swap new combo.
01:00:047 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:07:458 (3) - New combo.
01:41:691 (1,2) - These sliders sound really weird. At least move them 1/2 forward (
01:52:102 (3) - Move 1/2 forward and make it 1/2 shorter.
01:54:749 (5) - Move 1/2 forward and delete the last repeat.
02:19:101 (9) - New combo.
02:21:924 (8) - Delete new combo.
03:31:097 (7) - New combo.
03:32:861 (1) - Delete new combo.
03:32:861 (1,4) - Swap new combo.
Crimmi's Basic
Sounds quite fine!
x3ns0r's Standard
[General] Along the mode there are some spacing problems, like on 01:56:514 (1,2) or on 02:09:572 (1,2,3,4,5). Plus, some sections are less originals and repeated twice or more, just like on 02:09:572 (1,2,3,4,5). Try something more original!
02:12:748 (8,9) - move them 2 timing ticks forward
02:13:101 (spinner) - if you have applied the changes upper, move this spinner 2 timing ticks forward too, and shrink its lenght of 2 timing ticks
Ouran's Challenge
00:10:643 (5) - whistle this slider's end, and not this slider's start!
It looks like this map needs some overall hitsound check... (especially on x3ns0r's mode... finishes aren't enough! Try other sounds.)
Evan spacing on the three modes is improvable, but the thre mappers's work is enough to lend my star ;3
Sounds quite fine!
x3ns0r's Standard
[General] Along the mode there are some spacing problems, like on 01:56:514 (1,2) or on 02:09:572 (1,2,3,4,5). Plus, some sections are less originals and repeated twice or more, just like on 02:09:572 (1,2,3,4,5). Try something more original!
02:12:748 (8,9) - move them 2 timing ticks forward
02:13:101 (spinner) - if you have applied the changes upper, move this spinner 2 timing ticks forward too, and shrink its lenght of 2 timing ticks
Ouran's Challenge
00:10:643 (5) - whistle this slider's end, and not this slider's start!
It looks like this map needs some overall hitsound check... (especially on x3ns0r's mode... finishes aren't enough! Try other sounds.)
Evan spacing on the three modes is improvable, but the thre mappers's work is enough to lend my star ;3
[General]
Kinda needs a higher-res background.
Capitalize Full Version.
I'd strongly recommend using custom note colours; the current colours don't fit well with the background or the song.
The map is geometrically off by a lot. That's essentially the crux of what I have below, one or two grid adjustments for things that look weird. Anything that's not for geometry has been bolded.
[Ouran's Challenge]
Do you really need your name here? What's wrong with just "Challenge"?
00:01:523 (2) - Right a grid for symmetry and consistency.
00:04:403 (1) - Start point down 2 grids.
00:23:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why don't you center this combo?
00:30:578 (8) - Centre this note, replace 9,10,11 with a horizontal flip of 5,6,7.
01:05:961 - Move this timing section back 1/4 or 1/2 more.
01:48:755 (3,5,6) - Might as well stack these.
01:50:696 (3) - Up 2 grids.
01:54:402 (3) - Goes behind the scorebar.
02:00:402 (4) - A grid left to center between the sliders.
02:00:931 (6) - Remember: the playfield shift does not affect spinners. Thus, a centered note before or after a spinner will need to be lowered 2 grids.
02:03:578 (3) - Looks bad, hard to read. (notes partially behind sliders)
02:03:755 (4) - Left a grid.
02:09:755 (1,2) - Left a grid.
02:10:108 (3) - Up a grid.
02:14:520 (1,2,3,4,5) - 2 goes left a grid, 4 goes right a grid, then center it.
02:22:990 (3,4) - Down a grid.
02:34:461 (1) - Down a grid.
02:36:931 (2) - Repeat is concealed by hitburst until the last second, not good.
02:37:461 (3) - Up a grid.
02:38:873 (2) - Left a grid.
02:40:637 (1,2,3) - Left a grid.
02:42:225 (1) - Right a grid.
02:48:402 (1,2) - Same as before.
02:53:873 (1) - ^
03:05:167 (1) - Left a grid.
03:13:108 (7) - ^
03:14:167 (2,3) - Up until 2 is under 7.
