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Jin ft. LiSA - Yuukei Yesterday [Osu|Taiko]

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captin1
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, July 16, 2014 at 1:40:13 AM

Artist: Jin ft. LiSA
Title: Yuukei Yesterday
Source: Mekakucity Actors
Tags: evening ending xchippy mintong mintong89 vocaloid ia メカクシティアクターズ kagerou project カゲロウプロジェクト 小松一也 Kazuya Komatsu tv size
BPM: 129
Filesize: 11950kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.41 stars, 88 notes)
  2. Insane (3.76 stars, 375 notes)
  3. mint's Taiko Muzu (2.86 stars, 308 notes)
  4. mint's Taiko Oni (3.88 stars, 578 notes)
  5. Normal (1.74 stars, 133 notes)
  6. xChippy's Hard (2.76 stars, 227 notes)
Download: Jin ft. LiSA - Yuukei Yesterday
Download: Jin ft. LiSA - Yuukei Yesterday (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mekakucity Actors Episode 6 Ending
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Hard: xChippy
Taiko: mintong89

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Last edited by captin1 , edited 14 times in total.
Natsu
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Natsu
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Tari
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Tari
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General


  1. You forgot to add xChippy to tags

Easy



  1. 00:15:479 (1) - Uh, Based on how you put whistles on 00:12:689 (1) - , I assume you should add an whistle to the end of the slider? and since the end of the slider has the same "ni" sound as 00:09:898 (3) - which has a whistle at the reverse, a whistle to the end of the slider should be here.
  2. 00:32:223 (2) - The blanket here could be improved still, and you shouldn't make them so curvy , they would blanket better if you curved them just a little bit less here same goes for 00:30:363 (1) - should make them a bit less curvy than how they are atm.
  3. 00:34:549 (3) - Even though movement won't be changed that much, I'd prefer you make this point directly at the next note so the movement towards the next note can be smoother.
  4. 00:32:223 (2) - You probably should add a whistle to the end of the slider or to the reverse, based on your hitsounding pattern there should be 1 more whistle added to this slider.
  5. 01:07:572 (1) - I know for sure your missing a whistle to the end of the slider here , because its inconsistent to the hitsounds you put for the first note in the first half of the kiai.
  6. 01:09:433 (3) - What why did you add a whistle to here? you usually don't add whistles to this white tick in particular, just look at 00:54:549 (3) - 00:58:270 (3) - etc.
  7. 01:35:479 (3) - Well I would recommend me you add whistle here to I guess, because your following the strong "la" sound here.
  8. Probably could use some more whistles here and there and some removed here and there.
    Inherited Points
  9. 00:08:037 - Here you should add one, there a transition from the instruments to the vocals again.
  10. 00:37:805 - Same here.

Normal



  1. 00:09:898 (3) - What's the intention of curving the slider at around the end like this, if your not trying to use this slider to blanket, how about you try that and re position the next few notes? it's not a major change, here is an example
    example
  2. 00:16:409 (2) - Personally I find a whistle really great here, IF you add it to this spot and 00:18:270 (5) - , they sound in harmony to each other, and I think it fits your pattern.
  3. 00:31:293 (2) - If you did what I told you to do above, you should add a whistle here to for consistency with the hitsounds.
  4. 00:54:549 (4) - Similar to what I suggested on easy about smoother flow towards the next note, how about you also try to point this slider towards the next note for better flow?
    example
  5. 00:58:270 (4,5) - Same as above, here's another example.
    example
  6. 01:20:595 (3) - The stacking here is not right, fix it please

xChippy's Hard



  1. 00:00:596 (2) - Maybe you want to add a new combo here because the previous note is before the offset/and music actually start , but its purely optional, since it doesn't really affect gameplay.
  2. 00:01:409 (4) - Well it's better to curve these sliders, it'll offer more variety in the slider shapes, since there are constant linear sliders on this section and as well offer a blanket to the next note, which I don't find that bad. If your willing to do it, here is an example
    example
  3. 00:14:084 (3) - Pretty much a stacking error, here there not perfectly stacked and you can clearly see it,
  4. 01:16:875 (1) - Well you should probably move it down more, if your trying to blanket the red curve the red curve that is on this slider : 01:15:828 (3) - which I see you are trying to do here.
  5. 01:18:735 (1,2) - Well this is symmetry, but I'd prefer you do the same symmetry design as 01:03:851 (1,2) - and make them mirror symmetrical sldiers, here's a example. it flows better and easier to read if you do the same consistent design for both.
    example
  6. 01:36:409 (4) - With what I said about the beginning too, you should add a new combo here to the put emphasize it and to show clearly that the misleading stack is on purpose.

Insane



  1. 00:05:479 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - Well the slider's that are placed at 5 and start of the new combo feel pretty random, how about you try something a little different? but still good flowing the design I was thinking of would be a little bit more simple but still good flow imo
    example
  2. 00:08:968 (3,4,5) - Find it a little bit awkward, I would imagine note 3 being a circle to follow the rhythms better, but you actually did the inverse of what could be here, the rhythm just seems a little awkward, since you have a long vocals at 00:08:968 (3) - and cause you expect this rhythm here 00:08:968 (3,4,5) - to be a repeat of 00:08:037 (1,2) - how about you change the note sequence to something like this
    example
  3. 00:15:479 (1) - I think a finish would go pretty great here, and make the slider jump a little bit more readable.
  4. 00:30:363 (1) - Well if you plan to add a finish to the above you should add a finish here too for consistency.
  5. 00:17:805 (2,3) - Well the flow can be a little misleading here again I guess, I'd expect the next note to be facing towards the right of the slider, and not left , but you might want to curve slider 2 to the right a little bit to make it less misleading. or you could done what was with 00:30:363 (1,2,3) - but the flow for the next after 00:30:363 (1,2,3) - would be bad.
    example
  6. 00:43:386 (1) - Probably move this slider upward more to make bigger spacing to this note because this rhythm is pretty easy and hold and also to make this look better with the previous note. and also add a whistle to the start
  7. 00:50:363 (5,6,7) - Curve looks little off here, you probably might want to disable grid snap and do your streams manually, they look better that way, but for this 6 looks a little bit off, should move it down more to make the curve look better.
  8. 00:58:270 (1) - Add a whistle to the start?
  9. 01:10:247 (5) - The overlap and incorrect stacking here is done on purpose no?
  10. 01:17:572 (4,5) - It would be better if you could turn this note into a slider, which looks parallel to the next note, something like this would work well
    example
Last edited by Tari , edited 1 time in total.
captin1
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Stuff in red are unrankable okay or highly needed to change

