00:51:141 (1) - 01:12:240 (1) - this part is really weird, sounds like the guitar is in groups of 4 not 3 notes, but the drums have a backbeat so having an odd number of notes in a group makes it feel really weird, while 4 or 2 would feel better to play
01:18:834 (3) - sounds like this slider should be 1/6 but i guess you want that slow slider to transite into the new section, then i guess you could make 01:18:669 (2) - reverse slider 1 1/6 note longer and start 01:18:834 (3) - 1 note later and end it on the blue tick, it would be fine since the next slider is really close so it's not hard to fail getting a 300 on both of them
02:19:327 (5,6,7,1) - could make the spacing of these a bit larger to emphasize the drums more here
02:24:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - hm why aren't these started on the strong note? (the white tick) it feels much better when the stream starts on the strong note and ends on weak notes then starts on the strong ones again like this:
http://puu.sh/dgQns/8e61c92da4.jpg same happens at 02:31:361 (1) - but at 02:36:636 (1) - it's just like i suggested, so why not make it more consistent?
02:42:899 (7,8,9) - i think these might be a problem for ranking, id suggest making atleast one slider in that pattern because of the 1/3s or atleast change the spacing, because its quite confusing when its spaced the same way as the 1/2s were before
03:56:910 (2) - maybe a nc here?
id try to emphasize the stronger guitar notes more in this next section, like these ones at 03:58:723 (5) - 03:59:877 (4,5) - with ncs and further spacing from what was/will be happening before/after:
http://puu.sh/dgR92/c304060a5e.jpg04:28:064 (4,5,6) - can't really hear 1/4s here, could make a cool slow slider on the long guitar note(4) and end it on 6 and continue the streams on 04:28:394 (8) - ?
04:31:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - woah what's up with this part, id really suggest you just choose to focus on either the guitar or the drums, it feels really awkward and confusing at the moment
04:40:097 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - would map this part like this:
http://puu.sh/dgRKL/325008a323.jpg the anti jump fits the guitar perfectly, and i can't really hear the 1/4s here again
04:44:438 (6) 04:53:009 (2) - - still not very fond of these and would rather have either them following only the guitars or only the drums instead of both, but keep it if you want : D
04:57:075 (6) - some variation instead of the same pattern on this part? maybe some small anti jumps? also separate the startings of that riff to emphasize it has 4 notes in each part of it here 04:57:240 (7,11,15,1,5,9) -
05:05:976 (1,2,3,4,5) - alright this looks cool and all and im fine with it but it also might be a bit harder to rank because its kinda hidden and 1/6, reverse slider could fix it?
05:55:427 (6,7,8,6,7,8,6,7,8) - why dont these start on the streams before like the rest did
not really a big deal though
06:47:514 (1) - to 06:52:625 (26) - it would be really epic if you made these more and more spaced like you did with the streams in the kiai same with 03:33:669 (1) - to 03:38:778 (26) -
07:08:284 (5,6,7) - maybe a slider+circle or something instead of these, 1/3s again
07:15:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is pretty brutal to have at the end of the map too, 100% recommend to at least make one or two sliders to introduce the player to the fact that its 1/3