1. Hard (2.32 stars, 160 notes)
2. Neku's Futsuu (1.14 stars, 98 notes)
3. Neku's Muzukashii (1.64 stars, 163 notes)
4. Normal (1.61 stars, 100 notes)

Zakkyliar wrote:

I love this song hope it will get ranked. Dont know about standard but in taiko every note was red. Is there a way to balance it for taiko?

Zakkyliar wrote:

Oh sure, then waiting for this to be updated. Wish I could help but I don't have any experience in mapping or modding.

Yauxo wrote:

Hi there, coming from your request in my Modding Q

[General]

1. Can never go wrong with blankets I've doble checked everything i hope now it's better

[Normal]

1. 00:03:157 (3,6) - both ends should overlap imo ~ Done
2. 00:04:326 (4,7) - let 7 overlap with 4. this would also make a better blanket ~ Done
   [*}00:07:443 (1) - that finish is pretty loud, lower the volume a little bit (actually, I think removing the finish is better) ~ I removed it xd
3. 00:13:677 (1) - ^ ~ same
4. 00:19:521 (1) - remove clap ~ removed clap, but kept the whistle, is it ok?
5. 01:05:496 (1) - ^ ~ same here, keep finish?
6. 00:23:417 (5) - move a little bit up so that there's a nice turn from 4 into 5. This also allows a nicer placement for 00:24:976 (7) - ~ Great, Done
7. 00:25:560 (1) - this shape seems kinda off. The map's building up on pretty curved sliders, this hard slider here should be reformed ~ Changed
8. 00:36:664 (1) - ^ ~ Changed
9. 01:07:054 (3,5,1,3,5) - ^ ~ Changed
10. 00:52:249 (1) - ^i guess you can also replace it with a repeating ~ I Changed it but is it ok for normal?
11. 01:04:716 (1) - ^ ~ same
    
12. 00:26:534 (1) - This is one big thing here: First of all, remove the clap on the head.
    Now, you can hear a very loud bass-y sound at the slider's tail. This one should be hitsounded! The thing is, standard hitsounds usually dont fit to bass-y stuff, so I'd recommend you to find a fitting hitsound (either on the net, forum or from other maps) and use it with custom overrides. This has to be changed through the whole diff (and probably mapset) ~ I really don't know too much about hitsounds (as you may have noticed) but i'll try <3
    
13. 00:41:729 (2) - reverse should be on the big white and not on the red. shorten it and add a circle 00:42:898 (3) - ~ Done
14. 00:59:262 (1) - is touching 00:56:924 (5) - , fix that (touching objects are never good like this) ~ i wasnt sure about that, thanks!

[Hard]

1. I'd rework the hitsounds on this diff completely. especially the beginning. It's quiet and it should have claps all over it. There are also some overlap issues. Fix these by looking at each objects x and y coord and set them to exactly the same. Other than that, the map looks actually pretty good
   
2. 00:09:196 (4,5) - blanket can be improved ~ I hope it's better
3. 00:25:755 (1,1,1) - all these NCs are not necessary. Overlaps should also be fixed ~ Done
4. 00:37:053 (1) - remove NC ~ Done
5. 00:59:262 (1,1,1) - important overlap issue ~ oh much better<3

[Insane]

1. Same issues as in Hard
   
2. 00:08:417 (3,4) - I like the idea behind this, but eventually people will think that 3, which is a normal circle, will be the start for 4, the actual slider. Especially since you repeat thie combo a lot ~ I really liked it, but you're right . Changed
3. 00:25:560 (1,2,3,4) - something like this? Fits the song better ~ I changed it, but don't know if it's ok like i put the notes
   
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4. 01:13:191 (6) - fix placement ~ ops xd

Gl with your mapset :3 The basics are set, but there's still room for improvement ~ thanks <3

About the hitsounds, i'll try but i dont think i'll do it right - hope you can give it a quick look when you can/want.

ChiLynn wrote:

Hi, from Newcomer Queue.

