1. Easy (1.42 stars, 182 notes)
2. Extra (5.86 stars, 852 notes)
3. Hard (3.74 stars, 530 notes)
4. Jemmy's Insane (4.88 stars, 797 notes)
5. Natsu's Normal (2.48 stars, 342 notes)
6. Normal (1.96 stars, 259 notes)

• 
  [General]
  Hard的风格有些生硬，有时会有单调的感觉。不过有时看起来却很美观
  Insane做得漂亮。稍微有些地方跳得有点莫名。
  Extra(Revel)做得很大气。

• [Normal]

1. 00:10:886 (4) - 突然不跟人声了？这个滑条应该从这里( 00:10:698 )开始
2. 00:19:886 (4) - 同上，建议应该从这里( 00:19:698 )开始
3. 00:55:886 (2) - 这里建议如下
   
   建议

   从
   
   改为
   
4. 03:00:487 (3,4) 和 03:03:081 (2,3) - 这两个地方统一一下节奏

• 
  [LZCSC's Hard]

1. 00:01:136 - 这里的红线跟绿线可以合并
2. 00:08:073 (4) - 我想这里节奏没下好...滑条应该结束在这里( 00:08:261 )
3. 00:28:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 可以考虑做成折线型，小角度曲线单点打击感不怎么样。
   
   例如...这样如何

   
4. 00:37:698 - 节奏漏掉了
5. 01:07:511 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 要不间距再小一点，要不排整齐。
6. 01:09:948 (3) - 这里（01:10:136 ）的节奏多余，并且滑条头的位置应该在X=146，Y=94
7. 01:16:511 (6) - 建议
   一、Ctrl+G,Ctrl+H,Ctrl+J然后放到X=209，Y=169，7号→X=23，Y=106，8号→X=89，Y=40
   或者
   二、Crtl+Shift+R，旋转-30°，放到X=209，Y=120，7号→X=52，Y=199，8号→X=20，Y=90
8. 01:35:823 (2,3,4) - 这里既难读也不美观，不如把3号4号换成三连
9. 01:39:011 (5) - 和4号note分开一点
10. 01:45:011 (6) - 和5号note分开一点
11. 01:47:636 (12) - combo太长，加NC
12. 01:48:573 (15,17) - 这两个note建议，ctrl+G
13. 01:49:136 - 红线绿线参数不同，请务必合并
14. 01:59:514 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 过于混乱而且单调了啊，改成一些三连吧
15. 02:11:838 (1) - 去掉NC
16. 02:22:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - 这一段对于Hard来说遮挡太夸张啦，顺便加NC。
17. 02:37:135 (1,2) - 可以适当增加间距
18. 02:54:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - combo太长，考虑加NC
19. 03:18:325 (3) - 包好，把尖角消灭掉

• 
  [Jemmy's insane]

1. 01:06:948 (1) - 稍微有点突兀
   
   建议稍作修改

   
2. 02:19:622 (3,4,5,6) - 建议，3号：X=164,Y=288，4号：X=47,Y=325，5号：X=158,Y=171，6号：X=31,Y=148
   不错！没有更多我能够指出的了。

• 
  [Revel]

1. 00:01:136 - 此处红绿线可以合并
2. 00:13:511 (5,6) - 建议继续跟人声。
3. 01:08:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里节奏难读，似乎也没有这么跳的必要，可以稍微靠近一点。
4. 01:11:261 (3,1) - 对齐
5. 01:23:636 (1) - 这个折得很突兀，跟这个（01:24:386 (4) ）滑条也没有太多美观的感觉，建议改回曲线滑条
6. 01:45:011 (2) - 似乎没有这样弯折的必要，请删掉其中一个锚点
7. 01:49:136 - 此处红绿线可以合并
8. 02:09:244 (3) - 这里继续顺时针转比较顺手，所以建议Ctrl+G
9. 02:11:190 (3) - 由于前面多次折返的惯性（？），这个滑条开头应该设置在右下方较为妥当，建议此滑条与这个（02:11:838 (5) ）互换。
10. 02:20:919 (3,4) - 分别Ctrl+G

ItItS wrote:

希望我的mod能够有所帮助

• 
  [General]
  Hard的风格有些生硬，有时会有单调的感觉。不过有时看起来却很美观
  Insane做得漂亮。稍微有些地方跳得有点莫名。
  Extra(Revel)做得很大气。