03:28:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Pretty surprising.
03:31:284 (12) - Stack this and the upcoming 4.
03:39:049 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Weeeird zig-zag. Ignore 1,3,5 and look at 2,4,1's spacing. Yeaaah.
04:01:461 (1) - Same as before.
04:08:873 (1) - ^
04:11:696 (1) - ^
Still a nice map though, star~
Kinda needs a higher-res background.
Capitalize Full Version.
I'd strongly recommend using custom note colours; the current colours don't fit well with the background or the song.
The map is geometrically off by a lot. That's essentially the crux of what I have below, one or two grid adjustments for things that look weird. Anything that's not for geometry has been bolded.
[Ouran's Challenge]
Do you really need your name here?
What's wrong with just "Challenge"?00:01:523 (2) - Right a grid for symmetry and consistency.
00:04:403 (1) - Start point down 2 grids.
00:23:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why don't you center this combo?
00:30:578 (8) - Centre this note, replace 9,10,11 with a horizontal flip of 5,6,7.
01:05:961 - Move this timing section back 1/4 or 1/2 more.
01:48:755 (3,5,6) - Might as well stack these.
01:50:696 (3) - Up 2 grids.
01:54:402 (3) - Goes behind the scorebar.
02:00:402 (4) - A grid left to center between the sliders.
02:00:931 (6) - Remember: the playfield shift does not affect spinners. Thus, a centered note before or after a spinner will need to be lowered 2 grids.
02:03:578 (3) - Looks bad, hard to read. (notes partially behind sliders)
02:03:755 (4) - Left a grid.
02:09:755 (1,2) - Left a grid.
02:10:108 (3) - Up a grid.
02:14:520 (1,2,3,4,5) - 2 goes left a grid, 4 goes right a grid, then center it.
02:22:990 (3,4) - Down a grid.
02:34:461 (1) - Down a grid.
02:36:931 (2) - Repeat is concealed by hitburst until the last second, not good.
02:37:461 (3) - Up a grid.
02:38:873 (2) - Left a grid.
02:40:637 (1,2,3) - Left a grid.
02:42:225 (1) - Right a grid.
02:48:402 (1,2) - Same as before.
02:53:873 (1) - ^
03:05:167 (1) - Left a grid.
03:13:108 (7) - ^
03:14:167 (2,3) - Up until 2 is under 7.
03:28:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Pretty surprising.
03:31:284 (12) - Stack this and the upcoming 4.
03:39:049 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Weeeird zig-zag. Ignore 1,3,5 and look at 2,4,1's spacing. Yeaaah.
04:01:461 (1) - Same as before.
04:08:873 (1) - ^
04:11:696 (1) - ^
Still a nice map though, star~
First Offset: Good
First BPM: Good
Second Offset: -6 (20,873 -> 20,867)
Second BPM: Good
Third Offset: 252,396
Third BPM: 84.90
The only thing I had problems with is 03:28:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern.
It's way too confusing imho. Apart from that, good map.
First BPM: Good
Second Offset: -6 (20,873 -> 20,867)
Second BPM: Good
Third Offset: 252,396
Third BPM: 84.90
The only thing I had problems with is 03:28:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern.
It's way too confusing imho. Apart from that, good map.
00:14:003 (1) - End it at 00:20:003 will be better.
00:21:572 (1) - Too noise in this part . Volume 65% is better.
00:33:572 (1) - Volume 95%~100% here.
00:49:455 (7) - New combo.
00:56:867 (5) - ^
00:58:278 (5) - ^
01:12:396 (1) - 80% volume here.
01:13:102 (1) - 100% volume
03:58:278 (6) - Remove it and make the next spinner start at 03:58:278.
good map =w=
00:21:572 (1) - Too noise in this part . Volume 65% is better.
00:33:572 (1) - Volume 95%~100% here.
00:49:455 (7) - New combo.
00:56:867 (5) - ^
00:58:278 (5) - ^
01:12:396 (1) - 80% volume here.
01:13:102 (1) - 100% volume
03:58:278 (6) - Remove it and make the next spinner start at 03:58:278.
good map =w=