[General]
Change the source, 花咲くいろは. ~ Done

Lower all difficulties volume by 10 %, current are too loud. (on my opinion. XD) ~ Done

You should remove the slider slide's sound, it's pretty annoying. Find a silent .wav file, or download here. Copy to your Map folder, (If you don't know where, it's on your osu! folder > Songs > Your map name) then rename it.

with: *-sliderslide
Change * with: Normal, Soft, or Drum.

then, on your time Timing Panel check this. ~ I hope i did it correctly xD

[Normal]
00:13:677 (1) - Add finish on the beginning of the slider. ~ I removed it because it was very loud, um
00:40:560 (1) - Add clap on the end. (of the slider :v) ~ Done
00:42:898 (3) - Add clap. ~ Done
00:45:236 (6) - Add clap on the end. (After the reverse arrow) ~ Done
00:46:794 (1) - Add clap on the end. ~ Done
00:49:132 (3) - Add clap on the beginning. ~ Done
00:49:911 (4) - Add clap on the end. ~ Done
00:53:028 (1) - ^ ~ Done
00:54:586 (3) - Add clap on the middle. (The reverse arrow) ~ Done
00:56:924 (5) - Add clap on the beginning and the end of the slider. ~ Done
00:59:262 (1) - Add clap on the end. ~ Done
01:00:431 (2) - ^ ~ Done
01:02:379 (3) - ^ ~ Done
01:07:054 ~ 01:13:288 - Remove all claps from this area. ~ Done; I think i found a better sound for that section xd
01:30:042 - Reduce the volume to 5 % ~ I think i did xD

[Hard]
01:30:042 - Reduce the volume to 5 % ~ alright xd
All good. XD

[Insane]
00:13:287 (1) - Sounds weird, change the hitsound.
01:23:418 (1) & 01:23:808 (2) - Is this even possible? ~ i dont know what you mean, it's easy to beat..?
01:26:730 (2) & 01:26:925 (1) - ^ ~ same^

---------------------------------------------

That's it. Nice map, Good luck! ~ Thanks <3

Kodora wrote:

Just checked hitsounds and some other minor stuff. Good luck!