Insane



  1. 00:05:479 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - Well the slider's that are placed at 5 and start of the new combo feel pretty random, how about you try something a little different? but still good flowing the design I was thinking of would be a little bit more simple but still good flow imo
  2. 00:08:968 (3,4,5) - Find it a little bit awkward, I would imagine note 3 being a circle to follow the rhythms better, but you actually did the inverse of what could be here, the rhythm just seems a little awkward, since you have a long vocals at 00:08:968 (3) - and cause you expect this rhythm here 00:08:968 (3,4,5) - to be a repeat of 00:08:037 (1,2) - how about you change the note sequence to something like this this causes me to lose the clap, so I'll keep mine
  3. 00:15:479 (1) - I think a finish would go pretty great here, and make the slider jump a little bit more readable. nah there's no finish in the music to match it
  4. 00:30:363 (1) - Well if you plan to add a finish to the above you should add a finish here too for consistency.
  5. 00:17:805 (2,3) - Well the flow can be a little misleading here again I guess, I'd expect the next note to be facing towards the right of the slider, and not left , but you might want to curve slider 2 to the right a little bit to make it less misleading. or you could done what was with 00:30:363 (1,2,3) - but the flow for the next after 00:30:363 (1,2,3) - would be bad.
  6. 00:43:386 (1) - Probably move this slider upward more to make bigger spacing to this note because this rhythm is pretty easy and hold and also to make this look better with the previous note. and also add a whistle to the start
  7. 00:50:363 (5,6,7) - Curve looks little off here, you probably might want to disable grid snap and do your streams manually, they look better that way, but for this 6 looks a little bit off, should move it down more to make the curve look better.
  8. 00:58:270 (1) - Add a whistle to the start?
  9. 01:10:247 (5) - The overlap and incorrect stacking here is done on purpose no? correct, prioritized a better diamond shape over the stack
  10. 01:17:572 (4,5) - It would be better if you could turn this note into a slider, which looks parallel to the next note, something like this would work well

fixed everything in easy and normal, thanks!
Dark Fang
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Dark Fang
Yuukei Yesterday ~~~~~~~~~
I love that so
xChippy
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xChippy

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Stuff in red are unrankable okay or highly needed to change


General


  1. You forgot to add xChippy to tags

xChippy's Hard



  1. 00:00:596 (2) - Maybe you want to add a new combo here because the previous note is before the offset/and music actually start , but its purely optional, since it doesn't really affect gameplay.Hmm yeah prefer it as-is, this also let is stay consistent with the insane so should be good
  2. 00:01:409 (4) - Well it's better to curve these sliders, it'll offer more variety in the slider shapes, since there are constant linear sliders on this section and as well offer a blanket to the next note, which I don't find that bad. If your willing to do it, here is an example
    example
  3. 00:14:084 (3) - Pretty much a stacking error, here there not perfectly stacked and you can clearly see it,
  4. 01:16:875 (1) - Well you should probably move it down more, if your trying to blanket the red curve the red curve that is on this slider : 01:15:828 (3) - which I see you are trying to do here.
  5. 01:18:735 (1,2) - Well this is symmetry, but I'd prefer you do the same symmetry design as 01:03:851 (1,2) - and make them mirror symmetrical sldiers, here's a example. it flows better and easier to read if you do the same consistent design for both.
    example
  6. 01:36:409 (4) - With what I said about the beginning too, you should add a new combo here to the put emphasize it and to show clearly that the misleading stack is on purpose. DSed the stack instead so I don't think there is a need of a NC here anymore o3o
Fixed the rest~~
Thanks for the mod~~

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[General]
AudioFilename: LiSA Yuukei Yesterday.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51991
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Yuukei Yesterday (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:夕景イエスタデイ (TV Size)
Artist:LiSA
ArtistUnicode:LiSA
Creator:captin1
Version:xChippy's Hard
Source:Mekakucity Actors
Tags:jin evening ending xchippy vocaloid ia メカクシティアクターズ kagerou project
BeatmapID:428938
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Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Hi~

General:

  1. Inconsistency in widescreen support
Insane

  1. 00:00:596 not sure but maybe add NC? since there is where the music really start, idk just for better emphasis
  2. 00:04:898 convert this circle in a slider? idk maybe just me, but I want the sound in 00:05:014 to be mapped, also that doubles hjfassgasf, something like this:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:08:968 (3,4) - I can't listen nothing in the start of 00:09:084 (4) -, the slider should start in 00:08:968 and should end in 00:09:316 for consistency with the music and with your previous one 00:08:037 (1) - or do something like this 00:09:898 (1,2) - anyways I love the rhythm in 00:08:037 (1)
  4. 00:14:898 add whistle? since it sound nice with the sound that you're following there
  5. 00:16:409 (4,6) - maybe try to make a blanket here? for better design? something like:
    SPOILER
  6. 00:20:247 (5) - similar to 00:08:968 - I really prefer if you use an extended slider starting in 00:20:130 and ending in 00:20:479 - it will be consistent with your other rhythms and sound just better with the music
  7. 00:27:689 (4) - same as above
  8. 00:25:944 (6,7) - add whistles? since clap + whistle sound really cool with the music, also is consistent with 00:46:409 (4,5) -
  9. 00:51:642 (1,2,3) - similar as above, I feel the music at this point need whistles or finish too xD
  10. 01:10:247 (5) - nazi, try to stack this with the previous 01:08:968 (7) -
  11. 01:36:409 (6) - reduce the volume in the slider tail
Hard:

