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La Quinta Estacion - Tu Peor Error

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Beuchi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on viernes, 02 de julio de 2010 at 22:09:15

Artist: La Quinta Estacion
Title: Tu Peor Error
Tags: collab #spanish soyah Zakiu sesito71 Astom Nerv_Mario
BPM: 98
Filesize: 3760kb
Play Time: 02:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (4,87 stars, 338 notes)
  2. Easy (0,99 stars, 120 notes)
  3. Normal (3,24 stars, 192 notes)
Download: La Quinta Estacion - Tu Peor Error
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5th map!! :)

Now it's time for a spanish song. One of the songs for a #spanish collab Beatmap Project.
Thanks to Gonzvlo for making a little skin! :3

Enjoy!! And as always thank you so much for starring and modding! ^_^

Added a Skin! Please redownload~

Collab Parts:
0:11:550 - 0:31:200: soyah
0:31:200 - 0:50:700: Zakiu
0:50:700 - 1:00:618: BREAK
1:00:618 - 1:20:100: sesito71
1:20:100 - 1:39:600: Astom
1:39:600 - 1:59:400: Beuchi-chan
1:59:400 - 2:09:150: BREAK
2:09:150 - End: Nerv_Mario

EDITS:
19 Dec (2:50): Added soyah's part of [Collab]
20 Dec (9:42): Added Nerv_Mario's part of [Collab]
6 Jan (11:37): Fixes by jockeytiyan and Leorda. Waiting for more parts for collab diff...
25 Jan (8:53): Omg it's an update!! Added sesito71's part of [Collab]
23 Feb (0:41): God this is going reaaaally slow xD Added Zakiu's part of [Collab] and fixed some minor things :3
16 Mar (5:27): OMG!! [Collab] it's finished!!! Added Astom's part of [Collab] and fixes by Glasslake.
22 Mar (6:25): Uploaded half of the storyboard. Names on [Collab] left. Made soome minor fixes.
25 Mar (8:47): It's finished!! Finally moved to Pending.
30 Mar (9:40): Fixes by NoHItter. Fixed rough edges on text images of the storyboard.
30 Mar (10:41): Fixes by yeahyeahyeahhh.
3 Apr (18:26): Fixes by BagnoGamer. Changed offset.
4 Apr (21:28): Fixes by Garven.
10 Apr (11:27): Fixes by SteRRuM. New mp3 file and Offset.
11 May (4:05): Revived ;_;. Made some changes on Easy and Normal.
11 May (11:33): Fixes by Sakura301.
14 May (18:56): Fixes by ErufenRito.
20 May (2:49): Fixes by Krisom.
26 May (3:18): Fixes by wanhyrzh.
27 May (6:45): Fixes by fartownik.
28 May (3:13): Fixes by MarioBros777
29 May (11:05): Added Skin by Gonzvlo.
23 Jun (19:40): Fixes by Gens. Added a spinner-approach circle and forced Default skin.
2 Jul (21:48): Fixes by Mogsworth.
Kerensa
hey ~

Normal:
it was fine ~
but i personally think that it's pretty confusing o.o maybe it's just be just i got a B on it >.> shocking right.. maybe not.. i dunno. it just felt weird.

Easy:
was fine >_<;;

well yeah i didn't see anything, but yeah, maybe i'm just anoob modder >_<;; nice map. cool song ~

star~
Revengexsoyah
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Nerv_Mario
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: La Quinta Estacion - Tu Peor Error (Beuchi-chan) [Collab].osu
jockeytiyan
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! (Only suggestions. I fail to find some things that are wrong in the map)

Easy:
00:36:590 (1) - Place it somewhere else without getting it hidden.
00:46:385 (1) - ^
01:25:570 (1) - ^
01:35:366 (1) - ^

Repetitive much? ^^


Normal:
Nothing wrong. Just the repetitiveness of the patters. ^^


Good luck on the collab. :3
Leorda
Hola Beuchi-chan! Sorry for mod suddenly and I not to give you a permission :(

[General]
Source?

[Kiai]
The kiai is not set, set this for all difficulty
1) 00:31:080 - 00:50:672
2) 01:20:060 - 01:39:652


[Easy]
01:09:652 (1) - No new combo

[Normal]
00:22:815 (1) - No new combo
00:23:427 (x) - Add note here with finish hitsound
00:25:264 (1) - No new combo
00:34:448 (x) - Add note here

00:34:754 (1) - Move backward to blue tick
00:44:244 (x) - Add note here
00:44:550 (1) - Move backward to blue tick


Sorry I don't mod Collab difficulty :o
Nice Map ^u^
STAR!
[DBF]
Star for god of streams!
Topic Starter
Beuchi

jockeytiyan wrote:

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! W-why are you laughing?... ;_;...

Easy:
00:36:590 (1) - Place it somewhere else without getting it hidden. Sure o:
00:46:385 (1) - ^ ^
01:25:570 (1) - ^ ^
01:35:366 (1) - ^ ^
Thanks jockey >w</ and sorry for fixing this so late xD...

Leorda wrote:

[General]
Source? Hmm,,, is it okay if I put Album's Name as Source? oxo

[Kiai] Sorry, no Kiai.