SPOILER

09:51 rossonero1899: in what difficulty did you get that? :O
09:51 Kodora: Insane
09:53 rossonero1899: i think it's you
09:53 Kodora: also not bad hitsounds
09:53 rossonero1899: xcD
09:54 rossonero1899: really? that surprise me
09:56 Kodora: also
09:56 Kodora: why doubled bpm?
09:56 Kodora: 00:07:053 (9) - don't use these claps during the calm beginning
09:56 Kodora: whistles only are enough
09:58 rossonero1899: really it's doubled bpm? o.o
09:58 Kodora: 00:38:223 (2) - i'd add whistle to head
09:58 Kodora: 00:39:002 (3) - ^
09:58 Kodora: yes
09:58 Kodora: 77 BPM lands on metronome perfectly
09:59 Kodora: just set 77 BPM and double slider velocity
09:59 Kodora: nothing will change
09:59 Kodora: also i feel timing a bit off orz..
09:59 rossonero1899: im waiting a new mp3
10:00 rossonero1899: so ill change it then
10:00 Kodora: yeah this one seems corrupted
10:00 Kodora: but BPM is definitely 77 XD
10:00 rossonero1899: if you listen 01:16:405 (1) -
10:00 rossonero1899: you can hear my bad cut xD
10:00 Kodora: oh
10:01 Kodora: that's why timing is off
10:01 rossonero1899: if was funny when i realized what i did xd
10:02 rossonero1899: i added what you said btw <3
10:03 Kodora: wow your bpm also not rounded
10:04 Kodora: if you will check it in timing setup panel you will see that it goes .998
10:04 rossonero1899: yes i have to change it, i wont affect that much xD
10:05 Kodora: you can try [http://puu.sh/9sNZi/0ed0569a65.png this timing] for now
10:05 Kodora: should work
10:06 rossonero1899: but i'll have the new mp3 tomorrow, then ill to see the correct timing i guess xd
10:06 Kodora: ahh okay :3
10:07 rossonero1899: Thanks anyways <3
10:08 rossonero1899: About the custom hitsounds, do you think they're ok? or should i changed them?
10:08 rossonero1899: change
10:09 Kodora: 01:21:063 (1) - add finish to head ww
10:09 Kodora: they are fine for me, but i personally prefer to use defaults
10:09 Kodora: well, it's always up to mapper
10:09 Kodora: 01:24:180 (1) - finish to head here too
10:10 rossonero1899: and remove clap?
10:10 Kodora: yes
10:10 rossonero1899: ok
10:10 Kodora: the only one thing
10:11 Kodora: 00:42:118 (4) - these custom finishes really bothering me
10:11 Kodora: too loud and doesn't fits well ;;
10:12 rossonero1899: um if you changed the additives to soft?
10:12 Kodora: i'd simple remove them
10:12 Kodora: and use soft-whistles instead
10:13 Kodora: also your custom finishes here are just default soft-whistles, only louder
10:14 rossonero1899: the drum finish?
10:14 rossonero1899: ill remove it then, i dont remember where else i used
10:14 Kodora: 00:42:118 (4) - 00:42:508 (5) - 00:44:456 (4,5) -
10:15 Kodora: only here at slider heads
10:15 Kodora: 00:51:469 (1,2) - and here
10:16 Kodora: 01:03:936 (7,8) - and here
10:17 rossonero1899: oh didnt remeber that, ok i changed them
10:18 Kodora: that's all i guess
10:18 Kodora: oh well, it's so pain to mod with these bugged notes x.x
10:18 rossonero1899: would you see other difficulties when you want?
10:19 Kodora: sure
10:19 rossonero1899: sometimes it stops playing hitsounds
10:19 rossonero1899: it is just me ?
10:22 *Kodora is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/435433 nano.RIPE - Saibou Kioku [Hard]]
10:23 Kodora: hm
10:23 Kodora: i'm kind of surprised that you used different customs for this diff
10:23 Kodora: or your hitsounds is not completed yet?
10:24 rossonero1899: i did everything i could, so you can say that i finished them xD
10:24 rossonero1899: i used other custom at the begging cause the different pattorn