• [Normal]

1. 00:10:886 (4) - 突然不跟人声了？这个滑条应该从这里( 00:10:698 )开始 好
2. 00:19:886 (4) - 同上，建议应该从这里( 00:19:698 )开始 好
3. 00:55:886 (2) - 这里建议如下 好
   
   建议

   从
   
   改为
   
4. 03:00:487 (3,4) 和 03:03:081 (2,3) - 这两个地方统一一下节奏没改，感觉没必要

[Revel]

1. 00:01:136 - 此处红绿线可以合并 好
2. 00:13:511 (5,6) - 建议继续跟人声。 好
3. 01:08:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里节奏难读，似乎也没有这么跳的必要，可以稍微靠近一点。好,拉近了点距离
4. 01:11:261 (3,1) - 对齐 故意的
5. 01:23:636 (1) - 这个折得很突兀，跟这个（01:24:386 (4) ）滑条也没有太多美观的感觉，建议改回曲线滑条 我觉得还行
6. 01:45:011 (2) - 似乎没有这样弯折的必要，请删掉其中一个锚点 跟前面那些波浪形stream一个风格
7. 01:49:136 - 此处红绿线可以合并 好
8. 02:09:244 (3) - 这里继续顺时针转比较顺手，所以建议Ctrl+G 保留
9. 02:11:190 (3) - 由于前面多次折返的惯性（？），这个滑条开头应该设置在右下方较为妥当，建议此滑条与这个（02:11:838 (5) ）互换。保留
10. 02:20:919 (3,4) - 分别Ctrl+G

不，每四个音换个方向

好！希望我能帮到你

ItItS wrote:

[Jemmy's insane]
01:06:948 (1) - 稍微有点突兀ok,

建议稍作修改

02:19:622 (3,4,5,6) - 建议，3号：X=164,Y=288，4号：X=47,Y=325，5号：X=158,Y=171，6号：X=31,Y=148稍微调整了下
不错！没有更多我能够指出的了。[/list]

OblivioN wrote:

[Jemmy's Insane]
00:16:698 (3) - 有点落单的感觉;w;放在x:512 y:120如何？不了，这里还是按着ds来
00:26:261 (5,1) - 挨得有点近ok
00:57:386 (3,4) - ctrl g？感觉不需要
01:04:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我会这么干2333http://puu.sh/9amhV/ce99b0c2c4.jpg这里改了下
01:53:027 (1,2,3,4) - 还可以再跳一点ds加到1.2...
03:00:487 (1) - 这里其实ctrl g很好啊，毕竟kiai不是很顺呢

好人性啊 点赞嘻嘻厚

OblivioN wrote:

感觉帮不到什么，于是来凑个数
选曲很棒
AudioLeadIn设置成2000吧 好的
[Revel]
00:03:948 (1) - 我会放在 x:92 y:212 和 00:05:073 (1) - stack 没改
00:05:073 (1,2,3) - 修一下stack 好的
00:20:636 (1) - 试试:http://puu.sh/98Ewh/adfbdda6fd.jpg 好的
00:23:636 (1) - 建议:http://puu.sh/9ajwG/585cb2c013.png 好的
00:31:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - 124、排成直的线多好http://puu.sh/98ECd/a2ef4a93d5.jpg 好的w
00:43:886 (1,1) - 修一下stack 好的
00:52:698 (1,3) - 这俩可以stack 这俩叠一起？这是个串啊...没怎么弄懂;w;
00:57:948 (6,7,1) - 这个，是弧度stream还是直的啊？如果是直的00:58:042 (7) - 需要fix一下 是弧线/w\
00:57:386 (3,4) - stack 好的
01:18:761 (8,4) - 修一下stack ;w; 好的
01:24:761 (5) - 这个……摆放和flow都不太好的样子……试试这样？http://puu.sh/9ak7N/d2c524d5ad.jpg 我觉得还行啊，都是向上的滑条
02:11:838 (5,2) - ^好的
02:53:514 (5) - 个人觉得放在02:53:027 (2) - 比较好 ;w;没改
03:19:622 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以弄个圆形的streams note太少啦，不好弄D:

打起来非常爽 感谢，很少有人说我图打起来爽/.\


[Normal]
ar5我觉得比较好
01:22:698 (4) - 觉得换成note不错 imo 这个红线note，感觉在normal不怎么好lol
01:51:081 (4,1) - 修一下blanket
02:10:541 (2) - 往右边放一点 然后02:09:568 (4,3) - 这俩stack
02:14:433 (6) - ctrl g？
以上全部改了w


射个star~

[xLoupGarou]
[Kibiya's Hard]
00:17:636 Add a Hitsound Clap/Finish . . maybe Already contains two sound-alike.
00:20:636 ^ hmm... well... other modder said same this. I'll change it
00:21:573 Move to 00:21:761 Keep
00:21:948 Move to 00:22:136 Keep
00:22:323 Move to 00:22:511 Keep
00:22:698 Move to 00:22:886 Keep

[OblivioN]
[Kibiya's Hard]
唔……= =这个难度我不会摸啊……我skip可不可以……;w; You mean no problem?

GrayKaiser82 wrote:

Hi, Free mod and star becuase i love FaLiLV ~
yes i love this band too ><

[Easy]

1. 00:23:636 (1,2,3,4) - This flow was good in the pasts, Nowadays it's not. Try this at least > http://puu.sh/9bN0C/f534c61de3.png Good idea ! fixed
2. 00:32:636 (1,2) - Smoothen these sliders a bit. fixed
3. 00:38:636 (1) - Add finish on first hit of slider. fixed
4. 01:06:948 (1) - Why would you make this spinner so early to appear? Will beginners be prepared? ;w;you are right,fixed it!
5. 01:50:433 (3,4) - Same as 00:32:636 (1,2) - But I'll show you a little example > http://puu.sh/9d31E/d59f23c4ff.png fixed
6. 01:56:919 (1) - Same as 00:38:636 (1) -
7. 01:59:514 (1) - ^ fixed^
8. 02:51:406 (1,2,3) - I don't really like the flow here, I know you're trying to make a triangle with (2) and (3) notes. But it looks horrible to me. but I don't how to make it looks better QAQ
9. 03:06:973 (3,4) - Same as 00:32:636 (1,2) -, Or maybe you can make these two sliders blanketing this slider on 03:08:271 (1) -
   fixed
10. - Nice diff! needs a small improvement.

[Normal]

1. 00:11:636 (1) - Smoothen this slider to be balanced with the previous slider > http://puu.sh/9d3Oz/b836efbd1f.png fixed
2. 00:32:636 (1) - Same as above, but in a different way > http://puu.sh/9d3Wi/7be851d2d4.png cool!fixed
3. 00:35:636 (1,2) - Smoothen these two sliders or make a blanket on the next slider. fixed
4. 01:59:514 (1) - Add finish on first hit. fixed
   
5. - Better than Easy! Gets perfect while playing. Nice one!

Sorry for small mod, Too perfect for me, But GL on ranking this map ~ Thank you <3

1. Remove check "Widescreen Support"(You don't used StoryBoard) and check "letterbox during breaks"(You have breaktime in your map.)

1. 00:23:636 (1) - add clap on head of slider. it maybe nice!
2. 00:29:636 (1) - add finish on head and end of slider.
3. 00:43:886 (3) - whistle on end of slider
4. 00:56:261 (3) - clap
5. 01:06:948 (1) - end here 01:08:636 and clap
6. 01:20:636 (3) - NC
7. 03:12:811 (1,2,3,1) - make pentagon pattern perfectly!
8. 03:19:946 (1) - whistle

1. 00:25:886 (2,2) - overlapping on Normal diff may make confused to Normal Player. try Ctrl+G (2) slider and next rhythm is up to you!
2. 00:31:136 (2,4) - add finish on head of slider
3. 00:43:323 (4) - NC?
4. 00:44:261 (6) - clap. i heard drum sound
5. 00:52:136 (3,1) - overlap on end of (3) slider perfectly
6. 00:55:886 (2) - whistle on head of slider
7. 01:06:386 (2) - slider than circle is fine. like your easy diff.
8. 01:06:948 (1) - clap
9. 01:10:323 (1) - it's not symmtry. move end slider point to (292,272)
10. 01:17:261 (7,2) - blanket check
11. 01:22:136 (3) - NC
12. 01:35:636 (1) - adding finish may fine
13. 02:14:433 (6) - ctrl + G
14. 03:19:946 (1) - whistle