  1. 00:00:363 (1) - add clap with drum addition? like captin1 did, actually it sound pretty nice
  2. 00:00:596 not sure but maybe add NC? since there is where the music really start, idk just for better emphasis
  3. 00:07:456 mmm you should not ignore this beat, since it have a very prominent sound, add a circle with drum clap there?
  4. 00:35:944 (1,2) - stack this properly
  5. 00:51:409 (2) - well this is the only point were I didn't like your rhythm, the sound at 00:51:642 should be a slider head or circle due to the prominent music, you can use something similar as captin did, I feel that represent the music better
  6. 01:03:619 - 01:05:479 - 01:18:502 - 01:19:433 - 01:20:363 - add circles? this part sound a bit empty, also them with follow the music/vocals pretty nice
  7. 01:29:433 (3,4) - same as 00:35:944
  8. 01:36:409 (4) - for consistency with the insane will be nice if you use a slider here too.
Normal:

  1. use HP4 instead? since the hard diff have 6 and it feel like a big gap between the diffs
  2. 00:25:944 add whistles in the head and tail too? similar to what I suggest you in the insane
  3. 00:48:968 (1) - finish + clap sound pretty nice here, like you did in easy
  4. 01:02:456 (5) - mmm this repeat slider is not consistent with the others ones which are following the vocals, consider to change your rhythm here to this:
    SPOILER
Easy:

  1. HP +1 same reason as normal
  2. This diff is fine
gl
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
captin1
"Natsu"
Hi~

General:

  1. Inconsistency in widescreen support
Insane

  1. 00:00:596 not sure but maybe add NC? since there is where the music really start, idk just for better emphasis not needed
  2. 00:04:898 convert this circle in a slider? idk maybe just me, but I want the sound in 00:05:014 to be mapped, also that doubles hjfassgasf, something like this:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:08:968 (3,4) - I can't listen nothing in the start of 00:09:084 (4) -, the slider should start in 00:08:968 and should end in 00:09:316 for consistency with the music and with your previous one 00:08:037 (1) - or do something like this 00:09:898 (1,2) - anyways I love the rhythm in 00:08:037 (1) reason refused in game
  4. 00:14:898 add whistle? since it sound nice with the sound that you're following there
  5. 00:16:409 (4,6) - maybe try to make a blanket here? for better design? something like:
    SPOILER
  6. 00:20:247 (5) - similar to 00:08:968 - I really prefer if you use an extended slider starting in 00:20:130 and ending in 00:20:479 - it will be consistent with your other rhythms and sound just better with the music
  7. 00:27:689 (4) - same as above
  8. 00:25:944 (6,7) - add whistles? since clap + whistle sound really cool with the music, also is consistent with 00:46:409 (4,5) -
  9. 00:51:642 (1,2,3) - similar as above, I feel the music at this point need whistles or finish too xD
  10. 01:10:247 (5) - nazi, try to stack this with the previous 01:08:968 (7) - reason in tari's response
  11. 01:36:409 (6) - reduce the volume in the slider tail
Normal:

  1. use HP4 instead? since the hard diff have 6 and it feel like a big gap between the diffs
  2. 00:25:944 add whistles in the head and tail too? similar to what I suggest you in the insane
  3. 00:48:968 (1) - finish + clap sound pretty nice here, like you did in easy
  4. 01:02:456 (5) - mmm this repeat slider is not consistent with the others ones which are following the vocals, consider to change your rhythm here to this: ?? i used this repeat slider every single time before this
    SPOILER
Easy:

  1. HP +1 same reason as normal
  2. This diff is fine
gl

thanks!
uoroai
11 posts
Joined August 2013
uoroai
I just played them all ~ and very good map ~ I didn't really find anything out of place as far as my noob level is concerned.
Basically all the levels are good enough I think!
Insane
00:14:782 - the notes 3 4 and slider 5, I think this part is a little queer compare to all the other perfect sync rhythm. But then again I think this might just be me trying to pick something bad but everything is already maybe perfect lol.

Hope this helps a little ~~
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
xChippy
all fixed from Natsu~~
Ty for modding o3o

hue
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iBananaPhonez
18 posts
Joined December 2012
iBananaPhonez
I have just a couple things in mind.

General

Why such a slow song with AR8 cherries on top of that cream?
It hurts me inside since I don't know how to do stuff like this :l

Don't try to facepalm yourself thinking "wow because it's 120 bpm so it should be ar8 u dumbutt"

Insane

01:02:456 (2,3,4,5) - Every time I play through this I always feel uncomfortable and break a combo. Most likely because it's a quad. Would recommend two 1/4 sliders maybe like:

So yeah that's about it.

Yay I modded :lol:
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki


From your queue of M4M~

[General]
  1. osu! need more LiSA~
  2. Should we change the title to 'Jin feat. LiSA'?
    From wiki
    If you change the title, then remove Jin from tags~

[Easy]
  1. 00:00:596 (1,2,3) - actually the rhythm here is a little wierd, my suggestion is to change it to http://puu.sh/94pHB/3c37e47a83.jpg, hmmm... maybe still have better solutions...
  2. 00:25:712 (2) - http://puu.sh/94pLt/0fdb805321.jpg?
  3. 00:54:549 (3) - whistle on the head?
  4. 00:58:270 (3) - ^
  5. 00:58:270 (3) - x:432, y:61 and move 00:59:665 (4) - a little, looks better~
  6. 01:01:991 (3) - whistle on the head?
  7. 01:09:433 (3) - change to a 1/2 slider?
  8. 01:14:084 (5) - x:50, y:310?
  9. 01:17:805 (4) - change to a 1/2 slider?