10:25 rossonero1899: but i dont know if that even correct xd
10:25 rossonero1899: pattern*
10:25 Kodora: 00:02:378 (2) - these custom finishes doesn't fit :<
10:25 Kodora: also it is better to unify hitsounds at your diffs
10:26 rossonero1899: um ok i'll changed those finish for whistle then xd
10:26 rossonero1899: change*
10:26 Kodora: of course lower diffs usually have much more simple rhythm but different customs? i don't see much reason for it
10:26 Kodora: ww
10:26 Kodora: also lol
10:27 Kodora: now we have osu format file v13
10:27 Kodora: lol
10:27 rossonero1899: what is that?xD
10:27 rossonero1899: the file with all the info right?
10:29 Kodora: it is just currect version of .osu file
10:29 Kodora: well
10:29 Kodora: Hard is good
10:29 Kodora: /np
10:29 *Kodora is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/435434 nano.RIPE - Saibou Kioku [Normal]]
10:30 Kodora: 00:01:599 (1) - why this is only diff where you used finish here?
10:30 rossonero1899: Um .. i dont know xD
10:31 rossonero1899: how does it sound?
10:31 Kodora: i personally don't like to use loud hitsounds at clm parts
10:31 Kodora: it doesn'r fit
10:31 Kodora: *calm
10:32 rossonero1899: yes xd
10:32 rossonero1899: i think i did because it the only difficulty that i dont how to map
10:32 rossonero1899: i mean how to put hitsounds xD
10:34 Kodora: rhythm choice isn't really great as for me x.x
10:34 Kodora: 00:20:300 (1) - again, i don't think that this finish needed here
10:36 Kodora: why you haven't used same hitsounds as in hardest diffs here?
10:36 Kodora: strange that you used claps on kiai
10:36 Kodora: oh well
10:36 rossonero1899: Another person told me that
10:36 rossonero1899: the part of the claps xd
10:36 Kodora: 00:44:456 (5) - also missed clap on head
10:37 Kodora: 00:52:249 (1) - actually it is very not recommended to use more than 1 repeat at such sliders, especially considering that it spaced very close to next slider
10:38 Kodora: 01:04:716 (1) - same
10:39 rossonero1899: doesn't matter that the sound hasnt finished?
10:40 Kodora: e
10:41 Kodora: sound?
10:41 Kodora: just use 2 1/2 slider instead
10:41 Kodora: that would me much easier to play
10:41 rossonero1899: oh ok xD thanks
10:44 Kodora: 01:21:080 (1) - missed finish
10:44 Kodora: 01:24:197 (5) - ^
10:45 rossonero1899: should i keep the whistle?
10:45 rossonero1899: 01:24:197 (5) - it has finish
10:45 Kodora: damn, stupid bug with silent notes
10:45 Kodora: X_X
10:45 rossonero1899: xD
10:46 Kodora: it's literally so impossible to mod now
10:46 Kodora: 01:26:535 (3) - also it would be nice to extend this slider to the 01:27:314 - '
10:46 Kodora: and add finish to tail
10:46 Kodora: and begin next spinner 1/4 later
10:47 Kodora: also i forgot to say
10:47 Kodora: silence spinnerends in all diffs
10:48 Kodora: well, that's all i guess]
10:49 rossonero1899: but i cant use 0% audio xD
10:49 rossonero1899: i has already 5%
10:49 Kodora: make it soft addition
10:49 Kodora: instead of drum
10:50 rossonero1899: that was a mistake xD
10:50 Kodora: ww
10:52 rossonero1899: i guess ill have to add whistles to normal too
10:52 Kodora: yes
10:53 Kodora: i'd personally if all diffs had consistent hitsounds at least on kiai
10:53 Kodora: well, that's all i guess \:3/
10:55 rossonero1899: so you would recomend delete claps and make it similar to other diffs?
10:55 Kodora: yes
10:55 Kodora: you can aslo use ticksounds
10:55 Kodora: that's a very good idea for easiest diffs
10:57 rossonero1899: oh i ll try that
10:57 rossonero1899: can i ask you again when i finish this?
10:57 rossonero1899: other day
10:59 Kodora: sure