[Easy]
01:09:652 (1) - No new combo Naaah i like it xD

[Normal]
00:22:815 (1) - No new combo Done
00:23:427 (x) - Add note here with finish hitsound This would make a sudden jump... and I don't like it ;X
00:25:264 (1) - No new combo Done :3
00:34:448 (x) - Add note here Nah...
00:34:754 (1) - Move backward to blue tick Symmetry~
00:44:244 (x) - Add note here Same as before oxo...
00:44:550 (1) - Move backward to blue tick Same here~
Thank you Leorda, again sorry for being so late >x<...

Kudosu for you two!!
sesito71
ainss, tenia mi parte ayer aunque se me olvido ponerla, aqui te la dejo hoy xD


te modeo el map luego si eso ^^


salu2

Download: La Quinta Estacion - Tu Peor Error (Beuchi-chan) [Collab].osu
Astom
wenas, estuve jugando el beat map y creo que hay un pequeño error en el timing que repercute en varias partes de la cancion, estuve probando unas modificaciones espero que les sirvan.

[normal]

-Usar BPM en 98,000, offset 11.700 y "Beat Snap Divisor" en 1/6
-Si haces el cambio anterior deberes reposicionar todas los circles y adicionalmente cambiar algunos a una posicion mas acorde a la que estan, a continuacion les dejo los que encontre que quisa deban ser cambiados o eliminados:
+00:11:488 eliminar
+00:11:795 mover a 00:11:700, de aqui en adelante te daras cuenta de lo que quise decir anteriormente... te tomara algun tiempo hacer todo
+00:41:802 mover a 00:41:700
+01:15:271 mover a 01:15:373
+.......

Espero no ser muy intruso en su beatmap, igualmente aqui va su estrellita. Suerte :3
Topic Starter
Beuchi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Astom
=)

cuando tenga algun kudosu suelto lo tirare por aka :3

Download: La Quinta Estacion - Tu Peor Error (Beuchi-chan) [Collab].osu
Glass
Hi :3

[?] = Opinion/suggestion
[!] = Need to be fixed

[Easy]
00:36:590 (1) - Remove new combo [?]
00:46:385 (1) - ^ [?]
01:02:305 (4,5,1) - Move them closer to each other, their spacing look the same as 01:00:468 (1,2,3) [!]
01:09:652 (1) - Remove new combo [?]
01:25:570 (1) - ^ [?]
01:35:365 (1) - ^ [?]

[Normal]
00:13:325 (x) - Add a note here [?]
00:15:927 (5) - Move this to 00:15:774, and then add a note at 00:16:080 [?]
00:33:835 (1,2) - Remove new combo [?]
00:35:366 (1,1,1) - ^ [!]
00:43:631 (1,2) - ^ [?]
00:45:162 (1,1,2) - ^ [?]
01:05:978 (1) - ^ [!]
01:16:386 (1) - ^ [!]
01:18:835 (1,2) - ^ [!]
01:33:835 (1) - ^ [?]
01:51:284 (1) - ^ [?]

[Collab]
I realized this wasn't finished yet so I'm not gonna mod this xD

Starred~
Topic Starter
Beuchi

Glasslake wrote:

[Easy]
00:36:590 (1) - Remove new combo [?] Nah.
00:46:385 (1) - ^ [?] Nah xD
01:02:305 (4,5,1) - Move them closer to each other, their spacing look the same as 01:00:468 (1,2,3) [!] Ooops, fixed :3
01:09:652 (1) - Remove new combo [?] Nah.
01:25:570 (1) - ^ [?] Nope xD
01:35:365 (1) - ^ [?] Same :3

[Normal]
00:13:325 (x) - Add a note here [?] I don't like how it sounds :/
00:15:927 (5) - Move this to 00:15:774, and then add a note at 00:16:080 [?] Symmetryyyy +_+!
00:33:835 (1,2) - Remove new combo [?]Okay :3
00:35:366 (1,1,1) - ^ [!] D:! How come this is like that? Fixed o_O
00:43:631 (1,2) - ^ [?] Fixed.
00:45:162 (1,1,2) - ^ [?] Done too.
01:05:978 (1) - ^ [!] Fixed.
01:16:386 (1) - ^ [!] Fixed.
01:18:835 (1,2) - ^ [!] Fiiiixed :3
01:33:835 (1) - ^ [?] It would make a too long combo.
01:51:284 (1) - ^ [?] Nope oxo
Thank you Glasslake~ *-* *Kudosu*
NoHitter
Is beuchichan.png and storyboardby.png meant to not have smooth edges? Maybe you can feather the edges?
Edit: Also the rest of the text images...

Easy
00:36:590 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 00:31:693 (1)'s location
00:46:386 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 00:41:488 (1) 's location
01:09:652 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:25:570 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 01:20:672 (1)'s location
01:35:366 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 01:30:468 (1)'s location

Normal
00:31:080 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Move right by one grid.
00:40:876 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Move left by one grid
01:51:590 (1) - Remove new combo?