[Normal]
  1. cs3?
  2. 00:11:293 (5) - change to a 1/2 slider?
  3. 00:15:944 - 00:17:805 - add a soft-slidertick hitsound(same as clap)? that should be better~
  4. 00:21:061 (3) - whistle on the head?
  5. 00:22:456 (6) - start at 00:22:340 - ?
  6. 00:34:782 - add a note?
  7. 00:36:526 (4) - also add a soft finish on the end
  8. 01:24:898 (4) - finish on the end?

[xChippy's Hard]
  1. 00:02:340 (1) - also add a clap on the head?
  2. 00:25:944 (3) - clap?
  3. 00:37:805 - low some volume here? to 60% sounds good~
  4. 00:51:409 (2) - change to this http://puu.sh/94qLp/6ad8b09375.jpg or other? The beat here 00:51:526 - is obvious and the current pattern may cause reading mistake imo
  5. 00:51:875 (3) - finish on the head?
  6. 01:23:851 (3,1) - hmm, blanket better?
  7. 01:31:758 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]
  1. 00:00:596 (2) - nc?
  2. 00:07:340 - low the volume to 60%?
  3. 00:14:084 (2,3) - sounds wierd, try this? http://puu.sh/94r0I/14961f9b92.jpg
  4. 00:37:805 - 60%?
  5. 00:51:293 (3) - move to 00:51:409 - and add a note at 00:51:293 - which stacks on the head of the 1/4 slider, that sounds better~
  6. 01:02:805 (5) - change to a 1/4 slider?
  7. 01:20:712 (2) - change to a 1/4 slider? make a similar pattern like 01:21:409 (6,7) -
  8. 01:21:758 (1,2) - I recommend to change these two note to a 1/4 slider and make the stream start at 01:21:991 -
  9. 01:26:177 (1,2,3) - reset the place of 01:26:525 (2) - ?

Nice mapset~
Good luck~
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
m4m here

[General]
no video?
add "カゲロウプロジェクト" into tags? since you already added "kagerou project"

[Easy]
00:02:456 - whistle? here sounds a bit empty to the music imo
00:32:223 (2) - the blanket can be much better here
00:37:340 (2,1) - ^
00:45:247 (1) - this shape looks not that good to me, the arc part can be more smooth imo
01:09:898 - I'd like you to add sth here, the rhythm is a bit empty

[Normal]
00:00:596 (1,2) - this 2 sliders should end at white beat line imo, they can fit the song better. 00:02:340 (3) - this one can end at white line too, but blue line is also fine
00:04:316 (1) - a bit similar as ^, but this one is fine, cuz the heavy beat is at 00:04:898 - , the current rhythm fit here
01:13:968 - how about starting the slider from here? the vocal here is a bit higher than 01:13:851 - , following it instead the current point is better imo
01:15:479 (3) - blanket can be better(nazi

[xChippy's Hard]
00:00:596 (1) - the newcombo is regular here, but this one can be canceled for better looking imo
00:02:689 - consider this rhythm? http://puu.sh/94sgY/cc320e970c.jpg same rhythm but different starting time for each object, they would play better imo(circle and slider starting fit heavy beats better than slider repeats or slider ends)
00:21:061 (1) - the arc part from 00:21:526 - to 00:21:991 - can be more smooth imo, current shape looks not that good to me
01:04:549 - how about add a note at here? rhythm can be better, and you can also make it symmetrical with 01:05:479 (4) - (need to fix the spacing)
01:19:433 - ^, pattern would looks better

[Insane]
00:29:665 (4) - move the 2nd nod to x:176 y:220 to make 00:29:665 (4,5) - on a line? would look better imo
00:46:409 (4,5) - I suggest to stack them perfectly, the gap between current 2 approach circle are a bit hard to identify, it make the rhythm a bit hard to read too
00:48:270 (4,5) - ^
01:05:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - how about make every stream's spacing changing more smoothly here? for example, stack 01:05:712 (1,2) - , 0.2x for 01:06:061 (3,4,5) - , 0.4x for 01:06:526 (6,7) - , 0.6x for 01:06:875 (1,2) - , 0.8x for 01:07:223 (3,4,5,1) - . the spacing changing would fit the pitch from the song very well imo
01:17:572 (4) - this slider play not that good cuz the end is following the heavy beat(01:17:689 - ) but not starting..
01:20:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - same as 01:05:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - , there's only 4 streams here, the magnitude of spacing changing would be smaller than the first similar part

nice map
but I can't understand too much about what's this anime saying lol
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
I have to tell that... I have to go for outside study for two days... I will post my mod immediatly as soon as I go home.
Sorry captin for my delaying! So I will try to make my mod more valuable!
:P :)
Sellenite
1,092 posts
Joined September 2013
Sellenite
HI~captin

captin1 wrote:

Sellenite you already have a ticket with me LOL
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh the ticket I want hold until my Marathon next next map has been done ;w;，I don‘t know I if it had been used.......T T
anyway I will mod this map as I promised~~hope it useful！

[Easy]
00:02:456 (3) - here not the same as 00:06:177 (3) - ，the beat is on 00:02:340 not 00:02:456，try this rhythm or change other rhythm？
SPOILER
00:05:247 (2) - again：
SPOILER
00:17:340 (3) - slider end cancel whistle to be coincident with 00:11:758
00:19:200 add whistle，to be coincident with 00:12:689
00:37:340 (2,1) - blanket？
00:43:851 (2,3) - hmm..miss some rhythm here（00:43:735、00:44:084），try this ？
SPOILER
01:09:433 (3) - change to 1/1 slider cuz 01:09:898 is empty
01:12:223 (2) - add whistle to be coincident with 01:08:502