Neku okazaki wrote:

Traigo mas droga
http://puu.sh/9vo67/1b73b87813.rar

Decon082 wrote:

Random attempt at Taiko mod from #modreqs. (This is my first mod so don't expect it to be very helpful but I'll try my best!)
Also I have no idea how to make all the fancy mod posts that everyone else does so you get generic formatting!


Taiko General:
• CS and AR don't matter in Taiko. Most people recommend keeping them both at 5 for consistency. ._.
• Slider Velocity is the same in both difficulties. I would raise SV on the Muzukashii or lower it on the Futsuu. I feel like the Muzukashi is a bit slow, so try raising it to 1.5 or 1.6 and see how it feels. Unrankeable :v
• The hitsounds are a bit quiet at times. I feel like they should be louder for the entire song. If you copied the timing sections over from another difficulty, keep in mind that green sections do not have to stay consistent for each difficulty, and most Taiko maps have constant hitsound volume throughout. :v


Neku's Futsuu:
• Overall I feel like the patterns are pretty good. It's a bit easy for a Futsuu but then again it's a slow song so don't worry too much about the star rating.
• 00:25:560 (38,39,40,41) - I think 39 sounds better as a blue note. Try adding a clap and see what you think. ok :v
• 00:36:663 (60,61,62) - Maybe try this as blue blue red? Lel, no :v
• 00:37:443 - You don't really need this break just because there are no vocals because there are other things that could be mapped. I need this
• 00:52:248 (83,84,85) - blue blue red, same as above. No :v
• 01:04:715 (106,107,108) - Same as above. No, plz stop xD
• 01:05:495 - 01:14:845 - I feel like this part can be mapped on every second beat also to go along with the drum I hear in the background. Try adding a blue note in each of these gaps other than the first one. If you do this, you'll probably want to change up the patterns in the next part of the song because it would get repetitive. Fuutsu plz


Neku's Muzukashii:
• The main problem with this difficulty is that it's too easy for a Muzukashii and too similar to your Futsuu. The map is composed mostly of 1/1 and 2/1 with not enough 1/2. Be looking for lots of places where you can remap to 1/2 patterns without overmapping and without making the 1/2 patterns too long.
• The first part of this is identical to your Futsuu. I think if you mapped more to the vocals with 1/2 patterns in this section it would be more fun to play and also help increase the difficulty.
• Most of the 1/4s you placed don't seem to go with anything I can hear in the song. They play fine though and 1/4s are fine in Muzukashii unless they're overused so I'd leave them as is.
• I'm not going to give any specific places where you should add notes because as I said, the entire difficulty should be made harder. It's a good map but just too easy for what it probably should be for a nice difficulty spread.
Mapping mode plz

I really like the song so it would be really nice to see ranked. Good luck! Thanks

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39002
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
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[Metadata]
Title:Saibou Kioku
TitleUnicode:細胞キオク
Artist:nano.RIPE
ArtistUnicode:nano.RIPE
Creator:rossonero1899
Version:Neku's Futsuu
Source:花咲くいろは
Tags:neku okazaki ed ending insert ins song hanairo hanasaku iroha
BeatmapID:441088
BeatmapSetID:181337

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:1
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1. I think slidertick on S:C2 should be same as whistle sound on S:C1, because I hear that slidertick on S:C2 is louder than whistle on S:C1 is just feel weird since the rhythm is same you probably follow the guitar sound
2. The finish sound on Normal that you use is not fit imo, maybe you should use Soft sampleset, since I think It's more fit to put cymbal sound rather than drum on finish e.g. 01:14:846 (1) - and many more

1. 00:19:521 (1) - Delete NC? I think it's still have same rhythm with the previous NC so no need to NC that
2. 00:36:664 (1) - Same ^
3. 00:52:249 (1) - Delete finish on head then put clap on tail
4. 00:52:638 (2) - Delete whistle on head then put finish on tail
5. 01:04:716 (1) - Delete finish on head then put clap on tail
6. 01:05:106 (2) - Delete whistle on head then put finish on tail

1. 00:13:287 (1) - Delete NC? I think it's still have same rhythm with the previous NC so no need to NC that
2. 00:42:898 (1) - Delete NC? Because the singer still singing on same rhythm
3. 00:49:132 (1) - Same as above
4. 00:46:794 (1) - NC that, since the singer begin to sing again
5. 00:51:469 (9) - Nc that, to follow the drum sound. Then delete Nc on this 00:52:249 (1) -
6. 01:00:820 (1) - Not necesary to NC
7. 01:02:379 (1) - Same ^
8. 01:03:937 (1) - NC to follow drum sound

1. 00:06:858 (8) - Delete? somehow not fit
2. 00:13:287 (1) - Delete NC? I think it's still have same rhythm with the previous NC so no need to NC that
3. 00:19:521 (7) - Delete clap on head
4. 00:24:781 (6,7,8) - Stack (6) and (7) on slider head or you can make them neater
5. 00:36:664 (1,2,3,4) - As for me, the hitsound not right
6. 00:37:054 (3,1) - Bad overlap, maybe you can move (3) somewhere else to prevent that
7. 00:40:170 - Add circle
8. 00:52:249 (1,2,3) - The hitsound does not sound right
9. 01:04:716 (1,2,3,4) - Same ^