1. 00:20:636 (9,1) - switch NC
2. 00:29:636 (1,2,4) - finish on head of slider
3. 00:31:886 (3) - finish
4. 00:32:261 (6) - use soft custom 1's clap on end of slider
5. 03:20:027 (1) - clap

1. 00:07:136 (4) - NC
2. 01:18:386 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - those are not fit on this part. suggest this rhythm
   
3. 01:25:136 (1) - Ctr + G ?
4. 01:42:011 (1) - don't need to add NC
5. 03:08:919 (6,7,8,9) - suggest change Hitsound Auto whistle to Hitsound drum clap.
6. 03:20:027 (1) - whistle

1. 00:04:136 ~ 00:05:448 - add breaktime
2. 00:31:886 (5,6,7,8) - recommend use drum hitsound finish
3. 00:32:261 (9) - recommend use soft custom hitsound clap
4. 00:52:886 (9) - NC?
5. 00:55:136 (1) - finish
6. 01:27:479 (4,6) - they are overmapped. remove them.
7. 02:05:027 (2,3) - ctrl + G
8. 02:48:163 (1) - add whistle
9. 03:20:027 (1) - whistle

TaMul wrote:

hi, from my queue..

[Hard]
this user banned?! I'm here. :3 just chnage my nick name~

1. 00:20:636 (9,1) - switch NC Fix it 감사합니다!!
2. 00:29:636 (1,2,4) - finish on head of slider Fix it 감사합니다!!
3. 00:31:886 (3) - finish sorry. keep. 피니쉬 넣기에는 보컬의 목소리에 일정함이 없는 것 같네요.
4. 00:32:261 (6) - use soft custom 1's clap on end of slider Fix it감사합니다!!
5. 03:20:027 (1) - clap 피니쉬로 바꾸는게 더 좋아보여서 피니쉬로 바궜습니다.

ok, it's all! Good luck!

TaMul wrote:

hi, from my queue..

[General]

1. Remove check "Widescreen Support"(You don't used StoryBoard) and check "letterbox during breaks"(You have breaktime in your map.)

fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:23:636 (1) - add clap on head of slider. it maybe nice! fixed
2. 00:29:636 (1) - add finish on head and end of slider. fixed
3. 00:43:886 (3) - whistle on end of slider fixed
4. 00:56:261 (3) - clap fixed
5. 01:06:948 (1) - end here 01:08:636 and clap I think it's too short for new player):
6. 01:20:636 (3) - NC fixed
7. 03:12:811 (1,2,3,1) - make pentagon pattern perfectly! I changed this pattem
8. 03:19:946 (1) - whistle

fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:25:886 (2,2) - overlapping on Normal diff may make confused to Normal Player. try Ctrl+G (2) slider and next rhythm is up to you! fixed
2. 00:31:136 (2,4) - add finish on head of slider
3. 00:43:323 (4) - NC?
4. 00:44:261 (6) - clap. i heard drum sound
5. 00:52:136 (3,1) - overlap on end of (3) slider perfectly
6. 00:55:886 (2) - whistle on head of slider
7. 01:06:386 (2) - slider than circle is fine. like your easy diff.
8. 01:06:948 (1) - clap
9. 01:10:323 (1) - it's not symmtry. move end slider point to (292,272)
10. 01:17:261 (7,2) - blanket check
11. 01:22:136 (3) - NC
12. 01:35:636 (1) - adding finish may fine
13. 02:14:433 (6) - ctrl + G
14. 03:19:946 (1) - whistle

fixed everything that you said


[Revel]
A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to an username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming. Pasted on Ranking Criteria.. Please Change Revel to Extra. OK..fixed

1. 00:07:136 (4) - NC fixed
2. 01:18:386 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - those are not fit on this part. suggest this rhythm Very cool! fixed
   
3. 01:25:136 (1) - Ctr + G ? keep
4. 01:42:011 (1) - don't need to add NC fixed
5. 03:08:919 (6,7,8,9) - suggest change Hitsound Auto whistle to Hitsound drum clap. fixed
6. 03:20:027 (1) - whistle

ok, it's all! Good luck!