[Normal]
00:08:968 whistle
00:19:200 ^
00:21:061 (3) - slider head add whistle
00:21:758 (4,5,6) - why 4,5 follow the horn sound but 6 not？00:21:758 (4,5,6) - move to 00:22:340 end end at 00:22:689 will better
01:15:479 (3) - bend more to blanket？
01:17:107 I think here add a circle will be better
01:32:689 (4,5) - a bit strange，I feel the rhythm cut down，maybe try this ？
SPOILER

[xChippy's Hard]
00:01:177 (2) - drum additions
00:02:689 (2,3) - a bit strange，I think should beat at 00:02:921 and 00:03:270 will be better，for example：
SPOILER
00:11:526 (4,1) - blanket？
00:19:200 (1) - curve downward to make good flow
00:21:061 (1) - hmmmmmm....this is not feeling well，I suggest you make another shape
00:40:130 (2,3) - blanket
00:40:363 (3,4) - ^
00:41:526 (1) - so near with 00:40:363 (3) - ，move it a bit

[Insane]
00:02:689 (2,3,4) - I think 2 not stack or 4 stack will be batter
00:14:084 (2,3) - hitsounds suggestion：00:14:084 (2) - slider end add whistle、00:14:665 (3) - slider head change to whistle
00:16:409 (4) - slider head add whistle
00:18:270 (3) - ^
00:19:200 (1) - add whistle
00:23:851 (3) - hitsounds suggestion：slider head and end both add whistle
00:33:619 (5) - also add whistle
00:33:968 (7) - cancel whistle，add at 00:34:084
01:21:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - make them smooth，especially 01:22:339 (6,1) -

good luck~
S o a p
359 posts
Joined March 2012
S o a p
from m4m :D

[insane]
00:13:619 (1) - maybe change to 2 notes can be better
00:51:526 - add a note

[xChippy's Hard]
00:51:526 - add a note
00:58:619 - ^

[Easy]
00:02:340 - add a note?

._.how to mod this amazing map...orz
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
captin1
"Minakami Yuki"


From your queue of M4M~

[General]
  1. osu! need more LiSA~
  2. Should we change the title to 'Jin feat. LiSA'? you are probably right, but could I get a link to this wiki page?
    From wiki
    If you change the title, then remove Jin from tags~

[Easy]
  1. 00:00:596 (1,2,3) - actually the rhythm here is a little wierd, my suggestion is to change it to http://puu.sh/94pHB/3c37e47a83.jpg, hmmm... maybe still have better solutions... I did my best while keeping it a bit more normal, so I'll keep for now
  2. 00:25:712 (2) - http://puu.sh/94pLt/0fdb805321.jpg?
  3. 00:54:549 (3) - whistle on the head?
  4. 00:58:270 (3) - ^
  5. 00:58:270 (3) - x:432, y:61 and move 00:59:665 (4) - a little, looks better~
  6. 01:01:991 (3) - whistle on the head?
  7. 01:09:433 (3) - change to a 1/2 slider? would like to keep these out if possible
  8. 01:14:084 (5) - x:50, y:310?
  9. 01:17:805 (4) - change to a 1/2 slider?

[Normal]
  1. cs3? this is designed for 4 so I'll keep
  2. 00:11:293 (5) - change to a 1/2 slider?
  3. 00:15:944 - 00:17:805 - add a soft-slidertick hitsound(same as clap)? that should be better~
  4. 00:21:061 (3) - whistle on the head?
  5. 00:22:456 (6) - start at 00:22:340 - ? going with the stronger point of vocal here
  6. 00:34:782 - add a note?
  7. 00:36:526 (4) - also add a soft finish on the endno thanks
  8. 01:24:898 (4) - finish on the end?

[Insane]
  1. 00:00:596 (2) - nc? not needed
  2. 00:07:340 - low the volume to 60%?
  3. 00:14:084 (2,3) - sounds wierd, try this? http://puu.sh/94r0I/14961f9b92.jpg did something similar
  4. 00:37:805 - 60%?
  5. 00:51:293 (3) - move to 00:51:409 - and add a note at 00:51:293 - which stacks on the head of the 1/4 slider, that sounds better~ I'll keep mine, to keep 00:51:526 - as an empty sound
  6. 01:02:805 (5) - change to a 1/4 slider?
  7. 01:20:712 (2) - change to a 1/4 slider? make a similar pattern like 01:21:409 (6,7) -
  8. 01:21:758 (1,2) - I recommend to change these two note to a 1/4 slider and make the stream start at 01:21:991 -
  9. 01:26:177 (1,2,3) - reset the place of 01:26:525 (2) - ?

Nice mapset~
Good luck~
"wcx19911123"
m4m here

[General]
no video? i'm lazy and encoding doesn't like me sometimes ;w; added in
add "カゲロウプロジェクト" into tags? since you already added "kagerou project" ok!

[Easy]
00:02:456 - whistle? here sounds a bit empty to the music imo
00:32:223 (2) - the blanket can be much better here
00:37:340 (2,1) - ^
00:45:247 (1) - this shape looks not that good to me, the arc part can be more smooth imo
01:09:898 - I'd like you to add sth here, the rhythm is a bit empty

[Normal]
00:00:596 (1,2) - this 2 sliders should end at white beat line imo, they can fit the song better. 00:02:340 (3) - this one can end at white line too, but blue line is also fine
00:04:316 (1) - a bit similar as ^, but this one is fine, cuz the heavy beat is at 00:04:898 - , the current rhythm fit here
01:13:968 - how about starting the slider from here? the vocal here is a bit higher than 01:13:851 - , following it instead the current point is better imo
01:15:479 (3) - blanket can be better(nazi