Collab
01:49:448 (1) - Make beuchichan.png strobe once more here?
yeahyeahyeahhh
Collab:
Genera-
I think the text could use a bit more work, kinda rough edges. Make them smoother? D:
Fix preview timing, should be 31080 like the others.

This diff is fine, but I think your guest can do a better job on the hitsounds Beuchi xD More so towards the beginning, gets better at the end!

Normal:
00:12:101 (3,4,5) - Space these further apart? The current spacing kinda makes it feel to click sooner.
00:14:550 (3,4,5) - ^
00:32:305 (3) - Move this back 1/4 (blue tick)?
00:34:754 (1) - ^
00:42:101 (3) - Back 1/4 again
00:44:550 (1) - ^
01:21:284 (3) - ^ then add a note 01:22:509 (4) - ?
01:23:733 (3) - ^

Or you can do the previous two how you have here... 01:29:856 (1) -

Easy:
Fine

Good luck ^^
Leorda

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Sorry, no Kiai
HOLY F*****G S***!!!!!!
Es to prela no otela!
BEST SENTENCE EVAHHH!!!!!! *jump and crazy laugh*

OH! Ahem, since your diff is finish, I want recheck it

[General]
1) Your mp3 is a bit low, maybe try louder bit?

[Easy]
00:21:284 (1) - Ugly slider mommy.....
00:23:733 (2) - ^
00:26:182 (1) - Make it curve, I think it would be perfect if this make curve and symetric
00:28:631 (2) - ^
00:32:305 (3) - I think it's not bad if looks like this, maybe try make curve?
00:34:753 (3) - ^
00:41:488 (1) - Do not place the object near spinner in timing, since this easy diff. Because it's slow, I think it's ok, maybe?

[Normal]
PLEASE check this diff, are you follow rhythm of vocal? There's some part are following and the other part are following vocal
00:12:101 (3) - Maybe try make it curve?
00:14:550 (3) - ^
01:01:386 (4) - This slider is waaaaaay too ugly, make it curve
01:03:835 (4) - ^

Mommy~ (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Topic Starter
Beuchi

NoHItter wrote:

Is beuchichan.png and storyboardby.png meant to not have smooth edges? Maybe you can feather the edges?Fixed :3

Easy
00:36:590 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 00:31:693 (1)'s location I like it there =x
00:46:386 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 00:41:488 (1) 's location ^
01:09:652 (1) - Remove new combo? Done :3
01:25:570 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 01:20:672 (1)'s location Same as before.
01:35:366 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 01:30:468 (1)'s location ^

Normal
00:31:080 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Move right by one grid. Fixed :3
00:40:876 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Move left by one grid Fixed too.
01:51:590 (1) - Remove new combo? Nah... oxo

Collab
01:49:448 (1) - Make beuchichan.png strobe once more here? Done :3
Thank you NoHItter~ *Kudosu*
Topic Starter
Beuchi

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Collab:
I think the text could use a bit more work, kinda rough edges. Make them smoother? D: Already done :P
Fix preview timing, should be 31080 like the others. Fixed :3

This diff is fine, but I think your guest can do a better job on the hitsounds Beuchi xD More so towards the beginning, gets better at the end! Hahahaha, okay :P

Normal:
00:12:101 (3,4,5) - Space these further apart? The current spacing kinda makes it feel to click sooner. It has Distance Snap on... :? I'll leave it for now =x
00:14:550 (3,4,5) - ^ Same.
00:32:305 (3) - Move this back 1/4 (blue tick)? Nope...
00:34:754 (1) - ^ Same.
00:42:101 (3) - Back 1/4 again Nope.
00:44:550 (1) - ^ Same.
01:21:284 (3) - ^ then add a note 01:22:509 (4) - ? No~
01:23:733 (3) - ^ Same xD
Thank you yyy <3~ *Kudosu*
Topic Starter
Beuchi

Leorda wrote:

HOLY F*****G S***!!!!!! BEST SENTENCE EVAHHH!!!!!! *jump and crazy laugh* o_o;

[General]
1) Your mp3 is a bit low, maybe try louder bit? I'll think about this, I don't really think it's that low o.o

[Easy]
00:21:284 (1) - Ugly slider mommy..... >: I don't think is ugly...
00:23:733 (2) - ^ Same...
00:26:182 (1) - Make it curve, I think it would be perfect if this make curve and symetric It's curved...
00:28:631 (2) - ^ Same.
00:32:305 (3) - I think it's not bad if looks like this, maybe try make curve? It's curved D: it just has a corner.
00:34:753 (3) - ^ Same.
00:41:488 (1) - Do not place the object near spinner in timing, since this easy diff. Because it's slow, I think it's ok, maybe? Yeah, also it's near of the centre of the spin so I don't think it would be a problem =x

[Normal]
00:12:101 (3) - Maybe try make it curve? ;_;... It's curved again
00:14:550 (3) - ^ Same :/
01:01:386 (4) - This slider is waaaaaay too ugly, make it curve ;w; I like it...
01:03:835 (4) - ^ Same xD

Mommy~ (ノ゚ω゚)ノ (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Thanks for checking it again Leorda =X
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