[Insane]
00:29:665 (4) - move the 2nd nod to x:176 y:220 to make 00:29:665 (4,5) - on a line? would look better imo this is currently parallel with the top of 00:28:968 (2) - so I'll keep
00:46:409 (4,5) - I suggest to stack them perfectly, the gap between current 2 approach circle are a bit hard to identify, it make the rhythm a bit hard to read too I think it would be more confusing stacked, since I often have 1/4 doubles stacked perfectly
00:48:270 (4,5) - ^
01:05:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - how about make every stream's spacing changing more smoothly here? for example, stack 01:05:712 (1,2) - , 0.2x for 01:06:061 (3,4,5) - , 0.4x for 01:06:526 (6,7) - , 0.6x for 01:06:875 (1,2) - , 0.8x for 01:07:223 (3,4,5,1) - . the spacing changing would fit the pitch from the song very well imo
01:17:572 (4) - this slider play not that good cuz the end is following the heavy beat(01:17:689 - ) but not starting..
01:20:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - same as 01:05:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - , there's only 4 streams here, the magnitude of spacing changing would be smaller than the first similar part didn't apply fully, would like to keep last stream smaller spacing

nice map
but I can't understand too much about what's this anime saying lol
"Sellenite"
HI~captin

captin1 wrote:

Sellenite you already have a ticket with me LOL
[/quote]
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh the ticket I want hold until my Marathon next next map has been done ;w;，I don‘t know I if it had been used.......T T
anyway I will mod this map as I promised~~hope it useful！loll ok

[Easy]
00:02:456 (3) - here not the same as 00:06:177 (3) - ，the beat is on 00:02:340 not 00:02:456，try this rhythm or change other rhythm？as said, will try and keep this rhythm simple
SPOILER
00:05:247 (2) - again：
SPOILER
00:17:340 (3) - slider end cancel whistle to be coincident with 00:11:758
00:19:200 add whistle，to be coincident with 00:12:689
00:37:340 (2,1) - blanket？
00:43:851 (2,3) - hmm..miss some rhythm here（00:43:735、00:44:084），try this ？too difficult for easy imo
SPOILER
01:09:433 (3) - change to 1/1 slider cuz 01:09:898 is empty
01:12:223 (2) - add whistle to be coincident with 01:08:502

[Normal]
00:08:968 whistle
00:19:200 ^
00:21:061 (3) - slider head add whistle
00:21:758 (4,5,6) - why 4,5 follow the horn sound but 6 not？00:21:758 (4,5,6) - move to 00:22:340 end end at 00:22:689 will better following vocal with the slider
01:15:479 (3) - bend more to blanket？
01:17:107 I think here add a circle will be better
01:32:689 (4,5) - a bit strange，I feel the rhythm cut down，maybe try this ？
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:02:689 (2,3,4) - I think 2 not stack or 4 stack will be batter
00:14:084 (2,3) - hitsounds suggestion：00:14:084 (2) - slider end add whistle、00:14:665 (3) - slider head change to whistle rhythm is different now
00:16:409 (4) - slider head add whistle
00:18:270 (3) - ^
00:19:200 (1) - add whistle
00:23:851 (3) - hitsounds suggestion：slider head and end both add whistle just head is fine
00:33:619 (5) - also add whistle
00:33:968 (7) - cancel whistle，add at 00:34:084 the vocal is on blue tick
01:21:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - make them smooth，especially 01:22:339 (6,1) - different rhythm now

good luck~
"S o a p"
from m4m :D

[insane]
00:13:619 (1) - maybe change to 2 notes can be better no thanks, no strong beat on the end
00:51:526 - add a note no thanks, would like the empty beat there

[Easy]
00:02:340 - add a note? too hard for easy and rhythm is simple here

._.how to mod this amazing map...orz

thanks everyone!
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
xChippy
Minakami Yuki

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:



[xChippy's Hard]
  1. 00:02:340 (1) - also add a clap on the head? nah don't hear one in the music
  2. 00:25:944 (3) - clap?
  3. 00:37:805 - low some volume here? to 60% sounds good~
  4. 00:51:409 (2) - change to this http://puu.sh/94qLp/6ad8b09375.jpg or other? The beat here 00:51:526 - is obvious and the current pattern may cause reading mistake imo had it like that be4 but imo current one is better tho
  5. 00:51:875 (3) - finish on the head? sounds weird imo
  6. 01:23:851 (3,1) - hmm, blanket better?
  7. 01:31:758 (1,2) - ^

Good luck~

wcx19911123

wcx19911123 wrote:

m4m here

[xChippy's Hard]
00:00:596 (1) - the newcombo is regular here, but this one can be canceled for better looking imo
00:02:689 - consider this rhythm? http://puu.sh/94sgY/cc320e970c.jpg same rhythm but different starting time for each object, they would play better imo(circle and slider starting fit heavy beats better than slider repeats or slider ends)
00:21:061 (1) - the arc part from 00:21:526 - to 00:21:991 - can be more smooth imo, current shape looks not that good to me
01:04:549 - how about add a note at here? rhythm can be better, and you can also make it symmetrical with 01:05:479 (4) - (need to fix the spacing)
01:19:433 - ^, pattern would looks better

nice map
but I can't understand too much about what's this anime saying lol

Sellenite

Sellenite wrote:

HI~captin

[xChippy's Hard]
00:01:177 (2) - drum additionsnah prefer current tho ><
00:02:689 (2,3) - a bit strange，I think should beat at 00:02:921 and 00:03:270 will be better，for example：
00:11:526 (4,1) - blanket？nah not my intention
00:19:200 (1) - curve downward to make good flow
00:21:061 (1) - hmmmmmm....this is not feeling well，I suggest you make another shape idk why lol o-o seems fine to me
00:40:130 (2,3) - blanket
00:40:363 (3,4) - ^
00:41:526 (1) - so near with 00:40:363 (3) - ，move it a bit its DSed tho OAO

good luck~

S o a p

S o a p wrote:

from m4m :D

[xChippy's Hard]
00:51:526 - add a note nah prefer not to put triplets
00:58:619 - ^ following vocal so nope

._.how to mod this amazing map...orz

phew~ Thanks for modding everyone~

hue
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: LiSA Yuukei Yesterday.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51991
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:夕景イエスタデイ (TV Size)
Artist:LiSA
ArtistUnicode:LiSA
Creator:captin1
Version:xChippy's Hard
Source:Mekakucity Actors
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
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33,165,10828,2,0,P|40:224|24:300,1,128,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,262,11526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,353,11758,6,0,B|248:322|245:278|245:278|280:255,1,128,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,203,12456,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,257,12689,2,0,B|421:292|466:301|466:301|482:257,1,128,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,188,13386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,129,13619,5,2,0:0:0:0:
330,203,13851,1,2,0:0:0:0:
330,203,14084,2,0,B|276:204|253:176|253:176|203:213,1,128,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,60,15014,6,0,B|124:85|124:85|101:57|47:58,2,128,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,35,16177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,112,16409,2,0,B|145:161|145:161|118:203,1,128,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,270,17107,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,311,17340,6,0,P|216:320|279:315,1,96,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,302,17805,2,0,L|371:309,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,362,18270,2,0,P|408:324|419:222,1,128,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,288,18968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,364,19200,6,0,B|302:376|302:376|234:373,1,96,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,361,19665,2,0,L|154:362,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,276,20130,2,0,P|262:234|273:185,1,96,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,150,20595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,123,20828,1,0,0:0:0:0:
417,100,21061,6,0,B|442:133|524:156|524:156|460:184|461:251|510:273,1,256,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,306,22223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,298,22456,1,8,0:0:0:0:
258,285,22689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,196,22921,6,0,L|269:216,1,96,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,197,23386,2,0,L|357:211,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,132,23851,2,0,P|195:87|196:28,2,96,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,197,24782,6,0,P|305:153|307:106,2,96,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,251,25712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,356,25944,1,10,0:0:0:0:
264,356,26177,1,10,0:0:0:0:
230,251,26409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,302,26642,6,0,P|101:273|76:209,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,163,27107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
175,105,27340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,171,27572,2,0,P|232:203|156:219,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,100,28502,5,2,0:0:0:0:
376,100,28968,2,0,P|364:192|368:228,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,264,29433,2,0,B|370:238|312:260|312:260|273:304,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,352,30130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,274,30363,6,0,B|94:218|49:195|49:195|66:141,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,126,30828,1,8,0:0:0:0:
137,57,31061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,124,31293,2,0,L|289:133,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,202,31758,1,8,0:0:0:0:
302,221,31991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,124,32223,6,0,P|188:80|192:4,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,211,33154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
197,294,33386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,247,33619,2,0,P|110:206|97:158,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,134,33968,6,0,L|189:118,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,135,34433,2,0,L|302:125,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,76,34782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,170,35014,2,0,P|342:215|330:262,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,344,35479,2,0,P|218:304|215:265,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,277,35944,5,10,0:0:0:0:
380,277,36061,2,0,L|279:299,2,80,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,176,36758,1,8,0:0:0:0:
449,176,36875,2,0,L|346:196,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,243,37340,2,0,L|286:282,2,40,8|8|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,131,37805,6,0,P|207:156|179:206,1,102.000001945496,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,239,38270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,129,38502,2,0,B|106:83|58:68|58:68|18:93,1,136.000002593994,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
15,164,39200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
3,244,39433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,129,39665,6,0,P|179:118|249:133,1,102.000001945496,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,143,40130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,201,40363,2,0,B|380:146|359:104|359:104|403:70,1,136.000002593994,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
466,33,41061,2,0,P|478:69|454:153,1,102.000001945496,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,167,41526,6,0,P|446:209|452:246,1,68.0000012969971,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,313,41991,2,0,P|392:306|359:303,1,68.0000012969971,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,315,42340,2,0,P|288:273|259:213,1,102.000001945496,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,146,42921,2,0,P|220:161|194:182,1,68.0000012969971,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,280,43386,6,0,P|121:234|92:193,2,102.000001945496,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,122,44549,2,0,P|205:99|240:71,1,68.0000012969971,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,44,45014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,168,45247,6,0,B|319:183|319:183|292:176|262:145,2,102.000001945496,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,129,46177,1,2,0:0:0:0:
437,237,46409,1,8,0:0:0:0:
437,237,46642,2,0,P|440:281|450:316,1,68.0000012969971,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,267,47107,6,0,P|312:244|261:239,1,102.000001945496,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,251,47572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,293,47805,2,0,L|149:369,1,68.0000012969971,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,257,48270,1,8,0:0:0:0:
78,257,48502,2,0,L|90:185,1,68.0000012969971,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,95,48968,5,4,0:0:0:0:
199,127,49200,1,2,0:0:0:0:
267,58,49433,2,0,P|312:66|348:55,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,38,49782,2,0,P|396:87|399:129,1,80
387,163,50130,1,2,0:0:0:0:
318,231,50363,2,0,P|280:220|233:218,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,314,50828,6,0,P|335:245|435:254,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,250,51409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
378,323,51642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
451,250,51875,2,0,L|451:210,1,40,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,158,52223,2,0,P|327:166|277:149,1,80
151,51,52689,5,4,0:0:0:0:
72,141,52921,1,2,0:0:0:0:
163,194,53154,2,0,L|171:146,1,44.0000013427735,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,268,53502,2,0,P|150:297|234:268,1,132.00000402832,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,242,54084,2,0,P|286:315|296:363,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,295,54549,5,2,0:0:0:0:
362,190,54782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,166,55014,2,0,L|204:156,1,44.0000013427735,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,70,55363,2,0,B|211:78|211:78|256:60,2,88.000002685547,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,84,55944,2,0,P|62:146|65:188,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,223,56409,6,0,P|161:171|133:151,2,88.000002685547,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,274,56991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
250,159,57223,2,0,P|281:103|342:80,1,132.00000402832,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,187,57805,2,0,P|368:186|326:157,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,80,58270,6,0,L|168:82,1,88.000002685547,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,179,58735,2,0,L|50:191,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
7,220,59084,2,0,P|18:268|20:314,1,88.000002685547,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,359,59433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,303,59665,2,0,P|160:289|211:288,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,314,60130,6,0,P|310:242|310:205,2,88.000002685547,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,351,60712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,256,60944,2,0,P|183:175|175:117,1,132.00000402832,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,21,61526,1,8,0:0:0:0:
267,73,61758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,21,61991,5,2,0:0:0:0:
78,59,62223,2,0,P|80:108|77:161,1,88.000002685547,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,184,62572,2,0,P|41:244|47:300,1,88.000002685547,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,346,63037,2,0,P|177:332|250:285,1,132.00000402832,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,63619,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,68,63851,6,0,B|353:35|410:30|410:30|464:72,1,176.000005371094,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,164,64549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,267,64782,2,0,B|418:300|418:300|361:295|304:262,1,176.000005371094,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,65479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65712,12,8,67107,0:0:0:0:
168,81,67572,6,0,P|169:124|163:168,1,88.000002685547,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,245,68037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
90,245,68153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,168,68386,2,0,P|226:139|309:167,1,132.00000402832,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,200,68967,2,0,P|362:127|372:79,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,141,69432,5,2,0:0:0:0:
445,244,69665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
422,346,69897,2,0,L|366:340,1,44.0000013427735,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,297,70246,2,0,B|181:287,2,88.000002685547,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,334,70828,2,0,L|197:322,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,361,71293,5,2,0:0:0:0:
29,286,71526,2,0,P|22:230|27:179,1,88.000002685547
44,149,71874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,198,72107,2,0,P|196:175|228:118,1,132.00000402832,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,27,72688,2,0,P|141:70|148:120,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,206,73154,6,0,P|226:162|228:119,1,88.000002685547,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,44,73619,2,0,P|350:49|403:78,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,114,73968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,220,74200,2,0,P|321:177|324:127,1,88.000002685547,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,109,74549,2,0,L|217:116,2,44.0000013427735,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,188,75014,6,0,P|161:182|94:178,1,88.000002685547,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,103,75479,2,0,P|61:97|94:91,1,44.0000013427735,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,20,75828,2,0,B|180:77|205:113|205:113|232:84,1,132.00000402832,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,12,76409,1,8,0:0:0:0:
353,105,76642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,166,76875,6,0,P|214:183|168:174,1,88.000002685547,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,150,77340,1,8,0:0:0:0:
78,150,77456,2,0,B|67:182|67:182|74:250,1,88.000002685547,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,350,77921,2,0,P|102:314|179:310,1,132.00000402832,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,346,78502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,285,78735,6,0,B|350:239|280:271|280:271|228:215,1,176.000005371094,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,146,79433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,298,79665,2,0,B|159:261|159:261|89:293|42:247,1,176.000005371094,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,144,80363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80595,12,8,81991,0:0:0:0:
272,160,82456,6,0,B|280:80|240:24|240:24|218:71,2,176.000005371094,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,264,83619,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,264,83851,2,0,P|94:256|59:228,1,88.000002685547,8|8,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
78,72,84316,6,0,P|127:114|130:178,1,132.00000402832,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,103,84898,2,0,P|248:95|298:93,1,88.000002685547,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,113,85247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
373,213,85479,2,0,P|378:256|378:305,2,88.000002685547
271,267,86177,6,0,B|219:292|168:301|168:301|185:233,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,84,87107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
275,84,87340,2,0,P|319:72|385:67,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,163,88037,6,0,P|139:177|46:139,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,70,88735,2,0,P|20:118|32:238,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,317,89433,1,8,0:0:0:0:
9,317,89665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,223,89898,6,0,B|133:198|168:183|168:183|212:202|278:182,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,119,90828,2,0,P|390:111|327:90,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,46,91293,2,0,P|227:38|165:38,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,77,91758,6,0,P|134:138|121:201,2,120,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,148,92689,1,2,0:0:0:0:
117,318,93154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,140,93619,6,0,B|273:168|268:226|268:226|335:266,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,256,94200,2,0,L|408:253,2,40,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,329,94549,2,0,L|458:350,2,40,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,276,95014,2,0,P|227:268|182:268,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,308,95479,5,10,0:0:0:0:
100,308,95595,2,0,L|91:195,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,143,96061,2,0,L|170:241,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,267,96409,2,0,B|248:256|248:256|280:304|332:304,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Koiyuki
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
Here is the wiki page~
http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%82%AB% ... C.E6.AD.8C

and I copyed all of the songs here

主題歌

全作詞・作曲 - じん。

オープニングテーマ「daze」
編曲 - じん / 歌 - じん ft. メイリア from GARNiDELiA
第1話ではエンディングテーマとして使用。

エンディングテーマ「days」（第2話 - 第5話）
編曲 - ANANT-GARDE EYES / 歌 - じん ft. Lia

挿入歌

「如月アテンション」（第2話）
編曲 - じん、赤髪 / 歌 - じん ft. 春奈るな

「メカクシコード」（第3話）
編曲 - 中沢伴行 (I've)、尾崎武士 (I've) / 歌 - じん ft. やさぐれ子猫

「カゲロウデイズ」（第4話）
編曲 - じん / 歌 - じん ft. 田口囁一（感傷ベクトル）

「ヘッドフォンアクター」（第6話〈オープニング〉）
編曲 - じん / 歌 - じん ft. LiSA

「夕景イエスタデイ」（第6話〈エンディング〉）
編曲 - 小松一也 / 歌 - じん ft. LiSA
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awesome, thanks!
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